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Great Review. Review started with Nidhi madam. It would have been better if the review ended with Nidhi Madam also. Mat puchna kyun please.
Yes! That review was one of the best reviews uptil now.This story deserves this kind of review. My friend Werewolf will be surely feeling proud of himself after reading your review.
Hmm! Mystery part was ~ Slogan and Steve were talking about whom!?Title ka planning sayad New year planning yoga. But title ka Mystery likes to be many in number starting with Slogan, continuing with Priya (another girl for Veer) , last mission in itself and so on....
Main yeh kya kiya? Review ke upar hi review likh dala. Shame on myself
Thanks a lot bro! Thread me swaagat hai aapka.Just started reading this amazing story a week ago and I want to say ki bhai aap ko sach me characters likhna aata hai be it veer, ateesh, ragini slogan and all others they are written beautifully but my favorite is nidhi ma'am goddamn i love her character every scene with veer and her involved is so beautiful and fun to read and mujhe lgta h Sirf main hi nhi hun jiski fav nidhi ma'am h that u can see on comments feed hehehe we do love older and mature females character, don't we?
Nidhi ka arc alag se hai. She will get a lot of screen time in future.That's it and hope we get more of nidhi's time in future hehehe
Na bhai! Veer ko kuch din lage the sambhalne me. But I showed that in that single update only. Usme me bhi log rone lage the ki bhai Veer poore update me bas rota hi raha kuch nahi kiya.Wonderful trans behavior veer ka show kiya hai itne bade hadshe ke baad aise normal behave karna kuchh jyada hi normal hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thanks a lot bro!Itne sare favour suhana Apne Aap ko chalak samajh rhi hai pr apna veer bhi kuchh kam nhi Aaj veer ne Shreya, nidhi or juhi ke liye shopping ki wtf Shreya ne kiss kiya veer ko ya jungli Billi ab bhigi Billi ban rhi hai suhana ne veer ko drane Ki Kosis ki pr veer to veer hai Sabki bjayega ragini ko hugh kiya nidhi ma'm ko bhi hugh kiya pr padoshan ke dar se chitak kr alag ho gyi Jise veer ne alag hi mtlb nikal liya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Thanks a lot bro!Oh my gosh to veer ki 1st ka naam kaera hai...
Jisko dhundha gali gali vo to Delhi Ki party me mili...
Suhana ne veer ka majak bnaya soniya ke samne ab kya hi kr sakte hai banda pahli baar airport me aaya tha...
To slogan dada ne dilhi me apna adda bna rkha hai dekhte hai kya pta lagta hai use or kb tk...
Kaera or veer ki bato se kya impact padega Dekhte hai party me... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Aisa nahi hai ki usse kuch feel nahi hota. Akhir wo itnj smart hai plus intelligent bhi. Par aisa zaroor hai ki usse kuch cheezo ke baare me feel nahi hota. Bole toh usse nahi pata ki react kese karna hai unn situations me.Is update ko padh kr mere man me jo khayal aaya vo ye tha... "Lag gye lode " kaera madam ko kuchh feel nhi hota isliye vo chahti hai ki veer use vo sab feel Karna sikhaye... Wah bhai Wah... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Dhanyavaad bhai!Veer or Madhuri ke sath ka vartalap sandar tha bhai "vikash: ek sahi disha me " superb juhi, nidhi or Shreya ka conversation Jabardast mazedar tha or last me kaera ka veer ki vikas ko lekar najariya Dekhte hai kya badlav lata hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
I feel excited what happen next... Bhavna Ji misra ke pyramid pahuch gyi dobara or sath me apni beti ko bhi lai hai jo janti hai ki Uska ek bhai bhi hai Chalo Badhiya hai dekhte hai kaise mulakat hoti hai Inki ek dusre se... Kaera ek broken soul hai Jise khud hi nhi pta ki vo andar se tuti hui hai or yaha pr veer ne ek favour or manga suhana se ki use business Karna hai Chalo Accha hai dekhte hai kya or kaise stables karta hai apna business... Superb jabarjast sandar update bhai maza a gya padh kr
Haha~ Thanks bro!Bhavisya btane vala tota or kaera ka lesson sikhane ki wartalap superb thi bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Oh teri nidhi ma'm ke sath aisa vaisa kuchh karne ka intention na hote huye bhi kr baitha or natija ek kararedar thappad or ek nyi misunderstanding, Shreya veer se party le rhi hai next day vhi veer ko apni MA ke bare me btaya suhana ne or last me dada ki ankhe 4 karva di aapne veer se dekhte hai ding ka kya mtlb hota hai aage... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Ye mission to bda Khatarnak lag raha hai 2500 points ki penalty to veer ko ek gadi rukvani hai or uske andar Baithe bande ko nukshan nhi pahchana hai Badhiya hai bhaya veer ki lagi padi hai jaise rokega unko... Ye kya one inch punch vo bhi Rambo style me Badhiya hai kuchh to hai veer ke pass... Abe sala ee Kon aa gya tali thokte huye pichhvare se... Kahi Dada to nhi... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Pari ka level 5 dekhne laayak hoga bhai! Kaafi saare features khule hai. Aaj ke update me dikhaaya jaega.Ye pranjal or Vivek Lagta hai dada ji ko (manorath) tapkane ka plan bnaye hai is new year ko Chalo Dekhte hai kya hota hai vhi veer ne nidhi mam ko apni taraf se clarification de diya hai dekhte hai nidhi baad me kya jvab deti hai use... Pari level 5 me Jane pr kya surprise dene vali hai veer ko... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
uski entry na hui abhi!Lagta hai kaera aur Soniya ki last frnd singer hai uski entry bi hu gai hai vo he hai ji keara aur Soniya ki becch ja je pyeaar ka koi chkaar hai lgta hai slogan uske liye enke piche hai hmm to mush confusion
System ne jo kuch bhi kiya. Uske peeche ka kaaran aage jaan'ne ko milega. Isliye ye update boht hi important hai. Vivek aur Pranjal kya rach rahe hai iska khulaasa aaj ke update me ho jaega. Shreya cute hai but utni hi sharaarti bhi hai. A7r chocolate ki factory toh khul ke hi rahegi. Aaj nahi toh kal.विदेशी महंगी कार के पीछे वीर को दौड़ाना सस्पेंस में ही रह गया । आखिर मंशा क्या थी सिस्टम की ?
वैसे उस महंगी कार में जो शख्स था वो कहानी का प्रमुख पात्र है , स्लोगन इसलिए यह भी नहीं कहा जा सकता कि सिस्टम ने कोई गलती कर दी थी । वीर ने खुद ही अंदाजा लगाया था कि कार में कोई ऐसा शख्स हो सकता है जो किडनैप कर लिया गया हो । सिस्टम ने ऐसा कोई इशारा नहीं किया था ।
एक चौबीस साल की जवान लड़की पाई गई थी कार के अंदर जो स्लोगन की रिश्तेदार लगती थी । इनके बारे में अभी तक पुरी जानकारी नहीं दी गई है ।
एक सस्पेंस सिस्टम ने पैदा किया था तो दूसरी बार स्लोगन और उसके साथियों के बातों से हुआ । उनकी बातें कुछ पल्ले ही नहीं पड़ा । पर ऐसा लगता है जैसे स्लोगन साहब वीर को पहचान रहे हैं ।
विवेक और प्रांजल दोनों निठल्ले भाई कुछ बड़ी ही साजिश रचते हुए लग रहे हैं । मुझे नहीं लगता कि ये दोनों आस्तिक हैं । कुलदेवी के दर्शन के नाम पर कुछ अपना उल्लू सीधा करना चाहते हैं ।
इधर श्रेया तो शर्तिया अपना दिल हार बैठी है वीर को । मुझे यह लड़की जूही की जैसी ही क्यूट लगती है । बहुत प्यारी और मासूम लड़की है वो । मैं आशा करता हूं वीर इस लड़की के दिल को कोई ठेस नहीं पहुंचाएगा । इसके साथ ही मैं डेथ किंग की बातों से भी पुरी तरह सहमत हूं कि भले ही कुछ भी हो जाए , चाकलेट की फैक्टरी जूही के लिए जरूर खुलनी चाहिए ।
निधि मैम के चेहरे की उदासी तब तक दूर नहीं होगी जब तक उनका नन्हा राजकुमार उनके गोद में नहीं आ जाता । इस मां की व्यथा वही समझ सकता है जिसके साथ ऐसी विपदा आ चुकी है । इन हालातों में कैसे कोई मां खुश रह सकती है !
दोनों अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड जगमग जगमग ।
Veer toh tabhi Slogan ke radar me aa gaya tha jis din usne Aatish ko maara tha.Hmm yaha slogan to sab dekh ke ek dum shant he jese usse ye sab pata tha. Par veer ki halat jarur thodi kharab hui he slogan ko dekh ke. Uska aura hi esa he ki pari tak ko thoda darr laga. Ab veer ye to na keh sakta ki mujhe pari ne bola ki tumhara pucha karu . Par veer yaha jarur ab slogan ke redar me aa chuka he. Ya pahele he hi tha.
Steve aur Slogan ke beech hui baat hi iss update ko sabse mehatvpoorn banaati hai. Aage pata chalega iske baare me jab iska raaz khulega. Iss update ko bookmark karke rakhiyega!Ab baat kare uss ladki ki to wo uske pariwar ki hi hogi. Ab itna paisa he to ghamnad hoga usne khud thode kamaye he jo down to earth rahegi. Check karke bhi uske bare me koi gadbad na lagi. Ab agli baar mulakaat hogi tab hi thoda janne ko milega. Jate waqt jarur kuch baate suni usne. Ab yaha wo kon he jiske bare me steve baat kar raha tha. Jisne ye sab predict kiya tha aur hua bhi bilkul vesa hi. lagta he sab ek bada plan tha. Dekhte he aage.
Jo bhi hoga, dhamaakedaar hogaVeer ke purane ghar me to manorath ji aaram farma rahe he. Wahi pranjal aur vivek apna plan bana rahe. Ab ye pranjal ne achanak devi ke mandir Jane ke kyu socha. Lagta he uske dada ke samne achhi chhabi pesh Karna chahta he dono. Veer ke liya bhi do achhi baat keh di. Yaha manorath ji ne veer ko sath chalne ki baat kehte par bich me hi baat kaat di unki. Ab unke new year pe kya hota he dekhte he.
boht dimaag chal raha hai haan!?Suhana ke sath meeting he ab veer ki. Sonia sath hogi kya waha ? Aur kaera kab aayegi?? Ye karea to thodi Taniya jesi lagti he mujhe. Jab pyaar karegi to uske jesa hi karegi . Kaera to Vese uss teady ko apne sath hi rakhi hogi. Aur wo blazer bhi.
Yes! Together they seem like a family onlyYaha shreya jarur apne sapno me ghode douda rahi he. Vese dekha jaye to uski ichha abhi tak simple hi rahi he jo achhi baat he. Apni bahen ki khushi chahti he wo. Aur jab youtuber banegi to Q&A me veer ke bare me puchne par kya bolegi . Apni bahen ko support kar rahi he ab wo. Shreya ne yaha to khud hi plan bana liya. Nidhi to veer ka naam sunte hi palat gayi. Ab baat kese kare veer. Veer ne apni taraf se to saaf keh diya jo uske dil me tha. Nidhi ne bhi maaf kar diya ab jab milenge tab majha aayega. Juhi apni cuteness dikhayegi aur wo veer ke hote shreya ki goad me na chadhne wali. Family hi lagenge wo to. Ab Nidhi aur veer ko kareeb lane ka achha chance he yaha new year pe. Shreya bhi chahegi wo bhi kuch time veer ke sath bitaye. Dekhte he.
This might happen in future.Socho agar kaera aur Sonia veer ko lene uske pass aaye jab wo Nidhi ke sath ho. Kaera ya Sonia ko bhi ichha hogi ki New Year pe veer uske pass rahe. Nidhi, kaera aur sonia aur bich me veer. Halat kharab veer ki. Aur ghar jake veer kharab karega suman ki.
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai.
Slogan is the one jisne Aatish ko Aatish banaaya tha. Usko sab kuch sikhaane wala. Kya bro, story me ye choti choti baatein toh already sorted out hai. Sab kuch clear hi hai. Car waali girl ka naam Priya hai. Check toh kiya tha Veer ne. She's a businessman's daughter.Ab h slogan kon hai , uska status kyu check nhi hora aur who's that girl in car, h prinjal b kuch thoo karega UfFffff h twist pe twist , Next Update dekhe Thoo h malum padega, by The way nice update
Suspenses ki race daudaayi thi mene. Ab jese jese jo jo suspense lap complete karenge wese wese unke raaz sulajhte jaenge.Ab tak ke update behtarren hai bhidu...veer ka system ka update bhadta hi ja raha hai ...or ab wo mission 5 pr pauch gya hai...and I think bahut chize abhi aisi hai jo system abhi veer ko nhi dikhana chahta ....slogan vo aatish se bada Don hai fir bhi system uska status nhi de paya ....kaera ka status i think wo veer se connected hai ...means blood relation ho kuch usse ...ya fir relative ..aisa hi lag rha hai...suhana veer ka raaz pata Krna chahti hai uske paas kya hai jisse usne aatish jaise bnde ko maar diya ...Sonia I think ye character abhi postive chl rha hai....veer ko like krti hai abhi as a friend ...pr dhere -2 baat aage badh rhi hai ....pranjal or Vikram i thik wo kuch bada plan kr rahe hai or usme veer fasega ...aisa hi kuch hoga ....bhawna veer ki mom ..agr wo Zinda hai to usne kabhi beer se mine ki koshish kyu nhi ki ...or uski ek behan bhi hai ... suspense bahut hai abhi....abhi bahut things aisi hai jo abhi suspense me rakhi hai aapne ... dekhte hai ....veer ki life me kya mod aata hai ...
Mission Pari thodi deti hai...भाई श्रेया के दिल मे वीर के लिए घंटी बजनी सुरु होगई जल्दी ही इनका भी उद्धार करते नज़र आएंगे हमारे परी के सोकोल्ड मालिक
वैसे फिर एक बार सिस्टम को और परी को गलि देना का मन कर रहा है साला वीर ने इतनी मुश्किल से कार को रोका और सबोको ठोका लेकिन फायदा क्या हुआ खाली पॉइंट लेकिन इस पॉइंट के चक्कर मे हमारा हीरो वीर उसकी नजर मे आगया अब इसी ढक्क्न परी का क्या कम
Writer bhaiya bde hi suspense waale hai kuch hungama krne wale hai slogan se bda
Sher ko bhi sarkas me dekha hoga ishaaro pe nachte lekin wolf jo hai na wo uchhh level ka hai ar waise hi writer sahab warewolf
Yahi toh dastoor hai. Veer toh tabhi radar me aa gaya tha jab usne Aatish ko maara tha. Akhir Aatish Slogan ke student jaisa tha.भाई अगर स्लोगन से ऐसे डारेक्ट इंट्रो करवाना कुछ ज्यादा तो नहीं पता लगा इस बार अपने हीर की फॅमिली ही टारगेट बन गई और हा पहला वार भल्रे ही वीर करें लेकिन उसके बाद उसको रोना भी बहुत पड़ता
Thanks a lot buddy!Werewolf broo u r totally awesome. Ap haar situation ko bht kamal tareeqey sy biyan krty hoo its an ability jo apko dosrey writers sy khas banati hy. Aisey hi likhtey rhoo. Or haam ko entertaint krty rhoo.
Chalo hint de deta hu. First point me ek sahi hai, ek galat.Kavya aur kaera lagte abhi tak jo possessive hogi veer ko leke.
Baki to juhi bhi he jo veer ko na chhodti jab veer uske pass ho.
Harem anime me jo MC ka haal hota he wahi hoga veer ka bhi .