Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Latest Update ➢ Update 194 ​

 

[Werewolf]

Hum humans kuch bhi kar gujarte hai agr kisi ne humari dukti rag pr hath rakh Diya ho
Isko perfectly depict kiya gya hai iss update me.
Ek word me iss update ko define nhi Kiya ja sakta hai,,,fir bhi update ko padh kr pehla word jo strike Kiya tha wo tha
Tragic

Veer ki absence ko feel karwaya jaa raha hai. He's no more around us. And around them too. Bas wahi dikhaya gaya hai. Aur ye abhi shuru hua hai dikhana. Agle update me ispe thoda aur zorr diya jayega.

Trasdi to lagbhag hr khi ache se btaya ja sakta hai
Lekin uske baad k parinam isse behtar nhi dikhaya ja sakta

Yes. You noticed it.
Ye aftereffects ko darshaane ke liye tha update. France me hamle ke baad waha ki janta ki insecurity ko darshaya gaya hai jo darr rahi hai apni Safety ke liye. Virodh kar rahi hai police ke khilaaf. Journalists aur afra tafri sabko dikhaya gaya hai. (Which I could have skipped here but I didn't.)

Nolan bhaisahab ki dark knight rises me Bane ka jo character tha and Gotham ka jo destruction tha vo crimson and Paris City sa lg rha hai kuch.
Suhana k emotions ekdum organic the.
Readers can easily feel that immense pain of separation.

Thanks man! Suhana ki abhi bas first layer dikhayi gayi hai emotions ki. Agla update aur gehrayi me jayega. Aur layers ko baahar layega.

Ha magar uski doctor ka character thoda suspicious lgg rha hai,,,kuch zyada hi intrested hai vo Suhana me aisa lgta hai.

You mean Ashita?

Well, other part jaha ava crimson se mili hai.
Aisa lga ki ava ko crimson se zyada powerful depict kiya gya hai.

Nope! She's not stronger than Crimson.

Anjaane me to apne nhi Kiya hoga. Kuch to karan hoga iske piche bhi.

She has a card. A strong card.

Crimson karna kya chahta tha veer ke sath.
Kya aisa plan tha uska jo fail hogya?

Dikha diya gaya hai.

Paris officials ko Gumrah krna itna bhi asan nhi hai
Zaroor isme bhi kisi andar k admi ka hath hai,,,par kon?
And most importantly veer ko ek nation enemy kyu declare karwaya crimson ne?

Ye bhi dikha diya gaya hai.

Kya vo veer ka background kharab krna chahta tha uske apno se,apne country se exploit krna?
Sawalo ka karvaan apne sath kuch or sawal jod chuka hai
Agle update me crimson ki history geography samne aane wali hai
Boht raaz khulege

Most of your questions has been answered in the latest update.

dekhna to ye bhi Banta hai ki ava apni maa ko thik krne k baad ye baate btayegi?
Kuki barso baad ava ka koi apna uske paas hoga
Agr btati hai to unka kya reaction hoga?

Ye toh baad ki baat hai.

Waise thoda sa to hum readers guess kr liye the ki ava koi skill buy krke apni mom ko bacha legi
And ye bhi ki crimson Grace martin par nazar rakhe hue hai.

Woh toh mene dikhaaya tha ki Crimson Grace ke paas gaya hai. Tabhi toh guess kar paaye. Mein chaahta hi tha ki ye part guess kar lo. Warna woh dikhata hi nahi.

Update boht accha tha.
Writer se ek guzarish hai ki main protagonist ko story se door na rakha jaye zyada samay ke liye.

Don't worry. Uski khabar next update me mil jayegi.

Agle part me thoda boht to zroor dikhaya jaye.
Readers ko fir se thrill ka ek pump mil jayega agr veer ki halki si bhi khabar mile to.

Update 144 me

Crimson arc me approx kitne updates or hai zroor bataiye!

Crimson arc update 150 pe samaapt ho jayega.

Best wishes
Keep writing

Thanks a lot for this lovely revo. Keep supporting as usual.

 

[Werewolf]

Here Ava shot veer for sake of her mother but her action was without sense she did it without any think of it....her action may cost many lives for to save one life....!

She's now regretting it.

Good update bro

awesome update bro

Shandaar Zabardast Zindabad

Dhanyavaad.

Veer ye samajh Chuka hoga ki USS Pr najar rakhi ja rhi h jab veer mar rha hoga to usne apne aap ko mara huaa dikhya hoga taki najar rkhne wale ko lege ki veer mar chuka h or veer Pani ke niche terta huaa nikal gya hoga tabhi to uski body nhi mil rhi h DGSI walo ko.

Dekhte hai kya hua hoga. Update 145 me darshaya jayega.

Bhai aap system ko dhokha nahi de sakte

I think next Update mai thoda hint toh banta hai ki veer existence kaha hai...!

Yes. Next update me pata lag jayega.

Superb update

Thanks

Superb Update bro..

Pr mujhe lgta hai ki ava ko save krne ke baad jarur veer ko koy aisi skill ya card mila hai jisse usne apne aap ko dead dikhaya hai... Baki dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Par kya Ava ka mission complete bhi hua hai ya nahi?

Awesome update bhai, Suhana ka toh fuse hi udd gaya Veer ki news se, dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.

Yup. Thanks btw. Keep supporting!

Shandar aur sundar update bro

Dhanyavaad.

very nice Update

Thanks

Kya baat bhai ji nice update

Shukriya.

Fantastic zabardast update

Thanks

Yahi mera mind bhi atak rha hai.... Ek possibility ye bhi hai ki Ava ka system contracts leta hai.... Like crimson ne contract diya veer ko trap krne ka.... Earlier it was a contract for killing slogan or getting him killed or whatever.
Aur fir usi target ya contract ko complete krne ke basis pe points deta hai.

Dekhte hai kya hota hai.

 

[dododo]

Mega Update

Update - 143 ~ Luring the wolf with the hen

[Note : Update ko rush me bilkul mat padhna. Itminaan se samay leke dhyaan se padhna. Warna sarr ke upar se jayega.]​

Ab tak...

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.

[Accumulated points : 18000]

[2000 points are required more to activate the Legendary Scroll ~ Maisie's cure!]

[Maisie's Cure - The scroll gives host the proper medication guidelines and surgery methodologies to recover any person from coma.]

"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"

Ab aage...

A few months ago...
(Kuch mahine pehle...)

Kisi underground basement me sofe pe ek aadmi baitha hua tha. Ceiling par pankha halki gati me ghoom raha tha. Shor tha toh bas ussi pankhe ka, baaki harr jagah ek khamoshi chhayi hui thi.



Uske haath me ek wine ka glass tha toh dusre me cigarette. Ye koi aur nahi, Crimson hi tha jiske mann me kuch baatein ghoom rahi thi,

‘Why don’t you be my right hand? You’ve got potential!’

‘So you chose to betray me huh? Surprised? Mujhe kaise pata chala? You can’t lie to me you know!’

‘One of my preys is arriving there. Dhyaan rahe! Usse kuch hone na paaye!’

‘I can kill you anytime! Don't test my patience.’

Ye awaazein, ye bol uske dimaag me mandra rahe the.

Aur achanak hi,

*Crack*

Uske haatho me maujood wine ke glass ke tukde-tukde ho gaye. Wine uske haath ko bhigo ke zameen par gir gayi. Woh gusse me utha,

"Tujhe lagta hai tu koi bhagwan hai? Mein tujhe dikhaunga ki asli baazigar kaun hai. Just you wait-!"

Woh krodh me garja.

"Aur ye bhi pata laga lunga ki tu hai kaun asal me madarchod!!!"

*Crash*

Table par ek laat usne maari toh wine ki bottle aur glass sab toot ke bikhar gaye. Aur basement me punaah wahi khamoshi chhaa gayi.

***

Clark County Detention Center,
Las Vegas.
Night ~ 11 : 49 PM

Kuch din guzar jaane ke baad, Vegas ki iss jail me raat ke samay sab kuch pehle ki tarah hi tha. Qaidi log apne-apne cell me waqt kaat rahe the. Patrolling karne waale officers roz ki tarah apni duty par the.

Kahi bhi koi gadbad ki aashanka nazar nahi aa rahi thi jab achanak se,

*Pssssssssssssss*

Detention Center ki entrance ke paas hi chaaro orr dhua felne laga.



"Ye kya ho raha hai? Officers!!!"

Satark hote hue sabhi mauke pe pohuche aur dhue ke source ko dhundne lage. Lekin, unke yaha aate hi,

*Pssssssssssssss*

*Pssssssssssssss*

Harr jagah dhua uthne laga. Smoke bombs ek ke baad ek apna kaam karne me lag gaye. Aur saare detention center me afra-tafri mach gayi.

"Officers be alert!!!"

Par unn smoke bombs ke beech kuch aise bombs bhi feke gaye the, jinme behosh karne waali gas maujood thi.

Ek ke baad ek officers behosh hoke girte chale gaye. Jab tak unhe iss baat ka ehsaas hua ki gas me behoshi ka koi padaarth hai tab tak gas apna kaam kar chuki thi.

Security cameras dhue ke chalte kuch catch na kar paaye. Jail cells ke andar maujood apraadhi log bhi aashcharya me pad gaye. Unhe nahi pata tha ki baahar hall me kya ho raha tha. Tabhi achanak hi,

*Clang*

Ek cell ka gate zorr se awaaz kar ke khul gaya.

"H-Huhhh!?"

Jail ke andar baitha aadmi stabdh reh gaya. Ye sab ho kya raha tha? Aur uske jail ke cell ka darwaaza kisne khola? Usse samajh tak na aaya.

Par mauka dekhte hi woh bhaaga. Jail se chhootne ka iss se behtar mauka aur kya ho sakta tha?

'Fuck it! I'm free now! Hahaha!'

Aur ye shaks jo tha, woh koi aur nahi, wahi tha.

Jim! Yaani ki,

Jim the Slippery.

Ussi ke saath-saath baaki saare jail cells ke darwaaze khul gaye. Aur ek ek karke saare apraadhi baahar bhaagne lage.

"Hahahaha!!! Bhaago!! Bhaago! Iss se pehle ki extra unit aake hume pakad le."

Alert ke sirens bajne lage the. Bhaagne ka shor fela hua tha. Security cameras ko monitor karne waale logo ne turant hi extra units ko inform kar diya tha.

Yaha saare jail cells ke akhir me ek cell aur tha. Jiske andar baitha aadmi dheere se utha aur baahar aaya.

Uske chehre par ek behad hi bhayanak muskaan saji hui thi. Aisi muskurahat jisse dekh insaan darr jaaye. Badan par phate hue aur maile kapde the.

Woh paagalo ki tarah hasste hue bhaag kar entrance ke paas aaya.

"Ehehehehehehe! Hehehehe!"

Uski hassi badi hi vichitr aur khaufnaak si thi. Aisi jisse sunn aadmi ke raungte khade ho jaaye. Agle hi pal, uss khaske aadmi ki nigaahein dhue ki taraf daudi aur usse koi waha khada nazar aaya,

Usse dekhte hi aadmi ke honth ajeeb dhang se aur upar fel gaye aur muskaan pehle se bhi daraavni ho gayi.

"Ehehehehehe! Tum bhi hum me se ek ho? Ehehehe! Mere patients-!!! Hehehehe! Mein aaya-!!!"

Woh na jaane kya badbadaya aur waha se uchhalte koodte hue bhaag gaya.

Koi bhi hota toh usse iss waqt dekh paagal hi samajhta. Par dhue me khada woh aadmi usse dekhne ke baad ek shock me jaa chuka tha.

Kyuki abhi abhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi thi.

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Uss shaks ki aankhein phati ki phati hui thi. Ye Crimson hi tha.

Wahi tha jo detention center se unn apradhiyo ko bhagaaya tha. Wahi tha jisne ye saare bombs fek ke iss ghatna ko anjaam diya tha. Uska maqsad yaha sirf Jim the slippery ko churraane ka tha.

Par na jaane uske haath kya lag gaya tha aaj.

'Y-Ye-! Woh aadmi!'



Uske hosh ude hue the. Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz punaah aayi,

[Yes! Woh aadmi ke paas system tha. Tumhari tarah!]

Spasht hote hi Crimson ko ek bada jhatka laga.

Kya kare? Uske peeche jaaye ya fir!?

[Yaha kyu khade ho? Jo karna hai jaldi karo!]

Par system ki baat sunte hi woh waha se tezz qadmo ke saath baahar nikal gaya.

Idhar Detention Center se bhaagte hue Jim alleys me ghus chuka tha.

*huff* *huff*

Haafte hue woh pakde jaane se bachne ke liye tezz gati me bhaag raha tha.

Andhere me doobi unn sakri galliyo me woh daud hi raha tha jab,

"Heugh!!!"

Achanak se kisi ne uski shirt ki collor ko peeche se pakda jiske chalte shirt uske gale par phande ki tarah kass gayi.

Fir apne aap hi uss shaks ne usse chorr diya. Jim ne jab palat ke dekha toh paaya ki andhere me koi khada hua tha.

Jim : K-Kaun? Kaun ho tum?

Woh apne gale ko sehlaate hue ghabrahat me pucha. Uske saamne Crimson tha. Parantu, andhere ke chalte Jim bechara uska muh nahi dekh saka.

Crimson : Mein kaun hu tumhe ye jaan'ne ki zaroorat nahi. Tumhe bas itna jaan'na hai ki mene hi tumhe jail se churraaya hai.

Jim : Heh! Toh? Toh ab tum chaahte ho mein tumhaare talve chaatu? Agar tum mujhe nahi bhi churraate toh bhi mein-

Crimson : Kaise bhi kar ke baahar nikal aata!

Jim (hairaani me) : Huh!!!?

Crimson : Yahi kehna chaah rahe the na?

Jim : T-Tum-!!! Kaun ho tum??

Crimson (smiles) : Jim the Slippery. Police se bach nikal ke bhaagne ke liye maana jaane waala mashoor criminal. Ladkiya, daaru aur drugs dealing me maahir. Taskari toh tumhare khoon me daudti hai. Kyu? Hai na?

Crimson ke itna kehte hi Jim ki aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi. Saamne khada vyakti usse acche se jaanta tha. Usse aisa laga jaise woh iss aadmi ke saamne nanga khada hua tha. Jaise uss se kuch bhi chhipaya nahi jaa sakta tha.

Crimson : Bolo! Kya mein sahi hu?

Jim : Hmph! T-Toh kya? Y-Ye toh sab jaante hai mere baare me.

Crimson (smiles) : Kya ye bhi jaante hai ki iss se pehle tum grave body collector jaise illegal kaam me bhi shaamil the?

Iss baar Jim ke perr ladkhada gaye.

Jim (kaanpte hue) : T-Tum!!? Tumhe kaise pata? N-Nahiii!! Kaun? K-Kaun ho tum? Jawaab do!!!

Crimson (smiles) : Apni position ko samjho Jim! Tum maut se bas ek qadam dur khade ho.

Jim (frowns) : K-Kya chahiye tumhe?

Crimson : Kuch nahi!

Jim : K-Kya?

Crimson (smiles) : Tum azaad ho. Bas mere liye ek chota sa kaam karna hoga.

Jim : Bolo!

Crimson : Tum drugs dealing karte ho ya sharaab ka business, ya fir kuch aur. Mujhe iss se koi matlab nahi. Jo karna hai karo.

Jim : Hmm?

Crimson ne muskuraate hue agle hi pal jeb se kuch nikaal ke uski orr feka. Hadbada ke Jim ne usse haatho me thaama.

Jim : Y-Ye kya hai?

Usne apne haatho me pakde uss cheez ko tatol ke dekha. Ek card tha. Kisi credit card ki tarah.

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhe ye bechna hai. Police ya kisi ko bhi iski khabar lagni nahi chaahiye. Ye sirf tumhe kisi aise shop dealer ko bechna hai jo khud kisi illegal kaam me ho. Aur usse bhi kuch nahi batana hai. Samajh gaye?

Jim : P-Par ye hai kya?

Crimson : Jitna kaha gaya hai utna karo. Tumhe baad me samajh aa jayega.

Jim : Tch!!! Theek hai. Kaam ho jayega!

Crimson : Ye raha number. Iss number pe hi mujhe contact karna.

Jim : Th-Theek hai!

Crimson : Apni gang ko ikhatta kar lo. Time kam hai. Tumhare saath aur bhi do log judne waale hai!

Jim : K-Kaun?

Par Crimson bina kuch kahe hi waha se palat ke jaane laga.

Jim : H-Hey!! Jawaab do! Kaun do log?

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhe pata lag jayega. Go now! Aur haan! Welcome to the House of the Killers.

Kehte hue woh waha unn andheri galliyo me kahi gaayab ho gaya. Jim bas uss card ko taakta reh gaya. Bina samay gawaaye fir woh waha se bhaag nikla.

Aur idhar Crimson jeb me haath daale apne naye plan ko execute karta jaa raha tha.

Jin do logo ki woh baat kar raha tha woh koi aur nahi the. Woh wahi mashoor serial killers the-

Nightwalker aur Pitcher!!!

Alley se baahar aate hi ek luxury red car uske saamne khadi hui thi. Driving seat par ek khubsoorat ladki virajmaan thi.

Crimson (smiles) : Ahn! My sweetie! You arrived.

Sweetie : Yes! Toh? Ab kya?

Crimson ne wesa hi ek aur card nikaal ke Sweetie ki orr feka toh usne card ko catch kar liya.

Sweetie : Ye kya hai?

Crimson (smiles) : Maut ka aamantran! Inki copies banwani hai. Tumhare phone pe address diya hua hai. Jao aur iss card ki multiple copies banwaane keh do. Chip wahi rehni chahiye usme.

Sweetie : Kisi tarah ka entry card hai?

Crimson ne muskura ke haan me sarr hilaaya.

Sweetie : Well! Theek hai! Meri pagaar?

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki agle hi shan noto ki do badi badi gaddiya uski goad me thi.

Crimson : Go now!

Sweetie ek kutil muskaan liye unn noto ko apne hontho se choomi aur jitni tezzi me woh yaha aayi thi. Utni hi tezzi me waha se nikal bhi gayi.

Main road par aate hue Crimson cigarette ka kash lagaate hue upar unn bade bade hoardings ke bagal se lagi screen ko dekhne me lage hue tha.

Jisme jaani maani Singer Natalia Martin ke interview ki kuch snippets chal rahi thi.

Na jaane usse kya soojha par usne mann me hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Crimson ki aankhein ek baar fir hairat ke maare fel gayi. Uske haantho se cigarette chhutak ke gir gayi.

Uska system TV screen ko toh check karta hi tha. Parantu, tv me dikhaayi dene waali cheez ko bhi check kar ke batla sakta tha.

[This is a surprise. Nahi laga tha ki Natalia Martin ke paas bhi system hoga. That explains her sudden rise in the industry. What now? What will be your action?]

Uske system ne uss se pucha.

Par Crimson ke mann me kisi aur ke hi bol goonj rahe the. Uss anjaan shaks ke-

‘One of my preys is arriving there. Dhyaan rahe! Usse kuch hone na paaye!’

Na jaane ye kaun tha par Crimson ko yakeen tha ki woh ateet me jis insaan se mila tha. Ye wahi vyakti tha.

Usse zindagi me aaj tak kisi se kabhi itna darr mehsoos nahi hua tha. Magar ye insaan usse maut ki anubhooti karwa raha tha.

Uske perro tale chal rahe kuch cheete ek rakha bana ke jaa rahe the. Aag baboola hote hue Crimson ne apna perr patka aur unme se ek cheeta uske perr ke neeche kuchal ke marr gaya.

"Sahi kehte hai. Insaan ki zindagi ek cheeti ke samaan hoti hai."

[What now?]

'One lf his preys is arriving here? Tab toh ek teer se do nishaane ho gaye.'

[We have Natalia too now!]

'Ohhh! Hahaha! My bad! Teen nishaane!'

[Jail me mile uss system waale aadmi ke baare me mat socho abhi. Aur uss caller ke baare me socho. Woh zyada dangerous maalum pad raha hai. He's scheming something.]

'I know! Aur ussi ke liye toh ye sab taiyaar kar raha hu. I must have my own force.'

Woh apne basement me laut ke aaya toh kuch hi derr me Sweetie bhi uske saamne haazir thi.

Crimson : Kaam ho gaya?

Sweetie : Hmm! Card ki copies jald hi mil jayengi. Par ye sab hai kis liye?

Crimson : Tumhara kaam hai mera kaha gaya order follow karna. Nothing else. Samajh rahi ho na?

Sweetie : Y-Yes!

Crimson : Singer Natalia Martin ke upar nazar rakhwao. Dhyaan rahe kahi se bhi usse pata na lag paaye. Aur logo ke beech ye khabar faila do ki Island par dherr saara treasure maujood hai ek mansion me. Saath hi Investigation department me ek spy plant kar do, jo hume pal pal khabar dete rahe.

Sweetie : Treasure? Singer Natalia!? Lekin-!!!? Theek hai!

Sweetie sawaal puchti par woh apni jagah jaanti thi. Bina koi prashn kiye woh raazi ho gayi aur firse baahar nikal gayi.

Aur aise shuru hua, House of the Killers ka karnaama.

Jim the Slippery apne drug dealing aur kaale karmo me jut gaya. Saath hi usne alleys me maujood slot machines ka vyapaar karne waalo ke beech kisi ek dukaan me unn cards ko bhijwana bhi shuru kar diya.

Ye wahi card the, jiska istemaal kar ke Nightwalker ke mansion me ghusa jaata tha. Sweetie uski copies banwa banwa ke Jim tak supply karti. Aur Jim unn cards ko alley me maujood uss dukaan me bhijwata.

Island par Nightwalker ka Mansion aur bhi bhawya bana diya gaya. Usse jo chahiye tha woh usse milne laga tha. Zinda kaatne ke liye insaan. Treasure ki feli khabar sunn, log alleys me jaate, uss card ko khareedte aur baad me island par jaate.

Jaha Nightwalker unke sang raat me maut ka khel khelne ke liye taiyaar rehta. Saath hi wines, drugs import aur export kar deals bhi karta.

Toh wahi Pitcher bhi iss tigdi ka hissa tha. Alag alag hotels me uski maut ki parties organise hoti. Mithridatism ki vidya liye woh ek se ek celebrities ko maut ke ghaat utaarta aur apni fetish ko santusht karta.

Crimson yaha unn fetish waale logo ko dhundhta jo live killing dekhne ke liye dherro paisa lutaate.

Unhe ikhatta kar woh Nightwalker, Pitcher ke through dark web me live killing dikhwata.

Inn chand mahino me usne itna paisa kama liya tha ki ab uski khud ki IT companies ki kuch buildings bhi thi. Itna investment kar chuka tha woh.

Uski force taiyaar hoti jaa rahi thi.

Khaas baat ye thi ki Jim, Nightwalker aur Pitcher, teeno ko hi Crimson ke baare me koi jankaari nahi thi.

Woh jaante the ki koi aadmi tha jo unka dhandha karwaane me madad kar raha tha. Par woh kaun tha? Iss baat se woh anibhigya the.

Kintu, jo sabse zyaada usse tang kare hue tha woh tha wahi-

Woh unknown caller. Aur uski baatein-

‘I can kill you anytime! Don't test my patience.’

Ek baar fir woh awaaz apne mann me sunn uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya.

*Crash*

Agal bagal padi cheezo ko usne gusse me bikher diya.

"Tu mujhe maarega behanchod!!!? Jald hi-!! Jald hi tera chehra mere saamne hoga. Kaun hai tu, tera maqsad kya hai sab pata laga lunga mein."

Woh abhi uss caller ko yaad kar hi raha tha ki itne me ussi caller ka usse phone aa gaya.

Aur crimson ke call uthaate hi waha se fir wahi awaaz aayi,

"Tum nahi maane! Hai na? I gave you a warning though. Ye antim warning de raha hu. Veer-!!! Mera shikaar hai. Waha aane waala hai. Usse kuch bhi hone na paaye. You got that!?"

Bas! Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar Crimson ke chehre par woh kapti muskaan felte hi jaa rahi thi.

"Veeer!!!?? Huh!!! Hahahahahaha!! Toh Veer naam hai uska!!!!"

[Kya plan hai next? You want to kill him!]

'Of course! Hahahaha! Shikaari ke shikaar ko hum churaaenge. Aur baad me uss shikaari ko bhi dhad dabochenge.'

[Be careful!]

'Aane do uss chooze ko.'

Aur issi beech, ek kaand aur hua. Pitcher ne Ava ki dost Charlotte ko maut ke ghaat utaar diya.

Sansani bann ke news fel gayi. Ava ko ye pata lagte hi ek dhakka laga. Bhale hi Charlotte uske itna qareeb nahi thi. Lekin, uss se hi-hello uski bani rehti thi.

Aur ab Crimson taiyaar tha apna dusra daav khelne ke liye.

Ava urf Natalia Martin akeli hotel me ek record company se mil ke parking me khadi apni car me baithne jaa hi rahi thi jab usse peeche se ek awaaz sunaayi di,

"Natalia Martin!!"

Ava ne palat ke dekha toh uske saamne Crimson maujood tha.

Ava : ???

Crimson (smiles) : Kaisa lag raha hai system ka istemal karte hue safalta ki uchhaiyo par pohuchne me?

Ava ek haafi lete hue stabdh hoke 2 qadam peeche ho gayi.

Ava : Who-!? Who are you?

Usne khud bhi uss aadmi ko check kiya magar,

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Ava : K-Kaun ho tum? Kya baat kar rahe ho meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha.

Crimson ne jab punaah usse check kiya toh woh dang reh gaya. Kyuki iss baar,

*Ding*

[Name : Natalia Martin
Status : Business woman/ Singer/ Celebrity
Age : 25

Bio : Natalia Martin, ek singer hai. Kaafi saalo se mehnat kar ke woh aaj iss mukaam pe pohuchi hai. Kuch record companies ke sang ties hai. Abhi struggle kaafi hai lekin safalta mehnat se milti jaa rahi hai.

Favourability : 3
Relationship : Strangers.]

Crimson ne jaise hi ye padha woh zorr-zorr se hassne laga.

Crimson : Hahahahahahahaha!!!

Ava : Y-You-!!

Woh hasste hue uske qareeb aaya. Ava sachet hote hue ek qadam peeche hui.

Ava ke kaano ke nazdeek aake woh bola,

Crimson : System sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Miss Natalia!!!

Ava uss se dur hatt usse bhayanak gusse me ghoori,

Ava : Kaun ho tum? Aur kya chaahte ho? Iska matlab tumhaare paas bhi-!!?

Crimson : Meet me upstairs.

Woh jeb me haath daale palat gaya.

Crimson (smiles) : Don't worry! Iss hotel ki aadhi partnership meri hai. Half owner mein hi hu iska. Meet me at the 4th floor.

Aur woh waha se upar nikal gaya.

Ava bas bhauchakki si wahi khadi rahi.

'Ye sab kya ho raha hai?'

[I don't know miss. There shouldn't have been more than 1 system. Lekin shayad lagta hai ki-!]

Ava ke mann me ek pyaari si female voice usse samjhaate hue boli,

'Forget it! Yaani mein akeli nahi hu jiske paas ye system hai. I must be careful then.'

[Yes.]

Woh upar ko chali gayi. 4th floor par aate hi Crimson uske saamne bade hi araam se jeb me haath daale khada hua tha.

Ek badi si jagah thi aur woh dono hi bas akele the waha.

Ava (frowns) : Say!

Crimson : Mere liye ek chota sa kaam karna hai tumhe.

Ava : What is it?

Crimson : Samay aane par mein bata dunga. Kaho? Do you agree?

Ava : Heh! Why should I? Tum hote kaun ho-!?

Crimson (smiles) : Grace Martin!

Apni maa ka naam sunte hi Ava ki aankhein bhay me fel gayi. Uska haath turant hi peeche apni jeans ki orr gaya aur ek hand gun nikaalte hue usne Crimson par taan di.

Ava : DON'T YOU DARE-!!

Crimson ahista ahista uske nazdeek aaya aur bola,

Crimson : Kya hoga jab Grace Martin... Your only family... Zinda na bach paaye toh?



Ava : Y-You-!!!

Crimson : Veer!!!

Ava : ??

Crimson : Ye naam hai uss ladke ka jiske saath meri dushmani hai.

Usne jhooth bolte hue jeb se cigarette ke dabbe se ek cigarette nikaali aur kash lagaane laga.

Crimson : Woh Las Vegas jald hi aane waala hai. Mein chaahta hu tum nazar rakho uspe.

Ava : Huh!!?

Crimson (smiles) : Status toh tum apna badal hi sakti ho. Hai na? Jaise abhi thodi derr pehle badla.

Ava : Y-You-!!?

Crimson (smiles) : Tumhara koi nuksaan bhi nahi hai. Right? Why don't you collaborate with me girl? Hum dono ek dusre ke kaam aa sakte hai you know.

Ava : Fuck off!

Woh bhaagte hue uski orr aayi,

*Swoooossshhhhh*

Ek laat Crimson ke sarr ki orr tezz gati se ghoomte hue aayi par woh turant hi jhuk gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche jhukte hi usne ek punch Ava ke pait ki orr maara jisse Ava ne split second me apne haatho se block kar liya tha. Parantu, uske bawajood uska shareer kayi qadam peeche jaa ke ladkhada ke girte girte bacha.

Crimson (smiles) : Ohh! You wanna fight?

Aur dono hi aapas me bhid gaye. Ava ki haalat buri hoti jaa rahi thi. Par na jaane usse kya hua, woh agle hi shan bhayanak krodh me aa gayi.

*Bam*

*Bam*

*Bam*

Ek ke baad ek hits uske shareer par lagte jaa rahe the.

7 hits.

8 hits.

9 hits.

10 hits.

“What???” Crimson ke badan par daswa lagataar hit jab uske seene par laga toh agle hi pal uske seene ka kuch hissa phat gaya. Akasmaat hi uss hisse se khoon behna shuru ho gaya.

Woh hairat-angez me Ava ko dekha jo daudti hui uski hi orr aa rahi thi.

[Iss ladki ke paas koi card hai. Sambhal ke!]

Ek ladki ne uske badan se khoon nikaal diya? Uska gussa sarr chadh ke bol utha. Bhaagti hui Ava ko usne ek jhatke me uske gale se pakda aur,

*BAMMMMMMMMMM*

Wahi rakhi table par usse patak diya.

“Nnghhhh~”

Crismon : You should know your place! Behtar yahi hoga ki meri baat maan lo. Warna Grace Martin-

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava ko apne haath khade karne hi pade. Usse raazi hona hi pada. Uski maa uski sabse badi kamzori thi.

Woh apne ghar lauti toh uss anjaan vyakti ka usse call aaya. Wahi ajanabi jisne usse Slogan ke paas bhejne ka kaarya saupa tha.

Ava : Hello?

? : Hmm! Toh tum uss se bhi mil li ho! Right?

Ava : T-Tum!! Kaun ho? Kyu mujh pe nazar rakhe hue ho? Kya chaahte ho mujhse?

? : Hey! Hey! Mein toh tumhari bhalaayi ke liye hi keh raha hu. Don’t you want to know? Kya tum jaan’na nahi chaahti? Kaun woh hatyaara hai jisne tumhaare Dad ko maara? Hmm?

Ava ki mutthi zorr se kass gayi. Daant peeste hue woh boli,

Ava : What do you want exactly?

? : Mene tumse do maange rakhi thi. Yaad hai na?

Ava : Y-Yes! Tell me! What do I have to do?

? (smiles) : That’s like a good girl. Collaborate with him.

Ava : Kya?

? : Suna nahi? Tum abhi abhi kisi se mil ke aayi ho na?

Ava : That’s-

? : Collaborate with him. Jo woh keh raha hai woh karo. And then, I’ll tell you who your father’s killer is…

Ava : I-

? : Don’t worry! Mein apne vaade nahi todta. Ye tumhara akhiri kaam hai. Do it!

Ava (growls) : F-Fine!

***

Idhar mauto ka silsila jaari tha, toh wahi Veer Suhana ke sang Las Vegas pohuch chuka tha. Ye wahi waqt tha.

Bhavya hotel me Pitcher ki ek party chal rahi thi. Log masks pehne dance ka lutf le rahe the. Magar, issi party me ek sadasya galti se andar ghus aaya.

Ya kahe ki usse kuch gadbad mehsoos hui aur talaashi karne ke liye woh khud andar aa gaya.

Aur ye shaks tha~ Daniel!!

Jisne Pitcher ko dekha, jisne waha maujood masks pehne logo ko dekha. Aur jisne, usse bhi dekha jo gir ke apne muh se jhaag baha rahi thi. Ek aur anya celebrity. Pitcher ki shikaar. Jo marr chuki thi.

Ghabra ke woh bhaaga, par uski nigaaho ne kisi ek ko aur dekha.

Crimson!!

Jo haivaano waali muskaan liye usse hi ghoor raha tha. Daniel nahi jaanta tha ki uss bechaare ko pehle hi check kar liya gaya tha. Woh Investigation Department ka senior detective hai ye saari info Crimson ko dikh chuki thi.

Woh bhaaga. Apni jaan bachaane ke liye. Yaha pe itna bada kaand chal raha tha. Koi ek nahi, kayi log iss khel me shaamil the. Usse andaaza lag gaya tha. Woh khatre ko bhaanp chuka tha par tabhi,

*Splurt*

“Huh??”

Daniel ke qadam wahi tham gaye. Uski aankhein badi ho chali. Aisa laga maano jaise usne koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Peeche palat ke dekha toh, usne paaya ki-

Wahi aadmi, yaani Crimson uske peeche khada hua tha. Uske haath me maujood chaaku pehle hi Daniel ki peeth me dhass chuka tha.

Crimson (smiles) : Sweet Dreams!

Daniel : Y-You!!!

Daniel ki saansein ukhadne lagi aur Crimson ne chaaku uski peeth se kheench ke nikaal di.

Zameen par girte hue Daniel apna phone nikaal call karne laga par,

*BAAAAMMMMMM*

Crimson ki laat padte hi phone ke chithde udd gaye. Aur woh usse ussi haalat me chhor waapas chala gaya.

Marrne se pehle Daniel ne ek kaam kiya. Aur woh tha wahi dying message chhorna.

Heinous thoughts destroys the mind. Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more. Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it. Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught,

Soul shall burn.

Aur yahi woh message tha jisse Divya ne decode kiya tha. Jiska arth tha - House of Killers.

Yahi woh samay tha jab, Investigation Department apne action me aayi. Veer aur Suhana Department me hai, iski khabar turant hi Sweetie ko lag gayi.

Department me spy jo baitha hua tha ek. Crimson ne hi toh bithaya tha Sweetie se keh ke. Woh harr pal ki khabar bhejta jaa raha tha.

Yeh khabar Sweetie ne Crimson tak pohuchaayi.

Toh wahi Crimson ne Ava tak. Ava jaan chuki thi ki Suhana ke sang Veer naam ka shaks Las Vegas pohuch chuka tha. Uska kaam tha iss shaks par nazar rakhna.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Jim the Slippery ko bhi Veer ne Las Vegas ki alleys me drug dealing karte waqt dhad dabocha tha. Jab usne Divya ko pehli baar apni fighting skills ka namoona dikhaya tha.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Veer aur Mike uss card tak pohuche aur usse khareed ke woh Island ki khoj kar paaye.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Veer ne Nightwalker jaise bade serial killer ko pakad ke department ke saamne pesh kiya tha.

Ek ke baad ek Veer Crimson ki banaayi force ki dhajjiya udaata jaa raha tha.

Kintu, fir bhi Crimson patience rakhe hue tha.

Jiske peeche ek hi kaaran tha,

[Agar usse maarna hi hai. Toh maar kyu nahi dete tum? Woh tumse kamzor hai.]

‘Abhi nahi System! Abhi nahi! Abhi maar dunga toh mujhe profit kaise hoyega? Mission ki possibility kitni hai?’

*Ding*

[Mission possibility : 60%]

Ye Crimson ki skill thi. Veer ko maarna tab hi qifaayat mand saabit ho sakta tha jab woh Mission milne ke baad usse maare. Lekin, abhi mission milne ki sambhaavna sirf 60% hi thi.

‘100% karne ke liye mujhe aur kya karna hoga?’

[Tum aur woh Veer jitna hi ek dusre ke raaste me aaoge, jitna ek dusre ke kaamo me hastakshep karoge, utna hi system usse ek obstacle maanta jayega. Aur jald hi ye possibility 100% tak pohuch jayegi. Fir mission mil hi jayega. Usse maarne ka.]

‘Hmm! Ek gadbad ho gayi hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha Veer Investigation Department ke liye yaha aayega. Dikkat ho gayi hai. Crimson Festival ki taiyaari shuru karni hogi. Uske pehle usse ek trailer dena zaroori hai.’

Bas dikkat ek thi. Bechaara Pitcher nahi jaanta tha ki Ava Crimson ke saath mil ke kaam kar rahi thi. Aur Ava ye nahi jaanti thi ki Crimson hi House of the Killers ka rachaita tha.

Pitcher ne Ava ko maut ka invitation bhej diya tha jo woh aksar harr celebrity ko bhejta tha. Invitation toh party ka hota tha parantu, party jaisa waha kuch nahi hota tha.

Aur yahi woh samay tha jab Ava ne Divya ko apne concert ke invitation ka card bheja.



Iss se uske do kaam hone waale the. Card bhejne waale ka raaz Divya aur department ke zariye saamne aa jaata aur Veer ke aane se woh uss par ab nazar rakh sakti thi.

Yahi woh samay tha jab Divya, Veer aur Suhana pehli baar Ava ke concert me gaye the aur Veer pehli baar uss se mila tha.



Na sirf usne Pitcher ko pakadwaya tha balki Ava ke liye bhi raaste se ek samsasya ko dur kar diya tha.

Crimson ki poori tigdi ko Veer ne barbaad kar ke rakh diya tha. Suhana ke sang woh hotel aaya hua tha. Balcony me woh khada hua tha jab usse koi dikha.

Yahi woh waqt tha jab Veer ne pehli baar Crimson ko dekha.



Yahi woh waqt tha jab Suhana aur uske peeche gang pad gayi thi. Crimson jo trailer dene ki baat kar raha tha woh yahi tha. Suhana ka Veer ko bachaane ke liye goli lagna aur Crimson ka Veer ko yu wahi chhor bas system ke baare me raaz bataate hue chale jaana.

Kyuki abhi bhi, possibility sirf 70% hi hui thi. Dono ko ek dusre ke raaste me aur aane ki zaroorat thi.

***

Par kya ye sab yahi samaapt ho gaya? Hargiz nahi! Investigation department poore zorr-shor se tehqiqaat karne me jut chuka tha.

Aur derr nahi lagni thi unhe Crimson ko dhundhne ke liye.

[Ab kya? Department jald hi tumhe trace kar lega.]

Crimson Paris me apni hotel ke kamre me baitha hua ek soch me dooba hua tha. Aage kuaa tha toh peeche khaayi. El taraf woh unknown caller toh doosri taraf uske peeche lagi Investigation Department kib team.

‘Mein chaahu toh abhi unn namoono ko maar du. Lekin aise me mera samay bhi barbaad hoga. Mein expose bhi zyada ho jaunga. Aur ye log maan’ne waale nahi hai. Akhir kitno ko maarunga mein? Gatar me macchar ki tarah ye firse naye naye jhund me aate hi jayenge.’

[Toh-]

Woh muskuraaya.

‘Samay aa gaya hai ki mein apna teesra aur akhiri daav khelu.’

Aur usne apna phone uthaate hue ek call laga diya.

*Ring* *Ring*

DGSI ke Head ke cabin me telephone par call aaya. Xavier jo apni seat par baithe kuch reports ko padhne me laga hua tha usne call uthaaya.

Xavier : Hello?

Crimson : Paris me ek bohut bada hamla hone waala hai.

Sunte hi Xavier apni seat se uth khada hua.

Xavier : K-Kaun? Kaun ho tum? Kya bol rahe ho?

Crimson (smiles) : Kaun hu, kaha se hu, ye sab sawaal puch kar samay zaaya kyu kar rahe ho. Zaroori soochna de raha hu. Paris me jald hi bohut bada terror attack hone waala hai.

Xavier : Y-Ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? Kaun ho tum? Tumhe andaaza bhi hai kis se baat ho rahi hai tumhari?

Crimson : DGSI ke Head, Mister Xavier se. Right?

Xavier : T-Tum-??

Crimson (smiles) : Woh firse dohraane waala hai. Woh firse ghatit hone waala hai.

Xavier : K-Kya ghatit hone waala hai? Kya kehna chaah rahe ho tum?

Xavier ne hadbadaate hue apni team me se phone call ko record karne ke liye ishaara kiya.

Crimson (smiles) : Call record kar rahe ho? Baad me trace bhi karoge. Hai na?

Xavier : Seedhe seedhe jawaab dete ho ya-?

Crimson : Shhh! Apni aukaat me raho Xavier!!

Xavier (gusse me) : Youuuuu-!!!!

Crimson : Aur chup-chaap meri baat suno. House of the Killers Paris me ghatit hone jaa raha hai.

Xavier : H-House? K-Kya? Ye kya bol rahe ho?

Crimson : House of the Killers ka leader jald hi Paris me aayega aur saare sheher me hahakaar fela ke rakh dega. Kayi mauto ko anjaam dega woh.

Xavier : Kaun? Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum? Hello?

Crimson : Agar meri baat ka yakeen na ho. Toh Las Vegas ke investigation department se House of the Killers ki report maang lena. Woh bhugte hue baithe hai. Umeed hai ek sheher dusre sheher ki madad kar hi dega. Aur mujhe apna shubh-chintak hi samajhna. Agla call mein kuch din baad lagaunga. Hope tab tak reports aa chuki hongi.

Xavier : H-Hello? Hello!!!!

Par call tab tak cut ho chuka tha.

Xavier ke poore chehre par paseene ki boondi saji hui thi.

"Jald se jald Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ke Head se mujhe contact karwao. Jaldi-!!!!!"

Woh zorr se garja toh kaam karne waale log fauran hi uss kaam me lag gaye.

Kuch hi derr me Xavier aur Nolan ek dusre ke contact me the.

Request rakhte hue DGSI ne reports ki maang rakhi toh badle me Investigation Department ne kuch hi dino me waha se HOK ki report bhej di.

Report padhte hi poora DGSI staff hakka-bakka reh chuka tha.

Itna bada game?

Itna bada maut ka khel khela gaya tha Las Vegas me?

Report me kahi par bhi Veer ka naam nahi tha. Uski privacy aur apni izzat bachaane ke liye Investigation Department ne Veer ka naam report me nahi daala tha. Kyuki woh department ka hissa nahi tha.

Xavier (screams) : Abhi ke abhi!!! Agent Chris aur Agent Terashima ko bulao. Abhi-!!!!

Meeting shuru hui aur woh sabhi ek table ke ird-gird baithe hue the.

Chris : Kya khabar pukhta hai Sir?

Xavier : Nahi! Lekin, hume alert rehna hoga. Hum isse nazar-andaaz nahi kar sakte hai.

Terashima : Right! Report ke hisaab se teen procedure me ye kiya jaata hai.

Xavier : Hmm!

Terashima : Yaani pehle woh card liya jaata hai. Fir logo ko island bulaaya jaata hai ya leke jaaya jaata hai. Right?

Xavier (nods) : Hmm!

Terashima : Aur ye celebrities ke saath kiya jaata hai. Aur fir waha pe maut!!

Chris : Hmm!

Xavier : Aur isliye tum dono undercover rahoge. Andre tumhare saath rahega. Recording ka kaam usse saupa hai mene.

Chris : Okay!

Woh sabhi baithe hi the, jab punaah Xavier ka telephone baj utha. Call ussi ka tha-

Crimson (smiles) : Kya ab meri baat pe yakeen ho gaya?

Xavier : T-Tum firse-!?

Crimson : Savdhaan kar raha hu. Mujhe toh tumhe thank you kehna chahiye. Alert raho. Nigrani rakho. Jald hi woh apne mission ko anjaam dega.

Xavier : Tum-!!!

Par firse, call cut ho gaya.

Terashima : Hume planning karni chahiye.

Idhar DGSI ki planning shuru hui aur udhar Crimson ne Ava ko Las Vegas se Paris bulwa liya.

Ava (growls) : Ab kya maqsad hai tumhara!!!?

Crimson : Veer ko message karo aur uss se kaho ki tum musibat me ho. Don't mention anything. Kaho ki help chahiye ASAP.

Majboori ke chalte usse woh karna pada. Yahi woh message tha jo Veer ko Ava dwaara aaya tha.

Jiske chalte Veer Ava ke liye Paris tak aaya.

Crimson : Apna maqsad mein tumhe bata hi chuka hu.

Ava : B-But he's innocent-

Crimson (frowns) : Tumhe kab se uss se itna lagaav ho gaya? Just do your work. Raat me tumhe usse alley me le jaana hai. Waha slot machines hongi.

Ava : Kyuuu??!

Crimson (smiles) : DGSI Veer par nigraani rakhegi. Aur tabhi mein apni gang aur nakli police force ko bhejunga. Woh waha hamla kar DGSI ko galat sanket de dengi. Jis se unhe ye lagega ki Veer pe hamla karna allowed hai. Zaahir hai tab woh bhaag ke niklega. Aur tumhe-!!! Usse meri owned uss building me laana hai.

Ava krodh me usse ghoorti rahi. Par chaah ke bhi kuch na kar saki. Kyuki Sweetie ne Crimson ko Grace Martin ke hospital ka pata de hi diya tha. Aur Crimson Grace ko dhundh chuka tha.

Alag alag buildings pe snipers bithwa ke Grace ko target kar ke rakha hua tha.

Ava apne bandhe haatho se sab kuch karne par majboor hoti gayi. Yaha tak ki uss unknown caller ne bhi usse Crimson ke saath kaam karne ke liye kaha hua tha. Kaise bhaagti inn sab se bach ke?

[Plan is good.]

Crimson ke mann me awaaz aayi.

Ye big game racha tha usne. Investigation Department jab uske peeche pada hi hua tha toh kyu na unhe unke target tak pohucha diya jaaye?

Issi tarah usne Veer ko fassa diya tha. Veer ka naam House of the Killers ka rachayita ghoshit hone waala tha.

Aur wahi hua bhi,

Ava usse nirdesh anusaar unn alleys me leke gayi.

Veer ke na dekhte hue woh khud ko nervous dikhaati jo Andre sab kuch record kar raha tha.

Terashima : Dekho! Natalia kaise darr rahi hai.

Andre : Right! Zaroor dhamka ke rakha gaya hai. This motherfucker-!!!

Utne me hi Crimson ki fake police waha ghusi aur idhar Terashima aur Chris ko galat jankaari haath me lag gayi.

Andre : Wh-What?? Cops usse shoot kar rahe hai? Matlab hum usse maar sakte hai?

Chris : Let's go!!!

Yahi woh waqt tha jab Ava waha se bhaagte hue Crimson ki owned IT building me gayi. Uske peeche jo gang members lage the unhe pata tha kya karna hai.

Ava chup chaap khadi rahi aur gang waalo ne usse baandh diya.

Fir woh rocket launcher ka blast. Veer ka bike utha ke bhaagna. Yahi sab toh ghatit hua tha.

Bilkul wesa hi ho raha tha jesa Crimson ne DGSI ko bataya tha. Jesa department se bheji gayi reports me likha hua tha.

Veer ne alleys me se woh pass khareeda hi tha. Las vegas me bhi card khareeda gaya tha. Chris aur Terashima ko unka pehla saboot mil chuka tha.

Dhamaake ke baad Veer ka island ki orr bhaagna aur celebrity Natalia ki kidnapping.

Aur ye tha dusra saboot jo unhe mil chuka tha.

Sab juch dohraya hi toh jaa raha tha. Matlab House of the Killers sach me racha jaa raha tha firse.

Koi sandeh nahi tha isme ki Veer hi ab-

House of the Killers ka rachayita tha.

Crimson apni tarqeeb me qamyaab ho chuka tha.

Bas ek cheez chorr ke.

*Bang*

Kisi ne uss par goli chala di thi peeche se.

Majbooran Veer ko chhor usse waha se bhaagna pada.

*Bang*

Ek aur bullet aayi aur uske seene par thodi si chot karte hue ghis ke nikal gayi.

Crimson uss source ka peeche karta gaya. Par tab tak goli chalaane waala vyakti bhaag chuka tha.

"Damn it!!! Madarchod hai kaun???"

Apne basement me pohuchte hi Sweetie uska waha intezaar kar rahi thi.

Sweetie : You are hurt.



Par usne koi jawaab na diya. Koi tha jo usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Par kaun?

[Kahi ye wahi caller toh nahi?]

'Ho sakta hai! Lekin filhaal Veer ko Island leke jaana hai. Tabhi toh uspe aarop lagwa paunga mein. Uss par aarop lagte hi DGSI aur Investigation Department mera peecha chorr denge. Aur aarop lagne ke baad hi mission ki possibility jald hi 100% pohuch jayegi. Aur tab-!!! Mein usse maar paunga!!!'

Aur wesa hi hua. Veer harr taraf se fass chuka tha. Itni badi scheme uske peeth peeche uske liye rachi gayi thi uss bechaare ko andaaza bhi nahi tha.

Par Veer ne aenn mauke par baazi palat di.

Crimson ki Mission possibility 99% tak pohuchte hi,

Veer ne khud ko qurbaan kar diya.

Crimson ka saara khel dhara ka dhara reh gaya. HOK toh gaya hi saath hi Veer ko maarne ka jo mission milne waala tha, woh bhi ab gaya. Kyuki Veer jaa chuka tha.

Sthiti aisi thi jaise khade lund pe kisi ne laat maar di ho.

Aur isliye woh-

"Kaha gaya woh?? Where is he-!!!??"

Ava ka gala pakde uss par gussa nikaal raha tha. Itni badi machli uske haath se yu hi nikal gayi thi. Aur ye Ava dekhti rahi.

Parantu,

*BAAAAAMMMMMM*

Ek laat padte hi woh dur jaa gira.

Woh jaanta tha ye ladki Ava koi strong card rakhe hue thi. Wese hi uski condition sahi nahi thi.

[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]

Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.

Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-

Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava kya rakhi hui thi.

Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-

*Ding*


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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
It's big brain time. Ye update dimaag ki taare khol dega. Haha! Update consists of 7k words approximately. Dekhte hai kitne dots ko connect kar paate hai. Agla update hume Veer ki jankaari dega. Target abhi bhi wahi hai. 140. Toh like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

Sabse pehle, thanks for mega update, puri kadi HOK or Veer ko phasane ke shadyantra ke baare me ek hi update me puri ho gayi. Ab agla update Veer ke bachne ke uper hoga.

Shor tha toh bas ussi pankhe ka, baaki harr jagah ek khamoshi chhayi hui thi.

What writing skills, one feels transported to the situation.

‘Why don’t you be my right hand? You’ve got potential!’

‘So you chose to betray me huh? Surprised? Mujhe kaise pata chala? You can’t lie to me you know!’

‘One of my preys is arriving there. Dhyaan rahe! Usse kuch hone na paaye!’

‘I can kill you anytime! Don't test my patience.’

Lagta hai phone system wala apne ko sabka 'Baadshah' samajhta hai, aur Crimson use nahi janta.

Yaha saare jail cells ke akhir me ek cell aur tha. Jiske andar baitha aadmi dheere se utha aur baahar aaya.

"Ehehehehehe! Tum bhi hum me se ek ho? Ehehehe! Mere patients-!!! Hehehehe! Mein aaya-!!!"

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Ye ek aur system wala. Pagal sa, aur ye kinko apne patients bata raha hai. Kya ye doctor hai ya kuch aur.

'One lf his preys is arriving here? Tab toh ek teer se do nishaane ho gaye.'

[We have Natalia too now!]

'Ohhh! Hahaha! My bad! Teen nishaane!'

[Jail me mile uss system waale aadmi ke baare me mat socho abhi. Aur uss caller ke baare me socho. Woh zyada dangerous maalum pad raha hai. He's scheming something.]

Lagta hai Crimson Veer, Pagal aur Natasha ko teen gin raha hai, lekin uska system use Phone wale per concentrate kerne ke liye keh raha hai.

'Of course! Hahahaha! Shikaari ke shikaar ko hum churaaenge. Aur baad me uss shikaari ko bhi dhad dabochenge.'

To Crimson pehle Veer aur uske baad Phone wale ko maarna chahta hai.

Crimson : Veer!!!

Ava : ??

Crimson : Ye naam hai uss ladke ka jiske saath meri dushmani hai.

Usne jhooth bolte hue jeb se cigarette ke dabbe se ek cigarette nikaali aur kash lagaane laga.

Iska matlab Crimson ki Veer se koi dushmani nahi thi, bas weh ek system wale ko maar ker jyada points aur uski powers lena chahta hai.

Crimson (smiles) : Status toh tum apna badal hi sakti ho. Hai na? Jaise abhi thodi derr pehle badla.

Ye samajh nahi aaya. Pehle Crimson Ava ke stats nahi dekh pa raha tha lekin Ava ne kya stats badle jo Crimson ab padhne laga. Lekin weh Ava ki skill ke baare me nahi jaan paya.

? : Hmm! Toh tum uss se bhi mil li ho! Right?

? : Collaborate with him. Jo woh keh raha hai woh karo. And then, I’ll tell you who your father’s killer is…

To Ava bhi keval apni Ma ko bachane ke liye hi nahi, balki is karan se bhi Veer ko phasane ke shadyantra me phans gayi.

‘Abhi nahi System! Abhi nahi! Abhi maar dunga toh mujhe profit kaise hoyega? Mission ki possibility kitni hai?’

Now it is very clear, Veer ke points lene ke liye Crimson uske peeche pada hai.

[Ab kya? Department jald hi tumhe trace kar lega.]

‘Samay aa gaya hai ki mein apna teesra aur akhiri daav khelu.’

Veer ko phasane ka jaal phail gaya.

"Damn it!!! Madarchod hai kaun???"

Hahaha... akhir yeh kaun hai, jo Crimson ke peeche pada hai.
Pata nahi ye update pehle se hi plan kiya tha ya baad me, lekin pichle HOK aur Veer ko phasane ke updates se bahut safai se gel ker gaya. Maza aa gaya.
Ab mega update ke baad keh bhi nahi sakte agle update jaldi dene ke liye, per Veer kis tarah se bachta hai, kya Neel Mani use bachati hai, ya fir Ava ka mission pura hone ke points ya skill, dekhna hai. Aur Kaera ka bhi suspense bacha hua hai, uske bhi emotions jagne ke baad points milne hain. Sabse badi baad, Veer ke bachne se kya Ava ya Crimson ko koi notification milega. Mere khyal se nahi, kyon ki un dono ko system ne Veer ko maarne ka task nahi diya tha. Bas ek baat dimag se uper nikal gayi, Ava ko points kyon mile, weh to phone wale ya Crmson ke kehne per Veer ko Ushant Island layi thi. Death Flag aur Veer uska target kaise ban gaya. Kya phone wale ke paas itni skill hai ki weh kisi aur ko points de paye.

 

[Simplified]

Ju ko toh kahani lagta hai shuru se padhni padhegi. Last jaha se chhor ke gayi thi wahi se continue karogi toh shayad samajh na aaye
Bohut complex chal rahi hai abhi.

Kya bhai complex kaha hai story bass aage piche ke kuch situation Mila ke likh rahe ho. Kahani complex thodi hoti hai, yeh bolna chahiye ki story abb aur mazedar ho gya lol
Haa reviews toh abb thode bade dene padenge.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update - 141 ~ The Last Breath​

Ab tak...

Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.

Aur idhar,

Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?

Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!

'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.

Ab aage...

Ushant Islands~

“Urrrrghhhh~”

Ek dard bhari karaah unn bhaari vishaal pattharo ke neeche se aayi. Veer unke neeche daba hua tha.

Haddiya to Bone Reaper ke chalte sahi salamat thi parantu, unn pattharo ke bhaar se ho rahe dard ko kaise kam kiya jaa sakta tha?

Woh toh accha tha jo Veer ne neeche dabne se pehle turant Bone Reaper equip kar liya tha. Warna uski haddiyo ka choorma bann jaana tha.

[Master-!? Are you okay?]

Pari ki ek chinta-janak awaaz uske mann me aayi.

'Y-Yeah!'

Veer ne keh toh diya magar woh jaanti thi ki uske Master bilkul bhi theek nahi the.

Veer ke perro par bhaar bohut adhik tha. Ek perr bacha hua tha lekin dusra pattharo ke neeche tha. Uska seena aur ek haath bhi buri tarah unn pattharo ki chapet me aa chuke the.

'Meri fiqr mat karo. Mein kaise bhi kar ke baahar aa jaunga. Tum ye batao kya tumne kuch observe kiya?'

[I think I have figured it out Master.]

Pari kuch sochte hue boli.

'What is it?'

[Shayad mujhe pata lag gaya hai ki ye sab akhir chal kya raha hai.]

'Tell me!'

[Ye toh pakka hai ki aapko frame kiya gaya hai. Kisne kiya hai? Toh aapka guess bhi sahi hai. Uss Crimson ne hi hume fassaya hai.]

'I know that. Lekin kyu aur kaise?'

[Kyu ka jawaab mere paas abhi nahi hai Master. Lekin kaise? Uska zaroor hai. Hear me out!]

'Mein sunn raha hu!'

[I think ye Crimson-!]

'??'

[Ye Crimson hi House of the Killers ka rachayita hai. Isne hi House of the Killers jaise bade khatarnaak organisation ko banaaya hai.]

'Koi proof Pari?'

[Proof nahi hai. But meri thinking bohut strongly uski orr point out kar rahi hai. Kyuki ye Las Vegas me bhi tha.]

'Yeah!'

[Agar usse maarna hota to woh wahi maar deta. Toh maara kyu nahi? Answer is simple! He wanted to frame you! DGSI ko issi ne shayad aapke khilaaf galat info di hai.]

'Ohhh!'

[Remember the fake police?]

Pari ke bataane par Veer ko yaad aaya. Jab unn alleys me smoke bomb feka gaya tha aur Ava ka bodyguard jo zakhmi hua tha. Woh fake police ke kaaran hi hua tha.

'Shit!!! Mujhe yaad hai. Woh fake police-!!'

[Woh issi ne bheji hongi Master. Ye Terashima log tab waha hum par nigrani rakh rahe honge. Unhone jab police ko hamla karte dekha to unhe galat message chala gaya. Oh no!!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi realize kiya?]

[Master! Isliye wo hamare peeche hai. Jab unhone dekha ki police shoot kar rahi hai toh unhe confirm ho gaya ki hum suspect hai. But these fuckers didn't know that they were fake police officers.]

'Iska matlab woh fake police ka hamla sirf mujhe suspect confirm karwane ke liye tha!?'

[Yes!!! Lekin kuch aur bhi hai-! Wo ye assume kar rahe hai ki Ava ko hum laaye hai. But that's not true. Unke haath kuch aur bhi laga hai Master. Crimson ne unhe koi aur jankaari bhi di hai. Lekin mujhe aur analyse karne ke liye samay chahiye. I'm sorry!]

'Nahi Pari! Tumne wese hi bohut kar diya hai. It's enough and- arrggh!!!'

[Maaasterrr!!!]

Veer ka dard ab badh raha tha.

[It hurts Master. I know! But please~ Stay Calm.]

Pari ki awaaz uske andar goonji toh wo apni saanson ko durust karne laga. Pari jaanti thi ki uske Master iss waqt kis haal me the. Uske bawajood woh khud ko shaant rakhi hui thi.

Yahi thi uski personality. Agar iss waqt Pari ki koi aur personality hoti toh pakke se panic mode me chali jaati. Magar, ye Pari alag thi.

[Yes! Breathe in, Breathe out!!!]

Veer lambi-lambi, gehri par santulit saansein lene laga.

[Mene aapke kandhe par lagi bullet waale ghaav ke blood flow ko rok diya hai. Blood loss se bachaane ke liye. But sorry, I cannot remove your pain.]

[Mein ek samay par aapki body me ek kaam kar sakti hu. Right now I’m focusing on your blood flow. Sorry Master! Agar mein aur capable hoti toh aapki sensory nerves par bhi dhyaan de deti. Kam se kam kuch dard kam ho jaata.]

‘You are more than capable Pari!’

[Master...!]

‘Mera dard bhale hi kam ho jaata, par damage ko toh nahi roka jaa sakta na?’

[Y-Yes Master! Body to aapki damage tab bhi hoti.]

‘Then what’s the point? It’s okay Pari! Dard se mujhe darr nahi lagta.'

[That’s-]

[Ye sab uss Crimson ke kaaran. He damaged your body too much. I can feel the pain too. Andhruni chot zyaada hai. Muscles aur tissues me baitha woh dard-!]

[But we will pay him back. Don't worry! As long as I’m here. I won’t let you die. Now listen to me-]

'Pari!!! Tum kitna kuch karti ho mere liye-!' Veer ne usse bolte waqt beech se hi kaat diya.

Uske achanak se aise bol sunn Pari maun reh gayi.

[???]

Veer ke mann me tabhi Bhavna ka khayaal aaya. Mall me jab uski mulaqat Louis se hui thi, toh Bhavna se phone par uski baat hui thi.

Aur uss call ke baad se Veer ki ghar pe kisi se bhi baat nahi ho paayi thi. Samay hi nahi mila tha usse.

'Ghar par sab chinta kar rahe honge.'

Ye soch usne ek gehri lambi saans li.

'Mein ab ek stupid move try karne jaa raha hu. Par wahi mujhe yaha se nikaal payega.'

[What?]

Usne apna ek perr apne dusre perr ke upar tike bhaari patthar par lagaaya aur agle hi shan-

"Haaaaaaaaarrrrrrgggghhh-!!!!"

[Maaaasterrrr!!!]

Woh apni sirf physical strength ka istemaal kar usse hataane ki koshish karne laga. Kintu, Pari bechain ho uthi.

[Don't do it! Please! N-No-!!! At this rate-]

Uska poora perr kaanp raha tha. Perr ki saari nasse phatne ko ho rahi thi. Usne apni bhar taaqat lagaayi.

[What are you doing?? Stop it!!!!! Agar aise hi strain badhta gaya toh-]

Magar woh na ruka.

"Nnnngghhhh-!!!"

Uska poora muh laal hone laga. Aur agle hi pal,

"Aaaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

*Splurt*

[Nooooooo!!!]

Veer ke perr me ghutne ke neeche, peeche ka maans ka hissa phat gaya.

Aise jaise tarbooj phatata hai. Muscle Tearing. Kisi ek jagah adhik strain se, adhik pressure se andhruni maanspeshiyo ke phatne ka darr rehta tha.

Veer ke saath bhi wahi hua tha. Usne apne jeevan me kabhi itna zorr nahi lagaya tha. Isse karne ke liye insaan ko kitna jazba chahiye hota tha, ye baat Pari bakhubi jaanti thi.

Apne Master ke uss jazbe ko dekh woh stabdh bhi thi par saath hi unki aisi haalat dekh usse dard bhi ho raha tha.

Zameen par khoon bikhar gaya. Veer ke perr ke peeche ka maans ka hissa latakne laga. Uske honth daato tale dabe hue the. Woh dard sehen karne ka prayaas kar raha tha.

Agle hi shan, bina samay gavaaye usne apna dusra perr zameen par tikaaya aur uski sahaayta se woh apne haatho ko churraane me lag gaya.

Dekhte hi dekhte usne ek ek karke sabse bhaari pattharo ko alag kar diya. Aur neeche se sarak-sarak ke woh jaise taise baahar aa gaya.

Atyant buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha woh. Pari uske perr se nikalte khoon ko rokne me lagi hui thi. Kandhe aur perr dono hi jagaho ke blood loss par wo dhyaan de rahi thi.

[M-Master-!]

'Eric ko mein nahi le jaa paunga. Woh log usse kuch nahi karenge. Zyada se zyada jail me daalenge. Wese bhi wo behosh hai. Usse pehle infirmary le jayenge. Itna samay mere liye kaafi hoga Miss Suhana se keh ke usse baahar churraane ke liye.'

Veer ko tabhi building ki floor par se qadmo ki awaaz sunaayi padi. Aur unhe sunn uski bauhe chintan me sikud gayi.

[Yaha rukna theek nahi.]

Usne mud ke dekha to wahi raasta tha ab uske saamne jiske baare me Eric ne bataaya tha. Ye wahi raasta tha jiske agal-bagal pattharo ki deewaare thi. Parantu, woh sirf sunset ki sightseeing ke liye tha. Aage jaake raasta band tha.

Fir neeche samudra hi bas tha.

'Kuch derr hum waha chhip sakte hai. Kyuki building ki taraf jaana bewakoofi hogi.'

[Mmm!]

Ye soch woh aage badh gaya.

*huff* *huff*

Woh langda-langda ke chal raha tha. Uski saansein ukhdi-ukhdi aa rahi thi. Adhkhuli aankhein liye woh jaise-taise bas ghaseet raha tha khud ko.

Uski iss haalat ko dekh Pari jaise andar hi andar tootati jaa rahi thi. Par woh nishabd rahi.

Apne chotil kandhe par haath rakh woh haafte hue aage badhta raha.

Dheere-dheere woh raaste ke chhor par pohuch raha tha. Kaafi ujaala aa raha tha waha se. Chaand ki roshni thi uss khuli jagah par.





'Bas aa hi gaye!' Aur wo chhor par pohuch gaya.

Par waha pohuchte hi, usse apni zindagi ke sabse bade jhatko me se ek jhatka laga.

Uski aankhein felti chali gayi. Pari ka bhi wahi haal tha.

Kandhe par rakha haath uska apne aap neeche gir latak gaya. Aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kisi jung me apna sab kuch kho diya ho.

Kyuki agle hi shan, uske saamne ka manzar tha-

10 armed police officers apne hathiyaar liye. Ek seeking helicopter jo uske waha pohuchte hi hawa me udaan bhar uss par spotlight tainaat kar diya.




Andre aur Senior police officer jo helicopter me baithe usse ghoor rahe the.

[N-No-!! It cant be-!! Master-!!!]

Anjaane me woh ussi trap me aa chuka tha jo Andre aur team biccha ke baithe the. Ye Team C thi jinhe Chris ne Veer ko pakadne ka kaam saunpa tha.

Helicopter me khade Senior officer ne mic liya aur announce kar bola,

Senior Officer : Apne aap ko hamare hawale kar do. Yahi accha hoga tumhare liye.

Veer ne sarr upar kar uss Senior Officer ko helicopter me baithe dekha aur bola,

Veer : Apne aap ko hawaale kar du? Kis liye? Kisi ki madad karne ke liye? Ya kisi ki jaan bachaane ke jurm me?

Officer 1 : Ye kya bakwas kar raha hai?

Officer 2 : Pakad gaya hai na! Shayad pagal ho gaya hai!

Senior Officer ka munda wese hi thanka hua tha. Veer ka jawaab jaise usse aur gussa dila gaya.

Senior Officer : Bewakoof ladke! Tumko ghera jaa chuka hai. Apni galti maan lo aur surrender kar do. Chalaaki ki to goliyo se boon diye jaoge.

Veer : Tum logo ko koi galat fehmi hui hai. Apni agent Terashima se pucho! Ya fir Singer Natalia se. Mein unka bodyguard-

*BANG*

Veer abhi aage kuch kehta ki tabhi ek bullet uske perro ke paas aake zameen me dhass gayi.

Senior Officer : Apne saare hathiyaar feko. Aur haath upar kar khud ko hawaale karo.

[Woh maan'ne waale nahi hai Master. Just surrender!]

Veer ne apni baayi orr dekha. Ek lohe ki bench lagi hui thi baithne ke liye. Ahista-ahista woh uss orr chal diya.

Uske chalte hi dherr saari laser lights uske badan par tik gayi. Senior officer ne usse chetaavni di par Veer ko bench par baithata dekh usne apne officers ko shoot karne se rok liya.

Senior Officer : Surrender karte ho ya?

Veer : Surrender? Kis baat ke liye? Jab mene kuch kiya hi nahi toh-!?

Senior Officer : Tumhe last warning di jaa rahi hai. Tumhare khilaaf sab kuch hai hamaare paas. Surrender kardo warna-

[M-Master! Surrender kar dijiye! Warna yaha se nahi nikal payenge. Aur ye log maan'ne waale nahi hai. Kuch bohut badi galat fehmi hui hai. Crimson ne khel khela hai.]

'Surrender? Bina galti kiye? Never in my life I will surrender!'

[Maaaaastttteerrr! Samajhne ki koshish kariye!]

Veer ne punaah upar udd rahe uss helicopter me dekha. Aur tab jaake usse apne jeevan ka dusra sabse bada jhatka laga. Senior officer aur Andre ke alawa koi aur bhi tha jo maujood tha.

'It's you-!!!!!?'

Uski aankhon ki putliyaan achambhav ke maare felti chali gayi. Pari ki khud ki rooh kaanp gayi jab usne helicopter me khadi uss ladki ko dekha toh.

[N-No-!! It can't be-!!]

Aur Veer ko saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr fauran hi jhuka aur uske facial expressions chhip gaye.

Woh ladki kahi aur hi dekh rahi thi. Kuch pal baad hi waha ek hassi zorr se goonj uthi. Veer pagalo ki tarah hassne laga tha.

Officer 1 : Y-Ye kya-!?

Officer 2 : Pakde jaane ke darr se paagal ho gaya hai.

Officer 1 : Sir? Kya hum usse seedha jaake nahi pakad sakte?

Senior Officer : Nahi! Uske paas hathiyaar ho sakte hai. Kahi bomb wagarah na rakha ho. Keep your distance. Surrender karwa ke hi maanenge hum.

Veer idhar bas hassta raha. Uski aankhein uss ladki ki aankhon se takraayi. Aur ek kadvaahat Veer ke dil me fel gayi.

Woh sarr jhukaaya.

Senior Officer : Agar tumne co-operate nahi kiya. Toh mein fire ka order de dunga.

‘Pari!’

[Huh?]

'Beowulf's Blessings ka kitna samay baaki hai?'

[Sirf 5 seconds hi bache hai uske Master.]

‘Alright then! Pari! Mein jo ab karne jaa raha hu…! It’s a bad move!’

[Wh-What? Ye aap kya-!?]

Pari ne agle hi shan Veer ke dimaag me jhaanka aur ye pata karte hi ki woh kya karne jaa raha tha, uska sanshay bhayankar darr me badal gaya. Aur pehli baar aaj,

[YOU FUCKING IDIOTIC STUPID MASTERRRR!]

Woh uss par baras uthi. Veer jaanta tha Pari ki ye personality kitni shaant thi. Par aaj woh uss par garaj rahi thi. Uss par gussa ho rahi thi, uss se naraaz thi, niraash thi aur sabse mehatvpoorn-

Uski parvaah thi usse. Aaj usme bhay bhi tha aur ghabrahat bhi.

[Why don’t you fucking understand? There will be no Pari without you. I will cease to exist. Aap me saanse hai toh ye Pari hai. Aap me jaan hai toh mujh me jaan hai. Aap zinda ho toh mein hu. Samajhte kyu nahi ho? For fuck sake just surrender. Aap ko nahi kho sakti mein. Why don’t you fucking understand this small thing? YOU ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT TO ME!!!]

Aur usne keh diya. Pari se ab raha na gaya. Usne apna ek raaz saamne rakh diya. Agar Veer apni jaan gawaata hai, toh Pari khud apna astitv hamesha hamesha ke liye kho degi. Veer se hi Pari khud hai.

Veer kuch derr tak shaant raha. Pari ka itna bada raaz bataana ye saboot tha ki woh kitni zyaada bechain thi iss waqt. Magar Veer ne uska jawaab na diya. Aur apni baat ko punaah rakha,

‘I knew it. Kahi na kahi mein ye expect kar hi raha tha. Par yaad hai na jab tum pehli baar mere shareer me aayi thi? I’m sure tum kisi aur ko apna host bana sakti ho. Aise me-’

[YOU FUCKING STOP THIS BULLSHIT OKAY? Mene kaha na! Woh sirf one time use ke liye energy thi. Ab mein uss tarah space me move nahi kar sakti.]

Lekin usne Pari ki baat ko beech me hi kaat diya,

‘Meri baat suno Pari! Mere jaate hi…! Consume my energy! I hope tumhe kam se kam kuch na kuch toh mil hi jayega mere shareer se. That will be enough for you to travel in air. Right? Tum ek naya host dhoondh sakti ho. Ek naya shareer! Koi mujh jaise stupid se behtar haha!’

[STOP IT! PLEEAAASEEE! I BEG YOU! YOU ARE NOT STUPID. You are my Master. Surrender yourself now!!!]

Iss baar uski awaaz ruwaasi thi. Veer khud iss baar aashcharya me reh gaya.

‘T-Tum-!!? Tum ro rahi ho? Haha! Mujhe nahi pata tha meri Pari mere liye kabhi royegi. It’s good to know before dying.’

[P-Pleaaasseee~ Listen to me! They won't kill you. J-Just surrender.]

'No! I won't! Ye bohut bada setup tha Pari. Tum bhi realise kar chuki ho. Hai na? It's almost impossible to get out of it. I think Miss Suhana bhi meri help nahi kar payengi-!'

[N-Nooo-]

Pari ki awaaz me lad-khadahat thi.

‘I’m sorry Pari!!’

[???]

‘Mein kabhi ek accha host na bann paaya tumhare liye. Kaash hamara safar aur lamba hota. Kitni baatein jaan’na tha tumhare baare me. Aur ghar me sab log. Woh abhi bhi soch rahe honge mein business tour par hu. Kaash sabse ek baar acche se mil paata. Juhi my cutie. Uske liye ek chocolate factory ka vaada kiya tha mene apne aap se.’

Bol woh apni kalaayi me bandhe uss kaale dhaage ko dekhne laga jo uski maa ne pehnaaya tha.

‘Maa! Ye dhaaga mujhe bacha na saka. Still! I love you! It will be a great memory to die with…!’

Usse apni maa ke bol bhi yaad aaye jo usne phone ke waqt kahe the.

“Jaldi aana beta!”

‘Shayad-!!! Ab nahi aa paunga Maa!!’

[N-NO!! Ye kya keh rahe ho aap? J-Just stop! I can’t let you go away like that. Mene kaha na aapke jaate hi mein nahi rahungi. Chaahe mujhe kitni bhi energy hi kyu na mil jaaye. A-Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho mere saath? YOU UNGRATEFUL BASTARDDD! STOP IT NOW! PLEAASEEE!!]

Woh sarr jhukaye-jhukaye hi muskuraaya.

‘Pari I admit-!’

[!!??]

Uski aankho se iss baar ek aasu ki boond nikal uske gaalo se behte hue neeche giri.

‘I ADMIT…! TODAY! I HAVE LOST!’

Uske hontho par muskaan ab bhi barkaraar thi. Ye muskaan thi uss bodh ki. Uss aatm-samarpan ki. Aatm-samarpan unn saamne khade hue logo ke prati nahi. Aatm-samarpan sachhayi ke prati.

Woh jaan chuka tha ki aaj zindagi aur maut ke iss khel me woh haar chuka tha. Bhale hi derr se usse bodh hua par ho chuka tha.

Woh ek bohut hi badi saazish me phass chuka tha. Itni badi ki ab uss se baahar aana lagbhag naamumkin tha.

[N-No! You can’t die like that. M-Mein aapko kuch nahi hone dungi. Listen! I have a plan! Let’s just surrender first. Th-Then-]

‘Tumhe lagta hai mein surrender karunga?’

Uska sawaal sunn Pari maun reh gayi. Woh jaanti thi iska jawaab. Veer ke shareer me aane se pehle hi Veer ne kitni taqleefe jheli thi. Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne milke usse kitna maara tha. Uski koi galti bhi nahi thi tab. Parantu adhmare hone ke bawajood, usne apna sarr nahi jhukaaya tha. Maar khaata raha lekin jhuka nahi.

Jab woh bina system ke tab nahi jhuka, toh aaj inn namoono ke saamne kaise ghutne tek sakta tha woh? Bhale hi usne ek Raja ki tarah janm nahi liya tha. Par ek Raja, ek Baadshah ki tarah marr toh sakta tha.

Idhar Senior officer ne agle hi pal mic pe announce kar diya.

Senior officer : Since, you're not cooperating we're going to execute you-!

‘Pari!’ Veer fir muskuraya. ‘Humara waqt khatam ho raha hai. Saamne khade log meri maut ka intezaar kar rahe hai. So, let me say this one last thing to you.’

[!??]

Woh apne akhiri shabd kehne jaa raha tha. Pari hamesha usse shaant rehne kehti thi. Lekin abhi uski khud ki dhadkane kisi train ke maafiq chal rahi thi. Itna darr usse kabhi mehsoos nahi hua tha. Samay ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha woh apni sabse keemti cheez kuch hi palo me khone jaa rahi hai.

‘Pari!’

[H-Huh!!]

‘Tumne mujhe ek naya jeevan diya. Tum mera hausla bann ke mera saath nibhaati rahi. Tumne harr waqt pe meri madad ki. Shayad ye meri acchi kismat thi jo tum mujhe mili. Warna mujh jaise insaan ko toh koi dekhna pasand bhi nahi karta tha.’

[M-Master!]

‘Tumhare kaaran mein kitne pyaare logo se mila. Miss Kaera, Miss Sonia, Miss Suhana. Maa se dobaara mil paaya. Teju dii! Maasi! Shweta Maa! Bhumika Dii! Arohi, Kavya, Dada jii! Suman aur baaki sab. Karan! Nidhi ma’am! Sab se…! You gave me motivation. Unfortunately, ab ye safar yahi khatam hota hai!’

[N-Nooo!]

‘Aur ek akhiri baat-’

[??]

‘I love you Pari!’

Bas! Veer ne fir aage kuch na kaha. Lekin woh Pari ki rundhe gale se nikalti hui zorr-zorr se sisakne ki awaaz sunn paa raha tha.

Achanak hi Veer ke agal bagal ka aura badalne laga.

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Iss baar usne sarr utha ke upar dekha. Helicopter hawa me ab bhi tainaat tha aur uski spotlight Veer par hi tiki hui thi.

Tamaam guns ki laser sights se laser ke laal-laal bindu uske shareer ke alag-alag ango ke pharchatte udaane ke liye taiyaar the.

Light house samudri tat se lage hone ke kaaran, waha ka vatavaran tezz hawaao se ghira hua tha.

Veer ke baal hawao ke saath lehra rahe the aur khoon se lathpath hone ke bawajood woh adab ke saath uss lohe ki bench par baitha hua tha.

Itne logo me woh akela tha, par wahi tha ek jiska aura sabse zyada taqatwar tha. Jo tej uski aankho me tha, waha khada harr aadmi ye dekh thoda bhay me chala gaya.

Tamaam logo ke hone ke bawajood bhi abhi unhe iss ek ladke ko dekh andar se darr mehsoos ho raha tha.

Ek aankh khuli ek band, sarr se behta khoon, kandhe par lagi goli, jagah jagah choto ke khooni ghaav, bikhre ghane baal aur perr se latakta hua maans. Kuch yahi chhavi thi Veer ki abhi.

Fir bhi waha khada aadmi uske iss roop se darr raha tha. Veer kisi ghaayal sher ki tarah lag raha tha unhe.

Uski nazre harr ek aadmi ko dekhte hue guzri aur fir usne ek buland awaaz me kaha,

“EVEN IF I DIE TODAY! I WON’T DIE BY THE HANDS OF YOU LAPDOGS.”

Uski awaaz light house ke poore samudri tat par goonj gayi. Log usse dekh uska mazaak udaane lage. Woh khud ko confidence dene ke liye ye kar rahe the. Andar se woh sabhi jaante the ki unke shareer ke ruye khade hue the.

“Hahaha! Ye ladka paagal ho gaya hai.”

“Shayad isse apni sthiti ke baare me pata nahi hai. Haha!”

“Itne logo ke beech ghire hone ke baad bhi iski aqal ab bhi thikaane nahi aayi.”

Woh ek dusre se French me bolne lage.

Veer nahi jaanta tha ki Crimson yaha maujood tha bhi ya nahi. Lekin fir bhi usne bolna jaari rakha,

“CRIMSON!!!!! AGAR AAJ MEIN MARTA HU, TOH MERI LAASH KO DEKH KE SUNISHCHIT KAR LENA KI WOH MERI HI LAASH HAI…! WARNA AGAR MEIN YAHA SE ZINDA BACHA…! TOH TUMHE WO MAUT DUNGA JO SANSAAR NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHI HOGI!!”

Kehte hue achanak hi Veer bench ki back rest par apna ek haath rakhe apne wazan ko leke peeche jhuka.

Bench uske wazan ke kaaran apni pichli do taango ke bal peeche ko jhool gayi. Par iske pehle ki woh peeche girta, Veer ne apna wazan aage ko jhuka diya.

Aur iss baar bench waapas se apni position par aayi lekin ab Veer ka bhaar aage hone ki wajah se bench iss baar apni agli do taango par jhool gayi.

Iss se pehle ki Veer aage ki orr girta, usne punaah apna wazan peeche kar diya aur yu lagataar aage peeche karne ke baad, bench bhi uske bhaar ke chalte peeche jaati aur fir aage aati.

Aisa lag raha tha Veer ek rocking chair par baitha ho. Bench ke yu aage peeche dolne ke kaaran Veer ne ek motion bana liya tha.

Waha khade logo ne jab usse ye karte dekha toh hairat me reh gaye.

Ek armed police cop Veer par gun aim kiye upar helicopter me baithe senior officer ki orr dekha aur pucha,

“S-Sir? Kya hum shoot kare?”

Senior officer : Nahi! Behtar hoga hum isse zinda pakde. Agar zinda na pakad paaye, agar woh hamaare liye khatra banta hai, tabhi shoot karna hai. Let’s just see woh kya kar raha hai. Wese bhi woh yaha se kahi bhaag nahi sakta. Situation hamare haatho me hai.

Officer 1 : Okay Sir!

Sabhi Veer ki harqato ko jigyaasa se dekh rahe the. Aur bas uske surrender karne ka wait kar rahe the.

Senior officer ne mic haatho me liya aur Veer ko firse chetaavni di.

“Tumhare paas bas 30 seconds hai! Seedhe tareeqe se apne aap ko kanoon ke hawaale kar do. Warna-”

Par Veer toh jaise uski chetaavni ko ek kaan se sunn dusre se nikaal raha tha. Uska poora dhyaan uss helicopter me baithi uss ladki par tha.

Uska shareer ab bhi aage peeche jhool raha tha. 20 seconds guzar gaye.

10 seconds bachte hi officer ne mic par countdown karna shuru kar diya.

“Ten”

Veer abhi bhi bench par jhool raha tha.

“Nine”

Koi jawaab nahi!!

“Eight”

Veer ki aankhein uss ladki par hi thi.

“Seven”

Ab bhi koi harqat nahi.

“Six”

Par 6 hote hi, jaise hi iss baar uski bench aage ko apni do taango par jhooli,

“Five”

*DING*

Achanak uski aankhein crimson laal ho gayi.

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been activated.]

Neeche apne perr tikaate hi, uska haath jo bench ki back rest par tha, usne poori taaqat se usse aage kheencha aur agle hi pal,

*Wuh-psssh*

Woh bench hawa me 360° flip hone lagi. Time jaise slow motion me chala gaya. Samay achanak se dheeme ho gaya unn sab ke liye.

Bench hawa me flip ho rahi thi, aur ussi ke saath Veer ka haath usse pakadne ke liye taiyaar ho raha tha. Saath hi uske hontho par haiwaano waali ek muskaan chadhti jaa rahi thi.

Aur waha khade logo ki aankhein hairat ke maare felti jaa rahi thi.

Bench ke sahi angle par flip hote hi Veer ne agle hi shan uss poori bench ko apni hatheli khol ek haath se jhatt-se usse jakad liya aur uske dono perr zameen par sthirta se tik gaye.

*Whoosh*

Woh turant baayi orr palta.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki logo ki aankhein saamne hue drishya ko process hi nahi kar paayi.

Ab waha khade kuch logo ke dimaag ko samajh aa raha tha ki kyu ye ladka bench par aage-peeche dol raha tha. Veer yu hi nahi aisa kar raha tha. Woh jo motion bana raha tha woh tha~

Periodic motion.

Uss bench par usne hi ye motion banaaya tha. Apne perro ko zameen ke virudhh le jaake apne bhaar se bench ko jaan-boojh ke aage peeche kiya gaya tha. Newton ke second law ke chalte woh asaani se dol sakta tha agar ye rocking chair hoti.

Par woh rocking chair nahi thi. Isliye Veer ko apne bhaar ka istemaal karna pada.

Periodic motion bann’ne ke kaaran jab Veer ne usse fir ekdum se apni Beowulf ki taaqat se kheencha, toh bhaari lohe ki bench yuhi hawa me flip ho gayi. Aur uske flip hote hi Veer ne usse thaam liya.

Uss ek chote se pal me unn sabhi ki saansein atak gayi thi. Senior officer ne jaise hi ye dekha woh chillaaya,

“THIS BASTARD!!! SHOOOOOOTTTTT!!!”

Woh dahaad lagaaya aur uske garajte hi,

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*RATATATATATATA*

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

Dhada-dhad kar ke goliyaan barasna shuru ho gayi. Par tab tak Veer hawa ke jhoke ki tarah kayi feet ek jhatke me laangh chuka tha.

“THIS MOTHEFUCER!! KILLLL HIMMMM!! SHOOOOT THATTT BASTARDDD DOWNNN!!”

Helicopter hawa me muda aur uske neeche lagi gatling gun ne andha-dhundh firing shuru kar di.

Goliyo ki bauchhaar se waha ki deewaare aur chattaane ke chithade uddne lage. Veer ki gati itni tezz thi ki woh aage badhta jaa raha tha aur goliyaan uske nikalne ke baad khaali zameen se bhid rahi thi.

Officer ka countdown bhale hi beech me band ho gaya ho, lekin Veer ke Beowulf ka countdown chalu tha. Maatra 2 seconds hi baaki the uske deactivate hone ke liye. Ye uska akhiri daav tha.

Dimaag lagaate hue cops ne aim Veer ke aage kiya aur iska abhaas hote hi,

Veer ne apne haath me li hui uss bench se apne aap ko dhak liya. Bench usne dikhaave ke liye thodi uthaayi thi.

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*KLANG* *KLANG* *KLANG*

Bullets jaa ke uss bench se takraane lagi, par kuch thi jinse Veer khud ko bacha na paaya.

*Squelch*

“Arghh!”

Ek uske perr ko cheer ke andar ghus gayi.

*Squelch*

“Urghh!”

Aur dusri uski baah ko.

Fir bhi woh ruka nahi. Senior officer ko jaise hi iss baat ka abhaas hua ki Veer ka maqsad kya hai, uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

“Th-This bastard!!! K-Kill him!! KEEP SHOOTING! Bach ke bhaagne na paaye woh. BLOCK HIS PATH.”

Par tab tak derr ho chuki thi.

2 aur bullets Veer ke shareer ko lagi. Beowulf band hone waala tha, magar uske band hone se pehle hi, Veer ne uss uchaayi se ek lambi chhalaang maar di.

*DING*

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been deactivated.]

Ye sab kuch unhi 5 seconds me hua.

“NOOOOOOOOO!!!”

Senior officer apna gala phaad gusse me chillaaya.

Idhar samudri tat ke neeche khaayi thi. Sagar ki ufanti lehre uss chattaan se aake bhid rahi thi. Veer usme kood gaya.




“SEARCH HIM!! Zinda bachne ne paaye woh. He must be killed now! SEARCH EVERYTHING! KEEP SHOOTING!”

Helicopter udd ke aage badha aur Veer ke doobne waali jagah par lagataar paani me fire karne laga.

Bullets paani me ghus friction ke chalte dheemi ho rahi thi aur apni trace chorrte hue andar jaane lagi.



Veer ke shareer par ek antim bullet uske seedhe seene ko aake cheer di.

Woh neeche girta gaya. Bullets ab uss tak na pohuch paayi. Dheere dheere uski aankhein band hone lagi. It was the end.

[MAAAAAASTEEERRRR!!!]

Aankhein band hone se pehle uske mann me bas ek hi khayaal aaya,



‘Just why?? Ava!!’

Aur uski aankhein band ho gayi.

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Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*



‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Update consists of 5k words. Ab agla update tab hi aayega jab iss update par atleast 140 likes aayenge. Update 139 pe 147 likes hai. Toh itna to mein yaha expect kar hi sakta hu.
Dhanyavaad!

Jabardastttt Updateee


Mujhe ab bhi pata nhi kyo woh Ladki Ava hi lag rahi hai.

 

[Werewolf]

Disappointed , kaira को देखने के लिए और wait करना पड़ेगा।

थोड़ा इंतज़ार कर लो। पूरा अपडेट ही उसके ऊपर हैं। जल्द ही दिखाई देगी। Continuity और flow को बनाए रखने के लिए अभी यहां का दृश्य ही दिखाया गया हैं।

But i must say क्या ही शानदार arc है। Crimson जैसा antagonist बार बार नहीं आता, his attitude and swag एक हाथ कटने के बाद भी वीर को मारने का जो उसके अंदर confidence हैं, जिस जुनून के साथ वो वीर को मारना चाहता है unbelievable है। As a villane 10/10 है crimson के लिए, crimson हरामि नही होता तो शायद वीर का सबसे अच्छा दोस्त होता

Crimson को खास उसकी planning और उसका intelligence बनाता हैं।

वीर का किरदार पीछे इतनी अच्छी तरह से लिखा गया है की crimson जैसा strong opponent होने के बाद भी कभी ऐसा नहीं लगा की वीर crimson से हार जाएगा, इतना मार खाने के बाद भी उसका जो character है downplay नही होता, खैर जरूरत से ज्यादा भरोसा वीर को ले डूबा, दूसरो को बचाने के चक्कर में उसने ये भी नही सोचा की पीछे उसकी मां और बहन का इस दुनिया में वीर के आलावा कोई नही है, दुख है की वीर को ये दुख झेलना पड़ रहा लेकिन ठीक भी है i hope वीर सबक सीखेगा की जरूरत से ज्यादा अच्छा होना सेहत के लिए हानिकारक है, ज्यादा मीठा मधुमेह का कारण होता है।

ज़रूर। समुंदर में कूदने से पहले उसे ये तो एहसास हुआ ही होगा कि कभी कभी सब पे भरोसा नहीं करना चाहिए। एक चोट पहुंची हैं उसे गहरी।

सुहाना, मेरे खयाल से इस कहानी में सुहाना का किरदार जितनी अच्छी तरह से वक्त के साथ devlop हुआ है शायद ही इस कहानी में कोई दूसरा किरदार का हुआ हो।

सही कहा हैं।

इस कहानी में भले ही वीर के खूब सारे शुभचिंतक हो लेकिन हर कोई नही है जो वीर के लिए गोली खा ले,
अभी भी वो पूरी तरह ठीक नही हुई लेकिन फिर भी आई है सिर्फ इसलिए कि वीर को बचा सके, that lady deserves a special place in veer's heart.

There's already a special place for her in Veer's heart. सुहाना अगर कभी किसी मुसीबत में पड़ी, तो वीर ही सबसे आगे खड़ा होगा उसकी मुसीबतों को झेलने के लिए। परंतु, फिलहाल उसका कोई अता पता नहीं हैं।

पर सच कहूं तो सुहाना का किरदार वो dominating rude अकडू type वाला ही अच्छा लगता है, जो बात बात पर वीर को taunt देता रहता है। मुझे तो wait है सुहाना वीर के limit cross करने का, क्योंकि उसके बाद एक नई सुहाना देखने को मिलेगी

उसकी दो personalties हैं। जो अपने आप समय समय पर एक दूसरे में trigger होती जाती हैं। उसकी गुस्से वाली personality तभी trigger होती हैं जब frustration या stress लेती हैं वो। उसकी दोनो personalities जब आपस में merge होंगी तभी वो अपने पुराने वास्तिविक अवतार में लौटेगी। और वीर की उसके पास उपस्थिति वही करवा रही हैं। फिर वो gentle भी रहेगी और rude भी।

खैर सच कहूं तो भाई ava का character जितनी अच्छी तरह build हो रहा था वैसे ही उसके character में लीपा पोती हो गई, मतलब एक तो वैसे ही उसे kaira और सोनिया से कम स्टोरी time मिला था, अब तो और भी उसका character dull हो जायेगा और भी उनसे पीछे हो जायेगी।

Ava का कैरेक्टर पहले से ही तय था। जू लोगों की भी गलती हैं जो उसपे वीर की तरह तुरंत विश्वास कर लिया। अब बुरा लग रहा हैं ना? सोचो ज़रा वीर को कैसा लगा होगा। लीपा पोती जैसी चीज़ें इस कहानी में ना होती। उसका किरदार पहले से ही सब सोचा जा चुका हैं। बस पढ़ते जाओ।

बिलकुल हो सकता है जिस तरह स्वेता के character को अच्छा दिखाने की कोशिश की गई वैसे ही ava को भी जबरदस्ती अच्छा दिखाने की कोशिश की जाएगी। लेकिन जरूरी थोड़ी ना है वो पसंद आ ही जायेगी।

श्वेता तो पसंद आ रही हैं majority लोगों को। देखते हैं Ava को कितना लोग पसंद करेंगे। मुझे तो विश्वास हैं कि एक ना एक दिन सभी उसे चाहने लगेंगे।

कुछ बोलेंगे की grace martin की जान खतरे में थी इस वजह से, लेकिन क्या सच में ये betrayal को justify करेगा मतलब अगर कल को तेज या भावना को बचाने के लिए वीर को ava trap बिछा कर मारना पड़े तो क्या सचमुच ये ethically सही होगा, मुझे तो नही लगता खास कर जब आपके पास system हो

अगर वीर Ava से ज़्यादा परिचित ना हो और कोई उसकी मां को मरवाने के लिए snipers बिठा दे। तो मुझे नहीं लगता कि वीर भावना की कुर्बानी देगा।
what do you think?

हो सकता है ये बात पसंद ना और ये मेरा personal opinion है की इस arc के खत्म होने के साथ यदि ava का character भी crimson के साथ खत्म कर दिया जाए तो अच्छा होगा, वैसे भी कहानी में इतनी सारी लड़कियां है तो ava के जाने से कहानी को कोई फर्क नहीं पड़ेगा और वो कहानी में इतने कम समय के लिए आई थी/है अगर इसी arc तक रोक दे तो ठीक रहेगा बाद में भले ही एक नई character introduce कर देना उसको replace करके, कम से कम ava मरेगी तो रीडर्स के sympathy के साथ मरेगी।

ये सब तो मैं तय करता हूं। और पहले से ही सब कुछ निर्धारित हैं।

Trinity की लड़ाई की जगह kaira और सोनिया के बीच ही वीर के लिए tussle ज्यादा ठीक लगेगा क्योंकि readers used to है उनके बीच की compitition देख के, अब उसमे अगर ava बीच में घुसेगी इतना बड़ा कांड करके, तो पहले उस से अच्छा दिखाना पड़ेगा sympathy create करनी पड़ेगी और लीपा पोती होगी उसके किरदार में, और इसके बाद गारंटी नहीं है की ava सबको पसंद आ ही जायेगी।

देखते हैं और लोगों की क्या राय रहेगी तब।

आगे ava के किरदार में यही दिख सकता है की कैसे उसकी मां को बचाने के खातिर उसे ये सब करना पड़ा लेकिन फिर इसी अपडेट में देखने को भी मिला की कैसे वीर उसकी मां,बहन,रागिनी के जीने की इकलौती वजह है और सुहाना,निधि और बाकी लोगो के लिए भी irreplaceable हैं, फिर भाई ava के किए के लिए क्या excuse आएगा नही समझ आ रहा।

No excuses. Only repentance.

भावना का जो डर है की वीर को कुछ हो गया हो और ऐसा सिर्फ उसे ही इसलिए लग रहा है क्योंकि उसे मालूम था की वीर झूठ बोल कर जा रहा है और सच में यदि वीर को कुछ हो जाता है भावना के पास जीवन में खोने के लिए कुछ नही बचेगा क्योंकि बाकी का जीवन वो इसी ग्लानि में निकाल देगी की उसे वीर को रोक कर पूछ लेना चाहिए था की वो झूठ बोल कर क्यों जा रहा, उम्मीद है की जब वीर वापस भावना के पास लौटेगा तो वीर से इस बारे में जरूर सवाल जवाब किया जाएगा

ना सिर्फ भावना बल्कि तेज और अन्य लोगों के जीने का सहारा हैं वीर। सोनाली, सुमन, जूही आरोही, काव्या इन सब को वीर की आवश्यकता हैं किसी ना किसी रूप में। देखते हैं क्या होगा।

Arc एकदम सही स्पीड में है भाई ,उम्मीद है की जो भी रायता फैला है वो अगले 5–6 अपडेट में समेट लिया जाएगा,
बाकी तो अपडेट के लिए thanks and
As always waiting for next update

पढ़ते जाओ भाई। परिवारिक अपडेट्स अपनी जगह हैं। वो फैमिग्लिया arc का हिस्सा हैं। मगर कहानी मेन arcs में अलग ही लेवल पे जाती जायेगी। तब यहां पे ये हमेशा ध्यान में रखना होगा कि अपडेट्स अभी परिवार पे उतने फोकस्ड नही रहने वाले। उनको उनका समय अलग से मिलेगा।

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद इस खूबसूरत समीक्षा के लिए। यूं ही साथ बने रहिएगा।

 

[Werewolf]

Kya bhai complex kaha hai story bass aage piche ke kuch situation Mila ke likh rahe ho. Kahani complex thodi hoti hai, yeh bolna chahiye ki story abb aur mazedar ho gya lol
Haa reviews toh abb thode bade dene padenge.

Jab interconnection itna zyada ho aur readers ko parts link karne me dikkat jaaye usse hi complexity kehte hai
Reviews padhte ho? Mein toh sabke padhta hu. Toh mujhe pata hai majority me readers kis orr bhatak rahe hai.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update - 142 ~ Necessitation​

Ab tak...

Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*

‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.

Ab aage...

*Badump* *Badump*

Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.

Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,

Tej : M-Mom!?

Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?

Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.

Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.

Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!

Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.

Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?

Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.

Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.

Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?

Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.

Tej (nods) : Mmm!

Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,

Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?

Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,

Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?

Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.

Tej : Uske baad?

Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.

Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.

Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?

Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!

Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?

Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.

Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!

Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!

Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.

Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.

Tej : Gunde?

Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?

Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,

Arohi (nods) : Mmm!

Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

'Gunde...!?'

Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.

Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.

Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.

Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?

Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?

Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.

Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?

Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!

Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,

Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.

Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-

Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!

Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.

Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.

Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!

Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.

Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.

Ragini : Hello?

Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?

Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?

Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.

Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!

Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-

Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.

Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.

Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!

Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.

Ragini : Hmm!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?

***

Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.

Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.

Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.

Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-

Veer ka shav!

"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."

Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.

Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.

Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.

Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.

Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,

Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!

Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.

Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.

Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.

Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.

Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?

Andre : Chris!!!

Chris : Andre?

Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!

Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.

Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.

Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.

Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,

Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.

Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?

Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.

Andre (nods) : Hmm!

Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.

Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.

Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.

Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.

"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"

Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.

Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.

"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"

Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.

Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.

Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.

Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.

Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.

Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.

Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?

Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.

Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.

Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.



Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.

Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.

Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.

Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.

Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.



Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.

Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.

Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.

Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.

Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?

Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.

Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.



"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"

Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.

Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.

"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."

Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."

"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"

"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."

Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.

"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."

Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.

Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.

Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?

Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.




Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.

Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.

Suhana (nods) : Hmm!

Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.

Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.



"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."

Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.

Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.

Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?

Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.

Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.

Toh waha se awaaz aayi,

"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"

Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?

Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.

Kavya : H-Hello?

Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?

Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?

Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?

Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.

Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???

Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.

'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'

Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.

'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'

Ashita : Suhanaaa?

Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.

Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.

Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.

Prakash : Theek hai!

'She's hiding something.'

Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.

***

Las Vegas
Night...

Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.

Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.

Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.

Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.

Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.

Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??

Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.

Divya : Wh-What?

Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.

Divya : Kyaaaaa?

Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.

Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?

Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?

Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.

Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.




Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!

Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.

Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*

Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!

Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!

Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.

Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.

***

Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.

Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.

Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,

"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."

Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.

Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.

Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.

Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.

Saamne wahi tha!!

Crimson!!!

Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.

Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??

Ava (frowns) : He's dead!

Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.

Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!

Ava : Ngghhh!!!

*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.

Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.

Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.

Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.

Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!

Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.

Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,

8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.

Crimson : They are gone!

Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!

Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-

Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.

Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Crimson : Y-You-!!

Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?

Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!

Ava : Fuck off!

Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.

Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.

'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'

Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.

*Click*

Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.

Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.

"Mother-!!!"



Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.

"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"

"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"

"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"

Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.



"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"

*sniff*

"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"

*hic*

"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"

"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.

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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.
Dhanyavaad!

Mera andaaza sahi thaaa. Woh ladki koi aur nhi balki Ava hi thi. Ava ne jab Veer ko apne paas bulaya tha mujhe tabhi shakk hogya thaa. Ava ke paas bhi ek system hai. Crimson ke paas bhi ek system hai. Aakhir kitne system hai.

 

[white Tiger (Devil)]

Bhai agla update jaldi Dena..i wait for veer's information

 

[ishaanmalhotra]

jis hisaab se veer ko mara gya hai mujhe abhi yeh lgg raha hai baki sab logo crimson and ava or jis jis ke paas system hai veer abhi ek ghayal sher ki tra ek pair pishe kara hua hai mujhe yeh lgta hai k saare systems se power full system abb veer k paas hi hoga jisse veer ka baal bhi baka na ho baki writer to mujh se bhot agge jaante aap apni tipni jrur krre