Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Ab tak...

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]

Ab aage...

Aaj ki ye bhavya daavat, keval kehne ke liye daavat thi. Iska asli maqsad toh kuch aur hi tha. Veer jaanta tha ki uske Dada jii ne ye daavat kyu rakhi thi.

Taaki wo iss daavat me aane waale bade bade logo se ghul mil sake aur unse pehchaan bana sake. Veer ke Dada jii ab buzurg ho chuke the. Toh woh harr samay uske liye kisi badi family ke paas jaa kar usse introduce nahi karwaane waale the. Veer ab baccha nahi tha.

Isliye, aaj unhone apni zimmedaariyo se muqt hone ke baad Veer ko mauqa diya tha. Ab ye Veer ke upar tha ki woh kese iss mauqe ka fayda uthaata hai. Aur beshaq, Veer apne saamne gayi iss parosi hui thaal ko thukraane thodi waala tha. Bhale hi usse jaydaat me koi interest nahi tha. Par ab jab jaydaat ka kuch hissa usse mila tha toh woh uska poora ka poora istemaal karne waala tha.

Aur bina Dada jii ki iccha ke wo ye jaydaat ab kisi ke bhi hawaale nahi karne waala tha. Jab tak ki uske Dada jii khud uss se ye jaydaat nahi maangte, tab tak Veer ki ye jaydaat, uski apni thi. Kisi aur ki katayi nahi.

Car se utarte hi Veer uss aalishaan 5 star hotel ki entrance ke paas pohucha. Aur udhar pohuchte hi usse do jaani maani ladkiya wahi seedhiyo par khadi dikhaayi dii. Aur wo thi...

Arohi aur Kavya.

Jo aaj itni khubsoorat lag rahi thi ki harr andar jaata hua aadmi ek se do baar unhe zaroor dekh raha tha mud mud ke. Kavya maroon colour ki ek shining sii dress pehne hue thi toh wahi Arohi silver colour ki thighs tak aati ek dress me thi.

Veer ki presence ka abhaas hote hi jese hi Arohi aur Kavya ne usse dekha toh dono wahi jamm sii gayi.

Unn dono ko ek bada jhatka sa laga. Dono hi itna shock me thi ki kuch seconds tak toh kuch bol hi nahi paayi. Kyuki, aaj Veer unhe itna zyaada attractive lag raha tha ki dono ki hi nazre uske chehre par jami rahi. Veer ki handsomeness kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Aur uska asar, saaf dikh raha tha.

Arohi : V-Veeeer!??

Kavya : Bhaiya???

Dono ke hi muh khule ke khule reh gaye the.

Veer (smiles) : Kya hua? Party andar hai meri pyaari behno. Why are you guys waiting outside?

Arohi (blushes) : W-We... We were waiting for you.

Kavya (blushes) : Bh-Bhaiya! A-Aap aaj... Aaj boht handsome lag rahe ho.

Dono hi behno ki awaaz thoda ladkhada gayi. Paas se Veer ko dekh wo behad hi shock me thi. Veer ka appearance bhala itna kese badal gaya? Arre kal hi toh mile the wo sab. Fir ek raat me itna badlaav kese aa gaya Veer me?

'He... He looks so handsome!'

'Bh-Bhaiya? Bhaiya itne zyaada handsome kab se ho gaye? Kya mene bhaiya ko theek se nahi dekha tha ab tak? K-Kya bhaiya ne makeover karaaya hai?'

Kuch aisi hi thoughts unke mann me aa rahe the.

Kavya : Bhaiya? A-Aapne kuch lagaaya hai kya apne face pe?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi toh! Haha! Just the usual. Tum toh jaanti hi ho. Mein apne face pe utna dhyaan nahi deta. Bas, bath liya tha. Aur normal moisturizer. Nothing else.

Arohi (jalte hue) : Uske bawajood tumhari skin itni acchi hai. Aur upar se hum ladkiya din bhar apni skin par dhyaan deti hai. Then too, kahi pimples, toh kahi dark circles. I hate it. Sirf muh dhoke hi you... You look so smart. It's so unfair.

Kavya : Right didi!!! Bhaiyaaa~ I hate you!!!

*Thud*

Kavya : Ughhuuu~

Par iske pehle Kavya Veer se aur jal paati, Veer ne uske sarr par ek tapli de maari.

Veer : Let's go inside~

Kavya : Uhuuu~ Maara kyu!? Waaaa~

Iss baar bhi bechaari kuch na keh paayi kyuki Veer ne uske gulaabi narm se gaal ko kheech jo diya tha. Veer Kavya se behad pyaar karta tha. Aur ye choti moti nok jhok uske saath karne me usse boht accha lagta tha. Upar se, ahem Kavya ke gaal bhi boht soft the.

Veer : So? Kaun sii floor par hai?

Arohi : 7th floor!

Veer : Alright!

Teeno hi lift me jaate hue upar hotel ki 7th floor par pohuche aur lift khulte hi usme se baahar nikle.

Baahar nikal kar ek right turn liya aur bas, unhe entrance dikh gayi thi.

Entrance ke baahar 4 khubsoorat ladies ek sii dress pehne hue guests ko welcome kar rahi thi. 2 ladies phool ki pankhudiya phekte hue unka swaagat kar rahi thi toh wahi aage do khadi hui aane waale guests ke kapdo par perfume chidak rahi thi.

Kavya Veer ki baazu ko apne haatho me jakdi hui thi. Jese maano wo uska boyfriend ho. Ye harqat dekh Arohi ke bhi mann me kuch aaya. Par wo Veer ki dusri side hi chalti rahi. Shayad wo bhi Veer ka haath thaamna chaahti thi. But she decided against it.

Jese hi unn ladies ne Veer ko dekha toh pal bhar ke liye unki aankho me bhi chamak aa gayi.

Aur bade hi aadar ke saath muskuraate hue Veer ka swaagat karne lagi woh.

'Ye kitna handsome hai.'

'Haaye~ Ye ladka!'

Na jaane unke mann me kya kya chal raha tha. Par jese Arohi ne unn saari ladkiyo ke dekhne ke dhang ko mehsoos kar liya. Aur iss baar...

Arohi : Let's go fast~

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi Veer ka haath thaam usse jaldbaazi me andar le gayi. Andar jaate jaate wo palat ke unn ladkiyo ko ek look dena nahi bhuli.

Andar aate hi Veer ne dekha ki kya hi shandaar hotel thi ye. Waqai! Ye 5 star hotel kehlaane laayak hi thi.

Upar ceiling se latak rahe bade bade jhoomar itne mehnge aur aakarshak lag rahe the ki unki chamak hi logo ka dhyaan kheech rahi thi. Aur zameen par bicha hua wo shandaar kaaleen. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi Raja ki sabha ka main hall ho.

100 se bhi upar aadmi andar ghus chuka tha iss waqt. Aur uske bawajood, hall me itni space thi ki lag raha tha ki bas kuch hi aadmi aaye hai.

Veer Arohi aur Kavya jese hi andar aaye, andar maujood logo ki bhi nazre unn par padi. Aur unme se jo Veer ki age ki ladkiya thi wo aankho me chamak liye usse dekhne lagi.

Aaj Veer ne personally customized ek high end tuxedo pehna hua tha. Uska lamba seedha aur lean figure ek dum perfect tareeqe se unn kapdo ke upar se jhalak raha tha. Ekdum fit!

Kaali ghani eyebrows, aankho me tej, hontho pe halki muskurahat, kaale wavy medium length baal, aur halki beard me wo kisi celebrity se kam nahi lag raha tha aaj.

Haar khubsoorat ladkiyo se aaj uske eye contacts ho rahe the. Aur kayi toh lagataar usse hi dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uske bagal me khadi Arohi aur Kavya bhi ye notice kar rahi thi.

Toh gusse me Kavya ne apna muh bilkul kisi pufferfish ki tarah phula liya.

"Hmph~ Bhaiya yaha nahi khade hote, chalo kahi aur." Kavya ne Veer ke haath ko kheechte hue bola.

"Hmm~ Hmm~" Aur Arohi bhi uski baat se sehmat hote hue Veer ko kheech ke thoda aage le gayi.

Kyuki ab keval ladkiya hi nahi, kuch shaadi shuda middle aged aunties toh wahi newly married bhabhiya bhi ab Veer ko taadne lagi thi. Arohi aur Kavya isliye jald se jald Veer ko waha se le bhaagi.

Abhi wo thoda hi aage aaye the ki itne me ek Kavya jitni height ki ladki unke paas aayi, "Kavya!!!!"

Kavya : Arre!?? Kritika tum aa gayi!?

Kritika : Haan! Ahahaha~

Ye Kritika Kavya ki classmate thi. Wo bhi Kavya ke jese hi cute thi par wo thodi aur mature thi Kavya se. Dono hi shayad agal bagal baithate the college me. Veer unn dono ko dekh khush tha. Kam se kam uski choti behan apni college life acche se vyateet toh kar rahi thi. Naye dost toh bana rahi thi. Uski tarah nahi, jaha uska college me koi ata pata nahi tha. Aur na hi koi dost.

Kritika (khuspusaate hue) : W-Wow! Kavya! Y-Ye tumhaare bhaiya hai? Tumhare cousin bhaiya toh boht handsome hai. M-Mujhe introduce karwao na.

Kavya : Umm... Bhaiya! Ye meri friend hai Kritika aur Kritika ye mere sabse favourite bhaiya, Veer!

Veer (smiles) : Nice to meet you!

Kritika (blushes) : N-Nice to meet you t-too!!!!

Kavya : Huh!? Kritika? Tum itna kyu sharma rahi ho?

Kritika : Umm... Wo... K-Kya aap mujhe apna insta account bata sakte ho?

Veer : Hmm? Well sure!

Aur Veer ne apni Insta ID ka QR code khol ke Kritika ko scan karne de diya. Usse scan karte hi ab wo Veer ko follow karne lagi thi.

Kritika : Th-Thank you!

Kavya : Huh? Bhaiyaaaaa??

Kritika : Mein chalti hu. Kavya! You enjoy! Hum kal milte hai college me.

Aur Kritika waha se khushi me bhaag gayi. Kavya bechaari usse bas dekhti hi reh gayi.

Kavya : Bhaiya??? Apne apni ID usse kyu dii?? Haan? I hate yo.... Waaaaaaaaa~

Ek baar fir uska sentence adhura hi reh gaya kyuki uske gulaab gaal Veer ke haatho me the.

Veer : By the way, tumhari friend yaha kese?

Kavya (gaal malte hue) : Wo... Dada jii ne mujhe permission de dii thi ki mein apni kuch friends ko bula sakti hu. Hehehe~ Special treatment you know.

***

Veer Arohi aur Kavya ko kuch derr akela chorr aur aage badhte hue jab aaya toh usse ek bada hi parichit chehra dekhne ko mila.

Veer ne apni bauhe usse dekh ke upar kari.

Iss waqt, uske saamne koi aur nahi navy blue suit pehne wo khada hua tha.

Pranjal!!!

Veer ne apni nazre ghumaayi toh usse aur bhi kuch familiar faces dekhne ko mile.

Vivek jo side me khade hoke kisi couple se baat kar raha tha. Veer ke chacha chachi jo kisi buzurg uncle aunty se baat kar rahe the.

Toh wahi Veer ne dekha ki dur Shweta baithi hui thi ek chair par aur uske bagal se khadi Bhumika uss se kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Wahi Veer ke pita abhi abhi aaye the aur entrance ke paas khade hote hue sabhi ko welcome kar rahe the.

Abhi uske Dada jii ka aana baaki tha. Bas kuch derr me hi wo yaha aane waale the.

Par filhaal... Pranjal!!!

Veer ne dekha ki uske bagal me 5 se 6 log khade hue the aur sabhi badi hi hassi khushi se baat kar rahe the. Shayad Pranjal ne apni bhole bhed ki costume pehn lii thi. Meethe bol fek raha tha lagta hai wo unpe.

'I'll have to take the chances.' Veer ne mann me socha.

[Yeah! You better! Warna wo Pranjal apni meethi meethi chikni chupdi baato se tumhaare future potential business partners tumhare haatho se chhina ke le jaega.]

'Don't worry!'

[Hmm~]

Veer ki intelligence already 90 paar nikal chuki thi. Iss waqt wo boht hi calm tha. Ekdum shaant. Bas sherr ki tarah apne shikaar ko jese dekh raha tha uss par hamla karne se pehle.

Aur tabhi...

Pranjal ne bhi usse mud ke dekha. Aur jese dono ki nazre aapas me bhidte hi ek sparking sii hui ho maano. Dono hi apni nazro se ek dusre ko aazma rahe the. Jaanch rahe the.

Bhale hi Pranjal ek nihaayti kapti insaan tha. Par uski pehchaan toh thi. Boht pehchaan thi. Uske baat karne ka dhang bhi accha tha.

Of course! Ye toh swabhaavik sii baat thi. After all, wo dikhne me bhi smart tha. Veer jitna nahi par wo bura nahi dikhta tha. Toh logo ka uski vaani aur uske haav bhaav ke parti rujhaan rakhna, ye swabhaavik tha.

Pranjal ka charm aisa tha ki kuch derr andar aane ke baad hi usne 5 se 6 naye logo se pehchaan bhi bana lii thi. Obviously, wo charm jhootha charm tha. Keval ek dikhaava. Par uska dikhaava itna on point rehta tha ki acche se accha aadmi usse parakh nahi paata tha. Jab Veer ke Dada jii Manorath khud usse nahi jaan paaye toh bhala koi aur kese jaan sakta tha uski asliyat?

Koi Mr. Bhargav Pranjal se baat kar rahe the. Veer ne pehle hi unhe check kar liya tha. Aur unhone jab Veer aur Pranjal ko aapas me nazre milaate dekha toh wo bol uthe, "Arre? Ye!? Manorath jii ka pota hai na?"

Veer unki baat sunn, naturally usse aage jaana hi pada.

Veer (smiles) : Jii namaste! Mein Veer! Jii haan! Aapne sahi kaha. Mein unka sabse chota pota hu.

Mr. Bhargav (smiles) : Kya baat hai! Dono pote kitne smart hai Manorath jii ke. Wo mere pita ke khaas dost rahe hai. Ab mere pita toh nahi rahe. Par mere bhi boht acche sambandh hai unse. Haha~

Veer : Jii!

Mr. Bhargav : Aur sunao aap? Kya chal raha hai beta aapka? Education me?

Veer kuch keh paata ki tabhi Pranjal ne uske gale me haath daala aur khud keh utha.

Pranjal : Hahaha!? Ye!? Uncle! Veer toh science student hai. Iski engineering chal rahi hai. Commerce wala toh mein hu. Mein business me active rehta hu zyada. Hahaha~

Veer muskuraaya aur usne agle hi pal apne kandhe se Pranjal ka haath neeche kiya aur bola,

Veer : Mein science se zaroor hu Uncle. But at the same time, mein apna khud ka business bhi kar raha hu. Dono cheeze parallel me chal rahi hai.

Mr. Bhargav (surprised) : Ohhh!? Ye toh acchi baat hai. Acchi baat hai waqai...

Pranjal (smiles) : Mere chote bhai! FOOD TRUCK ka business bhi koi business hota hai?

Pranjal ne kehte hue 'Food truck' par kaafi zorr dete hue kaha. Jese bataana chaah raha ho ki Manorath ka chota pota kisi kaam ka nahi hai aur itna chota kaam kar raha hai woh.

Veer (smiles) : Aadmi chote business se hi apne business ko bada banaata hai bhai. Kyu? Mr. Bhargav? Mene sahi kaha na? After all, aapke pita jii ne bhi toh tiles ka business ek choti sii dukaan se shuru kiya tha na? Yadi aaj aapka itna bada tiles ka business hai toh kya aap unn dino ko bhula sakte ho? Jaha se aapke iss mazboot business ki shuruaat hui thi.

Mr. Bhargav Veer ki baat sunte hi sann reh gaye the. Unhe Veer se mile abhi kuch hi seconds hue the aur uske bawajood Veer ko itna sab pata tha unke baare me. Of course! Ye sab toh Veer ko khaali Check karke pata lag gaya tha. Par Mr. Bhargav ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas koi system hai.

Mr. Bhargav (surprised) : Huh?? N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi! Mein aaj bhi apne pita jii ke unn beete dino ki mehnat ki daat deta hu. Unhe yaad karta hu. Unhi ke kaaran toh aaj mera itna naam hai. P-Par tumhe itna kuch pata hai mere baare me? Hahaha~ Manorath jii ka chota pota waqai boht knowledgeable hai. Tum boht aage jaoge beta.

Veer (smiles) : Jii Thank you Uncle! I wish you the same. Aapka business bhi aage badhta rahe. By the way, can I have your business card Mr. Bhargav?

Mr. Bhargav : Hahaha~ Arre arre why not? Tum bejhijak mujhe contact kar sakte ho. Koi bhi zaroorat pade toh mujhe yaad kar lena. Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Thank you!

Bagal me khade Pranjal saamne chal rahe conversation sunn ke aisa hakka bakka ho gaya tha ki uski samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab kese ho gaya. Usne apne chehre par toh koi bhaav nahi badle, bas smile karte hue dekhta raha. Par andar mann me jese bhuchaal sa aa gaya tha uske.

Uske saamne se Veer uske ek future partner ko jese chheen ke le gaya tha. Gussa toh behad aa raha tha usse.

Veer jese hi mud ke jaane ke liye hua toh Pranjal ne uske kandhe par haath rakha. Aur bade hi dheere se swar me uske kaan ki orr jhukte hue bola,

"Zyaada khush nahi hote Veer! Zyaada udte nahi. Kyuki jo jitna uucha udta hai na, wo zameen par bhi utni hi zorr se girta hai."

Pranjal usse aagah karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Ki hawa me udna aur khayaali pulaav pakaana acchi baat nahi. Warna baad me muh ki khaani padti hai.

Par tabhi, Veer ne bhi uske kaan ke paas aate hue dheere se kaha, "Dragons soar into the sky. Not the insects."

Aur wo Pranjal ko wahi chorr nikal gaya.

Pranjal ko jese apne shabdo se muh par tamaacha maar ke gaya tha Veer. Pranjal kehna chaah raha tha ki Veer hawa me na ude warna neeche aa girega.

Toh wahi Veer ne usse ye kaha ki Dragons hawa me hi udte hai, keede nahi. Ek prakaar se Veer Pranjal ko ye bataana chaah raha tha ki wo Dragon ke bhaati tha jo aakaash me uchaaiyo me udne ke liye paida hua tha. Na ki unn tucch keedo ki tarah tha jo bas nichle starr par mandraate rehte the. Dusre shabdo me wo Pranjal ko neeche mandraane waala keeda bhi keh ke gaya tha.

Aur ye baat Pranjal ko samajh aate hi, uski mutthi apne aap gusse me kass gayi. Daant meesne laga wo par uske bawajood, sabke saamne uski smile abhi bhi maujood thi. Khud ke bhaav chhupaane ka talent bhi koi Pranjal se seekhe.

'Mujhe laga hi tha tum koi na koi harqat zaroor karoge Veer. Isliye, I came prepared. Tum dekhte jao. Kya haalat karta hu mein tumhaari abhi.'

Sochte hue Pranjal ne apne jeb me kuch tatola aur fir waha se nikal gaya.

***

Kuch samay beeta aur ab Veer ke Dada jii ka aagman ho chuka tha. Unhe zyaada shor sharaaba pasand nahi tha. Isliye, wo late hi aane waale the aur kuch derr sabhi se milke waapas lautne waale the. Unhone ye party mainly Veer aur Pranjal ke liye hi rakhi thi.

Jese hi Manorath andar aaye sabhi unka swaagat karne lage. Aur unse ghul milkar baatein karne lage. Veer dur khada bas sab kuch dekh raha tha ki itne me hi uske Dada jii ne usse dekha aur uske paas gaye aur dheere se puche, "Kya bahu nahi aayi?"

Veer : Jii nahi Dada jii! Mene kaha bhi tha ki aapne bulaaya hai. Par unhone kaha ki unse nahi aaya jaega. Keh rahi thi ki Dada jii se kehna mujhe maaf kar de.

Manorath (niraash hote hue) : Koi baat nahi! Kya tum mile kisi se yaha par?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Manorath (smiles) : Boht acche! Aise hi aage badhte raho. Mata rani sab kushal mangal kar dengi.

Aur Manorath fir hall ke center me chale gaye jaha sabhi se wo baatein karne lage.

Aur dekhte hi dekhte gifts dene ka silsila shuru ho chuka tha.

Veer chair par baitha hua kuch soch raha tha ki itne me hi uske bagal se aake Pranjal dusri chair par baith gaya.

Dono ne hi ek dusre par ek nazar maari aur uske baad dono me se hi koi kuch nahi bola.

'Just wait Veer! I'll show you ki mere se panga lena kyu mehnga padega tujhe.'

Pranjal ne sochte hi apne jeb me se tatol ke ek pudiya nikaali. Uske chehre par ek kapti muskuraahat thi.

Pranjal : Waiter!!! Do cold drinks idhar!

Veer : Hmm?

Pranjal ne ek waiter ko dekh bulaaya jo cold drinks guests ko serve kar raha tha aur uss se do glass rakhwa liye.

Pranjal : Chote bhai! Tum shayad sahi the. Dragons really soar into the sky. And of course, mera bhai bhi ek dragon ke samaan hai. Jo ab aage badhta rahega. Aur uski aur kal hume property milne ki khushi me... Here's a toast. Ab wine ya beer toh nahi hai. Toh ye cold drink se hi kaam chalaana padega. Haha~ Hmm? Dada jii ne gifts accept karna start kar diya lagta.

Usne cold drink dene ki baat karte hue, Dada jii ki orr Veer ka dhyaan bhatkaaya aur badi hi chaaplusi se chupke se wo pudiya cold drink me daal dii.

Itni bheed me ghanta koi uske actions ko notice kar raha tha.

Uske baad wo waapas se apne topic par aa gaya.

Pranjal : Arre lo Veer!

Usne Veer ki side waali drink me wo pudiya daal le Veer se peene ko kaha. Veer kyuki Pranjal ke action ko nahi dekh paaya tha isliye usse nahi pata tha ki isme kya mila hua tha.

Isme constipation ka drug mila hua tha. Wahi shit drug jo Jassi ko diya gaya tha jab Kaera ko kidnap kiya gaya tha. Bas, farq ye tha ki Pranjal ka ye drug aur bhi strong tha. Itna ki yadi koi isse le le, toh kuch hi derr me lambi lambi shehnaaiya bajna tay tha.

Par Veer kaun tha? Uska intelligence 95 pe tha. Pranjal ka ab wo sly intelligence Veer ke intelligence ke muqaable kuch bhi nahi tha.

Drink dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya aur...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Cold drink.
Bio : A cold drink with added constipation drug. Do not consume it.]

Bas, itna sa padhte hi Veer ko saari planning ke baare me pata lag gaya tha jo Pranjal uske peeth peeche kar raha tha.

'I'll show you brother, how it's done!'

[Just smack him in the face. This bastard~]

Veer : Waqai! Gifts toh dene lage hai log. Hmm? Par wo kaun hai?

Iss baar Veer ne achraj me Dada jii ki orr dekhte hue kaha. Aur behsaq, Pranjal bhi uski nazro ko follow karte hue waha dekha.

Aur jese hi wo palta,

*Swap*

Veer ne agle hi pal waapas se apni glass Pranjal ke glass se exchange kar dii.

Pranjal : Ohh! Wo lady? Hmph~ Interior decor ke showrooms hai unke. Already unka visiting card hai mere paas.

Pranjal ne jeb me se ek safed card nikaalte hue Veer ko chamkaane ki koshish kii.

Par Veer bas muskuraa raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : That's so good for you!

Pranjal (mann me) : Of course Veer! Baahar se tu smile kar raha hai. Par andar hi andar jal raha hoga tu. Hahaha~

Pranjal : Arre ye kya? Tumne drink nahi lii?

Veer : Aap ne ek ghooth nahi piya aur mujhe drink karwa rahe ho?

Pranjal : Arre isme kya? Ye lo!

Kehte hue Pranjal gataagat saari cold drink pee gaya. Ye soch ke ki drugged waali drink Veer ke side hai. Aur usne jo pee wo normal thi. Par usse kya pata tha ki kuch derr me hi uske pait me bhuchaal aane waala tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab aapne pee hai toh mujhe toh peeni hi padegi.

Aur fir...

*Gulp* *Gulp* *Gulp*

Veer dheere dheere saari drink pee gaya. Jese jese glass me maujood drink Veer ke pait me jaa rahi thi, wese wese Pranjal ki muskuraahat bhi felti jaa rahi thi.

Pranjal : Good! Hahaha! Ye hui na baat!

Veer : Ye taste kuch ajeeb sa kyu hai?

Pranjal : H-Huh? N-Nahi toh? Mujhe toh ekdum sahi laga.

Veer : Aisa? Well...

Pranjal : A-Anyways! Ab jald hi hamaari baari hai gifts dene ki. Be prepared.

Aur Pranjal sharaarti bhari muskaan lete hue waha se nikal gaya. Veer toh jese bas usse chomu bana raha tha. Usne jaan bujh ke aisa kaha tha taaki Pranjal ko lage ki waqai Veer ne wo drugged drink pee lii. Jab ki aisa koi case hi nahi tha. Veer toh perfectly fine tha. Par Pranjal? Not so much!

Arohi aur Kavya bhi idhar udhar sabse milke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke saath hi aake khadi ho gayi.

Kuch derr ke baad jab sabhi ne gifts de diya. Toh bas ab parivaar waale hi gifts dene ke liye bache hue the.

Par uske pehle Manorath kuch kehna chaahte the.

Mic ke aate hi unhone sabhi guests ki orr dekha aur bolna shuru kiya, "Aaj!!! Aaj mere liye... Ye bada hi khushi ka mauka hai. Mein... Jo apni saari zindagi me aap jese itne preeya logo se jud paaya, ye mere liye saubhaagya ki baat hai. Inn beete saalo me... Jo kuch bhi... Jo kuch bhi mene kamaaya tha. Unke do bade hisse mere pote Veer aur Pranjal ke naam kar chuka hu mein. Aaj! Aaj mein apni iss zimmedaari se muqt ho chuka hu. Aap sabhi yaha aaye, mera maan rakha... Uske liye boht boht Dhanyavaad! Aur... Mere pote... Ye mere do pote, mere liye heera hai. Inki raah me aap inka ho sake toh zaroor saath dena. Bas! Yahi kehna chaahunga. Dhanyavaad!!!"

Aur taaliyo se poora hall goonj utha.

Arohi : It's time for our gift.

Kavya : Hmm hmm! Chalo bhaiya!

Veer : Wait!

Arohi : Hmm?

Veer : Pranjal bhaiya gift dene jaa rahe hai. Look! I think unka gift boht bada hai.

Veer ki baat sunn dono hi behne stage ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Pranjal waqai kaafi kuch cheeze leke aaya tha.

Jaise hi wo muskuraate hue stage par chadha...

*Gudgudgud*

"Huh!??"

Uska pait andar se gudgud hua. Shayad drug ne apna kaam karna shuru kar diya tha.

Andar se pait aisi marod maar raha tha uska ki uss se khada nahi hua jaa raha tha achanak se.

Wo apne face ke expressions ko chhupaate hue aage badha. Kyuki ab photos bhi click ho rahi thi. Itni lights me aur itni bheed me aaj pehli baar Pranjal ko andar se dhak dhak ho rela tha.

"Shit!!"

Wo dheere dheere aage aaya. Aur tabhi...

Uski gaand se jese koi cheez baahar nikalne ka prayaas karne lagi. Pranjal ka muh aisa tha jese abhi usne koi kadvi dawaai kha lii ho.

Apni gaand ko sikod ke wo aage badha aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

"Y-Ye gift... Y-Ye... Ughh! Special gift... Ye... Mein... Dada jii ke liye... Dada... Dada jii ke liye..."

Aur tabhi...

*Phuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

"Huh?"

"Hmm?"

Ek zordaar awaaz Pranjal ki gaand se aayi.

Aisa laga maano kisi ne chinghaada baja diya ho. Ya bhopu...

"Cough cough!!! Mein ye dada jii ke liye..."

Pranjal ne khaaste hue apni shehnaai ki dhun ko cover up karne ki koshish kii, par sab bekaar tha kyuki agle hi pal...

*Phuuuuuuusssssssss*

*Phuuuuiiiiiiiiiii*

*Phurururururuuuuuuuu*

Maano jese kisi ne aatishbaazi shuru kar dii ho. Upar se jidhar wo khada tha, uske theek peeche Manorath ne apna mic ka stand rakha tha. Mic seedha Pranjal ki gaand ki orr focused tha.

Shor hone ke bawajood sabhi ne wo awaaz suni thi.

Suni kya, jo aas paas Pranjal ke khade the, unhone toh soongh bhi lii.

"Yuuuukkkkk!!! Gwaaakkkk!! Chhheeee~"

"Ye kya hai??? Kisi ne paada.... Chheee~"

"Arre... Ye... Isne... Isne paada."

"Aise mauke par... Aisi harqat! Chhee~ Yukkk!! Mujhe vomiting aa rahi hai."

"Mummyyyyy badbu aa rahi hai... Waaaaa~"

Uske peeche khade log sab uss se dur bhaag gaye.
Koi naak pakad ke khada tha toh koi dur bhaag raha tha.

Aur Pranjal apni roti hui shaqal bana ke forun hi Dada jii ko gift Diya aur seedha washroom ki orr bhaag gaya.

Arohi aur Kavya wahi khadi hairaan aur sharminda reh gayi thi. Manorath khud behad sharminda the. Vivek khade hoke muskura raha tha. Toh wahi Karunesh gusse me tha. Aur Brijesh Veer ko dekh raha tha. Shayad aaj wo apne bete par proud tha?

Uske baad Veer ki baari jab aayi toh Veer ne Dada jii ko ek bhagwaan jii ki murti gift kii.

Sabke gifts lene ke baad finally, khaana shuru hua aur Banquet ke khatam hone ke baad sabhi jaane lage.

Par shuru se ant tak Pranjal kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Shayad wo bathroom me alag alag dhunn bana raha tha.

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Hotel ki hi terrace par iss waqt Arohi khadi hui thi.

Mand mand hawaein chal rahi thi aur uske baalo ko hawa me lehra rahi thi.

"You are alone here?"

Tabhi uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi toh woh mudi, paaya ki Veer khada hua tha.

Arohi : Hmm! Bas kuch nahi! Tum yaha?

Veer : Aapko dhundte hue hi aaya.

Arohi : Ohhh!

Veer : You look tensed!?

Arohi : Aaj... Dada jii ko sharminda hona pada.

Veer (smiles) : Ohh you mean!? Pranjal waali baat?

Arohi : Hmm~ But...

Veer : ?

Arohi : Why do I think ki tumhe pehle se pata tha?

Veer (smiles) : Of course mujhe pehle se pata tha.

Arohi (shocked) : Huh!?

Veer dheere se Arohi ke kaan ke paas aaya aur bola, "That drink was made for me."

Arohi : Hmm?

Par Arohi kuch samajh nahi paayi.

Veer : Pranjal! He mixed a constipation drug in my drink and wanted to give that to me.

Aur ab Arohi ko jese saari baat samajh aayi. Hairat ke maare uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Arohi : He... He.. what!?

Veer (smiles) : Yes! But I exchanged mine with his drink. Aur uske baad... Bas pataakho ki awaaz thi.

Arohi bhauchakki sii Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad wo shaant hui aur muskuraayi.

Arohi : You did him good! He deserves it.

Par ek pal ke liye wo ghabra bhi gayi. Kahi ye sab Veer ke saath hua hota toh? Veer ko usne dekha toh paaya ki Veer ekdum confident nazar aa raha tha. Aur wo neeche cars me jaate hue guests ko dekh raha tha.

Pata nahi kyu, par Arohi ko aaj Veer boht hi attractive lag raha tha.

Aur wo aage badhi... Apne honth leke... Uske gaal ki taraf...

Ki tabhi...

"Umm... Wese..."

Aur Veer mud gaya.

Veer : !????

Arohi : Mm!????

Veer aur Arohi dono ki nazre phati ki phati reh gayi thi. Kyuki...

Dono ke honth aapas me jude hue the. Arohi toh keval uske gaal ko chumna chaahti thi. Par utne me hi Veer palat gaya tha... Aur nateeja...

Arohi : Aaahhh!

Wo hadbada ke peeche hati aur bina Veer ko dekhe hi bhaag gayi.

Veer bechaara bas apni thodi kaapti hui ungli se apne honth par firaata reh gaya aur mann me bas yahi kehta raha...

'It... It was an accident!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Ye mega update hai. 5k words bhailog.
Like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka.

 

[Skkhan9818]

Waiting

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome update bhai

Veer ko 40% mil gaya.. shweta pagla gayi he bhumika ko naa milne se.... pranjal to bahut kaminaa he sari property hadap naa chahata he...Keara aur sonia ko bhi hotel me ana chahiye...

Superb .... update

BakI sab to samajh mein aaya, per Pranjal ko 40% nahin gale utar raha.

Oh fuck fuck no ....... bro kamse kam complete kar dete s#it ab Waite na hoga bro ab to jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi update Deni padegi

Waiting for Party

Nice update bro

nice update...
ab veer and pranjal is party me ek dusre ko kaise puzzal karte hai

Weting bro hamKa aor chaahi
isse पेट नही भरा

Superb Update

Superb update sir g. Is bar prinjal ki dhajiya udwa dena veer ke dwara hi jise sare pariwar walo ke samne ek naya veer dikhy or show off ke liye sonia or kira ki bhi entry karo sir g veer ke favor me jis se parivar ke logo ko bhi pata chale ki veer kya chij haaa or business me support mile kira ke naam ki veer ko

Superb update bhai

Mast update bhai

Awesome update

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update

awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,

Nice update

majedar update ..vivek ko fudi kaudi nahi di dada ji ne .bechara apne ki karmo se fans gaya wahi pranjal ne bhi uska saath chhod diya.
pranjal ka plan bhi pura kamiyab nahi ho paya aur veer ke jitni hi usko bhi property mili .
shweta ka bura haal ho gaya ye jaankar ki uski beti ko bhi kuch nahi diya dadaji ne aur upar se pati ka thappad bhi khana pada .

agar party me kaera ,suhana aati hai to wo veer ko hi jyada bhaw dengi ,pranjal to unke liye kuch hai hi nahi .

veer ke 2 stats 90 se upar pahuch gaye aur pata bhi nahi chal paya ..

Mean while : Shewta aur Vivek

Extraordinary update

Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya


Waiting for the next update bro

Mast update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Jhakkas update bhai

Amajing bro but ap status ma warewolf blessing likhna bhool gye shaya

Fantastic superb update

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update bro

Jabardast Werewolf bhai....

Jabardasttt Updateee.

Phir se cheating yaar...!
Aaj bhi aadha update 6od diya.....!
Jaldi next update dedo...!
Keep Writing...!

Nice updates

One of the bestcupdate

Nice update vro

Superb update

very nice bhai..

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update....

Nice update dear

Nice update

अप्रतिम update

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Ragini ke manma emotion jaage re. ...

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Prinjal ki plan bhi dhari rah gyi, aur veer 40 % ka malik ban gya

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Aarohi aur kavya ko mila 10 -10 % ko hathiyane ke liye ab prinjal kon sa chal chalta hai ye dekhna romancyak hoga.

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Aur rahi baat veer ki to rahne hi do.... Wo saala khud hi bahut bada bala problem hai usse kon problem de sakta h..

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Baaki story.. Lazabab thi...
Ab aage dekhna hai ki dada ji ke function me kya kya dhamal hone wala hai...

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Tab tak intezar rhega

Extraordinary update

Very nice update bro

Fantastic update bhai

Bahut hi shaandaar jaandaar update diya hai many many thanks

Shaandar update bro

Awesome update brother i am very excited for next update keep writing and Thursday night ko hi next update dena

Bohut sunder update thaa zaberdust wasay Veerko ab Ragini kay dil kee baat janjani caheya or uss koo phi apna pyar dena caheya khar let see Pranjal kun khud kee mundi turwana Cahta hay sala khar kutay kee mout aaty hay tuu woo saher kee turaf aata hay or Pranjal kee mout hee us ko Veer kee turaf dura rahi hay let see good going keep going

Zabardast update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Wah bhai maza aa Gaya magar pranjal ki waat lagane ka Intezar Hai Kab uski waat lagey aur specially uski asliyat khuley ki usne Dada ji per attack karwaya hain. Waisay adha Kela to हो hi Gaya uska jab dada ji ne 40% property uske ha waley kar di thee.

Nice update bhai.... Let's see how veer tackle pranjal

Nice update

nice1

Update update lajawab tha lekhak Sahab maja hi a Gaya aur aapane to mere man ki kar Di main chahta tha ki yah jo party hai yah iska ek alag update aaye jisne party ki puri details likhi hun Aisa nahin ki party detail dusre update mein nahin apan mangta ful detail vah bhi ek hi update mein aur yah wala update full satisfied update main socha tha vahi hua.

Veer ka surprise thoda wajani rakhana bhai...pranjal ke liye

superb awsm update
Eagerly waiting for party episode
mja to tb aye jb party me kaera aur sonali plus uski sis bhi aye aur vo 3no veer ke sath rhe.
Eagerly waiting plzz do cont asap
Takecare

Not enough words for this update.

Veer ka life hi change hojayega bahut jald...........

One of the best updates written till now.

शानदार bhai

Bht shi bs ab veer apni achai dikha ke ye property kisi or ko dan na dede ki bhai main to kma hi rha hu iski jrurt kisi or ko hai han ab veer ki trki ka sfur shuru ho Jaye to or maza ayega or iski maa ko b milwa do yr

Super update hai Bhai

Werewolf bhai story kitni ab tak hoi h half ya use kam ?

Thank U Werewolf bhai for the amazing update

badhiya shaandar update bhai
sonia n khane per bula ker veer ki date per le jaane wale misson ko asan ker dia
ab dekhte h gher per kia hota h or pranjal ka kia hot h
zaberdast

Very very very briliant update

Awesome maza a gya prh kr

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Bro har ek update ke sath curiosity badti Jaa rhi hai meri ki aage kya hoga or aap ekta kapoor ke serial ki tarah suspense me hi chod dete ho

Nice update

𝐖𝐚𝐚𝐡 𝐛𝐚𝐡𝐢 𝐦𝐚𝐳𝐚 𝐚𝐚 𝐠𝐚𝐲𝐚 𝐩𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐣𝐚𝐥 𝐤𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐞𝐡𝐫𝐞 𝐩𝐫 𝐡𝐚𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐢𝐚𝐧 𝐮𝐝𝐡𝐭𝐞 𝐡𝐮𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐤𝐡 𝐤𝐫 𝐦𝐚𝐳𝐚 𝐡𝐢 𝐚𝐚 𝐠𝐚𝐲𝐚 𝐤𝐲𝐮𝐧𝐤𝐢 𝐩𝐮𝐫𝐚 𝐤𝐚𝐚𝐦 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐞 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐧 𝐤𝐞 𝐡𝐢𝐬𝐚𝐚𝐛 𝐬𝐞 𝐧𝐡𝐢 𝐡𝐮𝐚 𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐛 𝐭𝐨 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐢 𝐛𝐚𝐫𝐛𝐚𝐚𝐝𝐢 𝐤𝐞 𝐝𝐢𝐧 𝐬𝐡𝐮𝐫𝐮 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐣𝐚 𝐫𝐡𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐤𝐲𝐮𝐧𝐤𝐢 𝐰𝐨𝐡 𝐧𝐡𝐢 𝐣𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐚 𝐤𝐢 𝐯𝐞𝐞𝐫 𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐩𝐚𝐫𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐞 𝐚𝐩𝐧𝐨 𝐤𝐚 𝐣𝐨 𝐝𝐢𝐥 𝐬𝐞 𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐩𝐲𝐚𝐫 𝐤𝐫𝐭𝐞 𝐲𝐚 𝐤𝐫𝐭𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐰𝐨 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐨𝐫 𝐣𝐢𝐬 𝐯𝐞𝐞𝐫 𝐧𝐞 𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐬𝐡 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐮 𝐤𝐨 𝐦𝐚𝐚𝐫 𝐝𝐢𝐲𝐚 𝐬𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐚𝐧 𝐤𝐨 𝐢𝐭𝐧𝐢 𝐛𝐚𝐚𝐫 𝐢𝐭𝐧𝐢 𝐛𝐮𝐫𝐢 𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐡 𝐬𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐲𝐚 𝐚𝐛 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐞 𝐫𝐚𝐬𝐭𝐞 𝐤𝐚 𝐤𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐚𝐝 𝐛𝐚𝐧 𝐧𝐞 𝐣𝐚 𝐫𝐡𝐚 𝐲𝐫 𝐩𝐫𝐚𝐧𝐣𝐚𝐥 𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐛 𝐭𝐨 𝐯𝐞𝐞𝐫 𝐤𝐢 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥𝐢𝐠𝐞𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐛𝐡𝐢 𝟗𝟓 𝐬𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡 𝟗𝟔 𝐨𝐫 𝐥𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐬 𝟕𝟓 𝐡𝐨 𝐜𝐡𝐮𝐤𝐢 𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐭𝐨 𝐰𝐨 𝐮𝐬𝐤𝐞 𝐚𝐬 𝐩𝐚𝐬𝐬 𝐛𝐡𝐢 𝐧𝐡𝐢 𝐟𝐚𝐭𝐤𝐧𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐥𝐚 𝐨𝐫 𝐲𝐞 𝐬𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐚𝐧 𝐤𝐚 𝐜𝐡𝐢𝐦𝐜𝐡𝐚 𝐣𝐢𝐬𝐤𝐚 𝐯𝐞𝐞𝐫 𝐥𝐢𝐦𝐛 𝐭𝐨𝐝 𝐝𝐢𝐲𝐚 𝐚𝐛 𝐭𝐨 𝐰𝐨 𝐛𝐡𝐢 𝐯𝐞𝐞𝐫 𝐤𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐭𝐡 𝐡𝐨 𝐥𝐢𝐲𝐚 ( 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐡𝐞 𝐌𝐚𝐳𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐫𝐢 𝐦𝐚𝐢 𝐡𝐢 𝐒𝐚𝐡𝐢 ) 𝐒𝐥𝐨𝐠𝐚𝐧 𝐤𝐢 𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐤𝐚 𝐛𝐡𝐢 𝐉𝐚𝐥𝐝𝐢 𝐤𝐡𝐚𝐤𝐡 𝐡𝐨 𝐣𝐚𝐲𝐞𝐠𝐢 𝐚𝐛 𝐭𝐨

𝐁𝐮𝐭 𝐁𝐡𝐚𝐢 𝐚𝐣 𝐤𝐚 𝐀𝐩𝐤𝐚 𝐲𝐞 𝐮𝐩𝐝𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐩𝐢𝐜𝐡𝐥𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐥𝐨 𝐬𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐝𝐚 𝐜𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐚 𝐥𝐠𝐚

Bhai abhi to sirf beginning hai ek arc hi complete hua hai ab dheere dheere story aage badhegi

Awesome hit update

Har upadate padhne ke baad Bas agle upadate ka hi intezar rahata hai..
Awesome story...

Brilliant update as usual brother ...

Can't wait for next update ....

Keep posting

Amazing update brother

Is party me hungama hoga

Nice update bhai
Next update me pranjal ko mu ki khani padegi esa lagta he aur is party me kaira ya Sonia aa jaye to veer ki to nikal padegi

Shanadar....Jabardast....Zindabad

Another wonderful update

oy chicha kia mast wala phenke ho maza a gawa dekh parh k

yechi Av avy ga maga

dada ji n jaydaad ka batwara ker dia jisme mile 40% 40% VEER or Pranjal ko
vivek ko dada n aina dekhaya ki veer k saath jo bura karega uske saath aisa hi hoga
lekin sabse maze daar baat jo huwi wo thi pranjal ko apne bade bhai ko bhi dhoka dena
ab dekhna yeh h jo pranjal soch raha h kavya or arohi se unka hissa lena woh tow lene se raha kyonki kavya tow dene se rahi or arohi tow uske poori history janti h ki dada k or veer k saath kia kia tha
baherhal dekhte h is party m kon kis per bhari padta h
behad shaandar lajawab update bhai

जायदाद का तो बटवारा हो गया l अब देखना है कि पार्टी में क्या होता है l बहुत ही अच्छा अपडेट भाई

Nice update bhai, suspense me.chod diya, if kaera and soniya and suhana will come here then pranjal know his veer range....

Fabulous update

Mind blowing update bhai

Mind blowing update

Mast update bhai ab pranjal ki bat lage gi

Superb updates

Me ye story regularly read karta tha par aab time nahi mil raha Sorry bhai 39 update ke baad meine koi bhi update read nahi kar paya... par bahat jald free ho jaunga... fir se pahele ki tarah read karta rahunga aur reviews deta rahunga...

Jabardast mindblowing superbbb speechless update..........
keep posting bhai..........
waiting for next update...........

Waiting

Rply plz

Bohut sunder update thaa zaberdust wasay Veerko ab Ragini kay dil kee baat janjani caheya or uss koo phi apna pyar dena caheya khar let see Pranjal kun khud kee mundi turwana Cahta hay sala khar kutay kee mout aaty hay tuu woo saher kee turaf aata hay or Pranjal kee mout hee us ko Veer kee turaf dura rahi hay let see good going keep going

Behtreen update

Mast Update Tha Bro

Ragni Duniya Ke Hisab Se Veer Ko Chalna Sikha Rahi Thi Kyoki Aj Kal Ki Duniya Me Jada Tar Log Apne Matlab Ke Liye Hi Rishte Banate Hai Aur Fir Apna Kam Hone Ke Baad Tu Kon Aur Main Kon.

Veer Anjan Hai Ki Usne Ragni Ke Dil Me Halchal Paida Kar Di Hai Ab Dekhna Hai Ye Halchal Keya Roop Leyti Hai Kyoki Abi Veer Ke Dil Me Ragni Ke Liye Kuch Eysa Nahi Hai Sayad Baki Veer Ke Dil Ke Bare Me Pari Aache Se Bata Sakti Hai.

Dada Ji Ne Apni Jayedaat Sabme Bant Di Vivek Aur Bhumika Ko Chhod, Jisme Veer Ko Pyaar Ki Vaja Se 40% Hissa Mila Aur Pranjal Ko Apni Chalaki Se 40% Hissa Mila, Arohi Aur Kavya Ko Bi Veer Ki Vaja Se 10 10% Hisa Mil Hi Gayea, Vivek To Thera Hi Stupid Usey To Keya Hi Milna Tha, Bhumika Ko Apni Maa Ki Vaja Se Kuch Nahi Mila.

Bhumika Ko Kuch Na Milne Sheweta Hil Gayi, Jab Ham Kuch Pane Ke Liye Jee Jaan Lagate Hai Aur Agar Vo Hame Na Miley To Dukh Hona Aur Gussa Hona Jayeaj Hai, Baat Ye Nahi Thi Ki Bhumika Ke Pass Kuch Nahi Tha Baat Ye Thi Ki Sabko Mila To Usey Bi Milna Chahiyea Tha.

Pranjal Ka Rang Vivek Ne Hi Dekh Liya Agar Vivek Ko Kuch Hissa Milta To Sayad Usey Pranjal Ki Soch Ke Bare Me Pata Nahi Chalta Par Ab Pranjal Ke Liye Vivek Kisi Kam Ka Nahi, Ab To Vo Arohi Aur Kavya Se Unke Hisse Ki Jayedaad Haradpne Ki Soch Raha Hai Uske Baad Vo Veer Ka Hissa Us Se Chin Ne Ka Plan Banaye Ga.

Veer Ne Apne Stats Ko Almost Full Kar Diya Hai Jo Mere Liye Ab Bi Thoda Ajeeb Hai Par Dekhte Hai Writer Shaib Ne Kuch To Socha Hi Hoga.

Ab To Party Me Dekhte Hai Pranjal Ya Veer Keya Karte Hai Dhamaka To Jarur Hoga Kisi Na Kisi Tarha Ka.

Mind blowing

Vivek be like : Koyi poochhe ke hamse khata kya huyi, kya se kya ho gaye dekhte dekhte.

Update ki shuruaat huyi Ragini aur Veer ke beech chalte us scene se.. aage badhne se pehle update ke end mein batayi gayi Ragini ki favourability ko dhyan mein rakhna zaroori hai... Favourability of 70 means a lot, khaskar tab jab Kewal Suman, Juhi aur Kavya ka number hi us se bada hai... It clearly shows that it's not normal between Ragini and Veer... The relationship there was mentioned as close friend and the two are really good friends for sure... Ragini finds Veer as the person she can confide in, the person with whom she can share her feelings... Aur jo gesture Veer ka tha, that touch on her waist, that kiss.. I'm speculating a turn of events between the two very soon... Especially taking into consideration that Ragini may be sending the divorce notice soon to Vivek... Filhal Ragini ko bhi shayad realise nahi hua hai ke exactly wo Veer ke liye kya feel karti hai but it's just a matter of a couple of conversations between the two, and Ragini would be clear that she has started Falling for Veer...

Idhar as I was expecting, Balhaar Doctors ke chakkar laga raha hai ke uska haath theek ho jaaye but Limbo Skill ki badaulat aur saath hi jo laalach Veer ne use diya hai to make him the new Slogan.. Balhaar Veer ka paaltu ban ne waala hai... And If, If Slogan is killed by Veer, which is obvious & in between Balhaar becomes a trustworthy person then Veer will have his own new gang, that would be the biggest thing he has achieved till now, of course it seems to be hilarious to call making a gang an achievement but what challenges he's going to face in future, he needs that support! If Aatish & Slogan, this was the level of the initial negative subjects, one can only imagine what will come in his way once he establishes his business...

The most anticipated one, matter of property! First of all the distribution that Manorath has done is - 40% to Veer and Pranjal each and 10% to both Kavya and Aarohi... Vivek aur Bhumika ko kuchh nahi milne waala tha ye clear hi tha par jo baat mujhe pasand nahi aayi wo thi ke Manorath ne Ragini ka zikr tak nahi kiya... Theek hai ke wo ab inke saath nahi rehti par ab bhi wo is ghar ki bahu hai, aur jo Vivek ne uske saath kiya tha uske baad to? Of course Ragini ne property se kuchh nahi lena tha, she would've refused to do so par Manorath ko at least ek baar us se baat karni chahiye thi... Shows that he's not that nice as I expected him to be... Pranjal ka plan flop hua hai, par ab uske dimaag mein ek nayi khichdi pakni shuru ho gayi hai... Firstly, wo Kavya aur Aarohi ka hissa cheen na chahta hai & then Veer... Par aisa kuchh hoga nahi Because Veer is ready with a plan too...

Vivek ... Dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka naa ghaat ka . Kya mast kaata hai iska Pranjal ne, biwi gayi, aur ab property bhi gayi... And I'm sure ki jald hi business mein bhi iske tote udne waale hain... Would love to see him repenting in front of Ragini and In answer to that Ragini will tell him that she loves Veer ... Bechara kya haal hoga iska fir!!

In the end, the full status of Veer was shown, 90+ in both Strength and Intelligence, especially Intelligence, now I'm damn sure that Pranjal is going to ask himself why he tried to mess with Veer... Secondly Agility & Endurance is 65, which on combining with 90+ strength and Intermediate level Martial Arts skill... Wowww! Veer can handle many opponents at the same time now, not to forget the help Limbo skill will provide... Appearance, straight away becoming 75, firstly Aarohi & Kavya would be shocked to see him! Then Maybe Bhumika too, Sonia and Kaera's next meeting with Veer would definitely make some noise inside their hearts...

Baaki, favourability zyadatar logon ki utni hi hai jitni ke expected thi, top par Suman hai, of course being a “Loyal Slave”... Juhi's 85 is huge too! Afterall she has her best friend and Maamu too in Veer... Sonia and Kaera's favourability have seen a huge Rise... Kaera's status was having “Best - Friend” written there, and that's obvious when we know that Kaera has only one friend as in Veer... Aabha and Sonali have seen a rise too, I felt like Shreya's favourability hasn't increased that much because she hadn't met Veer from a considerable amount of time too... But Nidhi's 54?? I don't know whether the incident of Kaera hugging Veer has hampered it or what, but In this Familigia Arc Nidhi's favourability is going to break all the bars, I think!

A very beautiful update bro! The scene of Shweta shouting against her Father In Law for her daughter... I loved it, then Brijesh slapping her showed up with the fact that, leave alone everything but Brijesh is a good son at least! Ragini & Veer's scene was again Very beautiful one, these small incidents which spark the relationship between the story characters are fun to read and you're a master at writing such scenes... Distribution of Property and everyone's different reactions to it, was again presented in a superb way...

Next Update would be an exciting one too, let's see what happens in the party, as Pranjal & Veer collide with their plans!

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

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वाह अंत में stats देखके मज़ा आ गया। अब वीर को सिर्फ 104 अंक जोड़ने है अपने stats में, यानी की उसे 208 अंक चाहिए। इतना तो वो किसी भी छोटे मोटे mission से कमा लेगा। क्यों लेखक साहब सही है ना।

Wow, to ab Veer har tarah se strong ho chuka hai bas property se thoda dheela tha wo bhi ho gaya. Ab dekhna hai ki wo Prajal ko uske hi game mein kaise harata hai. Superb update

लाज़वाब और बेहतरीन प्रस्तुति रही
प्रंजल और वीर
जाहिर सी बात है वीर बाजी मारेगा जिससे प्रंजल के मन में और भी जहर भर जाएगा
अब किसी भी लिहाज से वीर कोई आम नहीं रहा है l बेशक परी जानती है पर है तो अब खास हो ना
बढ़िया बहुत badjiy

Werewolf bhai yeh review hai ki update

Superb fantastic update waiting for next

Fantastic update
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Sandar update maja agaya

Intezar...

Shandaar update...

Awesome as always

Fantastic update

Lajwab update bhai

Awesome update

Nice update Bhai...

Werewolf brother

किसी के साथ सेक्स सीन दिखाइए please

Kaera सोनिया या फिर रागिनी के साथ

या फिर कब होगा वीर इनमें से किसी के साथ सेक्स प्लीज़ बताइए

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Nice update bhai

To veer ko 40 % property mil gai h aur pranjal ko bhi 40% jo ki uski umeed se kam h

Aur shweta ko kuch nhi mila
To ab ye dekhte h ki shweta ye baat pcha paati h ya nhi yaa fir koi bdi planning kregi

Waiting for next update bhai

Behtreen story

महोदय,आपके इस उपन्यास के हर अनुछेद के पाठक होने के नाते मेरा एक अनुरोध रहेगा। यहाँ पर सबका नजर है मिस काएरा या मिस सोनिया या रागीनिजी के संग संपर्क लेकर। लेकिन मुझे याद है मिस सुहाना द्वारा वीर के संग बातचीत जिसमे बहुत कुछ बोल गयी थी मिस सुहाना ने। इसी लिए एक अनुरोध रहेगा की अगर हो सके तो एक भयानक steamy session सुहानाजी के साथ अगर हो पाये तो इनलोग से पहले। क्योंकि मुझे लगता है जो जितना टेंरी होगी उनको कब्जा करने का मजा कुछ और ही है। आप लेखक है आप अपने हिसाब से ही लिखिए लेकिन मेरा सुझाब अगर पसंद आया तो देख लीजिएगा प्लीज। धन्यबाद

Aj Update Aayega Bhai

Ha ha ha aapki last story ka hangover Ho rakha hain abhi tak tabhi to aur isme last story ke corrector thok diye.

Zabardast fantastic update

Bahut hi awala update diya bhai. Eske update ke pichle 2 updates me kahani bahut hi jyada slow ho gaii thi our usme kucch khash matter bhi nhi nhi tha but pichla update ? Bhai kya hi kahe... Kahani ke top three update me se ek tha ye wala.

Ghar ke bhedi Lanka dhaye. Just like prinjal. Agar lalchi ke ministry ka election ho to ye nirvirodh vijai ho jaye... Btw kucch bhi kaho bahut sharp mind ka lounda hai ye prinjal... I think haar baar ki trahh function me bhi best performance dega... Beherhaal intezaar hai veer ke real mom n sis ki dhamakedar entry ka

Waiting Werewolf bhai

For completed 1.1k pages on your story thread.....

Mast update Bhai

Congratulations for 1.1k pages

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wolf bhai congrats aapki story sy inspire hoky Bollywood ki epic movie arahi hai ATTACK same to same hamrai pari ki tarha ak program hai us main check kar laina trailer ✌

Pichli baar bhi yahi kah k subha 8:9-10 par diya tha janii

Good update bhai.
Yaha to veer ki halat patli ho rakhi he kyuki uski bhabhi aaj sab khabar lene me lagi he uski. Hona bhi chahiye esa har waqt kuch kaam se bahar jaye aur hospital me mile to esa hi hoga ab. Thoda planning se kaam karega ab. Akela Jake bhidega to maar hi khayega. Ab yaha veer ne bhi apni taraf se ek khabri bana liya he. Veer ki ko daant padd rahi he to ye sonali ko majha aa raha he. Dekhte he uska bhi aage. Wo bhi aage Malik kehti ho jayegi. Ragini ke dil me abhi kya chal raha he use bhi nahi pata bas suman ko thoda ehsaas he shayad. Par abhi kuch clear nahi keh sakte.
Yaha veer ke purane ghar aaj faisla aane wala he. Har koi aas laga ke betha he properly ke bare me janne ke liye. Aarohi aur kavya dono ko jese matlab nahi he bas pariwar ke sath hi bethi hui he veer ka sath dene ke liye.
Manorath ji ne veer aur pranjal ko jyada hissa diya he. Wahi pranjal ka plan bhi aadha fail hua. Aadha isiliye kyuki property to mil hi chuki he usko. Ab kese na kese wo try jarur karega kavya aur aarohi se unka hissa lene ke liye. Veer ke khilaf bhi kuch na kuch karega hi. Par ab lagta he parda fass hone wala he uska.
Vivek ko bhi footi kodi na mili aur uper se apne hi sage bhai se dhoka mila wo alag. Vivek ab aage jab pranjal ka asli chahera samne aayega tab wo vivek chhut sakta he pranjal ke sar pe sara iljaam daal ke. Aur vivek yahi karne ki sochega kyuki dada ko chot pahuchne wala plan samne aaya to dono ko kuch na milega to lagta vivek hath piche hata lega. Pranjal ki halat kharab hone wali he ab se.
Yaha shweta ke sath bhi achha hi hua. Usse sirf apni beti se matlab he jo galat to nahi he par wo kisi aur ke haq ka to nahi maang sakti na. Bhumika ko inn sab me nahi padna. Kuch bhaav bhi nahi dikh rahe uske. Wo ma khush he na dukhi. Bas apni maa ka kaha kar rahi he aaj tak. Brijesh ne gaal hi laal kar diya. Aur manorath ji ki baat se laga ki ye paheli baar nahi hua shayad bhavna ke sath bhi hua hoga. Kya pata ??
Wahi veer ne bhi appearance me points dale he to uska asar bhi dikhega hi.
Nidhi ki favourability abhi utni nahi badhi jitna socha tha. Kaera ki kafi badh chuki he aur Sonia ki bhi. Par ek character he jisse koi nahi jeet sakta wo he juhi . Jab Nidhi pyaar me padegi to dekh lena usko bhi jalan hogi apni bachhi se ki kyu veer se chipakti rehti he . Aur phir dhruv bhi to hoga .
Ab next update me lagta he thoda hungama hoga. Pranjal ka ab asli roop lao bhai sabke samne.
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai.

Congratulations on 1100 pages

Congratulations on completing 1100 pages.

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Bhai update kab ayega bus ye bata do.
mujhe pata hai aap sirf week me do update dete ho or aapke update ka hi me intejaar karta hoon.
Bud ye pata nahi chalta ki week me kis kis din aap update dete ho

According to me the way you write sir, I don't think that anyone would be able to compete you in writing skills.
Huge fan

Waiting.........for update

1100 pages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan or shubhkamnaye bhai....

Bhai thoda thoda bolte adha ghanta ho gaya

Update 70 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!
Update 69 ke baad ke comments ke replies kal raat me aaenge.

 

[Devil hunter123]

Fantastic mind-blowing super update

 

[Scorpionking]

Amazing mind blowing fantastic update bhai maza aa gaya.ab dekhte hai agle update m kya dhamaal hota hai.

 

[kingxlegion]

Super duper update and this is a best story on xforum now. I am a long silent reader of you but this time you make me to break my silence. Thank you for such a nice story.

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[Sweetwords]

Maza a gya prh kr specially wo atishbazi wala scene prh kr Pranjal ko maza sikha diya good

 

[sweet but psycho]

Nice