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Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?
Veer : Alright!
Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.
Veer : Hmm~
Suhana : Let's go now!!
Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.
Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!
Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,
Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?
Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya : I can gift you one you know?
Suhana : No thanks!!!
Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.
Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,
Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.
Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.
Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?
Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.
Suhana : Umm... I guess...
Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,
Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~
Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.
Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.
Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.
Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.
[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]
'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'
Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?
Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?
Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.
Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.
Suhana : Fine~
Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~
Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?
Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.
Veer : Whaaatttt?
Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?
Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~
Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?
Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.
Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.
Suhana : Stop it Divya...
Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.
Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.
'I see~'
Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~
Veer : Ohh!
Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.
'Ohh! I see now!'
[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]
Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.
Suhana : No! I don't need one.
Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.
Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.
[This bitttttcchhhh~]
Suhana (frowns) : Divya...
Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!
Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...
Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?
Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.
Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.
Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.
Divya : Okay~ Here we are...
Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.
Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.
Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.
Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?
Veer : It's nice...
Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.
Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.
Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?
Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.
Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.
Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.
Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~
Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.
[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]
Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.
Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'
'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'
[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]
'Naah!'
30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?
Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.
'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'
[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]
'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'
[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]
'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'
[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]
'Go ahead!'
*Ding*
[All done Master.]
[Ye raha aapka full status.]
'Good!!'
***
Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.
Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.
*Thud*
Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.
Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.
Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...
'Huh!!???'
Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.
'There's something wrong.'
Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.
Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.
Divya : Evidence?
Ladka : Yes ma'am!
Divya : Okay! You can leave now!
Aur wo chala gaya.
Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.
Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...
Suhana : This...
Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.
Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.
Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.
Veer : And what about me?
Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.
Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.
Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!
Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.
Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.
Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.
Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,
"You are not allowed here brat!!!"
Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.
White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.
Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!
Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...
Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...
Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.
'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'
[Yes master!!!]
Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,
Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.
Veer : I see...
Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.
Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.
Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...
Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?
Suhana : Exactly!!!
Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...
Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.
Qatl ki...
Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...
Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.
Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.
Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.
Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.
Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...
"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"
Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.
Khaas kar uss paper ko...
Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.
Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Soul shall burn!!!
Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.
Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.
Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.
Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...
Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.
Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.
Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...
Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...
Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.
Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.
Aur uske baad...
*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*
Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.
Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.
Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.
Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.
Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.
Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.
Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.
Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.
Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.
Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?
Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.
Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??
Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.
Suhana : Hmm...
Divya : You will help me. Right?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!
Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?
Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..
Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...
Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.
Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.
Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.
Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??
Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...
Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.
"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."
Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?
Suhana : Divya?????
Veer : !!??
Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...
Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"
Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.
***
Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.
Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.
Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.
"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.
"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."
"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"
"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."
"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"
Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.
Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.
"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"
Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,
"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."
Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.
*Thud*
Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.
Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.
Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.
'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'
***
Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.
'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'
Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.
Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.
Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,
"Hello?"
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not full recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting!
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I promise kal review dungi...
Have a good night Sir. And sweet dreams.
Maja aa gaya ....jabardast update
Ab lagta hai real action start hoga
Fantastic update bhai
Welcome back bhai.. Excellent update.. Bhai..
Awesome update
Amazing update
Ragni bhabhi as sunny Leone
quirious for next move…
Zabardast fantastic
Zabardast fantastic update
Jabardast update bhai
Fantastic Update Brother
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nice update .ye ragini kuch jyada hi kar baithi ,veer ke saath khule aam chuma chati aur uske baad sidha upar ke kapde nikal diye aur veer ko boobs chusne ko de diye
shweta ko thoda shak ho gaya hai ki ragini veer ko apna banana chahti hai ,
divya ko dekhkar achcha nahi laga pari ko aur usse sambhalkar rehne ko bhi kaha veer ko .
divya ka character thoda kharab lag raha hai aur uski baate ekdam ghinauni .gigolo bol diya veer ko par is baar veer ne divya ko maafi maangne pe majbur kar diya .
dekhte hai aisa kya matter hai jo ek detective ne suhana ko las vegas me bulaya aur kuch serious hai aisa kaha
Meg mega update superb
Wooohooooo wow boss...
Veer aur Ragini ka romance shuru ho hi gaya!! Aur kya zabardast scene create kare ho bhai
Maza hi aa gaya
Much much better than I expected...
The culmination of slow torture.. into blissful rupture!!
Ragini ke Slow cooker mein Pakte armaan achanak Garam doodh ki tarah ufan gaye...
The breast play, dirty talk, the flavoured kiss! The explosive mix of love fueled with lust Blew my senses away.
Ye mystic touch sahi mil gaya hero ko. Will help him thaw ice queens.
Is ability ki duration nahi mention kari?
The trip to Vegas will flesh out Suhana’s character and back story.
Love the interaction b/w veer and Pari.
Suhana to ek interesting character thi hi, ye Divya bhi kaafi complex bandi lag rahi hai. Time to time veer ko khud ko prove karna padega shayad.
Also Divya seems to have inherent shades of grey in her personality. Ye vamp type ki hai kaafi. Maybe not one of the good guys...
Maza ayega. After all complex characters make interesting stories intriguing!!!!
Waiting for next instalment with bated breath. And hats off to your continual streak
Update 94 & 95...
Shweta... Let's start with her! Shweta aatm glani se bhari huyi hai ye baat to hum sabhi jaante hain, jo vyavahar uska Veer ke liye itne saalon mein tha, uske kaaran aaj ki tareekh mein Shweta paschatap ki bhavna se bhari huyi hai... Aise mein Veer ki har chhoti – chhoti baat ko, uski pasand – napasand note karna bilkul bhi aashcharyajanak nahi hai... Kuchh din pehle Veer ki nazren Shweta ki chhatiyon par thi aur is baat se wo bhi bhali bhaanti avgat hai... Pehle jahaan ye baat use Veer ka uske urozon ke prati aakarshan laga tha wahin ab wo is baat ko galat tareeke se samajh baithi... Uska ye samajh na ki Veer ko bachpan se hi Maa ka pyaar aur saath hi Maa ka doodh, joki vatsalya ka shayad sabse bada pehlu hai, Veer us se vanchit raha... Aur is baat ka doshi wo khud ko bhi maanti hai...
Nateejtan, Shweta ne poore prakran ka ek doosra hi matlab nikaalte huye Veer ko neend mein hi stanpaan karwane ka prayas kiya parantu jald hi use apni bhool ka ehsas bhi ho gaya ki ab na to Veer ek bacha raha hai aur naa hi wo ab use stanpaan karwa sakti hai... Parantu ye ghatna, kaafi hai batane ke liye ki Shweta ka samarpan Veer ke liye kis hadh tak pahunch chuka hai... Uska Hotel ko chhodkar Veer par apna poora dhyan kendrit karne ka nirnay, bhi isi baat ka saboot hai... Ragini ke saath jab Veer shopping ke liye nikla, tab bhi Shweta ka reaction unexpected sa tha... Seems like Shweta is becoming possessive for Veer... Filhaal ke liye ek Maa ke taur par hi parantu uska Veer se maafi paane ke liye chal raha sangharsh uske Maa – Bete ke Prem ki disha aur dasha donon hi badal sakta hai...
Bottom Line is... Shweta's love for her son and the over possessiveness due to her past behaviour, might just change the course of her love, resulting in complete chaos!! Moreover, Shweta's decisions in future will have a huge impact on Bhumika & Veer's relationship too... As soon as Bhumika will come to know about what I'm expecting Shweta to do (if it happens), we can expect another chaotic event taking place in the story...
Ragini... Uske baare mein kya hi kahen? Filhaal ke liye sirf teen hi females aisi nazar aati hain kahani mein jo Veer ko control kar sakti hain... Controlling him, has a deep meaning here, Veer, as we all know he's an Alpha Male, jo aage chalkar upgrade bhi ho sakta hai... Aise mein, us trait ki presence mein Veer ki personality ko hamper karke uske actions ko apne hisaab se chalana, isn't it amazing..? So, alongside Kaera & the full fledged Kaera, Ragini seems to be the third lady who can do this... The intimate scene between them points towards this only... Abhi tak Veer uske sawaal ka jawaab dhoond nahi paaya hai aur naa hi wo Ragini ke liye apni feelings ko samajh paaya hai, but fir bhi us pal Veer ke mann ko wo karne par majboor kar diya Ragini ne jo wo chaahti thi...
Kaafi samay se is sabki apeksha thi hi Ragini se, jaisa pehle bhi main kayi baar keh hi chuka hoon ki divorce ke baad Ragini ki personality mein badlav aaya hai... She seems to be much more bold now, as compared to what she was when Vivek was her husband... She seems to have developed a relationship with Veer,which is her life now... Ragini ke liye aur adhik intezar karna ab sambhav nahi hai... Oopar se Veer ka khulasa ki wo Las Vegas ja raha hai, nischit hi iska bhi rk impact hua hoga Ragini par... Khair, ab mudde ki baat ye hai ki jaise hi Veer Las Vegas se waapis lautega use Ragini dwara halaal kiye jaane ki poori sambhavna hai... (Shweta can play the role of an obstacle here)...
Arohi & Kavya... Both the sisters are having a big difference in their personality... On one hand, Arohi seems to be the introvert kinda girl who develops a bit of timidness in Veer's presence too & on the other hand, Kavya, who seems to be a flamboyant girl, who knows the exact way to get what she wants... But donon ko ek cheez samaan bhi banati hai aur wo hai dono ki Veer ke liye feelings... Dono ne hi apna first kiss Veer ke saath share kiya, joki unka bhai hai... Aur donon ke hi mann mastishk mein us ehsas ki ek gehri chhap pad chuki hai jo shayad ab kabhi naa mite... Khair, Arohi ka Veer ke dwara gift ki gayi baaliyon ke liye pratham baar apne kaan chhidwana, jabki use is se dar bhi lagta tha tab bhi, points towards another girl developing secret love for Veer, after Shreya... Kavya! Wo jaise hi realise karegi ki wo Veer ke liye kya feel karne lagi hai, mere khayal mein posters naa lagwa de wo kahin... But yup! She's definitely cute, her antics and her conversations, all are really cute...
Karan... Seems like a good match for Kritika... Kritika is attracted towards Veer aur ho bhi kyon naa, jab Kaera aur Sonia jaisi pariyan Veer mein interested hain to wo bechaari kis khet ki mooli hai... But I don't think ki Veer ka dhyan bhi uspar gaya hoga, inn thoughts ke saath... Aise mein Karan can be the perfect guy for her but kya wo Veer ke prati apne attraction se aage nikal kar Karan ke liye feelings develop kar paayega... Ye prakran nischit hi behad rochak hone waala hai...
Suhana ne Veer ke oopar 3 favours kiye the jinmein se pehla lautane ka samay aa chuka hai... Divya, jiski madad Slogan ke waqt li thi Suhana ne, usne Suhana ko Las Vegas bulaya tha... And Suhana took Veer with herself too... Suhana beshak jaanti hai ki wahaan use khatron ka saamna karna padega aur Veer jo kaarname abhi tak kar chuka hai, aise mein Suhana ka uspar bharosa karna poori tarah jaayaz hai... Par Veer anjaan hai us sabse jo uske aage aane waala hai... House Of Killers arc ki shuruaat ho chuki hai, aur aasha yahi hai ki ek aur Villain kahani mein aane waala hai... Kya wahi Pahadi waali ladki hogi? Ya fir wo Priya jo Slogan ke saath thi? Ya fir koyi naya character? Beshak romanchak hone waala hai ye prakran...
Khair, Divya, Niharika ka ek level neeche waala version lagti hai, not by power or position but by personality/character... Veer ke prati uski favourability 35 ke aas paas thi, aur ye kewal Suhana se uske baare mein sunkar... Par jo kuchh airport par hua, beshak Veer ke andar ka Alpha Male aise hi use jaane nahi dega, lagta yahi hai ki Divya ke saath bhi interesting twits story mein aane waale hain...
So, now with the beginning of this new arc more and more negativity will arise... Kyonki Veer Vegas mein hai to ye Niharika ke liye ek behatreen mauka hai uska video haasil karne ka... Yadi wo kaamyab huyi to Shreya, beshak ek naye sankat mein padne waali hai... But agar wo kaamyab huyi, then I'll be hugely disappointed with Veer & Pari too... Rajat aur Pranjal and of course Karunesh... Khichdi pakaane ka achha mauka hai teenon ke paas jiska laabh wo zaroor lenge... Idhar Vegas mein Veer ke saath aage kya hota hai dekhna rochak rahega...
Donon hi updates behad hi khubsurat the bhai... That scene with Kavya & Arohi was beautiful indeed, and the one with Ragini, again it was written beautifully by you... And how can we forget the one of Shweta, the perfection with which you wrote it, was just amazing... Meanwhile, let me remind you that this is without a doubt the best story in Incest genre currently and as soon as one or a couple of arcs will complete, it will become the best story available with the Incest Tag in this forum...
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Amazing long update
With full of suspense thrill nd much more exciting thing which is
1. What kind of favor suhana wants.
2. Ragani and veer's physical encounter
3. Divya is not simple in future mean there is lots of thing which is hidden yet.
Overall nice awesome nd amazing update with lots of love
Rihanna g thanks for like my comment
भाऊ ekadm zakaassss come back Kiya hey
Ab veer ne ek or chidiya udayi
Ye divya to khud ko bohot Shana samaj rahi hey lekin usko jald hi aamaj mey ayega
एकदम लाजवाब outstanding updates भाई
Wow amazing ragini and veer scene Maja aa gya brother
Divya Sali smjhte hi kya hai veer ko..... jab Sali ko Pata lagegi wo cheez kya hai to uske Lund ke Beth ke uch legi ....
Super awesome update bro
Behtreen update
Superb update
Werewolf were are you buddy
Bai Story EK Dam mast.....bahed sundar apka likha.....but week me 2 update to jarur hona caiye......
Get well soon Bhai
Kitna late h yar ye wala update...aaj to ana hi chaiye tha... But koi na let's see warewolf bhai kb mercy on us
Sala ye dukh kahy khatam ni hota bbyy
Take care bro
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Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?
Veer : Alright!
Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.
Veer : Hmm~
Suhana : Let's go now!!
Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.
Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!
Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,
Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?
Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya : I can gift you one you know?
Suhana : No thanks!!!
Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.
Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,
Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.
Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.
Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?
Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.
Suhana : Umm... I guess...
Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,
Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~
Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.
Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.
Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.
Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.
[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]
'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'
Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?
Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?
Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.
Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.
Suhana : Fine~
Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~
Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?
Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.
Veer : Whaaatttt?
Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?
Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~
Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?
Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.
Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.
Suhana : Stop it Divya...
Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.
Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.
'I see~'
Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~
Veer : Ohh!
Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.
'Ohh! I see now!'
[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]
Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.
Suhana : No! I don't need one.
Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.
Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.
[This bitttttcchhhh~]
Suhana (frowns) : Divya...
Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!
Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...
Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?
Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.
Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.
Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.
Divya : Okay~ Here we are...
Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.
Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.
Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.
Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?
Veer : It's nice...
Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.
Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.
Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?
Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.
Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.
Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.
Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~
Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.
[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]
Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.
Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'
'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'
[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]
'Naah!'
30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?
Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.
'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'
[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]
'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'
[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]
'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'
[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]
'Go ahead!'
*Ding*
[All done Master.]
[Ye raha aapka full status.]
'Good!!'
***
Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.
Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.
*Thud*
Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.
Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.
Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...
'Huh!!???'
Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.
'There's something wrong.'
Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.
Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.
Divya : Evidence?
Ladka : Yes ma'am!
Divya : Okay! You can leave now!
Aur wo chala gaya.
Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.
Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...
Suhana : This...
Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.
Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.
Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.
Veer : And what about me?
Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.
Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.
Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!
Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.
Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.
Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.
Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,
"You are not allowed here brat!!!"
Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.
White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.
Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!
Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...
Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...
Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.
'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'
[Yes master!!!]
Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,
Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.
Veer : I see...
Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.
Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.
Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...
Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?
Suhana : Exactly!!!
Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...
Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.
Qatl ki...
Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...
Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.
Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.
Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.
Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.
Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...
"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"
Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.
Khaas kar uss paper ko...
Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.
Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Soul shall burn!!!
Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.
Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.
Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.
Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...
Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.
Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.
Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...
Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...
Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.
Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.
Aur uske baad...
*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*
Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.
Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.
Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.
Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.
Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.
Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.
Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.
Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.
Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.
Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?
Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.
Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??
Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.
Suhana : Hmm...
Divya : You will help me. Right?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!
Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?
Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..
Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...
Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.
Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.
Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.
Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??
Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...
Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.
"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."
Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?
Suhana : Divya?????
Veer : !!??
Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...
Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"
Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.
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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.
Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.
Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.
"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.
"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."
"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"
"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."
"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"
Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.
Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.
"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"
Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,
"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."
Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.
*Thud*
Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.
Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.
Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.
'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'
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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.
'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'
Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.
Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.
Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,
"Hello?"
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!
Waah laga kuch aur tha aur nikla kuch aur, Divya ne apne case ke liye bulwaya tha magar point ye hai ki Veer ne ab tak kuch kaha yaa kiya kyon nahi apni powers se? Yaa Veer kuch aur hi plan kar raha hai jisse Suhana ke saare favours khatam ho jaye. Divya ko aisa kya pata chal gaya jo wo aise uchchal padi. Aur ye Poorvi koun hai jisse Bhavna ab maddad mang rahi hai? Bahut hi shaandaar update.Update - 96 ~ RiddleAb tak...
Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?
Veer : Alright!
Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.
Veer : Hmm~
Suhana : Let's go now!!
Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.
Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!
Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,
Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?
Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya : I can gift you one you know?
Suhana : No thanks!!!
Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.
Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,
Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.
Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.
Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?
Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.
Suhana : Umm... I guess...
Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,
Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~
Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.
Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.
Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.
Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.
[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]
'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'
Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?
Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?
Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.
Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.
Suhana : Fine~
Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~
Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?
Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.
Veer : Whaaatttt?
Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?
Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~
Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?
Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.
Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.
Suhana : Stop it Divya...
Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.
Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.
'I see~'
Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~
Veer : Ohh!
Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.
'Ohh! I see now!'
[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]
Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.
Suhana : No! I don't need one.
Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.
Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.
[This bitttttcchhhh~]
Suhana (frowns) : Divya...
Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!
Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...
Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?
Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.
Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.
Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.
Divya : Okay~ Here we are...
Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.
Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.
Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.
Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?
Veer : It's nice...
Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.
Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.
Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?
Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.
Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.
Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.
Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~
Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.
[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]
Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.
Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'
'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'
[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]
'Naah!'
30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?
Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.
'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'
[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]
'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'
[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]
'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'
[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]
'Go ahead!'
*Ding*
[All done Master.]
[Ye raha aapka full status.]
'Good!!'
***
Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.
Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.
*Thud*
Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.
Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.
Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...
'Huh!!???'
Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.
'There's something wrong.'
Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.
Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.
Divya : Evidence?
Ladka : Yes ma'am!
Divya : Okay! You can leave now!
Aur wo chala gaya.
Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.
Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...
Suhana : This...
Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.
Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.
Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.
Veer : And what about me?
Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.
Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.
Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!
Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.
Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.
Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.
Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,
"You are not allowed here brat!!!"
Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.
White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.
Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!
Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...
Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...
Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.
'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'
[Yes master!!!]
Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,
Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.
Veer : I see...
Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.
Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.
Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...
Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?
Suhana : Exactly!!!
Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...
Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.
Qatl ki...
Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...
Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.
Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.
Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.
Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.
Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...
"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"
Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.
Khaas kar uss paper ko...
Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.
Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Soul shall burn!!!
Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.
Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.
Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.
Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...
Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.
Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.
Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...
Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...
Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.
Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.
Aur uske baad...
*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*
Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.
Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.
Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.
Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.
Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.
Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.
Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.
Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.
Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.
Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?
Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.
Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??
Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.
Suhana : Hmm...
Divya : You will help me. Right?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!
Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?
Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..
Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...
Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.
Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.
Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.
Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??
Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...
Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.
"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."
Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?
Suhana : Divya?????
Veer : !!??
Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...
Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"
Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.
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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.
Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.
Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.
"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.
"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."
"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"
"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."
"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"
Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.
Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.
"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"
Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,
"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."
Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.
*Thud*
Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.
Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.
Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.
'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'
***
Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.
'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'
Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.
Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.
Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,
"Hello?"
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
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Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?
Veer : Alright!
Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.
Veer : Hmm~
Suhana : Let's go now!!
Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.
Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!
Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,
Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?
Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya : I can gift you one you know?
Suhana : No thanks!!!
Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.
Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,
Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.
Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.
Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?
Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.
Suhana : Umm... I guess...
Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,
Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~
Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.
Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.
Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.
Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.
[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]
'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'
Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?
Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?
Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.
Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.
Suhana : Fine~
Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~
Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?
Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.
Veer : Whaaatttt?
Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?
Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~
Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?
Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.
Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.
Suhana : Stop it Divya...
Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.
Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.
'I see~'
Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~
Veer : Ohh!
Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.
'Ohh! I see now!'
[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]
Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.
Suhana : No! I don't need one.
Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.
Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.
[This bitttttcchhhh~]
Suhana (frowns) : Divya...
Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!
Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...
Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?
Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.
Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.
Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.
Divya : Okay~ Here we are...
Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.
Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.
Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.
Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?
Veer : It's nice...
Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.
Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.
Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?
Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.
Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.
Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.
Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~
Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.
[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]
Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.
Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'
'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'
[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]
'Naah!'
30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?
Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.
'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'
[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]
'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'
[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]
'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'
[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]
'Go ahead!'
*Ding*
[All done Master.]
[Ye raha aapka full status.]
'Good!!'
***
Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.
Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.
*Thud*
Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.
Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.
Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...
'Huh!!???'
Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.
'There's something wrong.'
Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.
Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.
Divya : Evidence?
Ladka : Yes ma'am!
Divya : Okay! You can leave now!
Aur wo chala gaya.
Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.
Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...
Suhana : This...
Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.
Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.
Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.
Veer : And what about me?
Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.
Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.
Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!
Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.
Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.
Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.
Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,
"You are not allowed here brat!!!"
Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.
White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.
Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!
Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...
Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...
Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.
'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'
[Yes master!!!]
Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,
Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.
Veer : I see...
Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.
Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.
Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...
Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?
Suhana : Exactly!!!
Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...
Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.
Qatl ki...
Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...
Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.
Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.
Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.
Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.
Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...
"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"
Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.
Khaas kar uss paper ko...
Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.
Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Soul shall burn!!!
Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.
Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.
Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.
Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...
Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.
Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.
Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...
Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...
Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.
Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.
Aur uske baad...
*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*
Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.
Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.
Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.
Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.
Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.
Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.
Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.
Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.
Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.
Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?
Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.
Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??
Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.
Suhana : Hmm...
Divya : You will help me. Right?
Suhana : Hmm~
Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!
Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?
Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..
Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...
Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.
Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.
Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.
Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??
Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...
Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.
"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."
Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?
Suhana : Divya?????
Veer : !!??
Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...
Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"
Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.
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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM
*Whoooooosssshhhh*
Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.
Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.
Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.
"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.
"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."
"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"
"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."
"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"
Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.
Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.
"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"
Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,
"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."
Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.
*Thud*
Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.
Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.
Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.
'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'
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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.
'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'
Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.
Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.
Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,
"Hello?"
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!