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Update - 53 ~ Subtle Hints
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Ab tak...

Veer jaanta tha ki Pari uski energy use karti hai active rehte waqt. Toh uska sleep mode me jaana ye concern tha Veer ke prati. She wanted him to recover soon.

"Arrrghhh!"

Karaahte hue jese Veer ne jaise hi saamne dekha toh wo ek baar fir ashcharya chakit reh gaya.

Saamne teen behad hi parichit aurte maujood thi...

Ab aage...

"A-Aap sab!?"

Veer ki awaaz sunte hi jo teeno aurte waha maujood thi wo forun hi usse dekhi aur usse hosh me paate hi wo tezz kadmo ke saath uske nazdeek aayi.

Aur beshaq! Wo teen aurte koi aur nahi balki Ragini, Suman aur Nidhi hi thi.

Ragini : Veer!!!???

Teeno uske nazdeek aake khadi ho gayi. Veer ne notice kiya ki Ragini samet Nidhi aur Suman ki bhi aankhein namm thi. Khaaskar Nidhi ki.

Veer ko apni situation ka jayza lene me bilkul bhi samay nahi laga. Hosh aate hi usse abhaas ho gaya tha ki wo hospital me hai. Par sawaal kayi saare the uske mann me.

Pehla sawaal toh yahi tha ki Nidhi, Ragini aur Suman ko uski iss haalat ke baare me kisne bataaya!? Zaahir sii baat thi wo teeno hi yaha uske liye aayi thi. Par prashn wahi tha, ki bataaya kisne unko iss baare me!?

Veer : Mein... Yaha hospital me!?

Uske iss sawaal par Ragini ne pehle Nidhi ko dekha aur fir Suman ko.

Aur jese dono hi ladies Ragini ka ishaara samajh gayi. Wo dono hi baahar ko gayi aur Veer aur Ragini ko unhone akela chorr diya.

Veer : Bh-Bhabhi!?

Ragini namm aankhein liye Veer ko sabse pehle kuch shan tak shaanti se dekhi. Jese maano jayza le rahi ho ki Veer ekdum sahi salaamat hai ki nahi, kahi usse koi taqleef toh nahi!?

Aur kuch derr baad usne apni khamoshi todi,

Ragini : Mujhe call aaya tha...

Veer : Call!? Kiska!?

Ragini : Mujhe nahi pata. Tumhaare hi phone se aaya tha. Kisi aadmi ka tha aur usne sirf itna bataaya tha ki tum xxxxxxxx hospital me ho aur jitni jaldi ho sake mein waha aa jau. Yahi baat boli thi usne. Uske baad mein aur Suman derr raat se hi yaha par hai.

Veer : Aadmi ka call!? Wait!! M-Mera phone!?

Ragini : Tumhara phone wo rakha hai waha table par.

Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki waqai uska phone waha maujood tha. Aur usse saari baato ko samajhne me derr na lagi.

Usse yaad tha ki kal Raghu usse bachaane aaya tha. Bhale hi wo behoshi me jaa raha tha par usne Raghu ko andar aate zaroor dekha tha. Yaha tak ki wo tab bhi hosh me tha jab Raghu uski rassiyo ko tatol kar usse churra raha tha.

Slogan ne uske aur Kaera dono ke hi phones apne kabze me kar liye the. Toh zaahir sii baat thi ki Raghu ne hi uske aur Kaera ke phones waha se retrieve kiye the. Aur call list me se sabse upar Ragini ka hi number tha recent calls me. Toh shayad Raghu ne Ragini ko aise call lagaaya tha.

Veer apne phone me koi password nahi rakhta tha. Uska phone mostly bas chatting aur Calling ke liye hi use hota tha. Kherr! Accha hua, ki issi bahaane kam se kam Ragini ko call toh laga paaya Raghu.

Veer ko ab kaafi hadd tak baatein samajh aa chuki thi. Par abhi bhi kayi sawaal sesh the. Jaise ki...

Kaera, Mumbai me kya kar rahi thi!? Wo toh Delhi me thi.

Aur, Slogan ne aisa kyu kaha ki wo uska hi intezaar kar raha tha. Kyu aisa mehsoos hua Veer ko ki Slogan prepared tha uske liye.

Teesra sawaal ye ki bhala Slogan Kaera ko maarna kyu chaahta hai!? Aisi kya dushmani hai unn dono ke beech!?

Aur akhiri sawaal, uske Dada jii kese mandir se gir gaye!? Jaha tak wo jaanta tha apne Dada jii ko usse pata tha ki uske Dada jii boht hi savdhaani baratne waale insaan hai. Fir bhala aisa kese ho gaya!?

Wo apni uljhano me phassa, apne khayalaato me duba hua tha jab usse achanak hi apne haath par ek narm sa ehsaas hua.

Ragini ka haath uske haath par tha.

Veer : !??

Ragini : Kyu karte ho aisa!?

Iss baar Ragini ki awaaz me ek kap kapaahat thi. Darr ki wajah se nahi par udaasi ki wajah se.

Veer ne jese hi uski aankho me dekha toh aur hairaan reh gaya wo. Ragini ki aankhein bheegi hui thi.

Veer : Bhabhi!?

Ragini : Mein kuch puch rahi hu Veer. Bolo! Jawaab do! Kyu karte ho aisa!?

Veer : M-Mein...

Ragini : Ghar par phone laga ke kehte ho ki kuch kaam aa gaya hai jaa raha hu. Suman jii se kehte ho ki samaan wo le aaye aur fir derr raat ko mujhe koi anjaan aadmi tumhaare phone se call kar ke ye bataata hai ki tum hospital me ho aur buri tarah zakhmi ho. Ye sab kya hai Veer!? Mein toh samajhti thi ki tum mujhse apni baatein share karte ho. Mein ek dost ki tarah hu tumhaari. Par tum toh jese mujhe apna kuch maante hi nahi.

Veer : N-Nahi! Bhabhi! Aisa bilkul bhi nahi. Aap jo soch rahi hai wo ekdum...

Ragini : Galat hai. Hai na!? Sahi kaha tumne. Mein hi toh galat hoti hu Veer. Mein hi galat hu. Tabhi toh dekho na... Aaj shadi shuda hoke bhi apne pati ke saath nahi hu. Kyuki mein galat hu na...

Veer : Bhabhi! Mera wo matlab nahi tha. Aap kaha ki baat kaha le jaa rahi ho!? Ek minute!!! Meri bike!??????

Ragini : T-Tumhari bike neeche hi parked hai.

Veer : Huh!? W-Wo kaise!? Ohhh! I see!

'Wo Raghu... Shayad ussi ne meri pocket se key nikaal ke apne kisi aadmi ko bike ko yaha laane ke liye kaha hoga. Wow! Presence of mind badhiya hai uss bande ka. He even thought of that...!? I mean obviously, tabhi toh wo Miss Kaera ka bodyguard hai.'

Ragini : Tumhaare saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tumhe Bike ki padi hai Veer!?

Veer : H-Huh!? Nahi... I mean, wo aap ne dii thi na mujhe. Kya aapko tension nahi ho rahi...!?

Veer ki iss baat par jese Ragini ekdum bhadak uthi.

Ragini : Pagal ho gaye ho kya Veer!? Tumhe bike ki padi hai!? Apni haalat dekho tum. Arre aisi 100 bikes aa jaengi. Bike zaroori hai ya tum Veer!???

Wo uchi awaaz me boli toh Veer ekdum khamosh hoke reh gaya. Saath hi stabdh bhi.

Ragini uske ekdum kareeb aa chuki thi. Itne kareeb ki usse Ragini ki garam saasein tak apne chehre par mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Aur jese Ragini ko bhi ussi shan iss baat ka abhaas hua toh usne forun hi apni nazre Veer par se ferr lii aur thoda peeche khasak gayi.

Shayad, unn gore gaalo pe laali bhi chhaayi hui thi iss waqt.

Veer : Umm... Toh!? Nidhi ma'am yaha...!?

Ragini : Mene bulaaya tha subah unhe. Kal wo ghar aayi thi.

Veer : Kal!? Kab!? Mere jaane ke baad?? Itni late!?

Ragini : Wo kahi se laut rahi thi. Mene pucha tha toh kuch bataaya nahi unhone. Kal unhone mujhe toh aise sunaaya tha ki mein tumhaara theek se dhyaan nahi rakhti, kuch khabar nahi leti tumhaari, tum college chorr rahe ho, wagarah wagarah. Aur waqai, shayad unhone theek hi kaha tha. Ab se tumhaare upar dhyaan dena padega mujhe.

'Ma'am raat me ghar par!? She...!? Ahh! Right! Wo shayad wahi gayi hongi. Apne husband ke yaha. That bastard. He might have called her.'

Veer : Ahem! Unhone aisa kaha!?

Ragini : Haan bilkul! Aur ye college ka kya scene hai huh!?

Veer : Don't worry mein unhe...

Veer apni baat poori rakh paata ki tabhi gate khula aur doctor andar aaya nurse ke saath.

Doctor : Waqai! Mein hairaan hu tumhe itni jaldi hosh ho gaya. Nurse!?

Nurse : Yes doctor!

Aur nurse haan me sarr hilaate hue Veer ke check up me lag gayi.

Ragini : Please doctor! Veer thik hai na!? Usse koi andhruni chot ka darr toh nahi!? Kahi kuch aisa toh nahi jo aap chhupa rahe ho!?

Doctor (laughs) : No no...! Hahaha~ Aisa bhala kyu karunga mein!? He looks fine. More than fine actually. Mein waqai... Mujhe taajub hai iss baat ko lekar. Mera matlab hai ki wound ek stab wound tha. Do jagah. Aur dono hi jagah aapas me kaafi nazdeek hai. Khaaskar pehla wound. Wo kaafi ghaatak hai. Aur mujhe laga tha aap ko abhi toh bilkul bhi hosh nahi aane waala. And I'm really really surprised...!

Veer keval muskuraa hi paaya.

Ab wo ye toh nahi keh sakta tha ki bhaiya uske andar Pari hai aur saath hi saath uski recovery speed pehle se kayi guna badh chuki hai. Toh bas chup rehna hi uchit tha yaha pe toh.

Ragini (sighs) : Thank you doctor!

Doctor : Par iska matlab ye nahi hai ki aap ko leniency baratni hai. Proper rest okay!? Aur abhi kesa mehsoos ho raha hai!?

Veer : I feel fine!

Doctor : Mera matlab haath se tha...!

Veer : Ohhh! Haath me... Thodi numbness hai.

Doctor : Hmm! Woh rahegi abhi. Aur dard hai kya!?

Veer : Halka fulka!

Doctor : Hmm! Numbness kam hote hi badhega dard thoda. Baaki toh sab theek hai... Good! Good! Strong boy huh!? Anyways! Kuch bhi ho toh nurse ko bol dena. Yadi kuch zyaada lagega toh nurse mujhe khud inform kar degi.

Ragini : Thank you doctor!

Doctor (smiles) : Welcome!

Aur nurse aur doctor dono hi waha se chale gaye.

Ragini aur baatein karti par jese samay abhi ke liye guzar chuka tha, kyuki Doctor ke jaate hi Suman ne gate khola aur unn dono ko dekha aur ishaara samajhte hue Ragini uthi, aur baahar jaane lagi.

Par jaate jaate wo palat ko Veer ko dekhna na bhuli. Aur Veer bhi thoda apne kiye par pachhtaate hue Ragini ko dekhta raha jab tak ki wo uski aankho se ojhal na ho gayi. Par Veer jaanta tha. Uski aur Ragini ki baatein adhuri thi. Wo zaroor baad me aakar iss ghatna ki poori jaankari legi uss se. Aur sawaalo par sawaal puchegi. Lagta hai Veer ko uske liye khudko prepare karna padega.

Kherr! Ragini ke jaate hi Suman daudi bhaagi sii Veer ke paas aayi,

Suman : Maalik!!!! A-Aap...

Veer (smiles) : Mein thik hu. Bas thodi sii chot aayi hai.

Badi hi komalta se Suman ne apni ungliyo ko Veer ke haath me bandhi pattiyo par firaaya. Jese maano koi boht hi naazuk sii cheez ko chhu rahi thi woh.

Suman : Itna sab kuch...?? Kese hua!? Kisne kiya!? K-Kese aap... Mmmmphhh!!???

Par iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paati uske honth Veer ke hontho ki giraft me the.

*Slurp*

"Mmmm...!!!???? Ummphhhhh!!!!?"

Aur kuch pal ke baad jab dono ke honth aapas me alag hue toh ek thook ki patli sii dor unn dono ke muh ke beech reh gayi.

Iss achanak hue hamle se Suman toh stabdh thi hi par saath hi saath wo sharma bhi rahi thi.

Suman : M-Maalik!??

Veer : Aah! I really missed this.

Kehte hue Veer ne usse apne paas kheecha aur uske unn naram naram urojo par apna sarr rakh wo aankhein band kar araam farmaane laga.

Suman : Maalik!?

Bechari Suman! Uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya ki hua kya ye akhir!? Beshaq! Uske honth uske maalik toh chuste hi the par aise achanak se!? Ye kuch naya sa tha uske liye.

Veer : Bas itna samajh lo Suman ki kisi ko bachaane gaya tha. Aur usse bachaane me ye haal ho gaya. Abhi ke liye... Itna hi. Theek hai!?

Suman : J-Jii!

Mann ki jigyaasa ko maarte hue Suman ne khud ke zorr se dhadakte dil ko thoda shaant kiya aur bade hi pyaar se usne apne maalik ke sarr ko apne aalingan me le liya. Apni chhaati me jese sama lena chaahti thi wo Veer ko.

Aur Veer ko bhi ye pal bada hi aanand se bharpoor mehsoos ho raha tha. Aur kyu na hota!? Veer jitni bhi aurto se ab tak mila tha unme se Suman ke than ab tak sabse bade the. Ekdum gol matol bhari hui doodh ki thailiya thi woh. Bas dukhad baat ye thi ki unme koi doodh nahi tha. Warna Veer pakke se din raat apna muh unme lagaaye rehta jab tak ki wo saara ka saara doodh nichod na leta.

Veer jese Suman ke aalingan me apni saari thakaan mita raha tha. Wo frustration jo itne dino se bhara hua tha idhar udhar ki maara maari ke chalte wo jaise kam ho raha tha Suman se lipat'te hi.

Aur Suman bhi kisi amar bel ki tarah Veer se lipti hui thi. Par iss baat ka dhyaan rakhte hue ki Veer ke baaye haath par koi bhi zorr na pade.

Veer : Hmm!? Tumne Bra nahi pehni!?

Ye sawaal sunte hi Suman ekdum maun ho gayi. Aur apni nazre usne jhuka lii. Saaf saaf uske chehre par laali chhaayi hui thi.

Veer : Suman!?

Suman (blushes) : Wo... Wo... Maalik! Darasal, baat ye hai ki... Ragini jii apne size ki laati hai aur unke size ki hi bra Aabha pehnti hai. Usse thodi sii badi padti hai par kaam chal jaata hai. Unhone mujhe bhi kayi saari dii hui hai. Par mein sankoch me unse na boli... Mujhe... Mujhe unki bra thodi choti aur tight padti hai.

Veer ne ek nazar Suman ko dekha aur fir uske thano ko. Aur waqai, inn ko qaid karne ke liye Ragini ki bra toh kya Nidhi ki bra bhi kaam nahi aane waali thi.

Kyuki Veer inn sab se familiar tha. Yadi Suman ke baad kisi ke breasts bade the toh wo Nidhi ke hi the. But then again, usne Nidhi ko kabhi uss nazar se nahi dekha tha. Par fir bhi nazre toh chali hi jaati hai. Aur usse iss baat ka andaaza ho chuka tha.

Veer : Waqai! Bhala ye kaha unn bra me samaane waale hai!?

Kehte hue Veer ne apna ek haath aage badhaate hue Suman ki ek chuchhi par rakha aur agle hi pal usse blouse me se kheench ke baahar nikaal diya.

Suman (gasps) : Ssssss.....aaaahhhh!???

Aur nipple ko dekh Veer se zara bhi sabr na hua toh usne apna muh de maara aur bhar liya Suman ka ek doodh poora muh me.

Suman (blushes) : M-Maalik!?

Veer : Umm...

Suman (blushes) : K-Koi aa sakta hai!

Veer : Ahh! Right!

Kehte hue usne apna muh bemann hataaya. Jagah ko dekhte hue usse peeche hatna hi pada warna yadi koi dekh leta toh lene ke dene pad jaate.

Veer : Wese...

Suman (blouse thik karte hue) : !???

Veer : Tumhari training kesi chal rahi hai!? Mera matlab hai, Bhabhi ne tumhe kuch sheher ke taur tareeqe sikhaane shuru kiye!?

Suman (khush hokar) : Arre haan! Maalik! Kal hi wo mujhe sadko ke niyamo ke baare me bata rahi thi. Kal boht kuch seekha mene. Wese toh hari batti, laal batti ye sab pata tha mujhe. Par peeli batti ke baare me nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki aur bhi kitni saari cheezein hoti hai. Mein toh kal hairaan reh gayi thi ye jaan ke ki sadko ke liye itne niyam hote hai.

Veer (smiles) : Hahaha~ bas tum sab kuch seekhti jao.

Suman : Wo...

Veer : Kaho na!?

Suman : Sabse pehle toh boht boht dhanyavaad Maalik! Mein ye kabhi nahi bhulungi. Mujh jaisi aurat ko sabse pehle aapne apnaaya. Mujhe uss daldal se baahar nikaala aur ek rehne ke liye chhat dii. Mere parivaar ko bhi saath me rakha. Aur ab ye... Ye jo aapne mujhe nayi cheezein seekhne ka mauka diya. Par, mera sawaal hai aapse. Ki aap aisa kyu kar rahe hai!? Zaahir hai ki kuch shayad aur bhi kaaran hai!?

Veer : Hmm! Tumne sahi samjha. Yadi aisa kahu ki kuch mera bhi swaarth hai. Toh kya tum naraaz ho jaogi!?

Suman (naa me sarr hilaate hue) : Bilkul bhi nahi! Balki mujhe toh khushi hogi ki mein apne maalik ke liye kaam aa saki. Keval jismaani roop se hi nahi, mein apne maalik ki harr tareeqe se seva kar sakti hu. Kahiye maalik! Mujhe kya karna hai!?

Veer (smiles) : Abhi toh kuch nahi Suman. Bas, jitna ho sake utna seekho. Utna jaano, nayi cheezo ke baare me. Harr cheez. Chaahe wo sadko ke niyam ho ya police, court, kacheheri ke. Chaahe wo mobile phones ho ya laptop. Sab ke baare me jitna ho sakta hai utna jaano.

Suman (surprised) : I-Itna sab kuch!? Mujhe samay lag jaega Maalik!

Veer (smiles) : Abhi tumhaare paas hai samay. Lo samay! Mujhe yakeen hai tum kar logi!

Suman (blushes) : Itna bharosa hai aapko mujhpe!?

Veer : Of course! Tum meri ho. Aur apne logo ko mein pehchaanta hu acche se.

Suman (smiles) : J-Jii! Par fir!?

Veer (smiles) : Fir samay aane par mein bata dunga kya karna hai. Okay!? Filhaal shayad tumhe ab jaana padega. Lagta hai koi aane waala hai.

Veer ne darwaaze ki orr dekhte hue kaha kyuki darwaaze ke glass ke baahar kisi ke khade hone ki dhundli sii aakriti nazar aa rahi thi.

Aur bilkul, agle hi pal darwaaza khula aur wo jis se milne ki Veer ko khud bhi talab lagi hui thi wo haazir hua.

Nidhi!!!

Darwaaza khulte hi dono hi Veer aur Nidhi ki nazre aapas me jaa takraayi. Aur maano pal bhar ke liye waqt sa tham gaya.

Veer ke honth halke se khul uthe. Par wo ekdum maun hi raha. Yahi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha. Par Veer se nazre hataate hue usne fir Suman ko dekha jo baat ko samajhte hue haan me sarr hilaayi aur baahar jaane lagi.

Suman ke jaate hi Nidhi ne gate ko lagaya aur ahista ahista wo Veer ke qareeb aayi. Uski nazre Veer par na hokar neeche thi. Aur idhar Veer keval apni ma'am ko apne paas aata dekh raha tha.

Nidhi bed ke paas aate hue, Veer ki jaangh ke paas baithi aur uski taraf chehra karte hue usne dheere se apne haatho se ek steel ka gol sa lunchbox bed par sarkaate hue Veer ke paas kar diya.

Par abhi bhi, uski nazre neeche hi thi.

Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki wo Nidhi ka lunch box tha jo wo college le jaaya karti thi.

Veer : Y-Ye!??

Nidhi : Kh-Khaana hai isme. Kuch khaaya nahi hai tumne.

Veer : Umm! Ye toh aapka lunchbox hai na!? Aap college nahi gayi kya aaj!?

Nidhi (naa me sarr hilaate hue) : N-Nahi! College ke liye hi nikal rahi thi. Par tabhi tumhari Bhabhi ka call aaya aur unhone jab bataya ki tum hospital me ho. Toh... Toh seedha yaha aa gayi.

'Aah! So that's how it is!'

Veer ne mann hi mann socha. Shayad Ragini ne ye soch ke Nidhi ko bataaya tha kyuki kal raat Nidhi itni chinta lekar uske ghar tak aayi thi. Toh badle me usse jataana bhi Ragini ne thik samjha. Aur shayad Nidhi college hi jaa rahi thi jab ye khabar sunte hi wo forun hi yaha aa gayi.

Veer : T-Toh ab college!?

Nidhi : Mene leave le lii!

Veer : Ahh!? P-Par... Really!? I mean, is it okay!? Leave lena...!?

Veer ke iss sawaal par Nidhi ekdum maun rahi aur kuch na boli. Veer jaanta tha ki Nidhi ki job ek professor ki thi yaani ki ek private job. Aur zyaada leave lene par zaahir hai ki payment cut hota hi tha.

Veer : J-Juhi kesi hai!?

Nidhi : Thik hai.

Veer : Aur Shreya jii!?

Nidhi : Wo bhi... Thik hai!

Veer : Kya aapne unko bhi meri iss haalat ke baare me bata diya!?

Nidhi (naa me sarr hilaate hue) : Nahi! Abhi kisi ko nahi.

Veer (sighs) : Good!

Uske aisa kehte hi Nidhi ek pal ke liye usse dekhi par jese hi Veer ne uski nazro ko pakda toh Nidhi ki palke ek baar fir neeche jhuk gayi.

Nidhi : T-Tum ab kesa mehsoos kar rahe ho!?

Veer : I'm... I'm good actually!

Nidhi : Hmm~

*Silence*

Aur bas, ek baar fir khamoshi sii chha gayi.

Dono me se koi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Veer toh soch raha tha ki kya bole aur Nidhi toh bas sawaalo ka jawaab hi de rahi thi.

Par achanak hi Veer ki nazar Nidhi ke gaalo par gayi aur usne gaur se dekha. Usse nazar aaya ki Nidhi ke gaalo par aasuo ke kuch nishaan the.

Aur ye dekhte hi pata nahi kyu par Veer ko andar hi andar atyant hi peeda sii mehsoos hui.

Aur saath hi saath Nidhi ka uss se yu nazre na milaana jese andar hi andar Veer ko kachot sa raha tha. Maano khaaye jaa raha tha.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : ....

Veer : Ma'am!???

Nidhi : ....

Do baar bulaane par bhi Nidhi ne koi jawaab na diya. Veer ko jese ye aur bhi glaani mehsoos karwa raha tha. Usse aur bhi tadpa raha tha. Usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese maano uske seene me kisi ne haath daal diya ho aur uska dil nichod diya ho.

Ajeeb sii bechaini aur ek peeda usse ho rahi thi apne dil me.

Aur apne haath ko aage badhaate hue usne Nidhi ki chin pakad uska chehra apni taraf kiya.

Iss baar Nidhi ki palke upar hui aur usne Veer ko dekha.

Veer ne bhi usse dekha par...

Agle hi pal usne ye bhi dekha ki...

Nidhi ki palko par aasuo ki bunde sajne lagi. Kayi saare aasu, motiyo ki tarah unn naazuk palko par umadte hue sajte chale gaye.

*Tap*

Aur bas, ek aasu ki boond aankh ke kone se baahar nikal neeche ek dhaar bante hue gir gayi.

Veer ekdum stabdh hue dekhta raha. Uske honth khule par koi bhi shabd baahar na aaya.

Iss baar Nidhi ke bhi honth khule, par wo thar-thara rahe the. Kaanp rahe the. Thand ki wajah se nahi, rulaayi ki wajah se.

Aur agle hi shan Nidhi ki thodi uchi hui awaaz Veer ko sunn'ne mili. Par saath hi saath ye awaaz ek rundhe hue gale se aayi thi. Rote hui Nidhi ke gale se.

Nidhi : K-Kya hua ab!? Aur kya chaahiye!? *sniff* Ye jhoothi care mat dikhaaya karo Veer.

Veer : Y-Ye!? Ye aap!???

Nidhi : T-Tumhaare vaade jhoote rehte hai. Toh... Toh zaahir hai ye care karna bhi koi formality hi hogi. *sniff*

Veer : N-No wayyy! Ye aap kya...!?

Nidhi (cries) : Sab samajhti hu. Na toh tum apni Bhabhi ko baatein bataate ho ki kaha jaate ho kya karte ho, aur na hi kisi aur ko... Ma'am mein padhaayi zaroor karunga. Aise na jaane kitne vaade tumne logo se kiye honge Veer. Par kya pata!? Shayad issi ki tarah unhe bhi jhootha...

Veer (uchi awaaz me) : Ma'am!!!

Aur Veer ke thoda zorr se kehte hi Nidhi ekdum shaant pad gayi.

Maano jese pal bhar ke liye waha sannaata sa chha gaya tha. Wo toh accha hua ki Suman aur Ragini ward se shayad dur the jiske chalte baahar koi awaaz na gayi.

Nidhi forun hi palti, aur apne aasu jaldbaazi me poch wo waha se uthne ke liye hui jab...

Nidhi : !???

Uska haath Veer ki giraft me tha.

"Aaahh!?"

Aur agle hi shan ek jhatke me Veer ne usse kheencha toh Nidhi uske seene ki orr jhukte hue uske paas aa baithi. Ek prakaar se wo uske upar jhuki hui thi. Uska seena poora ka poora Veer ki chhaathi par tha. Aur dono ke hi chehre behad hi kareeb the.

Nidhi jaise iss harqat se bhauchakki sii reh gayi thi aur wo agle pal hi uthti agar...

Agar wo saamne ka drashya nahi dekhti.

Kyuki uske saamne Veer tha, jiski aankho me aasu the. Ye pehli baar nahi tha jo Nidhi ne usse rota hua dekha tha. Par iss baar baat kuch aur thi. Wo baat Veer ki aankho me thi jisse Nidhi shayad bhaanp paa rahi thi.

Veer : You know it! Don't you!? Sab kuch jaanti ho fir bhi sataati ho!? Kyu!? Aap jaanti ho ki mera aisa koi bhi iraada nahi rehta hai. Mein kabhi kisi ko jaan bujh ke hurt nahi karta. Rahi baat Bhabhi ki toh mein unhe sab kuch bata deta hu. Mostly! Aur ye sab kese hua... Ye bhi unhe mein bataane waala hu baad me. Fir bhi aap aisa kehti ho!? Even though aap mujhe kitne acche se jaanti ho... Kyu!? Kitni baar sorry kehta aaya hu aapko. Aisa mat kiya karo ma'am.

Bechari Nidhi. Veer ki baatein sunn ekdum shaant sii pad gayi. Uske aasu khud nirantar bahe jaa rahe the.

Aur fir next moment hi veer ne khud ko aage kiya. Uske kaano ke ekdum sameep aaya aur kaha,

"Ye tiffin mere liye!? Kitna khayaal rakhti ho aap mera huh!? Leave bhi leli meri khaatir college se!? Aur!? Kal raat me aap ghar aayi thi!? Mere liye!? Mujhe manaane ke liye!? Aapko mere future ki bhi itni chinta hai. Kitna karti rahogi!? Why don't you understand you stupid Ma'am!?"

Nidhi (shocked) : H-Huhhh!??

Maano jese Nidhi ko apne kaano par vishwaash hi nahi hua. Kya abhi abhi Veer ne sach me usse stupid kaha!?

Veer : Why don't you understand!? Itni parvaah dikhaati rahogi... If you keep doing like that... Then... Then... Beware... I might fall for you!

*Badump*

Aur bas, Nidhi ka dil ye sunte hi jese maano ek beat skip kar gaya.

Wo phati aankho se Veer se alag hote hue usse ghuri. Par uska khud ka dil itni zorro se dhadak raha tha ki wo waha zyaada derr na khadi reh paayi.

Aur tezz kadmo ke saath wo jhatpat baahar bhaagte hue nikal gayi.

Veer, keval usse bas jaata dekhta raha jab...

*Ding*

[System has been activated.]

[Mission~ 'Rescue Kaera from the hideout.' has been completed.]

[400 Points have been rewarded.]

[Hmm!? Your heart rate is high... Something up!?]

Veer (sighs) : Kuch bhi nahi!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like karne ka aur comment bhi.
Dhanyavaad!!

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome Fabolous mind-blowing super duper update

Awesome update once again bhai
Intzaar rahega aapke agle update ka

Awesome update

Oh Bach gya Veer ab slogan ki bari hai maut kise kehte hai use samajh me ayega

MIND BLOWING UPDATE BHAI

Fantastic Update

Awesome superb update

Shit slogan Bach gya ab dekhty hai hospital me Kon h

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Amazing update bro maza a gya

Super awsm update to gud luvd their chemistry finally got some action
Waiting for next update plz do cont asap Takecare

Nice update...

Wonderful, amazing update bhai

Mast update

Mind blowing and fantastic update Werewolf bhai..

Toh kya veer ko iss baar points milege ya nahi..

Tobha tobha megs update bolkar tumne dil ko lut liya tha. Par asli mega update to voh 3 aurate thi jinko tumne chhod diya.

Nice update

Very nice update

Superb update

बहुत ही बढ़िया
हीरो की हीरोइजम की लिमिट भी दिखाया है
सबसे खास बात रघु को स्लोगन के हाइड ऑउट का पता चलना
स्लोगन एक ऐसा व्यक्ति है जो अपने साये पर भी विश्वास नहीं करता
पर अब उसे करारी हार मिली है
उधर दादा जी को ज्यादा चोट ना आना अच्छी बात है
चलो आरोही का शक़ होना जरूर प्रंजल और विवेक के लिए खतरे की घंटी है
ओवर ऑल बहुत बढ़िया अपडेट था

Mast update bhai........

Ek baar fir suspence me daal diya .
Full to jabardast update bhai maza doonga ho gaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai .

nice update bro

veer ko thoda sa strong kar do bro

Super se upar

हमेशा की तरह शानदार अपडेट

Mast update bhai kaera aur veer to save hai.... Ab veer kaera ko save karne ke liye koi point payega ki nahi dekhte hai aage

Bhai nice update.... Yaha kaira ke dad ki nayi entry hui hai... Smthing related to dad and slogan I guess!!!

Nice update

Great update.

It seems Raghu keeps tracking Kaera as he reached within no time after getting the news.

What a way to save Kaera. Khame kha Veer gaya tha bachane ke liye.

Way to go writer saab!!!!!

wow! Great update bro.

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update

Nice update

I think 3 aurte nidhi Suman ragini ho

Super update hai Bhai

Supper updates

Fantastic update bhai

★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...

★ Kya Aarohi Pata laga legi Ke uske dadaji ko girane wale uske dono bhai hai bhale hi usko abhi kuch nhi mila hai lekin shak hai usko abhi bhi..

★ Kya jab wo ghar jayege aur usko wha par ho wheel chair ka tyre mil jyega to to uska shak yakin me badal jyega fir sara such uske samne ho Jo uske dada ji ko marna chahte hai..

★ Kya Aarohi Dono Bhaiyo Ka sara plan samj payegi Ya dono bhai ko pata chal jyega ki arohi ko thoda 2 shak hai dono par..

★ Kya Raghu ko information Dene wala Veer hai Qki Usne ki Msg Kiya tha but ye confirm nhi ki send hua tha ya nhi Akhir unko kese pata chala ki keara ko kaha par lekar gaya hoga Slogan..

★ Akhir Slogan Q marna chahta hai keara ko Ab uska ye sapna to pura hone se raha Qki ab veer Uske sath hai usse bachane ke liye,..

★ Raghu jab itni planing ke sath aaya aur sath me itne logo ko bhi laya to Slogan Bhagna to nhi chahiye tha uske haath se Wo to aram se chala gaya jese ki wo gate ke paas hi betha tha..

★ Akhir Keara Ko Apne baap ki Baat Q sunni Padi Wo to Veer se sath Rehna chahti thi Qki Wo hi usko bachane aaya tha..

★ Akhir keara Ka baap kon hai Jo ab tak ka sab se bada suspens hai Aur Ye Keara Bhi Jo abhi tak Veer bhi Usko 'Check' nhi kar paya hai..

★ Aur Ye 3 Devi Kon hai jo iss samay Veer ke samne hai..
★ Ragini
★ Suman
★ Nidhi

★ Ya koi aur hai Uske samne I'd not kon hai ye teen aurot agr ye teen ye hi gai to inko kisne btya ke Veer Hospital me hai..

★ Ab Dekhna ye hai Veer Sab ko kya jhut bolta hai...


★ Dekhte hai samaye ke garabh ne aage 2 Aur kya likha hai...



★ Waiting for next update...

Awesome Update...

ek aur romanchak update ..to pranjal ne kya plan kiya tha aur usko kaise anjam diya ye pata chal hi gaya .
arohi ne bahut koshish ki jaanne ki par natija kuch nahi nikla par shak paida ho gaya hai uske dimaag me .
slogan ka naam sanjeev hai par wo kaera ko maarna kyu chahta hai ye abhi clear nahi hua .
slogan hai bahut hoshiyar jo apne hi aadmiyo pe najar rakhta hai ,steve karibi hote huye bhi uspar vishwas nahi karta .
par ye kiska phone aa gaya tha slogan ko jo usne phone hi tod diya .. kahi steve ne gaddari to nahi kar di .

veer ko dard dekar maarna chahta tha slogan par sahi waqt pe raghu aa gaya aur dono ko bacha liya ..
kaera ko pakadne ki planning bahut sateek thi slogan ki ,jassi aur raghu ko drugs dena par raghu ne drink kiya hi nahi isliye wo bachane aa paya apne saathiyo ke saath .

Manmohak update dost

Ish khubsurat kahani ke 800 pages pure hone ki badhai ho bhai

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

bhai story achhi he lekin update slow dete ho 812 pages hogeya he lekin abtak 52 update diye ho app kripiya karke update jaldi do

Nic update

Solgan vs veer battle of superiority ..
May veer win.but solgan ka Keara k piche padna use dushmani ka maksad kya he?
Super update bhai

Awesome update

Superb update

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Nice update bhai

Dhasu update diya bhai

Ek aur mission complete. Ye vivek aur pranjal ka peechwada kab tootega. Kya dadaji apni proprty veer ke naam karenge. Superb update.

Superbbbbb update bro

Bhai Kamaal ki story he Ma apka bhot bara fan hun maine aj tak ap se bahter koi story writer nhi dekha yaha kiya kamaal ki story he suspance ke sath mera pass lafz nhi he Maine pichle 5 saal se stories read kar rha hun per apki story se bahter koi story nhi mili Dua yahi he ye story kisi waja se na ruke aur iska ent hum per paye story zaror puri karna best of luck and superb update bro

bro ek dum dhamakedaar update hai...... bole to jhkaas.
ab veer itne level par pahuch gaya hai ki wo slogan(snjeev) ka status dekh sakta hai aur shayad kaera ka bhi...
i guess wo teen aurate jarur ragini , nidhi aur suman hogi.
ab ye dekhna hai ki wo aadmi kon hai jo slogan ko veer ke baare me bata raha hai.

Sahi kahe bhai... Ye to wahi baat ho gayi ki khaya piya kuchh nahi aur gilas tuta barah anaa.....

Fantastic update waiting for next

Awesome update bro


Waiting For Next Update Bro

Super update bro

FANTASTIC UPDATE

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Awesome behtreen update bro

Jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update......

Brother waiting for the update brother

Nice update

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING




SHAANDAAR AWESOME EXCELLENT FABULOUS LOVELY AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

MIND BLOWING JABARDUST AWESOME MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Plz cont asap

Awesome update Werewolf bhai.
Iss update me bhi last me suspense bana diya. Bahut badhiya bhai. Love the way you write the story. Har ek character ki feeling aur uske bhaav bakhubi dekhate ho aap. Jese aarohi aur kaera iss update me.
Hotel me party thi to kaera bhi jese bas formality ke liye hi gayi thi. Uska mann kaha lagta he inn sab me. Bachpan se hi ye sab dekh ke badi hui he wo. Kuch special nahi he. Special usse wo teady bear laga hoga jo veer ke sath jeeta tha, wo time jo veer ke sath bitaye, veer ke wo shabd. Yaha ek soft side bhi dikhi kaera ki. Apne papa ke dost ki madad ki. Ab kaera ko kaha pata he raghu unko chhodne jayega aur idhar wo kidnap hogi. Plan to badhiya banaya tha slogan ne aur execute bhi perfect kiya usko. Jassi ko pata lagte derr na lagi par tab tak plan kaam kar chuka. Ho gayi uski miss kidnap.
Yaha manorath ji ko hospital me treatment shuru ho chuka he. Achha he khatre se bahar he taki jab sachhai pata chale to khud se pranjal aur vivek ko ek laga sake kaan ke niche. Aur unke dono beto ko bhi. Karunesh ko bhi lagana ek apne dono harami kya karte he ? Kaha jate he ? Kuch bhi najar na rakhte. Khair yaha aarohi ne dimag chalaya to sahi. Usse pranjal ke behaviour se shaq hua he par koi thos proof nahi uske pass. Wheelchair yaad aayi to sahi par uska wheel pahele hi nikal chuka tha chota harami. Yaha shweta bhi bas apna hi soch rahi he. Karo jo bhi Karna he bure din bhi aayenge sab ke. Yaha par ek sawal he ye dono harami veer se nafrat karte he par kya bachpan se hi esa he ya abhi property ke liye ?? Bachpan se nafrat he to unke dimag me nafrat dali kisne ?? Koi to hoga hi ??
Aarohi sawal puch rahi he par bada harami he baju me. Jo baat taal raha he. Ab ye baat manorath ji ki bachkani he ki devi maa ne saja di. Bhagwan ka dil itna bhi chota nahi ki aap unko yaad na karo to wo aapko saja de . Par kya pata ye baat aarohi ke liye khaas bann jaye. Jese vivek haa me haa mila raha he shaq to hui hoga usse.
Slogan ke hideout pe dono bandhe he. Veer ki halat kharab he abhi to kuch kar nahi sakta. Kaera ko samjh to diya short me. Kaera ko bhi darr nahi slogan se. Slogan to sala kisi pe bharosa na karta. Ab ye kon he jisne ye bhi predict kiya tha ki veer aayega ?? Kahi usse pari ke bare me kuch pata to nahi ??
Slogan ne yaha kaera aur veer dono ko chot pahuchne ke liye kaera ke hatho veer ko chaku mara. Kaera ne bhi jese bahut samay baad please kaha aur aankho me aasu bhi aaye. Bas usse pata nahi kyu hua esa. Achha hua bone ripper ki wajah se jyada penetration nahi hua. Yaha pari ki bhi chinta dikhai di veer ke liye. Bas uska behaviour change hua he wo nahi. Achha hua sahi waqt pe raghu aa gaya. Par sawal he ki hideout ka pata kese chala usko ?? Kahi Steve ne to nahi intel di ?? Ya kisi aur ne ??
Kaera ke dad kon he wo to pata chal hi jayega par kaera ke uper check kyu nahi kiya ?? Aur ye hospital me kon he teeno ?? Kaera, ragini aur suman lagti mujhe to. Nidhi aur shreya bhi ho sakti he. Sonia aur suhana hui to majha aayega.
Aur ek baat thi bhai. Ye dono harami ko unke khel me hi harana. Esa Karna ki dono ka sabke samne asli chahera aa jaye.
Aur bhavna ji aur unki beti kab aane wali he ??
Waiting for next update.

SHAANDAAR EXCELLENT AWESOME FANTASTIC MARVELLOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Pehle to so sorry bhai ki apke last update pr kuch bhi likh na payea pr maine ek baat note ki hai ki apne es update or last wale Mai story ko arohi ke nazaryie se dikhane pr kafi focus kiya hai kaise last update Mai bhi kahe to half update arohi ke nazaryie se likhi gayi or is baar bhi same thing hua but ye achaa hua ki arohi ko pranjal pr shaq to hua vivek pr bhi ho jaye to mast rahega

Woh hospital hey itna yad rakhna.

Mujy lagta ha Sonia aur suhana hi ho gi Kyo k keera uss k relatives ko nhi janti us ny veer ko sirf in doo larkiyo k sath hi dekha tha

update ajj ayga yea kal koi bta skta h plz

Koi tika - tippani nahi....

Update to bhaut jabardast hain

Desperately waiting for next update.

Werewolf Bhai शानदार update था पर बार बार वीर का कमजोर पडना और बार बार उसका चोट खाना अच्छा नही लग रहा। वीर कहानी का हीरो है तो उसका शक्तिशाली होना लाजिम है पर यह पर इन लगातार हमलो से उसकी lovelife आगे ही नही बढ रही।

Bhai update kab ay hi

Brother waiting Plz update

Amazing update ....

Keep posting ...

Brother waiting Plz update

Great update bhai

Sorry, mera bolne ka matlab the Sonia aur Suhana should remember it is hospital, Veer is a patient, koi kaand na kare udhar.

Waiting for update...

Waiting

Update 51 – 52...

Aarohi ke POV se shuru hua tha Update 51 darshata hai ke Aarohi ka role kaafi important hoga aane waale waqt mein... Ab tak ki huyi sabhi ghatnao se to yahi lagta hai ke Aarohi hi Vivek & Pranjal ke iss ghinone kaand ki pole kholegi... Abhi tak usse doubt hona bhi shuru ho chuka hai ke Manorath aese hi nahi seedhiyon se gir gaya tha... Usne wheel chair ko check kiya to paaya ke uska ek pahiya misplaced tha... Khair, abhi ke liye Aarohi kuchh zyada nahi jaan paayi hai iss sabke baare mein but she seems to be very intelligent... Uske thoughts zaahir karte hain ke usse zyada derr andhere mein nahi rakha jaa sakta... Jald hi wo iss maamle ko khangalegi aur accident ke pichhe chhippe asli tathyon ko baahar laayegi...

Wahin Pranjal/Vivek ki chaal ka pehla hissa saamne aaya... Robotics ki sahayta se unhone wo accident kiya... Wheel Chair ke ek tyre ko Robotics ki help se remote controlled bana diya gaya tha aur ussi remote ke kaaran wo wheel chair seedhiyon se giri... Ab saaf ho chuka hai ke ye poora plan kameene brothers ka hai jiske zariye wo poori jaaydad hadapna chahte hain par abhi tak inke plan ka pehla hi charan poora hua hai doosra abhi baaki hai... Wahin ye bhi saaf ho gaya ke ye dono kameene Manorath ko tapkana nahi chahte the, inka lakshya maatra usse seedhiyon se girana hi tha kyonki Manorath ke hosh mein aane ki khabar ke baad bhi Vivek ek dum normal hi tha... By the Way Werewolf
bhai ye Pranjal ko zara achhe se sabak sikhana... Pehle to mujhe iska naam hi pasand nahi aaya aur oopar se saala zyada Einstein samajhta hai apne aap ko...

Ab baat karen Ragini aur Nidhi ki to... Nidhi seedhe Ragini ke ghar pahunch gayi aur Ragini ki kartavya nishtha par bhi sawaal khade kar diye... Veer ka uss waqt ghar par naa hona aur Ragini ka iss baat se anjaam hona ke Veer kahaan hai Nidhi ko majboor kar gaya apne shabdon se bhatakne par... Aur shayad kuchh zyada hi bol gayi wo wahaan par jiska ehsaas usse swayam bhi ho gaya... Haalanki Ragini bhi uske shabdon par hairaan huyi par baad mein wo ye jaankar khush bhi ho gayi ki koyi to hai jo Veer ki care karta hai... Nidhi ka wahaan jaane ka main motive yahi tha ke Veer apni padhayi na chhode aur Ragini bhi iss baat se sehmat thi... Ab dekhna hoga ke kya Veer College jaana firse start karega ya nahi aur agar karega to aur kaunsi musibatein aayengi uski dagar mein... By the way Nidhi ka Veer ko lekar yun Chintit hona, Ragini par yun sawaal daagna... Ye Pyaar nahi to Aur kya hai Suman, I mean Nidhi...

Ab baat karte hain Slogan urf Sanjeev ki... Usse kisine pehle hi bata diya tha ke Veer Kaera ko bachane aayega aur Slogan uske swagat ki poori taiyari karke baitha tha... Aur usse ek Phone bhi aaya issi baat ko lekar aur gusse mein Slogan Dada ne apna phone hi patak diya... Matlab wo gussa tha uss aadmi ke phone aane par... Aur ye saala hai kaun jo Veer ki movements ki khabar pehle hi Slogan tak pahuncha de raha hai... Is raaz par se bhi jaldi se parda uthao Writer Saahab...

Wahin Slogan ko finally Check kar paaya Veer aur lage ke ab wo Kaera ko bhi Check kar paayega... But Slogan ki *Check* window mein uski favourability nahi darshayi gayi iska kya kaaran hai... Ye aap bhool gaye Writer saahab ya koyi aur baat hai ... Khair, Veer uss hideout mein pahuncha aur wahaan par Drugs aur Sedatives ki maujoodgi bhi thi just for smuggling... Par Slogan to pehle hi jaanta tha uske aagman ke baare mein isiliye wo taiyaar tha... Veer pakda gaya aur achha khaasa torture bhi kiya Slogan ne usse... Kaera ke haathon se hi Veer ke haath mein chaaku ghonp diya wo bhi ek baar nahi balki kayi baar... Wo to bhala ho bone reaper ka jo Veer ki haddiyan bach gayi haath ki warna ho gaya tha kalyan... Khair, ant mein Raghu aur Jassi wahaan pahunch gaye aur apne aadmiyon ke saath milkar Kaera ko bacha liya...

Kaera bhi Veer ko lekar hospital jaana chahti thi par apne Dad ke bulave par usse waapis lautna pada... Khair ye bhi pata chala ke ek achhe khaase plan ke saath Kaera ko kidnap kiya gaya tha jiske zariye Raghu aur Jassi ko Kaera se door kar diya gaya tha... Par ab ye sab dekh kar saaf ho gaya hai ke Kaera koyi chhoti moti party nahi hai, she's much more bigger than what I expected her to be... Aur lagta hai ke Veer ko business set-up karne mein bhi Kaera help kar sakti hai...

Meanwhile, Ye bhi pata chala ke Slogan urf Sanjeev ka lakshya Kaera ki maut hai... Ye bhi ek bada suprise tha kyonki mujhe laga tha ke Kaera ki property aur paise aur business ke kaaran hi Slogan uske pichhe hai but he wants her dead, Reason abhi tak saamne nahi aaya hai par I'm sure ke koyi bada hi reason hoga iss sabka... Ab intezaar rahega Slogan aur Kaera ki iss guthhi ke sulajhne ka...

Ant mein Veer ke Hospital Bed ke saamne teen aurten khadi thi... Aurten matlab Shaadi shuda hongi... Hmmm, Ragini, Suman aur Nidhi hain kya??Kyonki Suhana to kya hi aayegi abhi yahaan... It'll be interesting to see how the conversation pans out between Veer & Nidhi... Wahin Ragini ka kya reaction hoga Veer ki iss haalat par dekhna rochak rahega...

Wahin Veer ne Update – 52 mein Pari ko achhe se suna bhi diya... Aur Veer ka kehna sahi hai ki Pari ka behaviour har level ke baad change hota hai hai... Iss mudde par zyada kuchh nahi bas ek hi baat kahunga, Let's wait & watch...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Slogan ka agla kadam kya hoga iss plan ke fail hone ke baad... Uske nishaane par ek baar firse Veer hoga ya nahi... Abhi usse Aatish ki maut ka hisaab bhi lena hai Veer se... Wahin Kaera kya karegi ab?? Veer usse bachane wahaan pahuncha lekin usse iss sabke baare mein pata kaise chala... Ye sawaal hoga hi Kaera ke mann mein aur Veer ki haalat dekh kar Kaera ki aankhon mein aansoon aa gaye means she got emotional... Fuckkkk... She can feel, at least she felt for Veer... Veer & Kaera Be like – ... In dono ke beech kya baat hogi ye dekhna bhi exciting hoga...

Wahin Aarohi ka agla kadam kya hoga, kya usse Pranjal aur Vivek ke iraadon ka pata chalega... Aur Veer ka hospital mein naa aana Kavya aur Aarohi ke mann mein kya sawal khada karega ye bhi dekhna hoga... Idhar Dono kameene brothers ka aage ka plan kya hai ye bhi ek sawaal hai...

At last, Nidhi aur Veer ke beech kya baatein hogi aage... Inki baatein waise to aankhon mein hi ho jaati hain kyonki jo lafzon mein ho wo baat hi kya...

Dono hi update behad khoobsurat the Werewolf bhai... Slogan ki darindagi ka ek chhota sa namoona dekhne ko mila hume... Wahin Aarohi ke POV se chala scene bhi kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Suspense chaaron taraf se barabar bana hi hua hai chahe wo Kaera – Slogan ka mudda ho ya Vivek – Pranjal ya fir sabse bada suspense Pari ka... Lekin har suspense ko badi achhi tarah prastut kar rahe hain aap aur Kahani mein kahin bhi boriyat nahi ho rahi... Yahi as a writer aapki kaabiliyat ko darshaata hai... So, Bas yahi kahunga ke bas issi tarah likhte rahiye aur apne Lekhan ke jaadu se hum sabka Manoranjan karte rahiye ...

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Pranjal n wheel n remote system lagwala huwa tha tabhi tow kisi ko uss per shak ki gunjaish ker sakta bada shatir dimag laga
Arohi CID wala dimag laga rahi h dekhte kia woh kich pata laga payegi ya nahi
Raghu ager time se nahi pahochta tow aaj VEER ka kaam tamam hone wala tha
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar

bhai... aaj update milega

Yeh sahi hey, lekin jab beechara Veer return care dikhata hey to uska gaal laal kar deti hey Nidhi.
Veer ko yeh gana chahiye

Acha sila diya tune mere pyar ka
Acha sila diya tune mere pyar ka
Yaar ne hi laal kar diya gaal yaar ka

Aaj update mile ga bhai

Bhai ye slogen ka charecter apunko bahut pasand aariya hai

काइरा की किडनैपिंग कैसे हुई थी यह तो पता चल गया लेकिन स्लोगन के इरादे अभी भी कन्फ्यूज कर रहा है । उसके जीवन का मकसद ही काइरा को पाना और फिर उसे समाप्त कर देना था ।

उसके " पाने " से मतलब क्या था ? क्या वो उसकी इज्जत लूटना चाहता था ?
लेकिन सिर्फ काइरा ही क्यों ? क्या उसकी वक्र दृष्टि काइरा के डैड पर नहीं है ? क्या वो काइरा के डैड को जान से नहीं मारना चाहता है ?
खैर ! यह तो हमें बाद के अपडेट्स में पता चल ही जायेगा ।

इधर दादाजी की एक्सिडेंट कैसे हुई थी वह भी मालूम पड़ा । सारी कारिस्तानी प्रांजल की थी ।
लेकिन ह्विल चेयर का पहिया इतना भी छोटा नहीं होता है कि उसे अपने पैंट के पोकेट में रख सकें । मुझे लगता है उसने ह्विल चेयर के पहियों के नट बोल्ट में कुछ खराबी की होगी ।

वैसे आरोही ने अच्छा अपने दिमाग का इस्तेमाल किया । प्रांजल का ह्विल चेयर का तोड़ फोड़ करना अजीब सा लगा था उसे । वो सही दिशा में सोच रही है ।

आखिर बाॅडी गार्ड रघु ने अपने मालकिन को बचा ही लिया । सही वक्त पर पहुंचा वो । लेकिन इस पुरे घटनाक्रम में वीर बुरी तरह जख्मी हो गया ।
उसके पास कुछ ऐसी शक्तियां हैं जिससे वो जल्द ही स्वास्थ्य लाभ कर लेगा ।
इस पुरे घटनाक्रम में एक ऐसा फोन काॅल भी आया था जिससे स्लोगन अपना आपा खो बैठा था । कहीं वो उसका प्रतिद्वंद्वी तो नहीं ?

बहुत बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
इस अपडेट में रोमांच गजब का देखने को मिला ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

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