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Nice update broUpdate - 158 ~ The Hourglass Method (1)
Ab tak...
Bhavna ko woh kehne waali thi ki tumhara beta ek number ka badtameez ho chuka hai aur na jaane kya kya.
Magar ab-
Jaise uske woh bol kahi gayab hi ho gaye.
'Tumhara beta-!!! Akhir woh kya hai? Bhavna!?'
Ek lambi saans chhodte hue woh apne kapde liye bedroom me chali gayi.
Shayad aaj poori raat use neend nahi aane waali thi.
Ab aage...
Subah hui, Veer apne bistar par uth ke baitha toh use sabse pehle apne khade hue mehmaan ka ehsaas hua.
"Damn it!!!"
Jawaan ladka tha, subah subah yeh hona toh vaastivik tha.
[Such vigour! Oh my~ It's hard~ ❤]
'Shut up!'
Bagal me rakhe jug se usne apne liye paani liya aur peene laga.
[Kab tak mujhse dur jaate rahoge? In the end, no one is as close to you as I am. After all, I'm inside you!!! Lekin, ye kitna galat hai. Hai na? You should be inside me!!! ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ Ahh~]
*Phuuuuu*
Pari ki sensual tone aur bachkane dialogues sunte hi Veer ke muh se paani poora ka poora baahar nikal gaya.
'Y-You-!'
[C'mon! Say it! Mommy I need you! I love you~]
'Fuck off!'
[*sighs* Don't you worry! Jald hi tum meri mutthi me hoge. (。•̀ᴗ-)✧]
Veer use ignore kar kal ki ghatna ke baare me sochne laga. Kal Purvi maasi ke saath jo kuch bhi hua. Woh nahi hona chahiye tha.
'Na jaane kya soch rahi hongi maasi mere baare me!'
[Imagine if she tells your mother about it.]
'N-Nahi! Meri toh vaat lag jayegi.'
[Fufu~]
'Aabha ko bhi mene news nahi di. Mujhe use ye khush-khabri de deni chahiye ki mein use aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.'
[Hmm~]
Woh uth ke fresh up hua par uska ling aaj baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.
Woh Suman ke kamre me gaya, toh dekha ki Suman apne kuch kapde teh ke rakhne me lagi hui thi.
Suman (glances) : Maalik!?
Veer ne bina kuch kahe apne khade hue lund ki orr ishara kiya jo uske lower ke andar se salami de raha tha.
Suman ne nigaahein neeche kar apne maalik ke bhayanak ubhaar ko dekha, fir halka sa muskurayi aur apna saara kaam chhodh woh darwaze ki orr aayi.
Apne maalik ko kamre ke bheetar kheench usne darwaze ko halka sa band kiya aur jhuk ke neeche ko baith gayi.
Uski chuudiyo ki khanak Veer ko aur bhi uttejit kar rahi thi.
Suman (smiles) : Aaj subah subah ye haal kaise maalik?
Veer (sighs) : Pata nahi! Roz itni derr tak nahi rehta Suman. Aaj pata nahi kyu-
Suman (smiles) : Kya ye kal ka asar hai? Meri beti kya aapko mujhse bhi zyada pasand aa gayi?
Veer : Sonali ko iss matter me mat ghaseeto Suman.
Suman : Kyu bhala?
Veer (sighs) : Uska rishta mujhse alag hai. Aur, mujhe nahi lagta woh ek daasi ki tarah rehna chahti hai. Mein bhi nahi chahta ki woh mere saath wese rahe. Mujhe uska yahi chulbula-pann pasand hai.
Suman : Hmm! Meri koi zorr zabardasti nahi hai maalik iss maamle me.
Veer : Hmm!
Suman : Lekin-!
Veer : ???
Suman : Woh aapki patni ke sthaan ke baare me nahi soch sakti. Kabhi bhi nahi! Na hi woh aur na hi hamare kul se kabhi koi aapke ya aapki pushto ke liye patni ka sthaan le sakta hai. Bas! Baat khatam!
Veer : Lekin-
Suman : Maa hu uski. Jaanti hu uske dil me kya chal raha hota hai. Woh aapke sang chaahe daasi bann ke rahe ya fir ek sakhi bann ke. Jab aapko koi pareshani nahi toh bhala mujhe kaise ho sakti hai? Meri taraf se koi manahi nahi hai maalik.
Veer (nods) : Hmm!
Suman : Mein sirf uske hit ke liye hi use tokti hu maalik. Aap jaante hai! Ek maa apni santaan ka kabhi bhi bura nahi chaahegi!
Veer : Jaanta hu! Lekin, baat baat pe use daanta mat karo. Abhi umr kam hai uski. Dheere dheere baato ko samajhne lagegi woh.
Suman (smiles) : Ab jab aapne aadesh de diya hai. Toh mein iss baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.
Inn dono ki yaha baatein chal rahi thi, toh wahi darwaze ke theek peeche Sonali dabe paav aa kar khade hoke sab kuch sunn rahi thi.
Veer ne toh pehle hi bhaanp liya tha ki darwaze ke peeche koi aake khada hua hai. Uske senses hi itne tez the ki ye zara si halchal uss se bach ke na jaa saki. Aur, Sonali ke alawa ho hi kaun sakta tha.
Jab Sonali ne Veer ki baat suni toh uske andar Veer ke liye aur bhi prem badh gaya. Woh uske kahe gaye bol ko sunn kaafi prabhavit thi. Toh ye sochta tha Veer uske baare me?
'Mujhe nahi laga tha ye paglu meri itni fiqr karta hai.'
Ek garm sa ehsaas uske dil me utha. Magar, abhi ki paristhiti ko dhyaan me rakhte hue woh turant hi inn vichaaro se bahar aayi aur apni maa ki harqato ko chhup ke dekhne lagi.
Suman ne Veer ke lower ko neeche khaskaya aur underwear ke andar se vishal mussal lund ko jab bahar nikala toh pal bhar ke liye Sonali ki kal ki yaadein taaza ho gayi.
Ye bhayanak roopi hathyaar kal uske andar tha? Khud pe taajub bhi ho raha tha use ki akhir usne itni badi cheez apne andar le kaise li.
Suman lund ko hath me leke uske qareeb aayi aur usne sabse pehle use soongha.
*sniff*
"Mmmm~"
Lund ki mehek use madhosh kar rahi thi. Apne rass bhare hontho se usne lund ko choomna shuru kiya toh Veer ki aankhein band hone lagi. Aur, uttejit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki Veer abhi nahaya hua nahi tha. Raat bhar se underwear ke andar hi lund maujood tha. Uske bawajood, Suman use choom rahi thi, aur uski madak mehek ko soongh rahi thi.
Bahar khadi Sonali ke dil ki dhadkane ye dekh badhne lagi. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise uski maa Veer ke lund ko jagah jagah apne hontho se geela kar ke choom rahi thi.
Jeebh nikaal ke lund ke neeche se upar tak woh uspe fira rahi thi. Saath hi gol gol supaade par bhi woh apni zubaan chalati jaa rahi thi.
Veer dabi hui siskiyaan bhar raha tha. Suman ek alag hi kism ka maza deti thi use.
Uske ghano baalo me apne haatho ki ungliyaa daal, uske kesho ko kass ke pakad ke Veer uske mukh ko chodne laga.
*Gwak* *Gwak* *Gwak*
Ek kamuk awaaz kamre me fel gayi. Bechari Sonali ki halat harr guzarte pal bigadne lagi. Uski choot me ye khujli kyu ho rahi thi achanak se?
Uska haath apne aap choot par chala gaya. Kal ki tabad-tod chudaayi se dard bhi tha. Lekin, fir bhi ye ajeeb si khujli na jaane kyu use choot ko malne par majboor kar rahi thi.
"Ngh~"
Apni siski ko muh par haath rakh dabaate hue, woh darwaze ke peeche chhipi rahi. Aur, uska dusra haath dono taango ke beech me fasa ke reh gaya.
Veer andar Suman ka mukh chodan karne me laga hua tha.
"Nnn~"
Sonali ki bur bhi risna shuru ho gayi thi. Jab use iska ehsaas hua toh woh ghabra uthi. Ye bhala kaise ho gaya?
Kal din bhar uski itni chudayi ke baad bhi, aaj ye bur sirf andar ka nazara dekh paniya kaisi gayi?
Woh abhi bhaag ke jaati ki tabhi uske peeche koi aake khada ho gaya. Jaise hi woh palti woh pehle toh chaunki par fir thoda sambhal gayi.
Peeche sirf Aabha hi thi.
Aabha : Kya hua?
Aabha kamre ke andar hi jaa rahi thi. Sonali ne jab dekha ki woh seedhe andar jaa rahi hai toh usne uska haath pakad liya.
Aabha : ???
Sonali bas naa me sarr hilaati rahi. Woh nahi bata sakti thi ki andar kya chal raha hai, na hi muh se awaaz nikal sakti thi. Iske pehle ki woh Aabha ke kaan me kuch keh paati, Aabha haath chhura ke seedhe andar ko chali gayi.
Aur jaise hi woh andar aayi,
Aabha : M-Maa ji neeche sab- huh!!!?
Uske perr wahi tham gaye. Neeche uski saasu maa uske maalik ka lund choosne me lagi thi. Ya yu kahe ki uske maalik uski saasu maa ka mukh chodne me lage hue the.
Pehle aashcharya hua fir woh sambhli, Veer ne ek ungli ke ishare se jab use bulaya toh woh sharma uthi.
Uske nazdeek aate hi Veer ne ek haath se uski gardan pakdi aur use apni orr kheechte hue uske raseele hontho ko choosne laga.
Baahar khadi Sonali ka haath apni bur par gaya aur woh iss baar zorr zorr se use malne lagi.
"Sssssss~"
Dard toh ho raha tha par bina male raha bhi nahi jaa raha tha uss se.
*Slurp* *Slurp*
"Mmmmm~"
Aabha ke kurte ko upar kar Veer ne uske thano ko bhi azaad kar diya aur unhe baari baari choosne laga. Jab Suman ka lund choosna khatam hua toh Aabha ne uska sthaan liya aur lund ka swaad lene lagi.
Iss baar Suman upar se nangi ho gayi. Suman ke bade bade than jab saamne aaye toh Veer se bilkul bhi ruka nahi gaya. Unhe acche se usne choosa.
Aur fir Suman khud hi neeche baithi, Veer ke peeche gayi aur-
Veer : Shittt!!
Veer ka haath peeche jaake Suman ke baalo ko jakad liya. Suman apna muh uski gaand me de chuki thi. Ye ajeeb si fetish na jaane kab se use lag chuki thi.
Sonali ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhauchakki hoke reh gayi. Uski maa-
Ye kya kar rahi thi? Kya woh jo dekh rahi thi wahi ho raha tha? Palke jhapka ke usne fir dekha aur punah use jhatka laga.
Suman Veer ke uss ang ko choom rahi thi, chaat rahi thi jaha se insaan ka mal nikalta tha. Uska haath apni bur pe aur bhi kass gaya.
'Y-Ye maa kya!? Ahhn~'
Woh sochne pe majboor ho gayi ki aisa bhi hota tha kya? Ek aurat kisi mard ke mal dwaar ko kaise chaat sakti thi bhala? Kya aurat ki apni koi izzat nahi hoti? Uski maa ye ghinauna kaam karne ke liye raazi kaise ho gayi?
Kintu, woh kuch baatein nahi jaanti thi. Balki, inme se koi bhi ye nahi jaanta tha ki Suman ko nimnikaran pasand tha. Use degrade hona pasand tha.
Woh apne maalik ke liye harr nichle se nichle starr ki cheezein kar sakti thi aur karna chaahti thi.
Iss waqt woh kisi toilet paper ke samaan lag rahi thi jise Veer apni gaand ko saaf karne ke liye istemaal kar raha tha. Ek aisa toilet paper, jo apne aap kaam karta hai.
Ab iska ye matlab hargiz nahi tha ki Suman koi bazaaru aurat thi. Ye sab woh sirf apne maalik ke liye hi karna chaahti thi.
Veer : S-Suman~ Sh-Shittt!!!! Nnn~
Suman (breathes heavily) : Aapke liye ye daasi kuch bhi kar sakti hai maalik...! *huff* *huff* Kuch bhi!!!
Iske baad Veer ne seedhe use bistar par litaya aur uski saree aur petticoat utha ke uski panty ko neeche kiya.
Apni maa ko iss tarah nanga dekh Sonali ki aankhein fel gayi. Suman ki choot me jhaatein bhi thi. Zyada nahi par thi zaroor. Jo Veer ko alag hi kism ki uttejna pradaan kar rahi thi.
Lund ko usne jhaat se bhari bur pe ragda.
Suman : Nnghh~ Maalik! Intezar kis baat ka hai? Ab daal bhi dijiye!
Aur ek hi jhatke me sansana ke usne apna lund andar bur me pel diya.
Suman kasmasa ke reh gayi. Uski choot bhale hi kuwari choot nahi thi. Lekin, woh apni khaamiyo ko baaki dhang se poora kar leti thi.
Uske bade than, ati se bhi adhik seva bhaav aur kuch bhi kar jaane ke liye tatpar rehna, ye saari baatein uski pehle se chudi bur ki khaami ko dhaak deti thi. 200+ ki favourability koi mazak nahi thi.
Usne aisi aisi cheezein Veer ke liye kari thi jo ek aam aurat soch bhi nahi sakti thi, ya fir ghin jataane lagti. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki usne apne maalik ki peshaab ka bhi swaad chakha hua tha.
Aisa do baar hua tha jab Veer ke mootne ke theek baad usne lund ko apne muh me bhara tha. Aur, ye kehna galat bhi nahi hoga ki woh iss se bhi adhik aage badh sakti thi.
Suman ki bur ko acche se chodne ke baad, aur apna paani andar giraane ke baad Veer ne ek round Aabha ki bur bhi maari. Tab jaake, uska yeh mehmaan thoda shaant hua.
Baahar khadi Sonali akhir tak sab kuch dekhti rahi aur ant me uski bur bhi jharr gayi. Woh fauran hi waha se dabe paav bhaag nikli. Veer ne mauka dekh fir apni baat rakhi,
Veer : Aabha!
Aabha : J-Ji?
Veer : Mujhe tumhe bhi kuch batana hai!
Aabha : Kahiye na!
Veer : Mene tumhare liye kuch socha hai. Tum chaahti thi na ki tum alag alag shehro ko ghumo?
Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!
Veer (smiles) : Toh taiyaar ho jao! Shreya ji ke saath tumhe ab tours par nikalna hai.
Aabha : M-Matlab?
Veer : Matlab ye ki mein tumhe aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.
Aabha : Maaf karna maalik, mein abhi bhi nahi samjhi.
Veer (smiles) : Shreya ji ka sapna hai ki woh YouTuber bane kyuki woh roz ki iss office waali zindagi se thak chuki hai. Toh iss se behtar kya hoga ki woh bahar alag alag shehro me safar kare?
Aabha : !!?
Veer : Aur isliye mene unhe ye sujhav diya hai. Traveling vlogs ka. Tumhara bhi ye sapna hai na ki tum duniya ghumo?
Aabha (nods) : Hmm!
Veer : Toh tum dono saath me kyu nahi ghoom sakti?
Aabha : Ahh! Ab samjhi!
Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Aur usi ke liye mein tumhe aur unko sponsor karunga. Matlab jo bhi kharcha tum dono ka hoga, woh mein uthaunga.
Aabha : K-Kya? S-Sach?
Aabha ko apne kaano par vishvaas nahi ho raha tha. Uska sapna itni asaani se poora hone jaa raha tha?
Veer (nods) : Hmm!
Aabha : P-Par fir mein yaha nahi rahungi t-toh-
Lekin use ek bhay bhi sataane laga. Agar woh yaha nahi rahegi toh apne maalik ki seva kaise kar payegi? Veer fauran hi uske mann me utpann ho rahi chinta ko samajh gaya.
Veer (smiles) : Aisa thodi hai ki tum hamesha ke liye jaa rahi ho. Wapas bhi toh aati rahogi na. Aur, wese bhi tum dono waha jaa ke mere liye kaam asaan hi karogi.
Peeche khadi Suman sab kuch sunn rahi thi, par woh bhi utni hi hairan thi jitni ki Aabha.
Aabha : Aapka kaam asaan? Kaisa kaam maalik?
Veer (smiles) : Samay aane par, tum jaan jaogi.
Aabha : O-Ohh!
Veer : Hmm! Ab tum dono ke liye mujhe ek guide chahiye.
[Ohhhh~ A guide? Huh? Interesting!]
Aabha : Guide?
Veer : Hmm! Tum dono kabhi baahar nahi ghume ho. Itna traveling nahi kiye ho. Aur do ladkiyo ka iss tarah akela kahi bhi jaana harr maayne me safe nahi hota.
Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!
Aabha ko ye jaan ke accha lag raha tha ki uske maalik uski hifazat ka kis hadd tak dhyaan rakhte the.
Woh bhaavuk ho uthi. Aur sarr jhukaye hi dheere se uske paas aayi aur kass ke chipak gayi.
Veer : Arrey? Haha! Kya hua?
Par Aabha abhi bas rona chaahti thi. Veer ne prem se uske sarr par haath ferra toh woh aur zorr se lipat gayi.
Aabha : Mein aapko chhor ke nahi jana chaahti. Kahi bhi nahi! *sniff*
Veer : Arre pagal! Tum hamesha ke liye thodi jaa rahi ho.
Aabha : *sniff* N-Nahi! Nahi karna mujhe aise apne sapno ko poora...! *sniff* Jaha aap na raho.
Veer (smiles) : Chinta mat karo. Tum jab chaahe wapas aa sakti ho idhar. Aur, mein kaun sa kahi jaa raha hu. Hum sab toh yahi rahenge na. Ye samay hai ki tum baahar ki duniya bhi thoda dekho.
Aabha : P-Par-!
Veer : Ab par war kuch nahi! Jaisa mene keh diya, wesa hi karna hai. Samajh gayi?
Aabha (nods) : J-Jii!
Veer (smiles) : Good!
***
Din me kaam dhandhe se jaldi fursat hoke Veer raat me shaam ko hi ghar laut aaya tha.
Aaj Bhavna ka ghar me akhiri din tha. Aaj hi woh Karnataka ke liye nikalne waali thi. Uski raat me Mumbai se Bangalore ke liye train thi.
Veer, Tej, Shweta, aur Suman Bhavna ko leke station pahuche.
Khacha-khach bheed se bhara hua tha station. Aas paas ki chehel pehel aur shor Tej ko aur bhi zyada ye bodh kara raha tha ki uski maa kayi hafto ke liye uss se dur jaa rahi hai.
Tej : M-Mom!
Bhavna : Ab muh mat latkana! Kaam hai yeh! Aa jaungi jald hi!
Tej : Hmm!
Station ke platform par aate hi Bhavna ko apni saheli bhi nazar aa gayi.
Bhavna : Seema!!!!
Seema jo ki Bhavna ke sang hi ek archeologist thi woh uske saath hi train me safar par jaa rahi thi. Dikhne me ek aam si aurat thi. Magar, uska nature behad hi pyara tha. Shayad isliye Bhavna ke sang uski dosti hui thi.
Bhavna : Ab toh tumhe yakeen ho gaya na? Hmm?
Veer (shyly) : J-Ji!!
Parso hi raat me Veer ne akele jaane ke liye mana kiya tha aur Bhavna ne tab hi bataya tha ki uski saheli bhi uske saath jaa rahi hai. Seema wahi saheli thi.
Seema : Hello~
Veer (smiles) : Hello~ Nice to meet you!
Bhavna (smiles) : Seema! Ye dono mere bacche hai! Ye hai Tej! Meri badi beti. Aur ye hai Veer. Mera beta!
Seema (smiles) : Accha!
Tej : Hello aunty!
Seema : Hello beta! Tum nahi chal rahi?
Tej : Mom ne mera name recommendation me nahi diya tha kyuki mein jaana nahi chaahti thi.
Seema : Hmm! Bataya tha Bhavna ne mujhe. Fir bhi socha tumse puch lu. Kya hua? Kya mann nahi hai?
Tej : Nahi aunty! Actually, mujhe abhi family time spend karna hai kuch. Isliye-
Kehte hue usne chori se Veer ko dekha.
Seema (smiles) : Hmm! Ghar par samay dena bhi zaroori hai. Koi baat nahi! Fir kabhi chal dena.
Tej : Ji!!
Woh sab khade hue the ki itne me announcement bhi ho gaya,
*Ding Dong*
"Yaatrigann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se chal ke jaane waali xxxx train kuch hi samay me platform kramank xx par apne nirdharit samay par aa rahi hai."
Veer : Chaliye! Coach number jaha rukega seedhe wahi chal ke khade hote hai.
Bhavna : Hmm!
Dekhte hi dekhte train bhi aa gayi. Aur Bhavna ka jaane ka samay ho gaya.
Bhavna : Ab tum dono aisa muh banaoge toh kaise jaa paungi mein?
Woh aage aayi aur usne Tej ko apne gale se lagaate hue bola,
Bhavna : Jald hi aa jaungi beta. Chinta mat karo. Dhyaan rakhna sabka. Khaas kar Veer ka.
Tej : Mmm! Ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai mom.
Bhavna ne fir Veer ko apne gale se lagaya aur uska maatha pyaar se chooma,
Bhavna : Tej ka dhyaan rakhna.
Veer : Don't worry!
Bhavna : Mmm! Tum ho toh mujhe parvah ki zaroorat nahi *smiles*
Suman bhi itne me aage aayi aur usne Bhavna ke haatho ko thaama,
Suman : Jaldi aaiyega didi!
Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!
Suman : Aur idhar ki chinta mat kariye, mein pal pal ki khabar aapko deti rahungi aur aapka haal chaal bhi leti rahungi.
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!
Shweta jo peeche khadi hui thi, woh iss mauke ko apne haath se kaise jaane de sakti thi bhala? Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah ko pakad ke boli,
Shweta : Mere bete ka dhyaan mein achhe se rakhungi. Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. A-Aur- t-tum-!! Sambhal ke jaana!
Bhavna : Huh!?
Bhavna hi nahi, balki Veer aur Tej bhi uske iss vyavhaar se hairan the. Bhavna use aankhein faade kuch pal toh bas hairat me dekhi. Fir, achanak hi kuch soch ke woh muskurayi. Aur, bas halki si haami bhar woh palat ke train ke coach me chadh gayi.
Veer Shweta ke iss ravaiyye se khush tha. Andar jaate hue usne Bhavna aur Seema ko acche se baithaya. Ab train ke nikalne ka samay ho raha tha. Par, apni maa ko iss tarah jaate dekh, dono hi baccho ko accha mehsoos nahi ho raha tha.
Train akhir chal di. Sabhi waha se utar ke platform par aaye. Bhavna window seat se unn sabhi ko haath hila ke bye keh rahi thi.
Veer ka dil behad hi bechain tha. Ye bechaini kyu thi? Woh nahi samajh paa raha tha. Kya sirf maa ke dur jaane ki bechaini thi? Ya fir uska maa surakshit rahengi ya nahi? Iss baat ki?
‘This unusual feeling…! What is it!?’
[You are scared?]
‘Y-Yes! Maa ke liye!’
[Don’t worry! She’ll be fine! She’s not alone after all.]
‘She is alone!! That’s why-’
[But there are others as well. Kya unke colleagues saath nahi hai? Why worry then dear~]
‘Because I won’t be with her!!’
[Hmm!]
Train jaati jaa rahi thi. Veer ko achanak se pata nahi kya hua par woh, turant hi train ki disha ki orr dauda.
Tej : Huh? V-Veer???
Bhavna jo window seat par baithi thi aur bas apni udaasi ko chhipaaye hue thi ab tak, uska chehra bhi turant hi maayus ho utha. Baccho ke saamne kaise khud ko aisa dikha sakti thi. Jitna gham unhe ho raha tha uss se kahi zyada andar se woh vichlit thi.
Bagal me baithi Seema bhi ek maa thi, toh sab samajh gayi.
Seema : Baccho se dur jaana bilkul accha nahi lagta hai na?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Tumhare bacche kam se kam idhar nahi hai. Ye acchi baat hai! Warna tumhe bhi meri tarah-
Seema : Ohh Bhavna! Pucho mat! Haan, ye baat sach hai ki woh dono videsh me hai toh mujhe kahi bhi baahar jaate hue ye sab nahi jhelna padta. Par mein unhe harr roz yaad karti hu. Tum khush-kismat ho jo roz roz apni aankhon ke saamne apne baccho ko dekh paati ho.
Bhavna : Shayad- *smiles* Haan!
Abhi woh kuch soch rahi thi jab window side use koi daudta hua nazar aaya. Usne jaise hi khidki se dekha toh woh chakit reh gayi. Uska laadla daudte hue train ke saath chal raha tha.
Woh ghabra uthi,
Bhavna : Veeerrr????
Seema : Tumhara beta!? Arre aise toh kahi woh-
Bhavna jhatt se baahar darwaze ki orr bhaagi aur darwaze par aate hi use dekhi,
Bhavna : Veeeeerrr?? Kya kar rahe ho????
Train ki raftaar badhti jaa rahi thi. Uske hosh toh tab ude jab Veer train ki raftaar se bhi tezz raftaar me daud ke uske coach ke gate ke nazdeek aane laga.
Bhavna (screams) : Veeerrrr!!! Nahiiiii!!! Gir jaoge paagal!!!
Lekin, Veer ne kuch nahi kaha. Jab woh uske gate ke ekdum nazdeek uske sameep aa gaya tab usne apne haath me liya hua ek packet Bhavna ki orr aage badhaya. Bhavna ne jaldbazi me uss packet ko turant thaama.
Veer : For you~
Aur itna bol Veer ne apni chaal dheeme kar li. Dheere dheere uski gati kam hoti chali gayi aur uske qadam bhi tham gaye. Platform khatam ho chuka tha. Bhavna aashcharya aur confusion me dekhti rahi.
Fir usne fauran hi uss packet ko tatola aur jab usme dekha ki kya tha, toh agle hi shan uski aankhon ne aaj apna baandh khol hi diya.
Andar kuch chocolates thi.
Ye bilkul uss din ki tarah hi tha. Jab Veer pehli baar uss se station par mila tha. Tab woh nahi jaanti thi ki wahi uska beta hai aur usne apne hi bete ko anjaane me kuch chocolates di thi jab usne uss se apne liye paani ki bottles mangwayi thi. Aur aaj uske hi bete ne use chocolates di. Jaise woh lamha dohra diya gaya tha.
Iss baar Bhavna khud ko na rok paayi aur uske aansu chhalak uthe. Gate par halka lean hote hue woh Veer ko apne se dur jaate dekh rahi thi.
Aur fir zorr se chillaayi,
“Mein jald hi aaungiiiiii!!! Mera intezaaarrr karnaaaaa~”
Veer uski aankho se ojhal ho gaya. Ek dukh use hua kyuki woh jaanti thi ki uski awaaz Veer tak nahi pahuchi hogi. Kintu, woh nahi jaanti thi ki Veer ke senses aam insaan jaise nahi the. Uska ek ek shabd Veer ne saaf saaf sunn liya tha.
Woh bas idhar platform ke chhor par khade muskuraya aur ek lambi saans bhar wapas mud gaya, jab achanak hi-
*Ring Ring*
Uska phone baj utha.
‘Hmm??’
Screen par dekha toh paaya ki Prachi ka call aaya hua tha. Kal tabad-tod chudayi ke baad Sonali aaj food truck par nahi gayi thi. Saari zimmedari aaj Prachi ke sarr hi thi. Veer ne call turant hi uthaya,
Veer : Hello? Prachi? Kya hua?
Udhar se Prachi ki bas ek chinta-janak awaaz hi aayi,
“Ch-Chef!! J-Jaldi!! P-Please! Jaldi aaiye!!!”
*call cuts abruptly*
‘Damn it!!!’
Jab achanak se call kata toh Veer bhi pareshan ho utha. Kuch theek nahi lag raha tha.
‘Pari!!!’
Pari jaise samajh gayi ki woh kya chaahta tha.
*Ding*
Uske mann me agle hi pal food truck ki location jhalak uthi. Usne jab se Sonali ke liye woh food truck mark kiya tha tab se hi Tracer uspe marked tha. Parantu, ye kya? Food truck toh apni roz ki jagah pe hi khada hua tha. Iska matlab food truck kahi idhar se udhar nahi hua tha. Fir kya dikkat ho sakti thi?
Veer ne thodi raahat ki saans li. Aur woh bina samay zaaya kiye Shweta, Tej aur Suman ko ghar chhor seedha food truck ki location ki orr chal diya.
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Chef on wheels’ location
Night ~ 9 : 07 PM
*Click* *Click*
“Start!!!”
*Clap*
“Hey, everyone! Kaise hai aap sab? This is Tamanna here! Taste with Tamanna me aapka swaagat hai. Aur, iss baar ke new season me ye aaj ka hamara pehla episode hone wala hai. Excited? Haha!”
“Aap logo ke surprise ke liye aaj mein woh karne jaa rahi hu jo mene iss se pehle aaj tak kabhi nahi kiya hai. Literally, kabhi bhi nahi! Yes! You guessed it right!”
“Mein iss naye season ki shuruaat aise karni jaa rahi hu ki aaj mein street foods ka taste lene waali hu. And you guys know how much I criticize street food, right?”
“And what’s more? This is all gonna happen on the streets of Mumbai. You heard that right. Toh chaliye fir…! Dekhte hai! Derr kis baat ki? Dekhte hai ki Mumbai nagri ke street food stalls Tamanna ki ratings par tikte hai ya nahi? Let’s go!!!‘
“Cut!!”
Ek aadmi ne awaaz di toh clapperboard waala banda aage aake board ko clap kiya aur scene wahi cut kar diya gaya.
Tamanna, food blogging ki jaani maani hasti inn dino Mumbai me hi thehri hui thi. Woh ek jaana maana chehra thi food industry ka. Uska kisi hotel ke upar ek blog hi hotel ke munaafe ko ulat palat kar ke rakh deta tha. Itni taaqat thi uski likhawat me.
Jab use apne iss hunar se khyaati praapt hui, toh TV shows se bhi use kayi offers aane lage, jo usne khushi khushi apne khule haatho se sweekaar kiye.
Munaafa kise pasand nahi tha. Kuch aisa hi ek TV channel waalo ne bhi kiya tha haal hi me, jab woh Tamanna ka ‘Taste with Tamanna’ ke naam se uska ek show leke aaye.
Shuruaat me toh uss show par zyada logo ka dhyaan nahi gaya, par jaise jaise show apne end ke qareeb pahucha dheere dheere uski choti choti clips Youtube aur social media par prachilit hone lagi.
Jisme logo ko sabse zyada jo pasand aaya woh tha Tamanna ka bebaak andaaz. Show me Tamanna alag alag food restaurants me jaati thi aur unke khaane ka swaad leti.
Magar, jis bhi hotel me kayi saari khaamiya rehti, toh Tamanna unn logo ko tabiyat se lataadti thi. Aur yahi public ko pasand bhi aata tha.
Paas me hi kuch duri par khadi Prachi ne jab ye dekha toh woh ghabra gayi. Aaj toh woh akeli thi food trucks ki zimmedari ke liye.
Aur ye Tamanna apne crew ke saath aaj hi aa dhamki. Na jaane kya hoga. Uska chinta se hi haal behaal ho raha tha. Isliye usne Veer ko yaha aane ke liye call kar diya.
Tamanna pehle ek food stall par gayi. Cameras on the, aur saara crew camera ke peeche khada hua tha. Jaise hi Tamanna ne aadmi ke stall ka haal dekha woh uspe shuru me hi baras padi,
Tamanna : Kya hai ye sab? Gloves kaha hai aapke?
Aadmi : W-Woh-
Tamanna : Kya bechte hai aap?
Aadmi : Pani puri, chaat, samose, kachori...!
Tamanna : Toh Pani puri bechte samay aapke haatho me gloves kyu nahi hai?
Aadmi : Madam, mein kaun sa haath paani me dubo ke deta hu. Mere paas ye chamcha hai. Isi se pani daalta hu.
Tamanna : Ek toh galti karte ho upar se apna hi bhool ko chhipane ki koshish bhi karte ho!? Aapko pata hai aap TV par aane waale ho?
Aadmi : H-Huh!?
Tamanna : Aapko koi andaza bhi hai kj aap kitne logo ke swaasth se roz roz khilwaad karte ho?
Aadmi : N-Nahi mein-
Tamanna : Ye paani banaane ke liye kaun se paani ka upyog karte ho aap?
Aadmi : Jo hamare ghar me aata hai, sarkaar ki taraf se.
Tamanna : Use filter bhi karte ho ya direct aise hi?
Aadmi : Filter ki kya zaroorat madam? Mera poora ghar aise hi peeta hai!
Tamanna aage kuch nahi boli. Woh food stall se hatt gayi aur camera waala use follow karne laga.
Chalte chalte woh boli,
"Aur isliye mujhe Street foods pasand nahi hai. Aap sabhi ne dekha ki kya haal rakhte hai Street food waale apne stalls ka."
"Logo ki zindagiyo ko mazaak me liya jaata hai. Abhi abhi aapne jo food stall dekha, udhar kabhi bhi nahi aana hai. Samajh gaye na aap sabhi?"
"Agar aap swasth rehna chaahte hai toh bilkul bhi nahi. No gloves, no filtered water aur na jaane kya kya."
"Stay healthy! Ab aaiye aur chalte hum apne next stall pe. Ye haal hi me khula hai aur ek prakaar se ye stall nahi balki ek food truck chain hai."
"Shayad aap me kaafi log yaha pehle bhi aa chuke honge. Aur sach kahu toh mein bhi ek baar aa chuki hu. Iss food truck ne mujhe kaafi prabhavit Kiya tha."
"Par aaj mein dobaara yaha yahi dekhni aayi hu ki pichli baar ki tarah ye food truck waale apni quality abhi bhi maintain kar rahe hai ya fir inhone bhi baakiyo ki tarah profit par dhyaan dena shuru kar diya hai. Let's go and see!"
Jaise hi Tamanna apne poore crew ke saath Prachi ke food truck par pahuchi, bechari Prachi ki haalat hi bigadne lagi. Woh panic karne lagi.
Tamanna : Ye hai Chef on Wheels. Haal hi me kholi gayi ek food truck. Aur, inke ek nahi 5 se bhi zyada trucks hai jo Mumbai me alag alag areas me khade hote hai. Aapka naam ma'am?
Prachi : J-Jii! H-Hello~ I'm Prachi!
Tamanna : Toh Prachi! Kya aap mujhe jaanti hai?
Prachi (nods) : J-Jii!
Tamanna (smiles) : Toh Aaj aapko kaisa lag raha hai ye dekh ke ki Taste with Tamanna ka poora crew aaj aapke food truck par aaya hai.
Prachi : J-Ji! Khushi bhi hai par thodi nervousness bhi!
Tamanna : Nervousness kyu? Agar aap public ki health ke saath khilwaad nahi karti toh nervousness toh bilkul bhi nahi honi chahiye. Kya hum andar se apne darshako ko dikha sakte hai? Food truck ka haal?
Prachi : J-Jii!
Tamanna apne camera wale ke sang andar gayi aur usne sab kuch record kiya. Prachi bas vichlit hoke Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi. Kaash woh yaha jald se jald aa jaaye.
Tamanna ne andar se sab kuch dekha aur kahi bhi use saaf safaayi me Kami nazar nahi aayi.
Tamanna (smiles) : Aisa bohut hi kam hota hai jab Street foods ki ek cart me kabhi itni safayi maintained ho. Very good!
Prachi (smiles) : Th-Thank you~
Tamanna : Mujhe aur mere crew ko woh uss din waali signature dish khaani hai. Please, hum wait kar rahe hai. Order jald se jald complete kijiyega.
Jaise hi Prachi ne uske muh se ye suna, bechari ke poore perr kaanp uthe.
Signature dish?
Aur woh bhi woh khud banaaye?
Kya ye mazaak tha? Signature dishes toh saari Veer ko hi aati thi. Upar se usme se bhi bas ek hi dish thi jo usne Sonali ko sikhayi hui thi. Sonali khud aaj nahi aayi thi.
Toh bhala Prachi kaise use bana sakti thi? Ek duwidha me fass chuki thi woh.
Tamanna : Kya hua? Kya soch rahi hai aap?
Prachi : M-Mein woh- A-Actually-
Tamanna : Hmm?
Prachi : M-Mein sirf worker hu yaha pe. Signature dishes saari hamare owner ko hi aati hai.
Tamanna : Toh owner kaha hai?
Tamanna jaise ye sab jaanti thi aur jaan boojh ke ye sab tests le rahi thi.
Prachi : W-Woh aate hi honge. Aap agar thoda-
Tamanna : Kamaal hai! Uss din bhi aisa hi hua tha I guess? Aap sab ne dekha? Kahi na kahi koi na koi kami nikal hi jaati hai. Food truck ke owner saahab aaye din gaayab hi rehte hai. Agar aap signature dishes inki try karna chaahte hai toh bhul jaiye ki woh aapko ek baar me milegi.
Prachi : N-Nahi! Aisa nahi hai ma'am! Hum sab new hai. H-Hum dheere dheere seekh rahe hai sab.
Tamanna : Kya seekh rahe hai? Logo ko bewakoof banaana?
Prachi : N-Nahi! H-Hum-
Tamanna : Shayad aaj ek aur stall ratings list par nahi chadh payega hamari. Let's see some another one.
Prachi : N-Nahi! Ma'am! Please! Meri baat suniye-
Tamanna palat ke jaane lagi toh Prachi poori tarah se darr gayi. Ye uski zimmedari me kya ho gaya?
Woh kuch soch hi rahi thi jab ek awaaz aayi,
"How can I let you go like that?"
Awaaz sunte hi Prachi ka badan sihran utha. Woh ye awaaz jaanti thi.
Tamanna ne palat ke dekha toh paaya ki Veer, Food truck ka owner waha khada hua tha. Prachi ke chehre par agle hi pal Veer ko dekh khushi jhalak uthi. Usne ek raahat ki saans li.
Woh Veer ke upar sab chhor baaki workers ke paas gayi aur unhe sab kuch samjhaane lagi.
Tamanna : Ohh! Mister Veer! Kya abhi bhi koi aur reasons dena hai ya fir hume hamara order milega?
Veer : Kyu nahi! Please have a seat!
Tamanna baahar rakhi ek chair par baithi aur idhar andar Veer ne apna kaam shuru kar diya.
Uske haath behad hi speed me chal rahe the. Peeche khadi Prachi use bas admiration me dekh rahi thi.
'Ch-Chef kitne- kitne unique hai!! Aisi situation me bhi kitne calm hai. Zara bhi panic me nahi dekha mene unhe. Sh-Shayad-! Isliye woh ek owner hai. Na ki worker.'
Tamanna sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Veer kaise kya kar raha tha. Akhiri baar usne ye dish jab khaayi thi toh woh seedha bhaag gayi thi yaha se.
Uska kaaran yahi tha ki-
Woh iss swaad ko jhel nahi paayi thi. Swaad itna alaukik tha ki woh use samjha bhi nahi sakti thi.
Shayad Street foods me se ab tak apni zindagi me usne jo jo khaaya tha, usme se ye dish top par thi.
Woh dekh rahi thi ki Veer kya kya daal raha hai, aur kaise bana raha hai.
Khaane ki sugandh use aur uske crew ko aane lagi thi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte dish bhi taiyaar thi.
Jaise hi Tamanna ne use taste kiya. Fir wahi ehsaas. Nahi! Balki ye pehle se bhi zyada strong tha.
Usne apne emotions ko chhipaaya aur boli,
Tamanna : It's- It's good!
Veer (smiles) : Bas itna hi kehna hai kya?
Tamanna : It's- It's really really good!
Veer bas muskuraya. Jab Tamanna ne use kuch offer kiya,
Tamanna : Do you want to come with me? To explore the street food? Tum show ka hissa rahoge. Tumhare business ko aur bhi log jaan payenge. You will gain popularity.
Veer : Can I?
Tamanna : Sure! Kyu nahi!
Veer : Alright then!
Tamanna : Dhyaan rahe! Mera show ekdum raw rehta hai. Koi faaltu ki editing nahi. Jo kuch yaha hota hai, jaisa dikhta hai wahi post hota hai.
Veer : Hmm!
Tamanna Veer ko waha se le gayi. Woh dono streets me aur andar pravesh kiye. Aur jo jo woh dekh rahe the uss se Tamanna ka haal behaal ho raha tha.
Tamanna : Woh kya bana raha hai? Wh-Whattttt??? Kya tumne wahi dekha jo mene dekha?
Veer : I-
Tamanna : Did he just!!? Kya usne Maggi ke liye coca cola dala usme?
Veer : That's-
Tamanna : M-Mein marr jaungi ye sab dekh ke. And what is that guy making?
Veer : He is-
Tamanna : What the fuck is wrong with the street food??? Did you see that? Pag bhaji hai ya butter bhaji?? Kitna butter daala hai? Is he a serial killer? Logo ko maarna kyu chaahta hai? Who the fuck adds this much butter?
Veer : Hey calm down-
Tamanna : Ahhhh!!!! N-Noooo! P-Please! Meri aankhon me kuch daalo! Woh jal rahi hai.
Veer : What happened?
Tamanna : Mene waha kuch dekh liya hai. Aaaahhhh! My eyesss!!!
Veer ne jab palat ke dekha toh paaya ki ek street food waala dosa bana raha tha. Magar usme aloo ki jagah noodles ghused raha tha. Veer ka khud ka mann kharab ho gaya.
Tamanna jo food ko leke itni sensitive thi, uske liye ye jagah toh jaise nark samaan thi.
Harr stall use aisi chot pahucha raha thi ki bechari ki haalat kharab hoti jaa rahi thi.
Tamanna : Mein- Mein marr jaungi! *huff* what is that?
Tamanna ka crew hi tha jo inn sab ko bohut enjoy kar raha tha. Woh jaante the ki pehla hi episode hit jaane waala hai.
Tamanna : Woh- Woh kya bech raha hai waha udhar? Itni bheed kyu hai? Free me baant raha hai kya? Sankranti ka mela kyu laga hai waha?
Veer uske dialogues par na chaahte hue bhi hass pada. Ek toh uski halat par Veer ko hasi aa rahi thi. Jab uske food truck par woh aayi thi toh ekdum tip top condition me thi. Parantu, abhi use dekh ke lag raha tha ki jaise kayi metre lambi race me daud ke aayi ho.
Tamanna : Apna mobile do!!
Veer : Wh-What?
Tamanna : Arre apna mobile do. Itni bheed hai kuch dikh nahi raha hai. Mein jaa ke photo click karke laati ho. Pata toh chale kya bann raha hai.
Veer : Isme mobile ki kya zaroorat-
Tamanna : Mere paas nahi hai abhi. Isliye! Are you giving or not?
Veer : Fine!
Tamanna uska phone lete hue bheed ke jhund me ghusi, aur waha se usne haath daalte hue kuch pictures click ki.
Jaise hi woh baahar nikal ke aayi, usne Veer ko photos dikhaayi.
Veer : Ohh! Chhole kulche!
Tamanna : Tum dekh rahe ho woh apne nange haatho se kaise kulchho ko palta raha hai tawe pe? Na jaane kitne log aaj beemar padne waale hai. H-Help me!
Woh ladkhadate hue baithne ko hui toh Veer ne use sambhal ke baithaya.
Tamanna : I can't-! I'm done! Logo ko kisi ki parvah hi nahi hai. Aise kyu hote hai log? Dhyaan kyu nahi dete? Khud ka hi business hai par fir bhi- koi kaam acche se kyu nahi karna hai?
Veer bhi aaj sab kuch dekha tha. Woh jaanta tha ki kuch na kuch karna zaroori tha.
"It's time for a change!"
Usne ahista se kaha.
Tamanna : Huh!!?
Tamanna thodi hairat me use dekhi. Veer ki nigaahein asmaan me kahi aur hi thi. Na jaane kya soch raha tha.
Tamanna : Anyways! I'm done! Mujhse aur nahi ho payega. Thanks for being a part of this episode. Mujhe ab jaana hoga.
Veer (nods) : Hmm!
Tamanna jald hi apne crew ke saath nikal gayi. Veer bhi apne food truck ki taraf wapas chal diya.
Magar-
Jaise hi woh wapas aaya uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
Food truck ki haalat kharab hui padi thi. Sab kuch tehes nehes ho rakha tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kayi gunde toda fodi kar ke gaye ho.
Usne dekha ki Prachi ek chair par baithe ro rahi thi zorr zorr se.
Woh bhaagte hue uske paas aaya,
Veer : Prachi!!??
Prachi uski awaaz sunn turant hi uthi, use dekhi aur fir aur zorr se rote hue uske gale se lag gayi. Woh kuch bata hi nahi rahi thi bas roti jaa rahi thi.
Veer : Kya hua? Ye sab? Batao!
Prachi (cries) : *sniff* Ch-Chef! Kuch gunde aaye the...! *sniff* achanak se kehne lage ye jagah hamari hotel ke saamne hai. Hamari hotel yahi saamne construct hone waali hai toh ab se tum sabke ye trucks yaha nahi lagenge.
Veer : Par humne permission se hi lagaya hai.
Prachi : *sniff* Mene bhi yahi kaha tha. P-Par woh nahi maane- *sniff* Jab hum sab ne milke virodh kiya toh unn sab ne na sirf hamare workers ko peeta balki food truck ko bhi- *sniff* aur mein kuch nahi kar paayi, Mera phone bhi le gaye woh.
Veer ki mutthi ye sunn kass uthi.
Veer : Mujhe call kyu nahi kiya?
Prachi : Woh mere mobile le jaane se pehle, phone mere paas tha. Aur mene kiya tha aapko call. *sniff* par aapne call pick nahi kiya.
Veer : What? Aisa ho hi nahi sakta-
Veer ne jaise hi phone nikal ke dekha uski aankhein aashcharya me fel gayi. Prachi ke kayi saare calls usme pade hue the. Par ye kaise?
Aur tabhi use kuch derr pehle ki baat yaad aayi,
"Apna mobile do!"
Tamanna!!!
'That bitch!!!!'
[You got fooled dear fufu~]
Veer : Hamare baaki workers kaha hai?
Prachi : *sniff* H-Hospital me! Mene unhe bhijwa diya hai.
Veer : Koi madad ke liye aage nahi aaya? Tumne Ghar pe call nahi kiya?
Prachi : Mein iss se pehle ki karti unhone mera mobile hi le liya tha *sniff* aur- aur- madad ke liye bhi koi aage nahi aaya. *sniff* sab itne saare gundo ko dekh ke darr Gaye the.
Veer : Police complaint?
Prachi : M-Meri himmat nahi hui. *sniff* unme se ek- ek keh raha tha ki police me complaint ki toh jaan se maar dunga. *sniff*
Veer ki aankhein sab kuch sunn gusse se laal ho uthi. Uske chehre par koi gussa nahi tha. Bas aankhon me tha.
Veer : Who did this?
Uski awaaz sunn Prachi bhi darr gayi. Lag raha tha jaise abhi Veer kisi ka khoon karne jaa raha tha.
Prachi : Bataya toh- *sniff* K-Kuch gunde the.
Veer : Kis hotel ki taraf se aaye the?
Prachi : Mene ek ke muh se suna tha hotel ka naam...! *sniff* Kya toh tha.
Veer : ???
Prachi : Y-Yes!!!
Veer: ?
Prachi : Casa Belle!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7.3k words. This is another mega update. Lekin ise mein normal length me hi count kar raha hu.
Job ko leke kuch changes hone hai meri life me. Basically, ab tak wfh chal raha tha par ab company ki taraf se strict order aa gaya hai Mumbai( Veer ke sheher) shift hone ka. Meri posting wahi ki nikli hai. Aur mein apne state se dur nahi jaana chaahta. State me hi mujhe job chahiye hai toh mein dusri company me shift hone ki soch raha hu. Aur uske liye, mujhe unki job profiles ke hisaab se kuch aur nayi cheezein seekhni hai taaki package aur bhi zyada badh sake. Unki kuch requirements hai. Bas, usi me vyast hu. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. Ab se harr update usual length se bada aaya karega.
Dhanyavaad.
Ye waha jaa rahi hai mitr jaha Tak abhi tumhari soch bhi nahi jaa sakti.Sorry to say bro.... Disappointed story ota nhi kaha ja rhi h... Pta nhi kyu har Suman se sex k scene aate h aur phir sonali m 3 update laga diye jabki nidhi k gusse aur confusion ka koi mention nhi... Aur Kiara ka kuch aata pata nhi kya ho rha h... Aur veer ki mausi wala scene bhi delay kar rhe ho bhai...
Mat padho bhai. Kyuki 158 update se mein chutiya nahi hu jo ye sab likh Raha hu. Mein kya deliver karta hu apni Audience ko ye sabhi jaante hai. Mujhe harr ek ko khush rakhne ki zaroorat nahi.Itna late update aata h Manta hu ki life m busy ho but jab update de rhe ho to kam se kam yrr story lo aage to badhaiye arc to minor charector par hi chal rha h.... Update maisa lag rha h bas naam ka update h.
Action scenes dhamakedar updateUpdate - 15 ~ An eye for an eye
Ab tak...
'Should I call?? No... What am I even thinking?'
Wo sarr na me hilaate hue apni neend me chali gayi.
Par usse nahi pata tha...
Ki aane waala samay...
Uske liye kya kya laane waala tha.
Ab aage...
Ghar me apni Maa ki awaaz sunn neend ke aghosh se ek ladka subah subah utha. Aise hi uske dincharya ki shuruaat hoti thi.
Apni dhun me magan wo naha dho ke college jaane ke liye taiyaar tha.
Jaldbaazi me naashta karte hue wo apne phone par busy tha aur uski yahi gandi aadat par uski Maa usse sunaane lagi,
"Kitni baar kaha hai ki naashte ke waqt phone mat chalaaya karo par tum ho ki sunte hi nahi? Aur itni kya jaldi hai beta ki naashta karne ke liye bhi time nahi hai? Arre, 2-4 minute late bhi pohuchoge toh teacher bhaga nahi denge tumhe beta."
Wo aurat apni bauhe sikode apne bete ki harqat se naakhush hote hue boli.
Par uske bete ko toh jese koi farq hi nahi pad raha tha. Iss kaan se sunn uss ladke ne apni maa ki baatein apne dusre kaan se nikaal dii.
Aur bas, muh me naashta bhare, chabaate hue uski nazre ek taq phone me lagi hui thi.
Aurat : Padhaayi ka kya hua? Exams aane waale hai na? Kuch padhte ho raat me room me? Ya poore time woi pubg khelte rehte ho??
Ladka : Arre ho jaegi na yaar Mom. Kyu tension leti ho?
Aurat : Pata nahi kab sudhroge tum...
Wo udaas hote hue uth ke andar kitchen me gayi aur ek water bottle laate hue apne bete ke bag me rakh dii jo wahi sofe par pada hua tha.
Agle pal hi wo ladka naashta khatam kar khada hua apna bag uthaaya aur bottle side me fassi dekh usse nikaala aur baahar chal diya,
"Arre bottle kyu roz roz nikaal deta hai? Paani nahi piyoge kya?"
Wo chillaate hue baahar aayi jaha uska beta apni duke bike nikaalne me busy tha.
Ladka : Arre Mom! Kitni baar batau, dost log rehte hai na... Sab ke sab bottle laate hai. Ye faaltu me rakh ke kyu apne bag ka bojh badhau? Tum tension na lo yaar... Ab jao andar.
Aurat : Ajayyyy... Kuch bhul toh nahi raha na??
Par apni Maa ki awaaz ko ansuna kar wo bas apni hi dhun me khoya hua tha aur ghar se yu hawa ke jhoke ki tarah nikal gaya.
Ye aur koi nahi, Veer ki pitaayi karne waala wahi ladka tha ~ Ajay.
Ajay ki Maa Sushma wahi darwaaze par khadi khadi apne hi khyaalo me ghum ho gayi. Chinta, shikan uske chehre par saaf nazar aa rahi thi.
Apne beta ka aisa ravaiyaa usse hamesha soch me daalne par majboor kar deta tha aur uska apne aap se bas ek hi sawaal rehta tha.
Ki akhir kab uske bete ki ye aadatein chuutengi? Aur kab wo uski baato par dhyaan dena shuru karega?
Chaahe Ajay jesa bhi tha, tha toh uska beta. Uska apna kaleja... Usme Sushma ki jaan basti thi.
Aur shayad yahi ek kaaran bhi tha ki wo zyaada zorr se usse daant bhi nahi paati thi kyuki wo ekmaatr aulaad jo thi uski aur uske pati ki.
Ek gambheer aah chorr wo waapas darwaaza lagaate hue andar chali gayi.
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Idhar Ajay bina apne Maa ke prati ravaiyye par dhyaan diye apne hi vichaaro me leen tha.
Kaafi khush sa bhi lag raha tha woh. Na jaane aisa kya kaaran tha?
Bade hi josh se bharpoor aur excited hote hue wo college me pravesh kiya.
Apne apne pantaro se uski mulaqaat hui. Sabhi ko high five dete hue wo apni class me ghusa.
Akhir wo dada tha apni class ka. 3rd year tha ye uska college me aur poori class me uska raub tha. Ek image thi uski. Ek badboy ki image.
Jiski peeche aksar ladkiya bhaagti thi. Par keval wahi ladkiya jinhe pataana behad asaan hota tha aur unme zyaada koi khubiyaa nahi hoti thi.
Ek aisi ladki jo samajhdaar ho aur saath hi saath teekshn boojh waali ho wo kabhi bhi aise ladko par apna time waste nahi karegi.
Shayad yahi kaaran tha jo Pragya ko unn sab ladkiyo me se alag banaata tha. Ajay ke kayi baar propose karne ke baad bhi, Pragya ne usse sirf as a friend hi banaaye rakha tha.
Aur isliye Ajay usse aur bhi zyaada paana chaahta tha. Jitna koi cheez aapse dur bhaagti hai, usse paane ki laalsa aapki aur bhi badh jaati hai. Yahi haal tha Ajay ka.
Pragya ki adaa, uski wo carefree personality aur easy going attitude jese usse baaki saari ladkiyo se alag kar deta tha Ajay ki nazro me.
Usse aur koi ladki bhaati hi nahi thi. Bas Pragya hi uske dimaag me ghumti rehti thi.
Aaj bhi aisa hi kuch tha. Aaj Pragya college nahi aayi hui thi par uske bawajood Ajay ka dhyaan toh jese uspe hi laga hua tha.
Uski harr ek image Ajay ke mann me aa rahi thi. Uska hassna, baatein karna, advices dena, sab kuch usse bada yaad aa raha tha.
Par Ajay jaanta tha. Aaj kuch kaam tha usse. Jiske chalte wo aaj college nahi aayi thi.
Uske baare me soch Ajay ne apni seat par baithe apna phone nikaala aur wo Pragya ko call karne hi wala tha ki tabhi uske phone pe ek unknown number se message aaya,
'Aaj bore ho rahe ho na?'
Message padh Ajay soch me pad gaya. Ye bhala unknown number se uske phone pe message kaha se aa gaya? Aur bhala aisa message kyu aaya usse? Kahi wrong number pe toh message nahi bhej diya sender ne?
Usne confused hote hue reply bheja,
'Kaun??'
Aur agle hi pal usse firse message aaya,
'Oh hooo!! Tumne really mujhse ye sawaal kiya? You deserve a punishment.'
Message padh bhale hi Ajay confused tha par iss unknown sender se baatein karte hue jese ab usse interest sa aane laga tha.
Usne firse ek message bheja...
'Mein nahi jaanta aap kaun ho. Shaayad wrong number lag gaya hai aapka. Apna naam bataaiye!'
Usne aisa likhte hue message bheja par kuch derr tak koi reply na aaya aur wo lagataar apni mobile ki screen par teacher se bach bach ke dekhta jaa raha tha.
Kuch minute ke baad hi usse reply aaya,
'Mujhse puch rahe ho kaun hu mein? Beta itna maarungi na...'
Aur usse padhte hi pata nahi kyu par Ajay ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi. Ab usse itna toh pata chal gaya tha ki ye jo bhi hai ek ladki hai.
Usne fatafat ek message type kiya aur bhej diya,
Ajay : Accha chalo nahi puchta. Par ab ye toh bata do ki mujhe message kyu kiya hai?
Unknown : Accha bacchu? Upar padho na kya likh ke bheji thi mein.
Ajay ne sabse pehla message padha jisme likha tha,
'Aaj bore ho rahe ho na?'
Aur usse padhne ke baad usne reply diya,
Ajay : Haa! Padha mene. Aur aapko kese pata mein bore ho raha hu?
Unknown : Obviously I know... Tumhari rag rag se waaqif hu mein.
Ek baar fir Ajay message padh bada hi confuse ho gaya. Akhir kaun thi ye bandi jo usse aise messages bhej rahi thi?
Kaun thi aisi wo ladki jo uski rag rag se waaqif thi?
Usne sochne ka prayaas kiya ki akhir kaun ho sakti hai ye ladki par itna sochne ke baad bhi usse koi jawaab na mila.
Bas ek hi jan tha jo uski rag rag se waaqif tha college me aur wo ladki thi Pragya.
Pragya ke baare me sochte hi uske dimaag me ek ghanti sii baji. Pragya hi toh ek ladki thi jo uski bestt friend thi ekdum.
Wahi toh usse bakhubi jaanti thi. Aur wahi toh aise baat karti thi uss se?
Jese hi Ajay ne upar ke saare messages padhe, usse 70% lagne laga ki ye bandi Pragya hi thi.
Par uske paas Pragya ka number toh pehle se hi tha fir woh bhala unknown number se usse message kyu bhejegi?
Aur yahi soch usne ek aur message bheja...
Ajay : Tum Pragya? Tell me! I know mene sahi kaha hai. Ab jhooth mat bolna...
Unknown : Arre yaar! Sahi me... I thought ki thoda toh maze lu tumhaare. Itni jaldi guess karne ki kya zaroorat thi paagal.
Aur agle hi pal Ajay ke chehre pe muskaan aa gayi.
Uski muskaan alag hi baya kar rahi thi ki wo poori tarah se iss shaks ko pehchaan gaya hai.
Ajay : Ye unknown number se message kyu kar rahi ho?
Pragya : Arre yaar... Mene tumhe kya bataya tha kal?
Ajay : Yahi ki tumhe kal chacha ke ghar jaana hai?
Pragya : Haa! Toh wahi hu. Wo chacha aaj new SIM laaye the toh mene socha kyu na tumhaare saath masti ki jaaye new SIM se haha~
Ajay : Tu bhi na yaar!
Pragya : Mujhe pata tha tum bore ho rahe hoge. Mein toh gayi nahi aaj. Tumhaare wai do chaar friends tumhe paka rahe honge aur tum mujhe miss kar rahe hoge.
Ajay : Ye baat toh hai. Miss toh bada kar raha hu tumhe. Aur ye baat tum bhi jaanti hi ho ☺
Pragya : Flirt kar rahe ho? Paagal kahi ke...
Ajay : Haha~ Tumhara plan fail ho gaya but...
Pragya : I know!!! Tum aur tumhari aadat... Accha suno...
Ajay : ??
Pragya : Uss din mene tumse uss ladke ke baare me baat ki thi na?
Ajay : Kaun?
Pragya : Arre paagal jisse tum maarne waale the...
Ajay : Ohh! Hahaha~ Wo chuza? Uske baare me kya?
Pragya : Wo mere paas aaya tha.
Ajay : What?
Pragya : Yes! Aur wai baatein tumse karni hai aur ek aur surprise hai tumhare liye.
Ajay : Surprise? Surprise chorro aur uss chutiye ki himmat kese hui tumhaare paas aane ki?
Pragya : What the hell? Usse kya appointment lena padega mere paas aane ke liye? He just came...
Ajay : But kyuuuu?????
Pragya : Tumse related hi baat thi...
Ajay : Kyaaa??
Pragya : Wo baad me bataungi na... Abhi suno! Iss number pe call mat karna okay? Ye chacha ka number hai.
Ajay : Okay! But... Bataogi kab?
Pragya : Kaha na! Surprise bhi dena hai. Jab mein khud iss number se message karungi bas padhte jaana aur bilkul wesa hi karna okay? No sawaal! Warna punishment milegi.
Ajay : Accha jii! Jesa aap kahogi bilkul wesa hi hoga.
Pragya : Good! Shaam me baat karti hu. Abhi chacha ko phone chaahiye hai. Tab tak college bhi chooth jaega.
Aur itna bol Pragya ne dubaara koi message na bheja.
Ajay muskuraate hue college ke lectures toh kahi apne dosto ke saath bakchodi me vyast ho gaya.
Aaj bhale hi Pragya nahi aayi thi college par uske saath yu iss tarah se baatein kar ke wo khushi se fula nahi sama raha tha.
Aaj ye pehli baar tha jab Pragya ne aisa kuch uske saath kiya tha. Aaj toh wo jese saatve aasmaan par tha.
Aaj uska dil garden garden ho chala tha. Aur bas andar ek hi gaane ki panktiyaa goonj rahi thi,
Udta hi firu... Inn hawaaon me kahi...
Ya mein jhool jau... Inn ghataaon me kahi...
Pehla nasha... Pehla khumaar...
Naya pyaar hai... Naya intezaar...
Ajay yu panktiyo ko gungunaate hue apne pantaro ke sarr par tapli bhi maar raha tha, mazaakiya dhang me. Wo jese bilkul kho sa gaya tha aaj.
College ka departure ho chuka tha aur wo parking me se apni bike nikaal raha tha. Shuru se ant tak uske chehre par muskaan thi. Yaha tak ki aaj uske dost bhi usse 'Pyaar me paagal ho gaya hai' keh keh ke usse cherr rahe the aur na chaahte hue bhi Ajay bas sharm ke maare sharmaata jaa raha tha.
Na jaane kya hi surprise plan kiya hua tha uski Pragya ne. Usse sochte sochte wo Bike parking se baahar laaya aur side me gaadi rokte hue usne ek baar apna phone check kiya kyuki ek pal ke liye wo vibrate hua tha.
Aur screen par notification dekhte hi uske chehre par firse ek muskaan aa gayi.
Pragya ka message aaya hua tha...
Pragya : Oye! Suno! Ab surprise ki baat karle? Haa toh wo xxxxxxxx chauraahe par gift shop dekhi hai na? Kaafi famous hai yaar wo toh... Ab naa mat keh dena.
Message padhte hi na chaahte hue bhi Ajay ki hassi chooth gayi. Apne sarr ke peeche par baalo me haath ferrte hue usne bike me baithe baithe hi reply kiya,
Ajay : Jii! Teacher jii! Jii! Mujhe pata hai.
Pragya : Thank god! Okay! Ab jao waha pe...
Ajay : Waha pe? But kyu?
Pragya : Kaha na jao! Mene kaha tha na baba... No sawaal and all...
Ajay : Jii! Jii! Jo hukum aapka devi!!
Aur muskuraate hue Ajay apne khyaalo me doobe gaane gaate hue bike se chal diya Pragya ki bataayi hui destination ki orr.
Sawaal toh kayi saare the uske mann me par ab usse bhi jese ye khel khelne me maza sa aane laga tha. Aur toh aur wo kaafi excited bhi tha ye surprise leke...
Kuch hi minute baad wo pohuch chuka tha uss gift shop par jo Pragya ne bataayi thi.
Tabhi uska phone firse vibrate hua...
Pragya : Pohuch gaye???
Ajay : Yes!!! Agla hukum dijiye devi jii!
Pragya : Hmm! Ab agla hukum hai ki... Buy a rose flower from there...
Ye padhte hi Ajay ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi...
Ajay (mann me) : Kya wo mujhe...!?
Usne puchna chaaha ki ye kisliye par dusri side se bas ek hi jawaab aaya~
'Jesa bol rahi hu wesa karo'
Aur bas! Fir kya tha. Fir toh jesa jesa Pragya ne bola Ajay ne theek wesa hi kiya.
Ek pyaara sa rose ka phool lete hue wo baahar aaya aur uske Pragya ko message bheja ki usne flower le liya hai.
Aur agle hi pal usse ek aur message aaya,
Pragya : Le liya na... Ab jao xxxxxxxx shop pe. Waha se xxxxxx chocolate khareedo.
Aur Pragya ka agla hukum paake Ajay chal diya dusri dukaan ki orr. Par jese jese kaam Pragya uss se karwa rahi thi, wese wese hi uski dil ki dhadkane badhti jaa rahi thi.
Kahi ye wahi pal toh nahi tha? Jiska usse besabri se intezaar tha? Kahi Pragya uske proposal ko accept toh nahi karne waali thi? Kahi isliye toh nahi wo uss se ye sab karwa rahi thi? Kya wo firse chaahti thi ki Ajay usse propose kare aur iss baar wo uska proposal accept kaare?
Na jaane kitne sawaalo se Ajay ka dimaag ghira hua tha par inn sab ka jawaab toh keval Pragya hi de sakti thi.
Dusri dukaan me pohuch kar, Ajay ne bataayi gayi chocolate khareedi aur itna khareedte hi usse ek aur message aa gaya,
Pragya : Ab xxxxxxxx toy shop jao aur waha se ek pink teddy khareedo...
Uski baat padh ab toh jese Ajay ko poora confirm sa ho gaya tha ki jo wo soch raha tha shayad wahi hone waala tha aur ye sochte hi uski khushi ka koi thikaana nahi tha.
Teesri dukaan jaake usne waha se nirdesh anusaar ek pink teddy liya aur sab kuch leke wo apni bike pe sawaar ho gaya.
Pragya : Le liya na?
Ajay : Ab aur kitna samaan kharidwaogi yaar? Teeno dukaane itni dur dur thi. But tumhaare liye inn duriyo ki parvaah nahi kii mene...
Pragya : Aww! So sweet! Ab suno... Forun hi mujhe college ki peeche waali road par milo. I have a surprise for you... Mein idhar hi hu...
Ajay : What? Tum waha? But waha kyu milna hai? Paagal! Tumhaare gifts ke chakkar me 6:30 baj gaya. Aur tum waha kya kar rahi ho? Wo road safe nahi Pragya!
Pragya : Itni hi parvaah hai meri toh fir aao na jaldi.
Ajay : Fine! Mein aata hu!
Message bhej Ajay tezz raftaar me apni bike bhagaate hue college ke peeche ki sadak par jaane laga. Excitement toh koot koot kar bharta jaa raha tha usme...
Aur kuch hi samay baad wo saara samaan leke waha pohucha toh fir se usse ek message aaya,
Pragya : Wo board laga hai na... Direction waala. Uske paas aao.
Aur message padh Ajay thoda aage lage uss board ke paas pohuch gaya. Usne gaadi roki aur wo bike se utra. Samaan ki thaili uski bike ke handle par hi tangi hui thi.
Tabhi ek baar fir uska mobile vibrate hua aur usne message padha,
Pragya : You see the tree? Tumhaare left waala? I'm just behind it.
Aur itna bol Pragya ne fir koi message na bheja.
Apne dil ki tezz dhadkane liye Ajay uss ped ki taraf badhne laga. Aur agle hi pal uski aankho me ek chamak aa gayi...
Usse ped ke peeche se...
Ek pink colour ki chunri ka hissa hawa me lehraata hua dikhaayi diya. Bhale hi shaam ke 6:45 baj rahe the par iske bawajood itna sab kuch araam se dekha jaa sakta tha.
Halka halka andhera bas chhaaya hua tha. Ek aasha liye wo aage badha...
Aur usne ped ke bagal se apna sar aage badhaate hue ped ke peeche dekhne ka prayaas kiya...
Ki tabhi...
"Surprise motherfucka..."
*POW*
Ek tezz zorrdaar ghusaa uske jabde pe kisi train ki raftaar jitni tezzi me aate hue pada aur agle hi pal wo thoda uchakte hue peeche ki orr road par dhadaam se jaa gira.
Kuch seconds tak toh usse kuch samajh hi naa aaya. Fir jese usse bhayaanak dard utha apne jabde me aur gaal pe...
Aur fir usne aankhein khol upar nazre karte hue dekha toh pehle toh sahi se nazar na aaya. Taare jo chhaa gaye the aankho ke saamne wo zordaar ghusaa khaane ke baad.
Jab finally usse sahi se nazar aaya toh usne dekha ki ek jaana pehchaana chehra uske saamne khada hua tha.
Ye koi aur nahi Veer hi tha.
Uske gale me ek pink colour ki chunri kisi muffler ki tarah bandhi hui thi.
Jese hi Ajay ne Veer ko dekha uska gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch gaya. Wo utha...
Ajay : Chuze tu? Teri ye majaal?
Aur gurraaaya...
Par koi fayda nahi...
*POW*
Ek laat theek uske seene par aakar padi jisse khaate hi wo hawa me uchal peeche ki orr jaa gira.
Dard me karaahte hue Ajay jese tese khada hua par iss baar toh jese laat aur ghuso ki jhadi lag chuki thi...
Ajay ne hamlo ko counter toh kiya par koi fayda nahi...
*POW*
"Ye ghusa... Meri pitwaayi karwaane ke liye."
*POW*
"Ye laat... Meri beizzati karne ke liye."
*POW*
"Ye ghusa... Mera mazaak banaane ke liye."
Veer ke harr prahaar par uski awaaz tezz hoti jaa rahi thi. Gussa uski awaaz me saaf jhalak raha tha.
Aur harr ek vaar uska poori taaqat se bharpoor tha.
Ajay ki haalat pitate pitate battar hoti jaa rahi thi.
Aur agle hi pal wo zameen par gir pada.
Tabhi uske girte hi...
Veer ne apna perr uthaaya aur uske sarr par zorr se dabaav banaate hue rakha,
"Aaaaaaarrrrrggghhhhhhh!!!"
Ek tezz karaah Ajay ke muh se nikli.
Joota uske sarr par tikaaye hue Veer bola,
"Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu."
Ye wahi bol the jab Ajay ne theek issi tarah issi jagah par issi waqt Veer ke sarr par aise laat rakh ke bole the. Aur aaj wo khud Veer ke apne jooto ke neeche tha.
Abhi dard se Ajay cheenkh hi raha tha ki tabhi uske muh me kuch zabardasti thoos diya gaya...
Aur jese agle hi pal usse andaaza lag gaya ki wo kya cheez thi...
Ek lollipop!!!!
Veer : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.
Ye wahi bol the...
Ajay ke khud ke bol...
Jinhe Veer ne apne zehan me ab tak baithaaye hue the theek issi waqt par unhe chukaane ke liye.
Aur agle hi pal na chaahte hue bhi, dard ke maare aur apni iss haalat ki anbhooti hone ke chalte, Ajay ke aasu nikalne lage.
*Thuuu*
Aur fir achaanak hi uske upar Veer ka thook gira.
Aise hi usne Veer ke upar thooka tha.
Ye toh badla tha.
Veer ka badla.
Shayad ab usse samajh aa raha tha ki kabhi maar khaate hue kaisa lagta hai.
"K... Kese!?"
Ajay ne Veer ke perr pakad apni adhkhuli ankhoo se usse dekha. Uske honth kaanp rahe the...
Veer : Kese? It was me all along you Idiot! Wo Pragya nahi... Mein hi tha. I made you a fool...
Ajay ko iss baat ka bodh hote hi aur gussa aane laga. Kitna galat tha woh.
Itna bewakoof koi akhir kese bann sakta tha?
Par wo bana tha...
Aur wo bhi Veer ke haatho, jo uski nazro me bas ek chuza tha.
*POW*
Aur achaanak hi Veer ne kuch aur hamle kiye, jiske chalte Ajay poori tarah behosh ho gaya.
Usse ghaseet kar Veer uski bike ke paas laaya aur uski bike bhi giraate hue wahi uske qareeb daal dii. Taaki logo ko lage ki wo bhidne ke chalte behosh ho gaya.
Veer ne saara samaan uski bike se uthaaya aur jaate jaate usne ek akhiri baar behosh huye Ajay par daali...
"I promised someone... Ki ab se yadi jiyunga toh ek Raja ki tarah... Aur yadi marunga bhi... Toh bhi ek Raja ki hi tarah..."
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Dheemi awaaz me wo khud se itna bol waha se chal diya...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!