Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 177 ~ Berserk
[Note : Contains Gore related scenes.]​

Ab tak...

Magar, sirf itna hi nahi tha. Ava apni maa ko bachaane ke liye ye sab kari thi. Aur, isliye Island chorr kar jaane se pehle Veer ne ek vaakya aur kaha tha. Itni dheere ki sirf use hi sunaayi de sake. Lekin, Ava ne woh sunn liya tha.

Woh bol the-

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Ab aage...

Pedo ki daalo ke upar Erica chhalang maarte hue aage badhti jaa rahi thi. Hawa se uske baal lehra rahe the aur bauhe bechaini ke maare kasi hui thi.

'Veer!!!'

Badi mushqil se usne apne darr ke upar qaabu paaya tha. Kahi na kahi mann hi mann woh khud ko dosh bhi de rahi thi ki woh yaha aayi toh Veer ko bachaane thi magar khud hi sakpaka ke baith gayi. Kya aise woh apne pita ko proof karne waali thi ki woh ab frontline missions ke liye taiyaar thi?

Dekha jaaye toh galti uski bhi nahi thi. Woh kabhi bhi aisi paristhiti me padi nahi thi aur na hi usne kabhi aise drishya apni aankhon ke saamne dekhe the. Jis wajah se woh hamesha cheezon ko halke me le liya karti thi. Bilkul waise hi jaise ek kue me baitha mendhak, upar kue ki golayi se dikh rahe aasmaan ko dekh ye samajhne lagta hai ki aasmaan bas itna hi hai. Magar, baad me kue se nikalne ke baad use pata chalta hai ki aasmaan asal me kitna vishal hai. Aaj Erica ko poorn roop se abhaas ho gaya tha ki asli darr kya hota hai, duniya me kitne khatarnak log hote hai, apno ko khone ka bhay kya hota hai aur ek jaan ki qeemat kya hoti hai.

'Hang in there.'

Bhaagte hue use kuch theek sa nahi lag raha tha. Jaise ye khamoshi use bechain kar rahi thi.

'Achanak se itni shaanti kyu chha gayi hai?'

[Something is off.]

Jaw Long ke Animal Kingdom card ka asar khatam hote hi saare janvar waha se afra tafri me dur bhaag chuke the. Toh wahi neeche chal rahi Veer aur Jaw Long ki ladayi bhi Veer ke ghayal hone ke chalte lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki ab Erica ko koi bhi shor sunayi nahi de raha tha. Magar, jitni vatavaran me khamoshi fel rahi thi Erica ki bechaini utni hi badhti jaa rahi thi. Kahi ye kisi anhoni ke ghatit hone ka sanket toh nahi tha? Woh nahi jaanti thi. Woh toh bas itna jaanti thi ki Veer ko iss daldal se baahar nikaal ke use sahi salamat wapas leke jaana hai.

[Woh dono yaha nahi hai, Erica. Ab ya toh woh pul ke uss paar gaye hai ya fir neeche.]

Erica dusre pul tak pahuch chuki thi jaha se Veer neeche gira tha. Pul ke uss paar se toh use koi bhi dhwani sunayi nahi di. Ab yaha se talashi karne ke do raaste the.

'Kaha gaye honge woh? Aage dekhe Genie?'

[Mere khayal se aage badhne se pehle hume neeche dekh lena chahiye. Neeche bhi kaafi jagah hai. Jangal neeche bhi hai. Neher ke uss orr dekho Erica.]

'Par bhala neeche kyu jayega woh?'

[Kyu nahi jayega woh? Judging by how he was escaping from those animals... There's a high possibility he might have chosen that route. Zara socho. Itne saare janvaro se bachne ka sabse behtar vikalp kya ho sakta hai? Insaan kaha jayega? Seedhe raaste par jaha janvar lagatar uska peechha kare? Ya fir neher ka sahara lete hue dusre chhor par jaha janvar aa hi na paaye?]

'You have a point, Genie! Theek hai toh fir. Pehle neeche hi talashi lete hai.'

Nirnay lete hue Erica pul ke madhya aayi, neeche dekhi, aur bina jhijke iss baar paani me kood gayi.

*Splaaaashhhhh*

Chhapak ki awaaz ke saath girte hi woh tairte hue fauran chhor par aayi aur khud ko neher se nikaalte hue ek gehri saans chhori. Iss baar usne paani me koodne ke liye koi shikayat nahi ki. Woh jaise sthiti ki gambheerta ko ab samajh rahi thi. Woh sambhalte hue aage badhi. Dheere dheere woh jangal ki gehrayiyo me pravesh karne lagi. Daudate daudate hi use kuch derr baad zameen par dur kuch nazar aaya. Aur, jaise hi woh aakriti uski nazro me aur spasht hui uski aankhein darr ke maare fel gayi. Qadmo ki gati aur tez ho gayi.

'N-Noooo-!!!!'

Ghabrahat! Ek ajeeb si ghabrahat uske andar janm li. Seene me vichitr sa ek bharipann mehsoos hua aur geele badan pe raungte khade ho gaye. Dur zameen par Veer ka shareer khoon se lathpath bejaan sa pada hua tha. Erica ki toh jaisi saari umeedein hi toot gayi. Kya usne derr kar di? Kya woh sahi samay par nahi pahuch paayi? Tamaam sawaal uske mastishk aur dil dono par chot karne lage.

Woh tez raftar se Veer ke nazdeek aayi aur ghisatate hue khud ko roki. Jhukte hi usne Veer ke sarr ke peeche ek haath le jaate hue uske sarr ko badi hi savdhani se uthaya aur apne kaan ko neeche uske seene par le jaate hue lagaya. Aur-

*Ba-dump*

*Ba-dump*

Agle hi shan uski aankhon me aansu apne aap panap aaye. Dil dhadak raha tha..! Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki kabhi kisi ki dhadkan sunn ke use itna sukoon milega, itni khushi milegi, itni raahat milegi. Ek dil ki dhadkan ka mol jaise aaj use pata chal gaya tha.

Kabhi usne nahi socha tha ki Veer jaise ladke ke liye woh aisa kuch mehsoos karegi. Pehle din se hi Veer aur uska rishta koi khaas nahi tha. Magar, iss waqt Veer ke dhadakte dil ki awaaz sunn jo woh mehsoos kar rahi thi, unhe shabdo me bayaa kar paana uske liye behad mushqil tha.

'Thank God-!! Thank God!!! You idiot!!! *sniff* You are alive.'

[Ek minute!! Agar, Veer yaha hai. Toh, Jaw Long kaha hai?]

Genie ke prashn karte hi Erica ko jaise dhyaan aaya. Khatra woh janvar nahi the. Asli khatra toh Jaw Long tha. Uske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein satarkta ke chalte fel gayi.

Woh idhar udhar apni gardan ghumate hue chaaro orr dekhi. Magar, Jaw Long kahi bhi use dikhayi nahi diya. Woh toh aise gayab tha jaise cheel ke ghosle me maans.

Aur, tabhi-

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Dur use kuch shor sunayi diya. Aisa lag raha tha maano do log aapas me lad rahe the.

'What? What's happening?'

Uske sawal ka jawab bhi use jaise agle hi pal mil gaya. Dur jangal ki gehrayiyo se nikalta hua Jaw Long bhayanak tez raftar me uski orr hi aa raha tha. Ek shan pehle uski koi upasthiti nahi thi aur agle hi shan woh khud uski orr pagal saand ki tarah dauda chala aa raha tha.

'Huh!?'

Jab Erica ne danav jaise Jaw Long ko apni orr aata dekha toh maano uski haalat hi patli ho gayi. Jaise jaise woh nazdeek aa raha tha uski aakriti badhti jaa rahi thi. Asal me woh kitna vishal tha ye ab Erica ko samajh aa raha tha. Jaw Long ke haatho me uska wahi bada sa kulhada bhi tha. Ek baar hi uske chalane par Erica ke shareer ke do tukde ho sakte the.

Ye sochte hi woh bechari itna ghabra gayi ki usne neeche letey Veer ko apne seene se lagaya aur aankhein band kar apne haath khade kar diye. Agar, yahi unka ant tha... Toh wahi sahi.

Magar, iss se pehle ki Jaw Long unn tak pahuchta-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Ek saaya unn dono ke beech aake khada ho gaya. Jab aakriti spasht hui toh pata chala ki ye Ava hi thi. Erica ne jab khamoshi ko mehsoos kar apni aankhein kholi toh apne saamne Ava ko khada dekh dang reh gayi.

Aur, uske hosh aur bhi zyada tab ude jab usne Ava ko check kar ye pata lagaya ki woh bhi ek system holder thi.

'Whattttt!!?? Wh-Who is she!?'

Ava agar chaahti toh camouflage activate kar woh fake status dikha sakti thi. Parantu, usne aisa na kiya. Veer ko dhoka dene ke baad se jaise use iss skill se nafrat si ho gayi thi.

Woh Jaw Long ke saamne nidarta se khadi hui thi. Usne apne kandhe ke upar se peeche halka sa mud Erica ko dekha jisne apne seene se Veer ko laga rakha tha. Uski nazre Erica ke seene aur Veer ke chehre par kuch zyada derr hi tiki rahi. Kuch shan baad woh boli.

Ava : Kuch samjhane ka time nahi hai. Uske wounds deep hai. Uska system andar hi andar bleeding ko rokne ki koshish kar raha hoga. Tab tak uski safety, mein tumhare haatho saunpti hu.

Erica itni zyada confused thi ki use kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya. Kaun thi ye ladki? Kar kya rahi thi ye yaha? Aur, Veer ko kaise jaanti thi?

Erica (frowns) : Who are you?

Ava : I'm... I'm someone who owes him a debt.

Erica (frowns) : Ye mere question ka answer nahi! Who exactly are you? Aur, mein tum par bharosa kyu karu?

Ava (smiles) : Kya waqai iss waqt tum ye sawal puch rahi ho? Saamne dekho apne. Agar, mein yaha se hatt gayi toh anjaam kya hoga?

Erica ne jaise hi Jaw Long ko dekha jo abhi tak satark hue unke saamne khada tha, uski bauhe ghabrahat ke chalte sikud gayi. Ava ki baat sahi thi. Agar, woh unke saamne se hati toh woh dono hi maare jaane waale the.

Ava : Shayad ab tumhe samajh aa gaya hoga ki tumhe mujhpe bharosa kyu karna chahiye. Right?

Erica : ...

Ava (exhales) : Take care of him! Use abhi move mat karna. Warna, blood flow hota rahega. Bleeding ruki nahi hai. Bas, uski hifazat karo. Bleeding ke rukte hi use yaha se leke nikal jaana.

Erica chup chaap sab kuch sunn rahi thi. Sawaal dher saare the uske mann me magar filhal unhe taal dena hi behtar tha. Kya iss ladki par bharosa kiya jaa sakta tha? Uske Dad bhi yaha nahi the. Ek decision hi unn dono ki life ya toh bacha sakta tha ya fir khatam kar sakta tha. Ek bahut badi zimmedari iss samay uske sarr thi.

Usne ek gehri saans lete hue fir apna nirnay liya. Haami bharte hue woh boli,

Erica (nods) : Theek hai! I'm trusting you.

Ava : Good! I will stall him until then. Yaad rakhna! Bleeding band hote hi tumhe use leke yaha se nikalna hai.

Erica : Hmm!

Aur, itna bol Ava wapas se apne saamne khade Jaw Long par focused ho gayi. Jaw Long jaan boojh ke hamla nahi kar raha tha.

Veer ke alawa uske saamne do do system holders maujood the. Zahir hai woh jaldbazi me koi galat qadam nahi uthana chahta tha. Aur, Ava ki woh zordar kick jo use padi thi. Uss se kahi na kahi use andaza lag gaya tha ki ye system holder ladki sirf kehne ki system holder nahi thi.

Woh kehte hai na, 'fook fook kar chalna hi samajhdari hoti hai.' Baad me dukhi hone se behtar tha ki abhi satark raha jaaye. Kisi tareeqe se woh Ava ko chakma deke yaha Veer aur Erica ko maarne ke liye aa toh gaya tha. Par, saamne khadi Ava ko dekh uske qadam sanshay me thame hue the.

Aur, Ava ne bhi jaise uske sanshay ka abhaas kar liya. Woh palak jhapakte apni jagah se gayab hui aur Jaw Long ki taraf lapki. Uske haath me ek katana talwar uski sheath se bahar nikli aur seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr badhi.

Kuch bura abhaas hote hi Jaw Long ki aankhein sankat ke chalte chaudi ho gayi. Bhay ke maare woh peeche hua aur isi prakar Ava Jaw Long ko Veer aur Erica se dur karne me safal ho gayi.

Toh wahi idhar Erica Ava aur Jaw Long ko bhidte dekh ek alag anubhav le rahi thi. Usne apna dhyaan Veer par jaise hi punah daala toh veh ghabra uthi.

'My god...!'

Veer ke zakhm gehre the. Erica ne apne jeevan kaal me kayi maut apni aankhon ke saamne dekhi thi. Par, kabhi bhi kisi system holder ko iss tarah ghayal nahi dekha tha.

Ek system holder ka iss tarah zakhmi hona kis baat ka saboot tha? Iss se ye pata chalta tha ki Jaw Long unke liye kitna bada khatra tha. Agar, Veer unki madad na kar ke Jaw Long ko yaha baandh ke na rakhta toh kya hota? Woh sochna bhi nahi chahti thi.

[He's badly injured.]

'Uss ladki ne kaha ki Veer ka system use heal kar raha hoga andar hi andar.'

[So, he does have a healing skill huh?]

'Pata nahi! Card bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin, ye ghaav...! Kitna dard saha hoga Veer ne Genie?'

Erica Ava ke chehre ko poori tarah se nahi dekh paayi thi. Ava uss se baat karte samay bas halka sa hi mudi thi, jis kaaran vash use Ava ki soorat poori tarah se spasht dikhayi na padi. Parantu, woh Ava ke baare me kaafi kuch jaanti thi.

Woh jaanti thi ki Ava ek system holder thi. Veer ko Crimson se bachane ke baad Renshu ne use kaafi kuch bataya tha. Use ab bhi apne pita ke saath kiya gaya woh sanvaad yaad tha.

'Woh celebrity Natalia Martin bhi ek system holder hai, Erica!'

'Really?'

'Hmm! Aur, uss ladke ki maut ka ek kaaran bhi bann sakti thi. Agar, mein sahi samay par waha na pahuchta toh-'

'Hmph! Aap jab se waha se aaye ho uss ladke ke baare me hi baat kare jaa rahe ho. Akhir kaun hai woh?'

'Haha! Jo bhi hai bahut hi kaabil naujavan hai. Aur, rahi baat ki kaun hai woh? Jald hi tumhe pata lag jayega. Mera ek favour hai uspe ab. Jise chukaane wo zaroor yaha aayega. Tab, tum khud apni aankhon se dekh lena.'

'Hmph! I don't care! Balki, aap celebrity Natalia ke baare me mujhe kuch bataiye.'

'Uske baare me mein zyada nahi jaanta aur na hi uss se mila hu. Lekin, itna zaroor pata hai mujhe ki uss ladke ko shadyantra me phasane waali woh bhi ek thi. Maine itna anuman laga liya tha.'

'Woh kaise?'

'Ladka jab samundar me doob raha tha tab maine use waha se bachaya tha. Uss dauran, woh Natalia Martin helicopter me upar baithi neeche nazre gadayi sab kuch dekh rahi thi.'

'Ohhh-!?'

'Lloyd ne mujhe bata diya tha ki wo bhi ek system holder thi. Mujhe poore shadyantra ke baare me jankari to nahi hai. Lekin, kaafi kuch anumaan mein laga sakta hu.'

'I see!'

'Uske paas camouflage kar ke ek skill hai.'

'Camouflage?'

'Hmm! Uski madad se wo nakli status laga ke ghum rahi thi.'

'Iska matlab-!'

'Haan! Usi ke chakkar me shayad wo naujavan ek khatarnak shadyantra ka shikar ho gaya. Kherr, woh zinda hai abhi yahi acchi baat hai. Shayad, tab uss Natalia ne Camouflage ko band kar rakha tha. Tabhi, Lloyd use check kar paaya tha. Aur, asliyat ka pata laga paaya tha.'

'Hmm! Lekin, aapko kaise pata chala Dad ki Natalia ke paas Camouflage skill hai?'

'Kyuki jab maine use check kiya tha tab uska status mujhe dikhayi de raha tha. Woh nakli tha. Lloyd ne sahi pehchan baad me ki thi.'

'Ahh!'

'Erica!!!'

'Huh!?'

'Agar, kabhi tumhara saamna iss Natalia Martin se ho. Toh uss par bharosa mat karna. Celebrity hone ka matlab ye nahi ki kisi ka dil saaf ho.'

'Jii dad. Mein aapki baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.'

Ye baatein use acchi tarah se yaad thi. Magar, uska dhyaan to abhi uski jaangh par sarr rakha yeh naujavan kheenche hue tha.

Genie chup chaap Erica ke emotions ko padh rahi thi. Kaise Erica ke kaanpte hue haath Veer ke zakhmo par haule se fir rahe the. Jaise wo ghaav dekh ke hi unhe mehsoos kar paa rahi thi ki kitna dard hua hoga Veer ko jab ye chotein uske shareer par aayi hongi. Uski sarsari nigaahein Veer ke uttam kataav waale badan par bhi fir rahi thi.

[Tum uski dressing kyu nahi kar deti? Hamare paas rakhi hui hai na?]

'Arrey haan! M-Mujhe to dhyaan hi na raha.'

Usne apni jebo me se dressing ke liye kuch first aid ki pattiyaan nikaali aur Veer ke ghaavo ko saaf kar unn par savdhani se baandhne lagi. Bhale hi inse zyada madad nahi milne wali thi par ghaavo ko khula chorrne se toh ye behtar hi tha.

Dressing baandhte baandhte Erica ki nazre baar baar Veer ke chehre par phir rahi thi.

'G-Genie-! I... I was just thinking... Veer ki kya favorability hai mere liye?'

Sawaal sunte hi mann hi mann jaise Genie muskurayi. Woh jaise bhaanp gayi ki ye sab kis orr jaa raha tha.

[Sach me jaanana hai tumhe?]

'N-Nahi aisi koi khaas wajah nahi hai. M-Mein toh bas yuhi- curious thi...! Isliye- socha ki-'

Apne baalo ki latt ko ungli se ghumate hue woh khusur-pusur karte hue boli.

[Uski favorability tumhare liye 90 hai.]

Ank sunte hi Erica ki jaise aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

'Wh-What-!???'

Use pata tha ki 70-80 ke upar favorability ka hona kya darshata tha.

Pyaar!!!

Samajh aate hi uske gaal laal tamatar ki tarah laal hote chale gaye. Par, agle hi shan, maano jaise Genie ne uske sarr par thande paani se bhari balti udel di.

[Hahaha! Just kidding. Asli favorability 22 hai.]

'Y-You-!!! Genieeeeee!!!!'

Woh mann hi mann Genie par barsi. Toh wahi Genie uska reaction dekh aur zyada thahaake lagaane par majboor ho gayi. Genie jaan boojh ke mahaul ko halka karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur, usme woh poori tarah se qamyab thi. Erica ka aisi sthiti me calm hona behad aavashyak tha.

'Ahinda se aisa tumne kabhi kiya na, toh mein tumhe sleep mode me daal dungi.'

[What?? H-Hey! Wait a minute! It was just a joke. Okay? Aur, maine ab bata to di asli favorability. It's 22. Twenty two. Jise dusri bhaasha me-]

'Haan pata hai!! Sunn liya maine. Sunn liya. I-It's not even a good number. Why are you yelling so much??? Enough! Sunn liya maine. 22 hai. I know! Hmph!'

[What? Kya tum chaah rahi thi aur zyada ho?]

'Wh-Who cares? *blushes* Ahem! Anyways! Mera ek sawal hai. System jab ek dusre ko check nahi kar sakta toh ek dusre ki favorability kaise bata deta hai?'

[Hmm! A very good question.]

'Please, ab baatein mat ghumaana.'

[Nahi nahi! I will tell you. Look! Hum sabhi system ek dusre ke prati satark rehte hai. Koi bhi system ye nahi chaahta ki agla system unke stats dekh paaye. We are afraid of each other.]

'Afraid?'

[Hmm! System apne stats ko hide kar sakta hai. Isliye, check karne par hume kuch bhi info haath nahi lagti. Ek prakar se ye hamara defensive mechanism hai. Par, Erica...! Emotions chhipaye nahi jaa sakte.]

'Ah!'

[Bhale hi stats hide kar diye gaye ho par feelings ko hide nahi kiya jaa sakta. Agla system holder tumhare liye kya bhaav rakh raha hai woh asaani se dikh jaata hai. Jaw Long ko dekhte hi uski ill intent humne mehsoos kar li. Zahir hai favorability minus me hai uski.]

'Right!'

[Wahi Veer ki 22 hai. Tumhare Dad ki tumhare prati 90 hai. Of course, it's all fatherly love.]

'Dad to meri chinta hi nahi chorrte. Mein badi ho gayi hu ab. *sighs* Toh aise work karta hai ye. Samajh gayi. Thanks Genie! Ohh! Look, woh ab saansein behtar dhang se le raha hai.'

[Uske system ne blood flow ko control me rakha hai. I think wo neend me hai.]

'Use araam ki sakht zaroorat hai. So, just-'

Iske pehle ki wo apni baat poori keh paati Jaw Long ki tezz dahaad ne uska dhyaan kheencha.

"Shebaaaaaaaaa-!!!!!"

*Keeeeeeaaaaaarrrrr*

Aur, beshaq...! Wahi baaj hawa me apne parr felaaye uske ek bulaave par haazir ho gaya. Sheba udta hua seedhe Erica ki orr aaya.

'Ahhh!'

[Careful!!]

Par, iss baar Erica ghabra ke dur nahi bhaagi. Usne apni peeth par peeche khusi hui kisi cheez ko baahar nikaala. Aur-

'This time...! I won't run!!'

*Fwoosh*

Seedha uss baaj ki orr usne wo fek diya. Wo cheez hawa me sansanati hui gol gol ghoom ke udte Sheba ko giraane ke liye aayi.

Sheba tezz raftaar se apni orr aa rahi cheez ko dekh baukhlate hue hawayi marg se hatt gaya. Aur, woh cheez jo hawa me feki gayi thi woh wapas se ek golaayi ka raasta apnaate-

*Thuck*

Erica ke haatho me aa thami.

Ek boomerang!!! Magar, koi sadharan boomerang nahi. Uske ird gird metal ke kuch nukeele tukde lage hue the. Kisi prakaar ki dhaar-daar blades. Jo nishchit roop se kisi ko ghayal karne ke liye hi lagayi gayi thi.

Metal bhi koi aisa wesa nahi. Ye tha titanium. Sabse halka aur mazboot metal. Aur, iss anokhe boomerang ki rachayita koi aur nahi ~ Swayam Erica thi.

Uska ek maatra card ~ Metallurgy!!!




Ek aisa card jo use saara gyaan, saari kshamtaye aur saara kaushal pradaan karta tha metals se hathyar banaane ke liye. Usne Garofano ke liye bhi kuch needles bana ke use di thi.

Erica ki aankhon me iss baar tej tha. Aur, uske mann me tabhi-

*Ding*

[Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers.
Rewards : Skill ~ Basic Seer Vision.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Loss of Order.
2) 10,000 points deduction.]

'Iss baar...! Mein peeche nahi hatne waali. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Jab tak Veer recover nahi ho jaata! Mein yahi hu-!!!'

Aur, dur se use Sheba se ladta dekh, idhar Ava ke hontho par ek halki si muskan bikhar gayi.

***

Kintu, hua kya tha? Ava yaha kaise pahuchi? Woh itne din kaha thi? Veer yaha hai iss baare me use kaise pata chala? Aur, yaha aane ka uska maqsad kya tha?

Ye tamaam sawaal Veer ke mann me the behosh hone se pehle. Jinka uttar keval aur keval Ava hi apne muh se de sakti thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Jab Veer eastside ki entrance se pravesh kar raha tha. Tab, woh nahi jaanta tha ki theek uske peeche Ava bhi use follow kar rahi thi.

[There he is, Miss! Thoda aur nazdeek jaa sakte hai hum. Itna peeche chalne ki zaroorat nahi.]

'Nahi Lily! Veer ke paas Beowulf hai. Senses badh jaate hai uske. Ho sakta hai usne activate kar ke rakha ho. Agar, mein iss se zyada nazdeek gayi toh wo meri presence ko mehsoos kar lega.'

[Ohh!]

Ava ne Veer ki aankhon me woh laal rang ki parat pehle bhi dekhi hui thi. Lily ne hi use khoj ke bataya tha ki Veer ke paas Beowulf card tha.

[Toh ab?]

'I will follow him from a distance.'

[Okay!]

'Lily...! What does he think of me now?'




[His favorability towards you is only 10.]

Ava ke chehre par ek muskan bikhar gayi. Magar, iss muskan me kahi na kahi nirasha bhi chhipi hui thi.

'10... is not a bad number.'

[My dear Miss! Is 10 really a good number?]

'Lily! Jo maine kiya tha...! Uske baad toh iss favorability ko minus me hona chahiye tha. *smiles* 10 is already a great number.'




[You've been smitten by him. *sighs* Kya hoga aage? I don't even know.]

'N-No-! That's not it! I-'

[Jhooth bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I can feel your emotions.]

Ava uske jawab me kuch na boli. Woh chupke chupke Veer ka peecha karti rahi. Veer jab uss blood trail ko laangh ke aage gaya toh Ava kuch shan wahi ruk gayi.

[Ye ek sensory type boundary ho sakti hai.]

'Andar jaane ke liye ise cross karna hi hoga.'

Aur, blood trail ko paar karte hue woh khud bhi Veer ki disha ki orr aage badh gayi.

Uske andar aate hi Jaw Long ko do vyaktiyo ke andar ghusne ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Magar, Ava jaise pehle hi sab kuch plan kar ke chal rahi thi.

Seedhe taur par ladayi me na ghuste hue woh ped ki daali par baithe dur se sab kuch dekhti rahi.

'Yaha se mein uss par nazar rakh sakti hu. Jaise hi situation bigdegi, mein waha pahuch jaungi.'

Sirf Erica hi nahi thi, Veer ko unn janwaro se bhaagta dekh Ava ka badan bhi kaanp utha tha. Akele Veer ka waha ladna...! Woh kisi yoddha se kam nahi lag raha tha. Aur, uski woh nidarta se bhari chhavi Ava ke dil me aur nayi tarange utpann kar rahi thi.

Magar, akhir use Veer ke thikaane ka pata kaise laga? Yeh koi raaz nahi tha.

[Death Flag]

Wahi skill, jo Ava ne Veer par mark ki thi. Tab jab woh aur Suhana Las Vegas me uske concert me pehli baar daakhil hue the. Yeh wo skill thi jo ek vyakti ko mark kar ke rakhti thi. Ek seemit range tak uss vyakti ke zinda ya mrit hone ke baare me batati thi.

Tab se leke ab tak Veer par Death Flag ki woh marking bani hui thi. Kintu, Veer ke ruth ke jaane ke baad, Ava ne kuch kiya tha. Apne system ke saath. Uski system Lily ko bhi saari baatein yaad thi. Island par Veer jab use akela chorr ke chala gaya tha. Uss raat-

'Lily!'

[Yes?]

'Upgrade Death Flag's range!'

[What?]

'Suna nahi tumne? Maximize the range.'

[Jaanti ho na upgrade ke liye kitne points lagte hai? The first upgrade will take 5000 points. And, the second upgrade will take 10,000 points. Total 15,000 points.]

'Yes! Jaanti hu! Do it!'

[My dear Miss! Why are you so determined? Kis liye itne points ikhatta kiye the? Ab jab hum itna close hai Maisie's cure ke liye, you want to waste them on Death Flag's upgradation?]

'Lily!!!'

[Fine then!]

*Ding*

[Death Flag's range has been maxed out.]

'Good!'

Yahi woh pal tha jab Ava ki skill Death Flag ki range maximum ho chuki thi. Na sirf ab woh jeevit ya mrit ke baare me bataane me saksham thi balki, insaan ki ab location bhi woh saaf saaf dekh sakti thi. Veer duniya ke kisi bhi kone me hi kyu na rahe, agar Death Flag uss par marked thi toh Ava uski location ko asaani se dekh sakti thi.

Woh uss tak jab chaahe tab pahuch sakti thi. Aur, isi tarah woh yaha Veer ko dhundh paayi.

Veer ka achanak Mumbai chorr yaha China aana. Woh jaan chuki thi ki kuch gadbad thi. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh khud yaha chali aayi. Aur, uska sanshay ekdum sahi tha.

Aaj woh yaha na hoti toh Veer bahut bade jokhim me pad jaata. Kam se kam ab woh uske liye kuch samay nikaal sakti thi. Aur, yahi uska prayshchit tha. Bhale hi... Uski jaan hi kyu na chali jaaye.

[I just don't understand. Why are you so focused on him? Kya waqai aapko uss se-!?]

'He...! He gave me happiness, Lily. Jab mein use trap me fasaane ke liye uske khilaf chaale chal rahi thi. Tab woh meri khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhte hue mujhe protect kar raha tha. Can you imagine it?'




[...]

'Maine kabhi nahi socha tha unn moments ko mein firse enjoy kar paungi. Meri asli khushiyaan Mumbai me hi thi Lily. Jab mein chhoti thi. Mera bachpan...! Kaera aur Sonia ko chorr ke aane ke baad woh saari khushiyaan jaa chuki thi.'

[...]

'Veer ka saath jaise mujhe unhi lamho me le gaya. Par, kya kiya maine uske saath? I don't deserve his friendship. I don't deserve to be around him.'




Ho na ho, Veer hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se aaj Ava jeevit thi. Warna, France ki unn vardato ke baad usne-

[W-Wait!!! What are you doing?]

Uska uss pahaad ki choti par khade hona. Aur, neeche khaayi ki orr dekhna.

[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]

'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'

[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]

Woh khud khushi karne jaa rahi thi. Aur usne apna perr aage badha bhi diya tha.

[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]

Par, usi waqt Veer ke akhiri shabd uske mastishk me punah goonj gaye.

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Aur, usne apne santulan ko girne se bacha liya.

[You idiot!!! You scared the shit outta me. Ye... Ye kya kar rahi thi dear? Whyyy?]

'I'm sorry-!!! *sniff* I'm sorry, Lily. I'm so sorry!!! Maine tumhare baare me zara bhi nahi socha. N-No-!! I didn't even think of him either-!!'

[Huh!?]

'Usi ne kaha tha na!? Th-Then I must protect him!'

[Y-You-!!!?]

*Clang* *Clang*

Ateet se baahar aate hue Ava ki aankhein saamne Jaw Long ke harr move ko padhne me vyast thi.

Woh prahar karti jaa rahi thi magar Jaw Long peeche fall back karte hue khud ko bacha le raha tha.

Jaw Long uss se direct fight nahi le raha tha. Pata nahi kyu, par woh Ava ke hathyar katana se kaafi bhaybheet sa nazar aa raha tha.

Ava ne apni tactic turant hi badli aur apni jeb se usne handgun nikaal seedha dur khade Jaw Long ki upar taan di.

'Kisi wajah se woh mujhse directly nahi lad raha hai. Agar woh long ranged fight hi chaahta hai toh theek hai. He can have a kiss of my bullet.'




*Bang*

Jaise Jaw Long ne kuch bhaanp liya. Woh tezz raftar me daudta hua apni jagah se bhaagne laga. Aur, Ava ki bullets apne nishaane se choonk gayi.

'Shit!! Kaash mere paas perfect aim ki koi skill hoti.'

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

Bullets gun ki nozzle se nikalti jaa rahi thi, par harr baar Jaw Long apni speed ke chalte unse bachta jaa raha tha. Saari bullets ya toh hawa me ya fir pedo ke tane par lag unke parchhatte udhedte hue nikal gayi.

Ava ko bhi mission mila hua tha. Magar, uska mission Jaw Long se bhidant ka nahi tha. Uska mission tha~

[Mission : Stall the time.
Description : Don't let your loved one die.
Rewards : ??]

Koi bhi penalty nahi dikh rahi thi. Iska matlab... Penalty death thi. Aur, system ko kho dena.

'Veer se ladne ke baad lagta hai ye aadmi kaafi thak chuka hai. I might be able to take him down.'

[Filhal toh wo hamari saari bullets se bach raha hai. Hume use jald se jald ghayal karna hoga.]

'Toh ek baar me ek bullet enough nahi haan? Alright then!'

Agle hi shan usne apni jacket khol andar se ek aur handgun nikali. Aur, dono handgun Jaw Long ke bheje ki orr taan usne trigger daba diya.




*Bang* *Bang*

Do sansanati hui bullets guns se nikal Jaw Long ki chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin, lagatar tez gati se bhaag raha Jaw Long unhe chakma dene me qamyab raha. Magar, khel yahi samapt nahi hua tha. Fire karte hi Ava ne unn dono guns ko upar hawa me ucchaal diya. Guns hawa me upar gol ghumti hui gayi aur tabhi-

Ava ne apni jacket punah khol aur do handguns usme se nikali. Unse fir se bhaag rahe Jaw Long ki taraf nishana lagaya. Aur, iss baar jaise Jaw Long ke chehre par dehshat saaf nazar aa gayi.

*Bang* *Bang*

Hawa ko cheerte hue woh bullets uske maans me dhassne ko aayi aur Jaw Long darr ke chalte ped ke peeche jaa dubka. Woh bullets ped ke tane ko ukhaadte hue usme jaa dhansi.

Idhar Ava ne haath me pakdi dono guns ko bhi turant hi hawa me uchaal diya. Jaise hi usne ye guns hawa me feki, pichhli do guns jo usne pehle se hi hawa me feki hui thi woh gravity ke chalte tezi se neeche aayi.

Unhe punah haath me thaam usne firse-

*Bang* *Bang*

Aur, wapas se unhe hawa me uchhal diya. Upar feki gayi baaki ki do guns fir neeche aayi aur iss baar unhe thaam-

*Bang* *Bang*

Woh do guns hawa me fekti, do se fire karti aur fir unhe hawa me fekti aur pichli do guns se fire karti. Ek baar me hi... Woh 4 handguns istemal kar rahi thi.

Aur, ye sab kuch itni tezi se ho raha tha ki aam insaan ko bas Ava ke haath ki dhundhli aakritiyaan hi nazar aati. Uske haath after images bana rahe the. Guns itni tezi se hawa me uchhal ke neeche gir rahi thi aur wapas se hawa me jaa rahi thi ki pata laga paana mushqil tha kaun si gun pehli waali thi aur kaun si dusri.

Usne itni bullets ped pe daag di ki ped ka tana hi toot ke bikhar gaya. Jaw Long kisi bheegi billi ki tarah ek ped se dusre ped ki aadh me khud ko chhipane par majboor ho gaya.

Ab tak close ranged fight me woh bada hi guroor dikha raha tha. Par, bandook ke saamne aate hi woh dubak ke chhupne par vivash ho gaya.

[Such skill of handling weapons. She's a skilled warrior.]

Yaha tak ki uska khud ka system bhi Ava ki weapon handling ki tareef karne me peeche na raha.

'Kai! Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh-'

Woh mann me kehte hue ek ped ki aadh lene bhaaga jab tabhi-

*Bang*

*Squelch*

"Urrrghhh!"

"Finally! I got him!"

Akhir kaar ek bullet ne apna kaam kar hi diya. Kandhe ke paas aake bullet maans ko cheerte hue andar ghusi. Aur, Jaw Long ki ek dabi dard bhari karah muh se nikal gayi.

'Agility badhani hogi, Kai!'

[Long! Tumhare paas sirf 3000 points hi baaki hai.]

Kehte hue usne uske mann me hi full status dikha diya.







'Jaanta hu! Lekin, Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke liye mere paas paryapt points nahi. Agility ki zyada zaroorat hai.'

[Accha? Aur, sleep ka kya? Bina sleep ke points nahi badhne waale. Stats me points invest karna bekar hai.]

'...'

Jaw Long kuch na bola. Kai ki baat sahi thi. Agar, agility me points invest kar bhi diye to bina neend ke woh nahi badhne waale the.

[Intezar kiska kar rahe ho? Apne trump cards ka istemal karo. Aur, jald se jald ye ladayi khatam karo. Straight way se ghuse Li Renshu aur unke aadmi kahi mine tak na pahuch jaaye.]

'Hmm!'

Kai ki baat maante hi Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa badalne lagi. Woh poori tarah se gambheer ho gaya. Wahi, yaha Ava ki bullets ki saari magazines khatam ho chuki thi.

Woh ab apni katana ko haath me pakdi wapas se close combat ke liye taiyaar thi. Magar, Jaw Long ke haav bhaav use satark rehne par majboor kar rahe the.

Aur, fir-

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been equipped.]

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been activated.]




Agle hi shan Jaw Long ka saara intelligence dhadalle se neeche girne laga. Ek ke baad ek uske intelligence ke 150 points girte chale gaye. Aur, usi ke saath ye points uski 180 strength me judne lage. Jaha ek taraf intelligence ghat raha tha toh wahi dusri orr strength badhti jaa rahi thi.

Berserk! Ek aisa card jo intelligence aur strength stat ke beech apna game khelta tha. Ek aisa card jisme intelligence ka balidan dene ke baad uske saare points strength stat me liye jaa sakte the.

*Ding*

[Intelligence has reached zero.]

[Strength stat has reached 330.]

Intelligence ke saare ke saare points strength me jaa chuke the. Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari mehsoos hone lagi. Uske lambe baal hawa me lehrane lage.

330 ki strength. Akhir kitni taqat rakhti thi? Woh kisi pagal khule saand ki tarah ho chuka tha. Jo raaste me aaye kisi bhi insaan ke tukde tukde karne ko taiyaar tha.

[This is bad!!! I can feel it. He's using something. Dear! Distance leke hi fight lena. Woh kisi prakar ka card istemal kar raha hai. Uski taqat badhti hui mehsoos ho rahi hai. Be careful!]

Lily ki chinta janak awaaz Ava ke mann me goonji. Ava ki bauhe bhi bhay aur duwidha ke chalte sikudi hui thi. Jaw Long ka aura woh feel kar paa rahi thi.

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

Jaw Long dahaad maarte hue hawa me uchakta uski orr aaya. Ava ghabrate hue peeche koodi aur Jaw Long ka taqatvar mukka zameen par jaa gira.

*Boom*

Ava ne jaise hi uss jagah ko dekha jaha woh pehle khadi hui thi uski aankhein khauf ke maare fel gayi. Zameen ke chithde udd chuke the. Ek mukke se hi waha par crater bann gaya.

'Wh-What kind of power is he using?'

[Maine kaha tha na. Usne kisi prakar se apni strength badhayi hai. Warna iss tarah ka damage asaani se nahi kiya jaa sakta. Beware! Agar ek bhi attack hume laga, to hamare liye mushqil ho jayegi.]

'Yeah!'

Jaw Long par jaise bhoot sawar ho chuka tha. Ava ko maarne ke liye jaise hi usne dusra mukka feka, Ava peeche gulati maarte hue uss se distance bana ke bachi aur ped ki aadh lete hue peeche ho gayi.

Parantu, ped jaise hi Jaw Long ke mukke ke sampark me aaya-

*Smaaaashhhhh*

Aisa laga maano ped me kisi ne bomb laga ke chorr diya ho. Kyuki, kisi visfot ki tarah hi uske parchhatte udd gaye. Ped tukdo tukdo me toot ke hawa me bikhar gaya. Itna vishalkaay ped yu ek hamle se hi dhwast ho gaya. Ava ki haalat iss samay shabdo me bayaan kar paana mushqil tha. Usne aaj tak aisi taaqat ka namoona nahi dekha tha. Ghabrahat ab uske andar janm le chuki thi.

'Th-That's-!'

Woh abhi koi rann-neeti sochti ki tabhi kisi vyakti ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahaha! Koi bhi bhaag nahi sakta ab Lord. Maine saare pul ki rassiya kaat di hai. Ab sabko-"

Kehte hue woh nadaan tribe ka member jaise hi Jaw Long ke nazdeek aaya. Jaw Long ne uska kandha thaam use wahi jakad liya.

"Huh?"

Apne Lord ki bina aankhon ki putliyo waali chhavi qareeb se dekh uss tribe ke aadmi ka moot uski jaanghiya me hi nikal gaya.

"L-Lord?"

Aur, ye uske akhiri shabd the. Kyuki, palak jhapakte hi-

*Bammmm*

"A-Ah-!!!"

Ava ki aankhon me dehshat saaf nazar aayi. Saamne ka drishya dekh uska badan kaanp utha. Jaw Long ne aisa mukka maara ki uss tribe member ka sarr kisi tarbooj ki tarah fatt gaya. Khoon sahet dimag ke chhote chhote tukde, aur andhruni ang bhi kayi tukdo me vibhajit hote hue chaaro orr fel ke gir gaye. Uska bina sarr ka bacha hua shareer bhi ladkhada ke zameen par dhamm se gir pada.

Aur, vatavaran me khoon ki gandh fel gayi.

*Blurgh*

Ava ko vomiting jaisa feel hua. Usne iss tarah ki maut kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Neeche uss tribe member ke dimaag ke tukde, toh kahi aankh ki putliyaan, uske chehre ke alag alag ang dale hue the jo ab pehchan me bhi nahi aa rahe the.

Yahi tha Berserk card! Jo apno aur dushmano ke beech antar karne me asaksham tha. Jaw Long ne apna intelligence sacrifice kar strength ko apnaya tha. Ab 15 minute tak bas Berserk ka hi prakop chalne wala tha.

[He's a monster!]

'H-How am I gonna fight him?'

[Tabhi toh keh rahi hu. Iski koi zaroorat nahi. Just run and escape.]

'N-No Lily! I can't-! And, I won't! Mein use yaha chorr ke nahi jaa sakti.'

[You-!!!]

'I'm sorry, Lily. But please...! Help me this one last time.'

[ *sighs* Fine!]

*Ding*




['Vinona's Mark' has been equipped.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been activated.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been applied on the target.]

[20 minutes...! Sirf 20 minutes hai. Hume uss se tez rehna hoga. Tabhi uske attacks se bach payenge. Defensive hote hue uss par bas ek ek vaar karti jaana. 10 consequent hits lagte hi use 150% zyada dard pahuchega. Aur, bleed bhi apply ho jayega.]

'I know! Par, uss se bachna hi sabse bada challenge hai.'

[Lekin, hume karna hoga.]

'How many points do I have?'

[See for yourself!]

*Ding*







Ava ka full status uske samaksh tha. Points ki kami dekh usne apne nichle honth ko gusse me daanto tale daba liya.

'Sirf 1500!?'

[You purchased 'Rekkaken' and 'Judo Combat' last month. Aur, Masie's cure ke liye itne saare points Death Flag me istemal ho gaye the. Mission bhi itne time baad mila hai. Of course, we have a shortage of points.]

'Damn it!'

Ava zyada derr tak apni vartalap Lily ke sang na kar paayi kyuki, Jaw Long chhalaang maar apni jagah se uda aur use maarne ke liye aaya.

Vinona's Mark activate hote hi Ava apne Judo combat style ko apnaate hue stance me aa gayi.

'Come!'

Weapon Master card ki wajah se woh harr hathyaar ko chalaane me saksham thi. Magar, Judo Combat usne ab tak kisi pe istemal nahi ki thi. Ye skill nayi thi. Aur, uska pehla hi pratidwandi Jaw Long tha.

Jaw Long ka mukka uski kamar par lagne ko aaya toh Ava chhalaang maarte hue peeche hui aur perr zameen par rakhte hi-

*Whoosh*

Woh jhatke se Jaw Long ke peeche aayi. Aur, ek strike seedhe Jaw Long ki peeth par maari.

*Thuck*

Maarte hi woh hawa ki gati se peeche hatt gayi. Aur, ye ekdum sahi faisla tha. Jaw Long ne apni laat itni tezi me peeche ghumayi ki agar woh waha khadi rehti toh uski haddiya toh tootati hi saath hi woh kayi metre dur jaake girti.

Idhar strike padte hi Jaw Long ko jaise kaafi kshati pahuchi. Vinona's Mark marked target par 120% damage zyada karta tha. Ava ki strength 150 par thi.

150 strength ka 120% zyada damage. Matlab 330 ka physical damage. Ava khud bhi nahi jaanti thi ki woh itna damage kar sakti thi. Usne kabhi bhi Vinona's Mark ka itna istemal nahi kiya tha. Aur, na hi Judo Combat ka.

Woh nahi jaanti thi ki uska damage Jaw Long ke damage ke barabar pahuch chuka tha. Ya yu kahe ki usne uss detail par utna dhyan hi nahi diya tha. Jaw Long ko jaise hi peeth par woh vaar pada, uski peeth ki maans peshiyaan andar hi andar phatne ko ho gayi.

[Bas 9 hits aur...!]

Bleed apply karne ke liye Ava ko 9 baar aur vaar karna tha. Aur, woh bhi bina ek bhi attack apne upar liye. Tabhi, uske attacks consequent kehlaate.

Woh datt kar aage badhi. Magar, pichli baar wali chaal iss baar qamyab na ho saki. Jaisi hi woh Jaw Long ki taraf feint attack karne ko aayi.

Sheba na jaane achanak kaha se uske bagal se apne panje felaata use nochne ko aa gaya. Woh ghabrati hui jaise hi mudi-

Uss se yahi par galti ho gayi. Sheba apne pankh fad-fadata hua wapas upar uda aur Jaw Long ko yaha mauka mil gaya.

[Shit...! Dear, careful!]

Parantu, kaafi derr ho chuki thi. Ava jaisi hi wapas palti-

*Pooooowwwwwww*

Jaw Long ka punch uske pait par pada aur woh hawa me udti hui kayi feet dur jaa giri. Uske muh se khoon nikalne laga.

Internal bleeding!!!

[Dear...!]

Lily chintit swar me chillaayi. Aisa lag raha tha maano andar ki saari atadiyo par 100 kilo ka wazan rakh diya ho. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi prateet hone lagi. Jaw Long ka endurance 200 par tha. Magar, wahi Ava ka maatr 150. Zahir hai uski dard sehen karne ki kshamta Jaw Long se kam thi.

"Urgghhh!!!"

[D-Dear-!!]

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

'It hurts like hell...! Urrghhh! L-Lily!'

[Y-Yes!!?]

'Aisa lag raha hai jaise andar se kisi ne mere ango ko noch ke daba diya ho. Ahhh-!!'

[Bear with it, dear. Just bear with it.]

Magar, use react karne ka samay hi nahi diya gaya. Jaw Long uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

[N-No-!!! Dear!!! RUNNN!]

***

Jab Jaw Long aur Ava dur ladne me vyast the. Toh wahi Veer apni neend me kaafi recovery kar chuka tha.

Pari ne Beowulf ko kuch derr ON rakh Veer ki healing ko badha diya tha. Aur, jaise hi bleeding band hui, usne use wapas se band kar diya. Kyuki, woh jaanti thi ki Beowulf aage kaam aane waala tha.

Veer ki palke jhapki... Aur, woh apne hosh me aaya. Neend ki wajah se usne jo points pehle add kiye the woh ab invest ho chuke the.

[Are you awake now?]

'Pari-!!!'

Saamne ka dhundhla drishya jaise hi spasht hua toh Veer ne paaya ki uske saamne Erica baithi hui thi. Erica bhi jaise use hosh me aata dekh chehek uthi.

Erica : Ahhh!!! Tumhe hosh aa gaya!!!?

Veer (breathes heavily) : Erica???

Erica (nods) : Haan! Tum theek ho na?

Veer : T-Tum yaha?

Erica : Uh-huh!

Veer : Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Erica : M-Mein tumhe yaha se le jaane aayi hu obviously. Jaw Long bahut zyada shaktishali hai. Hum abhi uske level par nahi hai.

Veer : Jaw Long! Th-That's right! W-Wait-!!! Ava...! Ava kaha hai?

Jaise ab use sahi se hosh aaya. Woh uth ke baitha aur apne shareer ko idhar udhar mod apne dheele aur ghayal purjo ko usne jaise sahi kiya.

Erica : Ava?? Kaun Ava?

Veer : Wahi jisne mujhe bachaya. Jo yaha aayi thi...! Jaw Long mujhe maarna aa raha tha aur woh-

Erica : Oh tumhara matlab woh ladki? System holder?

Veer : Yeah!!

Erica : Wahi toh jab se Jaw Long se bhidi hui hai.

Veer : She's fighting Jaw Long?

Jab Veer ke chehre par uss ladki ke liye chinta ke bhaav Erica ne dekhe toh woh asahaj sa mehsoos karte hue tapaak se puchi,

Erica : K-Kaun hai woh ladki?

Veer : Ava-!!! She's none other than... Natalia Martin!

Erica (stands up) : Whaaatttt???

Apne pita ke wahi bol Erica ko fir yaad aa gaye. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye Natalia Martin par bharosa mat karna. Aur, yaha woh usi Natalia Martin ke bharose pehle hi baithi hui thi.

Erica : U-Uss par bharosa nahi kar sakte hum. Hai na?

Uske sawal par Veer khamosh raha. Uski chuppi ko dekh Pari ne kaha.

[Boy-!!! What are you thinking?]

'Woh move...! Maine wo knife feki thi uss Jaw Long ki taraf.'

[Yeah, so? Pata laga liya hai humne already ki uske paas koi dodging skills nahi hai.]

'Ho sakta hai...! Par-! Maine woh sirf isliye nahi feki thi.'

[Huh!?]

'Aura vision!!! Non living things nahi dekh sakti-!!'

Pari ne jaise hi ye suna uske dil ne jaise ek dhadkan phaand li. Agar woh yaha uske saamne khadi hoti toh uske badan me khade hue raungte Veer saaf saaf dekh paata.

[You fucking-! Hahahahaha!!!!]

Woh zorro se hassne lagi.

Aura vision non living things nahi dekh sakti thi jab tak ki use upgrade na kiya jaaye. Yahi kaaran tha jo Jaw Long Ava ke dwara nikaali gayi katana se itna bhaybheet hoke dur bhaag raha tha.

Kyuki, use katana dikhayi hi nahi de rahi thi. Woh sirf Ava ke haath ke movements ko padh andaaza laga ke uss se ladd raha tha. Ava ke haath me hathyaar kitna lamba tha woh bas iska anumaan hi laga sakta tha. Aur, isliye woh Ava ki guns se bhi bhaagta raha. Na hi woh guns dekh paa raha tha aur na hi bullets. Kyuki, ye sab non living things thi.

Veer ne na sirf woh knife fek ke ye check kiya ki Jaw Long ke paas koi dodging skills thi ya nahi, balki ye bhi check kar liya tha ki Jaw Long ne Aura vision upgrade ki hui thi ya nahi. Aur, isi ke chalte use ye baat bhi pata lag gayi ki Jaw Long ke paas Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke paryapt points nahi the.

[If I would have been in my physical form. I swear I would have crushed your head while hugging you. Hahahahahahaha!!!]

Pari ka excitement iss waqt charam pe tha. Agar woh saamne hoti toh uske chehre par ek khaufnak muskan feli hui hoti.

'It's time for Round 2!'

Gehri saans lete hue Veer uth khada hua. Badan abhi bhi dard kar raha tha. Ghaav abhi bhi gehre the. Magar, samay yaha baith ke araam farmaane ka nahi tha.

Erica : U-Utho mat! Just rest! Bleeding abhi abhi band hui hai. Agar, tum zyada chaloge firoge to ho sakta hai firse shuru ho jaaye.

Veer : I need to go-!

Erica : What???

Veer : Erica! Kya tum mujhe yaha reh ke protect kar rahi thi?

Erica : Uh-huh! M-Mujhe mission bhi mila tha.

Usne jaise hi bola, uske mann me tabhi ghanti bhi baj uthi.

*Ding*

['Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers' is completed.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with the skill 'Basic Seer Vision.']

[Skill : Basic Seer Vision.
Description : Allows the host to witness all the events that transpired at a particular place within an hour prior from the running time.]

Erica : O-Oh! Mission poora ho gaya.

Veer : Thanks!

Erica : Ehh??

Veer : Meri safety ka dhyan rakhne ke liye thanks. You... have grown up!

Erica : ...!!!?

Veer : Now I need to fulfill my role.

Erica : Wait-! Tum iss haalat me-

*Whoosh*

Kintu, uski baat adhoori hi reh gayi. Kyuki, Veer hawa ke jhonke ki tarah waha se jaa chuka tha.

Erica (shouts) : Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!

***

'I think... This is the end, Lily!'

[Noooo-!!! Get up and run!!!]

'I... I can't-! Mere perr kaanp rahe hai.'

Jaw Long uske saamne uski maut bann ke khada hua tha. Ek hit me hi Ava ka shareer atyadhik damage le chuka tha. Endurance kam hone ka nateeja tha ye.

Jaw Long bhi kaafi ghayal tha. Magar, Berserk use tike rehne ki himmat de raha tha. Usne apna haath hawa me uthaaya aur uss tribal ke aadmi ki tarah woh Ava ke sarr ke chithde udaane hi wala tha jab-

Bagal se aati ek zordaar kick ne use dur girne par majboor kar diya. Jab Ava ne saari umeedein chorr di thi, tab ek baar fir Veer uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

Ava : !!!??

Veer uski taraf peeth kar ke khada hua tha. Woh nahi jaanta tha ki iss waqt Ava ki aankhon me aasu the.

Veer : I told you to never show me your face. Right?

Ava : ...!

Woh khamosh rahi. Apna sarr jhukaate hue woh apne hontho ko daanto se kaat khud ko dosh dene lagi. Kya kar sakti thi? Woh apne dil ke aage bebas thi.

Veer ne aage kuch na kaha. Woh bas Jaw Long ki taraf daud pada. Aur, idhar Ava ke chehre ke bhaav taajub me tab badle jab use apne mann me woh notification sunayi diya.

*Ding*

[Veer's favorability has increased to 20.]

Ava bas aashcharya me dur jaate Veer ki peeth ko dekhti reh gayi.

'V-Veer-!!?'

Veer Jaw Long se bhid baitha. Berserk ko khatam hone me abhi 2 minute baaki the. Woh tez raftar ke saath uske paas pahucha. Jaw Long ne jaise hi Veer ki taraf apni kick maarni chaahi-

Veer neeche jhuk gaya. Zordar force waali kick uske sarr ke upar se nikal gayi. Aur, Veer ka taqat se bhara mukka seedha Jaw Long ki jaangh pe jaa ke laga.

*Pooowwww*

Uska santulan bigda aur woh ladkhadaya. Mauka dekh Veer seedhe uske peeche gaya. Uske dono haath Jaw Long ki kamar par lipte-

Aur, agle hi shan itna bhari bharkam Jaw Long hawa me tha. Peeche se Veer ne use uthaaya aur peeche hi le jaate hue-

*Baaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche zameen par use sarr ke bal patak diya. Zameen par ek crater bann gaya.

Haafte hue Veer Jaw Long ki kamar ke peeche se baahar nikla. Sarr par bahut zorr ke padi thi Jaw Long ko.

'Did I... win?'

Veer abhi khade hue ye soch hi raha tha kyuki Jaw Long koi bhi harqat nahi kar raha tha. Par, achanak hi-

'Shit-!!!'

Jaw Long ne akasmat hi uske ankle ko apne haath me jakad liya. Uski pakad itni mazboot thi ki uss se chhootna namumkin sa tha.

Jaw Long uchakta hua Veer ko apne saath hawa me upar le gaya aur fir-

Usne itni zorr se neeche Veer ko patka ki ek shockwave uss poore ilaaqe me fel gayi. Sahi samay par Pari ne Bone Reaper equip kar liya warna Veer ki haddiyon ko aaj choorma bann jaata.

"Veeeeeer-!!", Ava dur se hi kamzor awaaz ke saath uski orr chillaayi. Lekin, koi fayda na tha.

Veer ka ang ang dard se tadap raha tha. Magar, Jaw Long wahi par nahi ruka. Usne punah Veer ke perr ko kheencha aur use-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Ped se bhedte hue ped ke tukde kar diye. Veer ek baar fir khoon se lathpath dur jaata hua gira.

Jo bhi bleeding pehle ruki thi woh dheere dheere wapas se behna shuru ho rahi thi.

[Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh tum blood loss se hi marr jaoge.]

Tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Kuch teer Veer ke ird gird golaayi me jaa ke zameen par dhansne lage. Parantu, woh sirf teer nahi the. Unke chorr par insaano ki asli khopdi latki hui thi.

Berserk ka samay samapt ho chuka tha. Jaw Long wapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha.

"Shebaaaaaa-!!!!"

Baaj ko awaaz lagaate hi woh baaj jaise ishara samajh kahi udta hua chala gaya.

Jaw Long fir Ava ki taraf badhne laga. Usne Ava ke baalo ko apne haath me jakda aur use kheenchte hue le jaane laga.

"Nnnghhh!!!"

Veer ne apni ardh khuli aankhon se jab ye dekha toh himmat kar woh uthne ki koshish karne laga. Magar, dard ke chalte woh wapas se gir gaya.

'N-No-!!!'

[Tumhari chaheeti ko baalo se pakad ke woh le jaa raha hai. Toh? Ab kya karoge tum?]

'Pari-!!'

[Fufu~ Yes?]

Bhaagti hui aayi Erica ne jab ye manzar dekha toh ek sihran uske badan me fel gayi. Ava ko bachaane ke liye usne apna boomerang Jaw Long ki orr feka.

Toh, Jaw Long ne ek haath se uss boomerang ko pakad liya.

Erica : K-Kaise-!?

Woh majbooran uski orr bhaagi. Peeche nahi baith sakti thi. Magar, nateeja wahi. Erica ko pakad ke jaise hi Jaw Long ne ek ped se bheda, bechari Erica ke sarr se khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Sirf do mukke hi kaafi the Erica ko ghaayal karne ke liye. Dono haatho me do sundariyo ke kesho se unhe jakadte hue Jaw Long unhe zameen me ghaseetata hua le jaane laga.

Veer apna haath aage badha ke unki taraf jaane chaahta tha. Lekin, uska shareer jawab de raha tha.

[What are you gonna do now?]

Pari toh jaise uski iss haalat par lutf le rahi thi. Jaise woh kuch soch ke baithi hui thi.

'A-Ava-!! Erica!!!'

Jaw Long ne unn dono ko bhi ek ek jagah par patak diya. Aur, unn dono ke ird gird bhi teer zameen par baari baari khuse hue the. Aur, unke chhor se insaano ki khopdiyaan latak rahi thi.

Jaw Long zameen par baitha. Aur, tabhi-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Sheba akaash me udta hua uski orr aane laga. Uske panjo me kuch tha jo bilbila ke tadap raha tha. Ek murga!!!

Murge ko hawa me chorrte hue Sheba wapas se ped ki daali par baithne chala gaya. Toh wahi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko pakda aur apni vidhi ko shuru karne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya.

Uske muh se vichitra bhaasha me bol nikalne lage. Aisi bhaasha... Jise Veer kya, kisi ka bhi system pehchaan na saka.

[He's using Gong Tau!!!]

Pari ke bol tabhi Veer ke mann me goonje.

Gong Tau ek black magic skill thi. Aur, iska upyog karne ke peeche ek hi kaaran tha ~ Laalach!

Gong Tau ek vashikaran ki kriya thi. Jiski madad se targets ko control kiya jaa sakta tha. Vashikaran hone ke baad agar targets ko maar diya jaaye toh unke saare cards aur skills Jaw Long ke paas aa jaane waale the.

Isi laalach ke peeche woh iss kriya ka upyog karne laga. Woh kuch padhta jaa raha tha. Aur, nirantar uski awaaz badhti jaa rahi thi.

Achanak hi-

*Rattle* *Rattle*

Teer par khusi khopdiyaan apne aap kampan karne lagi. Kad-kad ki awaaz ke saath woh thar-tharaane lagi. Hawaaein tezz ho gayi. Aur, Jaw Long ne fir uss murge ko pakda-

*Slit*

Uske gale ke paas ek cut maara...! Murge ko latkaya toh uska khoon neeche tapakte hue kisi vichitra si dikhne waali cheez par girne laga.

Khoon kuch maatra me giraate hi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko feka toh murga apni peeth ke bal hawa me perr kiye zameen par gir pada. Jaw Long ne ye dekh haami bhari. Iska matlab tha ki aatmao ne uski kriya ko sweekar kar liya tha.

Aur tabhi-

Woh murga jiska gala kaata gaya tha woh apne aap uth khada hua aur pankh fad-fadaata hua waha se bhaag utha. Idhar Jaw Long apni kisi prakar ki tantra vidyao me wapas se lag gaya.

Aur, ab Veer ko apne shareer me kuch gadbad mehsoos hone lagi. Sirf Veer hi nahi, Ava aur Erica ka bhi yahi haal tha.

[He's taking control of your body...! Agar tumne kuch nahi kiya. Toh, sab khatam hai.]

'P-Pari-!! Help me-!!!'

Veer ki bahut kamzor awaaz uske mann me aayi.

[Hmm? I didn't hear you-!?]

Jaw Long ke garajte bol apna asar kar rahe the. Veer samet Ava aur Erica ke haath apne aap unke gale par jaake jakad gaye. Woh sabhi apne apne gale ko kass ke dabaane lage. Erica aur Ava dono ki aankhon me aasu the.

Jaha ek taraf Ava haar maante hue sab kuch sweekar kar chuki thi aur mayus aankhein liye Veer ko dekhti jaa rahi thi jaise ye antim shan tha ek dusre ko akhiri baar dekhne ka toh wahi Erica ka chehra kuch aur keh raha tha. Use dekh ke lag raha tha maano jaise woh marrna nahi chaahti thi. Bebasi uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Aankhon se mote mote aansu uske gaalo se behte hue gir rahe the.

'Pariiii-!!!'

[Hmm?]

'H-Help me-!!'

[Ohh? Mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de raha! Fufu~]

'I beg you-!! Please!!!'

[Ohh!! Waqai?]

'Please!!'

Veer ki saansein ukhdi ukhdi aa rahi thi. Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Veer ke haath apne aap gale ko dabaate hue kasste jaa rahe the.

"Urrghhh!"

'P-Pari...!!!'

Agle hi shan Pari ki awaaz thodi badal gayi. Maano jaise woh bhayanak gusse me uss se baat kar rahi thi.

[THEN...! ARE YOU WILLING TO GIVE YOUR BODY TO ME???]

'Huh!??'

[DO YOU WANT ME TO TAKE CONTROL? TO DEFEAT THIS PUNY LITTLE BASTARD?]

'H-Haan-!!'

[ARE YOU WILLING TO HAND OVER YOUR POINTS TO ME???]

Woh chillaayi.

'Haan! *Gwakh* H-Haan!'

[THEN GIVE THEM TO ME-!!!]

'Hmmm!!'

[YOU ARE DOING THIS BY YOUR OWN ACCORD. RIGHT???]

'Y-Yes-!!!'

[THEN GIVE ME... THOSE POINTS!]

'Hmmm-!'

Aur, tabhi Veer ke 5692 points jo usne emergency ke liye bachaaye the. Woh dhadalle se ghatne lage.

[YES...! YES...! GIVE THEM TO ME!! THAT'S RIGHT!!! KEEP IT COMING!! THE MORE THE BETTER...!]

Woh points kaha jaa rahe the, unka istemal kaha ho raha tha Veer kuch nahi jaanta tha. Woh toh Pari ki baat maan vivash hote hue apne saare points daav par laga diya tha.

[YOU MUST THANK ME LATER KID-!!! IT'S YOUR GOOD LUCK THAT I WAS HERE-!!! OTHERWISE, YOU WOULD'VE BEEN DEAD!!!]

Veer ki consciousness dheere dheere jaane lagi. Aur, kuch hi shano me woh behosh ho chuka tha. Pari ne poore shareer pe takeover kar liya tha. Ghatate ghatate Veer ke saare points zero par aake ruk gaye.

[Hahahahahahahaha-!!!]

Pari paaglo ki tarah hass rahi thi.

[Hahahaha-!!! THIS BODY...! IT'S WEAK!!! BUT YOU'RE LUCKY KID-!! BECAUSE I'M THE ONE POSSESSING IT NOW.]

Veer ka badan jab gale ko dabaate hue gir pada toh Erica ne rote hue apni nazre ferr li. Use laga ki Veer iss duniya se jaa chuka hai. Magar, Ava ki nigaahein ekdum Veer ke shareer ke upar sthir tiki hui thi.

Death Flag me aisa koi bhi notification nahi aaya tha. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer zinda tha.

Aur, fir-

Achanak hi Veer ka shareer gravity ke viruddh uski iccha ke bina upar uthne laga. Aas paas ke neeche bikhre sookhe patte kaapne lage. Uske uthate hi uski zulfo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya.

Ava, Erica samet Jaw Long khud palat ke use dekhne par majboor ho gaya. Ye chal kya raha tha?

Jaw Long ko poora yakeen tha ki Veer kaafi damage le chuka tha. Uske baad bhi iss tarah uth khade hona...! Zaahir hai use hairangi honi hi thi. Use kya, yaha par uski jagah koi bhi system holder maujood hota toh uska bhi yahi reaction hota.

Na pehle kabhi aisa kuch dekha gaya, na suna gaya aur na hi aisa kuch hone ki kisi system holder ne kabhi kalpana bhi kari thi. Kintu, Jaw Long sab kuch mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Aur, ye sab kuch asal me ho raha tha. Uske saamne khada yeh naujavan ladka iska jeeta jaagta udahran tha ki aisa kuch bhi sambhav tha.

Veer utha. Uska muh achanak hi khula aur usne ek gehri saans muh se chorri. Kintu, raat me jangal me thand hone ke chalte uski garam saans dhue me tabdeel ho gayi. Aur, dhua uske chehre se chhatate hi uske hontho par ek bhayanak, daanavi aur kutil muskaan fel gayi.





'Huh!?'

Jaw Long ka badan iss baar ek jhatka khaaya, pal bhar ke liye shareer par ruye khade ho gaye. Thand iska kaaran nahi thi. Uski vidhi beech me hi ruk gayi. Harr insaan ka aura neele rang ka hota tha.

Par... Par kabhi bhi usne aisa kuch aaj tak nahi dekha tha. Veer ka aura...

Veer ke badan se jo aura nikal raha tha. Woh pichli baar ki tarah neele rang ka nahi tha. Uske badan se... Iss baar... Woh bhayanak gehre kaale rang ke aura ki lapto se ghira hua tha. Aura keval andar hi nahi tha. Balki, Veer ke badan ke baahar ird gird bhi lapte maarta hua nikal raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaisa nark se koi bhayanak pishaach dharti par aa gaya ho. Jaw Long ne iske pehle bas aatmao ki nakaratmak urjao ke aura ko hi halke kaale rang se lipta dekha tha. Aura vision urjao ko bhi halke rango se dikhaane me saksham thi.

Bhoot, pret, pishaach jeevit praani nahi hote the lekin nakaratmak urja ka strotra zaroor hote the isliye, unka bhi kahi na kahi thoda bahut aura hota tha. Magar, woh aura itna prachand nahi hota tha. Kaali lapte zaroor hoti thi par behad maamuli si. Par, idhar-

Veer ke badan se bheeshan kaali lapte aise nikal rahi thi jaise maano uss par kisi ne aag laga di ho. Bas, farq itna tha ki lapte peeli nahi kaali thi. Beshaq, ye lapte kisi ko bhi dikhayi nahi de sakti thi.

Veer ke naye roop ko dekh Jaw Long do qadam apne aap peeche ki orr chala gaya. Woh samajh raha tha ki savdhani baratna kitna zaroori tha yaha par.

Kintu, Veer poori tarah se shaant khada hua tha. Uski aankhein uske baalo se chhipi hui thi aur muh se nikalti saans nirantar thand ke chalte bhaap me badalti jaa rahi thi. Uske hontho par saji muskan kahi se bhi uski prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Lag raha tha maano uske andar kisi aur jeev ne apna vaas kar liya ho. Kisi aur ne uske shareer par qabza kar liya ho.

Iss waqt uska roop bhayanak, raudra, aur prachand maalum pad raha tha. Yuhi nahi Jaw Long ne apne qadam peeche liye the. Chaah ke bhi Veer ki iss badli hui sthiti ke baare me use kuch pata nahi lag paa raha tha. Yaha tak ki uska system bhi iss paristhiti se anjaan tha.

[Kuch gadbad hai. Samajh nahi aa raha ki kaun se card ya skill ka istemal kiya gaya hai.]

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.6k words. Ye thoda aur lamba jaata magar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat se zyada maatra haanikarak hoti hai. Isliye, ise yahi rokna sahi tha. Agle update me sab kuch samapt hai. Maine keh hi diya tha ki fight 4 updates legi. Teen update ho chuke hai. Bas ek baaki hai. Aur, uske baad shayad ek update aur rahega jo arc ke closure ke liye rahega. Update bahut late aaya hai jaanta hu. Par, mein vivash hu dosto. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Target apna 200 hi hai. Pahucha do. Agla update jald dene ki koshish rahegi.
Dhanyavad!

Fucking shit
Epic shit
Kya end kiya hain eh wala Episode
Aisa lgg raha hain like I’m reading goku go super Saiyan jin ko pta hain kis ki baat kr raha hu they’ll know kitna epic hain

Great update

 

[Sidd19]

Waiting

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

यहाँ कोई बोली लग रही है क्या महाशय ।
कहीं अब कोई 1 लाख न बोल दे...

(वैसे एक बंगला मे रिव्यू भी हो जाए सरकार)

ওয়্যারউলফ ভাই সাহেবের গল্প নিয়ে বাংলায় রিভিউ লিখতে পারি, কিন্তু কে পড়বে?

 

[Werewolf]

Punah jaari karte hai jo kaarya adhoora chorr diya tha.

Here's the part 2 :

Shweta ke saath ab tak jo kuchh bhi hua hai, most of it has been driven by her insecurities because of Bhavna. Bhavna, Veer ki biological mother hai, aur Shweta uski sauteli maa. Plus, Shweta ne saalon tak Veer ko jis tarah treat kiya wo apne aap mein behad dukhad hai. Adding on, Bhavna ka jaisa nature hai, she's calm and composed, the way she interacts with Veer, the way Veer responds to her... you can feel the purity of love between them. Is sabki wajah se, ateet mein huye apraadh ke bodh ki wajah se, Shweta is scared. She's scared of falling back in the line, she's scared of getting tagged as "stepmother" forever. Sauteli Maa kitni bhi achhi kyun na ho, hamesha use sauteli hi kaha jaata hai, aur yahi darr hai Shweta ka. Isiliye kayi baar hum dekh chuke hain ki wo Veer ko yahi kehti hai ki "main tumhari maa hun" and all... Ab ismein ye tathya jud jaaye ki Shweta ne apni santaan khoyi thi to...

Exactly! Shweta bahut zyada insecure feel karti hai. Jab use Veer prapt hua uske baad usne socha tha ki woh dher saara pyaar deke use apna bana legi. Magar, tabhi Tej aur Bhavna ghar me aa dhamki.

Woh dono kisi nightmare se kam nahi uske liye. Shweta Veer ke liye sab kuch karti hai. Woh bas yahi chahti hai ki Veer use maa samjhe aur maa ki tarah uss par dher saara pyaar lutaaye jaise ek beta apni maa par lutata hai. Aur, ye baat satya hai ki woh sauteli maa nahi kehlana chahti.

Breastfeeding Veer was a result of the mother's pain & suffering that she beared for long adjoined with the guilt of putting Veer through all that in the past. Khair, Suman ki entry huyi fir Shweta ke is chapter mein. Idk what to say about that..? *Jose Mourinho*

Well, yes... Breastfeeding guilt ki wajah se bahar nikal ke aaya. Shweta ko pata chala ki Veer sote waqt maa ke doodh ki laalsa rakhta hai. Aur, ye baat use bahut bhavuk kar gayi ki Veer ko sahi se maa ka doodh nahi mil paaya bachpan me jis wajah se woh iss umr me bhi neend me use paane ki koshish karta hai. Kitni hi dukhad baat hai ye. Ye guilt uss par bhaari ho gayi aur usi ko hataane ke liye usne Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaya. Of course isme Suman ne bhi apni harqate induce ki hui thi.

But yaha par usne cheezein galat interpret kar li. Aur, doodh chuswa liye apne. Same goes with purvi. Usne bhi galat interpret kiya. The ladies are thinking that Veer never got the satisfaction of a mother's breast in his childhood and that's why he's unintentionally reaching out for the breasts. It's so sad. That's their interpretation. And, that's why they offered their boobies.

Lekin, ye sirf tiny part hi hai. Majority part ye hai ki... Veer is a grown ass man and he loves boobs. Uske hormones phatt phatt ke baahar nikal rahe hai. He's attracted towards them and wants them. Shweta although offers her breasts at night where he remains in his sleep. Veer doesn't even know that he sucks Shweta's breasts in his sleep. But Purvi on the other hand, has given him the full access to her breasts in his concious state. They had a mutual agreement when they were in a sound mind. Now, that's awesome.

Khair, ab lagta hai ki wo waqt door nahi jab Shweta satya mein Suman ki baaton ko seriously le legi aur Veer ko physically apne kareeb laana hi sahi raasta samajh legi. Jis tarah ki condition mein wo hai, mujhe ummeed nahi hai ki wo koyi bhi raasta chhodegi, jis se ki wo Bhavna se alag aur behtar roop se Veer ko pyaar aur apnapan de sake. She wants to be ahead of Bhavna, she wants to be the one Veer looks up to for everything and anything and it's going to end up in Shweta taking into note what Suman put in her head.

Ye dekhna hoga. Suman kitna aage tak jaati hai inn sab ko karwane aur Shweta uske jaal me kitni fassti hai. Akhir, Suman ye kyu kar rahi hai, ye bhi dekhne layak hoga. Abhi tak uske intentions batlaye nahi gaye hai. Koi nahi jaanta uske dimag me kya pak raha hai.

Ye sab agle arc ka hi hissa hai. Saari gutthiyaan wahi khulengi.

Shweta ki beti ki baat karen to Bhumika kaafi low profile rahi hai ab tak kahani mein. Shuruaat mein to aisa lagta tha ki khud ki koyi personality hi nahi uski, bas Shweta ki guidelines ke mutabik hi har kaam karti hai wo. But her character has underwent a complete overhaul. Ab beshaq wo utna zyada centre mein nahi hoti kahani ke, par fir bhi apni alag pehchan banane ki raah par hai wo. Iski bhi naiyya guilt ke samandar mein hi beh rahi thi aur dhaara itni teevra thi ki Bhumika ne apna hotel Veer ke naam karne ka prastav tak rakh diya tha Shweta ke saamne. Prestige mein Head Chef ko lekar huyi ghatna, Shweta ki jaan bachana, Pranjal ka pardafash aur unka hotel bachana, above all dono ko maaf kar apne parivaar ka hissa banana.. Veer has imprinted himself on Bhumika's soul. I don't think ki wo Arohi ya Tejal ki tarah kinhi aur bhavnaon ki chapet mein aayi hai abhi tak, Veer ko lekar. But yeah, never say never... :dazzled: Between, really love how calculative and calm she is!

You are right about Bhumika.

She hasn't fallen for Veer in any romantic way for now. Bhumika calm bhi hai aur composed bhi. She's like Arohi but not completely like her. Arohi aur behtar dhang se situation ko handle kar sakti hai. Bhumika kabhi kabhi panic kar jaati hai. But she's better in handling the business and coming up with ideas. She knows how to run the food business. Aur, isliye woh Veer ke liye ek mazboot assets me se ek hai. Uske baare me bhi ek badhiya sa segment hai aage. But I don't know for now ki woh Disembowler me rahega ya nahi. Ho sakta hai use mein post pone kar du. Because, Disembowler me kya hona hai ye almost tay hai. Woh segment bada hai. Use yaha ghusedne ke liye sahi jagah nahi mil rahi.

Dekhunga mein kya kiya jaa sakta hai.

Purvi jii Mystic Touch ki shikaar huyi aur uske baad wahi hua jo hona tha.. The nude show, The massage, orgasm, massage and then breastfeeding followed by another orgasm... Waapsi to nahi hai yahaan se. One way traffic hai aur beshaq cheezen aur bhi physical aur erotic hone waali hain in dono ke madhya. Purvi of course Veer se behadh attached hai.. losing her child and then breastfeeding Veer in his childhood, no doubt he holds a special place in Purvi's life.

Yup!

Kehna galat nahi ki Purvi apne bete Ayush se bhi zyada attached ho gayi hai ab Veer se. Ayush baahar Delhi me medical ki padhayi me laga hua hai. Aur, Purvi ke rishte yaha Veer se aur bhi behtar hote jaa rahe hai. Jaha Ayush kabhi ghar par phone karta hai kabhi nahi. Wahi Veer ke aate jaate rehne ke kaaran Purvi ke liye wo bhi uska hi beta bann gaya hai ab.

Ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki full access ke baad inn dono ke beech vartalap kaise baithata hai aur aage kya hota hai.

Ab ise, Veer ki appearance kahen ya mystic touch ka kamaal, ya fir Purvi ki (maybe) unsatisfactory sex life..

Nahi! Purvi ki life sex wise acche se guzri hai. But haan, Veer ke jaisa touch usne aaj tak praapt nahi kiya. Mystic touch alag hi hit karta hai. Chheete hi insaan ko orgasm aa jaaye. Wo itna powerful hai.

Arun Purvi ki sex life kaafi acchi guzri hai. Aur, aisa nahi hai ki Arun sexually ab interested nahi rehta. Kabhi kabhi wo kar lete hai par roz karna ab uske bas ki baat nahi. Age bhi ho rahi hai aur upar se kaam bhi rehta hai. Toh wahi Veer ka touch Purvi ke liye alaukik tha.

Na chahte hue bhi woh apni body ki maang ke aage haar gayi. Aur, woh ye deny nahi kar paayi ki Veer ka uske breasts suck karna use alag maza diya hai.

Veer aur uska rishta Maasi - Bhanje se kahin aage nikal chuka hai. Between, Purvi ka kirdar is kahani mein kaafi alag raha hai, wo young hai aur kaafi frank bhi, isiliye Veer ke saath uska connection kaafi achha baithta hai. Khair, ab dekhna hai ki aage is taraf kya - kya hota hai kyunki Purvi Jii ne to Veer ko invitation de hi diya tha apne paas aane ka jab bhi uska mann ho "doodh peene ka"!

Yes. Aur, aise me Veer tript hoke baahar se aayega toh Shweta ka kya hoga? Woh toh yahi sochegi ki kaha muh maar ke aaya hai uska ladka.

Between, Sumitra jaise kahani mein kahin kho si gayi hai. I mean, ab uske liye aage ki zindagi kya hone waali hai. Pati aur bete teeno hi leechad nikle, uska dukh to soch se pare hai. I hope she finds peace in her daughters and they both take proper care of her. Abhi to ye saamne nahi aaya hai ki Vivek bhi Pranjal ke saath mila hua tha Veer ke khilaaf shadyantra mein.. already feeling sad for her behoshi one more time...

Sumitra agle arc me thodi nazar aayegi. In fact kaafi time se gaayab hue Pranjal aur Karunesh bhi dekhne ko milenge. Jaisa ki Maine kaha... Ye arc unn tamaam logo par limelight daalega jo kaafi samay se spotlight se baahar the.

Ragini's is a curious case. She obviously is madly in love with Veer and Veer of course, replicates her feelings. But her desire of getting married to Veer has been an issue between them. Yahaan do baaten hain, firstly Veer is in love with Nidhi, kya wo Nidhi se byaah karna chahta hai? Yadi haan, to shayad isiliye wo Ragini ko naa keh raha tha shaadi ke liye.

Cheezein ek tarfa nahi chal sakti.
Ragini Veer ko pati ke roop me sweekar karna chahti hai jo ki bilkul bhi galat nahi hai. I mean usne apna sab kuch Veer ko saunp diya aur fir itna kuch karne ke baad agar saamne wala mana kar de toh kya aapko gussa nahi aayega?

Baat bilkul waisi hi hai ki jaise ek ladki ne apni choot de di par baad me ladke ne shaadi karne se mana kar diya.

Ragini be like ~



Woh apni jagah ekdum sahi hai. Lekin, Veer filhal shadi nahi karna chahta. Abhi ye intentions bhi clear nahi hue hai ki Veer nidhi se shadi karna chahta hai ya nahi. Usne kaha hai ki 'I need you.'

Lekin, 'need' ka matlab zaroori nahi ki ek patni ke roop me hi Nidhi uski zindagi me rahe. Ye clear hona baaki hai abhi. Agar, hum assume kar bhi le ki Veer Nidhi se shaadi karna chahta hai. Par, kya Nidhi Veer se shadi karegi? That's the question.

Aur, firse... Upar ki line justify ho gayi. Cheezein ek tarfa nahi chal sakti. Baaki, hum dekhenge ki iss arc me kya hota hai.

Yadi haan, to shayad isiliye wo Ragini ko naa keh raha tha shaadi ke liye. Kyunki jaisa Ragini ne bhi kaha tha ki wo parivaar waalon ko kisi tarah se mana hi leti. Obviously, aasan nahi hota but namumkin bhi nahi tha. Aise mein, Nidhi waala hi ek reason samajh mein aata hai. Not to forget, Veer abhi khud ko Kaera se kamtar hi samajhta aaya hai, jis din aisa hona band ho jayega, cheezen badlengi.

Yes. That's the problem... For now... Veer ke liye Kaera alag league me rahi hai. Par jaise jaise woh khud grow kar raha hai, woh cheezon ko alag dhang se dekhna start kar dega. Not to mention ki Kaera khud hi interested hai usme. Woh toh chaahti hi ye hai ki Veer use claim kare.

Aise me zahir hai ki woh closeness dikhayegi uske prati aur interactions badh jayenge. Veer ke mann me Kaera ki image bhi change hone lagegi aur kahi use khud ko pyaar hi na ho jaaye. Then, there's Ava and Sonia as well. Aur, shadi na karne ka Veer ka faisla filhal sahi hai. He needs time to understand his feelings towards each woman.

She's his first time, and when he'll believe that they're actually equals, he'll want to partner her too. Aise mein, Ragini ki raah (jis manzil ko wo paana chahti hai), kathin lagti hai. Veer ka haq se use apna kehna, use dominate karna, bhale hi kuchh waqt ke liye Ragini ko clarity de gaya ho but jab Veer China se lautega to Ragini ka ravaiyya dekhna interesting hoga. Between, her insecurity of not being able to help Veer will vanish with him setting the IT business.

Pyaar ki raah me kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Jaisa ki Maine kaha... Bahut se Dil tootenge... Bahut se judenge...

Readers ko taiyaar rehna hoga. Zaroori nahi ki jis naiyya ko woh paar hote dekhna chaah rahe hai woh paar hoye. Ho sakta hai aadhe raste me hi woh doob jaaye.

Sonali ke sang sex ke baad ab apni Maa aur Bhabhi sang wo bhi Veer ki list mein shaamil ho chuki hai. Kaushik waala poora kissa aur uske baad ki ghatnaon ke baad ye to hona hi tha. Rochak baat yahaan ye hai ki Sonali us se prem karne lagi hai, bhale hi ye abhi accept na kare wo, ya shayad samajh na paayi ho par satya to yahi hai.

Sonali ka prem thoda alag hai. Woh Veer ko pasand karti hai. Par, woh ye bhi jaanti hai ki use woh jagah nahi milne waali jo woh chaahti hai. Aur, usne ye satya sweekar kar liya hai. Khud par gussa bhi hoti hai wo ki bhala kyu aise ladke ko chaahne lagi jo uske saath uska bann ke reh hi nahi sakta. Par, Veer ko dekhte hi haya ki parat uski saari shikayato par parda daal deti hai. Aur, woh bas sharma ke badbadate hue uss se dur ho jaati hai. Kahi na kahi, woh iss baat se khush hai ki woh Veer ko paa paayi. Aur uski zindagi me woh aaya... Ye uske liye bahut hai. Woh bhi ab mature ho rahi hai kaafi aur apni maa ki baaton ko samajhne ki koshish karti jaa rahi hai.

Lekin, Suman ne jo kuchh kaha tha use wo bhi jhuthlaya nahi jaa sakta. Ab Sonali Veer ki sangini to shayad kabhi na ban paaye, aise mein uski jagah kya hogi Veer ki zindagi mein ye avashya dekhne laayak hone waala hai. I'm sure Veer would do justice to her and her feelings though.

Sonali can never be a wife. That's a given.... Uska auhda justified hai. Woh slave ki shreni me aati hai parantu ek friend bhi hai. Woh apni maa ki tarah poori samarpit hoke daasi ki tarah pesh nahi aati. Iska freedom Veer ne use saunpa hua hai.

Aabha, Shreya aur Tamanna.. the real holy trinity Jokes apart, teeno ko ek hi dum se set kar diya Veer ne. Aabha ki barson ki dabi ichha aur saath hi Shreya ka passion.. naa kewal dono ke sapne poore kiye usne balki bhavishya mein apne liye bhi profit ke raaste khol diye. Tamanna ka matter bhi haldi hi nipat gaya tha. Though, abhi Aadesh ko raaste par laana baaki hai but filhaal ke liye Tamanna to uski pakad se bachkar nikal hi gayi hai.

Aadesh shaant nahi baithega. use to abhi ye bhi nahi pata ki tamanna Veer ki asset bann chuki hai. Woh nishchit roop se Tamanna ko chase karega. Aur dekhna hoga ki aabha Shreya aur Tamanna fir kya karti hai. Unke side kya chal raha hai. Iska zikr hum next arc me dekhenge.

Nidhi ke baare mein ab kya hi kaha jaaye? Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki use judge karna behad hi galat hoga. I'd even say ki Veer ka Ragini se shaadi karna is "lot' easier than that with Nidhi. Nidhi is a mother of two, is Veer's teacher & of course she's a divorcee.

Plus she's elder than Veer.

Nidhi is like the final boss of the game where you cannot capture her in one go.

Uska darr ya confusion Veer ko lekar, uski baaton ko lekar bilkul jaayaz hai. "I need you" waala kissa ho ya fir Sofa par us raat Nidhi ko kiss karne waala, Veer pichhle kuchh samay mein thoda pushy raha hai Nidhi ki taraf but he has taken care of drawing the line as well. He's giving her time, but has made his intentions & feelings absolutely clear

SANJU ( V. R. ) always complains that why Veer is after elder ladies when he has so many gorgeous girls around his age?

Ab kaun samjhaye inko. Unko iss age me nayi nayi annchuyi kaliyaan pasand aati hai. Aur, yaha Veer jaisi umr ke ladko ko iss jawani me elderly ladies pasand aati hai jo unse kuch saal badi hoti hai.

Kise nahi pasand aati hai milfs? Not just milfs but bhabhis too.

• They understand you better, faster and in an easier way.
• They provide you the utmost satisfaction. If you know what I mean.
• They are mostly good in making food.
• They keep in mind how to take care of little things for you.
• They are goddamn gorgeous and contain unmatchable charm.
• They have just the right amount of flesh in the desired portions for men.
• They pamper you and are extremely good in seduction.
• They are hungry for your love and remain in heat most of the times.

Ab aur kya chahiye? Nidhi is like that too... Veer ki kitni seva ki usne. Kyu, Veer uss se pyaar nahi karega? Imagine Nidhi as your teacher who took you into her home even after knowing that you're a guy.... To her home where she lives alone with just her little girl and struggling to get her baby back from the clutches of her husband.

Imagine the trust she had on Veer at that time. I mean... Veer ki jagah koi aur hota toh woh kuch bhi kar sakta tha. Yet, even after knowing the risks she believed in him... Took care of him... Bought clothes for him... Took him to hotels... Prepared food for him... Taught him for exams... And much more. How can you not fall for her?

I'd be really excited to read Nidhi's reactions when she's gonna see Veer for the first time after this China trip. Chunki Veer wahaan jaane se pehle use goodbye kehne aaya tha, par usne suna nahi, to I think wo aur bhi utsuk hogi Veer se milne ke liye. Btw. Shreya ke Veer ko touch karne, hug aur kiss karne par jo reactions Nidhi ke rahe hain, I don't think ki boht zyada door hai ab wo kabool karne se ki she too has fallen for Veer...

Nidhi ka toh kaafi aham role hai aane waale arc me. Bahut dilchasp hone waale hai uske scenes.

Aadesh Jaisinghani, owner of Casa Belle.. jaise zyadatar bade udyogpati ravaiyya rakhte hain apne competition ke liye, waisa hi in sajjan ka bhi tha. Ab underworld mein chhote mote bhi connections hon aur aapka business bhi theek - thaak chal raha ho, to kaun nahi bhatkega raaste se? Tamanna ko mohre ki tarah istemaal kar jo khel Aadesh ne khela, usmein use kahin na kahin munh ki khaani padi. Though, I was really surprised by Veer's methods during that incident, I mean, he literally did nothing and let Aadesh play his cards. Though, Garofano aur Balhaar ke aagman se cheezen badli but still, I thought ki cheezen aur bhi alag ho sakti thi...

Veer didn't prepare anything
I mean... He never thought Aadesh's PA would do such thing. Keep in mind that Aadesh never did anything. He was just teasing Veer and trying to belittle him.... which actually never affected Veer that much. Things escalated when Aadesh's PA threw wine on Veer's face. (Veer never thought something like that would happen.) He was caught off guard. Otherwise, given his reflexes he could have easily dodged that...

I mean imagine you are going to pet an innocent looking dog and suddenly he opens his teeth and bites your hand off.




The attack came when you least expected it. Same thing happened here. Although everything went well after that...

Ab Veer ke paas kuchh suboot hain jo usne spy ko Casa Belle mein plant kar jutaaye hain, to intezaar rahega ki kaise ise handle karega wo.. Btw. ab to shayad hamla nahi hone waala is hotel par jaisa Garofano ne kaha tha, ya fir Morocco ke baad agla nishaana yahi hai..?

I think usne already wo use kar liye the. Didn't he? He found some confidential info related to Aadesh through his spies. But... I don't think there are any more of those spies now in Casa Belle. Might as well check it out later so as to not get confused...

Ab rukh karte hain Suhana Madam ki taraf.. Veer was missing her during that Casa Belle incident, wasn't he? Well, who won't?

Oh he did. It's been such a long time since we last saw her.

She's such a sweetheart. What a turnaround it has been for her! She was one of the most arrogant and unlikeable characters and now her return to the limelight is highly anticipated. Between, kill Gaurav.

Gaurav is the CEO of Globerays. Veer has already initiated a plan. Remember he told Niharika to select the best candidates out there in Globerays. Niharika is the head of the HR department in Globerays.

Niharika already has her two slaves. They will follow her due to necessity.

How can you treat cutie Suhana of all people like that? Man, I hate Gaurav. Veer's next meeting with Suhana is also highly anticipated. Kyunki Gaurav ko already nishaane par le chuka hai Veer, aur Niharika ke zariye jald hi Globerays ko bhi patan ki taraf le jaane waala hai.. aise mein jab Suhana ko iss sabke baare mein jaankari milegi, to uska kya reaction hoga?

We'll see. Kyuki bahut si cheezein next arc me hone waali hai.

Uske status mein bhi question mark hi tha, and I think we all know ki aisa kyun tha.. At least, Dr. Ashika ko to pata hi hai, no? I wish ki Veer jald se jald Suhana ko Gaurav se aazad karwa sake, aur us suar ne itne saal jo Pushkar ke naam par Suhana ko torture kiya hai, use uska bhugtaan karna pade...

Suhana ko gaurav se freedom dilaane ke baad kya? Kya Veer uss se shadi karega? Suhana aise hi toh nahi ghoom sakti na? Aur, agar karta bhi hai toh fir baakiyon ka kya?

Btw, woh Dr. Ashita hai. Ashita ek psychiatrist hai. Veer ke baare me woh jaan hi chuki thi jab Suhana bhaagte hue Veer ko sahi salamat dekhne gayi thi. Ab bas uska aur Veer ka bhaint karna baaki hai. It will interesting to see their interaction.

Between, I don't think ki abhi Niharika poori tarah nishtha rakhti hai Veer ke liye. I mean, agar uske jo photos athva videos hain Veer ke paas, wo scene se hatt jaayen, to ab bhi wo Veer ke khilaaf kuchh bada karne se pichhe nahi hategi. But the fact that Veer gave her an offer of higher salary, plus, she has already tried to do something about those videos, and has already failed.. I don't think ki wo kuchh ulta seedha karegi abhi ke liye. Uski submissive side baahar aa rahi hai and maybe, very soon she'll actually kneel down in front of Veer?

Wo shuru se hi ek masochist hai.
Just like Suman. Lekin, khud ko domineering dikha ke woh ab tak ye dikhati aayi hai ki woh ek sadist hai. Balki, hai iska ulta. Use khud nahi pata ki woh ek masochist hai. Kyuki, kabhi use aisa mard mila nahi jo use ye sab feel karwa sake...

Uska pati vikaas... Aankh utha ke agar Niharika use dekh le toh Vikaas ki gaand phat jaati hai. Uski itni aukaat nahi ki woh Niharika ko kuch bol de.

Isliye toh woh baahar muh maarta tha. Nidhi ke sang uski harqate... Pushy hona... Baaki madam logo me ghusna... Kyuki, Niharika domineering thi ghar me. Woh Vikaas se zyada bhi kamati hai, aur toh aur uski family financially strong bhi hai. Uski nazron me mard kisi ke kaam ke nahi. Aur, isliye woh shaadi nahi karna chaahti thi. Ye humne dekha hua hai.

Isliye usne aisa pati dhundha jo uss se dabb ke rahe. Vikaas financially kamzor tha aur upar se woh ek aisa mard hai jaha agla vyakti use dominate kar sakta hai agar chaahe toh. Niharika ne usi ka fayda uthaya. She was enjoying her freedom and domination until Veer came and fucked her brains out.

He showed her what a true man is... He fucked her with pure domination and Niharika succumbed to his man force.

Sonia aur Kaera dono hi pichhle kuchh waqt mein zyada nahi dikhi hain.. Sonia ke saath wo Werewolf shuru se hi anyaay karte aaye hain.. I don't ki kab Sonia madam ko khulkar saamne aane ka chance milega.

Next arc.
Trinity will be assembled. It's a given...

Agar Sonia Jii ko adhik story time mila hota Veer ke saath to shayad Casa Belle mein bhi wo Veer ki sahayta karne se pichhe nahi hatti.. But abhi tak dono ke madhya itna strong relationship ban hi nahi paaya ki utni badi deal ko darkinaar kar wo Veer ki sahayta ko aage aati... :dazzled:I hope ki is aane waale arc mein usko adhik samay milega.. Btw. cutie Ava ko apne sang India le jaa raha hai Veer, I think dekhne laayak hoga jab Sonia aur Kaera dono ko is baare mein maloom chalega... Reunion hone waala hai lol...

Jab interaction dheere dheere kam hone lagta hai, toh connection tootne lagta hai. Farq nahi padta ki aap kitne hi acche dost kyu na ho. School me kabhi humare bahut acche dost the. Par, kya aaj woh sab hamare saath hai? 99% ka jawab yahi hoga ki nahi.

Kaaran? Less interaction. Interaction dheere dheere kam hota gaya aur ek waqt aisa aaya ki connection kaafi kamzor pad gaya. Sonia aur Veer ke beech kuch aisa hi hai. Lekin, iska sudhaar hume agle arc me dekhne ko milega.

Kaera is in a state of confusion and she's looking for clarity. Use abhi - abhi apne emotions waapis mile hain aur aisi sthiti mein us se koyi boht zyada apekshayen rakhna galat hoga. Use waqt chahiye sambhalne ke liye, cheezon ko analyse karne ke liye aur unn sabhi emotions ko poori tarah samajhne ke liye bhi. I'm sure ki kuchh waqt baad wo khud hi Veer se nikat-ta badhane ki aur pehla kadam bhi badha degi. Could Ava coming to India with him actually be the catalyst in Kaera actually following Julia's advice? I think so. Between, "I want him to claim me".. what a bar! Abhi uske baare mein adhik charcha karne ka shayad artha nahi banta, par kuchh samay baad shayad cheezen badal sakti hain.

Did you notice?

Kaera is a professional in business strategies. She never felt love... And she sees most of the things with a business perspective. That's why...

"I want him to claim me." It's like owning a property. Claim word is used when you take hold of something. Be it property, any asset or anything. Since, she's into business field. Hence, her dialogue with such wordings.

Chinatown Arc...

Jaw Long aur Li Renshu.. do system holders, do aise shakhs jinhe unke log bhagwan ka darja dete hain par dono ki soch aur methods bilkul alag. Order aur Legion ke beech jo kuchh bhi matbhed the unhe avashya hi baatcheet se khatm kiya jaa sakta tha parantu Jaw Long ne koi alag hi raasta chuna.. Ab ismein Rebecca bhi ek wajah thi, ise jhuthlaya nahi jaa sakta. Parantu satya to yahi hai ki Jaw Long ne naa kewal apne faayde aur lobh ke liye apne mulk se gaddari ki balki saath hi apne liye nishthavan saathiyon ko bhi maut ke raaste par dhakel diya. Ab sab shaant hone ke baad, Ken ko Legion ka naya adhikaari banaya gaya hai. Beshaq treaty usne bhi sign kar li hai Order ke saath, and I hope ki wo apne logon ke bhale ke liye hi kaam karega...

Greed!

Acche accho ka patan ka kaaran banti hai. Jaw Long bhi uska shikaar hua. Crimson bhi usi ka shikaar hua tha. Aise dekha jaaye toh system holders aur insaano me koi antar nahi. System holders bhi... Greed ke aage haar gaye.

Jaw Long was deadass a huge challenge for Veer. Animal Kingdom!! What an insane thing that was man! Veer just escaped death. Apne sabhi cards, skills aur saath hi twisted dimaag ke chalte akele hi 3 system holders se bhid gaya tha Jaw Long. Not a small thing, to be very honest. Parantu jaisa ki hona hi tha, ant mein uska bhi ant ho hi gaya. Lekin, kya Jaw Long kewal ek mohra tha? Iske baare mein neeche baat karunga. Abhi chalte hain cutie Garofano ki taraf..

Imagine fighting against Veer, Ava and Erica one after the other.

Jaw Long had immense stamina and power. But the reason for his demise was just one thing.

Veer's existence.

Violet.. Jo kuchh bhi uske saath ateet mein hua, jo kuchh bhi us baap roopi bhediye ne kiya, uske baad bhi Violet ne himmat nahi haari aur ant mein apna badla poora kar liya. She's a different character. There's the Trinity, there's Erica, there are the females that are related to Veer, but, no one is like Garofano. She's sassy and her aura is breathtaking. The way she has conversed with Veer, be it Casa Belle washroom or the car incident when she carried him in her arms (man!!),

Ohhh! Are you falling for her too?
Indeed. I agree that she's different from others. I agree with her sassy personality too.

or even the latest one jab Veer ko hosh aaya tha. Ab ye spasht ho chuka hai ki use bhi hypnotize kiya gaya tha but still, "She was right. You're the one I was yearning for".. The statement still stands. Her closeness and chemistry with Veer is visible and when she'll actually be back to the story, in order to help Veer with the clothing business, things will be beautiful again... Between, Scourge is a mental card dude.. she's definitely something! On top of that ~ "Yohana's Scalpel", Veer ko apne ilaaj ke liye ek sundar doctor bhi mil chuki hai...

However, Garofano can't be with him all the time. As she said... Veer will have to find a trustworthy doctor who can operate on him without spilling the secrets. Who might it be?

Erica.. The way she was looking at Veer, especially at the airport.. obviously he has got a soft spot in her heart. Not going to speculate a lot here but jis tarah Veer ne wahaan Jaw Long ko handle kiya, Erica ka Renshu ke saamne paksh liya, "You've grown up", and of course, Renshu ka kehna ki "Veer is stronger than me"... In sabke baad Veer ki chhavi jo utni achhi nahi thi Erica ke mann mein, ab poori tarah badal chuki hai. I believe the next time, Erica & Veer are going to cross paths, she's going to be different.

There's no doubt about it.
Erica will come back stronger and her behaviour towards Veer has already changed.

She's definitely going to work upon herself more and more. The experience she has got from the whole clash is going to be really fruitful for her.

Indeed.

Now, cutie Ava...

Did I read that right?

She's going to India with Veer. The reunion of the Trinity is of course one of the most anticipated parts of the story. But I'm actually excited ki Veer use apne sang kyun lekar gaya hai? Kya isiliye ki wo samajh chuka hai ki ab Ava actually apna maarg bhatak sa chuki hai. Except Veer, she doesn't have anyone to look at..? Grace ki mrityu ke baad kaafi kuchh badal chuka hai uski zindagi mein. Especially, jo guilt uske bheetar hai wo use Veer ki taraf aur adhik le jaa raha hai. Uska Veer ki sahayta ke liye aana aur Veer ke unn shabdon ki taraf ishara karna ~ "Protect your loved one"..? Things are blurry yet clear! Beshaq, Ava ki madad ke bina shayad Veer, Jaw Long ko samapt naa kar paata, ulta uska astitva khatre mein tha.. Baharhal, abhi ke liye to Veer poore mann se Ava ko maaf nahi karne waala, but she's going to earn it soon, I believe..!

Veer kyu Ava ko leke aaya hai iska jawab toh next update me hi mil jayega.

Readers jaise soch rahe hai waisa utni jaldi unhe dekhne ko milne nahi waala. You'll realise what I'm talking about once you'll read the next update.

Ab waapis main Jaw Long ki taraf aana chahunga. I think wo kewal ek mohra tha, bilkul Crimson ki hi tarah! Last update ke ant mein jo kuchh bhi hua, Rebecca aur wo shakhs... Crimson ki maut ke baad Veer ne jab past dekha tha tab us shakhs ne kaha tha ki, "Koi hoga jo ise dekhega".. Bilkul waisa hi Rebecca ne kaha tha Jaw Long se... Too hard not to believe ki wo shakhs jise Rebecca ant mein milne gayi, wo "X" hi tha. It can't just be a coincidence. Though, kahin na kahin ek halka sa andesha hua ki Rebecca khudki poorn ichha se ye sab nahi kar rahi hai. I mean, it seems like he's pulling the strings and she's just bound to follow what he orders... Abhi "X" ke baare mein baat karne ka koi arth banta nahi hai but I'm sure ki dheere - dheere kahani us taraf badh rahi hai jahaan uske baare mein aur jaan-ne ko milega...

Kahani ab ye batla rahi hai ki peeth peeche kitna kuch chal raha hai. Chinatown ke ant me hi Rebecca aur ye saare unknown saamne aaye hai. Just imagine woh kab se ye sab kar rahe honge aur kya kya kar chuke honge.

Aur aise hi dheere dheere aur bhi cheezein saamne aati jayengi.

Divya ko FBCC mein kaam milna.. kya iski wajah Veer hi hai? Kya usi ki wajah se Rebecca ne Divya ko vishwas mein liya hai? Possible! Baharhal, Divya ka jeevan bhi koyi boht achha to jaa nahi raha hai. Hope ki use bhi Nick naamak chutiye se jald hi aazadi mil jaaye. Waise bhi us rishte mein satya mein kuchh bhi bacha nahi hai.

Divya ka role bhi hai Disembowler me. Badhiya arc hone waala hai ye aur bahut se logo par limelight daali jayegi.

Pari..!! "Different beings & not different personalities"... Ismein koi doraye nahi hai ki sabhi system holders special hain, in a sense ki wo aam logon mein hi shaamil the, par unhe kisi na kisi kaaran se chuna gaya aur aaj wo is makaam par hain. But I feel ki Veer is special in the queue of "normal" system holders. I don't know ki iska reason kya hai but Pari is different from the other systems that have been seen in the story till now. Kya "X" ne hi Veer ko chuna hai? Kya systems khudse apna host na chunkar unhe kisi ne especially bheja hai, kuchh particular logon ko liye? "X" ne hi? Mere speculations!! Jab wo seductive personality/being dobara lautegi tab shayad kuchh aur clarity mil sake is taraf. Abhi ke liye to main khush hun ki Pari ka ab tak ka sabse behtar version fir aa gaya hai... :yess:

Since she has returned. That means other Pari will also return. The first Pari... Where she mocked Veer for his Low stats. Remember?
The second pari... Pari after that... Or maybe they might have already repeated themselves but you were a bit unfocused at that time to notice the difference. She has told him that there are only limited personalities.

Personalities was a lie. Iska matlab limited number of Pari hai uske andar. Personalities nahi.

Morocco mein jo hamla hua, Casa Belle par jis hamle ka zikra hua, kya wo aapas mein jude huye hain? Kya Rebecca hi unke pichhe hai ya koyi aur hi teesra hai jo is khel mein "X" dwara shaamil kiya jaa chuka hai? Kaafi sawaal uth chuke hain is arc ke samaapt hote hote...

Ye toh hona hi tha. Harr arc khatam hone ke saath saath uttar toh deke jayega hi par naye sawaal bhi khade kar jayega.

Ab jo arc aane waala hai, Disembowler arc! Uski baat karen to of course, Madhuri ke pita ka kissa ab saamne aayega. Prabhakar ki maut aur wo do hatyayen jo Satara aur Panchagni mein huyi, teenon ke hi pichhe ek hi shakhs hai jiski pehchan abhi saamne nahi aayi hai. Pyscho system holder jo House of Killers arc mein saamne aaya tha? Kya wo hi ho sakta hai iske pichhe? I think ki wahi ho sakta hai ya shayad koyi aam insaan bhi?? Ab jaisi police ne aashanka jatayi thi agla stop us killer ka Mumbai ho sakta hai aur Veer babu bhi ghar laut rahen hain... Intezaar rahega is meet-up ka!!

Agla arc usi baare me hai. Jaha parallel me hum baaki characters ke interactions aur unke developments ko dekhte Jayenge. Ek parallel ride rahegi ye badhiya si.

Veer, Ava, Garofano, Renshu, Erica, Rebecca, Psycho, Fighter (Renshu's Foe)... 8 ho gaye, adding on Crimson & Jaw Long.. 10!! Ab "X" saahab bhi shaamil hain ya nahi, ye kaha nahi jaa sakta. Wo "God" hi "X" tha ya nahi ye bhi nahi clear hai abhi. To kuchh ek system holders abhi bhi saamne aana baaki hain. Abhi ke liye Veer ke saath 4 to hain, baaki bache kaunsa paksh chunenge, dekhne yogya hoga!

We'll see them very soon. Summit arc.

Ab tak ka mera likha sabse lengthy review hai ye, but man, you totally deserve it.

Sirf ju ka nahi... Phorum me maujood ab tak ka sabse bada revo hoga ye.

If these reviews and these words mean anything to you, motivate you in any way, then this is just a token of appreciation and thanks for the efforts you've been putting in this story and from here, with the amount of time you've spent in solidifying the structure of the story, there's only one way, and that's upwards!!

Man, wtf...! Wtf did you just write...? Itna bada revo. Mere ko reply karte karte itna samay lag gaya. I couldn't reply it in one go. I had to break it down into two parts. Itna bada revo aaj tak nahi dekha Maine poore forum par 5 saal se. It's a blessing to have it on my own thread. Thanks a lot man. And, itne bade revo ke liye...

I thought ju gayab ho gaye. Ab bas silently hi read karoge ya shayad na bhi karo. You weren't active since a long time. However, you can back as Undertaker rose from his coffin.

Thanka a lot for this biggest and longest revo. Agle arc ka kaam jaari hai. Thodi gati slow hai par kaam jaari hai. Umeed hai jald hi blueprint taiyaar ho jayegi aur hum kahani me aage badhenge jald hi. Aise hi support karte rehne ka man. Jald hi haazir hounga firse naye arc ke saath.

 

[Werewolf]

मै भी साल मे एक ही रिव्यू दूंगा और वह भी बंगला मे Werewolf भाई साहब । पचास हजार शब्दों का वह रिव्यू होगा ।

Use padhega kaun?
আমি বাংলা জানি না

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Use padhega kaun?
আমি বাংলা জানি না

बंगला मे वही तो लिखा कि यह लेंग्वेज पढ़ेंगे कितने लोग?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Punah jaari karte hai jo kaarya adhoora chorr diya tha.

Here's the part 2 :


Exactly! Shweta bahut zyada insecure feel karti hai. Jab use Veer prapt hua uske baad usne socha tha ki woh dher saara pyaar deke use apna bana legi. Magar, tabhi Tej aur Bhavna ghar me aa dhamki.

Woh dono kisi nightmare se kam nahi uske liye. Shweta Veer ke liye sab kuch karti hai. Woh bas yahi chahti hai ki Veer use maa samjhe aur maa ki tarah uss par dher saara pyaar lutaaye jaise ek beta apni maa par lutata hai. Aur, ye baat satya hai ki woh sauteli maa nahi kehlana chahti.

Well, yes... Breastfeeding guilt ki wajah se bahar nikal ke aaya. Shweta ko pata chala ki Veer sote waqt maa ke doodh ki laalsa rakhta hai. Aur, ye baat use bahut bhavuk kar gayi ki Veer ko sahi se maa ka doodh nahi mil paaya bachpan me jis wajah se woh iss umr me bhi neend me use paane ki koshish karta hai. Kitni hi dukhad baat hai ye. Ye guilt uss par bhaari ho gayi aur usi ko hataane ke liye usne Veer ko apna stanpaan karwaya. Of course isme Suman ne bhi apni harqate induce ki hui thi.

But yaha par usne cheezein galat interpret kar li. Aur, doodh chuswa liye apne. Same goes with purvi. Usne bhi galat interpret kiya. The ladies are thinking that Veer never got the satisfaction of a mother's breast in his childhood and that's why he's unintentionally reaching out for the breasts. It's so sad. That's their interpretation. And, that's why they offered their boobies.

Lekin, ye sirf tiny part hi hai. Majority part ye hai ki... Veer is a grown ass man and he loves boobs. Uske hormones phatt phatt ke baahar nikal rahe hai. He's attracted towards them and wants them. Shweta although offers her breasts at night where he remains in his sleep. Veer doesn't even know that he sucks Shweta's breasts in his sleep. But Purvi on the other hand, has given him the full access to her breasts in his concious state. They had a mutual agreement when they were in a sound mind. Now, that's awesome.

Ye dekhna hoga. Suman kitna aage tak jaati hai inn sab ko karwane aur Shweta uske jaal me kitni fassti hai. Akhir, Suman ye kyu kar rahi hai, ye bhi dekhne layak hoga. Abhi tak uske intentions batlaye nahi gaye hai. Koi nahi jaanta uske dimag me kya pak raha hai.

Ye sab agle arc ka hi hissa hai. Saari gutthiyaan wahi khulengi.

You are right about Bhumika.

She hasn't fallen for Veer in any romantic way for now. Bhumika calm bhi hai aur composed bhi. She's like Arohi but not completely like her. Arohi aur behtar dhang se situation ko handle kar sakti hai. Bhumika kabhi kabhi panic kar jaati hai. But she's better in handling the business and coming up with ideas. She knows how to run the food business. Aur, isliye woh Veer ke liye ek mazboot assets me se ek hai. Uske baare me bhi ek badhiya sa segment hai aage. But I don't know for now ki woh Disembowler me rahega ya nahi. Ho sakta hai use mein post pone kar du. Because, Disembowler me kya hona hai ye almost tay hai. Woh segment bada hai. Use yaha ghusedne ke liye sahi jagah nahi mil rahi.

Dekhunga mein kya kiya jaa sakta hai.

Yup!

Kehna galat nahi ki Purvi apne bete Ayush se bhi zyada attached ho gayi hai ab Veer se. Ayush baahar Delhi me medical ki padhayi me laga hua hai. Aur, Purvi ke rishte yaha Veer se aur bhi behtar hote jaa rahe hai. Jaha Ayush kabhi ghar par phone karta hai kabhi nahi. Wahi Veer ke aate jaate rehne ke kaaran Purvi ke liye wo bhi uska hi beta bann gaya hai ab.

Ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki full access ke baad inn dono ke beech vartalap kaise baithata hai aur aage kya hota hai.

Nahi! Purvi ki life sex wise acche se guzri hai. But haan, Veer ke jaisa touch usne aaj tak praapt nahi kiya. Mystic touch alag hi hit karta hai. Chheete hi insaan ko orgasm aa jaaye. Wo itna powerful hai.

Arun Purvi ki sex life kaafi acchi guzri hai. Aur, aisa nahi hai ki Arun sexually ab interested nahi rehta. Kabhi kabhi wo kar lete hai par roz karna ab uske bas ki baat nahi. Age bhi ho rahi hai aur upar se kaam bhi rehta hai. Toh wahi Veer ka touch Purvi ke liye alaukik tha.

Na chahte hue bhi woh apni body ki maang ke aage haar gayi. Aur, woh ye deny nahi kar paayi ki Veer ka uske breasts suck karna use alag maza diya hai.

Yes. Aur, aise me Veer tript hoke baahar se aayega toh Shweta ka kya hoga? Woh toh yahi sochegi ki kaha muh maar ke aaya hai uska ladka.

Sumitra agle arc me thodi nazar aayegi. In fact kaafi time se gaayab hue Pranjal aur Karunesh bhi dekhne ko milenge. Jaisa ki Maine kaha... Ye arc unn tamaam logo par limelight daalega jo kaafi samay se spotlight se baahar the.

Cheezein ek tarfa nahi chal sakti.
Ragini Veer ko pati ke roop me sweekar karna chahti hai jo ki bilkul bhi galat nahi hai. I mean usne apna sab kuch Veer ko saunp diya aur fir itna kuch karne ke baad agar saamne wala mana kar de toh kya aapko gussa nahi aayega?

Baat bilkul waisi hi hai ki jaise ek ladki ne apni choot de di par baad me ladke ne shaadi karne se mana kar diya.

Ragini be like ~



Woh apni jagah ekdum sahi hai. Lekin, Veer filhal shadi nahi karna chahta. Abhi ye intentions bhi clear nahi hue hai ki Veer nidhi se shadi karna chahta hai ya nahi. Usne kaha hai ki 'I need you.'

Lekin, 'need' ka matlab zaroori nahi ki ek patni ke roop me hi Nidhi uski zindagi me rahe. Ye clear hona baaki hai abhi. Agar, hum assume kar bhi le ki Veer Nidhi se shaadi karna chahta hai. Par, kya Nidhi Veer se shadi karegi? That's the question.

Aur, firse... Upar ki line justify ho gayi. Cheezein ek tarfa nahi chal sakti. Baaki, hum dekhenge ki iss arc me kya hota hai.

Yes. That's the problem... For now... Veer ke liye Kaera alag league me rahi hai. Par jaise jaise woh khud grow kar raha hai, woh cheezon ko alag dhang se dekhna start kar dega. Not to mention ki Kaera khud hi interested hai usme. Woh toh chaahti hi ye hai ki Veer use claim kare.

Aise me zahir hai ki woh closeness dikhayegi uske prati aur interactions badh jayenge. Veer ke mann me Kaera ki image bhi change hone lagegi aur kahi use khud ko pyaar hi na ho jaaye. Then, there's Ava and Sonia as well. Aur, shadi na karne ka Veer ka faisla filhal sahi hai. He needs time to understand his feelings towards each woman.

Pyaar ki raah me kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Jaisa ki Maine kaha... Bahut se Dil tootenge... Bahut se judenge...

Readers ko taiyaar rehna hoga. Zaroori nahi ki jis naiyya ko woh paar hote dekhna chaah rahe hai woh paar hoye. Ho sakta hai aadhe raste me hi woh doob jaaye.

Sonali ka prem thoda alag hai. Woh Veer ko pasand karti hai. Par, woh ye bhi jaanti hai ki use woh jagah nahi milne waali jo woh chaahti hai. Aur, usne ye satya sweekar kar liya hai. Khud par gussa bhi hoti hai wo ki bhala kyu aise ladke ko chaahne lagi jo uske saath uska bann ke reh hi nahi sakta. Par, Veer ko dekhte hi haya ki parat uski saari shikayato par parda daal deti hai. Aur, woh bas sharma ke badbadate hue uss se dur ho jaati hai. Kahi na kahi, woh iss baat se khush hai ki woh Veer ko paa paayi. Aur uski zindagi me woh aaya... Ye uske liye bahut hai. Woh bhi ab mature ho rahi hai kaafi aur apni maa ki baaton ko samajhne ki koshish karti jaa rahi hai.

Sonali can never be a wife. That's a given.... Uska auhda justified hai. Woh slave ki shreni me aati hai parantu ek friend bhi hai. Woh apni maa ki tarah poori samarpit hoke daasi ki tarah pesh nahi aati. Iska freedom Veer ne use saunpa hua hai.

Aadesh shaant nahi baithega. use to abhi ye bhi nahi pata ki tamanna Veer ki asset bann chuki hai. Woh nishchit roop se Tamanna ko chase karega. Aur dekhna hoga ki aabha Shreya aur Tamanna fir kya karti hai. Unke side kya chal raha hai. Iska zikr hum next arc me dekhenge.

Plus she's elder than Veer.

Nidhi is like the final boss of the game where you cannot capture her in one go.

SANJU ( V. R. ) always complains that why Veer is after elder ladies when he has so many gorgeous girls around his age?

Ab kaun samjhaye inko. Unko iss age me nayi nayi annchuyi kaliyaan pasand aati hai. Aur, yaha Veer jaisi umr ke ladko ko iss jawani me elderly ladies pasand aati hai jo unse kuch saal badi hoti hai.

Kise nahi pasand aati hai milfs? Not just milfs but bhabhis too.

• They understand you better, faster and in an easier way.
• They provide you the utmost satisfaction. If you know what I mean.
• They are mostly good in making food.
• They keep in mind how to take care of little things for you.
• They are goddamn gorgeous and contain unmatchable charm.
• They have just the right amount of flesh in the desired portions for men.
• They pamper you and are extremely good in seduction.
• They are hungry for your love and remain in heat most of the times.

Ab aur kya chahiye? Nidhi is like that too... Veer ki kitni seva ki usne. Kyu, Veer uss se pyaar nahi karega? Imagine Nidhi as your teacher who took you into her home even after knowing that you're a guy.... To her home where she lives alone with just her little girl and struggling to get her baby back from the clutches of her husband.

Imagine the trust she had on Veer at that time. I mean... Veer ki jagah koi aur hota toh woh kuch bhi kar sakta tha. Yet, even after knowing the risks she believed in him... Took care of him... Bought clothes for him... Took him to hotels... Prepared food for him... Taught him for exams... And much more. How can you not fall for her?

Nidhi ka toh kaafi aham role hai aane waale arc me. Bahut dilchasp hone waale hai uske scenes.

Veer didn't prepare anything
I mean... He never thought Aadesh's PA would do such thing. Keep in mind that Aadesh never did anything. He was just teasing Veer and trying to belittle him.... which actually never affected Veer that much. Things escalated when Aadesh's PA threw wine on Veer's face. (Veer never thought something like that would happen.) He was caught off guard. Otherwise, given his reflexes he could have easily dodged that...

I mean imagine you are going to pet an innocent looking dog and suddenly he opens his teeth and bites your hand off.




The attack came when you least expected it. Same thing happened here. Although everything went well after that...

I think usne already wo use kar liye the. Didn't he? He found some confidential info related to Aadesh through his spies. But... I don't think there are any more of those spies now in Casa Belle. Might as well check it out later so as to not get confused...

Oh he did. It's been such a long time since we last saw her.

Gaurav is the CEO of Globerays. Veer has already initiated a plan. Remember he told Niharika to select the best candidates out there in Globerays. Niharika is the head of the HR department in Globerays.

Niharika already has her two slaves. They will follow her due to necessity.

We'll see. Kyuki bahut si cheezein next arc me hone waali hai.

Suhana ko gaurav se freedom dilaane ke baad kya? Kya Veer uss se shadi karega? Suhana aise hi toh nahi ghoom sakti na? Aur, agar karta bhi hai toh fir baakiyon ka kya?

Btw, woh Dr. Ashita hai. Ashita ek psychiatrist hai. Veer ke baare me woh jaan hi chuki thi jab Suhana bhaagte hue Veer ko sahi salamat dekhne gayi thi. Ab bas uska aur Veer ka bhaint karna baaki hai. It will interesting to see their interaction.

Wo shuru se hi ek masochist hai.
Just like Suman. Lekin, khud ko domineering dikha ke woh ab tak ye dikhati aayi hai ki woh ek sadist hai. Balki, hai iska ulta. Use khud nahi pata ki woh ek masochist hai. Kyuki, kabhi use aisa mard mila nahi jo use ye sab feel karwa sake...

Uska pati vikaas... Aankh utha ke agar Niharika use dekh le toh Vikaas ki gaand phat jaati hai. Uski itni aukaat nahi ki woh Niharika ko kuch bol de.

Isliye toh woh baahar muh maarta tha. Nidhi ke sang uski harqate... Pushy hona... Baaki madam logo me ghusna... Kyuki, Niharika domineering thi ghar me. Woh Vikaas se zyada bhi kamati hai, aur toh aur uski family financially strong bhi hai. Uski nazron me mard kisi ke kaam ke nahi. Aur, isliye woh shaadi nahi karna chaahti thi. Ye humne dekha hua hai.

Isliye usne aisa pati dhundha jo uss se dabb ke rahe. Vikaas financially kamzor tha aur upar se woh ek aisa mard hai jaha agla vyakti use dominate kar sakta hai agar chaahe toh. Niharika ne usi ka fayda uthaya. She was enjoying her freedom and domination until Veer came and fucked her brains out.

He showed her what a true man is... He fucked her with pure domination and Niharika succumbed to his man force.

Next arc.
Trinity will be assembled. It's a given...

Jab interaction dheere dheere kam hone lagta hai, toh connection tootne lagta hai. Farq nahi padta ki aap kitne hi acche dost kyu na ho. School me kabhi humare bahut acche dost the. Par, kya aaj woh sab hamare saath hai? 99% ka jawab yahi hoga ki nahi.

Kaaran? Less interaction. Interaction dheere dheere kam hota gaya aur ek waqt aisa aaya ki connection kaafi kamzor pad gaya. Sonia aur Veer ke beech kuch aisa hi hai. Lekin, iska sudhaar hume agle arc me dekhne ko milega.

Did you notice?

Kaera is a professional in business strategies. She never felt love... And she sees most of the things with a business perspective. That's why...

"I want him to claim me." It's like owning a property. Claim word is used when you take hold of something. Be it property, any asset or anything. Since, she's into business field. Hence, her dialogue with such wordings.

Greed!

Acche accho ka patan ka kaaran banti hai. Jaw Long bhi uska shikaar hua. Crimson bhi usi ka shikaar hua tha. Aise dekha jaaye toh system holders aur insaano me koi antar nahi. System holders bhi... Greed ke aage haar gaye.

Imagine fighting against Veer, Ava and Erica one after the other.

Jaw Long had immense stamina and power. But the reason for his demise was just one thing.

Veer's existence.

Ohhh! Are you falling for her too?
Indeed. I agree that she's different from others. I agree with her sassy personality too.

However, Garofano can't be with him all the time. As she said... Veer will have to find a trustworthy doctor who can operate on him without spilling the secrets. Who might it be?

There's no doubt about it.
Erica will come back stronger and her behaviour towards Veer has already changed.

Indeed.

Did I read that right?

Veer kyu Ava ko leke aaya hai iska jawab toh next update me hi mil jayega.

Readers jaise soch rahe hai waisa utni jaldi unhe dekhne ko milne nahi waala. You'll realise what I'm talking about once you'll read the next update.

Kahani ab ye batla rahi hai ki peeth peeche kitna kuch chal raha hai. Chinatown ke ant me hi Rebecca aur ye saare unknown saamne aaye hai. Just imagine woh kab se ye sab kar rahe honge aur kya kya kar chuke honge.

Aur aise hi dheere dheere aur bhi cheezein saamne aati jayengi.

Divya ka role bhi hai Disembowler me. Badhiya arc hone waala hai ye aur bahut se logo par limelight daali jayegi.

Since she has returned. That means other Pari will also return. The first Pari... Where she mocked Veer for his Low stats. Remember?
The second pari... Pari after that... Or maybe they might have already repeated themselves but you were a bit unfocused at that time to notice the difference. She has told him that there are only limited personalities.

Personalities was a lie. Iska matlab limited number of Pari hai uske andar. Personalities nahi.

Ye toh hona hi tha. Harr arc khatam hone ke saath saath uttar toh deke jayega hi par naye sawaal bhi khade kar jayega.

Agla arc usi baare me hai. Jaha parallel me hum baaki characters ke interactions aur unke developments ko dekhte Jayenge. Ek parallel ride rahegi ye badhiya si.

We'll see them very soon. Summit arc.

Sirf ju ka nahi... Phorum me maujood ab tak ka sabse bada revo hoga ye.

Man, wtf...! Wtf did you just write...? Itna bada revo. Mere ko reply karte karte itna samay lag gaya. I couldn't reply it in one go. I had to break it down into two parts. Itna bada revo aaj tak nahi dekha Maine poore forum par 5 saal se. It's a blessing to have it on my own thread. Thanks a lot man. And, itne bade revo ke liye...

I thought ju gayab ho gaye. Ab bas silently hi read karoge ya shayad na bhi karo. You weren't active since a long time. However, you can back as Undertaker rose from his coffin.

Thanka a lot for this biggest and longest revo. Agle arc ka kaam jaari hai. Thodi gati slow hai par kaam jaari hai. Umeed hai jald hi blueprint taiyaar ho jayegi aur hum kahani me aage badhenge jald hi. Aise hi support karte rehne ka man. Jald hi haazir hounga firse naye arc ke saath.

बढ़ते उम्र के साथ इंसान की सेक्सुअल पसंद और च्वाइस चेंज होती जाती है ।
और यह एक थ्योरी भी है कि कम उम्र के लड़के मैच्योर , बड़ी उम्र की औरतों पर अधिक आकर्षित होते हैं और मैच्योर मर्द को कम उम्र की महिलाएं अधिक पसंद आती है ।
लेकिन जो सही मे ठरकी और हवसी होते हैं उनके लिए अधिक उम्र क्या और कम उम्र क्या !

 

[barrywe]

Werewolf bhai update?

 

[Werewolf]

Once again a very great, informative as well as shocking update....
With this update Chinatown arc come to an end....Ye pura arc hi mostly System se related rha. Different System Holders , unke bich me ladai , so many new cards and skills sb kuch dekhne ko mila iss arc me....And the most important System ke secrets bhi isi arc se khulne shuru ho chuke hai.

Yes. Sab pooch hi rahe the ki akhir kab system ke Raaz khulenge. Toh shuruat ho gayi hai. Dheere dheere parda hatata jayega. Aur, ant me hi poora sach saamne aayega.

That was really a very fearsome information revealed by pari that what her other personality (or other being to be precise) could have done if veer would have more points at that time to give her ...One more reason to get negative vibe from system unlocked successfully

Aisa sirf wahi kar sakti hai. Harr Pari nahi. Aur iss pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya hai. Veer ab careful rahega.

Btw, Ye Shayna aur Yohana jinka nam pr cards hai wo kon hai??....Do they belong from Pari own's planet or are they previous system holders by any chance...Kyuki mujhe nhi lgta ye jo bhi hai inka role story me directly aaye..to socha kyu na yhi puch liya jaye agar kuch spoiler na ho to

It's a spoiler. But you are going in the right direction.

Ava aur Veer ke bich bhale hi sb kuch abhi pure tarike se tikh na hua ho pr tikh hone ki suruwat iss update me ho chuki hai...Aur ab to Ava Veer ke sath India bhi ja rhi hai to definitely wo wha kuch bhi krke Veer ka trust jit hi legi...Also excited to see the reunion of Ava , Kaera and Sonia

Bilkul! Trinity ka saamne aana tay hai. It's impossible ki Ava Mumbai aaye aur Kaera aur Sonia ki mulaqat uss se na ho. Khaas kar Veer use ab leke aaya hai. Zaahir hai, Ava ko waha jaana hi padega jaha Veer use le jayega.

Pichle update ke review me maine kha tha ki Rebecca se kuch jyada hi khatarnak vibe aa rhe , wo vibe iss update ke bad aur badh gye
She was planning so many things for so many time without actually coming in the picture...Agar shi se dekha jaye to ye puri fight isi ki plan ki hui hai....Sbse phle isi ne Jaw Long se mine pr kabza krne ko kha fir isi ne china ke officials ko hypnotize krke Renshu ko Jaw Long ke khilaf kiya fir isi ne Gorofano ko Veer ke pas bheja jisne Veer ko Renshu ke diye invitation card ke bare me yad dilaya yani indirectely usse china jane ka yad dilaya...Yani ek tarike se isne inn sabhi 4-5 system holders ko apne plan me mohre ke tarah use kiya bina inko pta lgne diye....Aur kya hi master plan bnaya tha isne , mtlb sara kam bhi ho jata aur kisi ko yad bhi na rhta ki aakhir inn sb ke piche tha kon...Wo to bss last me ek failure ho gya ki wo Veer ki memory nhi mita payi

Usme bhi wo safal ho hi gayi thi agar Renshu aur baaki sabhi waha par na pahuchte. In other words, woh unknown assassin type system holder se galti hui hai. Woh Renshu ko itna ghayal nahi kar paaya ki woh waha tak aa na paaye. Uska kaam hi yahi tha ki Renshu ko mine tak pahuchne na de...

But Renshu pahuch gaya and Rebecca had to run. Also, usne ye bhi kaha tha...

'Everything is as you've planned.'

Yaani ki ye saara plan ya toh khud uska ho sakta hai ya fir woh bande ka jo end me hume nazar aaya.

Ye Casa Belle ko chor ke Royal Oasis ko kyu uda diya gya??....Aur khi ye aise missile bnane ke liye hi to Rebecca ko radioactive elements ki jarurat to nhi thi??....Well Casa Belle pr threat tha maybe kyuki Veer wha tha , to khi ye Morocco me hotel udna hint to nhi ki agla system holder hme Morocco se dekhne ko mila skta hai??

I mean... Agar agla system holder Morocco se hi hai toh at the first point... Usne apne hi area ka hotel udne kyu diya?
I mean use virodh karna chahiye tha na.

Jaise Veer ko pata laga ki casa Belle udd sakta hai toh woh use prevent karega. Khade hoke tamasha nahi dekhega. Bhale hi woh uske dushman ka hi kyu na ho hotel.

Ab aate hai iss update ke one of the most shocking revelation pr joki ye tha ki Pari suruwat se Veer(+hmara) chutiya kat rhi thi...This was definitely one of the biggest system secret that has been revealed in this story till now....Ek do bar iss chiz ka doubt hua bhi tha khaskar last update padhte time , jb pari ki do personalities ke behavior me 180 degree flip dekhne ko milta tha....One more thing ki ye sb kewal Veer ke system yani Pari ke sath hi kyu hai??...Why Pari is the most special and mysterious system??

That's the interesting part isn't it?

Woh special kyu hai ye toh spoiler hai. Ending hai kahani ki woh. Toh abhi uske baare me kuch bhi ujagar nahi kar sakte.

Jiasa ki bahuto ko lga tha, Rebecca FBCC director hi nikli....Sayad iss story ka phla aisa secret jise itne logo ne ek sath guess kr liya.Btw last update ke review me maine to ye bhi guess kr liya tha ki Divya shi salamat apne ghar America pahuch jaiegi....Well jb Divya Veer ko ye bta degi ki wo apne ghar hai shi salamat aur usko wha uski team laayi hai as told by her director(name to sayad wo na btaye Veer ko as Rebecca ne use mna kiya hai) to Veer jaise big brain person ko FBCC director pe shak jarur hona cahiye

Definitely. Veer shaant nahi rehne waala. Abhi bhi bahut si aisi links hai jinhe jodna baaki hai. Aur, woh try karega jaha se ho sake use info mil sake.

Last me ye so called 'LIVING GOD' kon aa gya jo sbko mohre ki tarah use krne wali Rebecca ko bhi mohre ki tarah use kr rha hai...Jo bhi ho itna to tay hai ki ye hai bhut powerful....Ya to yhi Mr.X hai ya fir koi nya villain , maybe next arc ka main villain...
Inn dono ke convo padhne ke bad to yahi lga ki Rebecca is not that bad wo bss isko follow krne ko majbur hai maybe??

Rebecca buri nahi? Are you sure?
Just to remind you... She supplied living human beings to Jaw Long for his sacrificial ritual.

Well abhi just iss update ko padhne ke bad maine uss update ko padha jisme Veer aur Gorofano first time mile the (Update -162)....Aur uss update ko padhne ke bad fir se yhi sawal aaya ki 'Is Rebecca really bad??'....I mean Gorofano aur Veer ki convo padhne ke bad to yhi lga ki Rebecca ne Gorofano ko jo bhi bataya wo accha hi btaya Veer ke bare me....And also vo bhala Gorofano ko Veer ke pas kyu bhejna cahegi ye jante hue bhi ki Gorofano future me Veer ke sath milke uske liye ek dangerous threat bn skti hai??...Maybe wo cahti thi ki Gorofano aur Veer mile aur Gorofano future me Veer ko support kre
(Just a theory from my side , Maybe sb galat bhi ho....)

She can have bad intentions too.
Kya pata Garofano ko Veer se milaane se hi uska kahi na kahi fayda ho raha ho? Who knows...!

After a long time Veer finally India wapas aa rha hai...Waise bhi na jane kitne din se kitni sari cuties ke scene pending me lge pde hai
Renshu , Erica & Gorofano ke role mostly kuch din dekhne ko na mile ab sayad (not at least in this arc maybe)

Garofano and Erica are out of the picture for now. We'll see them later.

Veer kafi lambe samay ke bad India ja rha hai to definitely India me bhi uske piche aache khase events hue honge jinki jankri hme aage mile sayad
Well Veer Jaw Long ko to hara aaya , aage Rebecca aur baki sb ko bhi hara de maybe...Pr abhi India me jo jo log uska intezar kr rhe jinko wo bina kuch btaye bhag aaya tha unka samna wo kaise krne wala hai??..Khaskar ki Tej aur iss bar to Arohi ka bhi...

In short... Veer ki vaat lagne waali hai. Iss baar toh Bhavna samet Arohi bhi rahegi. And, we all know Veer can't hide anything from Bhavna and Arohi. They can read him like a book.

Aur upr se aag me ghee dalne ke liye Ava bhi sath me ja rhi hai....Kafi interesting hone wala hai ye dekhna ki iss bar wo kya kya bahana bna ke bachta hai

Iss baar uske chances mushqil lag rahe hai.

And one last thing - Eagerly waiting for Veer-Kaera scene

Very soon.

ENJOY THE FAMILY TRIP AND HAPPY JOURNEY
(Also , agle arc ke start hone ki expected date kya rhegi??)

GREAT UPDATE AS ALWAYS...
KEEP WRITING....
WAITING FOR NEXT...

Thanks a lot mate.
Agle arc ke start hone ki abhi koi expected date nahi hai.
Because, it all depends on the completion of the blueprint. Jab blueprint ready hoyegi uske baad hi updates ko likhna start kiya jayega.
So, abhi koi date nahi bata sakta. Harr acchi cheez ke liye time lagta hai.
Anyways, thanks once again and keep supporting.