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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,303 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 202 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 35 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,567

kingkhankar

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Dear writer sab,
नमस्कार,
Bahut hi classic story hai aapki,shayad maine aise story kabhi nahi padhi,etna kuchh gahrai me likhna ye kisi or ke liye sambhab nahi hai.
Bas 1 chij jo bahut hi pinch karti hai ya chubhti hai wo ye ki aapne Kavya ke corrector ko bahut hi jyada footage di hai ,mere kuchh sawal hai,
Agar kahani ki shuwat me kavya ke corrector ko chhod de to ( waha to bhai bahan ka prem banta hai kyuki Veer ko us waqt kisi family ke sadasya ke pyar ki jarurat thi) jyadatar ab tak 123 updates hone tak bhi kavya padhne walo ko sirf or sirf irritate hi karti hai,
- har jagha jabardasti gale padti hai
- kitna bhi jaruri kam ho veer ko bula leti hai.
- Diwali par bhi usi ne bundpange liye the.
-jaipur etne important kam ke liye jana ho tab bhi jid karke sath chali gai.
-Kisi dusare ke ghar me kon bhala 1 bhante tak nahata hai jabki etane logo ki bhid ho.

Har jagha gale padna wakai bahut hi irritating lagta hai.
Aap beshak esko bhai bahan ka prem ya bechari sabse chhoti ya kuchh or bhi kah sakte ho par yadi hamare nazariye se socho to kavya sirf or sirf irritating corrector hai,ye bat maine aarohi ya kisi or ke liye kyo nahi ki.
Please rethink about.
These are my personal views, please don't take otherwise.

Verna aapki story es forum ke only the best story hai.
Chulbuli Kavya bahut interesting aur lovable character hey really.
 
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Werewolf

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Dear writer sab,
नमस्कार,
Bahut hi classic story hai aapki,shayad maine aise story kabhi nahi padhi,etna kuchh gahrai me likhna ye kisi or ke liye sambhab nahi hai.
Bas 1 chij jo bahut hi pinch karti hai ya chubhti hai wo ye ki aapne Kavya ke corrector ko bahut hi jyada footage di hai ,mere kuchh sawal hai,
Kavya ke character ko bahut zyada footage nahi di gayi hai bhai. Woh kam hi nazar aati hai. Uss se zyada scenes Ragini ke hai. Aur, ye scenes toh aayenge hi kyunki Veer ka parivar hai woh sab.
Agar kahani ki shuwat me kavya ke corrector ko chhod de to ( waha to bhai bahan ka prem banta hai kyuki Veer ko us waqt kisi family ke sadasya ke pyar ki jarurat thi) jyadatar ab tak 123 updates hone tak bhi kavya padhne walo ko sirf or sirf irritate hi karti hai,
Aisa toh mujhse pehle kisi ne nahi kaha bhai ki Kavya irritate kar rahi hai. Agar ye baat 90% readers kehte hai toh bhalayi mein thoda iss par vichaar kar sakta hu. :approve:
- har jagha jabardasti gale padti hai
Woh ghar ki sabse chhoti hai bhai. Uski muraadein asaani se poori ki jaati hai isliye wo iska faayda bhi uthaati hai jo ki ghar ka har chhota sadasya karta hai. Isme kaisi chidhh?
- kitna bhi jaruri kam ho veer ko bula leti hai.
Ye kab hua? :think:
Mujhe nahi lagta Kavya ne kabhi bhi Veer ko koi zaroori kaam chhor kar aane ke liye apne paas bulaaya ho. Woh scene refer karo jisme ye harqat Kavya ne ki hai.
- Diwali par bhi usi ne bundpange liye the
Diwali me kya kiya tha usne? :think:
-jaipur etne important kam ke liye jana ho tab bhi jid karke sath chali gai.
Arey toh kyu nahi jayegi bhai? :laugh:
Sab log jaa rahe toh bhala woh kyu nahi jayegi?
-Kisi dusare ke ghar me kon bhala 1 bhante tak nahata hai jabki etane logo ki bhid ho.
Wo Veer ke saath mazak kar rahi thi Bhai. Ek baar wo update fir se padhne ka. Wo jaan boojh ke ye kar rahi thi. Agar wo mazak nahi karegi toh aur kaun karega?
Har jagha gale padna wakai bahut hi irritating lagta hai.
Aap beshak esko bhai bahan ka prem ya bechari sabse chhoti ya kuchh or bhi kah sakte ho par yadi hamare nazariye se socho to kavya sirf or sirf irritating corrector hai,ye bat maine aarohi ya kisi or ke liye kyo nahi ki.
Please rethink about.
These are my personal views, please don't take otherwise.

Verna aapki story es forum ke only the best story hai.
Kavya ka character baakiyo se alag hai. Arohi aur baaki sabhi umr me badi bhi hai aur mature aur samajhdar bhi.

Kavya thodi immature hai abhi. Wo isliye kyunki use bachpan se hi har cheez maangne par mili hai. Toh nadaan hai, alhadpan hai abhi.

Har character ko logically nahi dekha jaata. Nidhi ko samajhne ke liye aapko khud ko nidhi ke jooto me rehna hoga aur uske pov se dekhna hoga. Par kavya ko samajhne ke liye aapko kavya nahi ... Veer ke pov se dekhna hoga. Toh shayad samajh aa jayega.

Baaki mujhe nahi lagta ki maine aisa koi irritating behaviour rakha hai kavya ka...
 
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