Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

Index​

Full Status and Cards​

Artworks​

Full Characters Guide​

Arcs​

Latest Update ➢ Update 189 ​

 

[Werewolf]

Jabardast update.

Jis chij ke liye Garofano me mana kiya tha, vahi ho rha hai. Aur ab ek tarah se se obligation hai kyoki mission ne hi veer ko jaw long se ladne ko kaha hai.
Aur jaw long ke bare me kisi bhi tarah ki jankari nahi hai. Dushman ki jankari na hona sabse bada minus point hota hai.

Exactly! Renshu aur baaki sabhi infiltrate karne Jaa rahe hai aur surprise attack ke saath unhe lena chahte hai par kya waqai aisa hone waala hai? Jaw Long ke baare me ek bhi info haath me nahi hai. Lekin, yahi baat Jaw Long ke liye bhi kahi jaa sakti hai. Uske paas bhi toh akhir Renshu, ya Veer ki koi info nahi hogi. Agar uske paas advantage hai toh woh territory advantage.

Ab dekhte hai ki veer kaise tackle karega iss problem ko

It will be tough. And, when I say tough I mean it.

Renshu ko jaw long ki jankari nahi hai, lekin kya jawab long ke bare me kaha Jaa sakta hai ki jaw long bhi veer aur Renshu se anjan hai. Jis tarah Renshu ne veer aur Garofano ko help ke liye bulaya, kya jawab long ne kisi ko nahi bulaya hoga, probably jaw long ke alawa bhi koi aur system holder tribe ki taraf se ladta hua dekhne ko mile, agar aisa hua to Jung bahut bhari hogi.

Veer aur Renshu ke baare me bhala kaun jaanta hai? Na hi Renshu Veer ki saari skills se familiar hai aur na hi koi aur. Crimson tha, but woh marr chuka hai. Toh Jaw Long ke paas Veer ke info hona... Akhir ye kaise ho sakta hai? Kya ye sambhav hai?

Ye arc me 6-7 update baki hai almost 2 month lagenge disembowler arc me, okay I'll wait.

2 months? Maybe shayad. Ya ju zyada bol diye shayad. 1 month toh maan ke hi chalo. Ek update toh abhi hi aa jayega jaise hi ready ho jayega toh. Quality content likhne me samay lagta hai bhai. Aur saath hi mein kuch Aisa prepare kar raha hu jo abhi tak maine kahani me nahi introduce kiya hai. Agle update me uski ek jhalak dekhne ko mil jayegi. Meri khud ki imagination ke jitna qareeb le jaa sakta hu ju logo ko utna qareeb le jaunga.

Pichle 2-3 update par koi review nahi de paya, ab jyada kuch hai nahi kehne ko kyoki mystery solve ho gyi hai

Haan ye baat bhi hai. Ye last update bas majorly information Dene ke liye hi tha.

Bhawna laut kar aayi hai to veer ja chuka hai. Bachpan me veer bhawna ke sath nahi reh paya aur ab veer uss umra me hai jahan bache maa baap se alag hokar apne hisab se bahar ki duniya dekhte hai aur uspar veer ek system holder hai to uska to ek jagah tikna bahut mushkil hai, ye baat bhawna bhi samjhti hai ki veer kuch chhipa rha hai sabse.

Samajhti hai par kya tackle karegi Veer ko abki baar? Ye dekhne layak hoga. Kyuki, iss baar toh Tej aur Arohi dono hi nahi chorrne waali use.

Well I hope ki agle arc me veer aur nidhi ke sath sath, hame veer aur bhawna ka maa bete ka pyar bhi kuch detail me dekhne ko mile.

Agle update me Nidhi ka kaafi role hai aur bahut pyaara role hai. So, nidhi lovers ke liye agla arc best arc hone waala hai.
aur na sirf Nidhi, Sonia, Kaera, Bhavna, Shweta, Arohi, Kavya ye sab ke bhi alag se specific scenes honge. Basically, kuch seemiyaein laanghi jaa sakti hai. Kaafi progress honi hai next arc me.

Well, veer aur Divya ka mast scene tha, Divya ke liye pic bhi mast choose ki hai ju ne Esra bilgic ki...

Shuru se hi Divya ki wahi model chal rahi hai. Chosen models ki hi tasveere daalta hu. Ye nahi ki ek update me Divya alag dikh Rahi hai, aur dusre me alag dikhne lagi. Iss se lay toot jaati hai. Dimag me ek baar jo character baithao toh usi ka reference use karo.

Divya se yaad aya vo parijat Ghar vala update konsa hai, soch rha hu dubara padh lu....

Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, 120s me tha shayad. Shayad 128. Check kar lena. Agar wo nahi hua toh uske aas paas hi hoga.

Waiting for next update

Keep it up Werewolf

Bahut bahut dhanyvad bhai iss bade se revo ke liye. Ek lamba revo dekh ke hi mann prafullit ho jaata hai. Aisa lagta hai registaan me paani ka talaab mil gaya ho. Warna harr jagah ret hi ret (nice update, superb update) hi dekh dekh ke insaan marrne ki kagaar pe pahuch jaata hai. Saara motivation khatam ho jaata hai. Aur, fir Kalam nahi uthati kuch accha likhne ke liye.

Toh ju chand readers me se ho jinke revos padh ke mera din bann jaata hai. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka, aur revos dete rehne ka. Thanks once again, and keep supporting.

 

[LionHeart007]

4 toh confirm hai indeed. Par kya 4 se zyada ho sakte hai?

Hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai...
4 Kya 6 bhi ho sakte hain...
pr phir wohi baat k ho to Kuch bhi sakta hai kon jaane....

waise aisa bhi ho sakta hai k Renshu ki side bhi koi bnda ho jo System holder hoga J.Long ki taraf se...

pr chances shaayad utne nhi hain iske...


baaki jahan tak baat fight ki intensity ki Karen to woh to high hi rahe gi...
obviously Veer ki fight to alag hi level ki hogi bcz woh fight 2 system holders k beech hone waali hai... We don't know k j.long kis level ka system holder hai, kya woh Veer k level ka hai ya us se ooper k level ka...

pr lagta hai k zaroor woh kaafi high level ka hoga, maybe Veer k level ka pr shayad us se zeyaada ka hoga...
tabhi to fight zeyaada intense hogi...
or phir is baar to system ne bhi bohot Bada reward dena hai agr mission complete ho gaya to...
isi liye level to high rehne waala hai ...


baaki Renshu k liye bhi kuch easy nhi hone waala...
bhale hi agar uski side waale opponents non-System holder honge...
pr ek to ye tribe waalon ka ilaaqa hai to unhe iska edge rahe gaa...
phir unhon ne trap's bhi laga rakhe honge or unke paas pata nhi kaise kaise jadi-booti lage hathryaar, jin pr unhon ne Poison lagaya ho sakta hai like Arrow's, darts etc pr jungli chemical etc laga rakha hoga...

phir un logon k paas bhi to woh kuch jaadu tona type log hain naa...
OR Renshu k saath Erica k ilaawa sab normal humans hain, bhale hi unhe commandos honge or saath hi Order k trained fighters honge pr hain to woh normal log hi naa or unke saamne to Renshu or Erica apni special power jo unhe system ki wajha se mili hai usse show nhi kr sakte unless k koi or option naa bache...
or jab tak last option nhi aye gaa Renshu apni power hold hi Kare gaa...
ooper se phir Divya bhi unke saath hai to uske saamne to woh bilkul bhi apni reality nhi aane de sakta bcz woh ek Specialist hai ek FBCC Agent, jo choti se choti baareeki bhi bhaamp sakti hai to us se sambhal kr rehna pade gaa...

haan thoda bohot to Renshu power use kr gi sakta hai tribes k paas ancient special powers waale perceptions ki aad m...

bs ab dekhna hoga k sab kaise kaise hoga...

ye mission kaafi bada hone waala hai or episode's bhi kaafi lag sakte hain 4 se zeyaada bhi lag sakte hain...
Bcz ek hi time pr Veer alag side J.Long se lad raha hoga to same time Order Vs Legion alag side chal rha hoga...
phir Govt kya plan kr rhi hai, unka actual motive kya hai Renshu or FBCC ko ek hi time involve krne ka ?
phir saath hi jo Murder's ho rhe hain India m unke scene bhi aa sakte hain (shayad)
maybe Garofano ka scene confirmed nhi hai...
or bhi kuch cheezen clear hon gi jo sab saath saath hi chale ga...
i think k har update m scenes change bhi honge pr jo final battle hogi Veer or J.Long ki to scene lamba khinche gaaa or saath hi single motion (ek hi baar m dikhaaya jaye ga)...

baaki jo hona hai woh to ho kr hi rahe gaa...

umeed hamesha behtareen update ki rahti hai or uske poore hone k chances bhi high hi rehte hain aapse...
is baar bhi Kuch aisa hi hai..

pehle to personal life liye best of luck ..
Or story ko to aapne or bhi best banaana hi hai...

agle update ka shiddat se intezaar rahe ga...
but i know k it takes time to get completed so we'll wait...

 

[Werewolf]

सबसे पहले तो आप धन्यवाद अपडेट के लिए भाई, उम्दा से भी उम्दा लेखनी के साथ सटीक

Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai.

लड़की कम उम्र की ओर बिना ठोकर खाई हुई है। उसे कैसे पता होगा जीत का स्वाद या मोत का सामना कैसे होता है।
वो वीर को कच्चा निम्बू समझ रही है सुरु से ही उसे ये विस्वास नही हो रहा है। उसका बाप इस पर भरोसा क्यो कर रहा है।

Apni jagah woh sahi bhi hai. Usne bahar ki duniya hi nahi dekhi hai aur na hi kabhi jaan ka khatra mehsoos kiya hai ya fir kisi system owner se jee jaan ki ladayi ladi hai. Toh aise me uska aisa sochna swabhavik hai. Jald hi use ye pata lag jayega ki Veer kya cheez hai. Bas kuch updates ki hi baat hai.

आख़िर उसे समझ और परख के लिए वक्त भी नही मिला है। इस छोटे से नमूने से कुछ तो मानसिकता बदलेगी।

Bilkul!

अब वीर अकेले फाइट को जावा से लड़ने जा रहा है। यहां क्या परिस्तिति रहती है। ये कह भी नही सकते , वो लेखक की कलम बताएगी अनुमान लगा कर भी क्या उखाड़ लेगे

Mein ju logo ko aisi imagination karwaunga ki action kya hota hai uska saar jaan jaoge.

वैसे दिव्या को जरूरत थी। एक डोज की वो उसे दे दी गयी है। इसे अधिक या खुल कर ऐसी स्टोरी में मेरी नजर में तो सेक्स इतना ही दिखना चाहिए।

Kahani me sex ek hissa hai. Ye tabhi hoyega jaha zaroorat hogi. Be wajah readers ke liye nahi daala jayega. Na hi kabhi kiya gaya hai aur na hi kabhi hoga. Parantu, sex apne aap me ek ang hai harr kahani ka. Agar pyaar rahega toh intimate scenes swabhavik hai aayenge. Ye readers ke upar hai ki woh scenes skip karna chahte hai ya nahi. Kintu, meri kahani me sex scene me bhi infor chhipi mil sakti hai. Toh instructions yahi rahenge ki unhe padha jaaye. Warna baad me pata chala kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki ye vartalaap kab ho gaya.

क्यो की यहां भावना या जज्बात खुल कर लिखे जा सकते है। कहानी को एक अच्छा प्लेटफॉर्म देने के लिए , बाकी सेक्स को लंबा लेना या दिखा देना स्टोरी की रूप रेखा सी ही बदल देता है

Jaisa ki maine kaha. Sex utna hi dikhaya jayega jitna aavashyak hoga. Kyuki, ye sex based story nahi hai toh mainly sex iska focus hi nahi hai. Lekin, completely use exclude bhi nahi kiya jayega.

क्यो की इस कहानी का मूल बेस सिस्टम है। जो बना ही कुछ स्पेशल करने के लिए है। अब वो भी चुदाई ओर खुदाई में फस जाएगा।तो लंका ही लग जायेगी

Chudayi dikhaane se kahani kharab nahi ho jaati. Kitna sex aur kaha par dikhaane hai ye tay karte hai ki kahani ki theme kya chal rahi hai. Agar harr thodi derr me unhe daala jaa raha hai, toh ye readers samajh sakte hai ki kahani ka base kya hai. Baaki, shuru se ant tak kahani mere according hi chali hai aur wesi hi jayegi. Kahani ab uss level par hai jaha readers suggestions de hi nahi sakte khaas kar plot ko leke. Unse kayi guna aage ki mein pehle hi soch ke baitha hu. Toh ye kahani suggestions dene waali hai hi nahi.

Bas lay ke saath chalte jaana hoga. Bahut bahut dhanyavad sundar se revo ke liye Bhai. Yuhi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting.

 

[Lallu]

Super update dear

 

[Werewolf]

Chlo intjaar rhega agle update ka but try karna jaldi Dene ka but I know job bhi jaruri hai uspe koi iffect aaye Bina hi dena bhai ...

Bhai, update toh tabhi aayega jab ready hoga. Ab usme mein try bhi karu toh kuch nahi ho sakta kyuki mein job se fursat jab hounga, ghar aaunga, dinner karunga, uska baad jo samay milega usi me thoda bahut likh paunga. Zaroori nahi hai ki ek din me kayi saare shabd likh diye jaaye.
Ho sakta hai ki ek din khaali sochne me hi nikal jaaye ki kaise sab kuch dikhana hai update me. Ho sakta hai ki ek din pictures edit karne me hi nikal jaaye. Kyuki hardly mujhe 1-2 ghante hi milte hai raat ke. Toh jaise hi update ready hoga, woh post kar diya jayega. Time ke aage mein kuch nahi kar sakta.

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Tow Jung ka bigul baj Chuka
System ne bhi mission de dia seedha Logan se bhdne ka ab dekhte kitne khaternaak rasto se gujerna padta h
Divya or Veer ke payar pal badi khoobsurati likha
Erica ke Dil ke taar bhi jhan Khana gaye h
Dekhte h kia hota h
Bahot badhiya zabardast shaandar update

Logan? Oh! You mean... Jaw Long? Beshaq! Veer ko mission mil chuka hai.
Baaki, bahut bahut dhanyavad. Yuhi saath bane rehne ka.

Super duper awesome update Werewolf bhai...

Ab asli action hoga....

Shukriya.

Brilliant update

Veer or Divya k bich sex scene acha laga

Renshu ne apne hisab se 1 game khela tha shayad Jo veer ko choice di k Kahan Jana chahta hai

Veer ko phir misson bhi mil gaya jiska reward kuch bahut bada hai woh kya hai yeh aage pata chal jayega

Tho Jung ki shuruaat ho chuki dekhte hai ki kya hota
Jaw long kya Bala hai yeh dekhna hog

Veer aur Divya ke beech ye scene aana hi tha. This was the perfect timing. Baad me ise dikhaya nahi jaa sakta tha.

You are right. Renshu ne game hi khela tha jab Veer ko choose karne kaha. Reward jo bhi hai Veer ke liye bahut badh ke hai.

Thanks a lot and keep supporting.

Mast lajawab action garma garam update sir ji

Erica aur veer ka bhi kuchh scene rakhna Bhai

Next update ka intezaar rahega.....................

Waiting action update

Erica aur Veer filhal toh ek dusre se alag hai. Jab milenge tab dekhenge kya hota hai. Thanks and keep supporting.

Finally action is about to begin ! It is going to be damn interesting & horrific too as Veer is going to battle with another system owner which is going to be one hell of a battle, no quarters given nor taken . Veer has silenced Divya for the present with his erotic relationship with her. Erica too is worried about Veer's safety, hence she's marked him with her unique skill unknown to him. Renshu for his part has made his final move to free the mine . Now let's wait and watch how Veer confronts Long and take him head on

Erica's skill is called Blemish. She can mark non-living things and when these non-living marked things go under some sort of any changes she will come to know instantly whether something has been done to those things. That's how she came to know when Veer opened the envelope back then.
Next update will show you what true action means. Thanks a lot and keep supporting.

Aadha ghanta hai lga hai padne me ek ek line 2-3 bar pd raha tha bhai gajab... Lekin ek rqs hai.. Jitne bhi system holders unka stats bhi btaya kro sath me.. Jab bhi story me koi system holder aaye to uska stats batana to banta hai.. Waiting for next update.. Bcoz.. Wait nahi hota ab fight dekhni hai..

Unke status banaane me kitna samay lagega ju jaante ho? Khaali Veer ka hi update karne me mujhe kitna samay lag jaata hai. But of course uska ye matlab nahi hai ki baaki system ke stats dekhne ko nahi milenge.
Yes! You will get to see other system's full status as well. Aur, isliye aane waale updates mere liye aur bhi samay lene waale hai. Toh sabr rakhna. Thanks and keep supporting.

ek dum faadu upadte
bahot time k baad veer ka intimate seen ayaa
divya ko insab se bahar rakhna bhaot badhiya kyunki yaha system oners ki fight hone wali hai
jisme kab kya hojaye koi nahi janata
akele east side jana aur jow long se bhidna ye bahot dangerous hone wala hai
but erica ne veer ke kapdo par blemish use kiya hai isse usse pata chal jayega ki veer ki kya halat hai
ab aage dekhte hai kya hota hai
keep writing bro

Basically, Veer ki shirt ya vest ke saath chedh chaadh hogi toh Erica ko pata lag jayega ki Veer ke saath kuch hua hai. Toh ye ek acchi skill hai. Aur, Erica ne uska prayog bhi acchi tarah se kiya hai. Baaki, hum dekhte hai ki Jaw Long ke viruddh kya hoga. Thanks and keep supporting.

Lagta he jaw long crimson se v kahi jyada powerfull he

Isn't it obvious? Ye toh zaahir si baat hai ki woh Crimson se strong hone wala hai. Akhir Veer bhi toh pehle se strong hai. Crimson se weak villain ke aane ka sawal hi paida nahi hota. Bar hi aisa set kar diya hai ki readers ko yakeen nahi ho raha ki Crimson se taqatvar aur kya villians laayenge writer sahab. Arre dekhte jao Bhai. Sabr rakhne ka aur bas padhne ka. Thanks and keep supporting.

 

[Premkumar65]

Update- 27 ~ A Lesson to be Taught (2)
​

Ab tak....

Veer (mann me) : Bhumika... Dii...

Bhumika (mann me) : V... Veeeeer!!!???

Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Veer ke chehre pe jaha koi bhaav nahi the toh wahi Bhumika ekdum stabdh sii khadi usse hi dekh rahi thi. Sabse pehla sawaal mann me yahi tha. Kya ye wahi Veer hai!?

Ab aage...

Bhumika ek professional attire me waha bhauchakki sii khadi saamne baithe Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kya ye wahi Veer tha!?

Kese!?

Jis Veer ko usne ghar se nikalta hua dekha tha, ye Veer...

Ye Veer uss Veer se kahi zyaada smart, aakarshak, aur kuch alag sa prateet ho raha tha.

Par uss se bhi bada sawaal tha ki Veer yaha kya kar raha tha!? Aur wo bhi Sonia jesi ameer lady ke saath!? Wo bhi uske bagal me baith kar!?

Usse subah hi pata laga tha ki aaj Sonia Miss uski hotel me firse aane waali hai. Aur wo Sonia ko jaanti thi. Kyuki aksar Sonia uski hotel me coffee peene aaya karti thi. Toh thodi boht pehchaan uski uss se ho chuki thi. Aaj wo kisi kaam ke chalte late ho gayi thi hotel aane me aur isliye wo hotel me aate hi seedha sabse pehle Sonia ke hi paas aayi usse welcome karne.

Kyuki wahi hamesha uska welcome karti thi. Par aaj...

Aaj usse ek jhatka sa laga jab usne apne uss sautele bhai ko dekha jisse kuch hafte pehle ghar se nikaal diya gaya tha. Aur usse ab aur bhi ajeeb sii feelings aa rahi thi.

Ghar me Veer uske sapno me kayi baar aa chuka tha aur harr baar uska antarmann uss se ye sawaal puchta tha ki kya jo bhi kuch Veer ke saath wo sabhi kar rahe hai, kya wo sahi hai!?

Ye baat usne apni Maa, Shweta ko bhi bataayi thi. Par uski Maa ne keval ye keh ke baat taal dii thi, ki wo jo bhi kar rahe hai apne liye kar rahe hai aur usme kuch bhi bura nahi hai. Jab Veer se aaj tak usne baat hi naa ki toh fir uske liye hamdardi kyu feel karna!?

Ye Shweta ke bol the par kahi na kahi, Bhumika ko darr zaroor rehta tha.

Wo abhi ekdum stabdh sii khadi hui Veer ko dekh rahi thi ki uske bagal me baithi Sonia ne dono ki hi nazro ko bhaampa aur pucha,

"You... You both know each other!?"

Usne khade hote hue kaha. Uski achanak aayi awaaz jese Bhumika ko hosh me laayi aur Veer aur usne dono ne hi saath me jawaab diya.

Veer : She's my sis...

Bhumika : No I don't...

Aur agle hi pal ek khamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Par Bhumika ko jese next second hi realize hua ki usne kya keh diya. Wo kehna toh yahi chaahti thi par usne ye tab kaha jab Veer ne just usse uski behan kehke introduce kiya.

Ek prakaar se jaha Veer ye accept kar raha tha ki wo uski behan thi toh wahi dusri taraf Bhumika khud iss baat ko jhutla rahi thi.

Sharmindagi!

Ab uske mann me wo vichaar aane firse shuru ho gaye the jinhe wo kabse dabaayi hui thi. Bechaini ke maare uska seena upar neeche hone laga.

Wo apna muh khol khud ko correct karti par uske pehle hi Veer bol utha.

"Ah! Right!! Right! We... We don't know each other..." Kehte hue usne ek muskaan ke saath apni nazre ferr li.

Jis awkward mahaul se Bhumika bachna chaah rahi thi wo toh Veer ne hi yu dur kar diya tha uske liye ye agree kar ke. Ki wo dono hi ek dusre ko nahi jaante. Ab Bhumika ko toh yaha raahat ki saas le leni chaahiye thi.

Par...

Aisa hua nahi.

Ulta Bhumika aur bhi zyaada ajeeb feel karne lagi. Uski bechaini aur bhi badh chuki thi. Veer ko yu muskuraate hue uski baat par agree karte pata nahi kyu par...

Bhumika ko zara bhi accha nahi lag raha tha. Wo uss waqt kya feel kar rahi thi wo khud nahi bayaa kar sakti thi. Aisi feeling usse iske pehle kabhi nahi hui thi. Aur ye feeling boht hi zyaada dard de rahi thi usse andar se. Veer ki muskaan jese cheenkh cheenkh ke uss se keh rahi thi ki tum logo ne boht galat kiya hai mere saath. Bhumika andar hi andar behad darr rahi thi...

Bhumika : I...

Uske honth khule par dimaag jese kaam karna band kar diya tha. Usse soojh hi nahi raha tha ki kya kaha jaaye.

Bagal me khadi Sonia chup chaap saamne ho rahe scene ko badi hi hairaani se dekh rahi thi. Par boli kuch nahi.

Ant me Bhumika ne jab dekha ki Veer bina uski taraf dekhe, uss se nazre ferre waapas apni seat par baith chuka hai toh usne jese tese apni himmat jutaayi aur Sonia ko dekha.

Bhumika : I... I have some urgent work Miss. Please! Please Enjoy! If you need anything, you can just ask the manager. Now, Please... Excuse me!

Kehte hue wo Veer ko ek antim baar dekhi, par Veer ne uski taraf ek baar bhi palat ke nahi dekha. Apna nichla honth daato se bechaini me dabaaye wo waha se tezz kadmo ke saath nikal gayi.

Uske palatate hi Veer ne apni nazre tedhi kar usse dekha. Badi hi ghabraayi aur bechain sii lag rahi thi woh. Aur kuch hi palo me wo Veer ki nazro se ojhal ho chuki thi.

Par Veer ne ek kaam zaroor kiya tha jab wo idhar khadi hui thi. Aur wo tha..

'Check!'

[ Name - Bhumika
Age - 25 years.
Bio - Bhumika ek behad hi savendansheel ladki hai. Wo apni hotel ko apni Mom ke saath aage badha ke poore sheher me apni hotel ka naam karna chaahti hai. Uske kayi saare sapne hai jo keval uske career yani ki uski apni hotel se hi jude hue hai. Maa ki kahi gayi baato par chalti hai kyuki uski Maa hi uski sabse badi idol hai. Mann me kayi sawaal hai uske aur ek gehri chinta, saath hi saath ek ajeeb sa darr bhi jisse wo samajh nahi paa rahi hai.

Favourability - 14
Relationship - Step Sister.]

'14 favourability?? I never thought ki unki favourability itni hogi mere liye!? Mujhe toh laga tha zero hogi.'

[Still, ye bhi kam hi hai master. Wo aapki behan hai Sauteli. Aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Aap log ek hi ghar me rehte the.]

'Well! Kabhi baat hi nahi hoti thi. Uss hisaab se toh ye 14 bhi zyaada hai mere liye.'

[Baat nahi hoti thi!? Hmm... I searched your memories. Waqai! Aapki toh baat hi nahi hoti thi. Just how ridiculous this is... Aap Hi, Hello bolte the and she just used to see you and ignore!? How can she!?]

'Well! She doesn't have any interest in me so...'

[And she'll pay for that!!]

'Huh!?''

Pata nahi kyu par pal bhar ke liye Veer ko Pari ki awaaz me naraazgi aur gussa dono hi feel hua.

***

Idhar Bhumika tezz kadmo ke saath chalte hue seedhe apne cabin me aayi aur darwaaza andar se hi lock karke wo darwaaze se satt ke khadi ho gayi.

'Why!? Why is he here? Just why? I... Why is he with Miss Sonia? Wo unhe kese jaanta hai? He... He said I was his sis... And I... I denied it. Kya mene sahi kiya tha!?'

Usne khud se sawaal kiya aur pal bhar ke liye apni Maa, Shweta ko imagine kiya ki yadi wo yaha hoti toh kya jawaab deti?

Meri bacchi! Tumne ekdum sahi kiya. Bhul jao usse. Wo ab hamaare ghar ka sadsya nahi hai meri bacchi. Hume bas apne upar dhyaan dena hai beti. Humne waada kiya tha na? Ki hum humesha ek dusre ka saath denge? Aur keval apne liye hi sochenge? Toh bhul jao sab kuch meri bacchi.

Bhumika ko jese apni Maa ke bol mann me hi sunaayi de rahe the. Yadi wo yaha hoti toh aisa hi kuch kehti.

Par iske bawajood, uska antarmann cheenkh cheenkh ke keh raha tha ki...

Jo kuch bhi usne Veer ke saath kiya, wo nahi karna chaahiye tha. Baahar bhi usne jo abhi kaha, uske chalte usse ab glaani ke bhaav aa rahe the. Saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii bechaini jo uske dil ko andar se hi nichodti jaa rahi thi.

***

Idhar Veer apni sauteli behan Bhumika ke hi baare me soch raha tha toh Pari ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi,

[Master! Sonia is looking at you... You have to explain it to her.]

'Huh? Ah! Yeah... Right!'

Sonia hairat me Bhumika ko jaate dekhi aur fir Veer ko. Wo baithi aur Veer se puchne hi waali thi ki Veer khud hi bol pada.

Veer : You seem surprised!?

Sonia : Of course I am... Wo...

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe laga tha jese aapne meri saari details nikalwa li, including my phone number toh ye bhi aapko pata hi hoga...

Sonia : ?? Huh? No... I'm sorry Veer but...

Veer : She's my sister!

Sonia : ???

Veer : ...

Sonia : No waaaayyyy!!!

Veer : *smiles*

Sonia : Ohh god! Oh nooo! Mene ye... Trust me Veer! Mera bilkul bhi aisa koi iraada nahi tha. Ki tumhe... Tumhe yaha mene jaan boojh ke bulaaya ho. I really... I really didn't know about this at all.

Veer : Don't worry! Mene aisa kabhi nahi samjha. So, you don't have to...

Sonia : Oh Thank god! Right! Mene Prakash uncle se keh ke tumhare baare me information nikalwaayi thi but... I only know ki tumhari kuch behne hai aur bhai and tumhare Dad kya kaam karte hai and all. But itna details me mujhe info nahi thi. Mujhe bilkul bhi nahi pata tha..

Veer : As I said... It's okay!

Sonia : Yeah! Thanks! So!?? Umm... I mean... She's your sister. Toh wo aise kyu...!?

Veer : She's my step sister. And rahi baat wo aisa kyu behave kar rahi hai then... I think it's personal!?

Sonia : Ahh! Right! Sorry! If it's personal then...

Sonia Veer se nazre churaate hue idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur mann me apne hi vichaaro me leen ho gayi.

'Itne dino se mein Bhumika se yaha milti aayi. Aur wo Veer ki step sis hai!? Thank god ki Veer ne mujhe galat nahi samjha. Warna wo yadi ye soch leta ki mene uska mazaak banaane ke liye yaha jaan boojh ke uski behan ki hotel me usse bulaaya hai toh gadbad ho jaati. Wese hi wo pehle ki misunderstanding mene dur nahi ki hai, aur ussi ke liye toh mene usse bulaaya hai yaha. Par... Veer ki behan... Wo aise kyu react kar rahi thi!? Like I know ki Veer ke Dad ne usse ghar se nikaala tha. But... Kya uski behan bhi... wesi hi hai!? Mujhe Bhumika se baat karte hue toh aisa kabhi mehsoos nahi hua.'

Veer : Ahem!!!

Sonia : Huh!? Ah! Yeah... Wo...

Veer : Why did you call me!?

Sonia : Ah! Right! Veer... Mene tumhe isliye bulaaya tha... Wo pichhli mulaqaat me humaare beech jo bhi baatein hui thi paiso ko lekar wo ek misunderstanding thi. Trust me, mera aisa koi bhi iraada nahi tha jesa Suhana dii ne tumhe bataaya tha. Like... Paise se tumhara ehsaan chukaana and all... Mein wo sab isliye karna chaahti thi because... Mere paas tumhe dene ke liye kuch aur nahi hai Veer. And I thought... ki you are definitely in need of money. It will help you... Trust me... Mera uske peeche koi bhi galat intention nahi tha. I just...

Wo bina chup hue bas bolti hi jaa rahi thi. Aur Veer ka yu usse bina koi bhaav ke dekhna jese usse aur apne aap ko begunaah saabit karne me majboor karta jaa raha tha. Wo Veer ki khaamoshi dekhti aur apne nichle honth ko dabaate hue firse apne bol chaalu kar deti. Wo koi bhi kasar nahi chorr rahi thi usse convince karne me.

Aur ant me Veer finally uski baatein sunte sunte muskuraaya jiske chalte Sonia chup ho gayi.

Sonia : ???

Veer (smiles) : I get it. It's alright! Aapka koi galat intention nahi tha. Then, I don't blame you.

Sonia (sighs) : Ohhh God! Thank you so much... Thank you! Finally!

Wo abhi baithe hi hue the ki achanak se aa rahi chahal pahal ki awaaz sunn dono ke chehre entrance ki orr mud gaye aur unhone dekha ki...

Suhana 5 se 6 ladies ke saath hassti hui andar aa rahi hai.

'Fuck! Why her!?'

[Even I don't like her master.]

Wo hasste hasste Sonia ke paas aayi aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Suhana : My Sonu! Le aayi na!?

Sonia : Hmm!

Suhana ne fir bagal me baithe Veer ko dekha aur usse dekhti hi uski bauhe chadh gayi.

Suhana (shocked) : Tummm!?? What are you doing here?

Sonia : Diiiiiiii!!!! Mene bulaaya hai usse. Mein aapke liye le aayi hu na, ab aap jaaiye na baatein kariye apni friends ke saath.

Suhana : Wo toh mein karungi hi. Par isse kyu bulaaya hai tumne yaha par!?

Sonia : I have my reasons. Ab aap jaaiye please.

Suhana : Of course I'll go. Pehle wo do toh...

Sonia : Hmm ye lijiye aur boht sambhal ke haa!?

Suhana : I know baba...

Sonia ne fir ek packet ke andar se ek box nikaala air Suhana ko thama diya.

Suhana ne wo chota box apne haath me lete hi Veer ko dekha aur pata nahi kya soojha par wo muskuraayi.

Wo wahi muskaan liye Veer ke paas aayi aur uske bagal se khadi ho gayi.

Suhana : Girls! Come here!!!

Peeche khadi ek se ek sundar mahilaaye jo uski hi umr yaani ki 29-30 saal ki jo prateet ho rahi thi aur newly married thi wo aage badh khushi ke maare uske peeche se aake saath me khadi ho gayi.

Sabhi ladies Veer ke ekdum paas khadi hui thi. Aur sabki nazro se Veer ke nain takraaye. Na chaahte hue bhi Veer yaha sharma gaya. Itni saari ek saath aurato ko aise apne kareeb kabhi nahi paaya tha usne akhir.

Ek kutil muskaan dete hue Suhana ne box khola aur uske andar ek aur behad hi chota sa box nikla. Ek ring ka box.

Jese hi Suhana ne usse khola...

Sabhi ki nazro me ek behad hi khubsoorat sii ring dikhaayi di.

Ek Diamond Ring.

Kareeb 5 se 10 carat ke beech ki thi wo diamond ring.

Itni sundar ki saari ladies waha muh khole ekdum shaant pad gayi.

Suhana khud ring dekh ke maano kho sii gayi thi usme. Itni aakarshak, itni khubsoorat ring usne shayad hi pehle kabhi dekhi thi.

Suhana : It's beautiful right!?

Veer : ...

Suhana (smiles) : Do you know how much it costs?

Veer : ....

Suhana (smiles) : Fucking 1.57 crores...

Maano ek bomb sa giraaya tha Suhana ne price disclose karte hi. Saath me khadi sabhi ladkiyo ki price sunn ke hi haalat khasta ho gayi thi.

1.57 Crore ki anguthi!?

Suhana (smiles) : With a brilliant cut... Batao! Kabhi dekhi hai aisi anguthi!?

Usne box aage karte hue Veer ke chehre ke saamne kiya jese maano uske muh me hi ghused degi. Haalat toh Veer ki bhi sahi nahi thi andar se price sunn'ne ke baad. Par unn sab ke bawajood uske apne chehre par koi bhi bhaav nahi vyakt kiya.

Wo bas expressionless Suhana ko dekh raha tha, jese maano anguthi thi hi nahi uske saamne.

Suhana : Bolo!? Kabhi dekhi hai aisi ring? Ring chorro kabhi zindagi me 1.57 crores rupaye sune hai kisi ke muh se? Kabhi itna mehnga samaan dekha hai?

Sonia (frowns) : Diiii! What are you...!?

Suhana : Shaant Sonu! Let me teach him something.

Veer : ...

Suhana : Bolo!? Kabhi dekha hai? I guess ye ring tumse bhi mehngi hogi hahahaha~

Uski baatein sunn uske saath aayi ladies bhi hassne lagti hai. Wahi sophisticated way me, ek haath se apna muh dhakte hue halka halka khil khila ke hassna, jese maano boht hi pyaara sa joke maara tha Suhana ne. Paisa bolta hai. Suhana ke paas paisa tha jiske chalte uske saath aayi uski saheliya bhi uski baat par hass rahi thi ye jaante hue bhi ki kisi ki beizzati karna sahi baat nahi thi.

Itna sense unn sabhi me tha. Par paisa jese sab ko jhuka deta hai.

Veer abhi bhi bina koi reaction diye keval Suhana ko dekh raha tha. Suhana bhi jese jaanti thi ki akhir kab tak aise dekhega. Wo jese Veer ko bataana chaahti thi ki paisa hi sab kuch hai aur Veer se qubool karwaana chaahti thi ki paisa hi sab kuch hai. Badi badi deenge maari thi uss din Veer ne usse ye keh ke ki paisa ek din usse le doobega. Uss baat ko bhuli nahi thi Suhana. Aaj wo yahi saabit karna chaahti thi ki issi paise se wo Veer ko iss baar sharmindagi ke saagar me duboegi.

Suhana : You know girls!?

Girls : Hmm?

Suhana : This guy... Fufu~ My dearest Sister Sonu offered him money... And this guy... You know what he did???

Wo sabhi prashn bhari aankho se usse dekhi...

Suhana : This guy fucking rejected it... Hahahaha~

"Whaaaat!?"
"No wayyyyy!"
"Really!?"
"Who the hell rejects Money?"
"I'm sorry to say! But are you nuts boy?"
"Like seriously!?"

Wo khadi sabhi Veer pe ek ek karke apne prashno se taane maarne lagi. Uspe tanj kassne lagi.

Par Veer fir bhi nahi dagmagaaya...

Uski aankho me jese ek sankalp tha. Dridhta thi. Ki wo chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye inn fizool ki baato se nahi dagmagaega.

Aur kahi na kahi uska ye attitude Suhana ko aur bhi zyaada gussa dila raha tha. Itna sab kuch keh dene ki baad bhi Veer ne koi reaction nahi diya tha jiske chalte ab Suhana ka paara chadh raha tha. Usse toh laga tha jald hi Veer uss se maafi maang ke kahega ki aap sahi ho aur mein galat.

Par aisa kuch bhi nahi hua. Ulta Veer ki wo stare usse aur bhi zyaada piss off kar rahi thi.

"Youuuuu" Apne daanto ko meeste hue usne ghur ke Veer ko dekha.

Aur fir apne ek haath uski table par patakte hue chillaayi,

Suhana : Don't think I don't understand. I know tum andar hi andar seham gaye ho right? You don't have any answer now. Kaha gayi tumhari wo aadarsh wali baatein? Wo badi badi jo tum philosophy ki baatein fek rahe the uss din? Kya kaha tha tumne? Mujh me ghamand hai paiso ko lekar? Toh haa hai mujh me ghamad paiso ka kyuki mera paas paisa hai. Samjhe you idiot!? I have fucking money.

Veer : .....

Suhana : Youuuu.... Youuuu... I know you are scared now. Mene bolti jo band kar dii ab tumhari. Money can buy everything idiot. Everything! Even happiness. Bewakoof hote hai wo log jo kehte hai money can't buy happiness. Sab kuch toh paisa hi hai. Ye wahi log kehte hai jinke paas paisa nahi hota. Money brings you happiness. Khushiyaa deta hai paisa. Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Sab kuch possible hai paise se. Samjhe!? And you fucking keep that in your mind now.

[What the helllll!? What is up with her?? I'll kill this fucking bitch. How dare she!?? How dare she insult my master!? You don't know fucking bitch who my master is... You have no idea you moron. He'll become a King. A fucking King. You're not even worthy to become my master's servant bitch... You... Master! Teach her a fucking lesson. Make her your bitch. Show her who you are... Master... Master!?? Masterrrr????]

Pari ko na jaane ekdum se kya ho gaya tha ki wo nonstop itni gaaliya dii Suhana ko ki Veer khud stabdh reh gaya tha. Uski bolti band ho gayi thi Pari ka aisa bartaav dekh. Par Veer fir bhi kuch nahi bola. Na hi Suhana ko aur na hi Pari ko.

[Ahh... Ahem! *Cough* I'm... I'm sorry Master! I got carried away.]

Suhana : Let's go girls! Aao! Let's move to our table. He doesn't know anything about money.

Wo kehte hue Veer ke bagal se kisi hawa ke jhoke ki tarah nikal gayi. Aur saath hi saath uske sang aayi saheliya bhi.

Unke peeche waali hi Table par wo sabhi jaake baithi aur baari baari ring dekhne lagi.

Idhar Veer ki nazar jese hi Sonia par padi usne dekha ki wo....

Apna nichla honth zorr se bheenche Veer ko badi hi hamdardi aur udaasi se dekh rahi thi. Maano bas ro hi degi.

Uske honth khule par fir band ho gaye. Kya jawaab de wo Veer ko kuch soch nahi paa rahi thi.

"I'm sorry!"

Kuch derr baad finally uske muh se ye do shabd nikle.

"I'm sorry!"

Firse...

Uske baad jese usne kayi baar ye shabd keh daale.

Sonia : Dii... Wo aisi hi hai. I cannot control her. I shouldn't have called you here. Mene... Mene tumhe yaha apni misunderstanding dur karne ke liye bulaaya tha. And look... Kya hua!? Ek aur nayi misunderstanding khadi ho gayi... I'm so sorry! Dii ki taraf se bhi... Please! Veer! Don't take it to your heart.

Veer : ....

[Master!!! Atleast... Talk to me.]

Veer iss waqt na hi mann me kuch soch raha tha aur na hi koi jawaab de raha tha. Uski nazar ekdum ekdum sthir thi. Wo khud maun tha, par uska ye maun jese sab pe bhaari pad raha tha. Yaha tak ki Suhana bhi piss off hoke chali gayi thi uske iss maun ke kaaran.

Sonia : Darasal, wo Ring... Wo Ring Dad ne banwa ke mangwayi hai baahar se. And it's diamond. Around 8 to 9 carats. Kal Mom ka b'day hai isliye, Dad wanted to surprise her. Ye ab tak ki sabse mehngi ring hai jo Dad Mom ko dene jaa rahe hai. And, Dii wanted to flaunt... Unhe ye sab accha lagta hai... Apni friends ko ye sab dikhaana. Wo shuru se hi aise rahi hai. Isliye...

Veer : .....

Sonia : Please! Don't be like that Veer... You are making me nervous... At least kuch toh bol do. I know tum behad naraaz ho mujhse. Please! At least say something.

Veer aur uski baat chal rahe 15 minutes guzar chuke the jisme Veer ne ab tak kuch nahi kaha tha. Wo bas Sonia ki hi baatein sunta jaa raha tha. Aur Sonia bechari ko ye aur bhi zyada nervous kar raha tha.

Wo abhi kuch aur baatein rakhti ki tabhi ekdum se lights saari band ho gayi.

Sonia : Lights!??

Wese toh din ka samay tha par andar se hotel poori lights pe hi dependent rehti thi kyuki baahar ki roshni nahi aati thi special reservation area me. Log dim lights me hi baatein karna pasand karte the isliye wo area hi wesa banaya gaya tha.

Kareeb 5 minute lag gaye jab lights waapas se aayi.

Suhana : What the hell? Ye lights kyu chali gayi thi achanak se!?

Girl : Hmm!? Oyye Suhana!? Ring kaha hai??

Suhana : Huh!??

Maano ye baat sunte hi Suhana ka dil zorr se dhadak utha.

Usne apne sofe ke bagal me dekha jaha pehle ring ka box rakha hua tha. Par wo chota box ab gaayab tha.

Aur ye bhaampte hue uski aankhein felti chali gayi.

"Nooooooooo!!!"

Wo hadbada ke khadi hui aur shor machaate hue idhar udhar samaan karte hue dekhne lagi. Aur kuch hi palo me waha ka mahual shaant se ekdum ast vyast ho gaya.

Shor sharaaba sunte hi Sonia bhi uthi aur bhaagte hue Suhana ke paas aayi.

Sonia : K.. kya hua?

Suhana (ghabraate hue) : S...Sonu! Sonu! Meri behan... Sonu ring... Wo ring... Ring kahi nahi mil rahi...

Sonia (shocked) : Whaaaaaaaatttt!???

Aur agle hi pal Suhana jo kuch derr pehle hi itna hass rahi thi wo mote mote aasu bahaate hue rone lagi.

[That's what you get bitch!! Hahahaha~ Master! Look at her... She totally deserved it. Fuck you bitch.]

Sonia se liaptate hue wo zorr zorr se rone lagi. Aur waha ka mahual khush-haal se ekdum tensed ho gaya.

Suhana (cries) : Mene yahi rakhi thi. Trust me! Mene just yahi rakhi thi Sonu... But achanak se light gayi and uske baad... Uske baad jese hi light aayi box yaha nahi tha... I... Dad boht gussa hoenge Sonu... Mom ke liye... It... It was surprise gift... Sonu... Sonuuuuuuu.... *Sniff* Sonuuuu...

Wo lipte hue zorr zorr se ro rahi thi. Sonia ne khud ko sambhaalte hue seedha hotel ke manager ko bulaaya. Usse saari baat bataayi aur sabhi staff ki talaashi lene ko kaha. Yaha tak ki sabhi cameras ke cctv bhi check karne ko keh diya.

Bhumika ko jab ye baat pata chali toh woh bhaagti hui reservation area me aayi aur waha ka mahaul dekhte hi uski haalat patli ho gayi.

1.57 Crore ki ring... Uske hotel se chori ho gayi!??
Maano jese saare hotel se jude sapne usko apni aankho ke saamne bikharte dikh rahe the.

Usne Sonia ki baat rakhte hue sab kuch uske saamne prastut kar diya. Cctv footages se lekar staff ki talaashi tak.

Par jo result mila...

Wo hila dene wala tha.

Na toh staff ke paas se kuch mila, na hi waha ke poore area se.

Sabse chaunka dene wala sach tha cctv ka sach. Jab light gayi toh cctv kaam karna hi band kar diya tha. Aur jese hi light aayi, waapas se chaalu ho chuka tha.

Maano jese kisi ne plan ke saath chori ki ho.

Aur jese hi ye baat sabko samajh aayi...

Suhana (cries) : Noooooo!!! This can't be... Noooo...

Wo rone lagi... Par tabhi uske kaano me awaaz padi...

"Money can buy happiness!"

Usne dekha...

Saamne Veer apne jeb me haath daale khada hua tha.

Veer : Didn't you said that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you said that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them...

Veer ki baat se iss baar Suhana ki baari thi bolti band ho jaane ki. Wo aankhein faade Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uske honth thar-thara rahe the, par ek bhi shabd virodh ka baahar nahi aa raha tha.

Veer : Remember! Paiso ka ghamand hamesha le doobta hai.

Wo itna bola aur palat ke waha se jaane laga, Bhumika samet sabhi logo ko ascharya bhaav me chorr...

Par tabhi...

*Ding*

[Mission : The Chase
Info - Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring.

Rewards - 1) ?? Points.
2) Life time favour from Suhana.

Time Limit - 6 days.]

'Fuuuuccckkkkkkk!!!'
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Don't forget to like.

Great message through your stories. Very well plotted.

 

[Samir2020]

Waiting for next update

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai Action to isme bhi thaa magar bed per action hua hain. Wah ji wah kia update thaa ek taraf Erica ko provoke kar ke uska atamvishwash jagaya aur usay ek move me hara kar usko uska current halat bhi batayi ki abhi bohat seekhna hain usay.

Waah kya soch hai. Agar aise socha jaaye toh har cheez me action hai. Hai na?

Ab veer ko abhi tak ka sabse bada mission Mila hai aur shayad ab tak ka sab se khatarnak bhi specially Crimson mission ke baad.

Yes. Upar se Veer ko Jaw Long ki koi jankari nahi hai aur na hi territory ka koi gyaan hai.

Yaha Veer ke ab tak ke character ki pariksha hogi Puri. Lagta hai jaisay system apne owner ki ek tarah se pariksha Lena chahta hai taki survival of the fittest ho sakey tabhi ek system owner Wale ko doosrey se bhidwa raha hai.

Aisa zaroori nahi. Aise toh fir Renshu aur Veer hi aapas me lad lete. Survival of the fittest pehle hi ho jaata.

Yaha par bhi 5 owners hai total un me se koi na koi 2 shayad Kam ho jaye ya atleast koi ek to Kam hoga hi.
Bohat badiya update aur ab next update se Dhoom dharam shuru asli action.

5 owners? Ek toh Veer ho gaya. Dusra Renshu, teesri Erica aur chautha Jaw Long. Paachnva kaun aa gaya? Btw thanks a lot and keep supporting man.

Great update. Lagta hai ki ladai se pehle ka yeh ek warm-up update tha. Isme erotism tha, woman's jealousy thi, Veer ke liye chinta thi, aur ladai ki planning thi.

Ye update informational tha basically. Jisme intimate scene included tha.

I agree, Apni strength ko hi exploit karna chahiye, so that one gives one's best for the mission.

Utilise your strength.

Kyon bacchi ko jala rahe ho.

It is what it is.

To Pari ko bhi nahi chhoda, use bhi jala diya.

Kya woh personality best nahi thi?

Kya aur kam thi jo isko bhi Veer apne uper lattoo kar raha hai, may be unknowingly

Shuru se hi toh woh aisa hai. Use pata bhi nahi chalta ki usne kab kisi ladki ko apne upar lattu kar diya. He's a little dense in love matters.

Bahut ho gaya, sach bhi kadwa hota hai, itna gyan bhi accha nahi hai.

Is'se to shadyantra ki badboo aa rahi hai, kahin yeh Jaw Long ko to nahi warn kar de

Govt. ko bas mine se matlab hai. But Jaw Long ki taraf woh nahi jayenge. Tribal ke log hi unke liye hindrance hai.

Yeh ek alag suspense hai, Renshu bhi kuch chhupa raha hai.

Renshu kya chhipa raha hai?

Waise Veer jhut nahi bolta, lekin yahan lagta hai ki weh kuch diplomatic ho gaya hai, kuch sach bhi, aur kuch jo Divya soch rahi thi, weh bhi.

Yes. Lekin, woh Divya ko paana chaahta tha uss waqt ye bhi sach tha. Par, ye bhi sach tha ki woh use shaant karna chaahta tha. Veer ne apne words morph kar ke filhal Divya ko mana liya.

Pari, yani System ka raaz.... hmmm..

Aise thodi system ka raaz pata lag jayega.

To Veer ko Erica ne mark kar liya hai jis se weh usko monitor kar paye. Ek aur baat, Erica ke laal gaal, is baat ka saboot hain ki usne Veer aur Divya ke encounter ko acchi tarah se feel kiya tha. Bechari...

Exactly! She can listen to heartbeats from afar. Toh Divya ki heartbeats kya thi sex ke waqt ye Erica ne bhali bhaanti suni thi. That's why she showed that blushing face when she saw Veer and Divya later.
Now you get it.

Khair to ab asli ladai shuru hone wali hai, jiska kab se intezar tha....

Samay lagega mujhe update frame karne me yaha se. Kyuki, yaha se harr ek update ab alag level ka hoga. Thanks btw and keep supporting.

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome and hot update.

Divya ko impregnate kar dena chahiye Veer ne.

Aur Ragini ko bhi.

Bhai toh baap nahi ban jayega woh? Fir baccha kya bas Divya aur Ragini sambhalengi? Baccha paida karna zimmedari ka kaam hota hai. Jitna maa ka haq hota hai utna hi pita ka bhi. Fir Veer bandh ke reh jayega. Isliye abhi kisi ko bhi impregnate nahi kar raha hai woh.

Enjoyed erotic moments with Diyva and now war is open for both team…good luck….

Yes. Thanks and keep supporting.

Bhai kuch points to add kar lete
Power increase kar Lena tha

Bhai kisne kaha ki points invest nahi hue. Just because Maine dikhaya nahi hai iska matlab ye thodi hai ki Veer aise hi ladne pahuch gaya. Thoda sabr rakha karo.

Ding update hai bhai emojis dek ke samajh jao completely bounce of action incomplete romance incomplete seduction but completely edition keep posting take care of your health

Hein? Arre kehna kya chaahte ho bhai? Btw thanks. Mere toh upar se gaya ki kya bola ju ne.

Thanks bro for an update i saw first writer who is so much enthusiastic to complete a story and also take care of your health aur baki update to hamesha ki tarha bohot badiya tha hi ab to iski aadat pad chuki hai

Thanks a lot Bhai. Enthusiasm ke bina kahani nahi likhi jaa sakti bhai. Toh ye toh bahut zaroori hai. Keep supporting.

Perfect Title: "Tranquility before chaos". Just awesome. Eager to see the level of action because it should be way ahead of the previous 2 battles.

Of course. You cannot even imagine what's about to come. Thanks and keep supporting.

Actually mene ye is liye bola bcz Legion walaon ne kuch logon ko bhi maara tha i think so it could be a reason...

Yes! Legion ne aam logo ko ghus paith karne pe jaan se toh maara hi hai upar se govt. ke officials ko bhi adhmara kar ke chorra hai jo jo andar gaye hai aur apni awaaz uthaaye hai. Khabar toh ye bhi hai ki ek do official ko jaan se hi maar diya gaya hai. Isliye, govt. andar ghusne ki jurrat nahi karti hai. Baaki hum dekhte hai kya hai asli scene. Andar Renshu aur baaki sabhi jaa hi rahe hai.

or jahan tak baat FBCC ki hai to maybe Govt want yo use its as a cover up...
obviously wo yeh nhi bata sakte public/media ko k unhon ne Renshu ki help li hai legion ko khatam krne m ya haraane m, naa woh khud ko ganda krna chaahte hain..

FBCC ka saath hona ye batana unke liye aur bhi ghatak ho sakta hai. Chinese log apne logo ko zyada preference dete hai. Agar public me baat pata lagti hai ki videshi organisation FBCC unke yaha ghus ke tribal ke logo ko maar kaat Diya toh aise me chaos failega. Balki, Renshu ka naam lete hai toh zaahir hai logo ko ye pata hoga ki Order aur Legion aapas me pehle se hi ladte bhidte rehte hai. Iska matlab Order ne govt. ki help ki taaki mine ko govt. ke haatho me liya jaa sake. Ye ek soch hogi public ki.
Dusri soch wahi jaisa ki har Desh me paaya jaata hai. Kuch chutiye jo tribal ke logo ka support karenge aur sadko pe utar aayenge ki tribal ke logo ke saath anyaay hua hai. Sarkaar ne order ke saath mil ke unka khaatma kar diya. Order ko paise diye gaye hai, wagarah wagarah. Basically Order ke upar ilzaam aayega. Sarkar toh jaise tese kar ke Bach hi jaati hai. Aaye din keechad uchhalta rehta hai. Parantu, Renshu ke image ke upar ye pehli baar hoga. Aur isliye Erica agitated thi jab official ne kaha ki aapki image ke saath kuch nahi hoga.

so agr woh Ye batayen ge k FBCC ne ye matter sort kiya hai to koi itna sawaal bhi nhi kare ga (Govt ki saakh pr sawaal ho sakta hai k unhe FBCC ko involve kyun karna pada)
...

pr jaisa k aapne kahan k Bohot se dhaage jude hain kuch bhi ho sakta hai...
so just wait krte hain or story read krte hain...

Keep reading

 

[RAAZ]

5 owners? Ek toh Veer ho gaya. Dusra Renshu, teesri Erica aur chautha Jaw Long. Paachnva kaun aa gaya? Btw thanks a lot and keep supporting man.

5th Garofano