- 14,919
- 103,941
- 259
Last edited:
Sabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.
By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.
Wese ek writer ki taaqat uski likhaawat hoti hai par saath hi saath wahi uski kamzori bhi hoti hai. Ek writer bina likhe reh hi nahi sakta. Wo kuch na kuch likhta hi rehta hai aur apni kalpanao se nayi nayi kahaniyo ko utpadit karta hai. Aisa hi haal kuch mera bhi hai. Isliye aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,
"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani ki plot setting 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss setting ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss plot setting ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Dhanyavaad!![]()
CongratulationsSabhi ko sabse pehle Hello!
Ye meri iss forum par dusri kahani hogi. Pehli kahaani [Akhir kyu?From hatred to love] ko aap sabhi ne itna saraaha aur pyaar diya ki mujhe dusri kahaani likhne par majboor kar diya.
By the way meri pehli kahani padhi ya nahi? Nahi padhi toh jao yaar pehle usko padho. Fir ye nayi kahani me dubki lagaana.
Wese ek writer ki taaqat uski likhaawat hoti hai par saath hi saath wahi uski kamzori bhi hoti hai. Ek writer bina likhe reh hi nahi sakta. Wo kuch na kuch likhta hi rehta hai aur apni kalpanao se nayi nayi kahaniyo ko utpadit karta hai. Aisa hi haal kuch mera bhi hai. Isliye aapke saamne prastut hu apni ek aur nayi kahani lekar,
"Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery"
Ye kahani ekdum hi hatt ke hone waali hai. Aisi kahani aapne nahi padhi hogi. Kahani ki plot setting 'System' par adhaarit hai. Jinhone chinese aur japanese novels padhi hai iss setting ki unhe pata hoga. Par jinhone nahi padhi hai unke liye ye ekdum new hone waali hai. Isliye, mene socha kyu na iss plot setting ko yaha forum par introduce kiya jae.
Ab kuch key points dhyaan me zaroor rakhiyega kahani ko padhne se pehle kyuki baad me comment section me apun ko koi bakchodi nahi chahiye.
1. Story ka prefix wese toh mein fantasy rakhne wala tha par kyuki isme incest bhi hai kaafi maatra me toh mene incest rakh diya.
2. Story harem par based hai.
3. Story based toh real world me hi hai par kuch logics apply nahi honge.
4. Ye kahani kaalpanik hai. Isme charchit sabhi paatr keval meri kalpanao ka hissa hai. Yadi koi naam, vyavsaay, ya kuch aur asal zindagi me kisi se mel khaata hai toh ye keval ek sanyog hoga. Isse kisi galat nazariye sa na liye jae.
Bas ye 4 points ko dhyaan me rakhiyega.
Intro chota sa hi dunga, mein chaahta hu readers khud hi kahani padh ke characters ke baare me jaane taaki aap paatro se aur acche se familiar ho sake. Isliye, zyada bada intro nahi dunga.
Dhanyavaad!![]()
System Activation Arc | Update 1 - Update 9 | [Completed] |
Aatish Arc | Update 10 - Update 39 | [Completed] |
Slogan Arc | Update 40 - Update 76 | [Completed] |
Famiglia Arc | Update 77 - Update 94, contd. | [Ongoing] |
House of the Killers Arc | Update 95 - Update 109 | [Completed] |
Village Arc | Update 110 - Update 129 | [Completed] |
Crimson Arc | Update 130 - Update 150 | [Completed] |
Business Arc | Update 151 - Update 167 | [Completed] |
Chinatown Arc | Update 168 - Update 179 | [Completed] |
Disembowler's Arc | Update 180 - Update ??? | [Ongoing] |
Summit Arc | Update ??? - Update ??? | [Yet to come] |
Finale Arc | Update ??? - Update ??? | [Yet to come] |