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Ab Veer chor ko pakadega
Intresting
Nice update bro
Nice update bro har baar aapka update padne me kam hi lagta hai pata hi nahi chalta ki kab khatam ho gaya it's really awesome
Werewolf bhai u r too gd awesome
Awesome update brother
Thank you guys!Bahut hi jyada awesome tha ye scene.
Thanks a lot bro!Beginning to enjoy the story now ... last 4 updates were very good ...
Hope the bitch does not accuse him of staging the robbery to teach her a lesson she's crazy enought to do it and rich enough to get away with it. hope Sonia gets involved with the hunt to give it some credibility. plus they get time to come close.
Debauchery!? Are you referring to girls and money here? If that's the case, then he already got the virginity of that unknown miss here. He'll start to get money soon.But where the F is the debauchery? or even a hint of it?
Thank you bro!A Fabulous Update.
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I Think The Next Updates Are Going To Be A Great Fun.
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Aur Mujhe Aisa Kyun Lag Raha Hai Ki Jaise Is Ring To Dhundhane Ke Bad 1 Tir See 2 Shikar Hone Wala Hai.
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1. Suhana's Favour
2. Bhumika's And Sonia's Favourablty Increasement.
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And Best Funniest Thing In The Next Upcoming Update Is - Veer Be Like Seriously, Are You Fucking Kidding Me.
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And Pari Be Like -
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Werewolf bhauu ajj update de paoge kya??Thank you bro!
Yes, upcoming updates will be
No spoilers though!!
Update will come tomorrow!Werewolf bhauu ajj update de paoge kya??
Excellent update
Nice update
Nice update
Nice update
Fabulous update bhai
Jabardast update bro
Super update bhai
Awesome update
Awesome fabulous update
Keep it up
Superb update
Superb update bhai
Fantastic update...
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...
Nice super wonderful update
Super bro
Super update hai Bhai
Mast update
Awesome update bhai
Awesome update
zabardast
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai..
Nice and beautiful update...
Awesome update bhai waiting for next update
Mast Update bro
Keep Posting
Nice update...
Superb update bro
Very very nice update
Nice update
Thank you guys! But mera yaha ek sawaal hai.Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....
Update will come tomorrow!
Bhai bat hai ki mujhe jo pasand nahi atta to mai bol deta hu chahe writer ko accha lage ya bura. Rahi bat commetes ki to bat ye hai ki apka pura update bahetarin hota par update ka last part pura mood kharab karta hai. Isliye mai comment kiya to sirf nice update likhte hu.Thank you guys! But mera yaha ek sawaal hai.
Kya aap kahani padh bhi rahe ho? Because mujhe nahi lag raha hai ki kahani aap padh rahe hai.
Hum writers itni mehnat se time nikal ke itna lamba chauda likhte hai aur uske baad readers ki taraf se sirf 2 shabd dekhne ko mile, toh ye boht hi niraasha waali baat hoti hai humlogo ke liye.
Aisa lagta hai jese clipboard me aap "nice update", "superb update" rakhte ho aur bas paste karke chipka dete hai. Ye serious baat hai guys!
Jo log silent readers hai unki mein baat hi nahi kar raha kyuki na hi unke paas ID hai na kuch. They don't have access. Par aapke paas ID bhi aur comments like sab kuch karne ki access bhi hai. Uske baad bhi yadi aap harr story me same wahi 2 shabd paste kar rahe ho then that's really sad.
Ek reader padhne ke baad apne vichar vyakt karta hai. Harr update nice update nahi hota guys. Yaha pe I hope apa sabhi iss baat par dhyaan denge kyuki mein hi nahi, baaki sabhi writers bhi ye baat jaante hai par kabhi bolte nahi hai. Aaj mene bol diya. I hope, aage se kuch changes dekhne ko milenge. Mujhe bhi lagega ki mein sahi jagah content de raha hu.