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Chulbuli Kavya bahut interesting aur lovable character hey really.Dear writer sab,
नमस्कार,
Bahut hi classic story hai aapki,shayad maine aise story kabhi nahi padhi,etna kuchh gahrai me likhna ye kisi or ke liye sambhab nahi hai.
Bas 1 chij jo bahut hi pinch karti hai ya chubhti hai wo ye ki aapne Kavya ke corrector ko bahut hi jyada footage di hai ,mere kuchh sawal hai,
Agar kahani ki shuwat me kavya ke corrector ko chhod de to ( waha to bhai bahan ka prem banta hai kyuki Veer ko us waqt kisi family ke sadasya ke pyar ki jarurat thi) jyadatar ab tak 123 updates hone tak bhi kavya padhne walo ko sirf or sirf irritate hi karti hai,
- har jagha jabardasti gale padti hai
- kitna bhi jaruri kam ho veer ko bula leti hai.
- Diwali par bhi usi ne bundpange liye the.
-jaipur etne important kam ke liye jana ho tab bhi jid karke sath chali gai.
-Kisi dusare ke ghar me kon bhala 1 bhante tak nahata hai jabki etane logo ki bhid ho.
Har jagha gale padna wakai bahut hi irritating lagta hai.
Aap beshak esko bhai bahan ka prem ya bechari sabse chhoti ya kuchh or bhi kah sakte ho par yadi hamare nazariye se socho to kavya sirf or sirf irritating corrector hai,ye bat maine aarohi ya kisi or ke liye kyo nahi ki.
Please rethink about.
These are my personal views, please don't take otherwise.
Verna aapki story es forum ke only the best story hai.
Kavya ke character ko bahut zyada footage nahi di gayi hai bhai. Woh kam hi nazar aati hai. Uss se zyada scenes Ragini ke hai. Aur, ye scenes toh aayenge hi kyunki Veer ka parivar hai woh sab.Dear writer sab,
नमस्कार,
Bahut hi classic story hai aapki,shayad maine aise story kabhi nahi padhi,etna kuchh gahrai me likhna ye kisi or ke liye sambhab nahi hai.
Bas 1 chij jo bahut hi pinch karti hai ya chubhti hai wo ye ki aapne Kavya ke corrector ko bahut hi jyada footage di hai ,mere kuchh sawal hai,
Aisa toh mujhse pehle kisi ne nahi kaha bhai ki Kavya irritate kar rahi hai. Agar ye baat 90% readers kehte hai toh bhalayi mein thoda iss par vichaar kar sakta hu.Agar kahani ki shuwat me kavya ke corrector ko chhod de to ( waha to bhai bahan ka prem banta hai kyuki Veer ko us waqt kisi family ke sadasya ke pyar ki jarurat thi) jyadatar ab tak 123 updates hone tak bhi kavya padhne walo ko sirf or sirf irritate hi karti hai,
Woh ghar ki sabse chhoti hai bhai. Uski muraadein asaani se poori ki jaati hai isliye wo iska faayda bhi uthaati hai jo ki ghar ka har chhota sadasya karta hai. Isme kaisi chidhh?- har jagha jabardasti gale padti hai
Ye kab hua?- kitna bhi jaruri kam ho veer ko bula leti hai.
Diwali me kya kiya tha usne?- Diwali par bhi usi ne bundpange liye the
Arey toh kyu nahi jayegi bhai?-jaipur etne important kam ke liye jana ho tab bhi jid karke sath chali gai.
Wo Veer ke saath mazak kar rahi thi Bhai. Ek baar wo update fir se padhne ka. Wo jaan boojh ke ye kar rahi thi. Agar wo mazak nahi karegi toh aur kaun karega?-Kisi dusare ke ghar me kon bhala 1 bhante tak nahata hai jabki etane logo ki bhid ho.
Kavya ka character baakiyo se alag hai. Arohi aur baaki sabhi umr me badi bhi hai aur mature aur samajhdar bhi.Har jagha gale padna wakai bahut hi irritating lagta hai.
Aap beshak esko bhai bahan ka prem ya bechari sabse chhoti ya kuchh or bhi kah sakte ho par yadi hamare nazariye se socho to kavya sirf or sirf irritating corrector hai,ye bat maine aarohi ya kisi or ke liye kyo nahi ki.
Please rethink about.
These are my personal views, please don't take otherwise.
Verna aapki story es forum ke only the best story hai.