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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Vro ! Please 11 bje ke lagbhag update de dena. Baad me adhi nind me padne me utna mja nhi ata
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Update : 62 ~ Mirror Gallery (2)
Ab tak...
Kyuki tabhi usse smoke me hi neeche zameen ke side kuch harqat hoti hui nazar aayi. Maano jaise kayi saare perr chalte hue aa rahe the.
Aur ye dekhte hi uske shareer ke baal khade ho gaye.
Kaera ko usne forun hi apne peeche kiya aur uske saamne uski shield bann ke khada ho gaya.
[Be prepared! Kuch gadbad hai. I think they are people.]
'Let them come...!'
Ab aage...
Veer Kaera ko apne peeche kiye uski hifazat karne ke liye khada hua tha.
Aur, dhua tha jo hatne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.
Kaera kehna toh hazaar shabd chaahti thi par Veer ki mazboot pakad apni kalaayi par mehsoos kar aur ye dekh ki wo kitna serious tha wo chup reh gayi.
Veer idhar khamosh zaroor tha par uska dimaag nirantar chale jaa raha tha. Kareeb aate hue perro ko dekh usne forun hi unhe check kiya.
'Check!'
[Hired goons.
Bio : Goons hired from local area. They are here for Kaera.]
Aur bas, ye padh ab use 100% vishvas ho gaya tha ki ye sab kuch Kaera ke liye hi rachaaya gaya tha.
[Kaera ko thoda sa peeche karo. Don't let her get involved in the fight.]
'Yeah!'
Aur, Pari ki baat maan, Veer ne Kaera ko thoda apne peeche ki orr kar diya. Uski kalaayi chorr ke wo aur aage aaya.
Beshaq, jese hi wo aage badha saamne se aa rahe log aur tezi se uski orr aage badhe aur...
[Here they come!]
Saamne se sabse pehle ek aadmi bhaagte hue uss dhue me se aaya aur aate hi usne ek tezz tarraar ghusa seedha Veer ke muh pe maarne ki koshish ki.
Par, Veer pehle ki tarah nahi tha. Ek pal me hi uski aankhein fel gayi jaise maano wo fighting mode me aa gaya ho aur usne turant hi apna sarr side kar liya.
*Whoooossshhhh*
Uske kaan ke bagal se wo ghusa nikla toh Veer ko uski hawa mehsoos hui. Aur wo ye bata sakta tha ki aadmi ne apna haath kitni zorr se chalaaya tha.
Par, Veer akhir Veer tha. Sambhalne ka koi samay nahi dene waala tha wo apni enemies ko.
Agle hi pal usne apne right hand se uss aadmi ka wahi haath thaama aur apne dusre haath ki fist se seedha uss aadmi ke gaal par punch kiya.
*Pooowwwwww*
"Ughhhh!!!" Wo aadmi Veer ke haatho punch khaate hi peeche bagal me jaa gira. Veer ke reflexes fast the. Aadmi ko samajh me hi nahi aaya ki kab Veer ne uska haath thaam use maar bhi diya.
Uske girte hi baaki aadmi Veer ke kareeb aaye. Unme se dusre ne sabse pehle do baar apne ghuso se vaar kiya.
*Whooooossssshhhh*
*Dodge*
*Whoooossshhhhh*
*Dodge*
Hamle toh tez the, par Veer se tez nahi. Dono hi ghuso ko Veer ne left aur right lean kar ke unhe asaani se dodge kar liya tha. Jab uss aadmi ne apna teesra vaar karna chaaha toh...
"Wrong choice buddy!"
Veer ne use iss baar koi mauka nahi diya. Achanak hi wo tezi se uske ekdum kareeb aaya aur...
*Poooooowwwww*
Ek kamaal ki spinhook kick.
Jo seedha jaake uss dusre aadmi ke jabde par padi aur uske poore shareer ko hawa me uchhaal ke kisi lattu ki tarah ghumaate hue peeche fek dii.
"Damn!!! Haha~"
[That was a nice kick indeed.]
"Basic Martial arts skill waqai kamaal ki hai. Kitna kuch hai isme."
[Yes! But trust me, ab samay aa gaya hai ki tum intermediate level waali martial arts skill purchase karlo. Kyuki, I think tumne basic waali kaafi hadd tak master karli hai.]
'Yeah!!! Points milne ke baad.'
[200 points hai tumhaare paas.]
'They are for quest.'
[Y-You!!! Okay! Enough talking! Teesra banda aa raha hai. Careful! Haath me weapon hai uske shayad.]
'Yeah!'
Do bando ko giraane ke baad Veer Pari ki baat sunn teesre par focused ho gaya. Aur, Pari sahi thi.
Uss teesre bande ke haath me hathiyaar toh nahi par haan, uski mutthi par khatarnak knuckles zaroor the. Wo nukile knuckles pehne Veer ko maarne aaya.
Yaha par Veer ne samajhdari dikhate hue uske kuch deadly vaar dodge kiye. Kyuki, ek bhi baar agar wo nukile knuckles uske contact me aate toh nateeja fir saamne hota.
Chotil hona aur khoon ka behna. Savdhani baratna behtar tha yaha par.
Magar, Veer dodge kar nahi paa raha tha kyuki chautha banda bhi uss pe usi waqt toot pada.
Zaahir tha ki wo yaha 1 vs 1 nahi karne aaye the. Jab itni tadaad me aaye the toh saaf tha ki wo dhava bolne hi aaye the Veer pe.
Veer jese tese dodge kar raha tha aur unke attacks ko deflect kar raha tha. Kaera ko usne ekdum darwaaze ke paas khada kar diya tha jaha se wo dakhil hue the. Par, palat-vaar karne ka use sahi mauka aur jagah nahi mil rahi thi.
[Use your surroundings.]
'You mean...!?'
[Yes! Mirrors! Use them!]
'Ye mat kehna ki...'
[Of course~ Slam them into it.]
'Wait! Aise me...'
[What? Nuksaan hoyega? Don't you know ki ye sab kuch owner nahi karwa raha hai? Yaha ye illegal use ke liye khola gaya hai. Ab isme kya mirror todne ke baare me soch rahe ho tum? Just fucking slam them. Destroy it!]
'Alright!!!'
Pari ne jese Veer ki ek mushqil hal kar di. Aas paas lage sheesho ko todne me Veer thoda sankoch dikha raha tha. Kyuki, wo abhi poore niyantran me fight kar raha tha. Use apne aas paas ki sabhi cheezon ka dhyaan tha. Isliye, use thoda sa sankoch ho raha tha.
Lekin, Pari ne uski ye pareshani bhi dur kar di. Jab ye saara samaan owner ki permission ke bina use ho raha tha toh kyu nahi?
Aur, muskurate hue iss baar Veer ne uss knuckle waale bande ke attack ko jab dodge kiya toh wo fir ruka nahi. Usne dodge karte hi apni fist uske pait par maarni chaahi lekin...
*Dodge*
'Hmm?'
Wo banda Veer ke ghuse ko apne dono haatho se rok peeche ho gaya.
[He dodged it.]
Neeche pade unn do bando se alag tha shayad ye aadmi jo knuckles pehne hue tha. Fighting me ye unse behtar tha. Warna Veer ki fist yu nahi rok paata.
'I see!'
Sochte hue Veer next attack ke liye khud ko prepare kar raha tha jab chauthe bande ne achanak hi uspe ek lakdi se vaar kiya.
*Swoooossshhhh*
*Dodge*
'What the...!?'
Duck karte hue Veer uss hamle se bacha. Dhue me se achanak se wo lakdi uske muh par aayi thi seedhe. Agar, uske reflexes tez na hote toh aaj pakke se uska thobda gaya tha.
Aur, wo chautha banda maano jese pagal ho gaya tha.
"Haaaaaaa~" gusse me chillaate hue wo Veer ki taraf daud kahi bhi uss lakdi ko chalaaye jaa raha tha.
*Whooooshhhh*
*Swooooosssshhhh*
Kuch aisi awaaze aa rahi thi uske harr vaar se. Aur, hawa me maujood dhua, uske harr attack par chir jaata aur uski chhavi Veer ko dikhayi de jaati.
Veer multiple back hand spring maarte hue peeche ki orr gaya aur wo aadmi uski taraf bhaagne laga.
[Flick his toe.]
Pari ki awaaz kaan me padte hi Veer ne usi waqt jis waqt wo back hand spring maar raha tha tabhi apne dono perro ki bajaaye iss baar ek perr hi zameen par giraaya aur jhukte hue dusre perr se uss saamne aate hue aadmi ke perr ko flick kar diya.
Nateeja saamne tha. Perr par Veer ki laat padte hi wo aadmi apna santulan kho baitha aur dhadaam se neeche gira. Wo uth paata ki tabhi Veer uspe toot pada.
Uske haatho ko restrict karke Veer ne do zordar ghuse uske gaal par jade. Veer use aur dhota par jo knuckles waala banda tha wo apne saathi ko pitate dekh Veer ki taraf bhaagte hue aaya.
'This guy... Tch!'
[Isse jaldi thikaane lagao. He's a pain in the ass.]
'Yeah!!'
[Mirrors!]
'Hmm~ Samajh gaya!'
Pari ki hint milte hi Veer lapak pada uss bande par.
Iss aadmi se bhidna thoda thakan bhara tha kyuki wo bhi dodge karna jaanta tha magar, fir bhi Veer se behtar nahi.
Jab akhir me wo Veer ki pakad me aaya toh usi waqt uska khel khatam ho chuka tha.
Veer ke hontho par muskan thi. Kyuki-
"One inch punch!"
*Pooooooooooowwwwww*
"Aaarrghhhh!!!!!!"
Aur, wo knuckles pehna hua aadmi ek strong force ke saath ucchal ke baayi orr par lage sheesho me se ek seeshe me jaake bhid gaya.
*Craaaashhhhhhhh*
Hazaaro tukdo me wo sheesha toota aur uss aadmi ke saath hi wo kaanch ke tukde bikharte hue neeche idhar udhar fel gaye.
Kaera ekdum stabdh nazro se sab hota hua dekh rahi thi. Wo thoda sehmi hui bhi thi kyuki ye pehli baar tha jab wo aisi ladayi aankhon ke saamne ghatit hote dekh rahi thi.
Beshaq, usne pehle bhi kayi dafa trained logo ko ek dusre ke saath ladte hue dekha tha lekin, ye kuch alag tha. Yaha ladayi jaan lene ke liye ho rahi thi. Aur, har vaar ekdum asli aur chot pohuchane ke irade se kiya jaa raha tha.
Iss se pehle agar Kaera ne koi live fight dekhi thi toh woh tab hi thi jab Raghu use aur Veer ko bachaane aaya tha uss din.
Akhir kaar, saare aadmi neeche the. Keval 4 hi log se haath bhidha tha abhi Veer ka.
[I think there might be more.]
'Hmm!'
Pari ka yaha ye sochna galat nahi tha. Aisa bilkul mumkin tha ki aur bande bhi ho. Keval 4 logo ko toh bhejega nahi koi Kaera jaisi ladki ko kidnap karne ke liye.
Veer, Pari ki baat par dhyan dete hue soch hi raha tha jab achanak hi Pari zorr se uske mann me chillaayi.
[Get dooooowwwnnnn!!!!!!]
*Ducks*
Apne aap hi Veer ka shareer jhuk gaya. Maano jese Pari uski koi remote controller thi. Pari ke harr bol par Veer ke reflexes itne tez the ki Pari koi bhi nirdesh jese hi deti toh agle hi guzarte pal Veer ka shareer use follow kar deta.
*Whooooosssshhhh*
Uske jhukte hi koi cheez tezz raftaar se ekdum se guzri aur peeche jaake diwaar me khus gayi.
Veer ne jese hi palat ke dekha toh pal bhar ke liye uske raungte khade ho gaye.
Peeche ek badi si chhuri thi jo deewaar me khusi hui thi aur wo bhi Kaera ke sarr se bas kuch inch dur.
'Shit!!!'
[Marrte marrte bachi hai wo. Pay attention!]
Kaera ekdum sehmi hui wahi khadi thi. Usne apni jagah ek centimetre bhi nahi badli thi. Maano jese bhay se wahi jamm gayi thi woh.
Jisne bhi ye chaaku feki thi wo zahir taur pe koi honhar tha.
Kyuki, agar Veer jhuka nahi hota Pari ke kehne par toh wo chaaku seedha uske maathe me jaa kar ghusti.
Aur, uska wahi khaatma ho jaata.
[Be careful!]
'Hmm!'
Ab mahaul kuch tang sa ho gaya tha. Veer ki bauhe ab chinta ke maare sikud rahi thi. Saamne dhue ke peeche jo koi bhi tha woh neeche pade har aadmi se kahi zyaada anubhavi tha.
Ye baat usne apni chaaku fek ke hi saabit kar di thi.
[Remember! Mirrors are your friends!]
'Yeah! Got it!'
Apni shirt ko Veer ne ek-ek baar aur fold kiya aur aasteen ko aur upar chadhaya.
Uske baad usne ek martial art stance liya. Jaise kehna chaah raha ho ki 'Aao, mein taiyar hu.'
Saamne dhue me khada vyakti bhi shayad Veer ki baat samajh chuka tha.
Aur, bina koi samay gavaye wo tezi se Veer ki taraf aaya.
[He's fast!!!]
'Haan!'
*Whooooooossshhhh*
Ek ghoosa seedha Veer ki pasli ki taraf...
*Dodge*
Lekin shandar badan ko marodte hue Veer uss hamle se bacha.
*Whoooooossshhhh*
Iss baar ek laat aayi uski chhaathi par jo bahut tez thi.
'Shit!'
Apne dono haatho ko Veer ne 'X' aakaar banaate hue wo laat apne haatho par li aur uske force ke chalte peeche jaa gira.
[He's coming!!!]
Veer ke girte hi wo aadmi seedha hawa me udte hue ek aur kick maarte hue aaya.
*Craaaaashhhhhh*
Lekin, sahi samay par Veer ne neeche zameen par roll karte hue khud ko bachaya aur nateeja?
Wo aadmi waha lage unn kayi saare sheesho me se ek sheeshe me ghus gaya.
[G-Good! Attack him!]
Yahi sahi mauka tha. Jaha wo aadmi abhi sambhal kar unn sheesho ke tukdo ke beech uth raha tha toh Veer aage badha aur uss aadmi ki orr aaya.
Par, Veer ka ye plan ki wo uss aadmi ko yu hi pakad ke gira dega agle pal hi fail ho gaya.
Kyuki, girne ke turant baad hi wo apni chot ko chinta kiye bagerr hi uth ke khada ho chuka tha.
Veer ko apne qadam wahi thaamne pade.
[He's strong!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hote hue Veer ne usse check karna hi theek samjha.
'Check!'
*Ding*
[Name : Dexter
Age : 34
Bio : Dexter, ek trained assassin. Paiso ke liye hi ye apne sathiyo ke saath assassination missions par jaata hai. Yahi uska dhanda hai. Melee combat me tez hai. Agility me avval. Knife ki fights me uske dost use iska master bulaate hai.
Favourability : -60
Relationship : Enemies.]
'Shit!!!'
Sab kuch saamne tha. Saamne khade aadmi ka naam 'Dexter' tha aur wo koi local aadmi nahi balki ek skilled aur trained Assassin tha. Uska status hi sab kuch uski khubiyon ke baare me bayaa kar raha tha.
Ye toh pakke se musibat se bharpoor hone wala tha Veer ke liye.
[Favourability! It's minus 60.]
'Yeah! Ek assassin hone ke naate wo mujhe yaha maarne aaya hai. Toh, definitely itni toh rahegi hi.'
[Hmm! See! Wo knife me master hai according to his status. Aur, humne dekh hi liya ki usne kis tareeqe se wo knife tumhaari orr feki thi.]
'Yeah!'
[My point is... Melee combat me uske haath me knife mat aane do.]
'What if he has another one?'
[He has. Ek pocket knife zaroor hogi uske paas jese tumhare paas hai. Assassin hai woh. Now listen to me.]
'Jo bhi bolna hai jaldi bolo. Wo aane hi waala hai.'
[Right! Dekho! Ek assassin ki kamzori kya hoti hai?]
'What?'
[Wo tez hote hai, nimble hote hai, raftar se bharpoor ekdum. Unki haath ki safayi ka koi muqabla nahi hota lekin...]
'Lekin?'
[Lekin, wo utne taqatvar nahi hote.]
'You mean...!?'
[Yes! Tumhe bas do chaar tagde vaar karne hai uspe. Wo tez isliye rehte hai kyuki wo bodybuilder nahi hote. Jis kaaran se unka wazan kam hota hai ek bodybuilder ke muqable. Tabhi, toh assassin kehlate hai. Bas do se chaar strong hits weak region me maaro aur khel khatam. Trust me!]
'Alright! I'll try!'
Jis waqt Veer idhar apne mann me Pari se baat kar raha tha tab wo Dexter uth ke apne kapdo se sheeshe ke tukdo jhatkar raha tha. Jaise use vishvas tha ki wo yaha se jeet ke hi lautega, itne araam se khada hua tha.
Aur, khud ke shareer se kaanch ko hataane ke baad hi wo ek baar fir Veer ki taraf lapka.
*Whoooosssshhhh*
*Dodge*
Iss baar dono hi Veer aur Dexter poori tarah se bhid chuke the. Hatho se haath takra rahe the, aapas me mutthiya kassi hui thi, kohni se toh kahi perro se vaar kiye jaa rahe the.
Aur, harr guzarte pal dono hi kuch na kuch damage apne shareer par le rahe the.
Par, isi beech wo hua jis se Veer hairan bhi tha aur chintit bhi.
*Scraaaaaatttttchhhhhh*
'Aarrghhhh!!! Shittttt!!!'
Wo apne seene par haath lagaye jhuka. Aur...
*Drip*
*Drip*
*Drip*
Khoon ki laal laal boondein uske seene se gir rahi thi jaha kuch derr pehle hi Dexter ne apni churri se vaar kiya tha.
'When did he..!?'
[Uska strap...]
'Huh???'
Veer ko samajh me nahi aaya tha ki hathapayi ke waqt aakhir achanak se Dexter ke haatho me chhuri kese aa gayi?
[Uski t-shirt par strap bandha hua hai.]
'Shit! Iska matlab...'
[Yes! Ladte waqt hi usne apne seene par bandhe strap ko khola aur dhuye ka fayda utha ke tumhari nazar se bach ke wo knife haath me le kar tumhare chest par vaar kiya.]
'That bastard....!'
[Maine kaha tha na. Inki haath ki safayi boht hi skilled hoti hai. Upar se ye dhua. I think ki ye dhua uske advantage ke liye hi kiya gaya tha. Aur... Shit!!! Dodge that...]
Pari bolte bolte achanak hi ghabra gayi kyuki Dexter jo shaant khada tha wo ekdum se uss dhue me se daudta hua uski taraf aane laga.
Parantu, Pari ki warning thodi late thi.
'Huh?'
Jab tak Veer ne saamne dekha tab tak Dexter ki laat uski chaathi par lag chuki thi aur...
*Thud*
"Uggghhhhh!!!"
Karahte hue Veer hawa me peeche ki orr gira.
Aur, jaake...
*Thud*
*Thud*
Kaera ke bagal se entrance waali deewaar par jaa bhida.
"Veeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!"
Kaera bechaari ghabraate hue cheenkhi aur usne forun hi apne ghutno ke bal baithate hue Veer ko thaama.
Par, agle pal hi wo jaise jhep si gayi. Uska shareer kaapne laga.
Veer ke seene par uss safed shirt par kuch geela geela failta jaa raha tha.
Aur, iss baat ka pata lagte hi ki wo kya tha, Kaera ka badan wahi jaam sa ho gaya. Maano jaise saanp sungh gaya ho use.
Kaera (kaapte hue) : V-Ve-Veer!???
Veer bas lambi lambi saansein le raha tha, kuch keh nahi raha tha aur uski khamoshi Kaera ko aur bhi bechain kar rahi thi.
Wo Veer ko zorr se jhanjori aur use pukaari toh iss baar Veer ne jawaab diya.
Veer : Don't.... Don't worry! I'm fine!
Kaera (rote hue) : Noooooooo!! YOU ARE NOT!!!!
Veer : Look at me!!! Maine kaha na... I'm fine!
Kaera : Y-You are bleeding!
Kaera ko jese khoon dekh ke kuch ho gaya tha. She was getting PTSD.
Post traumatic stress disorder. Ek aisi health condition jo tab trigger hoti hai jab aapne kisi khaufnaak drishya ko dekha ho.
Kaera jab chhoti thi tab hi usne uss din apne ghar ke maali ki khoon se sani hui laash dekhi thi. Tab se hi uske andar khoon ko lekar uss dardnak ghatna ka experience, uske mann me basa hua tha.
Aaj Veer ko bhi usi tarah chhathi par khoon dekh, uske andar ka wahi PTSD trigger ho gaya. Yahi kaaran tha jo itni mazboot dil ladki aaj yu iss tarah kaap rahi thi.
Veer : I know I'm bleeding! Don't worry! Mujhe kuch nahi hoga.
Ghaav lamba toh tha par kismat thi Veer ki jo woh gehra nahi tha. Warna yaha dikkat aa sakti thi uske liye.
Wo utha aur usne deewar par khusi wahi chaaku nikaali jo kuch waqt pehle Dexter ne uski orr feki thi.
Use nikaalte hue Veer ne use apni shirt ke kandho ke hisse par chalaayi aur apni poori sleeve ko phaad ke use lamba kar usne wo aasteen apne seene par baandh li.
Ghaav gehra nahi tha par lamba zaroor tha. Khoon jitna jaldi ruk sake utna behtar tha. Aur, abhi uske paas yahi upaay tha.
Veer ne turant hi jeb me haath daal phone nikaal Raghu ko call lagaaya.
*Ring* *Ring*
Par...
Dexter waha khade khade use ye sab kuch karne kaha dene waala tha.
Ek baar fir uske qadam Veer aur Kaera ke kaano me pade toh Kaera firse darr uthi.
Lekin, Veer ki nazar iss baar ekdum kendrit thi. Wo taiyar tha.
'Come!'
Wo jhuke hue tha iss baar.
'Yadi mujhe dhuye me dekhne me pareshani ho rahi hai toh definitely ise bhi ho rahi hogi.'
Aur, waqai wahi hua. Dexter ne andaaze se Veer ki jagah par chaaku se vaar kiya...
*Swoooooooossshhhh*
Dhua hata par...
Veer waha nahi tha. Shayad pehli baar Dexter ki aankhein darr ke maare fel gayi.
Kyuki, Veer...
Waha nahi, balki usi jagah par neeche jhuka hua tha. Woh muskuraya.
Aur fir...
*Pooooowwwwwww*
Ek kohni ka vaar seedhe Dexter ki pasli par aaya.
"Ughhhh!!!! Gwaaakkkkkhhhh!!!!"
Uske muh se thook nikla aur uske baad hi...
*Poooowwwwwww*
Kohni ke baad Veer ki ek ulti fist Dexter ki seedha naak par aake lagi.
*Craaaaaaassssshhhhhh*
Aur, ek baar fir wo iss baar daayi orr lage hue sheesho me jaake ghus gaya.
Saare sheesho ke tukde hote hue waha gir gaye.
"H-Hello? Hellooooooo!!!"
Idhar Veer ne apne liye samay nikaal liya tha. Aur, jaise hi usne phone kaan me lagaya udhar se Raghu ki 'hello hello' ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Veer (lambi saas lete hue) : Jaldi! Andar aao...
Itna bol Veer ne phone kaat diya.
Baahar Raghu ne jaise hi ye suna toh Raghu aur Jassi dono hi chinta me aa gaye.
Wo bhaagte hue andar jaane ke liye hue par jese hi entry ke paas pohuche...
Unke saamne do aur trained Assassins khade hue the jo side se nikal kar aaye the. Aur, saath hi saath wo entrance waala banda bhi unke hi saath khada hua tha.
Jassi : Accha hua support bulwa lia. Inse nipatna padega pehle hume.
Raghu : Hmm!
Jassi (frowns) : Bas tab tak Veer sambhal le andar...
Raghu : Maine kaha tha tujhe gun rakh leni chahiye thi.
Jassi : Maine rakhi thi emergency ke liye. Lekin, wo car me hai.
Raghu : Waah! Aur, tere kehne par mein nahi laaya aaj. Sahi me yaar... Kherr! Inse pehle nipatate hai.
Jassi : Right! Yaad hai na? No killing!
Raghu : Hmm!
Idhar andar Veer ne Raghu ke baad hi Suhana ko speed dial kar diya tha.
Aur, udhar uska ishaara samajhte hi Suhana ne forun hi help bhej di, saath hi police aur investigation ka saara maamla wahi sambhalne waali thi. Par, iss waqt wo bhi waha apne ghar me gehre chinta me doobi hui thi.
'Agar tumne Slogan ko maar diya na veer then trust me... Mein tumhe lab me le jaake tumhare upar 36 experiments karne waali hu. Kyuki, there's no way you can kill someone like him, without any help. My eyes will be on you!!!'
Suhana ke vichaar se pare Veer idhar apne phone ko jeb me rakh ek baar firse ready tha ladne ke liye.
Dard toh thoda ho raha tha use seene me par jo dard Veer pehle ladayi me seh chuka tha ye chot uske muqable kuch bhi nahi thi.
Kaera toh itna ghabra gayi. Veer ki haalat dekh ke ki uske masoom se chehre par poore aasuon ki boondein saji hui thi. Jhar jhar kar ke aasu beh rahe the. Aaj pehli baar Veer ne use rote hue dekha tha. Kaha wo strong willed powerful Kaera aur kaha ye Kaera jo ro rahi thi aur rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.
[Bas ek aur hit! Aur wo gaya. You need to hit him one more time.]
'Yeah! Iss baar mein aggresive rahunga.'
Kaera (cries) : V-Veer!! You're bleeding!!
Kaera ki pukaar par iss baar Veer palta aur uske sameep aake usne Kaera ka maatha thaama aur aage badh uske maathe ko choom liya.
Agar, koi aur ladka ye iss waqt kar raha hota toh Kaera uska kya hashr karti ye toh koi bhi nahi bata sakta tha. Par, iss samay Veer ki harqat use zara bhi buri nahi lagi. Ulta, wo aur zorr zorr se rone lagi.
Veer : Unme se ek ko bhi aapke paas aane nahi dunga. Trust me! I'll be your shield. And, don't worry, ye bas ek scratch hai. Nothing else!
Itna bol wo firse muda aur Dexter se bhidne ke liye punah taiyar tha.
Tabhi...
*Click*
Entrance ka darwaaza khula aur Raghu andar aaya.
"Missssss!!!!!"
Kaera : Raghuuuuuuu!!!!
Usne Kaera ke haath ko thaamte hue forun hi use le jaane ke liye hua.
Magar achanak...
Dherr saare qadmo ki awaaz aane lagi.
Aur, ek baar fir, Veer aur unn sab ke saamne kayi saare log khade hue the. Iss baar dhua thoda kam tha jis kaaran Veer unki tadaad dekh sakta tha. Takreeban 8 se 10 log.
Raghu : Support team se kuch aadmi aa gaye hai jo baahar Jassi ki help kar rahe hai. Veer! Jaldi! Waqt nahi hai. Chalo nikle yaha se.
Veer : Miss Kaera ko leke jao.
Kaera : Huh!??
Raghu : Kyaaa??
Veer : Trust me! Go now! Inhe mein dekh lunga.
Kaera (cries) : Noooooooooooooo~
Raghu (chillaate hue) : Oye dimaag toh theek hai na? Hero mat bano Veer!!!
Veer : I told you na... Go now! Wo aa rahe hai. I have some unfinished business.
Apne daant meeste hue Raghu na chaahte hue bhi Kaera ko waha se forcefully le jaane laga.
Kaera (cries) : W-Whaaat??? Raghuuuuuu!!! Leave meeee! Wo waha akela hai. Veeeeeeerrrr!!! Nooooooooo~
Kaera jaate jaate Veer ke chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi. Use andar se aaj pehli baar itni tadap aur peeda mehsoos ho rahi thi jise wo bata bhi nahi sakti thi.
Wo cheenkhte jaa rahi thi par koi fayda nahi. Raghu ki pakad mazboot thi. Jaate jaate Kaera ne Veer ke chehre par bas ek muskaan dekhi.
Jise dekh wo aur bechain ho uthi. Aisa laga jaise maano wo Veer ki akhiri muskaan dekh rahi thi.
Aur, uske mann me bas yahi sawal gunj gaye.
'Why? Why did you save me??? Tumne apni jaan jokhim me daal ke mujhe kyu bachaaya? Uss din bhi aisa hi kiya tha tumne. Whyyyy???'
Lekin, use iska jawaab na mila.
"Mein madad bhijwata hu!!!"
Itna kehte hue Raghu Kaera ko lekar baahar nikal gaya. Aur, darwaza ek baar fir band ho gaya.
Veer bas muskura raha tha kyuki...
*Ding*
[Mission : Take Kaera to Mirror gallery has been completed.]
[You have been rewarded 900 points.]
Use majbooran yaha rukna pada. Kaaran tha...
*Ding*
[Mission : Confront the gang!
Rewards : ???? Points.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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Awesome Fabolous update
Superb update brother...
Veer took a great risk here even after knowing it's a trap.... Let's see what happens next....
Waiting for next update....
majedar update ..kaera ke saath gallery jaane se pehle waqt bhi bitana chahta tha veer .
aur shweta ko dikhane ke liye usike hotel me gaya kaera ko leke.. dono maa beti shock ho gayi kaera jaisi hasti ke saath veer ko dekhkar ..
kaera ki favourability 48 hai veer ke liye par sirf best friends..
ab bahut si baate clear ho gayi veer ke gallery me aane ki par usne apne mission ke liye kaera ko khatre me daal dena sahi samjha.. sab check kar chuka tha veer wo truck aur ab wo ladka jo nakli employee hai isliye saawdhani se sab kar raha hai ,raghu ko aagah kar diya aur suhana ko pehle se madad ke liye keh chuka hai .
aur ye suhana teddy ko peetkar apna gussa nikalna nahi bhuli
Nice super se
Good update and i am waiting for veer and his mother face off i think it will take some time and it will be very interesting to see that and please can you add some images or gifs when you are writing the pleasure portions in your story so that it will be more exciting for people to read
Great going sir
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Hat's off for the story very commendeable if it comes daily now it will be like a mania but you have your life also and we are used to it..
Thankyou for wonderful story . ...
Waiting for more
★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated... 
★ Veer keara ko yha isliye risk me laya tha Qki usko point chahiye the...
★ But wo puri planing ke sath aaya tha but dekha ye hai ki wo kaam krta hai ya nhi...
★ Ab dekha ye hai ki veer sab kese handel krta hai Kya usko time mil payega raghu ko call krne ka ya fir suhana ko...
★ Is bar dekha ye hai veer jeetta hai ya Slogan..
★ Aur yha aisa kya hone wala hai aur slogan ne kya plan kiya hai mirror gallary ke ander..
★ Aur yha hotel me lane ka kya maksad tha veer ka kya wo sweta ko dikhna chahhta tha ya bhumika ko...
★ Bhumi ne to sach bol diya but shweta ab bhi chup rhena chahri thi..
★ dono shock to jrur thi ki ye miss keara ke sath kese aur ek dusre ko jante keese hai...
★ Sawal to bhut se hai but Dekhte hai aage kya- kya hota...
★ Waiting for next update...
Nice Update
Outstanding bro
Nice update..........
Hmm interesting let see what will happen next.Btw conversation b/w Pari n veer is hilarious
Fantastic Update
Waiting for next update
Sone ka mandir banane me to Atish kamyaab ho gya.....lekin us sone ke mandir ki talash me apne andar ke Heere ko maar giraya Atish ne.....Jab tak dilo me khuda na base tab tak chahe sone ka mandir ho ya pathar ka dono ko banwane ka koi faida nahi......(Ye line agar kisi ko buri lage to sorry me ne kisi bhi tarha ke religion ko target nahi kia hai)
Kasam se iss scene ko main ne sirf mehsoos nahi kia balke apni ankho ke saamne hote huwe daikha ho jaise bohat he sahi se ap ne iss scene ko bayan kia hai
Akhir veer us rah per nikal he gaya.....Main ye nahi kehta ke veer galat hai.....Lekin ek baar jo insaan kisi ki jaan lene me kamyaab ho jata hai us ke liyevwo dobara karna koi bari baat nahi rehti....Insaan na chahte huwe bhi apne andar ke shetaan ko bahir le he ata hai.....Ab daikhna ye ho ga ke Veer apne andar ke sheetan ko kabu me Rakh sake ga ya nahi
Veer ke andar ke dar ko maarne ke peeche kanhi na Kanhi Atish ka bohat bara haath hai....Atish ne jungle me aag jalayi hai ab wo aag to use bhi jalaye gi na
Jaisa ke main ne kaha tha.....shair ke muh ko khoon lag chuka hai ab daikhna ye hai ke shair ka agla shikar kon ho ga
Karma is a bitch.....Jis Jalsa se Atish Paida huwa tha usi Jalsa me us ka ant huwa hai.....wo kehte hai na....“Jo Gaddha dusro ke liye khodo gye us me khud bhi ek din giro gye” Waise he jis Magar ko Atish ne apne dushmano ke liye pala tha wo he us ki moat ka sabab bana
Atish ka bhi reason ye he tha Badla.....Lekin uss Badle ne use kahan la khara kia wo ap ne hume bobat ache se dikha dia hai
To finally yahan update khatam huwa jahan ap ne Veer ke dil me us ki Maa ke pyaar ko bohat ache andaz se dikhaya hai.... UPDATE bohat Kamal ka tha kanhi per bhi update ne bore nahi kia har lafz ne apne saath bandh ker rakha....ap ne har Character ke saath puri imandaati dikhayi hai kisi bhi ek character ko zada fokiyat nahi di hai.....har kirdaar ke saath insaaf huwa hai....Keep Writing
Awesome story bro..........keep it up
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