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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
***
Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
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Literally amazing n awesome update with interesting action scenend other things which r totally outstanding
Behtareen update
Bhai as per update it was fucking owesome
nobody noticed those things in voice anouncement that was superb suspense reveal. And camera position revealing and guessing that night Walker ka next target Mike he and the fight with night Walker everything was awesome.
aapne firse suspense me rakh diya.
Bhai as per updates Bhai bura mat manna
par update shedule 3days ka nahi chal raha he 4 to 5 days ka shedule hogaya he.. from last 3 updates Aisa he hey.. plz do something about it bro.. thank you..
Nice update....we will wait for the clarification about the victim in next update...I hope we will get next update during Sunday night...
Thanks for reacting on my comment
Super update
Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.
Mike,Veer aur anya
Superb update bro…
Dingno word's werewolf bhai such an extraordinary work der se aaya but toofan laya. Jitni pi thi utar gayi amazing an fantastic update
Aur jaise aapne commit kiya hai we are going to see more action.picture Abhi baki hai bhai log.
awesome update hai Awesome maja aagya bhai
Jabardast update.. Bhai..
Nice update
Update padh to maine raat ko hi liya tha. Per suspense ki wajah se kuchh samajh nahin aaya. To socha ki aaj somras kuchh jyada hi ho gaya hai isiliye samajh nahin pa raha hun. Fir subah uth ke wapis padha to bhi suspense to waise ka waisa hi tha. Khali fokat somras ka maja kharab kar diya.
Umeed to yahi h... Unhone abhi tak lekin koi reply nahi diya h...
Ese abhi suspens mai rahne do bro
Or sab se badi baat shuhana ka to thik hai par ye divya ka kiyu itna bada jhatka laga jarur saali kuch chupa rhi hai Veer use tapa tap wala jhatka dega to sayad kuch raaz pata chale
Superb Update
Awesome
Stupendous update Man...
The only word that comes to mind is - supercalifragilisticexpialidocious....
Google kar lo this is a legit word...
Bhai maza aa gaya..
Lekin final action sequence thoda chota tha yar...
Itne khatarnaak opponent se ladai mein kuch to super moves aur bante the..!
Aur treasure ka kya??
Mansion me treasure - ek dum Indiana Jones wali vibe aa rahi thi mast par yar ju ne treasure wale part ko to khatam hi kar diya!!!
Veer Nightwalker ko baandh kar, dono haseenao ke saath mansion sahi se explore aur treasure hunt kar sakta tha...
Ladkiyan Dar ke maare us se chipki reheti..
veer ke thoda Kareeb aa jaati!!
Par you lost that opportunity for veer
Mike’s character is really likeable..
Plz keep him as Veer’s sidekick for rest of the missions in this arc.
Aur Mike mein Veer ko ek true friend & associate bhi mil sakta hai for future that is not influenced by Suhana or Divya...
End mein Veer ne Zoe or Emma ko to neeche bhej diya par Tommy to behosh tha uska kya??
Ending thodi hurried si nahi ho gayi is update ki... quite unlike you!!
मस्त सस्पेन्स चल रहा है- ये क्या है, वो क्या हुआ..
और अगली लाइन में - चलो बे हवाई जहाज़ आ गया, बैठो बे , घर कू चल रे सब!!
जैसे फुल्ल स्पीड ट्रेन झटके से रुकी को ऐसी ending लगी मुझे !!
Accha is Zoe a new applicant in Veer’s harem?? In dono ka mast scene ban sakta hai...
Aur ek baat...
Mike chutia tha saala..
warning kyu di!
Seedha ghutne aur kandhe mein goli maarni thi!..
Nighwalker isese Marne aa raha hai aur ye use uske Miranda Rights Bata raha hai!!
Take care bahi, have come to love your style...
Sayad veer ko ab bhi 100% comfarm nhi lag rha hai
es liye wo us Tommy par ek tukka maar kar comfarm kar raha hai yaa phir Tommy par nisaana laga kar tir khi or kisi ki gaand mai de maare
To next part ki announcement b abi kr dete after all ye isi ka hi part h...seems greedybut kya kre updates hi aise hote h k rha ni jata..well we can't do anything.. It's all up to you bro... We can just wait but atleast announce to kr hi skte
Ye notices hai ye........
Kasam se Aankho maiAanshu aagya aap ki notices dekh kar Apne latakte nichewaale ki kasam aesa notice koi nhi krega koi nhi
ab iska jawab ab khud eske writer shahb de
Werewolf writer shahb
Wese aap ne update 101 read ke time kitne snacks packets fhaade.....
Note : Gustaaki Maaf Mohtarma......
Maa chod dega vo Ajay ki ab
aaj apan pahle to review pelega........
To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavydoor bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......
Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........
Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......
Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....
aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi
"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte
"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya
par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye
Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......
Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......
Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the
Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe
Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi
Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....
Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa
Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha
Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki
Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi
aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi
Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye
"You take left. I'll take the right."
"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho
Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai
To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha
To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se
Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"
Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....
Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....
To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......
Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage
Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se
Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......
That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man
Waiting for next one.......
Take care......
nice1
एक और अद्भुत अंश,
जिसने दिमाग के पुर्जे तक को हिला कर रख दिया,
सच बोलता हूँ श्री Werewolf इस अध्याय को पढ़ते वक़्त न जाने कितनी भावना मेरे मन मे उभरी... अक्सर मै जब किसी कहानी को पढ़ता हूँ तो उसमे घटी घटना का परिदृश्य बनाना बहुत मुश्किल होता है मुझे, पर इस अध्याय का परिदृश्य अपने आप प्रारंभ से ही मुझे दिखने लगी थी ।
यहाँ जिस तरह वीर, बिना अपनी वशतविकता को दिखाये, चेस्टर के रूम मे जाने के लिए उस भारी दरबाजे को तोड़ा... ये काबिले तारीफ था...
अपनी, तकनीकी शक्तियां beowulf को संचालित करने के बाद उसके आँखो मे aane बाले परिवर्तन को कोई देख न ले... इस लिए महाशय ने अपनी आँखे ही बंद कर ली..
वाह....
यहाँ का मंजर इयहाँस कदर वहशीपणा दिखाता है की मेरे बस पढ़ने और इसे बारे मे सोचने भर से ही... रोंगटे खड़े हो गए...
उबकाई आने लगी।
कोई इतनी दरिंदगी भी कर सकता है क्या...
हह्ह्....
इस तरह की दरिंदगी वीर पहले भी देख चुका था... जब उसके एकमात्र मित्र गोलू को घड़ियाल के आगे परोसा गया था...
और आज भी ऐसा ही वहशीपणा देख वीर को भी उबकाई आने लगी...
पर... उसकी... एक तरह से जो हमशफर है... परी... वो कैसे वीर को ऐसे देख सकती थी....
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यहाँ... मै ये कहना चाहता हूँ की परी का ये बिहेविअर अब तक का उसका सबसे हसीन रूप दिखाता है ।
उस वक्त , वीर कुछ और था... अब तो वीर... वीर न होके एक शूरवीर बनने के करीब जा चुका है
परी.... बाकई मे एक परी ही तो है जो वीर के साथ उसके छाया बन कर चल रही है अब तक...
और आशा है की आगे भी चलेगी
यहाँ आपके लेखनी को सलाम जो आपने एक अन्य पात्र की मौजूदगी को भी दिखाया... और बखूबी दिखाया...
जिस तरह एक ज़िम्मेदार detective को होना चाहिए बिल्कुल वैसा ही था mike का वर्ताव इतना सब कुछ होने के बाद...
आखिर कौन इमान्दार और दिलेर अधिकारी खुद को शांत रख पाता...
Detective का दिमाग....
लुसिफर सेरिज की याद आगयी....
यहाँ वीर की दिलेरी देख कर, और जिस तरह आपने उसके ये बहादुरी को लिखा है उसका मै कायल हो गया हूँ....
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साला ये nightwalker के वहशी पण को देखकर तो किसी की हिम्मत न होती उसके नजदीक जाने की...
पर mike को वहाँ जाना था... आखिर ये उसका काम जो था...
अद्भुत
चूतिये का पहला वचन....
आप ने ऐसे लिखा... जैसे की उसने इन शब्दो को गुर्राते हुए बोला हो....
इसके बाद वीर और nightwalker के बीच का वो फाइट....
भले ही साला भड़वा अपने वीर के सामने ज्यादा समय टिक न पाया... पर उसके वजह से वीर को परेशानियाँ बहुत झेलनी पड़ी... वो भी मात्र एक रात मे ही....
अब ये क्या देख लिया लवड़े ने, साला एक तो पहले से ही उसकी nightwalker ले चुका था... और अब ये....
अबे ये आँखे बंद कर ले न भोसड़ी.... क्या क्या देख रहा है... और हमसब की दिमाग की मा का भो*** किये जा रहा है....
अजीब है यार.... उफ्फ...
खैर.... जब पावर्स मिली है तो ज़िम्मेबारिया भी तो उठानी पड़ेगी...
अब अगले update मे देखना होगा की.. ऐसा क्या देख लिया लवडे ने...
हद है यार.....
एक suspance खतम क्या हुआ... दुसरी गांड मारने को तैयार हो जाती है...
और अब ऐसा क्या देख लिया जिसके बाद वीर तो वीर... बेचारी परी भी सदमे मे जाने की हालात मे चली गयी....
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कही ये परी से ही रेलटेड तो नही कुछ...
शायद.... वीर ने असली माधरचोद को ढूंढ लिया....
जिसके बारे मे जानने के लिए हमे अगला अंश का इंतेज़ार करना होगा...
"सुहाना " इसका व्यवहार तो पूर्णतः बदल गया...
शायद वीर इसे कुछ ज्यादा ही भाने लगा है....
भायेगा भी क्यो नही... अपीएरेंस मे इतने अंक जो झोके हुए है वीर ने...
कुछ तो धमाकेदार मिला है.... जो वहाँ मौजूद बहुतो को अपने अंदर समेटने बाला है....
टॉमी का पिक्चर देखने के बाद का वो reaction.....
शायद.... अगला update बहुत सारे सफेद पोष को बेनकाब करने बाला है....
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और अंत मे... मै एक बार फिर से लेखक महोदय की लेखनी को सलाम करता हूँ...
ऐसे कहानिया अक्सर हमारे हृदय मे घर कर जाते है...
बस दुआ रहेगी की लेखक महोदय स्वस्थ रहे और ऐसे ही लाजबाब अध्याय देते रहे...
धन्यवाद
Mujhe reviews dena nahi aata ( actually mujhe sand hi nahi milte kya likhu ) but maine ye slogan or atish wala kahi to pada tha matlab similarly thode se match karte the jo veer k same padav sat hai ye those those similar the para nai kaha pada btw mai yaha next update k liye notification pane k liye comment kiya hai bhai don't ofend mujhe apki story achchhi lagati hai but ye updata thoda chhota laga mujhe ya mai apne hi dhun me thabut mujhe is story me sabse achchhi chiz pahala pari hai or dusra suspance or baki character jisko abhi tak apne form me hai jo abhi tak dagmagay nahi matlab akdam se kisi ko fast kardo ya kisi ko slow ya direct sex karwa do aisa nahi hai sab apni jagah hai jisse audience ko bhi padne me maja aata hai
Update
A great update.
The action scenes are really marvellous and worth to be reproduced on big screen.
The details kept in mind for writing this kind of update and related sound effects tell how great this story is going to be.
But this kind of cliffhangers at the end of the update (particularly for this update) is simply torture to the readers. (But I know that is the trademark of you!)
Super awesome update bro
Beautiful and Excellent update bhai
Leave it men! Yadi kisi ke kehne maatra se saalon se chali aa rahi pratha band ho jaati to kya hi baat thi.. Ek hi kaaran hai jo in “superb updates" jaisi baaton ka janm daata hai.. People simply don't want to invest their time in reviewing stuff here, when they are getting the same story/updates by just giving a small comment or even remaining silent throughout.
But still, I'm currently reading around 6-7 stories and reviewing them, but I haven't seen such engagement on any of them... This story is currently the richest when it comes to getting proper reviews & response... And you must be really proud of it. It's the content that forces readers to put up their views and write a long review, and such humongous response that you get here, is a result of your excellent content.
Isiliye chill rehne ka men, itne samay mein jo kuchh bhi ju ne, aur baaki logon ne baat cheet ki hai, about the 2 words syndrome, I'm damn sure ki ek bhi bande ko fark na pada hoga, fark in the sense ki I don't think ki unmei se koyi proper reviews dega. So, just enjoy bruh, you're running the most successful thread on XF right now!
Is index ko bhi pinup kr do pleaseeasy hojaey ga update dhondna or update ki uodate bhi mikti rahey gi keh ai ya nai bqi Werewolf sir apko ziada ir behtar pata is barey main
Werewolf bro Chaad se thode se bade hai aur Suraj se thode se chote baaki sab log samajhdaar hain to andza laga hi sakte hain.
Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Veer aur mike uljhe hue he Nightwalker ke case ko solve karne me aur wo ek ek karke sabko maar raha he.
Tommy aur mike ke sath milke darwaja tod diya par uske baad ka scene dekh ke halat kharab ho gayi sabki. Veer ko jese PTSD ki tarah golu ki hatya yaad aa gayi. Aur ye burden veer ke uper hamesha rahega jab tak koi usko console na kare. Nidhi ne kiya tha par puri baat usko nahi pata. Tommy ko ye sab dekh ke bahut jor ka jhatka laga he. Aur esi body ko dekh ke koi bhi uncomfortable hi feel karega chahe wo kitne hi salo se detective raha ho. Veer ko pari himmat de rahi he aur Veer ko bhi pata he ki wo aur mike hi ye case solve kar sakte he agar nahi kiya to marenge aur chocolate factory nahi khulegi
Ye detoxification ke hote wo drink, smoke to kar sakta he par dhyaan rakhna padega ki veer ka koi close usko dekhe na. Smell ko to gayab nahi kar sakte na, aur ragini, shweta cigarette ki smell ko jante he. Aur agar kisi din Nidhi ke ghar gaya aur juhi ko goad me lete samay cigarette ka packet nikal aaya bahar to Veer uss din gaya. Khatam tata bye bye gaya
To achha yahi he ki koi offer kare to hi cigarette le.
Mike ne apna kaam karte hue CCTV camera chaan liye. Par uske room me hi ek camera he ya sabke room me hoga ???
Yaha Nightwalker me rule ke loophole ka fayda uthaya he aur chester ko uske room me hi maar dala.
Veer aur zoey ke bich kuch ho raha he dhire dhire. Care karti he zoey veer ki par veer ko jana to padega hi.
Yaha mike ne jese kaha he "so it's you!!!" Esa lag raha he ki jese mike janta he usko. Yani koi pehchan ka hi he.
Nightwalker se fight bhi Vese easy na thi wo dimag wala to tha hi itna to pakka he.
Veer ne case solve kar diya he apni taraf se. Zoey ke kamre me kya mila ye dekhne wali baat hogi. Aur iske piche kon he wo bhi pata chal gaya. Par treasure ka kya??? Agar he to Veer ko milna chahiye na ?? Nahi he to suhana se baat kare ki bache hue sare favour bhul jaye. Kyuki yaha wo nik chutiye ki vajah se he, uper se jaan ka khatra, aur inn sabke baad kuch na mile to kya fayda ??? Veer ko aage chal ke business bhi badhana he aur ese free me kaam karta raha to go gaya businesses successful. Suhana ke favour he veer pe par uske badle veer har baar apni jaan jhokhim me dalega kya ??? Isse achha kaera ke sath deal kare wo Veer ka samay aur sath hi mangegi badle me.
Wapis pahuch ke Veer suhana se mila par divya se kuch khaas baat nahi ki usne. Divya ki baat me sirf all right hi kaha he usne.
Baad me veer ki dikhayi hui pic se Tommy ko jhatka laga he to Chester ka koi na koi connection he usme. Ab Veer ne kya pata lagaya he wo aage dekhte he next update me.
Nik ke sath bhi score even Karna he. Kyuki Veer ka koi lena dena nahi tha inn sabme fir bhi wo gaya aur case solve kiya.
Veer yaha ye sab kar raha he wahi usse badla lene ke liye rajat aur pranjal Nidhi ko chot pahucha sakte he. Aur sirf Nidhi hi nahi hogi unke nishane pe. Shayad Balhaar ya karan ko bata ke gaya hoga veer. Uper se niharika ne bhi apni chaal chali he.
Aur ye Eva se kab mulakaat honi he veer ki ??? Eva LA me he na ??
Waiting for next update.
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Update faadu tha . Nightwalker bhi ke intelligent aur shaatir enemy tha . Bahut suspense aur problems ke baad Nightwalker bhi pakda gya . Mike ne bhi accha saath diya veer ka jo kabilya tariff hai . Nik ki fatke chaad ho chauki hai jal jal ke . Niharika dimaag lagane ki koshish kar rahi hai par kuch kar nahi paa rahi . Emma bhi ab India jayegi shayad aur waha dusre competitors Emma se jalege . Ab tak ye kissa khatam nahi hua hai . Abhi to shaam hai puri raat to baaki haiUpdate - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
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Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
bhai shaandaar update maja aa gyaUpdate - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
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Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Nice and lovely update....Update - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
***
Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Last kuch Updates ke questions ke answer to mil gaye. Lakin last me kuch questions aa bhi gaye.Update - 102 ~ Exposed (2)
Ab tak...
Veer : I have decoded everything!!!
Tommy : Okay! Tell us!
Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,
Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?
Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
Ab aage...
Investigation Department ~
Vegas ke iss department me, department ke Head Nolan, athwa waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the. Beech me hi ek behad badi sii round table rakhi hui thi, jis par kuch files bikhri hui thi aur unke liye paani ki kuch personal bottles bhi rakhi hui thi.
Nik, Divya aur Suhana jo department ka hissa nahi the, woh bhi unhi sab ke beech baithe the. Aur keval yahi nahi, viraajmaan logo me hi Emma, Tommy aur Zoey bhi saath thi.
Aur unn sab ke saamne projector ke paas khada hua tha...
Veer!!!
Jiski nazre waha baithi tamaam janta par tiki hui thi. Aur unki Veer par.
Nightwalker ke mansion ka poore chapter ko ek full stop lag chuka tha. Par House of the Killers ko nahi. Saath hi Nightwalker ka sach baahar aana baaki tha abhi. Aur issi ke liye Veer yaha tha. Usne na sirf Nightwalker ko pakda tha balki mansion aur Nightwalker se jude sabhi raaz bhi haasil kar liye the.
Ab samay tha, unn sabhi raazo ko ek-ek kar ke kholne ka aur logo ke saamne laane ka...
Divya kursi par baithe Veer par hi nigaahein gadaayi hui thi.
Toh wahi Suhana bhi Veer ko jigyasa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir Veer ne khamoshi todi,
Veer : I'm here to disclose all the secrets that I've found.
Nolan (nods) : Go on!
Veer : We all know what happened with us, right?
Mansion ki poori ghatna Mike ne apni zubaani me department ko suna dii thi. Sab ye jaan gaye the waha maut ka kesa nanga naach khela gaya tha. Kitni hi khatarnaak sthiti rahi hogi waha par.
Veer ke sawaal par sabhi ne waha sarr haan me hilaaya.
Par Tommy jo kaanp raha tha woh rote hue achanak hi khada hoke chillaane laga,
Tommy : Fucking hang that motherfucking bastard... *sniff* Aaarrrghhhhhh!!! I will kill him. He killed Chester, my buddy... *sniff* What will I say to his parents? *sniff* I'm screwed... *sniff*
Woh ekdum se bekaabu ho utha, uska emotional breakdown ho gaya achanak. Mike jo uske bagal se baitha tha usne Tommy ko pakad uski peeth par haath ferr usse shaant karaaya aur kuch seconds ke baad jab shaanti fir se chhaa gayi toh Veer ne punah apni baatein rakhi,
Veer : Chester was killed brutally.
Tommy : *sniff* *sniff*
Mike : But it's not possible to do a kill like that with just a mere sickle Veer.
Veer : He might have used some other weapon, Senior Mike.
Mike : That... I see. It's possible!
Nolan : Hmm! We will look into that later. Our team and forensic ones can take care of those things. You tell us what information you acheived about Nightwalker? How did Chester died when the room was locked from the inside? And how did you find the treasure?
Nolan ke sawaal se sabhi ki nazre ek baar fir Veer par tik gayi. Veer ne aisa namumkin kaam jo kar dikhaya tha. Usne ye bhi pata laga liya tha ki kese Chester room ke andar maara gaya tha, kaha aur kese usse treasure jo ki 10 million dollars ki worth ka tha woh mila, Nightwalker kyu aur kese inn kaamo ko anjaam de raha tha ye bhi. Aur na jaane kya kya usse maalum tha jiske liye shayad waha baithe log taiyaar bhi nahi the.
Nightwalker bhi pakda jaa chuka tha. Investigation department waale usse saath hi lekar aaye the. Aur ab woh police ki custody me tha. Uska asli chehra bhi saamne aa chuka tha jaha dikhne me woh bilkul hi ek normal insaan ki hi tarah tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye nahi bata sakta tha ki woh itna bada khoonkhaar hatyaara tha. Shayad sahi kehte hai log,
Never judge a book by its cover.
Veer ne Nolan ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : What do you want to know first?
Nolan : Tell me, how he got killed when the door was locked from the inside??
Veer ne ek lambi saans lii aur badi hi asaani se jawaab diya,
Veer : It's simple! Nightwalker came inside, killed Chester and went outside.
*Silence*
Log waha aise ho gaye jese unhe saanp soongh gaya. Kya kaha Veer ne abhi abhi? Nightwalker andar kamre me aaya, Chester ko maara, aur fir waapas nikal gaya? Huh? Mazaak chal raha tha kya? Veer pagla gaya tha kya? Woh sabhi Veer ko aise dekhne lage jese saamne khade kisi namoone ko dekh rahe ho.
Aur sabse pehle toh Tommy hi behka,
Tommy : No No No No!!! Let me tell you the truth. Chester was killed by a ghost guys. You know... Ghost can travel through the walls. Yup! That's it guys. This guy, Veer is just trolling everyone. Hahahaha~
Wo hassa aur akasmaat hi,
Tommy : YOU FUCKERRR!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE SPOUTING??? WE ARE HERE TO HEAR THE SECRET HOW THAT MOTHERFUCKER KILLED MY FRIEND, NOT TO HEAR YOU TALKING BULLSHIT. IF YOU SPEND ONE MORE SEC DOING THAT, I'M TELLING YOU, I'M GONNA BEAT THE SHIT OUTTA YOU... YOU... Ughhhh!!
Iss se pehle ki woh uth ke apna gussa Veer pe nikaal paata, Mike ne usse pakad waapas se seat par patak ke baitha diya.
Mike : Calm down! And behave properly, this ain't your home.
Sab Tommy ko ghoorne lage aur harr ek ki aankhein apne upar paa kar Tommy ko na chaahte hue bhi shaant hona pada.
Nolan : Explain properly!
Veer : It's just as I said. He came inside, killed Chester, and went outside.
Aur Nik jo wahi baitha hua tha usse jese mauka mil gaya, Veer ki sabke saamne dhone ka,
Nik : Hah~ Bullshit! How can someone just come inside without opening the door? There is only one way to enter the room. No one can enter that room without opening the door. Mike told us everything after all. Sir, He is just wasting our time. I bet he didn't find anything--
Nik Nolan ki taraf jhukte hue bola. Uski baat sahi bhi thi. Bina kamre ko khole andar jaaya hi nahi jaa sakta tha. Kyuki ek hi raasta tha bas andar jaane ka. Mike ne bataya tha sabhi ko ki kahi koi bhi secret passage nahi tha. Toh Chester ka yu marr jaana? Woh bhi Nightwalker ka andar aake maarna? Namumkin tha ye poori tarah se.
Par...
Veer : When did I say he didn't open the door?
Nik : Huhhh??
Nik hairaani me Veer ki orr dekha.
Veer : He opened the door, went inside, killed Chester, and came outside. Simple!
Ab toh waha baithi Divya ki bhi bauhe sikudne lagi thi confusion ke maare. Yaha tak ki Mike bhi thoda chintit nazar aa raha tha. Kahi Nolan Veer ko lataad na de.
Veer ka kehna tha ki Nightwalker ne darwaza khola, andar gaya aur Chester ko maar ke waapas baahar aa gaya.
Ye toh saraasar bakwaas thi.
Suhana bhi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Kuch chinta me bhi thi woh...
Nik : Are you even listening to the shit you are saying?
Veer : I'm telling the truth.
Divya : V-Veer!? Don't stretch this too long. We really want to know. Just tell us.
Veer ne Divya ko dekha, jese maani wo usse tease kar raha tha. Fir usne Nolan ko dekha,
Veer : Ohhh! You wanna know!?
Nik bhi baithe hue jese Veer ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhne laga. Woh toh bas mauka dhundh raha tha ki kab Veer koi bachkaani harqat kare aur woh firse uski udaa sake.
'Ye nauseekhiya bhala kya hi raaz jaan paaya hoga?'
Nik apne mann me yahi soch raha tha.
Par idhar Veer inn sab bachkaani harqato se upar uth chuka tha.
'What I'm about to tell them, will blow their minds.'
Sochte hue usne apne haath ko dekha, uske badan ke ruye khade hue the.
[You're still getting goosebumps, Master! Sach me... Ye log taiyaar nahi hai. Aur ye Nightwalker toh sirf dusra hi killler tha Master! Kya ye log aane waali musibato ke liye taiyaar bhi hai ya nahi? I'm getting scared.]
'Don't know!'
Veer ne Nolan se ishaare me permission maangi toh Nolan ne sarr haami me bhara, aur uss se sweekriti milte hi, Veer ne apne bagal me kursi par baithe ek vyakti ko dekha jo laptop par kaam kar raha tha.
Veer ka ishara jese hi usse mila, usne gallery se ek image khol dii, jo saamne projector par ujaagar ho gayi.
Aur usse dekhte hi, sabhi ke maatho par rekhaaye sajj gayi.
Veer : This is the answer to your questions. And now I will unravel the truth.
Nolan : !!??
Mike : That's...!!!
Zoey / Emma : ...
Divya : This is.. What are you implying Veer?
Suhana : V-Veer...!!!
Tommy : Are you kidding me??? This is not a joke.
Par idhar, Tommy ko chorr sabhi serious the.
Veer : Everyone!!! There is a reason why those room numbers were not in order.
Nolan : What do you mean?
Veer : Those room numbers weren't just room numbers...
Uske itna kehte hi, sabse pehle Divya ne react kiya,
Divya : N-No!!! It's can't be... This...!!!
Woh apni seat tak se uth gayi. Uske shareer ke raungte khade ho chuke the. Kyuki saamne jo picture screen par maujood thi,
Wo thi...
Divya : T-They were....
Veer : YES! ATOMIC NUMBERS!!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Maano ek visfot hua waha baithe sabhi logo ke mastishq me.
Mike ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya toh wahi Nolan hairat angez me wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Par ye toh abhi kuch nahi tha.
Tommy : Whattt? What the fuck are you talking abo--
Lekin uski baat ko Veer ne beech me hi kaat diya, jab uski nazar seedhe Zoey par gayi,
Veer : What was Chester's room number?
Zoey (jhepte hue) : H-Huh!! That... It... It was 50.
Aur Zoey ke muh se itna nikalte hi Veer ne screen par doosri slide pesh kar dii.
Divya ne kuch baat pakad lii thi. Par usse abhi aur jhatka lagna baaki tha.
Tommy : But... But... What does that have to do with Chester getting killed?
Thik hai ki Veer ne ye raaz khol diya tha ki woh room numbers atomic numbers the par Chester ka marrna iss sab se kese mel khaa raha tha bhala?
Aur iss sawaal ka uttar bhi Veer ne agli slide dikha ke de diya.
Jese hi unhone woh dekha, waha baithe sab ke andar ke taar hil ke reh gaye. Divya ki toh rooh hi kaanp gayi.
Tommy, Zoey aur Emma sab hakke bakke hoke bas screen dekh rahe the. Woh kuch kehne laayak hi nahi bache the.
Screen par likha tha~
Nolan : That... That means...
Veer : Yes!!!! He melted it.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur visfot hua unke dimaag ke andar.
Mike : B-But how....!???
Veer : Tin! Melting point of tin is approx 232° C. He melted it by using gas burner. The ones which we use in campings.
Veer ki baat sunn unke poore jism me raungte khade ho gaye. Reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi.
Nightwalker ne darwaaze ke ek metal bar ki boundary ko gas burner ke saamne ek nozzle laga ke pighlaaya...
Aur pighalte hi, usne uss bar ko kheech ke baahar nikaala. Andar haath daal ke usne kamre ki chatakni ko khola...
*Click*
Aur woh Chester ke room me hathiyaar leke ghusa.
*Slaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhhh*
*Hhhhaaacccckkkkkkkkkkkk*
Chester ko kaatata raha jab tak woh do tukdo me na batt gaya. Aas paas bikhra khoon pocha,
Kambal se uske shareer ko dhaka, aur baahar aaya.
Waapas se haath daal ke andar se kundi band kii aur gas burner se dobaara uss metal bar ko pighla ke weld kar diya.
*Booooooooooommmm*
Ek aur zordaar jhatka unko laga jab Veer ke muh se ye sab vistaar me suna. Aisa lag raha tha jese unhone bhoot dekh liya tha koi apni aankho ke saamne.
Jese bilkul maatam sa chhaa gaya tha. Koi awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi unke muh se. Aankhein bhay ke maare feli hui thi, shareer khauf aur darr ke maare kaanp raha tha. Aur honth aapas me kasse hue the. Ekdum band.
Ab unhe iss baat ka andaaza laga tha ki woh kitne bade criminals ke saath deal kar rahe the. Aur ye House of Killers koi choti moti gang ka hissa nahi thi. Ab jaake iss baat se woh dhang se avgat hue the.
Divya ladkhada ke apni seat par gir padi. Darr ke maare uski aankhein phel chuki thi.
Jitne bhi room numbers the. Metals me Tin ho tha waha jiska melting point sabse kam tha. Aur gas can burner se usse melt karna koi bhaari kaam nahi tha.
Chester ki maut tabhi tay ho gayi thi. Jis waqt usne room number 50 chuna tha.
He died there only.
Veer ne jab Nightwalker ko baandhne ke baad check kiya tha toh,
*Ding*
[Name : Noah White.]
Alias Name : Nightwalker.
Age : 34
Bio : Noah White aka Nightwalker is a member of the House of the Killers. He likes paintings. He takes drugs from Jim, exchanges them with the expensive wines and beers. He has a fetish to kill people and see their blood coming out. Has killed his own family members, and others with a total count of 93 people. His mansion's key cards sells for only 8 people twice in a row per month. He was a technician and a welder before.
Favourability : -45
Relationship : Enemies.]
Jab Veer ne ye padha tha tab usne inn details par kuch khaas dhyaan nahi diya tha. Waha se nikalte waqt usse khaali gas burners ke cans bhi dikhe the. Par usne dhyaan nahi diya tha.
Aur woh Mike ko apni peeth par laad ke upar le gaya tha.
Parantu Mike ko ek kamre me litaane ke baad jab woh Chester ke kamre se guzar raha tha. Toh neeche pade hue darwaaze par jese hi uski nazar gayi,
'Check'
*Ding*
[A metal door with a welded metal bar.]
'Huh? Ye pehle toh nahi tha!'
Jab Veer ne apne kamre ke darwaaze ko check kiya tha tab to description me likh ke aaya tha,
[A metal door.]
Aur ab...
Lekin tabhi...!
'Huhhh???'
Veer ke mann me Nightwalker ka bio ek baar punaah saamne aaya.
'He was a Technician and a Welder before.'
Welder... Welder... Metal door with Welded Metal bar ....
'This...!!!!'
Aur isliye... Veer ke badan me ruye khade hue the. Usse itne zyaada goosebumps aaye the.
Woh ladkhada ke gir gaya tha wahi. Jis shaatir dimaag se Nightwalker ne Chester ko maara tha. Veer ke soch ke hi raungte khade ho gaye the.
'Ek second... Technician...! Huh??'
Aur tabhi usse Nightwalker ke saath ladaayi ka scene yaad aaya. Kese Nightwalker ne current ki taaro ka istemal uss par kia tha.
'N-Noooo!!!'
Now, everything was making sense.
'So he was planning this all.'
Veer apni saari baato ko bata ke jab shaant hua toh waha par logo ke chehre dekhne laayak the. Woh sab besudh se baithe Veer ko dekh rahe the. Keval unki saaso ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi.
Mike : But where's the treasure???
Veer ne Mike ke sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya. Balki usne Zoey ko dekha aur pucha,
Veer : And your room number was...
Zoey : M-My... Mine was... 79... Huh??
Bolne ke baad uski nazre turant hi uss periodic table par gayi. Aur jese hi usne dekha...
Uska badan thitur utha. Kaanpte hue usne apne haath se seene par apne top ko kass ke bheench liya.
Kyuki agli slide me saamne tha...
Zoey (kaapte hue) : Th-This....
79, Atomic number of Gold!!! Yaani sona... Zoey ke room me tha? Jis room me woh itni derr tak thi ussi room me 10 million dollars ka sona chhipa hua tha!???
Veer ko jab pata chala tha ki Nightwalker me aise Chester ko maara tha toh woh fauran hi Zoey ke kamre ki orr bhaaga tha.
Yadi Chester ka room door Tin se bana tha toh fir, Zoey ke room ka darwaaza toh..
79!!!! Gold se bana hona chahiye tha.
Apne room se teeno logo ko neeche bhej woh Zoey ki room ki orr bhaaga,
Aur...
'Check'
*Ding*
[A Metal door.]
Par koi fayda nahi. Veer ne scratch kar upar ki parat hataani chaahi. Kahi aisa toh nahi iss swarn par koi coating chadhi hui thi? Par koi fayda nahi. Ye metal door sone ka nahi tha.
Ek antim baar search karne ke liye woh room me gaya.
Aur ghuste hi jese hi usne saamne dekha...
*Ding*
'No... So I was right!!!!!!'
"Veer??? Veeeerrr???"
Veer apne hosh me firse aaya jab Mike ne usse pukaara.
Mike : The treasure?
Veer ne Mike ko dekha, Aur eka-ek,
Usne taali bajaayi,
Tabhi, Darwaza khula, aur do ladke kisi bhaari sii cheez ko pakad ke lekar aaye aur table par rakh diye. Poori cheez ek laal kapde se dhaki hui thi.
Nolan : Don't tell me....
*Flaaaaaaaappppppppp*
Veer ne ek baar me uss par se woh laal kapda hata diya tha. Aur unke saamne tha...
Poora sone ka bana hua flower vase. Uski chamakti roshni unki aankho me pad iss baat ka saboot de rahi thi ki woh ekdum asli aur ucchh koti ka sona tha.
Zoey apni jagah se bhauchakii hoke khadi ho gayi,
Zoey : But this wasn't there before...
Divya : Veer!! Don't you fucking tell me...
Veer (smiles) : Oh yes indeed...
Divya : *gulps*
Veer (grins) : He melted it!!!
*Booooooooooommmm*
Aur iss akhiri visfot ke saath Veer ne sab kuch unke saamne khol ke rakh diya.
Nightwalker ne sone ke biscuits bhi pighla ke usse vase ke andar bhar diya tha.
Kisne kaha tha ki Golden bars sirf solid state me hi maujood thi Mansion me? Woh apne liquified state me bhi toh ho sakti thi?
Aur yahi tha raaz. Issi kaaran se uss pighle hue sone ne flower vase ka aakaar le liya tha. Nightwalker ne jaan boojh ke uske upar fir mitti daali, aur fir ek do phool bhi laga diye the.
Saath hi usne jaan boojh ke darwaaze ko gold se nahi banwaaya tha. Woh bewakoof nahi tha. Yadi woh aisa karta aur Veer ki tarah kli ye andaza laga leta ki bars darwaze me hai toh woh sabhi tob yu hi khazana chura lete.
Aur isliye usne golden bars ko iss tarah chhupaaya. Kisi ka shaq jaana hi nahi tha flower vase pe kyuki itne bade golden bars flower vase ke muh ke andar kese ghuste bhala?
Par kya yahi kehna tab waajib hota jab sona pighla hua ho? Shayad nahi!?
Mike : But what about those paintings???
Veer : Those were just a deception Senior Mike.
Mike : A-Ahhh!!!
Emma : What about our boats???
Veer : Isn't it obvious? He hid them!!!
Emma : That's...
Nolan : There were cameras too...
Veer : Yes!!! Whoever were watching us, they have probably been alerted. So oir next Target is them only.
*Clap* *Clap* *Clap*
Agle hi pal, Nolan ne taaliyaa bajaani shuru kar dii,
Nolan : Incredible!! In all my years of duty, I've never seen a young man like you unraveling mystery like this. You have brought us pride and respect. You will get reward for this gentleman. The findings... You'll get some Percentage of this treasure.
Veer (smiles) : Not just me. Senior Mile helped me a lot too. He should be equally rewarded.
Mike : Ahhh!! V-Veer... There's no need to--
Nolan : A wise gentleman! I like it. Okay then. I'll hand over both of your names.
Itna bol Nolan waha se nikal gaya aur Veer aur Mike dono ke liye hi tareefo ke pul baandhe jaane lage.
Veer ek dil ka saccha insaan tha. Usse kiske saath kesa behave karna hai ye bakhoobi aata tha. Usse reward ke roop me dhan raashi milne waali thi. Toh usne Mike ka naam bhi aage kar diya.
Aur kyu na kare? Jab koi nahi tha uske saath Island par jaane ke liye, tab bina kisi swaarth ke Mike ne apna naam aage badhaaya tha.
Toh jab inaam batt raha ho toh Mike ka naam toh usme aana hi tha. Idhar Mike hi nahi, sabhi ke mann me Veer ke prati izzat kaafi badh gayi.
Par aise bhi log the jo ekdum hi jal bhun gaye the iss baat pe... Aur unhi me se ek tha hamaara bandar...
Nik!!!
Woh toh daant peese Veer aur Mike ko ghoor raha tha. Aisi gaand jal rahi thi uski ki chunune kaat rahe the usse pichwade me...
Kherr! Ant bhala toh sab bhala.
Ye discussion samaapt hua, mritak logo ke mata pita ko inform kar diya gaya tha, unke liye toh maatam bann gaya tha.
Zoey bina kuch kahe hi waha se nikal chuki thi. Shayad ye sab hazam karna uske liye kuch zyaada hi tha. Usse apne mann ko sambhaalne ke liye waqt chahiye tha.
Wahi Emma Veer ke paas aayi aur uss se sirf itna boli,
"Meet me tonight here only. Outside the department @ 8:30."
Aur woh chali gayi.
***
Time ~ 8:17 PM
Raatri ka samay ho chuka tha. Aur koi bhi abhi Ghar nahi gaya tha. Veer, Suhana, Divya Nik sab yahi maujood the department me aur baaki ki chhaan been me lage hue the.
Mike ke sang Veer baahar aaya aur raaste par dono tehelne lage. Itna sab kuch aaj unhone jaana tha. Na jaane aage kya hone wala tha unke saath.
Mike ne cigarette ka dabba jeb se nikaala aur Veer ki orr badhaaya,
Toh Veer ne muskuraate hue dabbe se ek cigarette nikaal lii.
*Click*
Lighter jala ke Mike ne Veer ki cigarette ko aanch dii aur fir usne apni jalaayi,
Ek kash hawa me chorrte hue fir woh bola,
Mike : It was outstanding Veer! You did a splendid job.
Veer : You are being too humble.
Mike : No! You are being too modest.
Veer : Haha~ That's you over-praising me.
Mike : I'm just telling the truth.
Veer (smiles) : Alright! I'll take that...
Mike : Yes! After all you disclosed everything...
Veer : Disclose huh!!
Mike : Hmmm?
Veer tabhi achanak aage badhne laga, Mike ko wahi akela chorr ke,
Mike : Where are you heading to?
Veer ne bina peeche mude hi jawaab diya,
"To disclose someone else's secret."
Mike : Huh?!?
Mike ki samajh nahi aaya ki Veer aur kiske raaz kholne ki baat kar raha tha bhala?
Fir bhi, woh Veer ko akela chorr usse uski privacy dete hue, apni cigarette phek andar department me chala gaya.
***
Mumbai...
Night ~ 8:29 PM
Ek aurat stylish sii saree pehne idhar se udhar ho rahi thi. Gusse me bhi thi woh aur thodi vyakul bhi.
Saamne ki seat par ek naujavaan ladka baitha hua tha jo computer ke keyboard par apne haath fatafat chalaaye jaa raha tha.
Tabhi peeche se uss aurat ki awaaz aayi,
"Hua????"
"Try kar raha hu madam. Ye sahi toh hai na?"
"Bilkul!! Sab sahi hai. Tum bas apna kaam furti me karo."
Aur jii haa, ye koi aur nahi...
Mardo se nafrat karne waali, Niharika hi thi.
Aur uske saamne seat par baitha woh ladka tha, ek hacker!!!
Jo Veer ke phone ko hack karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Niharika : Kuch hua?
Ladka : Try kar raha hu madam. Yadi log in credentials sahi hai toh other devices se log in karna possible hai. Cloud and all... You know...
Niharika : Okay! Jaldi karo...
Uski bechaini badhti hi jaa rahi thi. Par saath hi uske andar jeetne ka ek junoon bhi tha. Yadi woh Veer ke phone se woh video le leti hai toh fir toh woh Veer se apne talwe chatwa sakti thi. Soch kar hi uska excitement aur badh raha tha.
Usne key logger install kiya tha Veer ke phone me. Ek tarah ka aisa app jo aapki keys ko record karta tha. Yaani aapke haath mobile ke keyboard par kitni baar kaha kaha chal rahe hai, kaun sa shabd zyaada use ho raha hai, otp, ya pin wagarah daalte samay kaun se numbers ko dabaaya jaa raha hai. Inn sab ka record rakhta tha.
Beshaq! Ek khatarnak app tha ye...
Niharika ke mann hi mann me laddu phoot rahe the jab achanak hi,
*Ring* *Ring*
Uska phone baja,
'Huh?'
Aur usne screen dekhi apne phone ki...
Par jese hi usne screen par nazre gadaayi, uski rooh kaanp gayi. Screen par likha tha~
Incoming call
Bastard....
Issi naam se usne Veer ka number save kiya hua tha.
Aur wo padhte hi... Uski sitti pitti gul ho gayi.
'Th-This bastard!!! Why now???'
Kaapte hue usne phone pick kiya,
Niharika : H-Hello...!?
Veer : So my slave is getting naughty huh?
Niharika : Wh-Whaaattt?
Veer : Ho gaya hack?
Niharika (jhepte hue) : Huhhhhh!!!!
Veer : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tum mujhse zyada smart ho? Yadi hoti toh meri slave na hoti... Kya hua? Bolti band ho gayi kya?
Niharika : ....
Veer : Confused ho? Ki kese mujhe pata chala? My dear slave!!! Jis din tumne mere phone key logger install kiya tha na, uss din hi mujhe pata chal gaya tha. Aur jis data se tum hack karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.... It's fake...
Niharika : W-Wo...wo... Wo...
Agle hi shan, Veer ki awaaz achanak hi ekdum buland aur itni intimidating ho gayi,
Veer : Don't play with fire! Waha aaunga toh bhaag nahi paogi....
*Thud*
Sunte hi Niharika ke haath se uska phone chhutak ke gira aur woh dagmaga ke bistar par gir padi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheeg gaya darr ke chalte...
Aur tabhi, saamne baithe hue ladke ne kaha,
Ladka : Madam! Data sach me sahi hai na?
Bechaara ladka. Niharika ye sunte hi itni aag baboola ho gayi, uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya aur woh zorr se chillaayi,
Niharika : Nikal jaao!!! Nikal jao yaha se!!!
Ladka : H-Huhh?? Madam?
Niharika : Nikalte ho ya nahi??? You bastard!!!
Iss se pehle ki Niharika usse kuch utha ke phek ke maarti, woh bechaara ladka gaand phati ke maare bhaag gaya waha se.
'Tch!!!! Worthless men!!!!'
Mardo ko gaali bak, Woh wahi padi padi apni saasein durust karne lagi. Veer ke shabd uske mann me goonjte rahe...
***
Las Vegas
Investigation Department
Time : 8:38 PM
Idhar Veer ne jese hi Niharika se baat kar phone kaata, bagal se usse ek jaana maana shaks aata hua nazar aaya,
Emma!!!
8:30 ka milne ka bola tha usne. Luckily, Veer baahar hi tha.
Emma : It's good that you're here.
Veer : So? What's the matter?
Emma : I wanted to tell you something.
Veer : Finally opening up huh?
Emma : Y-Yeaahhh!!
Veer : !!!?
Emma : Actually... Actually, I went there illegally. I... I stole a yacht from a rich person. That's why I didn't tell you giys earlier.
Veer : Ohhhh! That's it?
Emma : Y-Yeah!
Sharmindagi ke maare Emma ne sarr jhuka liya. Baat zara sii thi. Par shayad Emma ke liye badi thi.
Usne ek ameer vyakti ki yacht churaayi thi mansion me aane ke liye. Aur isliye wo ye kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi.
Emma (blushes) : Can I... Can I come with you?
Veer : Huh? I'm not from here. I'm from India.
Emma : Wh-Whaaaattt???
Veer (smiles) : Yes!
Emma : O-Okkaaayy!! So you don't need any assistant? What work you do there?
Veer : I have a business.
Emma : Then how about a assistant? I... I can work for you ...
Veer kuch kehta tabhi usne dekha ki Department se Nolan baahar nikal apni car me baith raha hai. Saath hi ek khubsoorat mahil uske liye darwaaza bhi khol rahi thi. Jo ki uske secretary thi.
Veer : Man! I do need a professional secretary though.
Veer ki nigaaho ko follow kar Emma ne uss orr dekha.
Emma : A professional secretary huh!? I think it's time to leave then...
Veer : Hmm? Ohhh!
Emma bina kuch kahe Veer ko bas kuch palo ke liye dekhi aur waha se palat ke woh nikal gayi.
Idhar Veer uske jaate hi department me jab andar aaya... Toh Suhana aur Divya aapas me behas kar rahi thi,
Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?
Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...
Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,
Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,
"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of more than 4.8k words. This took a lot of my time. Toh like thokne ka dil se aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Emma, may be ab wapas se story me na dikhe. Quki usko laga wo secratary ban kr maje karegi veer ke sath. Lakin apneveer ke life me all ready itne bhre pade hai ki wo bs uske sath thode time maje kar skta hai aur usase jyada kuch aur nahi. Aur wo soch rahi thi wo veer ka use kr le. Aur Zoey i hope wo wapas aayegi jaruar ab jaiseye nahi pata lakin mujhe lagata hai wo aayegi wapas veer ke paas.
Aur ye divya ne kon sa card feka. Aur aisa kya tha card me jisase pata lagega ki suhana ko yaha divya ne kyu bulaya tha.
Aur mujhe lagta hai ki kuch logo ko ye lagega ki isme itni badi kya baat ho gayi ki nightwalker ne dimak lagaya to itna kya dar gaye jyada ho gaya. Lakin wo ye chij sahi se feel nahi kar pa rahe hai ki jb ek low lavel ka member itna dimak laga raha hai to jo main honge is group ke wo kitna jyada dimak lagayenge. Aur mujhe jaha tak lagta hai last arc power aur strength par based tha lakin ye wala arc puri taraf intelligence aur dimak ke upar based hai. Abhi aage aur kitne jyada shock, trap, secret, aur na jane kya kya hme dekhne ko milega. Hum sayad imagine bhi sahi se nahi kar skte hai. Lakin apna veer bhi phle se bhut grow kar gaya hai. Lakin abhi bhi use ek bahut long way Complete karna hai. Bahut kuch abhi hona baki hai.
Bahut hi umda ek no. Update Werewolf bhai.
Keel rocking.
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