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Superb zabardast updateUpdate - 153 ~ Heart Palpitations
Ab tak...
Kritika ko uske ghar drop karne ke baad jab Veer Nidhi ke Ghar aaya. Toh abhi woh darwaaze par hi tha jab uske mann me-
[My my~ Finally!!!]
Ek behad ho uttejit kar dene waali awaaz uske andar goonji.
'Huh!!??'
[Hmm? Such polluted air. So weak... Hmm!!! Ohhh!??? Oh my!!! Am I going to serve you? What should I call you? Master? Or.... My little sugar baby??]
'What!??'
Ab aage...
Jab Veer ne yeh awaaz suni, toh uske jaise perr ladkhada gaye. Ye kya bakchodi thi? Pari ne aaj tak iss tarah se kabhi bhi bartaav nahi kiya tha.
'Pari?'
[Hmm?]
'Tum Pari hi ho na?'
[Oh! Is there any doubt? I'm of course 200% yours and only yours, the most lovable and precious Pari.]
'Yup! It's confirmed. Tum Pari nahi ho!'
[Huh!?]
Veer ne ek thakaan bhari saans li.
'Iss baar kaun si nayi personality hai?'
[Is that what she told you? *smiles*]
'Huh? Kya matlab?'
[My other personality. Kya usne hi ye bataya tha?]
'Ye bataya tha matlab? You mean-!'
[I mean, ki alag alag personalities hai meri? Hmm?]
'Isn't that what's happening?'
[Oh! Yes! Fufu~ Yes! Indeed!]
Pari ki awaaz behad hi kamuk thi, jo Veer ki peeth me uske ruye khade kar rahi thi. Use aisa lag raha tha maano jaise Pari hontho par muskaan bikhere iss waqt use nasheeli aankhon se dekh rahi thi.
'Mein tumse baad me baat karta hu.'
[Oh sure! Sure, my little baby-]
'I'm NOT your baby! Okay?'
[Then, become one! I'll keep you with utmost care and love.]
'Fuuuuccckkkk!!! What the hell? Pehle waali Pari ko abhi se miss kar raha hu mein.'
[Ohh! Missing her already? Well, don't you worry! I'll give you so much pleasure and ecstasy of love that you'll forget her within a few days. Allow me to-]
'SHUT UP!!!'
Veer mann me hi zorr se garja. Ek lambi saans lete hue usne darwaza khola aur andar chala gaya. Par jaate jaate, uske mann me Pari ki awaaz zaroor reh gayi,
[My my...! Such a wild young man you are! I won't be hasty then. Sooner or later, you'll start calling me - 'Mommy!' Fufu~ ♡]
Veer ki aankhein bas hairaangi me fel gayi. 'Mommy'?? What the fuck was going on here?
Woh idhar andar aaya hi tha ki,
"Maaaaamuuuuuu~"
Uski pyaari sabse chaheeti nanhi si Juhi daud laga ke uske paas aake uske perro se chipak gayi.
Veer ki jaise saari thakaan aur chintaaye use dekh ke hi gaayab ho gayi.
Veer : Aa jao aa jao! Meri pyaari Juhi!!!
Juhi : Maaaamuuuu~
Veer ne use fauran hi goad me uthaya aur uske gaal par pyaar se ek pappi li. Toh wahi Juhi ne bhi wahi kiya. Apne maamu ke gaalo ko choom kar woh agle hi shan apni farmaish rakhne lagi,
Juhi : Maamu!? Mere liye chocolate nahi laaye?
Veer : Laaya hu na! Dherr saari chocolates laaya hu aapke liye Paris se.
Juhi : Paris? Paris kaha hai?
Veer : Hamare India se bohut dur!!!
Juhi : Toh chocolate kaha hai?
Veer : Oh-no! Woh toh mein laana hu bhul gaya. Aapki mummy ke saath aa gaya na, toh chocolates ghar par hi reh gayi.
Juhi : Chocolate chahiye~!
Veer : Theek hai! Toh, aap ruko! Mein leke aata hu ghar se. Okay?
Juhi : Niii!!!
Veer : Kya hua?
Juhi jab zorr se uss se chipki toh Veer samajh gaya ki woh kya kehna chaah rahi thi. Woh chaah rahi thi ki Veer kahi nahi jaaye. Use chocolate bhi chahiye thi, par apne Veer maamu ko kahi jaane bhi nahi dena chaahti thi.
Veer (smiles) : Ab ghar nahi jaunga toh chocolate kaise aayegi Juhi? Huh? Ghar toh jaana padega na?
Juhi : Mangaa lo na!! Kavya didu mere liye le aayengi. Aap ni-!!
Veer (smiles) : Tumhari Kavya didu khud Arohi didi ke saath gayi hai ghar abhi. Woh nahi la payengi. Ruko accha!
Veer ne apna phone nikala aur seedhe Balhaar ko call kar diya.
Balhaar : Hello? Haan, Boss!
Veer : Apna ek ladka mere ghar par bhejo. Mera number de dena use aur ye bhi keh dena ki mujhse baat kare.
Balhaar : K-Kya hua Boss?
Veer : Nahi nahi! Kuch nahi hua! Sab theek hai. Mujhe bas thoda kaam hai.
Balhaar : Ohh! Samjha! Abhi bhejta hu!
Veer : Hmm!
*Call ends*
Agar iss waqt Jacky yaha khade hoke ye nazara dekh leta toh pakke se apne hosh hi kho baithata. Veer yaha Mumbai ke Don ko phone kar ke uss se ye kaam karwa raha tha ki uske ghar se underworld ka ek aadmi jaake chocolates leke aaye.
Shayad hi kabhi kisi middle class family me kisi bacchi ke liye ye sab kiya gaya hoga. Par, akhir Juhi thi toh uski apni. Uske liye toh Veer kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar tha. Fir ye choti moti baatein bhala woh kaha gaur karne waala tha.
Balhaar ka ek aadmi turant hi Veer ke ghar se chocolates pick kiya aur seedha Nidhi ke apartment me aa gaya.
Veer ne jab use dekha toh use aashcharya hua,
Veer : Tum??
Saamne aur koi nahi, Jacky hi tha. Uske hontho par badi si muskaan saji hui thi.
Jaise ab se woh koi bhi mauka nahi chhodna chaahta tha chaploosi karne ka.
Jacky : Hahaha! Mein wahi tha Sir! Boss ko jab pata chala ki ek aadmi bhejna hai, toh mene kaha ki mein jaata hu na. Isi bahaane pichli harqat ke liye dobaara maafi bhi maang lunga. Hahaha!
Veer : Ohh! Well! Mujhe sirf chocolates se matlab hai.
Jacky : Ye rahi Sir! A-Aur ye rahi kuch aur chocolates aur kuch cake aur pastries, thode chips aur kuch cold drinks bhi hai.
Veer : Huh??
Juhi : Cake~
Veer : Mene toh ye sab nahi mangaya tha.
Jacky : Hahaha! Ye sab meri taraf se hai.
Veer : Nahi! Mujhe nahi lagta Juhi ko-
Juhi : M-Maamu! C-Cake~
Jacky : Hahaha! Choti bacchi ko chahiye hai Sir. Le lijiye. Mein itne pyaar se laaya hu.
Veer ne ek jhatke me unn samaano ko check kiya. Jab usne dekha ki sab kuch normal tha toh usne woh sab accept kar liya. Idhar uske ye sab lete hi Jacky ne ek raahat ki saans li.
[Such love huh~ Kya mujhe kabhi iss qadar pyaar nahi karoge? Hmm? C'mon! Say it! Say 'Mommy I love you!' Fufu~ ♡]
*Cough* *Cough*
Pari ki nasheeli awaaz sunn, Veer ko achanak hi thaska lag gaya. Control karte hue usne Jacky ko jaane kaha aur Juhi aur samaan ko leke woh andar aa gaya.
Andar jab Nidhi ne itne saara samaan dekha toh woh hairaan reh gayi.
Nidhi : Arre baap re?? Ye sab kya hai?
Veer : Ahem! Y-Ye-! Ye-
Juhi : Ye mere liye maamu laaye...!!! Hai na maamu???
Nidhi apni bacchi ki baat sunn Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise ek patni apne pati ko tab dekhti hai jab woh apni bacchi ko ek mehnga sa samaan kharidwa deta hai.
Uski bauhe jaise puch rahi thi ki ye sab laane ki kya zaroorat thi bhala?
Veer : Woh-! Sabke liye hi hai.
Nidhi : Itna saara!??
Veer : Y-Yes!
Nidhi (sighs) : Tum dono bhi-!
Woh haar maan ke andar kitchen me chali gayi. Na jaane kyun par aaj usme ek alag si urja aa chuki thi. Mann vyakul bhi tha, praffulit bhi. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha use ki ye kis tarah ki anubhuti thi. Saansein kuch tezz si thi. Magar dil atyant hi khush tha. Na jaane kyun!
Veer aur Juhi aapas me TV dekh snacks ko saltaane me lage the. Toh wahi Nidhi bina iss baat pe gaur kiye Veer ke liye kuch accha khaane ke liye banaaye jaa rahi thi. Aaj uske haath kaafi raftaar se chal rahe the.
Jab woh khaana bana ke baahar aayi toh usne dekha ki-
TV on thi. Juhi Veer ke seene ke upar peeth ke bal laiti so rahi thi, aur Veer sofe ki back rest par apna sarr tikaaye aankhein band kiya hua halki neend me jaa chuka tha.
Usne dekha ki Veer ka haath kaise Juhi ke pait par bandha hua tha, taaki neend me woh kahi gir na jaaye.
Jo kasi hui lakeere Nidhi ke maathe par saji thi, woh agle shan hi ye manzar dekh narm pad gayi aur uske hontho par ek halki muskaan fel gayi.
Kintu, agle hi pal use kuch ghante pehle ki baat bhi yaad aayi.
'I want you!'
Awaaz uske mann me goonji. Narm lakeere fir se kass uthi. Ye theek nahi tha. Veer ka woh sab kehna mazaak me chalta hai. Par jis tarah se usne kaha tha, woh kahi bhi mazaak nahi lag raha tha.
Iss baare me uss se baat karni zaroori thi. Nidhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue ye baat apne dimaag me alag kar ke rakh li. Jald hi woh Veer ko samjhaane waali thi.
Dinner ka waqt hote hi Shreya bhi office se ghar aa chuki thi.
Shreya : Arre???? Veer??
Woh aage aayi. Veer sofe se utha toh woh aake uske gale se lag gayi. Ek choti si sadharan hug hui dono me. Aur yuhi baato ka silsila shuru ho gaya.
Dekhte hi dekhte Veer ke almost sabhi exams ho gaye. Bas, ek akhiri paper baaki tha uska. Veer tab se hi Nidhi ke ghar thehra hua tha.
Aur uski gerr-maujoodi uske apne ghar me sabko mehsoos ho rahi thi. Ghar par Tej chinta me apni maa se apni shikayate rakh rahi thi,
Tej : Mom! Use ab ghar aa jaana chahiye. Woh aisa kyu hai? Hamesha ghar se dur rehta hai. Abhi toh aaya tha Paris se. Aur ab-
Bhavna (sighs) : Tumhe ek baat samajhni hogi Tej.
Tej : Kya?
Bhavna : 20 saal tak hum uske saath nahi the. Uss ghar me bhi use utne acche se rakha nahi gaya. Uska asli ghar tumhe pata hai kaun sa hai?
Tej : Ye waala?
Bhavna : Ye waala toh hai! Par saath hi- Uska dusra ghar hai uski ma'am ka ghar.
Tej : K-Kaise? I know woh unke yaha pehle raha hai par-
Bhavna : Sirf rehne se ek ghar ghar nahi ho jaata Tej. Ek vyakti ko ghar jaisa kab mehsoos hota hai? Jab use chaar deewaari me reh ke logo se pyaar mile.
Tej : ...
Bhavna : Saath saath khaana, saath me uthna baithna, aana jaana, hasi mazaak karna, baatein karna. Zaahir hai Veer ne tab Nidhi ke sang reh ke ye sab experience kiya hoga. Uska dil Nidhi ke ghar ko apna hi ghar maanta hai. Isliye, aisa socho ki woh ghar hi lauta hai apne. Aur bas kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai. Woh aata hi hoga.
Tej : M-Magar-! Agar woh mauka hi nahi dega... Agar mujhe mauka hi nahi milega uske saath reh ke pal bitaane ka. Toh kaise chalega mom? Mein chaahti hu mera aur uska rishta aur accha ho. Sabse best ho. Hum saari baatein share kare. Hamare beech koi bhi jhooth vooth na bola jaaye. I want him to-
Bhavna (smiles) : Tej!!!
Tej : Huh??
Bhavna : Beta...! Hoyega! Sab hoyega! Dhairya rakho! Hmm? Samay do thoda beta. Jaldbazi se kuch hasil nahi hoga. Balki, ulta bigdega. Samay do! Sab apne aap theek hota jayega. Veer aur tumhara rishta pehle se hi mazboot hai. Chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi.
Tej : I get it!! *sighs* I will take things slowly then.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mmm!
Tej baat samajh toh gayi thi. Lekin, fir bhi jaise uska antarmann jald se jald hi sab kuch paana chaah raha tha.
Veer ghar par ho rahi baato se anibhigya idhar raatri me Nidhi ke ghar me hall me sofe par laita hua tha. Uski baatein mann hi mann Pari se ho rahi thi.
'Oh c'mon! Mene tumse kaha hai na ki ye harqate band karo. Pehle waali Pari ki tarah behave kyu nahi kar sakti tum?'
[Uss se itna pyaar? What's wrong with me?]
'Everything! Ahinda se ye 'mommy' wagarah ki baatein nahi karna. You got that?'
[Why? I want you to be my sugar baby. Alright! Let's have a deal.]
'What deal?'
[I'm an expert in relationships. Ek baar mujhe mauka deke kyu nahi dekhte. If everything works out fine, you'll call me 'Mommy!']
'Bilkul bhi nahi! Aur kaise relationships? Meri toh koi gf bhi nahi hai.'
[Exactly! And it's high time you should make one. Or maybe even two? Or three? Hmm??]
'That's-!!'
Pari ki baat par Veer apni soch me ghum ho gaya. Waqai! Uski koi bhi gf nahi thi. Woh din bhar itni aurto aur ladkiyo se ghira rehta tha magar uske bawajood uski koi bhi girlfriend nahi thi. Badi hi ajeeb baat thi ye.
'Fine! Maan li tumhari baat!'
[Hmm? *smirks* Really?]
'Hmm! Agar tum meri help karti ho. Aur waqai meri koi girlfriend banti hai. Th-Then-'
[Then? *smiles*]
'Fuccckkk this!!!! Nahi! Mein tumhe Mommy wagarah nahi bulaane waala. In fact, I'll make you call me Master!'
[Ohh! Ohh my!! Getting wild huh? I see! Interesting! Very interesting. Ye kuch naya hai. Dekhti hu mein bhi. How you'll make me submit.]
'Don't bet on it! Just wait and watch. I'll make you submit. Soon...!'
[Oh! I forgot-!!! Kuch notifications reh gaye the. Let me display them.]
*Ding*
[You have received 2000 fame points.]
'Huh? Ye kisliye?'
[Paris me fame mila tha. Jo yaha tak pohuch gaya. It's for that my honey~ ♡]
'Ahem! I see! Aur ek baat batao. Tum itne dino tak kuch boli kyu nahi?'
[Because it was very important. I was doing something.]
'Huh? Important? Aisa kya bhala?'
[Jaanana chaahte ho mein kya zaroori kaam kar rahi thi?]
'Yes!!!'
[Then listen!]
'Hmm!'
[I was-]
'????'
[I was-]
'Bolo bhi...!'
[I was- *smiles*]
'???'
[Sleeping!!! (◡ ω ◡) ]
'...'
[ ( ꈍᴗꈍ) ]
'...'
[ (´ε` ) ]
'YOU FUCKING PIECE OF-'
Woh zorr se mann me garja. Magar, iss se pehle ki woh Pari ko suna paata, use kisi ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui.
'Huh?'
Raat ke 12:30 baj rahe the. Hall me bas ek chota night bulb jal raha tha jiski roshni me Veer harr roz soya karta tha.
Aahat paate hi usne palat ke dekha toh uske saamne Nidhi maujood thi. Khule baalo ke saath night gown me woh behad kaamuk prateet ho rahi thi.
Veer sofe par uth ke baith gaya.
Veer : Aap... yaha? Kya hua?
Nidhi bina kuch kahe bas aayi aur uske saath sofe par baith gayi.
Veer (frowns) : Sab theek toh hai na?
Nidhi (nods) : Hmm!
Jab Veer ne sunishchit kar liya ki sab theek hai toh woh punah apne andaaz me laut aaya.
Veer (smiles) : Kya meri itni yaad aa rahi thi aapko? Jo yaha tak chali aayi?
Nidhi (sighs) : Veer!!!
Magar, Nidhi gambheer thi. Veer jald hi apne ghar lautne waala tha. Yahi sahi waqt tha uss se akele me baat karne ka.
Veer : What is it?
Nidhi : Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai.
Veer (nods) : Okay! Kahiye!
Nidhi uski taraf muh ferrte hue boli,
Nidhi : Dekho Veer! Mein jaanti hu! Ye umr kaisi hoti hai. Iss age me- Ye sab hota hai. Attraction, infatuation ye sab laga rehta hai. Aur hume na-! Hume na ise sahi jagah lagana hota hai.
Veer : Eh?
Nidhi : Tumhare saath bhi hota hai. I know! Koi nayi baat nahi hai ye. Sab ke saath hota hai. Magar, ye sahi nahi hai Veer. Ye tum bhi jaante aur baaki sab bhi jo experience karte hai. Aur ise lekar hume mazaak me bhi nahi chalna chahiye. Right?
Nidhi jo jo bol rahi thi woh Veer ke sarr ke upar se jaake nikal raha tha. Ye Nidhi ma'am bhala kis baare me baat kar rahi thi?
Woh aage badh Nidhi ke ekdum qareeb aaya aur-
*sniff*
Usne uske chehre ke paas soonghne ka prayas kiya. Uski iss harqat se Nidhi ekdum se peeche ho gayi.
Nidhi (blushes) : K-Kya kar rahe ho?
Veer : Aap drunk toh nahi ho. Fir aisi behki behki baatein kyu kar rahi ho?
Nidhi (blushes) : Tum...!
Veer : Saaf saaf kahiye ma'am. Kyuki mujhe koi idea nahi hai aap kis baare me baat kar rahi hai.
Nidhi : Anjaan mat bano Veer! Tum jaante ho mein kis baare me baat kar rahi hu.
Veer : Nahi! Hargiz nahi!
Nidhi : Tum...!
Veer : ???
Nidhi : M-Mein-! Mein uss din ki baat kar rahi hu.
Veer : Kis din ki?
Nidhi : Jis din tumhare paper shuru huye the.
Veer : Hmm! Toh? Usme kya?
Nidhi : Tumne mujh se kuch kaha tha.
Veer : Kaun si baat?
Nidhi (frowns) : Tumhe kuch yaad nahi?
Veer bewakoof nahi tha. Woh ab jaan gaya tha ki Nidhi kyu bechain thi aur kis baat ko lekar chintit thi.
Veer : Yahi ki, 'I want you?'
Nidhi : Haan! Tumhe koi hosh bhi hai? Tum kab kya bol rahe ho? Mein tumhari ma'am hu Veer. Tumne zara bhi nahi socha mere baare me ye bolne se pehle?
Veer : Mein aapke baare me hi soch raha tha jab mene ye kaha.
Nidhi : H-Huh!!?
Nidhi chakit hoke use dekhi tabhi itne me Pari ki awaaz Veer ke mann me aayi,
[Do you need her or want her?]
'Hmm?'
[Give me an answer!]
'I-I need her!!'
[Hmm! *smiles* Need or want me farq hota hai. If you need her. Then, uska matlab hai ki woh tumhare survival ke liye zaroori hai. Uske bina tum reh nahi sakte. Jaise insaan khaana, paani, hawa ke bina nahi reh sakta. Ye uski need hai.]
'...'
[Lekin, I want you! Ye sirf ye darshata hai ki tumhe woh chahiye hai. Tum uske bina bhi jee sakte ho lekin woh tumhe apne manoranjan ke liye chahiye. Jaise insaano ka mehnge mehnge kapde aur gaadiya khareedna. Befaaltu ki cheezein. Samjhe?]
Veer sab samajh chuka tha. Aur ye bhi samajh gaya tha ki use Nidhi ko 'I want you' nahi 'I need you' kehna chaahiye tha.
Nidhi : Veer! Meri baat dhyaan se suno-
Veer : I need you!!!
Nidhi : Huhhh!!!!
Veer : Jo mene pehle kaha tha woh galat tha. I wanted to say - 'I need you!'
Sirf ek shabd se hi vaakya ka poora matlab badal chuka tha. Jaha pehle woh vaakya thoda thes pohuchane wala lag raha tha toh wahi ab woh aur bhi zyada romantic maalum pad raha tha.
Nidhi ke gaalo par jo sharm ki parat chadhi woh Veer andhere me theek se dekh toh nahi paaya, magar uski khamoshi ne ye zaroor bata diya tha ki vaakya ka asar kuch na kuch toh hua hi hai.
Nidhi (sighs) : Tumhe ek girlfriend bana leni chahiye. Iss umr me badi aurto ke prati attraction hota hai Veer. Bas wahi ho raha hai tumhare saath.
Veer : Ye sirf attraction nahi hai ma'am. I-
Nidhi ki saansein achanak hi itni tez ho gayi ki uska seena zoro se upar neeche hone laga. Veer kya kehne jaa raha tha? Kahi woh-!?
Veer : I love you!!!
*Badump*
Aur wahi hua. Nidhi ka dil itni zor se dhadka ki laga jaise baahar hi aa jayega. Uska apna student uss se 'I love you' keh raha tha.
Nidhi bechari ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Use thappad maare ya samjhaye? Kuch nahi soojh raha tha.
Dono ek dusre ko bas dekh rahe the jab unhe kisi aur ke aane ki aahat sunaayi di.
Nidhi ghabra uthi. Kahi Shreya toh nahi-!? Kya sochegi woh unn dono ko aise akele ek sofe me saath baitha dekh ke?
Veer bhi jaise Nidhi ke mann ki baat samajh gaya aur turant hi-
*Clasp*
"Ahn~"
Usne Nidhi ko sofe pe giraya aur uske upar lait ke chaadar usne apne upar se odh li.
Shreya washroom jaane ke liye uthi thi. Woh washroom ki taraf chal di. Aur idhar aaj pehli baar -
Veer apni Nidhi ma'am ka jism mehsoos kar raha tha. Woh gadraya badan uske neeche machhli ki tarah machal raha tha.
Kya khoob tarasha gaya tha iss jism ko. Veer ko harr woh golaayi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Nidhi ke uroz uske seene me dhass rahe the. Uske jism ki khusboo jaise use deewana bana rahi thi.
Veer ne apna chehra uske gale ki orr le jaate hue kaha,
Veer : I really need you ma'am!
Nidhi : V-Veer!!! Chorro!! Chorro mujhe jaane do! Tum paagal ho gaye ho kya?
Aur usne Nidhi ki gori si gardan ko choom liya,
*Puch*
"Ahnn!!!"
Bechari woh jaise tadap ke reh gayi. Poori hairaan aur ghabraayi hui. Uska badan jhatke maar raha tha. Aur Veer, nirantar uski gardan ko choomne aur chaatne me laga tha.
"H-Huh!!! Nngh~ V-Veer!!!!"
Garam badan aise fafkaar maar raha tha jaise cooker ki seeti baar baar upar uthne ka prayaas kar rahi ho.
Veer ka haath upar uth ke achanak hi jab uske than par aaya. Abhi ek than haath me aaya hi tha ki-
*Chataaaaaaakkkkk*
Nidhi ne ek zordaar chaata use raseed ke maar diya. Woh ye karna nahi chaahti thi. Magar ye zaroori tha. Jitna dard Veer ko ho raha tha iss waqt gaal pe utna hi dard Nidhi ko bhi apne dil me use maar ke ho raha tha.
Kyu? Woh ye hargiz nahi chaahti thi. Lekin, Veer ne uska saamne aur koi upaay hi nahi chorra tha.
Veer ne use dekha. Nidhi bechain ho uthi. Magar, thappad khaane ke baad bhi Veer ne kuch na kaha use. Uska haath apne haatho me liya aur-
*Puch~*
Veer ne usi haath ko choom liya jis se Nidhi ne use maara tha. Aur Nidhi haar gayi. Uski aankhon se aansu nikalne lage. Veer ki iss harqat ne jaise use poori tarah ehsaas karwa diya ki usne thappad maar ke kitna galat kiya.
Yahi mauka tha. Veer ko zorr se dhakka deke woh uske neeche se uthi aur seedha apne room ki orr bhaag chali. Bistar par aate hi, Juhi ke bagal se lait usne apne sarr se chaadar odh li.
*Badump* *Badump*
Dil ki dhadkane itni zorr se dhadak rahi thi ki Nidhi ko khud woh sunayi pad rahi thi. Ye sab kya ho gaya? Ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. Woh inhi vichaaro me leen ho gayi.
Jab yaha-
*Click*
Darwaza khula aur washroom se Shreya baahar aayi.
Veer chup chaap apne sofe par lete sab kuch jo abhi hua uske baare me soch raha tha jab Shreya ka saaya uske muh ke upar pada.
Veer : ???
Shreya : Veer?
Veer : Hmm?
Shreya : Jaag rahe ho?
Veer : Hmm!
Woh ek baar punah uth ke baith gaya. Shreya ahista se uske bagal se aake baithi.
Veer khud bhi Shreya se baat karna chaahta tha. Kayi dino se woh observe kar raha tha ki jaise Shreya kuch chhipa rahi thi.
Veer : Mujhe bhi aapse baat karni thi.
Shreya : M-Mujhse?
Veer : Hmm!
Shreya : Oh! Kaho na!
Veer : Kayi dino se dekh raha hu. Aap kuch pareshan si lag rahi ho. Aap kuch chhipa rahi ho hum sab se. Hai na?
Shreya ne jab ye baat suni toh woh hairaangi me Veer ko dekhi.
Shreya : T-Tumhe kaise-!?
Veer : Mein dekh ke samajh jaata hu ki baat kya hai. Ab bataiye! Kya hua hai?
Shreya jo na jaane kab se kisi se apni baat saajha karne ke liye betaab thi use aaj Veer ke roop me jaise woh vyakti mil hi gaya. Aur ye khushi milte hi uski aankhon se aasuo ka baandh toot pada. Jhar jhar kar uske gaalo se aasu behne lage.
Shreya : Veeeeeeeerrrr!!
Woh aage badh ke zorr se uske gale se lag gayi aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi.
Veer : Hey! Hey! Kya hua hai?
Shreya use kass ke bheenche hue thi. Kuch derr yuhi Veer se lage rehne ke baad woh uss se thoda peeche hui aur bolna shuru ki,
Shreya : Veer! Ab kaise kahu tumse? Meri samajh nahi aa raha hai.
Veer (frowns) : Kya kisi ne kuch-
Shreya : Nahi! Kisi teesre ki koi baat hi nahi hai.
Veer : Toh?
Shreya : Meri job tumne lagwayi thi. Jiske liye mein tumhari ehsaan-mand hu.
Veer : C'mon! Aap usko ehsaan ke roop me dekh rahi ho? We are friends. Aren't we? Toh isme ehsaan kaisa?
Shreya : Fir bhi-!
Veer : Nope! Agar aapne ise firse ehsaan ka naam diya. Toh mein bhi aapki kisi bhi madad ko ehsaan ke roop me hi lunga.
Shreya : N-Noo! Please!
Veer (smiles) : Toh fir ab se Aisa mat boliyega. Okay?
Shreya : You-!! You are so kind Veer!!!
Veer : Ab baat bataiye!
Shreya (sighs) : Yes! Baat darasal aisi koi badi nahi hai. It's just-
Veer : Hmm?
Shreya : Mein...! Ho sakta hai ye tumhe hurt kare lekin ye sach hai. Veer! I- I don't like my job!!!
Shreya chup hoke Veer ke reaction ka wait karne lagi. Kya Veer ko bura laga? Ek toh usne hi mehnat se dhoondh ke uski job lagwayi thi. Aur ab uske hi muh pe ye kehna ki job bekaar hai. Shreya vichlit ho uthi.
Magar, agle hi shan-
*Pffttt*
Veer : Hahahahahaha!
Veer hass pada. Aur bechari Shreya confuse ho gayi.
Shreya : ???
Veer : Bas itni si baat? Sirf iske liye aap itne dino se mujhse baat karne me hich-kicha rahi thi?
Shreya : *nods*
Veer : Oh god!! Aap bhi na!? Arre mujhe pehle hi bata diya hota. Kya baat hai? Job me kya dikkat hai?
Shreya : Job buri nahi hai Veer. It's just- Woh mere liye nahi hai. Mein shuru se hi YouTube ki duniya me jaana chaahti thi. Magar, jaa nahi paayi. Mujhe paiso ki zaroorat thi. Dii ke liye. Isliye tab desperate thi. Aur ye job accept kar li mene.
Veer : Hmm!
Shreya : Lekin, ab jaise jaise din guzarte hai. Lagta hai ki mujhe yaha nahi hona chahiye tha. Magar, mein iss se baahar bhi nahi nikal sakti. Kyuki, di ki madad nahi ho payegi fir. Fir kya kamaungi aur kya ghar kharch par laga paungi.
Jab Shreya ne YouTube ka zikr kiya, toh Veer ko kuch yaad aaya.
'Pari!!! Path 1 ko firse dikhana zara.'
Uske itna kehte hi Path 1 firse uske saamne tha.
Usne Path me jaise hi neeche dekha. Uska anumaan ekdum sahi tha. Shreya aur Aabha dono ka naam tha uss Path me. Yaha tak ki ab Louis ka naam bhi nazar aane laga tha. Kyuki Veer uss se mil jo chuka tha France me.
YouTube brand?? Iska matlab-!??
Veer ka dimaag itni tezz chala ki use fauran hi sab kuch samajh aa gaya. Profit Path kitna kamaal ka tha, iska andaza lag gaya tha use. Iss path ne kitne pehle hi sab kuch bata diya tha.
Veer : Mere paas aapke liye ek behtar idea hai.
Shreya : Hmm? Kya?
Veer uski orr aage badha aur uske kaano ki taraf aake dheere dheere usne bolna shuru kiya. Shreya ke chehre par kahi khushi jhalak rahi thi toh kahi chinta.
Jab baat samaapt hui toh woh hadbada ke uth khadi hui aur uss se dur jaake deewar ke saamne jaa pohuchi. Chinta me woh apne haatho ki ungliyo ko tatoli jaa rahi thi.
Shreya : M-Magar- Kya ye sahi hoga?
Veer (smiles) : Aap chinta mat kariye! Mein hu na!
Shreya : L-Lekin! N-Nahi! Mein iss tarah yaha sab ko aise chorr ke nahi jaa sakti. Nahi Veer! Ye sahi nahi! Khaas kar dii ko. Juhi! Woh dono mere bagerr kaise rahengi? Unhe meri madad ki zaroorat padegi.
Veer : Aapke yaha aane se pehle bhi toh Nidhi ma'am sab akele hi manage karti thi na?
Shreya : P-Par! Pehle unke saath sirf Juhi thi. Ab unke saath Dhruv bhi hai. Woh chota hai bohut. Akele do do baccho ko woh kaise-!?
Veer : Unke liye agar mein ek trustworthy maid lagwa du toh?
Shreya : Huh!!!?
Veer (smiles) : Toh bataiye? Kya jawaab hai aapka!?
Shreya : I-! Nahi! Mein ye kaise? Ye toh mera swarth hua.
Veer : Ye kyu nahi sochti ki baad me aap apni di ke liye aur bhi behtar kar paogi.
Shreya : That's-!
Veer kuch derr tak use dekhta raha aur fir uthate hue bola,
Veer : My condition is still valid. I hereby declare that I will sponsor you!!!
Uske kehte hi Shreya ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi. Veer ke plan ke baare me sunn ke hi woh betaab aur utsuk thi.
Aur plan tha ki~
Veer use sponsor karne jaa raha tha. Shreya YouTube ki duniya me jaana chaahti thi toh Veer use wahi de raha tha. Saath hi Aabha ko bhi usne shaamil kar diya tha usme. Path 1 me dono ke naam saath me the.
Aur Aabha ka sapna kya tha?
Duniya ghoomna! Traveling uska shauk tha. Kadi ko kadi se milaane me Veer ko samay nahi laga. Woh jaanta tha use kya karna tha.
Travel Vlogs!!!
Ek teer se teen nishaane!
Pehla toh Shreya ko woh sponsor karne jaa raha tha. Jo bhi equipments Shreya ko lagne the. Camera se leke traveling bags tak. Unn sab ka kharcha Veer uthaane waala tha. Fir chaahe woh airplanes ki tickets ho ya fir unke kapde latte. Woh sab kuch karne waala tha.
Dusra ye ki Aabha ka sapna poora hone jaa raha tha. Aabha uski slave thi, aur uski khawaisho ko poora karna ye Veer ki hi zimmedari thi. Aur teesra ye ki-
Jaise hi dono YouTube ki duniya me famous hoyengi. Woh dono hi uske liye tagdi asset banane waali thi.
Veer : Itna sochne ki zaroorat nahi. Balki, Nidhi ma'am khud yahi chaahengi ki aap apni zindagi apne way me jiyo. Aur mein toh hu hi yaha ma'am ki madad ke liye.
Shreya ki iss se pehle kabhi kisi ne itni madad nahi ki thi. Uske saamne khade iss bande ne kya kuch nahi kiya tha uske liye. Uski dii ko uss haramzaade Rajat ke changul se bachaya. Divorce ke 50 lakh diye usne jiska bhaar abhi tak unke upar tika hua tha. Uski khud ki naukri lagwayi aur ab ye-
Chaah ke bhi Shreya apni dhadkano ko shaant nahi karwa paa rahi thi.
Veer (smiles) : Do you accept now?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas roti rahi. Aur turant hi aage badh uske gale se lipat gayi,
Shreya : K-Kaise kahu ab aur kuch *sniff* Bolo? Tum itne acche kyu ho? *sniff* Tumse jab pehli baar mili thi toh lagta tha tum awara gardi karne waale ek aur aam ladke hoge. Magar- *sniff* I was wrong! *sniff* Thank you! Thank you so much Veer!!! I-
Veer (sighs) : There! There! Calm down now! Chinta ki zaroorat nahi. Aapki life hai. Apne way me hi jiye ise. Hum sab hai yaha.
Shreya ki pakad uski gardan par kass ke mazboot hui. Woh apne perro ki ungliyo ke bal upar uthi aur-
*Puch*
Veer ke gaal par usne apne gulaabi honth rakh diye.
'???'
[Ohh! My!! Hold her waist! Right now!]
Pari ki awaaz par Veer ke haath apne aap uski patli kamar ke ird gird bandh gaye. Aur jaise hi Shreya ko ye ehsaas hua, uska josh aur bhi badh gaya.
Veer ke haatho ko apne haath se chheete hue woh ungliyo ke bal khade hoke aur upar ko hui aur uske gaalo par apni chummiya barsaane lagi.
Idhar Pari andar hi andar muskaan liye baithi thi. Jaise woh jaanti thi ki uske nirdesh ka asar kabhi galat nahi ho sakta.
Magar-
Koi tha jo andar ke kamre se ye sab kuch hote dekh raha tha. Nidhi ki nazre hall me night bulb ke neeche do jismo ko aapas me lipte ghoor rahi thi.
Dard aur peeda! Achanak hi uske dil me uthi. Aisa laga jaise kisi ne khanjar uske dil me ghused diya ho. Ye dard! Itna khatarnak tha ki uss se ek pal bhi dekha nahi gaya.
Woh apni chaathi par haath rakh waha se mudi aur apne bistar par lait gayi. Magar, uski aankhon se ye aasu kyu nirantar beh rahe the? Aasuo ko woh pochti jaa rahi thi. Lekin, ye rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Ye seene me kaisa ajeeb sa dard tha?
Use raat bhar neend nahi aayi.
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Samay guzra. Veer ke paper samaapt ho chuke the. Woh ghar bhi laut aaya tha. Kintu, Nidhi ke ghar me antim kuch dino me usne Nidhi ke bartaav me kuch ajeeb sa dekha tha.
Woh rookha vyavhaar kar rahi thi use. Theek se baat nahi kar rahi thi, na hi kuch bolti thi aur na hi zyada nazre milaati thi. Veer ne waha se wapas aana hi theek samjha.
Shayad ye sab uske zabardasti karne ke kaaran hi tha. Apne upar ilzaam lete hue usne iss baat ko apne dimaag me filhaal peeche daal diya.
Toh wahi, Veer ke food truck me Sonali apni kaam lagan se kar rahi thi.
*Thud*
Bhumika ki car uske food truck ke saamne aake ruki aur woh car se baahar nikli. Uske saath hi Arohi bhi thi aur ek ladka bhi. Umr me Veer jitna prateet ho raha tha.
Sonali ne jab ye dekha toh woh truck ke baahar nikal ke aayi.
Sonali : Hmm?
Bhumika : Sonali! Ye hai Vibhor!
Sonali : Ohh!
Bhumika : Food truck ke liye Vibhor ne logo bana diya hai.
Sonali : Par woh toh bana hai na pehle se?
Bhumika : Hume isme ye bhi likhwana hai ki ye 'owned by Hotel Prestige' hai. Tabhi toh advertise ho payega.
Arohi : Hmm!
Sonali : Jaisa aapko theek lage.
Bhumika design ko leke Vibhor se baatein kar rahi thi. Sonali andar apni saathi chef Prachi ke sang khaana banaane me lagi thi.
Aur Arohi baahar khadi food truck ko dekh rahi thi jab uske kandhe par kisi ne-
*Tap* *Tap*
Thap-thapaya!
'Umm?'
Woh peeche mudi toh uski nazro ke saamne wahi tha jise woh abhi yaad kar rahi thi.
Veer!!!
Suraj ki roshni jab hati toh use Veer ka chehra nazar aaya. Jiske chehre par muskaan thi.
*Badump*
Arohi ke gaal halke se surkh laal huye aur apne baalo ko kaano ke peeche kar woh uss se ek qadam peeche ho gayi.
Arohi : Veer!!!
Veer : Kya chal raha hai yaha?
Arohi : Logo ke liye, Bhumika di kisi ko laayi hai.
Veer : Oh? Then... shall we?
Arohi (blushes) : Y-Yes!
Veer ko pata chala ki Vibhor ek logo designer hi tha. Woh College me tha lekin uski logo designing skills kamaal ki thi.
Jab Veer ne alag alag logos dekhe toh usne ek final kar diya.
Veer : Ye badhiya hai. Hai na?
Arohi (nods) : Mmm-Hmm!
Logo bada hi kamaal ka tha. Neeche likha hua tha owned by Hotel Prestige.
Chef on Wheels ko uska ek naya owner mil chuka tha. Na sirf ab ye logo ke beech aur prachilit hone waala tha balki, saath hi saath Bhumika ki hotel bhi advertise hone jaa rahi thi.
Hotel Prestige!!
Apne aap me sheher ki jaani maani hotels me se ek thi. Shweta ne badi mehnat kar ke iss buliding ko sheher me pramukh banaya tha.
Kintu, samasya kabhi na aaye aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Jaha abhi sab kuch accha chal ra
ha tha ki itne me hi Bhumika ko ek call aaya. Usne call receive kar jab baat suni toh uski aankhein hairat me fel gayi.
Phone cut karte hi woh Veer ko dekhi,
Bhumika : Veer!! Ek problem ho gayi hai.
Magar woh akeli nahi thi. Truck se Prachi daudte hue aayi aur jaldbazi me boli,
Prachi : Ek nahi-! Do problem hai!!
Veer : Huh!!???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 6k words. Mega update! Lekin mene upar likha nahi hai. I wasn't going to make it this long par late hone ke chalte, mene ise aur acche se lamba likha. Hope pasand aayega. Agle update se hum business arc me pace pakad lenge. Toh ekdum se ride ab tez hone waali hai. Abhi first gear pe the hum. Ab second lag jayega. Baaki, Likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi chalta hai. 150.
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nice1
Awesome again.
Pata ni kyu But I like this personality of pari more Because she is funny and sounds sexy.
Pari ki new personality kafi erotic hai.
Let's see aage jakar kya kya hota hai Pari ke sath...
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Juhi ke sath veer ka connection bahut achha hai,
Uske saath veer ko dekhna esa lagta hai jaisa wo khud bhi vachpan me ho... Juhi ko badiya se plot kiya gaya hai...
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Nidhi man aur Dil ke beech fasi Hui hai...
Kabhi man hawi ho jata hai to kabhi dil,
Veer aur Nidhi ke beech jo abhi hua wo pahli bar to nahi,
Yani fir se dono kareeb aayenge, lekin kab???
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Shreya ke liye path ke through uske dream project par Kam karna, veer ne thik kiya... Ab uske sath duniya ghumne ko milegi aabha ko bhi.. ho na ho inke duniya ghumne ke sath musibat bhi aayengi aur unhi musibaton se nibatne ke liye veer ke pass new mission bhi honge...
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Tej ka vyavahar as usual jaisa hona chahiye wesa hi hai.. bhavna ne bhi use wahi samjhaya jo ek maa ko samjhana chahiye... Pyar aur rishte jabardasti nahi bnaye jaate... Uske liye dono paksho ka sath hona jaruri.
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Ant me Bhumika aur Prachi kya samasya lekar aayi hain... Ye next update me janne ko milega...
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Amazing update bro
So finally real buisness arc jb buisness me real difficulties and risk aaege it will be very interesting to see ki how veer takes them on
Awesome Jabardast Update![]()
Dingpari ki personality somthing like divya flirty.
sabse strong character Nidhi ma'am superb convo great work waiting for more such incidents in business Arc
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Mind blowing update
Excellent update![]()
Awesome updates bhai
Superb
Update bhale hi thora late aaye par top class ki hoti hai. Awesome warewolf bhai
Nice update
Excellent update
Super awesome update Werewolf bhai
Nice update
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Super bro
Nice update bro
Fantastic update bhai ji
Jabardast update bhai![]()
Nice update.
Nidhi ma'am ke saath nazdeekiya badhi, pehli baar Veer unke physically itne close aaya, lekin usase dugni speed se dooriyan badh bhi gayi. What bad timing with Shreya. Ab isko dur kerne me kafi mehnat lagegi.
Pari ki yeh personality interesting hai, ek taraf love guru ka role nibha rahi hai, wahin dusri taraf kaamuk bhi, to kabhi mummy ka role!!! hahaha... Aur weh neend maar rahi thi...
Food truck ka logo badhiya hai... lekin ab business rivally shuru ho gayi.
Tej is impatient... Bhavna ne use bade acche dang se samjhaya.
Bhai update to us time hin dekha but abhi office se ake padha bhut acha update hai but nidhi mam wala seen bhut fast nikal gya Bhai or ab to misunderstanding bhi ho gyi hai dono ko unko lgta hai ki veer or unki bahan ke bich kuch hai or veer ko lgta hai mam uski wajah se naraz hai
Ab to new tension bhi a gya pta nhi ye problem ka solution kya or problem hai
Thoda late tha but koi bat nhi bhai ye to chalta hai next update is weekend main dene ka try kijiye bhai
Awesome update
Awosome wah bhai
Pari ka nya look nya andaz intresting
जिस लड़के ने भारत सहित युरोप और अमेरिका मे अपनी बहादुरी के झंडे गाड़ दिए वो लड़कियों के मामले मे , प्रेम के मामले मे , उनकी इमोशंस समझने के मामले मे बिल्कुल ही नाकारा है। यह शुरुआत से देख रहा हूं।
लड़की की दिल की बात को समझे वगैर अचानक से उसे झपप्टे मार कर सोफे पर गिरा देना , उसके बदन पर चढ़ जाना , उसके गर्दन को चुमने - चाटने लगना , यह सब क्या दर्शाता है ?
इस मामले मे वीर और परी दोनो ही नौसिखिए लग रहे है। यदि परी को पता होता तो अवश्य ही वीर को इस बेवकूफी करने से रोकती।
वीर ने अबतक सिर्फ उन्ही के साथ सेक्सुअल सम्बन्ध बनाया है जो उसके हिसाब से उसके मीना बाजार के औरत थी । एक बार कुछ हटकर हुआ था तो वो श्रेया के बाॅस के साथ था , लेकिन वो भी कुछ-कुछ बी डी एस एम टाइप। लेकिन यह भी परी के वगैर नही हुआ होगा।
वीर भाई , औरत असल मे ठहराव से , इत्मीनान से काबू मे आती है। अपने उतावले व्यवहार से आप उससे हामी भरवा भी लेंगे तो भी वो हामी दिली ख्वाहिश की नही , मुलाहजे की होगी।
ऐसी हामी से आपको कुछ हासिल नही होने वाला , सिवाय इसके कि आप अपना उबाल ठण्डा कर लेंगे।
जो होना है वो आपकी हड़बड़ी के बिना होगा तो ' सहज पके सो मीठा होए ' जैसा होगा।
पेड़ पर सहज पके फल की अपनी ही लज्जत होती है। आप उसे जल्दी तोड़ लेंगे तो उसे कच्चा , खट्टा , बदमजा पाएंगे। जबरन पकाएंगे तो भी सहज पके जैसी लज्जत नही पाएंगे।
निधि मैम के साथ वीर का यह रवैया उसकी नासमझी थी।
कम से कम हमारे समय मे तो ऐसा नही होता था। शायद आजकल के लड़के इन्तजार और सब्र नही करना चाहते और इसलिए चट मंगनी पट ब्याह वाली थ्योरी अपनाकर ऐसी हरकत कर बैठते है।
स्वाति जी का रिव्यू सच मे कमाल का था। खासकर श्रेया और सोनाली को लेकर । यू ट्यूब मामले और फाॅरेन ट्रीप मे उनके ऊपर विपतियां आ सकती है।
लेकिन आखिर वो करेंगी क्या ? क्या वो अपने रील्स बनाकर यू ट्यूब पर पोस्ट करेंगी या फिर कुछ एक्सपीरियंस गेन कर नए टाॅपिक पर जनरल नॉलेज की चीजें शेयर करेंगी ? कुछ ऐसा जो कुछ हटकर हो , कुछ अलग हो , कुछ नया हो !
अपडेट हमेशा की तरह ' वाह वाह ' था।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग वोल्फी भाई।
Nice update
Awesome update as always. Dekhte hai abhi kya problem aayi hai
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
Pari ki yeah wala version Kafi romantic hai bada maze anewala hai
Fantastic fabulous mazeddar update
Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro
Lovely update. Loved the interplay if emotions between Nidhi and Veer as also between Shreya n Veer. The only pure love is between Juhi n Veer. Clear..pure.. uncomplicated. Nidhi seems in love with Veer but hard for her to accept it as against her principles. Shreya aur Veer to bas us moment mein beh gaye bhale ek under current to tha pahle se. Veer is clearly at sea dealing with women ki way of thinking..usko sirf sexual attraction ka gyan hai..ya family love.Pari ka Naya roop is intriguing but interesting. Ab wonder how things pan out between Veer n Nidhi. Ajeeb rishta hai..na wo accept karti hai nahi jhutla sakti.I hope Taj.n Arohi ka.lagao.Veer se badhe..aur.convert ho jaye sexually..
All in all..a very elaborate storyline is developing..Hope for lots of action..bistar par bhi..
Ye kya fuck ho gya??? Nidhi ne kuch aur hi soch liya....
Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
fantastic update bro ab thoda romance bhi daldo bro plzz
Nic update
Super update bro,
To ab system hogi Veer ki Love Guru.
HAmeshA ki trh Cha gye guru ....
BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDAST EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTICLOVELY
MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Mst update bro
Nice bhai update jldi dy diya kro. Thank you
Nice update
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आज तो पूरी भावनाओ से खेला है.. निधि की अपनी सीमा साथ ही एक अजीब सा दर्द जो जीवन में मिला अब प्यार स्वीकारना आसान नहीं है.. वीर तो अभी maturity की ओर बढ़ रहा है.. बिजनेस प्लान मे श्रेया की एंट्री हो गई है...
तेज़ का अपना ही एक संसार है जिसे वो पा कर ही रहेगी... भावना ने वैसे उसे थोड़ा ग्यान तो दिया है परंतु आसां नहीं है जिंदगी
देखते हैं क्या उल्टा-पुल्टा हुआ है... अगले अंक में..
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Bahut badhIya update hai Bhai
Waiting for next update
Well well well...finally I'm back with the review after a long time.. But like krne me koi kanzoosi ni ki tumhare bhai ne.. Ab baat krte h update ki.. So no need to mention k update kaisa hoga jb writer hi umdaa ho to story toh dhaakad honi hi h praa
...baaki ye pari ka avatar 2.0 dekhne me bda mza aa ra h...although missing that old cute pari
.. But ye wala version b badia h.. Jaha wo pari bdi calm or shaleen n cuteness ka kind of mixture thi.. Whi ye wali pari kaafi bold or bindaas andaz me apni baat rakhne wali h
.. Ab dekhna ye hoga ki veer kitni jaldi ise adapt krta h.. Starting me to kaafi chidhh sa gya tha uski jolly nature se.. Btw mza bhot aya, the way she called him liitle baby n then she said to veer that he should call her mommy
ohh god veer to pgla gya hoga.. Ab dekhte h k kitni banti h in dono ki...n one more thing kya veer ke alpha male wala instinct thoda bhot hamesha hi rhti h.. I mean if he really loves nidhi to usse har cheez pyar se krni chahiye or Jo harkat usne nidhi ke sath ki wo Aisa dikhata h jaise bnde ne first time koi ladki pkdi ho to jaldbazi kr gya.. At that time mujhe bilkul shi ni lga.. Baaki sb ke sath ek bar chlne wala h jinke sath b wo physical relationship me h but with nidhi it's not fair at all... Baaki you know better k kya likhna h it was just my feeling but if you find it right then plzz ise thoda improve krna... Or Baaki hum sare readers to hai hi ju ke sath.. Lge rho munna bhai to entertain us.. Lots of love n waiting for next update
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Great update
Beautiful update bhai
Nice update
Waiting for the next update
soniya suhana aur kaera ka bhi part dalne wale the bhai aap is update mai par unke related koi discussion hi nahi hua
fabulous Update Werewolf bro
Superb update bhai
Romanchak aur shandar update bhai
Congratulations for completing 3200 pages![]()
Super fantastic mind-blowing update
Nice update
maza aaya
Fantastic update![]()
Fantastic update
Jabardastt Updatee
Pari ka yeh character sach mein dilchasp aur mazedaar hai saath hi thoda naughty bhi lag raha hai.
Mujhe aisa kyo lag raha hai yeh character hi ab Veer ke life mein incest relation ki starting karwayega.
Idher Shreya ab Youtuber banna chahti hai jisme Veer uski madad karega profit path ke jariye. Jisme woh Aabha ko bhi join karwana chahta hai. Ab dekhna yeh hai yeh chiz kitna successful hota hai.
Idher Veer aur Nidhi ki chemistry abhi bhi uljhi hui lag rahi hai umeed hai yeh chiz jaldi hi solve hogi shayad iss Chinatown arc mein hojaaye.
Nice and fantastic update
Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Ajay ko achcha sabka mil gaya saath m jack ko bhi
Nidhi k dil Veer k liye pyar tha lekin veer or Shreya ki harkat n bahot bade zakhmi diye
Ab kon se miseebat aan padi bhala Kiske gaand m keede kaat rehe
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Ek ni do do problem lol...... Aur sabse bdi bat brother jab bhi rohit nidhi ke close hota hai uske kuch time bad man mutaav ho jata hai lol bhai....waise kavya kaisi hai![]()
Super update
Veer lol rohit who rohit sayad inka koi imaginary character hai
Veer is laughing in corner
Super awesome update luvd it
Bhai 3200 page ho gaye, Nidhi ki dilwa do ab to Veer ko, kab se wait kar raha hun nidhi aur veer ke sex ka
Nayi Pari ne jo kaha sahi kaha "I want you" aur "I need you" mei bohot fark hai jo hume dikh gya Nidhi ke gaalo par.
Nidhi Veer ke pyaar ko attraction samajh rahi hai use ye pta toh hai ki ye sirf attraction nhi hai usse boht zyada hai magar vo manna nhi chahti, iski wajah hai uske past experience pyaar toh usne rajat ko bhi kabhi na kabhi thoda boht kiya hoga uske sath jo hua ab vo pyaar nahi krna chah rahi hai. Pyaar toh vo bhi krti hai Veer se nahi toh thappad marne ke baad regret nahi hota usko.
Ab agar uske mann mei pyaar hai toh usko jalan bhi hogi aur uska Veer ko Shreya ke sath dekh kar dil mei dard hona ye darshata bhi hai, ab ya tou vo Veer ko pana chahegi khud pehel krke ya phir se pehle ki tarah muh mod legi.
Awesome story waiting for next update
Waah bhai kya hi update tha yrrr...
lekin ye veer ki bhi ajeeb hi qismat hai jab bhi Nidhi ka kareeb jaane ki try krta hai huch na kuch arguments ho jaate hain or aisi situation create ho jaati hai k Veer us se door chala jaata hai ....
baaki woh scene kaafi maze ka tha jab usne Balhaar ko phone kr k apne ghr se chocolates mangwaye the or laaya kon tha, Jacky or saath m chaaploosi k liye cakeetc bhi le aaya
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ye Shreya ka bhi shi set kiya hai Veer ne, Profit Path k bataye mutaabik usne usse or Abha ko YouTube pr lagaane k faisla kiya or Shreya to chaahti hi ye thi k woh YouTube pr kaam kare....
Shreya Veer ko kisi had tak like krne lagi hai (you in love sense)...
but Veer ka kuch uske liye clear nhi show huwa ab tak..
ooper se Nidhi ne Shreya ko veer k gaal choomte dekh liya tha jo usko bura bhi laga...
baaki Veer or Pari ki convo bhi mazedaar thi..
relationship expert Pari..
matlab k ab Veer ko apni love life or relationship ko manage krne or handle krne m madad mile gi or maybe uski koi pakki gf bhi ban hi jaye...
udher Tej alag hi tension m thi apne bhai ko le kr, lekin apni maa k bolne pr usne khud ko ek had tak normal kr liya, but uske dil m to ab bhi bohot uthal puthal cha rhi hai ..
Veer bhi apne food truckpr gaya hai sab check krne maybe...
pr wahan pr usne Arohi or baaki k saath mil kr us ladke ka banaaya ek logo final kr liya jo k kaafi sahi lag...
lekin ab ye kya tension call aa gyii hai..
ek taraf Bhumika to dusri taraf Prachi
ab dekhte hain agle update m k problems kya hain or veer kaise deal krta hai unke saath...
Kamaal ka update tha as always....
will be waiting for the next update![]()
bahut badiya likha hai..
always eagar to know what next ...
keep rocking
Amazing
Awesome update Bhai
Waiting for the next update
Bahut Shandar Jhandar update Raha....
Jahan is update mein Hamen Veer ke Ishq Ka izhar dekhne Ko Mila...wahi Nidhi mam k dwara ise darkinar kar diya gaya samaz aur umr ke anter ka hawala dekar...
Bahut hi Shandar tarike se PARI NE " I want you" and "I need you "a beach ka antar Ko samjhaya Hai... jisse Veer ko bhi Apne Galti ka Ehsas Hota Hai aur apne shabdon ko Sahi karte hue Pyar Ka izhaar karta hai..
Vahi Nidhi mam k dwara thoda Jalan dekhne ko bhi Mili jab usne Apni sis ko Veer k gale lage hue dekha...Dekhate hai inke bich kya rista janm lega?
Pahle SUGAR BABY now MUMMY..in a sedutive way....BC Pari ki eisi bhi persenolity ho sakati ..jis se Veer ki phat gayi hai...
Dekhate hai Pari Aur Veer k bich ye payari si shart Veer ko kaha aur kis halat me pahuchati hai...?
Bhumika ne Veer ke food business ko Apne Hotel ke sath jodkar ek brand banane ki koshish ki aur apne Hotel ki bhi advertisment Kar Diya..
Dekhte hain abhi naya problem kya hai jo veer ko food truck k paas aane pr pata chla...
Waiting for next update
Finally the scene I'm waiting has arrived. Our little princess Juhi. What I like about your story is every character has its own charm in it. And the bonding, the intimation, the way you showed us with the words play has just wow. Aap ne toh hame loot liya. Sorry I've not commented in any updates as I'm just a silent reader. Mujhe silently parh k accha lagta hai but aab se I will try to comment in every updates. As it will cheer u up. Once again thank u
for giving us the chance to read this masterpiece of yours.
Mast update h bhai...![]()
Update to bahut badiya hain nice
Hi Werewolf Bhai first off all thanks for update and thanks to fulfill the wishes of your readers and another thanks for the awesome interaction of veer and Nidhi now it seems that some one is going to decorate the bed of veer in his teacher's house
and this last thanks for your amazing content
Waiting
Waiting
awesome update bro
Bhai new update kab Tak mil skta hai thoda jldi kijiye Bhai ji
Came on forum again after a break and reading all your last three update.
Again maja hi aa gya Bhai.
Maine socha tha ki ajay ka character to gayab hi ho gya usne dubara badla lene ka try nahi Kiya, but iss update me sahi hua uske sath.
Pragya aur usme pyar to tha hi nahi kabhi jo naam ki dosti thi vo bhi nahi rahi.
Fight scene to kya hi jabardast tha not a big scale fight like crimson arc, lekin aisi choti moti fight jisme protagonist gundo ko sabke samne pitkar logo ke samne specially females ke samne apni takat aur mardangi sabit karta hai uska bhi apna hi alag maja hai.
Nidhi ko veer me pehli baar ek ladka nahi ek mard najar aaya hai jo uske khilaf bolne vale ko uske kadmo me lane me der nahi karta.
Kavya ka bhi kuch aisa hi scene hai, vo veer ko puri tarah se apna protecter manti hai, dekhte hai ye protecter lover kab banega.
Halaki veer ne pure college ke samne itne gundo ko pita, Jacky to uske samne hath jodkar khada ho gya. Aur kisine bhi mtlb nidhi ya aarohi ne ye nahi pucha ki vo unn gundo ko kaise janta hai.
Veer nidhi ke ghar rehne ke liye aaya, halaki mujhe to yahi ghar uska asli ghar lagta hai.
Pari ki new personality badi jabardast hai, aur ye hi shayad veer ka mindset incest ki taraf le jaye. Veer ne girlfriend banane ki shart bhi pari se laga li.
Finally veer ne apne Dil ki baat nidhi ko bta hi di. And obviously nidhi itni asani se inn sab ko accept nahi karegi.
Age ka difference hai aur teacher aur student ka rishta, kuch society ka Darr bhi hai nidhi ke mann me. Use vakt lagega.
Kuch feelings jagu thi nidhi ke mann me to vo Shreya aur veer ka scene dekh ke dab gyi. Aur veer ko pta hi nahi ki kya kand kiya hai usne.
Juhi aur veer ki chemistry dil ko sukoon deti hai. Bas pta nahi ye mamu mamu se papa papa bolna kab chalu karegi
Off course veer ki life me multiple females hi aayengi. Nidhi ko vo apna haal e Dil bayan kar chuka hai aur ragini to uske samne pura samarpan kar chuki hai. Aise me khud se koi aur girlfriend banane ka thought kuch jama nahi.
Aur agar koi aur uski girlfriend banegi to kon kya koi naya character add hoga, jo mujhe nahi lagta iss moment pe aake sahi hoga. Itni sari females se harr vakt ghira rehta hai unme se hi kisi ko pta le.
Maybe kaira ya Sonia ho sakti hai.
Who knows? Only Werewolf knows
Eagerly waiting for next update....
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Sache pyar ke bare me kal baat karenge.![]()
Bhai update kab ayega
Waiting for the next update
Make sure tomorrow update
We shell be very thankful to you bro
Writer ne kal ratri kaha tha Bhai, mtlb aaj raat aayega. Story kyu band karvane pe tule ho.
Just wait, jitna intezar hoga update bhi utna hi mast aayega
Bhoot dhundhna jyada aasan hai, bajay saccha pyar pane ke![]()
Waiting
Lagta hyy ya ha per kisi ko bahut jalan ho ri story ki kamiyabi ko dekh kar
Werewolf Bhai aise nigitive comment PE zayda dhyan nahi dengey mujhe aise hi lagta hyy
Konsa target
Ranasahib baat aisi hai na k writer ki apni persona life bhi hoti hai, or first priority bhi personal life or family hi hoti hai naa k story likhna..
ab koi payment thodi naa de rha hai k update dena laazmi huwa...
jab bnda free hoga tabhi likhe ga update or jab complete hoga to time nikaal kr hi post kare gaa na ab editing or posting m bhi dimaagh lagta hai time Chahiye hota hai..
To yrr thoda sabar rakha karo bhai.
औरत तभी तक मुहब्बत करती है जब तक कि कोई मुर्गा हमेशा के लिए फांस नही लेती , उसके बाद वही मुहब्बत बेरूखी मे तब्दील हो जाती है। इसी वजह से मर्द बच्चे को हमेशा मोहब्बत मे गिरफ्तार रहना चाहिए और इसी वजह से उसे कभी शादी नही करना चाहिए।
जब हसीन औरत नाम की कम्पनी की शेयर होल्डर्स बनने से मतलब हल होता है तो उसका सोल प्रोपराइटर बनना भला क्यों जरूरी है !
किसी सुन्दरी की मधुर मुस्कान पर फिदा होकर सालम लड़की से शादी कर बैठना कहां की समझदारी है !
शादी मोटे तौर पर इस इस थ्योरी पर आधारित होती है कि जब किसी शख्स को ऐन वैसा भोजन मिल जाए जो कि उसकी खास पसंद हो तो उसे फौरन अपने तमाम कामकाज से किनारा कर लेना चाहिए और जाकर होटल मे नौकरी कर लेनी चाहिए।
ऐसा कहीं होता है ? यहां आप सवाल पूछ सकते है कि जब मर्द की शादी की मंशा नही होती तो वो औरत के पीछे क्यों भागता है ?
इस बात को समझने के लिए कुते की फितरत को समझना जरूरी है। कुते की ड्राइविंग की कोई मंशा नही होती फिर भी वो कार के पीछे भागता है।
जमा फल खाने की ख्वाहिश होने पर पेड़ का मालिक बनना जरूरी नही होता।
इसीलिए अगर आप शादी करने की मंशा बना रखे है तो एक बार इस पोस्ट को जरूर ध्यान से पढ़ना वोल्फी भाई ।
कस्मे वादे प्यार वफा सब , बाते है बातो का क्या !![]()
mast update bhai ji
LAJAWAAB JABARDAST EXCELLENT LOVELY MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Agar like target achieve nhi hua toh kya update nhi milega aaj
Ab mai kya bolun inna premikayen hui gayi hain veer ki bahut jada hui gawa hai kisko kisko pyaar karen sab ek se badhkar ek hain.upsr se ek aur special wali queen aani hai jabki meko na sab me queen nazar aa reli hai ab mai kiski kiski side lun![]()
Bhai total 145 like hue hai Targetto achieve nhi hua hai but hum log kya kar skte hai kuch log story padh kr bina like kiye hin chale jate hai unka kya kre. Bhai
Jabardasti to nhi bol skte hai kuch guest I'd use krte hai usse bhi like nhi hota hai to isi wajah se kum hua hai 151 update main to 160 like hai isme bhi ho jaega Bhai
ajj ap update de dijiye bhai
अपडेट आएगा क्या
अपडेट आएगा क्या
इंतजार होगा
Supper fantastic updates janab
Aowsome bhai moj kr di
Ding werewolf bhai like target is completed
Awesome
Any Expected time of update
Waiting for the update bro...
Ding werewolf bhai 1 minute remaining
waiting and awaking bro Werewolf
Kal subah
Bhai 2 baj gaye
Bahi 2:30 ho gaye
Waiting for the next update
Mere hisab se 2 pm hona chahiye...
So wait kare dosto..
Waiting for next update
125 update k baad padhna chod diya tha maine....koi batayega ki kon kon thuka(sex) hai abhi tak veer se
Pr Ava to pahaadi se koodi thi usme Veer ne thodi kuch kiya tha, even k Veer to tha bhi nhi wahan or kisi ko bhi nhi pata k Ava kahan gyii
Wating for update
Waiting for the next one
waiting
Waiting
Still no update...?
Kahin na kahin veer bhi involve tha bhai Ava ke condition main
Nice update
Superb zabardast update![]()
Bhai update de do rha nhi jaa rha h![]()
Update 154 has been posted guys.Werewolf bhai ab toh raat se aagla din bhi aadhe se jyada nikal gaya hai lekin update abhi tak nahi aaya