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Update 107 & 108...
Mithridatism... It was expected ki Pitcher wine mein hi zeher milaata hai aur usi wine ko khud bhi pita hai, but somehow the poison was not able to make any effect on him... I thought ki wo shayad koyi precaution ya fir chemical le raha hoga jis se ki wo safe rahe, but Mithridatism was a surprise! Ancient texts show that Mithridatists existed hundreds of years ago too but practicing such thing, to kill certain people in a certain way...
Undoubtedly, Veer ka awwal darje ke namoono se saamna hua hai Vegas mein... Just like Nightwalker, Pitcher loved killing people too, I can understand that they feel really good being the cause of someone's death but the original question here is something different...
Jim, The Nightwalker & The Pitcher... Teeno behad alag criminals the, Jim ek drug dealer tha ye hum jaante hain, par kya wo murders bhi karta tha, that isn't mentioned anywhere... Nightwalker ko logon ko ek jagah ikkattha kar, ek – ek kar maarne mein khushi milti thi... He loved the scent of blood and the red colour too... Wahin, Pitcher ko khubsurat celebrities ko maarne ka shouk tha, par ye teeno ek hi line mein kaise khade ho gaye?
Nightwalker, Pitcher ko wine bhejta tha, ye samajh aata hai, par aakhir ye “House Of Killers” existence mein kaise aaya? Jis detective ki maut sabse pehle huyi thi, Veer – Suhana ke Vegas jaane par, usne jo note chhoda tha denoting “House Of Killers”, use kisne maara tha..? 
Kuchh to suna hi hoga usne aisa jo uski zindagi par bhaari pad gaya... Most importantly, aise criminals jo serial killers hon, jinka ek special tareeka ho murders ka, unhen ek chhat ke neeche aise hi nahi laaya jaa sakta... So, we can understand ki koyi chautha shakhs bhi raha hoga, jiske haath ke neeche ye teeno kaam karte the... Sabse important ki Divya aur Department is conclusion par kaise pahunche ki “House Of Killers” gang yahi tak seemit the... Kya Pitcher se aage koyi aur criminal nahi ho sakta tha..? Another thing, Veer ko bhi is baare mein koyi doubt nahi hua, ya kuchh aisa hai jo Veer samajh chuka hai, par zaahir nahi kar raha...
Khair, Pitcher ko maarne ke liye jis tareeke ka istemaal kiya tha Veer ne, saaf hai ki ab Veer kahaan pahunch chuka hai... His confidence is sky high! Aatish, Slogan aur ab House Of Killers, back to back teen gangs ko dhoya hai usne aur iska nateeja hum dekh hi sakte hain... Sylvia's venom cure zaroor ek mehangi skill thi, aur kaafi achhe amount mein points kharch ho gaye Veer ke, parantu jo laabh is se Veer ko mila hai, wo kitne bhi points se badh kar hai... Especially, the experience, to survive in these situations is worth every point he spent!
Divya ko bhi bilkul hi bewakoof bana diya Veer ne aur us bechaari ke paas koyi raasta bhi nahi, Veer ki baat ko sach maan ne ke siwa... Aakhir, use bhi to kuchh na kuchh report banakar bhejni hi hai department mein! Waise bhi, Veer par abhi tak kaafi bharosa karne lagi hogi wo, aur isiliye yahaan bhi wo Veer ki baat sach maan baithi... But I'm interested in Nik's reaction about all this... Sulag gayi hogi uski to!
Btw. Is sabke beech, Divya ka Veer ko lekar chintit hona, saabit kar gaya ki bhale hi Veer aur Divya fir kabhi na milen, par Divya use shayad kabhi bhi bhula nahi paayegi... Waise mujhe lagta hai ki bhavishya mein dobara dikhayi dene waali hai Divya, Veer ki zindagi mein, par iske bina bhi, Veer sang bitaye in kuchh hi dino ka vishesh prabhav pada hai uspar... 
Idhar, Suhana aur Veer ne waapis India jaane ki planning bhi kar li thi joki ab dhari ki dhari reh jaane waali hai... Waise aapne kaha tha ki Veer 110 update mein Mumbai lautega, arthat 109 aur 110 ke kuchh hissa hi hai Vegas mein... Is dauraan is naye villain se dobara mulaakat ho, ye sambhav nahi, aur itne samay mein Suhana theek ho jaaye, ye bhi mushkil hi hai... To ya to apne ko kuchh dinon ka leap dekhne mil sakta hai next update mein ya fir
Suhana... I know ki Suhana abhi nahi maregi, kuchh aur naa sahi to uski last favour sun nahi paaya tha Veer, wo batane ke liye Suhana ka zinda rehna bohot zaroori hai...
Suhana aur Veer, is Vegas trip ke kaaran behad close aa chuke hain... Suhana has started treating him like a good friend, especially the fact that she isn't flaunting her money or status like she used to do... That ring one, in the hotel to this scene.. Suhana getting happy after Veer agreed to party! Btw. Suhana ki jo images hain wo kaafi zyada young nahi lagti uski age ke hisaab se
... Turkish actress hi hogi waise ye bhi? 
Coming back, kuchh achha samay saath mein bitaya dono ne jiska ek achha khaasa impression bhi pada hoga Suhana par...
Firstly, Veer jab us Hotel se sakushal baahar nikla tab us park mein Suhana ka reaction! She came and hugged him straightway, without any hesitation... Haan baad mein use realisation hua aur wo alag hi gayi parantu, ye bhi koyi chhoti baat to thi nahi... Secondly, Juhi ki chocolates ki baat ho ya fir jo bhi dono ne poora din saath mein bitaya, ant mein uska asar hum dekh hi sakte hain... Suhana kissed him, no doubt she thought that she was going to die, but undoubtedly, uske bheetar kaafi samay se feelings rahi hongi, jiska ye result tha... Uska kathan ki Veer ko bachane ke liye uske kadam swayam hi daud pade, apne aap mein is poori situation ko describe karne ke liye kaafi hai...
Btw. Park mein jo Veer ko andesha hua ki Suhana kuchh chhupa rahi hai aur jo last favour Suhana ne maangi, jo Veer sun nahi paaya, are the two things connected? Kya in dono hi cheezon ka connection us murder athva murders se ho sakta hai jinse Suhana ke haath range hain? Kyonki iske alawa mujhe nahi lagta ki kuchh aur suspicious hai Suhana ke baare mein... Ho sakta hai ki Gaurav ke saath kuchh problem huyi hogi, hamesha ki tarah, par uske baare mein sochkar pareshaan ho, itni bewakoof bhi nahi Suhana...
So, we can assume ki jo last favour tha wo isi se related tha kyonki Sonia ko protect karne ki maang wo pehle hi kar chuki thi & one more thing, ki Suhana ke hosh mein aane ke baad, awwal to Veer us se puchhega nahi, aur agar puchha bhi to wo last favour dohrayegi nahi, iska ek hi kaaran hai ki lekhak mahodaya ko ataah aanand ki anubhuti hoti hai readers ko suspense mein chhodkar... 
Coming to this new negative character in the story which seems to be the baap of all negative characters till now... And let me tell you another thing, I observed, ye Veer ka bhi baap saabit ho sakta hai, agar abhi dono bhide to
... It looks like ki is bande ke paas jo system hai, uska level fihaal Pari se oopar hai, because he looked much more confident and had stronger vibes as compared to Veer! Iska reason ye bhi ho sakta hai ki he knew everything about Veer, jabki Veer ke liye wo ek bohot bada surprise tha, but I'll stay with my thought, that his system is on a higher level as compared to Veer's and obviously is better than that Pari... 
Abhi ke liye ye maankar chala jaa sakta hai ki use koyi mission mila hoga jiske kaaran wo Veer ke saamne aaya... Doosra kaaran ye bhi ho sakta hai ki “House Of Killers” ka asal janmdaata yahi shakhs ho aur isi ke zariye usne Veer ke kaarnamo ki jhalak paayi ho... I don't think ki uske liye samajhna tab mushkil raha hoga ki Veer uske sage waala hai... It's quite possible ki wo pehle hi Veer ko check kar chuka ho... Chunki Veer ko kuchh dikha nahi tha us aadmi ko check karne par, similar cheez uske saath huyi hogi, aur tabhi use maaloom chala hoga Veer ke rahasya ke baare mein... Possible ye bhi hai ki system apne se nichle level ke system – holders ko hi check kar sakta ho... Isiliye Veer was unable to do so, jabki wo shayad ismein kaamyab ho gaya ho... But one thing is clear, uska target Veer ki maut nahi thi... Shayad wo Suhana ko hi goli maarna chahta tha... Assuming ki wo aadmi usi ke the, kisi teesri party ke nahi!
Definitely, ye ek bada Twist hai Veer ki journey mein... Pari ko lekar koyi aur secret abhi tak Veer pata nahi kar paaya hai par shayad ab wo is aur dhyaan de... I think is aadmi se nipatne ke liye Veer ko behtar dhang se System aur Pari ko samajhna hoga, kyonki Veer ko koyi idea nahi hone waala ki saamne waala insaan kaun hai aur kitna dangerous hai... Khair, abhi ke liye Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ki taraf hi hoga, let's see ki jab wo hosh mein aati hai, tab dono ke beech kya baatein hongi... Rahi baat Divya ki to wo police ki tarah kaand hone ke baad hi pahunchegi naa...
Both the Updates were just outstanding men! As I said, Mithridatism was really a good surprise, you know how to hide secrets and maintain suspense... The images you used, were so apt! Especially, those three – four describing Veer and Suhana's outing... Btw. Suhana ke liye yahi images use karte the ya actress badal di hai aapne? I think jab plane (Mumbai to Vegas) mein Suhana ki tasveer aayi thi wo koyi aur thi...
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Mithridatism... It was expected ki Pitcher wine mein hi zeher milaata hai aur usi wine ko khud bhi pita hai, but somehow the poison was not able to make any effect on him... I thought ki wo shayad koyi precaution ya fir chemical le raha hoga jis se ki wo safe rahe, but Mithridatism was a surprise! Ancient texts show that Mithridatists existed hundreds of years ago too but practicing such thing, to kill certain people in a certain way...
Undoubtedly, Veer ka awwal darje ke namoono se saamna hua hai Vegas mein... Just like Nightwalker, Pitcher loved killing people too, I can understand that they feel really good being the cause of someone's death but the original question here is something different...Jim, The Nightwalker & The Pitcher... Teeno behad alag criminals the, Jim ek drug dealer tha ye hum jaante hain, par kya wo murders bhi karta tha, that isn't mentioned anywhere... Nightwalker ko logon ko ek jagah ikkattha kar, ek – ek kar maarne mein khushi milti thi... He loved the scent of blood and the red colour too... Wahin, Pitcher ko khubsurat celebrities ko maarne ka shouk tha, par ye teeno ek hi line mein kaise khade ho gaye?
Nightwalker, Pitcher ko wine bhejta tha, ye samajh aata hai, par aakhir ye “House Of Killers” existence mein kaise aaya? Jis detective ki maut sabse pehle huyi thi, Veer – Suhana ke Vegas jaane par, usne jo note chhoda tha denoting “House Of Killers”, use kisne maara tha..? Kuchh to suna hi hoga usne aisa jo uski zindagi par bhaari pad gaya... Most importantly, aise criminals jo serial killers hon, jinka ek special tareeka ho murders ka, unhen ek chhat ke neeche aise hi nahi laaya jaa sakta... So, we can understand ki koyi chautha shakhs bhi raha hoga, jiske haath ke neeche ye teeno kaam karte the... Sabse important ki Divya aur Department is conclusion par kaise pahunche ki “House Of Killers” gang yahi tak seemit the... Kya Pitcher se aage koyi aur criminal nahi ho sakta tha..? Another thing, Veer ko bhi is baare mein koyi doubt nahi hua, ya kuchh aisa hai jo Veer samajh chuka hai, par zaahir nahi kar raha...
Khair, Pitcher ko maarne ke liye jis tareeke ka istemaal kiya tha Veer ne, saaf hai ki ab Veer kahaan pahunch chuka hai... His confidence is sky high! Aatish, Slogan aur ab House Of Killers, back to back teen gangs ko dhoya hai usne aur iska nateeja hum dekh hi sakte hain... Sylvia's venom cure zaroor ek mehangi skill thi, aur kaafi achhe amount mein points kharch ho gaye Veer ke, parantu jo laabh is se Veer ko mila hai, wo kitne bhi points se badh kar hai... Especially, the experience, to survive in these situations is worth every point he spent!
Divya ko bhi bilkul hi bewakoof bana diya Veer ne aur us bechaari ke paas koyi raasta bhi nahi, Veer ki baat ko sach maan ne ke siwa... Aakhir, use bhi to kuchh na kuchh report banakar bhejni hi hai department mein! Waise bhi, Veer par abhi tak kaafi bharosa karne lagi hogi wo, aur isiliye yahaan bhi wo Veer ki baat sach maan baithi... But I'm interested in Nik's reaction about all this... Sulag gayi hogi uski to!
Btw. Is sabke beech, Divya ka Veer ko lekar chintit hona, saabit kar gaya ki bhale hi Veer aur Divya fir kabhi na milen, par Divya use shayad kabhi bhi bhula nahi paayegi... Waise mujhe lagta hai ki bhavishya mein dobara dikhayi dene waali hai Divya, Veer ki zindagi mein, par iske bina bhi, Veer sang bitaye in kuchh hi dino ka vishesh prabhav pada hai uspar... Idhar, Suhana aur Veer ne waapis India jaane ki planning bhi kar li thi joki ab dhari ki dhari reh jaane waali hai... Waise aapne kaha tha ki Veer 110 update mein Mumbai lautega, arthat 109 aur 110 ke kuchh hissa hi hai Vegas mein... Is dauraan is naye villain se dobara mulaakat ho, ye sambhav nahi, aur itne samay mein Suhana theek ho jaaye, ye bhi mushkil hi hai... To ya to apne ko kuchh dinon ka leap dekhne mil sakta hai next update mein ya fir
Suhana... I know ki Suhana abhi nahi maregi, kuchh aur naa sahi to uski last favour sun nahi paaya tha Veer, wo batane ke liye Suhana ka zinda rehna bohot zaroori hai... Suhana aur Veer, is Vegas trip ke kaaran behad close aa chuke hain... Suhana has started treating him like a good friend, especially the fact that she isn't flaunting her money or status like she used to do... That ring one, in the hotel to this scene.. Suhana getting happy after Veer agreed to party! Btw. Suhana ki jo images hain wo kaafi zyada young nahi lagti uski age ke hisaab se
... Turkish actress hi hogi waise ye bhi? Coming back, kuchh achha samay saath mein bitaya dono ne jiska ek achha khaasa impression bhi pada hoga Suhana par...Firstly, Veer jab us Hotel se sakushal baahar nikla tab us park mein Suhana ka reaction! She came and hugged him straightway, without any hesitation... Haan baad mein use realisation hua aur wo alag hi gayi parantu, ye bhi koyi chhoti baat to thi nahi... Secondly, Juhi ki chocolates ki baat ho ya fir jo bhi dono ne poora din saath mein bitaya, ant mein uska asar hum dekh hi sakte hain... Suhana kissed him, no doubt she thought that she was going to die, but undoubtedly, uske bheetar kaafi samay se feelings rahi hongi, jiska ye result tha... Uska kathan ki Veer ko bachane ke liye uske kadam swayam hi daud pade, apne aap mein is poori situation ko describe karne ke liye kaafi hai...
Btw. Park mein jo Veer ko andesha hua ki Suhana kuchh chhupa rahi hai aur jo last favour Suhana ne maangi, jo Veer sun nahi paaya, are the two things connected?
Kya in dono hi cheezon ka connection us murder athva murders se ho sakta hai jinse Suhana ke haath range hain? Kyonki iske alawa mujhe nahi lagta ki kuchh aur suspicious hai Suhana ke baare mein... Ho sakta hai ki Gaurav ke saath kuchh problem huyi hogi, hamesha ki tarah, par uske baare mein sochkar pareshaan ho, itni bewakoof bhi nahi Suhana... So, we can assume ki jo last favour tha wo isi se related tha kyonki Sonia ko protect karne ki maang wo pehle hi kar chuki thi & one more thing, ki Suhana ke hosh mein aane ke baad, awwal to Veer us se puchhega nahi, aur agar puchha bhi to wo last favour dohrayegi nahi, iska ek hi kaaran hai ki lekhak mahodaya ko ataah aanand ki anubhuti hoti hai readers ko suspense mein chhodkar... Coming to this new negative character in the story which seems to be the baap of all negative characters till now... And let me tell you another thing, I observed, ye Veer ka bhi baap saabit ho sakta hai, agar abhi dono bhide to
... It looks like ki is bande ke paas jo system hai, uska level fihaal Pari se oopar hai, because he looked much more confident and had stronger vibes as compared to Veer! Iska reason ye bhi ho sakta hai ki he knew everything about Veer, jabki Veer ke liye wo ek bohot bada surprise tha, but I'll stay with my thought, that his system is on a higher level as compared to Veer's and obviously is better than that Pari... Abhi ke liye ye maankar chala jaa sakta hai ki use koyi mission mila hoga jiske kaaran wo Veer ke saamne aaya... Doosra kaaran ye bhi ho sakta hai ki “House Of Killers” ka asal janmdaata yahi shakhs ho aur isi ke zariye usne Veer ke kaarnamo ki jhalak paayi ho... I don't think ki uske liye samajhna tab mushkil raha hoga ki Veer uske sage waala hai... It's quite possible ki wo pehle hi Veer ko check kar chuka ho... Chunki Veer ko kuchh dikha nahi tha us aadmi ko check karne par, similar cheez uske saath huyi hogi, aur tabhi use maaloom chala hoga Veer ke rahasya ke baare mein... Possible ye bhi hai ki system apne se nichle level ke system – holders ko hi check kar sakta ho... Isiliye Veer was unable to do so, jabki wo shayad ismein kaamyab ho gaya ho... But one thing is clear, uska target Veer ki maut nahi thi... Shayad wo Suhana ko hi goli maarna chahta tha... Assuming ki wo aadmi usi ke the, kisi teesri party ke nahi!
Definitely, ye ek bada Twist hai Veer ki journey mein... Pari ko lekar koyi aur secret abhi tak Veer pata nahi kar paaya hai par shayad ab wo is aur dhyaan de... I think is aadmi se nipatne ke liye Veer ko behtar dhang se System aur Pari ko samajhna hoga, kyonki Veer ko koyi idea nahi hone waala ki saamne waala insaan kaun hai aur kitna dangerous hai... Khair, abhi ke liye Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ki taraf hi hoga, let's see ki jab wo hosh mein aati hai, tab dono ke beech kya baatein hongi... Rahi baat Divya ki to wo police ki tarah kaand hone ke baad hi pahunchegi naa...
Both the Updates were just outstanding men! As I said, Mithridatism was really a good surprise, you know how to hide secrets and maintain suspense... The images you used, were so apt! Especially, those three – four describing Veer and Suhana's outing... Btw. Suhana ke liye yahi images use karte the ya actress badal di hai aapne? I think jab plane (Mumbai to Vegas) mein Suhana ki tasveer aayi thi wo koyi aur thi...
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
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Nat n tow paiso ki barish ker di in teeno k ooperUpdate - 108 ~ The Last Two FavoursAb tak...
Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!
Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.
Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.
Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke naate hue figure par.
'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
Ab aage...
A day before flight...
Aaj woh din tha jab Suhana aur Veer Las Vegas me antim raatri ke liye rukne waale the.
Aur kal hi unki fir waapas apne vatan lautne ki flight thi.
Inn beete dino me na jaane kya kya pareshaniyo ka saamna karna pada tha unhe. Shuruaat hui thi Jim se jaha unhe iss house of the killers gang ka bodh hua, fir Nightwalker ke Mansion ka maut ka woh nanga naach aur antim me Pitcher ka rehesyamayi tareeqe se sundar hastiyo ko maut ki neend sulaana.
Kuch bhi ho, inn sab me sirf Veer hi nahi tha stress me. Suhana aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal tha. Suhana toh ab apni seema par aa chuki thi.
Itne dino ki bhaag daud aur harr taraf maut ki khabre sunn sunn ke hi uska dimaag phata jaa raha tha. Jald se jald ek refreshment chahiye tha usse toh ab.
Aur isliye, Suhana ne Divya ko baaki sab kuch se deal karne ke liye usse apne haal par hi chorr diya.
Pitcher ka raaz khulne ke baad, Divya ke mann me dherr saare sawaal the, khaas kar Veer ko lekar. Par kya karti bechaari? Veer tha, jo kabhi bhi apna asli sach bataane nahi waala tha. Ant me Divya ko wahi baatein sweekaar karni padi jo Veer ne apne muh se bataayi thi.
Aur aaj teeno Divya, Suhana aur Veer jis musibaat se nijaat paaye the uske liye vasooli karne aaye the.
Dusre shabdo me, woh yaha Nat se paise lene aaye the. Nat ne Divya ko hire kar paise dene ki baat ki thi apne concert ke baad.
Aur Divya apne haath me aaya paisa chorr de? Aisa kese ho sakta tha!?
Teeno hi ek baar firse baahar baithe hue the. Aur pichli hi baar ki tarah Suhana ka muh fula hua tha,
Suhana : Fir wahi scene.
Divya : Hahahahaha~ Kya kar sakte hai? Celebrity hai woh. Hume apne hi paise lene ke liye wait karna hoga.
Suhana : Kitni hi badi celebrity ho. Mujhe abhi bhi uska attitude pasand nahi aaya. Humph~
Veer : Well! At least, hume baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai.
Suhana : Huh? Kya matlab baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai? Veer, woh Sonu ke saath bachpan me khela karti thi. Mere ghar aati thi woh ucchal ucchal ke. And look at her now. Sach kehte hai log. Logo ko badalte derr nahi lagti.
Divya : Hahaha~ Ohh! My Sonny is pissed!
Suhana : Shut up! And don't call me with that fucking name.
Divya : Hehe~
Suhana : Mein washroom se hoke aati hu tab tak.
Woh uthi aur apni kamar matkaate hue baahar nikal gayi. Ab udhar sirf aur sirf Veer aur Divya hi bache hue the.
Veer Pari se kuch baatein karne hi waala tha jab achanak hi,
*Ding*
[Profit Path : Kiss Divya now.]
'Ehhh?'
Uske mann me ek message aake pop hua.
[Aapko Divya ko kiss karna hai Master.]
'What the fuccckkkk!!??'
[Ahem!]
Veer ye puchne hi wala tha ki ye naye scroll ka kaam kya hai aur tabhi iss naye scroll ne ek path de diya.
"Ye kya bakchodi hai? Pari??? Kiss? I mean yeah kissing her is good and all but..."
[Pffftttt~ Hahaha~ Toh kariye kiss fir.]
'Par iska kiss se kya lena dena. Wtf is happening?'
[Master~ Iss scroll ko underestimate mat kariye. Jesa naam hai wesa hi kaam hai iska. Time to time ye aapko profit paths show karta rahega. Aur yakeen maaniye, agar aap iske bataaye gaye path ko follow karenge toh aapko ameer bann'ne se koi nahi rok sakta.]
'Hmm! Toh ye business related hai! Right?'
[Jii haan Master! Ye aapki rich life ke liye hi hai. Dusre shabdo me jaha jaha profit hone ki possibility rahegi. Profit Path aapko paths de dega. Ab ye aapke upar hai ki aap uss path ko follow karke kuch earn karna chaahte ho ya nahi?]
'Hmm! I see! Fir bhi, Miss Divya ko kiss karna aur...!'
[Kar ke dekhiye! Tabhi hume pata chalega na.]
'Aisa lag raha hai mein scam ke daldal me doobne jaa raha hu.'
[Hehe~ Nooo! Just trust me!]
'Fine then! Miss Divya! I'm sorry! But I'm about to taste you~'
Agle hi pal uski nigaahein Divya ke husn par tik gayi. Khud ke upar nazre mehsoos karte hi Divya ne Veer ko dekha,
Divya : What?
Veer : Heh~
[Let's go~]
Divya (blushes) : Wh-What is it!?
Divya ke badan par goosebumps aa rahe the. Ye Veer achanak se usse ajeeb nigaaho se kyu dekhne laga tha? Uske andar jese khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi.
Aur tabhi, Veer aage badha aur uske gaalo ko choomne laga,
Divya : V-Veeeerrrr!!! Wh-What are you doing!!!?
Veer (smiles) : Taking my reward!
Divya (blushes) : K-Kaisa reward?
Veer : Of course! Ye waala...!
Aage badhte hi usne pal bhar me Divya ke raseele honth apne muh me bhar liye.
"Mmmmnnnnnnnnn~"
Divya firse virodh karti rahi par ek do baar me hi jese Veer ke honth uske labo ko choosna shuru kiye, Divya ka virodh saara ka saara gaayab hoke reh gaya. Balki, uske haath khud-ba-khud Veer ki collor ko kass liye,
"Nnnnnnnnngggghhhhhhhhh~"
*Slurp* *Slurp*
Uski saasein fulne lagi, aur usne turant hi dhakka deke Veer ko alag kiya. Thook ki ek patli sii lakeer dono ke muh se jud gayi.
Aur tabhi unhe kisi ke aane ki aahat aayi,
Veer ne muskuraate hue apni ungli se uss lakeer ko toda aur woh chup chaap ek seedhe bacche ki tarah hoke baith gaya. Toh wahi, Divya ne sharmaate hue apna muh haatho se pocha aur apni dress dobaara check karne lagi.
Aane waala shaks aur koi nahi, Suhana thi. Washroom se aake woh waapas sofe par baith gayi.
Kuch chand derri ke baad...
Abhi yaha baatein ho hi rahi thi jab ek cabin se nikal ke ek ladki aayi aur unhe dekhte hue boli,
"Miss is coming!"
Bol kar woh waha se nikal gayi. Aur bas kuch derr me hi Nat cabin se nikli aur baahar aayi. Kaali dress me woh harr baar ki tarah behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi.
Jitni baar usse dekho, utni baar mann machal jaaye kisi bhi aadmi ka. Aur Veer bhi unme se hi ek tha.
Nat ko firse dekhte hi uske dil ki ghanti bajne lagi thi.
'So beautiful...!'
[Hmm! Hmm! She is indeed. I will agree here.
Woh aake unke saamne ruki, uske chehre par ek muskaan thi.
Nat (smiles) : Looks like, you did the job!
Divya : Of course!
Nat : Well! Ye raha cheque!
Kehte hue usne Divya ko ek cheque haath me thama diya.
Divya ne jese hi cheque dekha woh hairat me reh gayi. Cheque par keemat million dollar ki thi. Yaani kareeb kareeb 8 crore ke aas paas ki rakam.
Divya : Th-This...!!!
Divya ke haav bhaav dekhte hi Nat ke chehre par ek santushti bhari muskaan sajj gayi,
Nat : Mene pehle hi ye baat boli thi. Right? I will pay you a hefty amount. Toh ye raha! Have it!
Divya : Well...! Iss baar. Saara credit Veer ko jaata hai.
Divya ki baat sunn, Nat ki nazre Veer par tikk gayi aur woh ek chaav ke saath usse ghoorne lagi,
Veer : ...!?
Nat (smiles) : Then, I must thank you too I guess.
Usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne apni taraf se zarra sii bhi derri na dikhaayi.
Aur haath milaate hue dono ne hi haami bhar ke ek dusre se mann hi mann baat kar lii.
Suhana ko kuch khaas interest nahi tha. Woh bas haath baandhe apni aankhein ghumaate hue jald se jald yaha se nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Nat : I hope we will meet again!
Veer : Maybe!?
Nat (smiles) : Maybe huh!!?
Veer : ...
Nat : I have an appointment. I will take my leave here. Thanks once again Divya! You were a big help!
Divya : That's my job!
Nat ne ek antim baar sarr hilaaya aur waha se woh nikal gayi.
Suhana : Aaarggghhhhh!!! She pisses me so much! Mein jaa rahi hu baahar! Parking me milo tum dono!
Suhana yaha se nikli toh wahi Divya sofe par baith ke apne phone me kisi ka contact dhundh rahi thi.
Aur idhar Veer...! Uski nazre abhi abhi Nat ke jaate hue uss figure par tiki hui thi. Nat ne bhi jese Veer ke mann ki baat sunn lii, woh lift me andar jaane se pehle ek baar palti,
Veer ko dekhi aur,
Muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya. Aur fir muh se 'bye' kehte hue woh lift me ghus gayi.
'Huh!?'
[Uske aur aapke beech kuch pakk raha hai kya Master? Why do I feel weird? Hmm!!! (‘◉⌓◉’) ]
'Naah! You are overthinking!'
Ek lambi saans leke Veer muda ki tabhi Divya uske nazdeek aayi,
Divya : Apna... Apna account number do!
Veer : Hmm?
Divya (blushes) : Idiot! Reward nahi chahiye kya? Abhi itna reward reward kar rahe the. Give me your account number. I'll.. I'll transfer half of the amount to yours.
Veer : Woahhh!
[Dekha! Mene kaha tha na? Profit Path par bharosa rakhiye.]
Divya : Mujhe yaha se ek important kaam se jaana hai. Aaj mein busy rahungi. Tum Suhana ko leke kahi acchi sii jagah jao. Wese bhi kal tum dono ki flight hai. Jaane se pehle ek refreshment zaroori hai. Enjoy kar lo thoda. Itne din frustrate ho gaye hoge. Suhana ko bhi thoda accha feel hoga.
Veer : Are you...!?
Divya : Yeah I'm sure! Ye rahi keys! Go now! Usse wait karna pasand nahi hai.
Divya Veer ko gaadi ki chaavi thama ke waha se ravaana ho gayi.
Aur Veer bhi nirdesh anusaar Suhana ko leke waha se nikal gaya. Profit Path ne toh sach me uska fayda kara diya tha. Upar se tareeqa bhi bada accha tha.
Yadi Veer ne Divya ko kiss kar woh ehsaas na dilaaya hota toh shayad Divya ne paise nahi diye hote. Aur agar deti bhi toh shayad aadhi rakam saath me nahi baatati.
Veer aur Suhana car me baithe hue the jab Veer ne sawaal kiya,
Veer : Toh? Kaha chalna hai?
Suhana : Kaha chalna chaahte ho?
Veer : Mein?
Suhana (smiles) : Haa tum! Kyuki mene sab ghooma hai yaha. Tum hi pehli baar aaye ho.
Veer : I...
Veer confused tha aur uska ye confusion dekh Suhana khil-khila uthi.
Suhana : Mall chalte hai. Sonu ne mujhse kuch accesories laane ko kaha tha. Aaj last day bhi hai hamaara yaha. Hum bhi kuch shopping kar lenge? How about that?
Veer : Ohhh!! Right right!!! Mujhe yaad aaya. Mein ye kese bhul sakta hu?
Suhana : Kya?
Veer (smiles) : Meri Juhi ke liye mujhe chocolates leni hai.
Suhana : Juhi? Ohh that Little kid? I see!
Suhana ek soch me doob gayi. Veer yaha itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi uss choti sii bacchi ki liye chocolates lena nahi bhula? Ek ajeeb sii feeling uske dil me jaagi, jisse woh samajh nahi paayi ki kya thi.
Dono ne dherr saari shoping kii, hassi mazaak toh kahi ek dusre ki taang kheechne me dono ka samay guzra.
Suhana jitna Veer ke sang rehti woh khud ko utna acche se mehsoos kar paati. Usse aisa lag raha tha jese woh bina kisi darr ke Veer ke saamne apni split personality ko bekaabu bhi hone de sakti thi. Jese usse visvaash tha ki agar Veer uske saamne hai. Toh usse koi chinta nahi rahegi.
Dono shopping ke baad street par roadside baithe hue the. Aaj ka din kitna khubsoorti se beeta tha unka.
Suhana : Toh? Raat ka kya plan hai? Kahi aur ghoomna hai?
Veer : Aaj aap dinner ki party kyu nahi deti!?
Suhana : Ab dinner party bhi mein hi du? Abhi itni shopping karwaayi mene!
Veer (smiles) : Toh dijiye! Wese bhi! Aapki dinner party sab ko naseeb kaha hoti hai? Look at Nat. Unhe bhi mauka nahi milne wala.
Suhana pyaar se muh ferrte hue Veer ke joke par muskuraayi,
Suhana : Duh! No way!
Veer : Fine then! Dinner ki party meri taraf se.
Suhana : Yessssss!!!!!
Dono hi behad khush the. Divya ke paas badqismati se samay nahi tha toh sirf Veer aur Suhana hi iss dinner ka hissa the.
Aur keval do logo ke hone ke kaaran, ye dinner kam dinner date zyada lag rahi thi.
Luckily, unn dono ka dinner behad hi acchi tarah se hua. Suhana me jo change aaya tha Veer ke prati woh zameen aasmaan ka tha.
Woh ab Veer ko apne baraabar ke dost ki nigaaho se dekhti thi jo ki ek boht badi baat thi. Saath hi unn aankho me ab kahi bhi nafrat ya chidh nahi thi Veer ke liye. Balki kuch aur hi tha. Kuch aisa... Jis se Suhana abhi anibhigya thi.
Veer iss aalishaan hotel ki first floor ki balcony ke paas khada hua tha, Suhana ka woh wait kar raha tha. Jab tabhi achanak neeche ke ground floor par uski nazar gayi aur usne dekha ki,
Ek suit pehne aadmi usse hi peni nazro se ghoor raha tha.
'Huh? Check!!!'
*Ding*
[No information available.]
Message padhte hi Veer ki aankhein shock ke maare chaudi ho gayi.
'P-Pariiii!???'
Aisa pehle aaj tak nahi hua tha. Ye sab kya tha? Veer ne Kaera ko jab check kiya tha tab usse "you are not eligible to view this person's status." dikhaayi diya tha.
Par ye?
No information available! Yeh kya tha? Woh kuch soch paata ki tabhi woh vyakti chalte hue aage aaya, uske haatho me ek cigarette thi aur Veer ko dekh ek kutil muskaan dete hue woh waha neeche se baayi orr mudd gaya.
Pal bhar me hi Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.
'What!?? What is happening!?? Kaun tha wohhh??? Who the fuck he wasss??? Pari?!?'
[Yes master]
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]
*Ding*
[16 enemies were found nearby.]
Ye dekhte hi Veer ki bolti band ho gayi.
'Fucccckkkkkk!!!!!'
Aur agle hi pal woh mud ke turant bhaaga, udhar Suhana apna make-up washroom se check kar ke nikal rahi thi jab Veer ki tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi,
"Miss Suhaaanaaaa!!!!"
Suhana : Hmm? K-Kya h--???
Woh kuch keh paati ki uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kalaayi thaami aur zorr se usse bhaga ke hotel ke baahar le jaane laga,
Suhana : Ahnn!? V-Veeerrr? Kya hua? Wait!!! What the hell?? Haah... Haah... Tell me!!! Hum bhaag kyu rahe hai!?
Veer : Puchiye mat!!! Jaldi! Car me baithiye!
Usne furti me Suhana ko car ke andar dhakela aur khud driver seat par baith gaya,
Suhana : Veerrr!! Mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi hai okay? Tell me! Tell me kya hua hai!?
*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*
Aur Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi accelerator par perr rakh diya.
Suhana : Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!
Woh cheenkhi.
[I was right!! Master!!! Koi hamaara peecha kar raha hai.]
Veer ki nazar jese hi rear mirror pe gayi, aur Pari ki baat uske kaano me padi, uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana sath me thi. Nahi nahi nahi!!! Ye ladaayi lene ke samay nahi tha.
Veer ne skillfully gaadi ko idhar se udhar nikaala par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche bani hui thi. Aur Veer ka shaq ab yakeen me badal gaya tha.
Suhana (screams) : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!
Veer : Humara koi peecha kar raha hai. We are the targets.
Suhana (jhepte hue) : Whaaatttt???
Veer : Yeah!!! Isliye... Aapko leke waha se bhaagna pada.
Suhana : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai?
Idhar Suhana ne call kar Divya ko sab kuch bata diya. Aur yaha Veer ne car me hi gps ki madad se sakre raasto me gaadi daalni shuru kar dii thi.
Par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche lagi hui thi.
'Damn it! Damn it! Damnnn ittt!!!!'
Aur fir,
*BAAAANNNGGG*
*CRAAASSHHHHHH*
Suhana : Aaahhhhhhnnnnnn~
Ek goli aake seedha unki car ke left mirror ko ukhaad ke alag kar dii.
Suhana : Veeeeeerrrrr!!!!
Veer : Don't worry!!!
Suhana ghabraate hue kabhi peeche dekhti toh kabhi saamne toh kabhi Veer ko,
Uski dhadkane train ke maafiq tezz ho chuki thi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?
Veer ne gaadi ko seedha alleys me ghused diya. Ye alleys bilkul wesi hi thi jese Jim ko pakadte waqt veer aur baaki sab gaye the.
Aur usne gaadi ek alley ke mod me rokte hi Suhana ko usme se baahar nikaala.
Veer : Jab tak Miss Divya help leke nahi aa jaati hume yahi chhupna hoga. Car se dur hi rehna chahiye hume. Come!
Suhana : Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Veer? Hum rukk kyu rahe hai?? Hume toh... Hume toh car me hona chahiye... It's risky... We are fucking getting shot... Let's go!!! Hum unse bach ke nikal sakte hai.
Veer ab kese Suhana ko ye bataata ki Basic Enemy Tracker ne pehle hi ye bata diya tha usse ki aage 8 se 10 enemies harr direction me khadi hoke unka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Aage jaana matlab maut ko aamantran dena tha.
Veer : Trust me!!!
Suhana : What trust me Veerrrr??? We will... We will die...!!!
Aur agle hi shan uske aansu chhalak uthe.
Veer ne usse iss haal me dekh uske sarr ko apne dono haath me thaama aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue bola,
"Nothing will happen okay? Hum sahi salaamat iss se baahar niklenge. Okay?"
Uske dono haatho ko thaam Veer ne usse aasvaashan diya.
Suhana aaj darr rahi thi. Divya bhi uske saath nahi thi. Uske paas apni handgun bhi nahi thi. Woh dono hi nihatthe the. Aur toh aur apne desh se baahar. Woh sthiti ko bhali bhaati bhaanp chuki thi. Aur isliye uske aasu nikal pade.
Veer : You go in there. Udhar chhup jaaiye! Quick!
Suhana : What about you!?
Veer : Mein dekh ke aata hu woh nikle ya nahi! Now go!!
Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki baat maan woh ek choti sii jagah ke paas jaake raat ke uss andhere me chhip gayi.
Par tabhi,
"There he is...!!!'
"Catch him!!!"
"Let's go!!!"
Kuch anjaan awaazein uske kaan me padi, aur Suhana darr ke maare apna muh band kar wahi dubak ke baith gayi. Veer ki safety ki ek aas liye.
Idhar Veer...!
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Aur uske baad, Suhana ko sirf maar dhaad aur na jaane kesi kesi cheekhne chillaane ki awaazein sunaayi dene lagi.
Woh ghabraate hue apni jagah se bahar nikal sarr se baahar jhaakte hue dekhi toh uske hosh udd gaye.
Neeche 7 se 8 log dale hue the. Toh wahi Veer do aur logo se ladne me laga hua tha.
Woh baahar nikli lekin achanak se,
Apne peeche se usse ek gaadi ki awaz sunaayi dii. Aur uski khidki se ek mask pehne aadmi nikla. Uske haath me ek gun thi.
Suhana ne jese hi ye dekha,
"Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!" Woh chillaayi aur bhaagi.
Par tabhi,
*BANG*
"Ahhhhnn...!"
Gunshot ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ke kaan khade ho gaye. Usne fauran apna sarr palat'te hue peeche dekha. Uske dono haath do aadmiyo ke gale ko jakde hue the.
Peeche mudte hi, usne dekha,
Suhana ki aankhein fati ki fati hui thi, woh dheere dheere ek kadam, do kadam aage uski orr badhaate hue aa rahi thi apni ladkhadati chaal me.
Tabhi uska kaanpta hua haath apne peeche gaya aur usne apni peeth par mushqil se ferra. Waapas jab usne apni hatheli dekhi toh,
Darr uske chehre par saaf jhalka aur ek ehsaas hua. Uski hatheli gehre laal rang se sani hui thi.
"V-Veer!"
Thar-tharaate hontho se usne pukaara aur agle hi shan, "Haahhh!"
Uska shareer saamne ki orr gir gaya. Veer ki nazro me tab jaake Suhana ki peeth saamne aayi, jo khoon se lathpat thi aur woh gehra laal rang Suhana ke kapdo me harr guzarte pal felta jaa raha tha.
Khoon!
"N-Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!" Woh chillaaya.
*Thump* *Thump*
Uska dil zorro se dhadka aur usne unn do aadmiyo ko pakad ke kass ke ek dusre ke sarr se bhida diya.
Dono aadmi wahi behosh hoke neeche zameen par gir pade.
*Whoosh*
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah sab kuch chorr seedha Suhana ke paas aaya.
"Yooouuuuu!!!!!!!" Usne gurraate hue peeche roads par unn gaadi me baithe logo ki orr dekha jo turant hi goli maar ke rafu chakkar ho gaye waha se.
Ek ghabraahat Veer ke zehen me janm le uthi.
Usne fauran hi Suhana par focus kiya.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]
Usne apne kaanpte haatho se Suhana ko uthaaya.
"Noooooooo!!!!! Suhanaaa!!! Suhanaaa!!!!"
Ghabraahat me Veer ye bhi bhul chuka tha ki woh Suhana ko uske naam se pukaar raha tha.
Adhkhuli aankho se Suhana Veer ko dekhi. Aur agle hi shan, uske naino se dherr saari aasuo ki boonde nikal ke girne lagi.
Dard!
"Maaa!!!! Maaaaaaaaaaa~"
Veer ki shirt ko kass ke haatho me jakde hue woh dard se bilakhne lagi,
Veer : Suhana!!!!! N-Nothing will happen to you!!! Tumhe kuch nahi hoega. Don't worry! Abhi... I'm taking you to hospital. Hold your strength!!!
Suhana : V-Veer!
Veer : Haan?
Suhana : I-I don't think... I will make it.
Veer : Don't talk nonsense! Shut up! You'll be fine!!!
Veer ne fatafat apni shirt utaari aur sabse pehle Suhana ki chot par usse baandhne laga. Khoon jitna behna kam ho sake utna hi behtar tha. Halaki ye tareeqa bhi zyaada kuch kaam nahi aane waala tha. Par iss se kuch pal ke liye toh khoon ke bahaav ko kam kiya jaa hi sakta tha.
Suhana ke thar tharaate hontho se fir se kuch bol nikle, "V-Veer!"
Veer : Don't talk!!! Didn't I tell you!?? Just breath!!!
Suhana : Y-Your last two favours!
Veer : Suhana shut up!!! Ye samay nahi hai inn baato ka. Let me tie it up first!!
Woh vyaakulta me chillaaya,
Suhana : Noooo! N-Now is the r-right time. Haah... Haah... Second favour! P-Promise me!!!
Veer : ...!!?
Suhana ke hontho par ek pyaari muskaan sajj gayi,
Suhana : You will protect Sonu!
Veer : You dumbass! Ye koi kehne ki baat hai? And shut up! Aise mat kaho ki ye tumhare akhiri bol hai. Don't act like you're gonna die. Shut the hell up!!!!
Veer ke haanth kaanp kaanp kar shirt par gathaan baandhne me lage hue the. Usse ye ehsaas ho chuka tha aaj ki Suhana se bhale hi usse pyaar nahi tha par woh kya maayne rakhti thi uske liye. Ye baat bhali bhaati jaan gaya tha Veer abhi. Suhana ek dard bhari muskaan ke saath Veer ke saare actions par nazar daali hui thi. Dil me ek khushi ki leher thi uske, ye jaan ke ki Veer ke haath kese kaanp rahe the. Ek sanket tha ye ki Veer ko bhi uski parvaah thi andar se. Aur kitni thi, ye toh uske chehre ke haav bhaav hi sab batla rahe the.
Suhana (smiles) : A-And for your third favour.
Veer : All done!!! Now come...! Jaldi! We can't be late!!!
Usne Suhana ko apni goad me uthaaya,
Suhana : .....
Par, Suhana ne behad dheemi awaaz me kuch kaha. Uske itne qareeb hone ke baad bhi Veer ko Suhana ke woh bol dhang se sunaayi na diye.
Usne sunn'ne ke liye apna sarr jese hi uske chehre ke paas laake neeche jhukaaya ki tabhi,
*Kiss*
Veer : !!!??
Suhana ne apne honth Veer ke honth se laga diye. Bas chand seconds ke liye hi tha ye. Unn komal hontho ka sparsh...!
Kyuki, achanak Suhana ko dard ke baad peeth me jo abhi tak numbness mehsoos ho rahi thi woh bhi ab gaayab ho gayi. Aur uski jagah ek atyant peeda dayak jalan mehsoos hone lagi.
"Nnnghhhh!!!!" Apne hontho ko daato tale zorr se dabaaye aur aankho ko meeste hue woh dard ko bardaasht karne ki koshish karne lagi. Usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese kisi ne ekdum garam garam lohe ki rod uski peeth me ghop dii ho. Jalan itni zyaada thi. Uska blood pressure kayi guna badh chuka tha. Heart rate bhi boht high ho chuka tha.
Ye toh dimaagi sanket the. Hamara dimaag aksar hume bachaane ke liye hamaare shareer ko nirdesh deta hai. High blood pressure, heart rate ussi ka kaaran the.
Jab Bullet jese hi Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue ghusi thi, chand seconds tak toh usse kuch pata nahi chala tha. Koi anubhooti bhi nahi hui thi. Aisa laga tha jese kisi ne usse chota sa patthar phek ke maara ho.
Parantu aisa nahi tha,
Muzzle se bullet jese hi nikli thi, woh saath me ek air pressure apne ird gird samete hue thi jo ki ghumaavdaar (spiral) tha. Aur ye bullet jab insaan ki chamdi me ghusti hai, toh bullet toh tabaahi machaati hi hai par saath hi woh air pressure poore andhruni ango ki dhajjiya udaa deta hai.
Badqismati yaha ye ki woh bullet ricochet ho gayi.
Ricochet hone ke baad hi bullet ne apni disha badli aur seedha Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue andar jaa ghusi.
Aur ye sab hua kyuki Suhana Veer ko ahaat karne ke liye usse bachaane jaa rahi thi.
Jese hi Veer ko iss baat ka bodh hua, uski aankho me peeda saaf jhalakne lagi.
Veer (frowns) : K-Kyu!? Why did you--!?
Suhana (smiles) : I-I don't know!!! M-Mere perr apne aap daud pade...!
Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Veer ki aankhein namm ho chali. Aur ek ashru ki boond tapak ke Suhana ke komal chehre par jaa giri.
Apne seene se laga ke usne Suhana ka maatha chooma aur ek dridhta uske mann me jaag gayi.
Jab akasmaat hi,
*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*
'Huh!!?'
[Maaastttteerrr!!! T-This is bad!!! Run!!!]
Saamne se ek aadmi andhere me se chalte hue aaya. Aur roshni jese hi uske chehre par padi, Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Ye wahi vyakti tha. Wahi jo hotel me usse nazar aaya tha.
Veer : Y-You!!! What do you waaaannnttt???
Veer zorr se gurraaya,
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Par uss aadmi ne kuch na kaha. Veer zyada samay waste nahi kar sakta tha. Suhana ki haalat gambheer thi. Jald se jald yaha se nikalna tha usse.
Uss aadmi ne apna haath jeb se nikaalte hue haath par bandhi ghadi par samay dekha aur bola,
"Clock is ticking! Aren't you getting late?"
Veer khamoshi me usse ghoorta raha. Iski koi guarant nahi thi ki Veer agar yaha se mud ke jaane ki koshish kare toh peeche se ye aadmi kuch nahi karega. Upar se Pari ko bhi kuch ehsaaa hua tha iss aadmi ko lekar.
[Maaasterrr!!! Y-Ye insaan mujhe bilkul theek nahi lag raha hai. There's... There's something wrong with him. Be careful!]
Pari ke itna kehte hi,
*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*
Woh insaan dheere dheere chalte hue aage badha. Veer ke maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Uska ek perr apne aap peeche ho gaya.
Jaldi se usne Suhana par ek nazar maar ke dekha toh uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana behosh ho chuki thi.
'Damnnnn ittttt!!!!!!!'
[Master!!!!]
Woh insaan Veer ke ekdum nazdeek aaya,
"I'm just here to remind you something!"
Veer : ???
Woh Veer ke gaal ko thap-thapaaya jese Veer maano koi baccha ho aur fir uske kaan ki taraf aake sirf ek baat boli.
Jisse sunte hi,
Veer ke hosh udd gaye. Uska badan thanda pad gaya. Wo bhoot ki tarah wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Agar Beowulf active na hota toh shayad uske haatho se Suhana bhi chooth ke gir jaati. Jese ek visfot hua tha uske dimaag me.
Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.
Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,
Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....
"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"
"Also..."
"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"
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Dhanyavaad!
Suhana or veer bahot khush thai lekin inki khushi ziada time tak nahi rahi suhana Veer ko bachane k chakker m khud goli khaa bethi dekhte h kia hota h suhana k saath or yeh jo bol ker gaya h ki system sirf tumhare paas hi nahi h VEER itna batane k liye VEER or suhana per hamla kyon kerwaya woh yeh baat tow aise bhi bata sakta tha
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Jabardast update bhai..Update - 108 ~ The Last Two FavoursAb tak...
Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!
Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.
Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.
Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke naate hue figure par.
'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'
Ab aage...
A day before flight...
Aaj woh din tha jab Suhana aur Veer Las Vegas me antim raatri ke liye rukne waale the.
Aur kal hi unki fir waapas apne vatan lautne ki flight thi.
Inn beete dino me na jaane kya kya pareshaniyo ka saamna karna pada tha unhe. Shuruaat hui thi Jim se jaha unhe iss house of the killers gang ka bodh hua, fir Nightwalker ke Mansion ka maut ka woh nanga naach aur antim me Pitcher ka rehesyamayi tareeqe se sundar hastiyo ko maut ki neend sulaana.
Kuch bhi ho, inn sab me sirf Veer hi nahi tha stress me. Suhana aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal tha. Suhana toh ab apni seema par aa chuki thi.
Itne dino ki bhaag daud aur harr taraf maut ki khabre sunn sunn ke hi uska dimaag phata jaa raha tha. Jald se jald ek refreshment chahiye tha usse toh ab.
Aur isliye, Suhana ne Divya ko baaki sab kuch se deal karne ke liye usse apne haal par hi chorr diya.
Pitcher ka raaz khulne ke baad, Divya ke mann me dherr saare sawaal the, khaas kar Veer ko lekar. Par kya karti bechaari? Veer tha, jo kabhi bhi apna asli sach bataane nahi waala tha. Ant me Divya ko wahi baatein sweekaar karni padi jo Veer ne apne muh se bataayi thi.
Aur aaj teeno Divya, Suhana aur Veer jis musibaat se nijaat paaye the uske liye vasooli karne aaye the.
Dusre shabdo me, woh yaha Nat se paise lene aaye the. Nat ne Divya ko hire kar paise dene ki baat ki thi apne concert ke baad.
Aur Divya apne haath me aaya paisa chorr de? Aisa kese ho sakta tha!?
Teeno hi ek baar firse baahar baithe hue the. Aur pichli hi baar ki tarah Suhana ka muh fula hua tha,
Suhana : Fir wahi scene.
Divya : Hahahahaha~ Kya kar sakte hai? Celebrity hai woh. Hume apne hi paise lene ke liye wait karna hoga.
Suhana : Kitni hi badi celebrity ho. Mujhe abhi bhi uska attitude pasand nahi aaya. Humph~
Veer : Well! At least, hume baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai.
Suhana : Huh? Kya matlab baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai? Veer, woh Sonu ke saath bachpan me khela karti thi. Mere ghar aati thi woh ucchal ucchal ke. And look at her now. Sach kehte hai log. Logo ko badalte derr nahi lagti.
Divya : Hahaha~ Ohh! My Sonny is pissed!
Suhana : Shut up! And don't call me with that fucking name.
Divya : Hehe~
Suhana : Mein washroom se hoke aati hu tab tak.
Woh uthi aur apni kamar matkaate hue baahar nikal gayi. Ab udhar sirf aur sirf Veer aur Divya hi bache hue the.
Veer Pari se kuch baatein karne hi waala tha jab achanak hi,
*Ding*
[Profit Path : Kiss Divya now.]
'Ehhh?'
Uske mann me ek message aake pop hua.
[Aapko Divya ko kiss karna hai Master.]
'What the fuccckkkk!!??'
[Ahem!]
Veer ye puchne hi wala tha ki ye naye scroll ka kaam kya hai aur tabhi iss naye scroll ne ek path de diya.
"Ye kya bakchodi hai? Pari??? Kiss? I mean yeah kissing her is good and all but..."
[Pffftttt~ Hahaha~ Toh kariye kiss fir.]
'Par iska kiss se kya lena dena. Wtf is happening?'
[Master~ Iss scroll ko underestimate mat kariye. Jesa naam hai wesa hi kaam hai iska. Time to time ye aapko profit paths show karta rahega. Aur yakeen maaniye, agar aap iske bataaye gaye path ko follow karenge toh aapko ameer bann'ne se koi nahi rok sakta.]
'Hmm! Toh ye business related hai! Right?'
[Jii haan Master! Ye aapki rich life ke liye hi hai. Dusre shabdo me jaha jaha profit hone ki possibility rahegi. Profit Path aapko paths de dega. Ab ye aapke upar hai ki aap uss path ko follow karke kuch earn karna chaahte ho ya nahi?]
'Hmm! I see! Fir bhi, Miss Divya ko kiss karna aur...!'
[Kar ke dekhiye! Tabhi hume pata chalega na.]
'Aisa lag raha hai mein scam ke daldal me doobne jaa raha hu.'
[Hehe~ Nooo! Just trust me!]
'Fine then! Miss Divya! I'm sorry! But I'm about to taste you~'
Agle hi pal uski nigaahein Divya ke husn par tik gayi. Khud ke upar nazre mehsoos karte hi Divya ne Veer ko dekha,
Divya : What?
Veer : Heh~
[Let's go~
Divya (blushes) : Wh-What is it!?
Divya ke badan par goosebumps aa rahe the. Ye Veer achanak se usse ajeeb nigaaho se kyu dekhne laga tha? Uske andar jese khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi.
Aur tabhi, Veer aage badha aur uske gaalo ko choomne laga,
Divya : V-Veeeerrrr!!! Wh-What are you doing!!!?
Veer (smiles) : Taking my reward!
Divya (blushes) : K-Kaisa reward?
Veer : Of course! Ye waala...!
Aage badhte hi usne pal bhar me Divya ke raseele honth apne muh me bhar liye.
"Mmmmnnnnnnnnn~"
Divya firse virodh karti rahi par ek do baar me hi jese Veer ke honth uske labo ko choosna shuru kiye, Divya ka virodh saara ka saara gaayab hoke reh gaya. Balki, uske haath khud-ba-khud Veer ki collor ko kass liye,
"Nnnnnnnnngggghhhhhhhhh~"
*Slurp* *Slurp*
Uski saasein fulne lagi, aur usne turant hi dhakka deke Veer ko alag kiya. Thook ki ek patli sii lakeer dono ke muh se jud gayi.
Aur tabhi unhe kisi ke aane ki aahat aayi,
Veer ne muskuraate hue apni ungli se uss lakeer ko toda aur woh chup chaap ek seedhe bacche ki tarah hoke baith gaya. Toh wahi, Divya ne sharmaate hue apna muh haatho se pocha aur apni dress dobaara check karne lagi.
Aane waala shaks aur koi nahi, Suhana thi. Washroom se aake woh waapas sofe par baith gayi.
Kuch chand derri ke baad...
Abhi yaha baatein ho hi rahi thi jab ek cabin se nikal ke ek ladki aayi aur unhe dekhte hue boli,
"Miss is coming!"
Bol kar woh waha se nikal gayi. Aur bas kuch derr me hi Nat cabin se nikli aur baahar aayi. Kaali dress me woh harr baar ki tarah behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi.
Jitni baar usse dekho, utni baar mann machal jaaye kisi bhi aadmi ka. Aur Veer bhi unme se hi ek tha.
Nat ko firse dekhte hi uske dil ki ghanti bajne lagi thi.
'So beautiful...!'
[Hmm! Hmm! She is indeed. I will agree here.
Woh aake unke saamne ruki, uske chehre par ek muskaan thi.
Nat (smiles) : Looks like, you did the job!
Divya : Of course!
Nat : Well! Ye raha cheque!
Kehte hue usne Divya ko ek cheque haath me thama diya.
Divya ne jese hi cheque dekha woh hairat me reh gayi. Cheque par keemat million dollar ki thi. Yaani kareeb kareeb 8 crore ke aas paas ki rakam.
Divya : Th-This...!!!
Divya ke haav bhaav dekhte hi Nat ke chehre par ek santushti bhari muskaan sajj gayi,
Nat : Mene pehle hi ye baat boli thi. Right? I will pay you a hefty amount. Toh ye raha! Have it!
Divya : Well...! Iss baar. Saara credit Veer ko jaata hai.
Divya ki baat sunn, Nat ki nazre Veer par tikk gayi aur woh ek chaav ke saath usse ghoorne lagi,
Veer : ...!?
Nat (smiles) : Then, I must thank you too I guess.
Usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne apni taraf se zarra sii bhi derri na dikhaayi.
Aur haath milaate hue dono ne hi haami bhar ke ek dusre se mann hi mann baat kar lii.
Suhana ko kuch khaas interest nahi tha. Woh bas haath baandhe apni aankhein ghumaate hue jald se jald yaha se nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Nat : I hope we will meet again!
Veer : Maybe!?
Nat (smiles) : Maybe huh!!?
Veer : ...
Nat : I have an appointment. I will take my leave here. Thanks once again Divya! You were a big help!
Divya : That's my job!
Nat ne ek antim baar sarr hilaaya aur waha se woh nikal gayi.
Suhana : Aaarggghhhhh!!! She pisses me so much! Mein jaa rahi hu baahar! Parking me milo tum dono!
Suhana yaha se nikli toh wahi Divya sofe par baith ke apne phone me kisi ka contact dhundh rahi thi.
Aur idhar Veer...! Uski nazre abhi abhi Nat ke jaate hue uss figure par tiki hui thi. Nat ne bhi jese Veer ke mann ki baat sunn lii, woh lift me andar jaane se pehle ek baar palti,
Veer ko dekhi aur,
Muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya. Aur fir muh se 'bye' kehte hue woh lift me ghus gayi.
'Huh!?'
[Uske aur aapke beech kuch pakk raha hai kya Master? Why do I feel weird? Hmm!!! (‘◉⌓◉’) ]
'Naah! You are overthinking!'
Ek lambi saans leke Veer muda ki tabhi Divya uske nazdeek aayi,
Divya : Apna... Apna account number do!
Veer : Hmm?
Divya (blushes) : Idiot! Reward nahi chahiye kya? Abhi itna reward reward kar rahe the. Give me your account number. I'll.. I'll transfer half of the amount to yours.
Veer : Woahhh!
[Dekha! Mene kaha tha na? Profit Path par bharosa rakhiye.]
Divya : Mujhe yaha se ek important kaam se jaana hai. Aaj mein busy rahungi. Tum Suhana ko leke kahi acchi sii jagah jao. Wese bhi kal tum dono ki flight hai. Jaane se pehle ek refreshment zaroori hai. Enjoy kar lo thoda. Itne din frustrate ho gaye hoge. Suhana ko bhi thoda accha feel hoga.
Veer : Are you...!?
Divya : Yeah I'm sure! Ye rahi keys! Go now! Usse wait karna pasand nahi hai.
Divya Veer ko gaadi ki chaavi thama ke waha se ravaana ho gayi.
Aur Veer bhi nirdesh anusaar Suhana ko leke waha se nikal gaya. Profit Path ne toh sach me uska fayda kara diya tha. Upar se tareeqa bhi bada accha tha.
Yadi Veer ne Divya ko kiss kar woh ehsaas na dilaaya hota toh shayad Divya ne paise nahi diye hote. Aur agar deti bhi toh shayad aadhi rakam saath me nahi baatati.
Veer aur Suhana car me baithe hue the jab Veer ne sawaal kiya,
Veer : Toh? Kaha chalna hai?
Suhana : Kaha chalna chaahte ho?
Veer : Mein?
Suhana (smiles) : Haa tum! Kyuki mene sab ghooma hai yaha. Tum hi pehli baar aaye ho.
Veer : I...
Veer confused tha aur uska ye confusion dekh Suhana khil-khila uthi.
Suhana : Mall chalte hai. Sonu ne mujhse kuch accesories laane ko kaha tha. Aaj last day bhi hai hamaara yaha. Hum bhi kuch shopping kar lenge? How about that?
Veer : Ohhh!! Right right!!! Mujhe yaad aaya. Mein ye kese bhul sakta hu?
Suhana : Kya?
Veer (smiles) : Meri Juhi ke liye mujhe chocolates leni hai.
Suhana : Juhi? Ohh that Little kid? I see!
Suhana ek soch me doob gayi. Veer yaha itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi uss choti sii bacchi ki liye chocolates lena nahi bhula? Ek ajeeb sii feeling uske dil me jaagi, jisse woh samajh nahi paayi ki kya thi.
Dono ne dherr saari shoping kii, hassi mazaak toh kahi ek dusre ki taang kheechne me dono ka samay guzra.
Suhana jitna Veer ke sang rehti woh khud ko utna acche se mehsoos kar paati. Usse aisa lag raha tha jese woh bina kisi darr ke Veer ke saamne apni split personality ko bekaabu bhi hone de sakti thi. Jese usse visvaash tha ki agar Veer uske saamne hai. Toh usse koi chinta nahi rahegi.
Dono shopping ke baad street par roadside baithe hue the. Aaj ka din kitna khubsoorti se beeta tha unka.
Suhana : Toh? Raat ka kya plan hai? Kahi aur ghoomna hai?
Veer : Aaj aap dinner ki party kyu nahi deti!?
Suhana : Ab dinner party bhi mein hi du? Abhi itni shopping karwaayi mene!
Veer (smiles) : Toh dijiye! Wese bhi! Aapki dinner party sab ko naseeb kaha hoti hai? Look at Nat. Unhe bhi mauka nahi milne wala.
Suhana pyaar se muh ferrte hue Veer ke joke par muskuraayi,
Suhana : Duh! No way!
Veer : Fine then! Dinner ki party meri taraf se.
Suhana : Yessssss!!!!!
Dono hi behad khush the. Divya ke paas badqismati se samay nahi tha toh sirf Veer aur Suhana hi iss dinner ka hissa the.
Aur keval do logo ke hone ke kaaran, ye dinner kam dinner date zyada lag rahi thi.
Luckily, unn dono ka dinner behad hi acchi tarah se hua. Suhana me jo change aaya tha Veer ke prati woh zameen aasmaan ka tha.
Woh ab Veer ko apne baraabar ke dost ki nigaaho se dekhti thi jo ki ek boht badi baat thi. Saath hi unn aankho me ab kahi bhi nafrat ya chidh nahi thi Veer ke liye. Balki kuch aur hi tha. Kuch aisa... Jis se Suhana abhi anibhigya thi.
Veer iss aalishaan hotel ki first floor ki balcony ke paas khada hua tha, Suhana ka woh wait kar raha tha. Jab tabhi achanak neeche ke ground floor par uski nazar gayi aur usne dekha ki,
Ek suit pehne aadmi usse hi peni nazro se ghoor raha tha.
'Huh? Check!!!'
*Ding*
[No information available.]
Message padhte hi Veer ki aankhein shock ke maare chaudi ho gayi.
'P-Pariiii!???'
Aisa pehle aaj tak nahi hua tha. Ye sab kya tha? Veer ne Kaera ko jab check kiya tha tab usse "you are not eligible to view this person's status." dikhaayi diya tha.
Par ye?
No information available! Yeh kya tha? Woh kuch soch paata ki tabhi woh vyakti chalte hue aage aaya, uske haatho me ek cigarette thi aur Veer ko dekh ek kutil muskaan dete hue woh waha neeche se baayi orr mudd gaya.
Pal bhar me hi Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.
'What!?? What is happening!?? Kaun tha wohhh??? Who the fuck he wasss??? Pari?!?'
[Yes master]
*Ding*
[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]
*Ding*
[16 enemies were found nearby.]
Ye dekhte hi Veer ki bolti band ho gayi.
'Fucccckkkkkk!!!!!'
Aur agle hi pal woh mud ke turant bhaaga, udhar Suhana apna make-up washroom se check kar ke nikal rahi thi jab Veer ki tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi,
"Miss Suhaaanaaaa!!!!"
Suhana : Hmm? K-Kya h--???
Woh kuch keh paati ki uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kalaayi thaami aur zorr se usse bhaga ke hotel ke baahar le jaane laga,
Suhana : Ahnn!? V-Veeerrr? Kya hua? Wait!!! What the hell?? Haah... Haah... Tell me!!! Hum bhaag kyu rahe hai!?
Veer : Puchiye mat!!! Jaldi! Car me baithiye!
Usne furti me Suhana ko car ke andar dhakela aur khud driver seat par baith gaya,
Suhana : Veerrr!! Mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi hai okay? Tell me! Tell me kya hua hai!?
*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*
Aur Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi accelerator par perr rakh diya.
Suhana : Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!
Woh cheenkhi.
[I was right!! Master!!! Koi hamaara peecha kar raha hai.]
Veer ki nazar jese hi rear mirror pe gayi, aur Pari ki baat uske kaano me padi, uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana sath me thi. Nahi nahi nahi!!! Ye ladaayi lene ke samay nahi tha.
Veer ne skillfully gaadi ko idhar se udhar nikaala par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche bani hui thi. Aur Veer ka shaq ab yakeen me badal gaya tha.
Suhana (screams) : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!
Veer : Humara koi peecha kar raha hai. We are the targets.
Suhana (jhepte hue) : Whaaatttt???
Veer : Yeah!!! Isliye... Aapko leke waha se bhaagna pada.
Suhana : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai?
Idhar Suhana ne call kar Divya ko sab kuch bata diya. Aur yaha Veer ne car me hi gps ki madad se sakre raasto me gaadi daalni shuru kar dii thi.
Par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche lagi hui thi.
'Damn it! Damn it! Damnnn ittt!!!!'
Aur fir,
*BAAAANNNGGG*
*CRAAASSHHHHHH*
Suhana : Aaahhhhhhnnnnnn~
Ek goli aake seedha unki car ke left mirror ko ukhaad ke alag kar dii.
Suhana : Veeeeeerrrrr!!!!
Veer : Don't worry!!!
Suhana ghabraate hue kabhi peeche dekhti toh kabhi saamne toh kabhi Veer ko,
Uski dhadkane train ke maafiq tezz ho chuki thi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?
Veer ne gaadi ko seedha alleys me ghused diya. Ye alleys bilkul wesi hi thi jese Jim ko pakadte waqt veer aur baaki sab gaye the.
Aur usne gaadi ek alley ke mod me rokte hi Suhana ko usme se baahar nikaala.
Veer : Jab tak Miss Divya help leke nahi aa jaati hume yahi chhupna hoga. Car se dur hi rehna chahiye hume. Come!
Suhana : Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Veer? Hum rukk kyu rahe hai?? Hume toh... Hume toh car me hona chahiye... It's risky... We are fucking getting shot... Let's go!!! Hum unse bach ke nikal sakte hai.
Veer ab kese Suhana ko ye bataata ki Basic Enemy Tracker ne pehle hi ye bata diya tha usse ki aage 8 se 10 enemies harr direction me khadi hoke unka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Aage jaana matlab maut ko aamantran dena tha.
Veer : Trust me!!!
Suhana : What trust me Veerrrr??? We will... We will die...!!!
Aur agle hi shan uske aansu chhalak uthe.
Veer ne usse iss haal me dekh uske sarr ko apne dono haath me thaama aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue bola,
"Nothing will happen okay? Hum sahi salaamat iss se baahar niklenge. Okay?"
Uske dono haatho ko thaam Veer ne usse aasvaashan diya.
Suhana aaj darr rahi thi. Divya bhi uske saath nahi thi. Uske paas apni handgun bhi nahi thi. Woh dono hi nihatthe the. Aur toh aur apne desh se baahar. Woh sthiti ko bhali bhaati bhaanp chuki thi. Aur isliye uske aasu nikal pade.
Veer : You go in there. Udhar chhup jaaiye! Quick!
Suhana : What about you!?
Veer : Mein dekh ke aata hu woh nikle ya nahi! Now go!!
Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki baat maan woh ek choti sii jagah ke paas jaake raat ke uss andhere me chhip gayi.
Par tabhi,
"There he is...!!!'
"Catch him!!!"
"Let's go!!!"
Kuch anjaan awaazein uske kaan me padi, aur Suhana darr ke maare apna muh band kar wahi dubak ke baith gayi. Veer ki safety ki ek aas liye.
Idhar Veer...!
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Aur uske baad, Suhana ko sirf maar dhaad aur na jaane kesi kesi cheekhne chillaane ki awaazein sunaayi dene lagi.
Woh ghabraate hue apni jagah se bahar nikal sarr se baahar jhaakte hue dekhi toh uske hosh udd gaye.
Neeche 7 se 8 log dale hue the. Toh wahi Veer do aur logo se ladne me laga hua tha.
Woh baahar nikli lekin achanak se,
Apne peeche se usse ek gaadi ki awaz sunaayi dii. Aur uski khidki se ek mask pehne aadmi nikla. Uske haath me ek gun thi.
Suhana ne jese hi ye dekha,
"Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!" Woh chillaayi aur bhaagi.
Par tabhi,
*BANG*
"Ahhhhnn...!"
Gunshot ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ke kaan khade ho gaye. Usne fauran apna sarr palat'te hue peeche dekha. Uske dono haath do aadmiyo ke gale ko jakde hue the.
Peeche mudte hi, usne dekha,
Suhana ki aankhein fati ki fati hui thi, woh dheere dheere ek kadam, do kadam aage uski orr badhaate hue aa rahi thi apni ladkhadati chaal me.
Tabhi uska kaanpta hua haath apne peeche gaya aur usne apni peeth par mushqil se ferra. Waapas jab usne apni hatheli dekhi toh,
Darr uske chehre par saaf jhalka aur ek ehsaas hua. Uski hatheli gehre laal rang se sani hui thi.
"V-Veer!"
Thar-tharaate hontho se usne pukaara aur agle hi shan, "Haahhh!"
Uska shareer saamne ki orr gir gaya. Veer ki nazro me tab jaake Suhana ki peeth saamne aayi, jo khoon se lathpat thi aur woh gehra laal rang Suhana ke kapdo me harr guzarte pal felta jaa raha tha.
Khoon!
"N-Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!" Woh chillaaya.
*Thump* *Thump*
Uska dil zorro se dhadka aur usne unn do aadmiyo ko pakad ke kass ke ek dusre ke sarr se bhida diya.
Dono aadmi wahi behosh hoke neeche zameen par gir pade.
*Whoosh*
Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah sab kuch chorr seedha Suhana ke paas aaya.
"Yooouuuuu!!!!!!!" Usne gurraate hue peeche roads par unn gaadi me baithe logo ki orr dekha jo turant hi goli maar ke rafu chakkar ho gaye waha se.
Ek ghabraahat Veer ke zehen me janm le uthi.
Usne fauran hi Suhana par focus kiya.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]
Usne apne kaanpte haatho se Suhana ko uthaaya.
"Noooooooo!!!!! Suhanaaa!!! Suhanaaa!!!!"
Ghabraahat me Veer ye bhi bhul chuka tha ki woh Suhana ko uske naam se pukaar raha tha.
Adhkhuli aankho se Suhana Veer ko dekhi. Aur agle hi shan, uske naino se dherr saari aasuo ki boonde nikal ke girne lagi.
Dard!
"Maaa!!!! Maaaaaaaaaaa~"
Veer ki shirt ko kass ke haatho me jakde hue woh dard se bilakhne lagi,
Veer : Suhana!!!!! N-Nothing will happen to you!!! Tumhe kuch nahi hoega. Don't worry! Abhi... I'm taking you to hospital. Hold your strength!!!
Suhana : V-Veer!
Veer : Haan?
Suhana : I-I don't think... I will make it.
Veer : Don't talk nonsense! Shut up! You'll be fine!!!
Veer ne fatafat apni shirt utaari aur sabse pehle Suhana ki chot par usse baandhne laga. Khoon jitna behna kam ho sake utna hi behtar tha. Halaki ye tareeqa bhi zyaada kuch kaam nahi aane waala tha. Par iss se kuch pal ke liye toh khoon ke bahaav ko kam kiya jaa hi sakta tha.
Suhana ke thar tharaate hontho se fir se kuch bol nikle, "V-Veer!"
Veer : Don't talk!!! Didn't I tell you!?? Just breath!!!
Suhana : Y-Your last two favours!
Veer : Suhana shut up!!! Ye samay nahi hai inn baato ka. Let me tie it up first!!
Woh vyaakulta me chillaaya,
Suhana : Noooo! N-Now is the r-right time. Haah... Haah... Second favour! P-Promise me!!!
Veer : ...!!?
Suhana ke hontho par ek pyaari muskaan sajj gayi,
Suhana : You will protect Sonu!
Veer : You dumbass! Ye koi kehne ki baat hai? And shut up! Aise mat kaho ki ye tumhare akhiri bol hai. Don't act like you're gonna die. Shut the hell up!!!!
Veer ke haanth kaanp kaanp kar shirt par gathaan baandhne me lage hue the. Usse ye ehsaas ho chuka tha aaj ki Suhana se bhale hi usse pyaar nahi tha par woh kya maayne rakhti thi uske liye. Ye baat bhali bhaati jaan gaya tha Veer abhi. Suhana ek dard bhari muskaan ke saath Veer ke saare actions par nazar daali hui thi. Dil me ek khushi ki leher thi uske, ye jaan ke ki Veer ke haath kese kaanp rahe the. Ek sanket tha ye ki Veer ko bhi uski parvaah thi andar se. Aur kitni thi, ye toh uske chehre ke haav bhaav hi sab batla rahe the.
Suhana (smiles) : A-And for your third favour.
Veer : All done!!! Now come...! Jaldi! We can't be late!!!
Usne Suhana ko apni goad me uthaaya,
Suhana : .....
Par, Suhana ne behad dheemi awaaz me kuch kaha. Uske itne qareeb hone ke baad bhi Veer ko Suhana ke woh bol dhang se sunaayi na diye.
Usne sunn'ne ke liye apna sarr jese hi uske chehre ke paas laake neeche jhukaaya ki tabhi,
*Kiss*
Veer : !!!??
Suhana ne apne honth Veer ke honth se laga diye. Bas chand seconds ke liye hi tha ye. Unn komal hontho ka sparsh...!
Kyuki, achanak Suhana ko dard ke baad peeth me jo abhi tak numbness mehsoos ho rahi thi woh bhi ab gaayab ho gayi. Aur uski jagah ek atyant peeda dayak jalan mehsoos hone lagi.
"Nnnghhhh!!!!" Apne hontho ko daato tale zorr se dabaaye aur aankho ko meeste hue woh dard ko bardaasht karne ki koshish karne lagi. Usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese kisi ne ekdum garam garam lohe ki rod uski peeth me ghop dii ho. Jalan itni zyaada thi. Uska blood pressure kayi guna badh chuka tha. Heart rate bhi boht high ho chuka tha.
Ye toh dimaagi sanket the. Hamara dimaag aksar hume bachaane ke liye hamaare shareer ko nirdesh deta hai. High blood pressure, heart rate ussi ka kaaran the.
Jab Bullet jese hi Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue ghusi thi, chand seconds tak toh usse kuch pata nahi chala tha. Koi anubhooti bhi nahi hui thi. Aisa laga tha jese kisi ne usse chota sa patthar phek ke maara ho.
Parantu aisa nahi tha,
Muzzle se bullet jese hi nikli thi, woh saath me ek air pressure apne ird gird samete hue thi jo ki ghumaavdaar (spiral) tha. Aur ye bullet jab insaan ki chamdi me ghusti hai, toh bullet toh tabaahi machaati hi hai par saath hi woh air pressure poore andhruni ango ki dhajjiya udaa deta hai.
Badqismati yaha ye ki woh bullet ricochet ho gayi.
Ricochet hone ke baad hi bullet ne apni disha badli aur seedha Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue andar jaa ghusi.
Aur ye sab hua kyuki Suhana Veer ko ahaat karne ke liye usse bachaane jaa rahi thi.
Jese hi Veer ko iss baat ka bodh hua, uski aankho me peeda saaf jhalakne lagi.
Veer (frowns) : K-Kyu!? Why did you--!?
Suhana (smiles) : I-I don't know!!! M-Mere perr apne aap daud pade...!
Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Veer ki aankhein namm ho chali. Aur ek ashru ki boond tapak ke Suhana ke komal chehre par jaa giri.
Apne seene se laga ke usne Suhana ka maatha chooma aur ek dridhta uske mann me jaag gayi.
Jab akasmaat hi,
*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*
'Huh!!?'
[Maaastttteerrr!!! T-This is bad!!! Run!!!]
Saamne se ek aadmi andhere me se chalte hue aaya. Aur roshni jese hi uske chehre par padi, Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.
Ye wahi vyakti tha. Wahi jo hotel me usse nazar aaya tha.
Veer : Y-You!!! What do you waaaannnttt???
Veer zorr se gurraaya,
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
Par uss aadmi ne kuch na kaha. Veer zyada samay waste nahi kar sakta tha. Suhana ki haalat gambheer thi. Jald se jald yaha se nikalna tha usse.
Uss aadmi ne apna haath jeb se nikaalte hue haath par bandhi ghadi par samay dekha aur bola,
"Clock is ticking! Aren't you getting late?"
Veer khamoshi me usse ghoorta raha. Iski koi guarant nahi thi ki Veer agar yaha se mud ke jaane ki koshish kare toh peeche se ye aadmi kuch nahi karega. Upar se Pari ko bhi kuch ehsaaa hua tha iss aadmi ko lekar.
[Maaasterrr!!! Y-Ye insaan mujhe bilkul theek nahi lag raha hai. There's... There's something wrong with him. Be careful!]
Pari ke itna kehte hi,
*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*
Woh insaan dheere dheere chalte hue aage badha. Veer ke maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Uska ek perr apne aap peeche ho gaya.
Jaldi se usne Suhana par ek nazar maar ke dekha toh uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana behosh ho chuki thi.
'Damnnnn ittttt!!!!!!!'
[Master!!!!]
Woh insaan Veer ke ekdum nazdeek aaya,
"I'm just here to remind you something!"
Veer : ???
Woh Veer ke gaal ko thap-thapaaya jese Veer maano koi baccha ho aur fir uske kaan ki taraf aake sirf ek baat boli.
Jisse sunte hi,
Veer ke hosh udd gaye. Uska badan thanda pad gaya. Wo bhoot ki tarah wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Agar Beowulf active na hota toh shayad uske haatho se Suhana bhi chooth ke gir jaati. Jese ek visfot hua tha uske dimaag me.
Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.
Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,
Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....
"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"
"Also..."
"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"
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To Nick ka patta saaf........poor fellowI don't like adultery
Veer's partners will belong to him only.
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kingkhankar
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I was thinking married woman/man having physical relationship outside their marriage is adultery. May be this definition does not apply to this story.I don't like adultery
Veer's partners will belong to him only.
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The general meaning of adultery doesn't applies to my story. For my case it's only...
Women shouldn't have sex with other males after having sex with the protagonist. (If they are his partners.) Since this is harem. Reverse harem exists too.
Women can have multiple men for their pleasure. But this ain't the woman centred story.