Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Latest Update ➢ Update 193 ​

 

[Werewolf]

Iss update me bhi last me suspense bana diya. Bahut badhiya bhai. Love the way you write the story. Har ek character ki feeling aur uske bhaav bakhubi dekhate ho aap. Jese aarohi aur kaera iss update me.

Famiglia arc me feelings ki bharmaar aaegi.

Hotel me party thi to kaera bhi jese bas formality ke liye hi gayi thi. Uska mann kaha lagta he inn sab me. Bachpan se hi ye sab dekh ke badi hui he wo. Kuch special nahi he.

Yep! True that.

Special usse wo teady bear laga hoga jo veer ke sath jeeta tha, wo time jo veer ke sath bitaye, veer ke wo shabd. Yaha ek soft side bhi dikhi kaera ki. Apne papa ke dost ki madad ki.

Satya vachan!

Ab kaera ko kaha pata he raghu unko chhodne jayega aur idhar wo kidnap hogi. Plan to badhiya banaya tha slogan ne aur execute bhi perfect kiya usko.

Yadi Raghu nahi bhi jaata toh uske liye bhi Slogan ne plan taiyaar kiya hua tha. In short Raghu ke jaane se Slogan ka kaam aur asaan ho gaya tha.

Yaha manorath ji ko hospital me treatment shuru ho chuka he. Achha he khatre se bahar he taki jab sachhai pata chale to khud se pranjal aur vivek ko ek laga sake kaan ke niche. Aur unke dono beto ko bhi. Karunesh ko bhi lagana ek apne dono harami kya karte he ? Kaha jate he ? Kuch bhi najar na rakhte.

Ab bacche bade ho gaye hai toh Karunesh zyaada dhyaan nahi de paate.

Khair yaha aarohi ne dimag chalaya to sahi. Usse pranjal ke behaviour se shaq hua he par koi thos proof nahi uske pass. Wheelchair yaad aayi to sahi par uska wheel pahele hi nikal chuka tha chota harami.

Jisme ferr badal kii ho wo saboot toh hataana zaroori hi hai na? Yahi Kiya Pranjal ne.

Yaha shweta bhi bas apna hi soch rahi he. Karo jo bhi Karna he bure din bhi aayenge sab ke. Yaha par ek sawal he ye dono harami veer se nafrat karte he par kya bachpan se hi esa he ya abhi property ke liye ?? Bachpan se nafrat he to unke dimag me nafrat dali kisne ?? Koi to hoga hi ??

Bachpan ka jab zikr hoega tab hi pata chalega iss raaz ke baare me.

Aarohi sawal puch rahi he par bada harami he baju me. Jo baat taal raha he.

Bada haraami chota haraami. I like it.

Ab ye baat manorath ji ki bachkani he ki devi maa ne saja di. Bhagwan ka dil itna bhi chota nahi ki aap unko yaad na karo to wo aapko saja de . Par kya pata ye baat aarohi ke liye khaas bann jaye. Jese vivek haa me haa mila raha he shaq to hui hoga usse.

Manorath jii naye vichaaro ke saath saath puraane vichaaro ke bhi hai. Pooja paath me boht vishwaash rakhte hai.

Slogan ke hideout pe dono bandhe he. Veer ki halat kharab he abhi to kuch kar nahi sakta. Kaera ko samjh to diya short me. Kaera ko bhi darr nahi slogan se. Slogan to sala kisi pe bharosa na karta. Ab ye kon he jisne ye bhi predict kiya tha ki veer aayega ?? Kahi usse pari ke bare me kuch pata to nahi ??

Aage pata chalega.

Slogan ne yaha kaera aur veer dono ko chot pahuchne ke liye kaera ke hatho veer ko chaku mara. Kaera ne bhi jese bahut samay baad please kaha aur aankho me aasu bhi aaye. Bas usse pata nahi kyu hua esa. Achha hua bone ripper ki wajah se jyada penetration nahi hua. Yaha pari ki bhi chinta dikhai di veer ke liye. Bas uska behaviour change hua he wo nahi.

Emotions are on the way...

Par sawal he ki hideout ka pata kese chala usko ?? Kahi Steve ne to nahi intel di ?? Ya kisi aur ne ??
Kaera ke dad kon he wo to pata chal hi jayega par kaera ke uper check kyu nahi kiya ??

Update 54 me iska jawaab hai. Rahi baat check karne ki toh he'll do it eventually.

Aur ek baat thi bhai. Ye dono harami ko unke khel me hi harana. Esa Karna ki dono ka sabke samne asli chahera aa jaye.
Aur bhavna ji aur unki beti kab aane wali he ??
Waiting for next update.

Dono ke saath jo bhi hoga mazedaar hoga.

Awesome update Werewolf bhai.

Thanks a lot bro!
Keep supporting!

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 54 ~ Schemes​

Ab tak...

Veer, keval usse bas dekhta raha jab...

*Ding*

[System has been activated.]

[Mission~ 'Rescue Kaera from the hideout.' has been completed.]

[400 Points have been rewarded.]

[Hmm!? Your heart rate is high... Something up!?]

Veer (sighs) : Kuch bhi nahi!!!

Ab aage...

Next day...

Kal ka din bada hi tiring tha, Veer ke liye bhi aur Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke liye bhi. Visitors pe visitors jo aa rahe the Veer se milne.

Jaha shuruaat hui thi Ragini se toh fir Suman aur Nidhi. Aur ye silsila fir chalta gaya jab tak ki Shreya ko na pata chal gaya. Bas fir kya tha? Khabar milte hi, Madam jii bhi aayi Juhi ko lekar aur ghanto tak dono ne Veer ke saath baate kii. Yaha tak ki Sonali aur Aabha bhi shaam ko milne pohuchi thi uss se.

Shaam ke waqt, Kavya ka phone aaya toh usse bhi iss baare me pata chala ki Veer khud hospital me admit hai. Aur isliye wo Dada jii ko dekhne nahi aa paaya. Ye khabar sunte hi uske poore parivaar me se keval Kavya khud aur Arohi hi usse dekhne ke liye aayi thi aaj.

Aur kayi saare sawaalo ke jawaab paane ke baad hi wo waapas gayi. Even Sonia aur Suhana ko bhi pata lag chuka tha.

Aur unn dono ne bhi ek baar usse hospital me zaroor visit kiya. Jaha Sonia uske liye 'get well soon' ka ek bouquet leke aayi thi toh wahi Suhana ekdum khaali haath thi aur upar se uspe taane maar rahi thi. Taane aise ki...

"Lag waali waat!?" "Kaha gaye the jo ye sab karwa baithe?"

Kherr! Ye sab toh upri dikhaawa tha uska. Suhana sab kuch jaanti thi. Wo jaanti thi ki Veer kaha gaya tha aur kis se bhidne gaya tha. Shayad iss baar wo uska raaz kholne ki koi nayi tarqeeb soch rahi thi.

Ab ye toh uski personality thi. Veer yaha bebas tha. Wo bas filhaal ke liye waqai araam karna chaahta tha. Kaafi bhaag daud jo ho chuki thi uski kuch haal hi me.

Aur aise hi samay aage badhta raha aur kuch din guzar chuke the. Veer waapas apne ghar aa chuka tha. Haath par abhi bhi ek patli patti bandhi hui thi uske. Recovery uski pehle ke muqaable tezz thi toh ye chot ubharne me zyaada samay nahi lagne wala tha.

Slogan shayad abhi ke liye underground ho chuka tha. Aur apni kisi nayi planning me tha. Par hairat ki baat jo thi wo ye thi ki abhi tak, Veer ko Kaera ki taraf se koi call ya koi visit karne nahi aaya tha.

Veer ne koshish kii thi contact karne ki, par koi fayda na hua.

Aaj Sunday ka din tha, shaam ka waqt aur Veer neeche hi lawn me baithe hue tha. Nigaahe toh saamne kyaari me lage unn phulo par thi par... mann hi mann wo apni Pari se baatein kar raha tha.

Hospital se aane ke baad se hi usne points ka kuch khaas use nahi kiya tha. Uske paas mission se mile 400 points aur pehle ke bache 40 points maujood the. Yaani ki total 440. Aur kal raat hi usne 40 points ka upyog kar liya tha.

Usne 20 points apne intelligence me daal diye the. Aur baaki ke 20 apni strength me. Uske stats ab kuch iss prakaar se the.

[Stats :
Strength - 66/100
Intelligence - 80/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100]

Par ab sawaal yahi tha uske mann me ki, baaki bache hue 400 points se woh skill khareede, stats me points lagaaye ya fir Quest Hunt me gamble kar ke Legendary card nikaale.

'Hey!'

[Hmm!?]

'Tumhe nahi lagta ki 400 points kam mile mujhe kuch?'

[Kam mile!? Tum bhul gaye kya? Mene kaha tha na ki system points ussi hisaab se deta hai jis hisaab se mission complete hua ho. You got your ass whooped there. Tumne Kaera ko indirectly bachaaya ek bali ka bakra bante hue. Aur ye kaho time rehte wo Raghu aa gaya. Yahi kaaran hai ki mission successful hua. Warna jis hisaab se mission complete hua tha, mere hisaab se toh 100 points bhi na milte. You got injured, that's why system gave you 400 points.]

'Well, still...'

[You have 400 points remaining. Kahi istemaal karne hai!?]

'I believe ki uss Slogan se meri mulaqaat firse honi hi hai. Ab jab wo Miss Kaera ke peeche hai. Mera aur uska saamna hona hi hai. And... I need to get stronger. Aatish se bhidne ke baad, I thought I had control. I could win. But... Aisa mehsoos hua tha uss din ki kitna chota hu mein abhi bhi unn logo ke saamne. I need to get stronger Pari. Aur wo bhi jaldi...'

[Yes! To become stronger you need more missions. But before that... Pehle samaaj me strong bano.]

'You mean...'

[Yes! Apna business establish karo.]

'Right! But uske liye mujhe investment chaahiye!'

[There's a way to easily solve everything. Ek plan hai. Kaho toh sunau!? Wese I know you won't follow this.]

'Hmm!? Ohh! Meri Pari ke paas plan bhi hai? Matlab chapar chapar karne ke alawa bhi wo kuch aur kar sakti hai!? Haan?'

[Y-You...!! What the...? Don't make it sound like I am stupid. Mera intelligence alag level pe hai you see!?]

'Alright! Hum definitely fir ye plan nahi sunn'ne waale.'

[Wh-What!?? Y-You!!! Wait! How can you..? At least suno toh...]

'Ahh! Fine then. Bina bole tum rehne nahi waali. Tell me!'

[Ahem!!! See! Ask a huge amount of money from Kaera, Sonia or Suhana. Uss money ko use karo to solve Nidhi's problem. Complete missions and get stronger. Then bache hue paise apne business me lagao. Take help from Kaera in business. Later, jab tumhara business successful ho jaaye then return their money with interest. That's it! Kesa hai?]

'Yup! Fabulous! Now Go to sleep mode!'

[Wh-Whaaattt!? Wait!!! Itna accha toh hai plan! There's nothing wrong in it. Itna sateek aur simple plan bata rahi hu tumhe aur tum ho ki... Ughh! I hate you so much! Hmph!]

'Woah! Really now!? Love se hate pe kab aa gayi tum? Pehle toh bada kehti thi. Ohh master, I lubh you soo muccchhhh! Huh!? Ab kya hua?'

[Hmph!!!]

'Now now... Listen! Tumhare plan me flaws hai. It's not practical.'

[What!? Kya galat hai isme?]

'I cannot take money from them. Khaaskar ki udhaari. Mein ye bilkul nahi kar sakta. Aur kyu lu unse mein itna bada amount? Aur wo kya lagte hai mere, mujhe itna bada amount dene waale? Miss Sonia keval meri ek friend ki tarah hai. Unke aur mere beech boht bada gap hai Pari.'

[B-But yadi tum maangoge toh...]

'Yaha mere apno ne ghar se nikaal diya. Aur tum expect kar rahi ho ki baahar ka aadmi mujhe laakho rupaye invest karne dega? Mein jo already unemployed hu aur apni Bhabhi ke ghar me reh raha hu!?'

[But she can really...]

'I know wo mujhe de dengi paise. But unke mann me kayi sawaal zaroor rahenge paise dene se pehle. It's not right to ask her.'

[Th-Then how about Kaera? Wo toh zaroor...]

'Nahi! Wo pehle hi itna kuch jhel rahi hai. Also, She's broken. I just don't want to ask anything from her. Aur unke aur mere beech me gap toh naapa bhi nahi jaa sakta. She's far greater than me. No comparison Pari!'

[Then Suhana!? Surely, wo toh...]

'Already 3 favour poore karne ka promise de chuka hu usse. Jisse wo obviously samay aane par maangegi. Also, She's definitely plotting something. I can sense it.'

[...]

'Aur issi ke saath, tumhaare saare options khatam hue aur plan flop.'

[B-But...]

'Pari! You don't understand! Nidhi Ma'am ki problem mein apne paiso se solve karunga. Don't worry! I know ki time limit hai. Ab iss baare me koi charcha nahi. Okay?'

[Hmph...!]

'Let's go!'

[Wh-Where...!?]

Veer apni jagah se utha aur andar jaa kar usne upar se ek jacket daali.

Veer : Bhabhi!!!

Ragini (andar kitchen se) : Haan Veer!?

Veer : Dada jii se milne jaa raha hu. Thodi derr me aa jaunga.

Veer ke itna kehte hi Ragini kuch seconds me hi kitchen se baahar nikal kar aayi.

Ragini : Ghar jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Hmm! Dada jii ghar laut aaye hai. Mein admit tha toh uss wajah se milne nahi jaa paaya.

Ragini : Par tumhara haath abhi bhi sahi nahi hai. Tum bike nahi chalaoge.

Ragini ko saari baatein Veer bata chuka tha. Usne ye sab bataya tha ki wo Kaera ko bachaane gaya tha aur kuch gundo ne uss par hamla kar diya tha. Usne Slogan ya uss se related koi bhi baat Ragini ko nahi bataayi thi.

Veer : Don't worry mein...

Ragini : Mene kaha na, tum bike se nahi jaoge.

Veer (sighs) : Accha baba! Mein taxi ya auto se chala jaunga. Ab toh jaa sakta hu na!?

Ragini (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Kya aap...!?

Ragini : Dada jii ko mein bhi dekhna chaahti hu. Par...

Veer : Take your time.

Ragini : Hmm~

Aur Veer Ragini ki baat maan kar bike ko chorr auto se hi apne ghar ki orr nikal pada.

Uske mann me uthal puthal sii machi hui thi. Aneko sawaalo se ghira hua tha woh. Kya hoga jab uske gharwaale usse dekhenge!? Kesa react karenge woh? Kya unn aankho me firse usse nafrat dekhne ko milegi? Jo bhi hone waala tha, Veer iss baar sab ke liye prepared tha.

Wo pehle ki tarah nahi tha jaha wo bheegi billi ban ke darr jaaya karta tha. Eeet ka jawaab patthar se dena aata tha ab usse.

Auto waale ko paise dene ke baad jaise hi wo utra, uske saamne wahi puraana aur jaana pehchaana bangla maujood tha. Jaha se kabhi usse dhakke maarke nikaala gaya tha.

Emotions toh kayi saare beh rahe the uske andar iss samay. Par unhe control kar wo aage badha.

Aur baahar maujood security guards usse dekhte hi wahi rukk gaye. Dono hi security guards ne kuch na kaha. Veer ek nazar dono par daalte hue andar ki orr jaane laga.

Andar mini hall me dastak dete hi usse kuch familiar sa mehsoos hua. Yahi toh wo jagah thi na? Jidhar uss din wo vase rakha hua tha aur Veer utha ke andar le gaya tha, jo baad me fisalne ke kaaran toot gaya tha?

Unn Kadvi yaado ko bhul wo ek baar fir aage badha aur main hall me enter kiya. Andar aate hi usse koi bhi na dikhaayi diya.

Itna bada hall par baithne waala koi nahi. Ekdum soona soona sa tha sab.

Aur fir tabhi andar ke ek kamre se ek bada hi parichit sa chehra uski aankho ke saamne aaya.

Uski sauteli Maa!

Shweta!

Shweta bhi Veer ko dekh pehle toh chaunk gayi. Ek pal ke liye usse abhaas hi nahi hua ki ye Veer hai. Akhir pehle se kayi guna smart dikhne laga tha ab woh. Aur jab usse samajh me aaya toh wo hairat ke maare usse ghur ke dekhne lagi.

Shweta : T-Tum!???

Veer ne na hi koi jawaab diya aur na hi koi reaction. Wo bas chup chaap khada Shweta ko dekhta raha.

Shweta : Tum yaha!? Kya kaam hai!?

Shweta ki baat sunn Veer ko mann hi mann hassi aa gayi. Batao! Uske hi ghar me uss se ye pucha jaa raha tha ki wo yaha kya kar raha hai. Kitni ajeeb aur dukhad baat thi ye.

Shweta kuch aur keh paati ki uske pehle hi Arohi seedhiyo se neeche aa pohuchi.

Arohi (surprised) : Veer!

Veer : *smiles*

Arohi (smiles) : Dada jii tumhe dekh kar boht khush ho jaenge. Waha kya khade ho. Come! Jaldi aao!

Aur Arohi aage badh uska haath thaam kar usse andar ki orr le jaane lagi.

Shweta : Huh!? P-Par...

Bechari shweta keval saamne sab kuch hota dekhte hi reh gayi. Kuch keh hi nahi paayi. Aur ant me wo khud unn dono ke peeche peeche chal dii.

Manorath andar bistar par hi lete hue araam farma rahe the aur Kavya unke liye peene ke liye gunguna paani laayi hui thi.

Kavya : Ye lijiye Dada jii! Aapka gunguna paani.

Manorath : Dhanyawad beti! Bas! Ab tum jao.

Kavya : Kyu jau? Kya mein idhar nahi baith sakti?

Manorath : Arre beta! Tumhe bhi toh kaam honge na? Idhar rahogi toh boriyat hi hoegi aur...

Kavya : Kuch boriyat nahi hoegi Dada jii! Kuch derr yahi baithungi mein. Aur aapko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh bas bol dena. Hehe~

Manorath : Meri poti kitni samajhdaar hai.

Kavya : Wo toh mein hu hi...

*Creak*

Inki baat samaapt hote hi, kamre ka darwaaza khula aur Veer ka haath thaame Arohi aur Veer dono hi andar enter kiye.

Veer ne apne Dada jii ko dekha aur unki haalat dekhte hi uski bauhe sikud baithi.

Kitne kamzor nazar aa rahe the woh pehle ke muqaable. Unka dhaacha bhi kuch patla sa ho chuka tha. Rang bhi kaala tha pehle ke prati. Ye parinaam tha accident ka. Theek se khana na khana, vyayaam na karna, subah ki dhoop na lena. Unki saari aadato par jese rok sii lag gayi thi. Aur uska nateeja saamne tha.

Unka girta hua swaasth.

Manorath ne jese hi Veer ko dekha toh unki aankho me achanak hi jaise chamak sii aa gayi.

Manorath : Veeeerrr!!

Kehte hue wo uthne ko hue toh Veer ne aage badh unhe waapas lita diya.

"Bhaiyaaaaaa!!!!"

Aur idhar Kavya Veer ko achanak dekh uske gale se lipat gayi. Bagal me khadi Arohi muskuraa kar dono ko dekh rahi thi.

'This is the real family...' sochte hue wo wahi ek chair par baith gayi.

Veer : Kesi hai aapki tabiyat Dada jii!

Manorath : Mera Pota... Veer! Aa gaya tu...

Unhone Veer ka haath thaama aur usse apne bistar par hi baitha liya. Veer dekh paa raha tha ki uske Dada jii ki aankho me se aasu behna shuru ho chuke the.

Veer : Jii! Pehle milne na aa saka. Mein hospital me admit tha.

Manorath : Aur mein bhi mere bacche. Kya ho gaya tha tujhe? Kese? Kab hua ye sab.

Veer (smiles) : Lambi kahani hai. Fir kabhi...

Arohi : Tum... Tum bike se aaye ho kya? Tumhara haath toh chotil hai na? Fir kese...!?

Kavya : Ah! Right! Bhaiya aap kese...?

Veer : Chill! Mein auto se aaya hu.

Kavya : Ohh! Haan ye sahi kiya. Good!

Veer : Toh Dada jii? Aapki sehat ka khayaal rakh rahe hai sabhi lagta hai.

Manorath (smiles) : Sabse zyaada toh Pranjal aur Kavya hi mera khayaal rakh rahi hai beta.

Veer : Ohhh! Kavya bacchi zaroor hai par hai badi hi mehnati.

Veer ne kehte hue Kavya ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferra toh Kavya bhi khil khila uthi.

Kavya : Ehehehehe~

Par jese usse Veer ke bol kuch sahi na lage.

Kavya : Huh? Wait! Aapne kya kaha mujhe? Bacchi!?? Bhaiyaaaaaaa...

"Mera pyaara bhaaaaiiiiii!!!!!"

Kavya apni baat poori rakh paati ki tabhi peeche se ek aur jaani pechaani sii awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi. Iss awaaz se toh Veer hamesha parichit rahega. Kabhi bhul nahi sakta woh.

Apne haath felaaye, Pranjal kamre me enter hua aur Veer ke paas aate hi zorr se uske gale se lag baitha.

Pranjal : Ohhh mere bhai!!! Mere chote bhaaaiii! Kitne dino baad tumhe dekh raha hu. Mujhe behad khushi hai ki tum yaha aaye. Mein toh soch hi raha tha ki kisi din tumhe yaha le aau.

Veer : ....

Pranjal uske gale se zaroor laga hua tha. Par Veer jaanta tha. Jaanta tha ki uska ye bhai Pranjal aasteen ka wo saanp tha jo badi hi chaturayi se dassta tha.

Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal ka zaroor koi naya dikhaava tha.

'Do all what you want brother! My eyes... can see through your actions everytime.'

[True that...]

Arohi ne mandir ki saari baatein Veer ko bataayi hui thi. Aur Veer ko pata nahi kyu par sabse zyaada shaq Pranjal par hi jaa raha tha. Akhir Pranjal hi toh tha jisne Veer ko nikalwaaya tha aur Ajay se pitwaaya tha.

Veer ka intelligence already 80 par tha. Usse baatein itni khul kar iske pehle kabhi nahi samajh me aayi thi jitni ab aa rahi thi.

Pranjal : Ohhh bhai! Tumhe kitna miss kiya mene. Tumne accha kiya yaha aakar.

Arohi : Ohh really? I dont think ki tum itne bhi zyaada close the Veer se kabhi...!

Pranjal : C'mon dii! Wo kehte hai na, aapko uss cheez ka ehsaas tab hi hota hai jab aap usse kho do. Veer ke jaane ke baad ghar kitna suuna ho gaya hai. Aur mujhe pata laga ki bina Veer ke... Mein toh reh hi nahi sakta. Haa maana ki usse aaye din daant padti rehti thi par mein hamesha hi usse bachaane ka prayaas karta tha Dii...

Arohi : *frowns*

[This bastard...]

Veer : *smiles*

Pranjal : Dekha Dada jii! Devi jii ke mandir se aane ke baad hi khushiya jese shuru ho gayi hamaare ghar me aana. Dekhiye na! Veer bhi aaya aaj aap se milne. Wo din dur nahi jab Veer ko khud Tau jii apne haatho se pakad ke le aaenge waapas.

Manorath (smiles) : Aaj mein behad khush hu beta.

Pranjal : Mera bhai ab aa gaya hai. Ab mein aaj hi Tau jii se baat karunga. Unhe manaunga...

Kehte hue usne Veer ke haath par ek thapki dii. Par ye wahi haath tha jo uska chotil tha.

Veer : Ahhh!

Pranjal : Arre!? K-Kya hua bhai!

Arohi : Kya kar rahe hooo!???? Usse chot lagi hai na. Idiot!

Pranjal : Ohh! So sorry mere bhai! M-Mujhe waqai koi dhyaan nahi tha. Dekho toh... Dada jii ke chalte tumse milne tak na aa paaya.

Manorath : Kaha? Kaha lagi hai Veer ko chot... Beta! Mujhe dikhao.

Veer : It's... It's okay! Dada jii kuch nahi hai. Halki sii thi chot. Chinta mat kariye. Theek ho jaegi.

Manorath : Nahi! Mujhe dikhao beta. Tabhi mere mann ko shaanti pohuchegi.

Aur Dada jii ki baat rakhne ke liye akhir Veer ko apni jacket utaarni hi padi. Usne savdhaani se jacket utaari toh haatho me bandhi hui pattiya unn sabhi ko nazar aayi.

Pranjal : Hey bhagwaan! Itne dino ke baad bhi abhi ye bandhi hui hai. Toh sochiye zara Dada jii ki chot ke waqt kya haalat rahi hogi Veer ki...

Manorath : Veer!??? Itni zyaada chot... Poora haath bandha hai tumhara.

Veer : Pattiya bandhi hai Dada jii. Andar se sab theek hai ab. Chinta ki koi baat nahi.

*Creak*

Aur ek baar fir darwaaza khula. Iss baar andar aane waale do shaks the.

Ek toh thi Shweta.

Aur dusri thi...

Uski beti, Bhumika jo abhi abhi apni Hotel se aayi thi.

Manorath : Bahu! Dekho... Kaun aaya hai.

Shweta : *smiles*

Keval ek jhoothi sii muskaan dete hue Shweta aage badh Veer ke nazdeek aayi.

Shweta : Ab kesi hai tabiyat aapki Dada jii!?

Manorath : Mera pota aaya hai. Toh uske Dada jii toh behtar hi mehsoos karenge na?

Bhumika ki nazar jab Veer se mili toh ek pal ke liye wo kaafi surprised reh gayi. Aur fir agle hi pal usne apni nazre Veer se chura ke ferr lii.

Kuch samay guzra. Aur sabhi ke sabhi log Dada jii ke kamre me hi baithe hue the aur baatein kar rahe the.

Shweta, Pranjal baahar se toh aisa hi dikha rahe the jese wo Veer ke aane se khush the. Par andar hi andar na jaane kya kya baatein umad rahi thi unke mann me.

Wahi Bhumika keval Veer ko dekhti aur nazre aapas me milte hi khud idhar udhar dekhne lagti.

Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo mann me.

Karunesh aur Brijesh dono hi ghar par nahi the. Aur Vivek bhi. Yahi kaaran tha shayad jiske chalte aaj Veer shaanti se kam se kam apne Dada jii se mil paa raha tha.

Jab jaane ka samay hua toh Veer unn sab se vida leke baahar jaane laga.

Manorath ne manaaya ki wo kahi na jaaye aur unke saath hi ruke. Par Veer ne apne Dada jii ko jese tese manaaya aur baahar aa gaya.

Kavya aur Arohi toh baahar usse chorrne aayi hi thi. Par sabse surprising ye tha ki unke bagal se Bhumika bhi khadi hui thi.

Veer : Chalta hu.

Arohi : Hmm~

Kavya : Bhaiya yu aate rehna.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm~

Veer ne ek antim nazar Bhumika par daali aur palat ke wo jaane laga.

Kavya aur Arohi dono hi andar jaane lagi. Par Bhumika jese kisi cheez ka wait kar rahi thi.

Veer kuch kadam dur jaa chuka tha aur idhar Kavya aur Arohi ke andar jaate hi Bhumika aage ki orr bhaagi.

Bhumika : W-Waitttt!!

Wo chillaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath bhaagti hui wo Veer ke paas aayi.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : Wo... Wo...

Veer : !??

Bhumika : Umm... I... H-How are you? I mean... Tumhari chot... Ab kaisi hai?

Veer ne ek jhalak apne haath par daali jisme patti bandhi hui thi aur fir Bhumika ko dekh usne ek feeki sii smile dii. Usne apne kandhe se jacket utaari aur usse pehn kar apni chot ko chhupa liya.

Wo palta aur aage badhne se pehle usne sirf itna hi kaha.

Veer : Wo kehte hai na... Talwaar se diye gaye zakhm ek baar fir bhi bhar jaate hai. Par kuch kahe gaye shabdo ke zakhm kabhi nahi bharte.

Aur bas, unn alfaazo ko rakh wo aage badh gaya.

Bhumika keval usse andhere me jaata hua dekhti rahi jab tak ki Veer uski aankho se ojhal na ho gaya.

Apna nichla honth daato tale dabaaye uska sarr guilt ke maare jhuk gaya.

Veer usse yaad dila raha tha.

Veer ke shabdo ka matlab ek hi tha. Wo ishaara kar raha tha.

Wo pal, jab Bhumika ne uske saamne hotel me ye kaha tha.

'I... I don't know him.'

Yahi shabd toh kahe the usne Sonia ke saamne Veer ke liye. Aur uske baad se hi wo guilt mehsoos kar rahi thi. Aur aaj Veer ke unn shabdo ne jese uske andar guilt ka baandh tod diya tha.

Aasu tapkaate hue wo waha se seedha andar apne ghar me bhaag gayi.

***

Mumbai...
******** Villa...

"Come in!!!"

Ek behad hi bade se villa me ek kamre ke andar se ye awaaz aayi.

Awaaz bhaari thi. Zaahir ek mard kii.

Aur kamre ke baahar ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki khadi hui thi. Par wo kuch sehmi sii thi.

Aur ye koi aur nahi, Kaera hi thi.

"Y-Yes Father!"

Apne aap me hi dheere se bol wo gate khol ke andar uss kamre me chali gayi.

Ussi villa me neeche ke floor par Raghu ek kamre me maujood tha aur paav par paav rakhe leta hua tha.

"Kya hua? Abhi bhi uss baare me soch raha hai?"

Kehte hue Jassi washroom se baahar nikla.

Raghu : Hmm~

Jassi : Tension mat le. Wese hi kayi raaz hai. Ek ye aur sahi. Kabhi na kabhi haath lag hi jaega.

Raghu : Par fir bhi...

Raghu kisi soch me pada hua tha. Uss din ki ghatna ko lekar hi. Wo waapas se jese sab kuch yaad karne laga.

Uss raat...

Jab wo Mister and mistress Bansal ko chorr waapas hotel aaya tha toh usse pata laga tha ki...

Jassi washroom me band tha.

Jassi ko churraate hi wo dono hi hotel ke baahar jab nikle the toh unki car par ek kaagaz chipka hua tha.

Ek note...

Jispar likha tha~

"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.
~ Tumhara Shubh chintak."
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Jordaar update bhai
Ab yeh kounsha letter bum phod Diya bhai shubhchintak ke rupe me

 

[Werewolf]

Pehle to so sorry bhai ki apke last update pr kuch bhi likh na payea pr maine ek baat note ki hai ki apne es update or last wale Mai story ko arohi ke nazaryie se dikhane pr kafi focus kiya hai kaise last update Mai bhi kahe to half update arohi ke nazaryie se likhi gayi or is baar bhi same thing hua but ye achaa hua ki arohi ko pranjal pr shaq to hua vivek pr bhi ho jaye to mast rahega

No worries bro. Take your time. Yes! Samay samay par alag alag logo ke zariye unke point of view se kahani dekhne ko milegi.

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf Bhai शानदार update था पर बार बार वीर का कमजोर पडना और बार बार उसका चोट खाना अच्छा नही लग रहा। वीर कहानी का हीरो है तो उसका शक्तिशाली होना लाजिम है पर यह पर इन लगातार हमलो से उसकी lovelife आगे ही नही बढ रही।

Wo kehte hai na...
Spiderman ka dialogue hai. With great powers comes great responsibility.
Issi me mein ek line aur add karna chahunga.
With great powers comes great responsibilities and wounds. Veer ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi hai.
Par don't worry, Famiglia arc jo ki next arc hai, wo arc uski love life, family affairs aur uske business par hi focused hai.

 

[Jelly fish]

Fantastic next update Ka intizar rhy ga

 

[Dobahua mafia]

Werewolf last part ki ending suspense was nice and also change in behaviour of pari and more like a human that question and not just a master slave relationship and becoming more Mutual.
400 point pada ha kuch karhi deta like special power by mystery box or direct purchase or skill upgrade.

 

[Nadeem440]

Amazing update bro maza a gya thanks

 

[Lib am]

Update - 54 ~ Schemes​

Ab tak...

Veer, keval usse bas dekhta raha jab...

*Ding*

[System has been activated.]

[Mission~ 'Rescue Kaera from the hideout.' has been completed.]

[400 Points have been rewarded.]

[Hmm!? Your heart rate is high... Something up!?]

Veer (sighs) : Kuch bhi nahi!!!

Ab aage...

Next day...

Kal ka din bada hi tiring tha, Veer ke liye bhi aur Ragini aur baaki sabhi ke liye bhi. Visitors pe visitors jo aa rahe the Veer se milne.

Jaha shuruaat hui thi Ragini se toh fir Suman aur Nidhi. Aur ye silsila fir chalta gaya jab tak ki Shreya ko na pata chal gaya. Bas fir kya tha? Khabar milte hi, Madam jii bhi aayi Juhi ko lekar aur ghanto tak dono ne Veer ke saath baate kii. Yaha tak ki Sonali aur Aabha bhi shaam ko milne pohuchi thi uss se.

Shaam ke waqt, Kavya ka phone aaya toh usse bhi iss baare me pata chala ki Veer khud hospital me admit hai. Aur isliye wo Dada jii ko dekhne nahi aa paaya. Ye khabar sunte hi uske poore parivaar me se keval Kavya khud aur Arohi hi usse dekhne ke liye aayi thi aaj.

Aur kayi saare sawaalo ke jawaab paane ke baad hi wo waapas gayi. Even Sonia aur Suhana ko bhi pata lag chuka tha.

Aur unn dono ne bhi ek baar usse hospital me zaroor visit kiya. Jaha Sonia uske liye 'get well soon' ka ek bouquet leke aayi thi toh wahi Suhana ekdum khaali haath thi aur upar se uspe taane maar rahi thi. Taane aise ki...

"Lag waali waat!?" "Kaha gaye the jo ye sab karwa baithe?"

Kherr! Ye sab toh upri dikhaawa tha uska. Suhana sab kuch jaanti thi. Wo jaanti thi ki Veer kaha gaya tha aur kis se bhidne gaya tha. Shayad iss baar wo uska raaz kholne ki koi nayi tarqeeb soch rahi thi.

Ab ye toh uski personality thi. Veer yaha bebas tha. Wo bas filhaal ke liye waqai araam karna chaahta tha. Kaafi bhaag daud jo ho chuki thi uski kuch haal hi me.

Aur aise hi samay aage badhta raha aur kuch din guzar chuke the. Veer waapas apne ghar aa chuka tha. Haath par abhi bhi ek patli patti bandhi hui thi uske. Recovery uski pehle ke muqaable tezz thi toh ye chot ubharne me zyaada samay nahi lagne wala tha.

Slogan shayad abhi ke liye underground ho chuka tha. Aur apni kisi nayi planning me tha. Par hairat ki baat jo thi wo ye thi ki abhi tak, Veer ko Kaera ki taraf se koi call ya koi visit karne nahi aaya tha.

Veer ne koshish kii thi contact karne ki, par koi fayda na hua.

Aaj Sunday ka din tha, shaam ka waqt aur Veer neeche hi lawn me baithe hue tha. Nigaahe toh saamne kyaari me lage unn phulo par thi par... mann hi mann wo apni Pari se baatein kar raha tha.

Hospital se aane ke baad se hi usne points ka kuch khaas use nahi kiya tha. Uske paas mission se mile 400 points aur pehle ke bache 40 points maujood the. Yaani ki total 440. Aur kal raat hi usne 40 points ka upyog kar liya tha.

Usne 20 points apne intelligence me daal diye the. Aur baaki ke 20 apni strength me. Uske stats ab kuch iss prakaar se the.

[Stats :
Strength - 66/100
Intelligence - 80/100
Agility - 50/100
Endurance - 50/100
Appearance - 50/100]

Par ab sawaal yahi tha uske mann me ki, baaki bache hue 400 points se woh skill khareede, stats me points lagaaye ya fir Quest Hunt me gamble kar ke Legendary card nikaale.

'Hey!'

[Hmm!?]

'Tumhe nahi lagta ki 400 points kam mile mujhe kuch?'

[Kam mile!? Tum bhul gaye kya? Mene kaha tha na ki system points ussi hisaab se deta hai jis hisaab se mission complete hua ho. You got your ass whooped there. Tumne Kaera ko indirectly bachaaya ek bali ka bakra bante hue. Aur ye kaho time rehte wo Raghu aa gaya. Yahi kaaran hai ki mission successful hua. Warna jis hisaab se mission complete hua tha, mere hisaab se toh 100 points bhi na milte. You got injured, that's why system gave you 400 points.]

'Well, still...'

[You have 400 points remaining. Kahi istemaal karne hai!?]

'I believe ki uss Slogan se meri mulaqaat firse honi hi hai. Ab jab wo Miss Kaera ke peeche hai. Mera aur uska saamna hona hi hai. And... I need to get stronger. Aatish se bhidne ke baad, I thought I had control. I could win. But... Aisa mehsoos hua tha uss din ki kitna chota hu mein abhi bhi unn logo ke saamne. I need to get stronger Pari. Aur wo bhi jaldi...'

[Yes! To become stronger you need more missions. But before that... Pehle samaaj me strong bano.]

'You mean...'

[Yes! Apna business establish karo.]

'Right! But uske liye mujhe investment chaahiye!'

[There's a way to easily solve everything. Ek plan hai. Kaho toh sunau!? Wese I know you won't follow this.]

'Hmm!? Ohh! Meri Pari ke paas plan bhi hai? Matlab chapar chapar karne ke alawa bhi wo kuch aur kar sakti hai!? Haan?'

[Y-You...!! What the...? Don't make it sound like I am stupid. Mera intelligence alag level pe hai you see!?]

'Alright! Hum definitely fir ye plan nahi sunn'ne waale.'

[Wh-What!?? Y-You!!! Wait! How can you..? At least suno toh...]

'Ahh! Fine then. Bina bole tum rehne nahi waali. Tell me!'

[Ahem!!! See! Ask a huge amount of money from Kaera, Sonia or Suhana. Uss money ko use karo to solve Nidhi's problem. Complete missions and get stronger. Then bache hue paise apne business me lagao. Take help from Kaera in business. Later, jab tumhara business successful ho jaaye then return their money with interest. That's it! Kesa hai?]

'Yup! Fabulous! Now Go to sleep mode!'

[Wh-Whaaattt!? Wait!!! Itna accha toh hai plan! There's nothing wrong in it. Itna sateek aur simple plan bata rahi hu tumhe aur tum ho ki... Ughh! I hate you so much! Hmph!]

'Woah! Really now!? Love se hate pe kab aa gayi tum? Pehle toh bada kehti thi. Ohh master, I lubh you soo muccchhhh! Huh!? Ab kya hua?'

[Hmph!!!]

'Now now... Listen! Tumhare plan me flaws hai. It's not practical.'

[What!? Kya galat hai isme?]

'I cannot take money from them. Khaaskar ki udhaari. Mein ye bilkul nahi kar sakta. Aur kyu lu unse mein itna bada amount? Aur wo kya lagte hai mere, mujhe itna bada amount dene waale? Miss Sonia keval meri ek friend ki tarah hai. Unke aur mere beech boht bada gap hai Pari.'

[B-But yadi tum maangoge toh...]

'Yaha mere apno ne ghar se nikaal diya. Aur tum expect kar rahi ho ki baahar ka aadmi mujhe laakho rupaye invest karne dega? Mein jo already unemployed hu aur apni Bhabhi ke ghar me reh raha hu!?'

[But she can really...]

'I know wo mujhe de dengi paise. But unke mann me kayi sawaal zaroor rahenge paise dene se pehle. It's not right to ask her.'

[Th-Then how about Kaera? Wo toh zaroor...]

'Nahi! Wo pehle hi itna kuch jhel rahi hai. Also, She's broken. I just don't want to ask anything from her. Aur unke aur mere beech me gap toh naapa bhi nahi jaa sakta. She's far greater than me. No comparison Pari!'

[Then Suhana!? Surely, wo toh...]

'Already 3 favour poore karne ka promise de chuka hu usse. Jisse wo obviously samay aane par maangegi. Also, She's definitely plotting something. I can sense it.'

[...]

'Aur issi ke saath, tumhaare saare options khatam hue aur plan flop.'

[B-But...]

'Pari! You don't understand! Nidhi Ma'am ki problem mein apne paiso se solve karunga. Don't worry! I know ki time limit hai. Ab iss baare me koi charcha nahi. Okay?'

[Hmph...!]

'Let's go!'

[Wh-Where...!?]

Veer apni jagah se utha aur andar jaa kar usne upar se ek jacket daali.

Veer : Bhabhi!!!

Ragini (andar kitchen se) : Haan Veer!?

Veer : Dada jii se milne jaa raha hu. Thodi derr me aa jaunga.

Veer ke itna kehte hi Ragini kuch seconds me hi kitchen se baahar nikal kar aayi.

Ragini : Ghar jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Hmm! Dada jii ghar laut aaye hai. Mein admit tha toh uss wajah se milne nahi jaa paaya.

Ragini : Par tumhara haath abhi bhi sahi nahi hai. Tum bike nahi chalaoge.

Ragini ko saari baatein Veer bata chuka tha. Usne ye sab bataya tha ki wo Kaera ko bachaane gaya tha aur kuch gundo ne uss par hamla kar diya tha. Usne Slogan ya uss se related koi bhi baat Ragini ko nahi bataayi thi.

Veer : Don't worry mein...

Ragini : Mene kaha na, tum bike se nahi jaoge.

Veer (sighs) : Accha baba! Mein taxi ya auto se chala jaunga. Ab toh jaa sakta hu na!?

Ragini (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Kya aap...!?

Ragini : Dada jii ko mein bhi dekhna chaahti hu. Par...

Veer : Take your time.

Ragini : Hmm~

Aur Veer Ragini ki baat maan kar bike ko chorr auto se hi apne ghar ki orr nikal pada.

Uske mann me uthal puthal sii machi hui thi. Aneko sawaalo se ghira hua tha woh. Kya hoga jab uske gharwaale usse dekhenge!? Kesa react karenge woh? Kya unn aankho me firse usse nafrat dekhne ko milegi? Jo bhi hone waala tha, Veer iss baar sab ke liye prepared tha.

Wo pehle ki tarah nahi tha jaha wo bheegi billi ban ke darr jaaya karta tha. Eeet ka jawaab patthar se dena aata tha ab usse.

Auto waale ko paise dene ke baad jaise hi wo utra, uske saamne wahi puraana aur jaana pehchaana bangla maujood tha. Jaha se kabhi usse dhakke maarke nikaala gaya tha.

Emotions toh kayi saare beh rahe the uske andar iss samay. Par unhe control kar wo aage badha.

Aur baahar maujood security guards usse dekhte hi wahi rukk gaye. Dono hi security guards ne kuch na kaha. Veer ek nazar dono par daalte hue andar ki orr jaane laga.

Andar mini hall me dastak dete hi usse kuch familiar sa mehsoos hua. Yahi toh wo jagah thi na? Jidhar uss din wo vase rakha hua tha aur Veer utha ke andar le gaya tha, jo baad me fisalne ke kaaran toot gaya tha?

Unn Kadvi yaado ko bhul wo ek baar fir aage badha aur main hall me enter kiya. Andar aate hi usse koi bhi na dikhaayi diya.

Itna bada hall par baithne waala koi nahi. Ekdum soona soona sa tha sab.

Aur fir tabhi andar ke ek kamre se ek bada hi parichit sa chehra uski aankho ke saamne aaya.

Uski sauteli Maa!

Shweta!

Shweta bhi Veer ko dekh pehle toh chaunk gayi. Ek pal ke liye usse abhaas hi nahi hua ki ye Veer hai. Akhir pehle se kayi guna smart dikhne laga tha ab woh. Aur jab usse samajh me aaya toh wo hairat ke maare usse ghur ke dekhne lagi.

Shweta : T-Tum!???

Veer ne na hi koi jawaab diya aur na hi koi reaction. Wo bas chup chaap khada Shweta ko dekhta raha.

Shweta : Tum yaha!? Kya kaam hai!?

Shweta ki baat sunn Veer ko mann hi mann hassi aa gayi. Batao! Uske hi ghar me uss se ye pucha jaa raha tha ki wo yaha kya kar raha hai. Kitni ajeeb aur dukhad baat thi ye.

Shweta kuch aur keh paati ki uske pehle hi Arohi seedhiyo se neeche aa pohuchi.

Arohi (surprised) : Veer!

Veer : *smiles*

Arohi (smiles) : Dada jii tumhe dekh kar boht khush ho jaenge. Waha kya khade ho. Come! Jaldi aao!

Aur Arohi aage badh uska haath thaam kar usse andar ki orr le jaane lagi.

Shweta : Huh!? P-Par...

Bechari shweta keval saamne sab kuch hota dekhte hi reh gayi. Kuch keh hi nahi paayi. Aur ant me wo khud unn dono ke peeche peeche chal dii.

Manorath andar bistar par hi lete hue araam farma rahe the aur Kavya unke liye peene ke liye gunguna paani laayi hui thi.

Kavya : Ye lijiye Dada jii! Aapka gunguna paani.

Manorath : Dhanyawad beti! Bas! Ab tum jao.

Kavya : Kyu jau? Kya mein idhar nahi baith sakti?

Manorath : Arre beta! Tumhe bhi toh kaam honge na? Idhar rahogi toh boriyat hi hoegi aur...

Kavya : Kuch boriyat nahi hoegi Dada jii! Kuch derr yahi baithungi mein. Aur aapko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh bas bol dena. Hehe~

Manorath : Meri poti kitni samajhdaar hai.

Kavya : Wo toh mein hu hi...

*Creak*

Inki baat samaapt hote hi, kamre ka darwaaza khula aur Veer ka haath thaame Arohi aur Veer dono hi andar enter kiye.

Veer ne apne Dada jii ko dekha aur unki haalat dekhte hi uski bauhe sikud baithi.

Kitne kamzor nazar aa rahe the woh pehle ke muqaable. Unka dhaacha bhi kuch patla sa ho chuka tha. Rang bhi kaala tha pehle ke prati. Ye parinaam tha accident ka. Theek se khana na khana, vyayaam na karna, subah ki dhoop na lena. Unki saari aadato par jese rok sii lag gayi thi. Aur uska nateeja saamne tha.

Unka girta hua swaasth.

Manorath ne jese hi Veer ko dekha toh unki aankho me achanak hi jaise chamak sii aa gayi.

Manorath : Veeeerrr!!

Kehte hue wo uthne ko hue toh Veer ne aage badh unhe waapas lita diya.

"Bhaiyaaaaaa!!!!"

Aur idhar Kavya Veer ko achanak dekh uske gale se lipat gayi. Bagal me khadi Arohi muskuraa kar dono ko dekh rahi thi.

'This is the real family...' sochte hue wo wahi ek chair par baith gayi.

Veer : Kesi hai aapki tabiyat Dada jii!

Manorath : Mera Pota... Veer! Aa gaya tu...

Unhone Veer ka haath thaama aur usse apne bistar par hi baitha liya. Veer dekh paa raha tha ki uske Dada jii ki aankho me se aasu behna shuru ho chuke the.

Veer : Jii! Pehle milne na aa saka. Mein hospital me admit tha.

Manorath : Aur mein bhi mere bacche. Kya ho gaya tha tujhe? Kese? Kab hua ye sab.

Veer (smiles) : Lambi kahani hai. Fir kabhi...

Arohi : Tum... Tum bike se aaye ho kya? Tumhara haath toh chotil hai na? Fir kese...!?

Kavya : Ah! Right! Bhaiya aap kese...?

Veer : Chill! Mein auto se aaya hu.

Kavya : Ohh! Haan ye sahi kiya. Good!

Veer : Toh Dada jii? Aapki sehat ka khayaal rakh rahe hai sabhi lagta hai.

Manorath (smiles) : Sabse zyaada toh Pranjal aur Kavya hi mera khayaal rakh rahi hai beta.

Veer : Ohhh! Kavya bacchi zaroor hai par hai badi hi mehnati.

Veer ne kehte hue Kavya ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferra toh Kavya bhi khil khila uthi.

Kavya : Ehehehehe~

Par jese usse Veer ke bol kuch sahi na lage.

Kavya : Huh? Wait! Aapne kya kaha mujhe? Bacchi!?? Bhaiyaaaaaaa...

"Mera pyaara bhaaaaiiiiii!!!!!"

Kavya apni baat poori rakh paati ki tabhi peeche se ek aur jaani pechaani sii awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi. Iss awaaz se toh Veer hamesha parichit rahega. Kabhi bhul nahi sakta woh.

Apne haath felaaye, Pranjal kamre me enter hua aur Veer ke paas aate hi zorr se uske gale se lag baitha.

Pranjal : Ohhh mere bhai!!! Mere chote bhaaaiii! Kitne dino baad tumhe dekh raha hu. Mujhe behad khushi hai ki tum yaha aaye. Mein toh soch hi raha tha ki kisi din tumhe yaha le aau.

Veer : ....

Pranjal uske gale se zaroor laga hua tha. Par Veer jaanta tha. Jaanta tha ki uska ye bhai Pranjal aasteen ka wo saanp tha jo badi hi chaturayi se dassta tha.

Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal ka zaroor koi naya dikhaava tha.

'Do all what you want brother! My eyes... can see through your actions everytime.'

[True that...]

Arohi ne mandir ki saari baatein Veer ko bataayi hui thi. Aur Veer ko pata nahi kyu par sabse zyaada shaq Pranjal par hi jaa raha tha. Akhir Pranjal hi toh tha jisne Veer ko nikalwaaya tha aur Ajay se pitwaaya tha.

Veer ka intelligence already 80 par tha. Usse baatein itni khul kar iske pehle kabhi nahi samajh me aayi thi jitni ab aa rahi thi.

Pranjal : Ohhh bhai! Tumhe kitna miss kiya mene. Tumne accha kiya yaha aakar.

Arohi : Ohh really? I dont think ki tum itne bhi zyaada close the Veer se kabhi...!

Pranjal : C'mon dii! Wo kehte hai na, aapko uss cheez ka ehsaas tab hi hota hai jab aap usse kho do. Veer ke jaane ke baad ghar kitna suuna ho gaya hai. Aur mujhe pata laga ki bina Veer ke... Mein toh reh hi nahi sakta. Haa maana ki usse aaye din daant padti rehti thi par mein hamesha hi usse bachaane ka prayaas karta tha Dii...

Arohi : *frowns*

[This bastard...]

Veer : *smiles*

Pranjal : Dekha Dada jii! Devi jii ke mandir se aane ke baad hi khushiya jese shuru ho gayi hamaare ghar me aana. Dekhiye na! Veer bhi aaya aaj aap se milne. Wo din dur nahi jab Veer ko khud Tau jii apne haatho se pakad ke le aaenge waapas.

Manorath (smiles) : Aaj mein behad khush hu beta.

Pranjal : Mera bhai ab aa gaya hai. Ab mein aaj hi Tau jii se baat karunga. Unhe manaunga...

Kehte hue usne Veer ke haath par ek thapki dii. Par ye wahi haath tha jo uska chotil tha.

Veer : Ahhh!

Pranjal : Arre!? K-Kya hua bhai!

Arohi : Kya kar rahe hooo!???? Usse chot lagi hai na. Idiot!

Pranjal : Ohh! So sorry mere bhai! M-Mujhe waqai koi dhyaan nahi tha. Dekho toh... Dada jii ke chalte tumse milne tak na aa paaya.

Manorath : Kaha? Kaha lagi hai Veer ko chot... Beta! Mujhe dikhao.

Veer : It's... It's okay! Dada jii kuch nahi hai. Halki sii thi chot. Chinta mat kariye. Theek ho jaegi.

Manorath : Nahi! Mujhe dikhao beta. Tabhi mere mann ko shaanti pohuchegi.

Aur Dada jii ki baat rakhne ke liye akhir Veer ko apni jacket utaarni hi padi. Usne savdhaani se jacket utaari toh haatho me bandhi hui pattiya unn sabhi ko nazar aayi.

Pranjal : Hey bhagwaan! Itne dino ke baad bhi abhi ye bandhi hui hai. Toh sochiye zara Dada jii ki chot ke waqt kya haalat rahi hogi Veer ki...

Manorath : Veer!??? Itni zyaada chot... Poora haath bandha hai tumhara.

Veer : Pattiya bandhi hai Dada jii. Andar se sab theek hai ab. Chinta ki koi baat nahi.

*Creak*

Aur ek baar fir darwaaza khula. Iss baar andar aane waale do shaks the.

Ek toh thi Shweta.

Aur dusri thi...

Uski beti, Bhumika jo abhi abhi apni Hotel se aayi thi.

Manorath : Bahu! Dekho... Kaun aaya hai.

Shweta : *smiles*

Keval ek jhoothi sii muskaan dete hue Shweta aage badh Veer ke nazdeek aayi.

Shweta : Ab kesi hai tabiyat aapki Dada jii!?

Manorath : Mera pota aaya hai. Toh uske Dada jii toh behtar hi mehsoos karenge na?

Bhumika ki nazar jab Veer se mili toh ek pal ke liye wo kaafi surprised reh gayi. Aur fir agle hi pal usne apni nazre Veer se chura ke ferr lii.

Kuch samay guzra. Aur sabhi ke sabhi log Dada jii ke kamre me hi baithe hue the aur baatein kar rahe the.

Shweta, Pranjal baahar se toh aisa hi dikha rahe the jese wo Veer ke aane se khush the. Par andar hi andar na jaane kya kya baatein umad rahi thi unke mann me.

Wahi Bhumika keval Veer ko dekhti aur nazre aapas me milte hi khud idhar udhar dekhne lagti.

Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo mann me.

Karunesh aur Brijesh dono hi ghar par nahi the. Aur Vivek bhi. Yahi kaaran tha shayad jiske chalte aaj Veer shaanti se kam se kam apne Dada jii se mil paa raha tha.

Jab jaane ka samay hua toh Veer unn sab se vida leke baahar jaane laga.

Manorath ne manaaya ki wo kahi na jaaye aur unke saath hi ruke. Par Veer ne apne Dada jii ko jese tese manaaya aur baahar aa gaya.

Kavya aur Arohi toh baahar usse chorrne aayi hi thi. Par sabse surprising ye tha ki unke bagal se Bhumika bhi khadi hui thi.

Veer : Chalta hu.

Arohi : Hmm~

Kavya : Bhaiya yu aate rehna.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm~

Veer ne ek antim nazar Bhumika par daali aur palat ke wo jaane laga.

Kavya aur Arohi dono hi andar jaane lagi. Par Bhumika jese kisi cheez ka wait kar rahi thi.

Veer kuch kadam dur jaa chuka tha aur idhar Kavya aur Arohi ke andar jaate hi Bhumika aage ki orr bhaagi.

Bhumika : W-Waitttt!!

Wo chillaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath bhaagti hui wo Veer ke paas aayi.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : Wo... Wo...

Veer : !??

Bhumika : Umm... I... H-How are you? I mean... Tumhari chot... Ab kaisi hai?

Veer ne ek jhalak apne haath par daali jisme patti bandhi hui thi aur fir Bhumika ko dekh usne ek feeki sii smile dii. Usne apne kandhe se jacket utaari aur usse pehn kar apni chot ko chhupa liya.

Wo palta aur aage badhne se pehle usne sirf itna hi kaha.

Veer : Wo kehte hai na... Talwaar se diye gaye zakhm ek baar fir bhi bhar jaate hai. Par kuch kahe gaye shabdo ke zakhm kabhi nahi bharte.

Aur bas, unn alfaazo ko rakh wo aage badh gaya.

Bhumika keval usse andhere me jaata hua dekhti rahi jab tak ki Veer uski aankho se ojhal na ho gaya.

Apna nichla honth daato tale dabaaye uska sarr guilt ke maare jhuk gaya.

Veer usse yaad dila raha tha.

Veer ke shabdo ka matlab ek hi tha. Wo ishaara kar raha tha.

Wo pal, jab Bhumika ne uske saamne hotel me ye kaha tha.

'I... I don't know him.'

Yahi shabd toh kahe the usne Sonia ke saamne Veer ke liye. Aur uske baad se hi wo guilt mehsoos kar rahi thi. Aur aaj Veer ke unn shabdo ne jese uske andar guilt ka baandh tod diya tha.

Aasu tapkaate hue wo waha se seedha andar apne ghar me bhaag gayi.

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Mumbai...
******** Villa...

"Come in!!!"

Ek behad hi bade se villa me ek kamre ke andar se ye awaaz aayi.

Awaaz bhaari thi. Zaahir ek mard kii.

Aur kamre ke baahar ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki khadi hui thi. Par wo kuch sehmi sii thi.

Aur ye koi aur nahi, Kaera hi thi.

"Y-Yes Father!"

Apne aap me hi dheere se bol wo gate khol ke andar uss kamre me chali gayi.

Ussi villa me neeche ke floor par Raghu ek kamre me maujood tha aur paav par paav rakhe leta hua tha.

"Kya hua? Abhi bhi uss baare me soch raha hai?"

Kehte hue Jassi washroom se baahar nikla.

Raghu : Hmm~

Jassi : Tension mat le. Wese hi kayi raaz hai. Ek ye aur sahi. Kabhi na kabhi haath lag hi jaega.

Raghu : Par fir bhi...

Raghu kisi soch me pada hua tha. Uss din ki ghatna ko lekar hi. Wo waapas se jese sab kuch yaad karne laga.

Uss raat...

Jab wo Mister and mistress Bansal ko chorr waapas hotel aaya tha toh usse pata laga tha ki...

Jassi washroom me band tha.

Jassi ko churraate hi wo dono hi hotel ke baahar jab nikle the toh unki car par ek kaagaz chipka hua tha.

Ek note...

Jispar likha tha~

"Apni Miss ko bachaana hai toh xxxxxx Hideout jao. Address - xxxxxxxx road. Left hand side.
~ Tumhara Shubh chintak."
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!!

Ye Pranjal aur Vivek ka asli roop jaldi hi sabke saamne aana chahiye. Ye Pari kuch jayada hi badi mystery hoti jaa rahi hai. Ab to dadaj8 ko vasiyat veer ke hi naam kar deni chahiye jisse wo apna business bhi start kar sake aur Nidhi ki help bhi. Interesting update.

 

[Werewolf]

Aarohi ke POV se shuru hua tha Update 51 darshata hai ke Aarohi ka role kaafi important hoga aane waale waqt mein...

Kayi aur bhi logo ke POVs aage dekhne ko milenge.

Ab tak ki huyi sabhi ghatnao se to yahi lagta hai ke Aarohi hi Vivek & Pranjal ke iss ghinone kaand ki pole kholegi.

Maybe!? Or maybe not!?

Abhi tak usse doubt hona bhi shuru ho chuka hai ke Manorath aese hi nahi seedhiyon se gir gaya th

I mean she saw it. Aur Manorath ne bhi bata diya ki peeche koi nahi tha. Hence, the doubt.

Usne wheel chair ko check kiya to paaya ke uska ek pahiya misplaced tha... Khair, abhi ke liye Aarohi kuchh zyada nahi jaan paayi hai iss sabke baare mein but she seems to be very intelligent... Uske thoughts zaahir karte hain ke usse zyada derr andhere mein nahi rakha jaa sakta... Jald hi wo iss maamle ko khangalegi aur accident ke pichhe chhippe asli tathyon ko baahar laayegi...

Yes! She's intelligent. Aise hi class ki toppers me se ek nahi hai woh. Ye lo, ek aur fun fact aa gaya kahani ka saamne.

Wahin Pranjal/Vivek ki chaal ka pehla hissa saamne aaya... Robotics ki sahayta se unhone wo accident kiya... Wheel Chair ke ek tyre ko Robotics ki help se remote controlled bana diya gaya tha aur ussi remote ke kaaran wo wheel chair seedhiyon se giri... Ab saaf ho chuka hai ke ye poora plan kameene brothers ka hai jiske zariye wo poori jaaydad hadapna chahte hain par abhi tak inke plan ka pehla hi charan poora hua hai doosra abhi baaki hai... Wahin ye bhi saaf ho gaya ke ye dono kameene Manorath ko tapkana nahi chahte the, inka lakshya maatra usse seedhiyon se girana hi tha kyonki Manorath ke hosh mein aane ki khabar ke baad bhi Vivek ek dum normal hi tha...

Yes! Unka maqsad Dada jii ko keval

By the Way Werewolf
bhai ye Pranjal ko zara achhe se sabak sikhana... Pehle to mujhe iska naam hi pasand nahi aaya aur oopar se

Ab baat karen Ragini aur Nidhi ki to... Nidhi seedhe Ragini ke ghar pahunch gayi aur Ragini ki kartavya nishtha par bhi sawaal khade kar diye... Veer ka uss waqt ghar par naa hona aur Ragini ka iss baat se anjaam hona ke Veer kahaan hai Nidhi ko majboor kar gaya apne shabdon se bhatakne par... Aur shayad kuchh zyada hi bol gayi wo wahaan par jiska ehsaas usse swayam bhi ho gaya... Haalanki Ragini bhi uske shabdon par hairaan huyi par baad mein wo ye jaankar khush bhi ho gayi ki koyi to hai jo Veer ki care karta hai... Nidhi ka wahaan jaane ka main motive yahi tha ke Veer apni padhayi na chhode aur Ragini bhi iss baat se sehmat thi... Ab dekhna hoga ke kya Veer College jaana firse start karega ya nahi aur agar karega to aur kaunsi musibatein aayengi uski dagar mein... By the way Nidhi ka Veer ko lekar yun Chintit hona, Ragini par yun sawaal daagna... Ye Pyaar nahi to Aur kya hai Suman, I mean Nidhi...

Beshaq! Yahi toh pyaar hai.

Ab baat karte hain Slogan urf Sanjeev ki... Usse kisine pehle hi bata diya tha ke Veer Kaera ko bachane aayega aur Slogan uske swagat ki poori taiyari karke baitha tha... Aur usse ek Phone bhi aaya issi baat ko lekar aur gusse mein Slogan Dada ne apna phone hi patak diya... Matlab wo gussa tha uss aadmi ke phone aane par... Aur ye saala hai kaun jo Veer ki movements ki khabar pehle hi Slogan tak pahuncha de raha hai... Is raaz par se bhi jaldi se parda uthao Writer Saahab...

Ye raaz filhaal toh saamne nahi aane waala. Abhi time hai isme.

Wahin Slogan ko finally Check kar paaya Veer aur lage ke ab wo Kaera ko bhi Check kar paayega... But Slogan ki *Check* window mein uski favourability nahi darshayi gayi iska kya kaaran hai... Ye aap bhool gaye Writer saahab ya koyi aur baat hai

Yadi bhul gaya hota toh edit karke sudhaar deta. Nope! Kaaran yahi hai ki System update toh hua but achanak se itna badi personality ko check kar wo poori details check nahi kar paya. Yahi kaaran hai ki uska bio bhi itna chota tha. Yadi Veer usse ek baar aur check karta toh no doubt usse aur accha result saamne milta. With favourability. Check is like a scanner. Jese hum phones me payment ke time use karte hai. Aur kabhi kabhi wo scan nahi ho paata. It's just like that.

Kaera ke haathon se hi Veer ke haath mein chaaku ghonp diya wo bhi ek baar nahi balki kayi baar... Wo to bhala ho bone reaper ka jo Veer ki haddiyan bach gayi haath ki warna ho gaya tha kalyan... Khair, ant mein Raghu aur Jassi wahaan pahunch gaye aur apne aadmiyon ke saath milkar Kaera ko bacha liya...

He stabbed Veer twice.

Kaera bhi Veer ko lekar hospital jaana chahti thi par apne Dad ke bulave par usse waapis lautna pada... Khair ye bhi pata chala ke ek achhe khaase plan ke saath Kaera ko kidnap kiya gaya tha jiske zariye Raghu aur Jassi ko Kaera se door kar diya gaya tha... Par ab ye sab dekh kar saaf ho gaya hai ke Kaera koyi chhoti moti party nahi hai, she's much more bigger than what I expected her to be... Aur lagta hai ke Veer ko business set-up karne mein bhi Kaera help kar sakti hai.

Oh hohoho.... you'll come to know soon what she is. Jab Slogan bataega ki wo kyu bhaaga tha.

Meanwhile, Ye bhi pata chala ke Slogan urf Sanjeev ka lakshya Kaera ki maut hai... Ye bhi ek bada suprise tha kyonki mujhe laga tha ke Kaera ki property aur paise aur business ke kaaran hi Slogan uske pichhe hai but he wants her dead, Reason abhi tak saamne nahi aaya hai par I'm sure ke koyi bada hi reason hoga iss sabka... Ab intezaar rahega Slogan aur Kaera ki iss guthhi ke sulajhne ka...

Ye gutthi Slogan arc ke end me suljhegi.

Ant mein Veer ke Hospital Bed ke saamne teen aurten khadi thi... Aurten matlab Shaadi shuda hongi... Hmmm, Ragini, Suman aur Nidhi hain kya??Kyonki Suhana to kya hi aayegi abhi yahaan... It'll be interesting to see how the conversation pans out between Veer & Nidhi... Wahin Ragini ka kya reaction hoga Veer ki iss haalat par dekhna rochak rahega...

Veer aur nidhi ke beech ka conversation already posted in update 53.

Wahin Veer ne Update – 52 mein Pari ko achhe se suna bhi diya... Aur Veer ka kehna sahi hai ki Pari ka behaviour har level ke baad change hota hai hai... Iss mudde par zyada kuchh nahi bas ek hi baat kahunga, Let's wait & watch...

Yep! Pari is the ultimate secret.

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Slogan ka agla kadam kya hoga iss plan ke fail hone ke baad... Uske nishaane par ek baar firse Veer hoga ya nahi... Abhi usse Aatish ki maut ka hisaab bhi lena hai Veer se... Wahin Kaera kya karegi ab?? Veer usse bachane wahaan pahuncha lekin usse iss sabke baare mein pata kaise chala... Ye sawaal hoga hi Kaera ke mann mein aur Veer ki haalat dekh kar Kaera ki aankhon mein aansoon aa gaye means she got emotional... Fuckkkk... She can feel, at least she felt for Veer... Veer & Kaera Be like – ... In dono ke beech kya baat hogi ye dekhna bhi exciting hoga...

She did felt something.

Wahin Aarohi ka agla kadam kya hoga, kya usse Pranjal aur Vivek ke iraadon ka pata chalega... Aur Veer ka hospital mein naa aana Kavya aur Aarohi ke mann mein kya sawal khada karega ye bhi dekhna hoga... Idhar Dono kameene brothers ka aage ka plan kya hai ye bhi ek sawaal hai...

Jald pata lagega.

At last, Nidhi aur Veer ke beech kya baatein hogi aage... Inki baatein waise to aankhon mein hi ho jaati hain kyonki jo lafzon mein ho wo baat hi kya...

Kya khoob kaha hai...

Dono hi update behad khoobsurat the Werewolf bhai... Slogan ki darindagi ka ek chhota sa namoona dekhne ko mila hume... Wahin Aarohi ke POV se chala scene bhi kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Suspense chaaron taraf se barabar bana hi hua hai chahe wo Kaera – Slogan ka mudda ho ya Vivek – Pranjal ya fir sabse bada suspense Pari ka... Lekin har suspense ko badi achhi tarah prastut kar rahe hain aap aur Kahani mein kahin bhi boriyat nahi ho rahi... Yahi as a writer aapki kaabiliyat ko darshaata hai... So, Bas yahi kahunga ke bas issi tarah likhte rahiye aur apne Lekhan ke jaadu se hum sabka Manoranjan karte rahiye ...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai! I know mein reply karne me late hu. Ghar me renovation chal raha hai so...
Anyways! Itne tabadtod aur bade review ke liye dil se shukriya.
Aise hi bane rahiyega.

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai Bhai