Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[barrywe]

Raat me hi maine tum logo se keh diya tha ki timing nahi de raha hu. Uske baad bhi samajh nahi aata tum logo ko. Ek update taiyaar ho jaata hai lekin, use edit karne me kitna samay lagta hai, ye tumhe pata bhi nahi hai.

Khaali edit karne me kabhi-kabhi ek ghante ke upar lag jaata hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki maine raat me kyu nahi update diya. Complete toh raat ko hi ho gaya tha update. Magar, mein aur time nahi de sakta tha. So, I slept. Aur, isliye ab update kar raha hu. Because, right now I'm having my lunch. And, it's my free time for now. Toh, thoda samjha karo ki nalle insaan me aur naukri pesha waale insaan me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai.

True bro but apko ek bt kahoun istrhan ab story maza or interest khatam ho gya hy mai khud apki story py comment krny waloun mai sy hu if you remember but ab bhot arsy bad aya 182 update ky or dekha sirf ek or 183 update ai hy tu thora sa dil udas huwa. Anyways ap kro apny km bro real life zyada zarori hy mujhy bhot achy sy is bt ka pta isliye zyada kbhi ni bola kbhi. Good luck for your life. Bye

 

[thedevil_780only]

No worries sir

Raat me hi maine tum logo se keh diya tha ki timing nahi de raha hu. Uske baad bhi samajh nahi aata tum logo ko. Ek update taiyaar ho jaata hai lekin, use edit karne me kitna samay lagta hai, ye tumhe pata bhi nahi hai.

Khaali edit karne me kabhi-kabhi ek ghante ke upar lag jaata hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki maine raat me kyu nahi update diya. Complete toh raat ko hi ho gaya tha update. Magar, mein aur time nahi de sakta tha. So, I slept. Aur, isliye ab update kar raha hu. Because, right now I'm having my lunch. And, it's my free time for now. Toh, thoda samjha karo ki nalle insaan me aur naukri pesha waale insaan me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai.

I respect your efforts
Take your time a

Raat me hi maine tum logo se keh diya tha ki timing nahi de raha hu. Uske baad bhi samajh nahi aata tum logo ko. Ek update taiyaar ho jaata hai lekin, use edit karne me kitna samay lagta hai, ye tumhe pata bhi nahi hai.

Khaali edit karne me kabhi-kabhi ek ghante ke upar lag jaata hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki maine raat me kyu nahi update diya. Complete toh raat ko hi ho gaya tha update. Magar, mein aur time nahi de sakta tha. So, I slept. Aur, isliye ab update kar raha hu. Because, right now I'm having my lunch. And, it's my free time for now. Toh, thoda samjha karo ki nalle insaan me aur naukri pesha waale insaan me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai.

No problem sir
We can wait
Take your time
We appreciate your efforts

 

[Hyper king]

Raat me hi maine tum logo se keh diya tha ki timing nahi de raha hu. Uske baad bhi samajh nahi aata tum logo ko. Ek update taiyaar ho jaata hai lekin, use edit karne me kitna samay lagta hai, ye tumhe pata bhi nahi hai.

Khaali edit karne me kabhi-kabhi ek ghante ke upar lag jaata hai. Yahi kaaran hai ki maine raat me kyu nahi update diya. Complete toh raat ko hi ho gaya tha update. Magar, mein aur time nahi de sakta tha. So, I slept. Aur, isliye ab update kar raha hu. Because, right now I'm having my lunch. And, it's my free time for now. Toh, thoda samjha karo ki nalle insaan me aur naukri pesha waale insaan me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai.

Update about not giving update

 

[Werewolf]

Update - 184 ~ Unethical Games (1)​

Ab tak...

King : Hmm! Leave us! We need to discuss this matter privately.

?? (smiles) : Of course! I await your decision, your majesty!

Woh aadmi muda aur jaane laga. Par, jaane se pehle woh ek akhiri baar palta aur bola.

?? : Oh! And, of course... I know about the treaty.

King : Huhhh!????

?? (grins) : There's a way!!! Aapke nirnay ka intezar rahega mujhe... Your... Majesty...!!!

Ab aage...

Veer's house,
Morning ~ 8:00 AM

Subah ke 8 baj rahe the aur Veer aaj apne samay anusar taro-taaza hoke apni shirt hi pehen raha tha jab uska phone baj utha.

*Ring* *Ring*

‘Hmm?’

*Ring* *Ring*

Usne dekha ki kisi unknown number se use call aa raha tha. Zyada soch vichaar na karte hue usne call ko utha liya.

Veer : Hello?

Aur, tabhi ek jaani-pehchani awaaz use phone ke dusre chhor se sunayi di.

?? : It's been a while, Mister Veer. It's been a while. Hahaha!

Veer (frowns) : Aadesh Jaisinghani!!!

Veer ko pehchanane me derr na lagi. Aadesh Jaisinghani, urf Casa Belle ka owner. Wahi dheeth insaan jisne uska apni hotel me mazak banaya tha.

Aadesh : Oh, yes! Yes!!! Haha! Mujhe jaan ke khushi hui ki aap mujhe bhule nahi.

Veer : Baatein ghumaane ki zaroorat nahi. Seedhe taur par kaho jo kehna hai.

Aadesh : Arey arey!!! Aap toh bura maan gaye, Mister Veer.

Veer : Agar kuch kehna hai toh kaho warna mein phone rakh raha hu.

Uski iss baat par Aadesh ki muskan gayab ho gayi aur woh bhaari awaaz me dhamkaate hue bola.

Aadesh : Toh sunn, Veer!!! Mere hotel me apna spy bhej ke information batorne ki tumhari tarqeeb toh acchi thi. Lekin, shayad tum bhool gaye ki tumne sher ke muh me apna haath daala hai.

Veer : …

Aadesh (grins) : Kya hua? Jhatka laga? Tumhara spy. Kya naam tha uska? Pavan!!! Uski acche se khatirdari karwayi hai maine. Filhal, woh xxxxxxxxx hospital me admit hai.

Veer : …

Aadesh : Nahi nahi! Medical bills ki chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Veer. Woh kya hai na… Tum toh jaante hi hoge. Mein bahut dayalu hu. Uske saare bills maine pehle hi pay kar diye hai. Kuch dino tak ab woh bahut acche se laite-laite apne din guzaarega.

Veer : Aur?

Aadesh : Oh! Lagta hai tumhe hairani nahi hui. *grins* Well! Shayad, ye sunane ke baad tumhe jhatka lage? Tumhara supporting don bhi mera kuch nahi bigaad sakta. Tumne apni chaal chal li. Ab meri baari hai. Aur, mein tumhara wo hashr karunga ki tum kutte ki tarah apni dum bacha ke bhagoge.

Veer : …

Aadesh (smiles) : Have a good day, Veer!!!

*Call ends*

Veer ne phone ki screen ko dekha. Tamaam sawal uske mann me prakat hue. Magar, ek saath unke uttar bhi use milte chale gaye.

Pehla sawal uske mann me yahi aaya ki akhir, Aadesh ko uska phone number kaise mila? Aur, jawab khud Aadesh ne hi de diya tha.

Pavan!!! Veer ke dwara bheja gaya Casa Belle me ek spy. Ye wahi Pavan tha jisne Jatin ke saath milke Suhana ki maa ki birthday ring ki chori karwayi thi.

Bhumika ki hotel Prestige me Jatin wahi ladka tha jo Suhana ki maa ki anguthi chura ke bhaaga tha. Aur, ye sab kaam andhere me hua tha. Hotel me light ke power supply ko band karne waala koi aur nahi, Pavan hi tha. Tab, sach ka pata chalne ke baad, Bhumika ne use apni hotel se baahar nikaal diya tha.

Magar, Veer jaanta tha ki agar Casa Belle jaisi hotel me apna aadmi bhejna hai toh woh koi aisa aadmi hi hona chahiye jo inn sab kaamo me pehle se maahir ho.

Aur, Pavan se accha vikalp koi na tha. Paiso ke liye woh khushi-khushi raazi bhi ho gaya tha. Yahi kaaran tha ki Veer ne Pavan ko iss kaam ke liye chuna. Doosra kaaran ye tha ki agar woh pakda bhi gaya toh bhi use uske liye koi hamdardi mehsoos karne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Kyunki, na hi woh uska koi qareebi tha aur na hi koi aisa jiske liye use chinta karne ki zaroorat pade. Ek teer se do nishaane.

Kintu, Veer ki saari tarqeeb ki pol khul chuki thi. Woh niraash nahi tha. Bas, thoda aashcharya me tha. Aadesh ne spy ko akhir dhoondh kaise liya?

Aur, uska ye kehna ki, ‘tumhara supporting don bhi kuch nahi kar sakta?’

Veer ne kuch sochte hue turant hi phone Balhaar ko bhidaya aur do ghanti jaate hi Balhaar ne call pick kar liya.

Balhaar : Mein aapko hi call karne waala tha aaj.

Veer : Woh sab chhoro aur pehle meri baat suno. Aadesh Jaisinghani! Casa Belle ka owner. Tumhe use ek aur dose dena hoga. Usne mere dwara bheje gaye spy ke baare me pata laga liya hai. Iss se pehle ki woh pehli chaal chale, hume apna daav chalna hoga.

Balhaar : Nahi chal sakte.

Veer : Kya matlab?

Balhaar : Matlab ye ki sheher me jo murders ho rahe hai, uske chalte police humare peeche padi hui hai. Kadi nigrani rakh rahi hai. Mere bahut se aadmi unke surveillance ke under me hai. Pichhle teen dino se naak me dum kar rakha hai police waalo ne.

Veer : …!!!

Balhaar : Ab waise toh ye police wagarah mera kuch nahi bigaad sakti. Lekin, mein fizool me apne naam ko sheher me chal rahe murders me judte nahi dekhna chaahta.

Veer : Ye murders… Kahi tum-!?

Balhaar : Bilkul nahi! Ye hamara kaam nahi. Aur, isliye mein bekaar me highlight nahi hona chaahta. Andhruni lafde hue hai kuch jinse abhi mujhe nipatna hai.

Veer : Hmm?

Balhaar : Drug dealing ke matter me mere aadmiyon me se ek aadmi ne hume dhoka diya hai. Ek aur aadmi humse gaddaari karte hue sheher se thodi dur dusri gang ko humari intel saunp chuka hai.

Veer : Apne bunkers badlo!

Balhaar : Wahi kiya hai. Kuch naye hideouts me sab bikhre hue hai. Police chappe-chappe par nazar rakh rahi hai. Yahi wajah hai ki movement karne me itni dikkat aa rahi hai. Agar, ye andar ke matter ka lafda na hua hota, toh ye sab gangs aur police mera kuch na bigaad paati. Lekin, kayi saare lafde ek saath hue hai.

Veer : Samjha!

Balhaar : Mujhe lagta hai-

Veer : Hmm?

Balhaar : Shayad humare hi kisi aadmi ne firse hume dhoka diya hai aur hamari position ki intel police tak pahuchayi hai. Ya fir-

Veer : Ya fir?

Balhaar : Ya fir koi teesra involved hai jo humare upar nazar rakhe hue hai aur ye sab khabar police ko pahucha raha hai. Isliye, mujhe iss baar madad ki zaroorat hai.

Veer : Hmm! Bolo! Kya madad chahiye?

Balhaar : Andar ke maamle se toh mein nipat lunga. Mujhe jald hi pata lag jayega ki hume dhoka dene waala humara hi aadmi hai ya fir koi aur hai. Aur, agar woh koi aur hai-

Veer : ??

Balhaar : Toh mein bas itna chaahta hu ki aap uska pata lagaaye. Baaki ka matter mein uske baad sambhaal lunga.

Veer : Hmm! Theek hai!

Balhaar : Hmm!

Balhaar se baat karne ke baad Veer ko saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Akhir, kyu Aadesh itna hawa me udd raha tha.

[Toh kahi Aadesh ne hi police ko Balhaar ki intel toh nahi saunpi? Taaki, baad me woh hume taunt kar sake, Master?]

‘Possibility kam hai, Pari. Kyunki, Balhaar ki location ka pata lagana itna asaan kaam nahi. Lekin, mujhe iss se zyada taajub iss baat se hua hai ki usne mere spy ke baare me achanak se kaise pata laga liya.’

[Shayad, uss Pavan se koi galti hui hogi, jo Aadesh ki pakad me aa gayi?]

‘Kuch keh nahi sakte. Ab woh hamla karna chaahta hai. Lekin, iss baar mein use chhorne waala nahi. If he wants to play the game. Then, let him play. I'll beat him in his own game.’

Veer apne kamre se baahar nikla. Neeche hall me Bhumika aur Sonali dono hotel aur food truck par jaane ke liye taiyaar hi baithi thi.

Tej neeche apne kamre me khidki ke paas khadi hui thi, subah ki raushni poore kamre me narm chhaaya daal rahi thi. Uske haath me ek letter tha, mutthi thodi kaanp rahi thi. Ghar se teen saal dur. Veer se teen saal dur. Letter aa chuka tha. Use Veer ko batana tha, lekin kal ki ghatna ke baad uss se baat karne me hi woh hich-kichahat mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Archeological ministry se rotational transfer ka notice aa chuka tha. Kam se kam teen saal ke liye uska dusre state me jaana zaroori tha. Ye ministry ki ek policy thi. Bhavna bhi apne career ke shuruati dino me iss phase se guzri thi. Magar, Tej ke liye ye sab naya tha.

Usne kal Veer ka peechha kiya tha, uska mobile track kiya tha aur use Kritika ke saath dekha tha. Jo baatein usne suni thi unme koi dosh nahi tha—ab woh ye bhali bhaanti jaanti thi. Lekin, galti toh hui thi.

Aur, ab woh jhijak rahi thi. Uske perr wahi chipak ke reh gaye the. Woh hall me ho rahi Veer aur Bhumika ke beech ho rahi baato ki fus-fusahat ko sunn paa rahi thi. Dono kuch charcha kar rahe the—sambhavit business se sambandhit kuch. Usne letter ko zorr se bheench liya. Kaagaz uski mazboot pakad me sikud ke reh gaya.

Ek gehri saans lete hue woh hall ki orr chal di. Veer ki peeth uski orr thi, uska dhyaan poori tarah se Bhumika par tha. Tej ne dekha ki woh dhyaan se sunn raha tha, beech-beech me sarr bhi hila raha tha. Woh gambheer aur shaant sa prateet ho raha tha. Tej ne bolne ke liye apna muh khola, lekin shabd uske gale me fass ke reh gaye.

Kal ki Veer ki woh nirasha se bhari nazar ki yaad uske dimaag me kaundh gayi aur woh wahi ladkhada gayi.

Tej : V-Veer!

Antatah usne bola. Veer ne sarr mod Tej ko dekha lekin, apni aankhein uss se na milaayi.

Veer : Hmm?

Uska ravaiyya dekh Tej ka dil baith gaya.

Tej : M-Mujhe tumse...! Mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi.

Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh paati, Veer ke bol ne use wahi rok diya.

Veer : Arey haan! Bhumika di! Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni thi.

Bhumika : Hmm? Kya hua?

Veer : Aap hotel jaa rahi hai na?

Bhumika : Haan! Kyu?

Veer : Come with me! I'll drop you!

Bhumika : Ohh!

Veer : Wahi baat bhi kar lenge.

Bhumika : Okay!

Tej wahi khadi rahi, shabd uske honth tak aate hi khatm ho gaye. Woh apne hi ghar me bhoot ki tarah khud ko adrishya mehsoos kar rahi thi. Veer use poori tarah se nazar-andaz nahi kar raha tha, lekin uski ye udaaseenta seedhe gusse se bhi baddtar thi. Tej ne ek baar fir apna mauqa kho diya. Woh dekhti rahi ki kaise Veer aur Bhumika apni baat-cheet jaari rakhe hue the, unki awaazein uske kaano me goonjti chali gayi.

Uska ek hissa cheekhna chaahta tha, maang karna chaahta tha ki woh uski baat sune. Magar, kal ki galti ka bodh ab bhi uss par bhaari tha. Usne Veer par kitni hi saralta se sandeh kar liya tha toh ab woh apne chhote bhai se uss par bharosa karne ki umeed kaise kar sakti thi?

Jaise hi Veer aur Bhumika darwaze ki orr jaane lage toh iss baar Tej ke qadam aage nahi badhe. Woh peeche chale gaye. Woh unhe bas jaate hue dekhti rahi. Uska dil pachhtaave aur hatasha ke mishran se bhaari ho chala. Letter uske haath me sikud ke apni purani awastha khota chala gaya.

'Veer...!'

***

Casa Belle,
Morning - 9:02 AM ~

Idhar, Aadesh apne private suite me baithe Veer ko dhamkaane ke baad apne saamne khade anjaan aadmi ko parakh raha tha.

Do ladkiyaan uske nange kandho par tel laga ke maalish karne me juti hui thi. Aur, darwaze ke paas hi uski personal secretary khadi thi.

Aadesh : Jaisa tumne kaha tha, maine bol diya hai. Par- Par kya waqai tumne jo bataya woh sach hai? Agar, iske baad kuch gadbad hui toh dhyaan rahe. Mein-

?? : Baat pe yakeen karna na karna tumhare upar hai. Maine toh sach hi bataya hai.

Aadesh : Agar aisa hai- toh fir mein… *grins* Iss 'hotel prestige' naam ke kaate ko apne raaste se poori tarah se alag kar dunga.

?? (smiles) : I have done my work. Now, it's up to you.

Kehte hue woh jaane laga toh Aadesh peechhe se bola.

Aadesh : Tumne bataya nahi-!! Akhir, tumhe ye sab karke kya mil raha hai? Aur, tum ho kaun? Muh pe ye kapda kyu baandh rakha hai?

?? : Mein kaun hu, kaha se hu, kya karta hu, mujhe nahi lagta tumhe ye sab jaanane ki zaroorat hai. Jaisa ki maine kaha-! Dushman ka dushman dost hota hai. Bas, yahi samajh lo. Baaki toh tum samajhdar ho.

Aadesh (smiles) : Hooo~ Samjha!!! Lekin, ek baat tum bhi samajh lo. Aadesh Jaisinghani ko chakma dene waala aaj tak koi paida nahi hua. Agar, tum mere khilaaf kuch karne ki soch bhi rahe ho toh mann se ye khayaal pehle hi nikaal dena. Tumhare liye accha hoga!

Muh par kapda baandha hua vyakti uski iss dhamki par kuch nahi bola. Andar hi andar woh muskuraya aur waha se nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi Aadesh ne apni secretary ko aadesh diya.

Aadesh : Taara!!!

Taara : Ji, Sir!

Aadesh (grins) : Iss se behtar mauka hume nahi milega uss Veer ki hotel prestige ko tabaah karne ka.

Taara : Par, Sir kya hum iss anjaan aadmi par bharosa kar sakte hai? Kya pata kaho ye uss Veer ka hi aadmi ho?

Aadesh : Mujhe nahi lagta, Taara! Meri gut feeling keh rahi hai ki iss aadmi ki Veer se koi dushmani hai zaroor. Aur, mein apne tajurbe ko bahut acche se jaanta hu. Hum wahi tarqeeb apnaenge jo humne pehle apnaayi thi.

Taara : ???

Aadesh : Hotel Prestige ke Head Chef ko bhadkana!!!

Taara : Par- Par, kya firse wahi idea kaam karega, Sir?

Aadesh : Kyu nahi karega? Paisa bolta hai, jaaneman!

Taara : Par, mujhe khabar lagi hai ki unki head chef koi mahila hai.

Aadesh : Mahila hai toh kaam toh aur asaan ho sakta hai. Aadmi ho ya aurat. Paise ki zaroorat toh sabko padti hai. Ab ek spy hum bhejenge. Taara!!!

Taara : Ji?

Aadesh : Hotel Prestige me ek spy bhejo. Uska kaam sirf Head Chef ko bhadkaana hai. Udhar Head Chef apni naukri chhoregi aur idhar tab tak mein Hotel Prestige ki image aisi gira chuka hounga ki koi bhi head chef waha kaam karne se pehle 100 baar sochega. Aur, bina ek head chef ke hotel hotel nahi rehta.

Taara : Ji, sir!

Aadesh ne muskurate hue apni kamar se bandhi safed towel kholi aur Taara ko dekhte hue bola.

Aadesh : Tumhara naashta tumhara intezar kar raha hai, baby!!!

Taara wahi secretary thi jisne Veer ke upar Casa Belle me wine feki thi. Yahi woh secretary thi jise Tej gusse me thappad maar ke aayi thi. Kahi na kahi Taara ke andar bhi Tej ko leke khunnas bhari hui thi.

Woh apni madmast gaand matkaate hue Aadesh ke paas chal ke aayi aur jhuk ke uske lund ko apne muh me bhar choosne lagi. Ye anokha ehsaas paa ke Aadesh ke muh se ek iski chhooth gayi.

Aadesh : Aahhh!!! Choos randi ki bacchi!!! Veer-!!!! Tu aur teri behan!!! Tera hotel! Aur, Tera food truck!! Mein sab barbaad karunga!!! Mere jangal me tu mangal karna chaahta hai? Lekin, tu shayad bhool gaya. Jangal me ek hi sher hota hai. Aur, hospitality industry ke iss jangal ka sher mein hu-!!!

***

*Thud*

Veer apni Rolls Royce se baahar nikla, uski aankhein uske saamne khadi building par tiki hui thi. ‘Yarnia’ ki ek manufacturing hub. Baahar se dikhne me ek sadharan si building hi prateet ho rahi thi lekin, Veer inn deewaro ke bheetar chal rahi gatividhiyo ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha.

Jab se woh China gaya tha tab se usne ‘Yarnia’ par apna dhyaan nahi diya tha. Woh ye saari zimmedari apne parivar waalo aur bharosemand logo par chhor ke gaya tha.

Karan! Uska sabse khaas dost. Na keval woh sahi sthaan dhoondhne me kamyab tha balki usne building se sambandhit sabhi formalities bhi poori kar di thi. Veer, Karan ke iss samarpan aur jazbe se taajub me tha. Karan ke sarr par pehle se hi zimmedariyo ke maamle me ek bahut bada sanchalan shaamil tha jo tha ~ Nexacom!!! Woh khud iss behemoth company ka co-owner tha. Uske bawajood uska itna sab kuch karna. Ye uske ravaiyye ko saaf-saaf darshata tha.

Veer jaanta tha ki Karan agar chaahta toh ye kaam apne kisi subordinate ko saunp sakta tha magar, usne aisa nahi kiya. Ye kaam usne khud kiya aur shuru se ant tak woh isme shaamil raha.

Woh jaise hi aage badha use building se thodi dur khadi McLaren nazar aayi. Uske theek baahar Raghu apne haath modey khada hua tha. Veer ne Karan ko bulaya hua tha. Veer ko dur se dekh Raghu ne haath hawa me utha ke use ‘hi’ kiya. Toh, badle me Veer ne haami bhar di.

Usne cham-chamati McLaren ko check kiya toh maalum pada ki woh Mclaren speedtail thi. Jiski keemat kareeban 18-20 crore rupaye thi. Woh mann hi mann muskuraya.

‘Mujhe aur earn karne ki zaroorat hai. Only then, I can buy these luxuries.’

[We will, Master!]

Veer building ke main gate ke qareeb aaya. Jaise hi usne sheeshe ke darwazo ko dhakela aur building ke andar pravesh kiya, woh andar chal rahi gatividhiyo ki halchal dekh chakit reh gaya.

Usne dekha ki tamaam ladke-ladkiyaan apne-apne kaamo me lage hue the. Machineries ki awaaz building me goonj rahi thi, jinme staff ki baat-cheet ka shor bhi kahi na kahi shaamil tha.

Aur, inn sab ke beech Veer ki nazar apne french fashion designer, Louis par padi jo apna trademark—french scarf gale par lapete focus ke saath production line ko dekh raha tha.

Jab Louis ki nazar Veer par padi toh woh badi muskurahat ke saath aage badha.

Louis : Monsieur, Veer!!! You have returned!

Veer ne muskaan liye apna haath aage badhaya par hamesha ki tarah utsahi rehne waala Louis seedhe Veer ko gale se laga liya.

Veer : Louis-!!!

Louis : Ohh!! My friend!!! Where were you???

Veer : Out for some business. And, you've made quite a progress, huh? It's incredible!

Louis : Hahaha! Yes! Yes! Ahhh, but it was not just me, mon ami!

Louis ne hall ke chaaro orr ishaara karte hue dikhaate hue bola.

Louis : Your sister, Tejal!!! She was magnificent! She helped me a lot. She set up everything–machinery, staff, even the design stations. I simply added my touch. Hahaha~

Tej ka naam aate hi Veer ko subah ki baat yaad aa gayi. Kaise woh apni Teju di ki baat sune bina hi nikal gaya tha ghar se. Use apni harqat par ab pachhtava hua.

Usne apne chaaro orr dekha. Sab kuch naya-naya dekh uska dil khush ho gaya.

Veer : Mujhe vishvas nahi hota. Itne kam samay me kitna kuch haasil kar liya tum sab ne. Teju di-!!! I need to get back to her. Subah mein unki baat sune bina hi aa gaya. Iss baar, meri galti thi.

Louis : Hmm?

Veer : Oh! Nothing! Haha!

Louis : When you have a vision as strong as Yarnia’s, things move quickly, my dear. And, your friend, Karan—he made sure we had everything we needed. Hohoho-!

Veer Karan ki orr muda jo dur khade use hi dekh raha tha. Aur, use dekh Veer ke mukh par muskaan bikhar gayi. Karan khud apni jeb me haath daale uski orr aaya. Har baar ki tarah woh aaj bhi apne proper getup me tha. Navy blue suit, white shirt aur luxury mehngi accessories jo usne pehen rakhi thi.

Veer : Ab tumhe ‘thank you’ kaise kahu? Maine jitna maanga tha. Tumne uss se kahi zyada kar diya.

Karan : Shut the fuck, man! Mera mind abhi tak kal ke incident me ghusa hua hai.

Veer (laughs) : Hahaha!

Karan : -Aur, waise bhi—ye sab kuch bhi nahi. Dost dost ke kaam nahi aayega toh kaun aayega?

Veer : Kal toh tumhare muh se kuch aur hi shabd tapak rahe the? Hmm? Kya keh rahe the tum? Oh! Haan! Yaad aaya! Veer haram khor-! Kyu kiya tune aisa? Bol!!!! Yahi shabd the na? If I remember correctly?

Karan (embarrassingly) : W-Woh toh–! Meri jagah koi bhi hota yahi karta. But, hey-! Maine sorry kaha tha tumhe raat ko.

Veer : Yeah! Yeah!

Karan : Ahem! Anyways, mein business opportunity akhir miss kaise kar sakta hu? Ek na ek din Yarnia bhi skyrocketing prices ko touch karegi. Tab, meri investment ka fal mujhe milega hi na. It's a win-win situation, buddy!

Veer (smiles) : Indeed! By the way, tumhara kya hua? Kritika ne maaf kiya ya-

Karan : Oh, thank god! Usne maaf kar diya. Warna, mujhe toh laga tha ki maine use kho diya.

Kehte hue Karan ko kal shaam ke drishya yaad aa gaye.

***

Yesterday...

Bheed bhari sadak par daudate hue Karan ka dil zoro se dhadak raha tha, uski aankhein Kritika ki ek jhalak paane ke liye betaab thi. Uske aasuon se bhare chehre ki yaad use pareshan kar rahi thi. Use vishvas nahi ho raha tha ki ye usne kya kar diya? - Kaise usne apni insecurities aur jealousy ko apne nirnay par haawi hone de diya, kaise usne apni bhavnao ko uss ladki ko aahat karne diya jis se woh pyaar karta tha?

Kritika cafe se bhaagi thi, bhaagte samay uski siskiyaan Karan ke kaano me goonji thi. Jaise-jaise woh logo ki bheed se takra ke guzarta jaa raha tha, uska dimag utna hi ghoomta jaa raha tha. Woh khud ko utaawla hone ke liye kosne laga.

Ek taraf Veer, uska sabse khaas dost. Aur, dusri taraf Kritika, woh ladki jis se use pyaar ho gaya tha. Dono ko ek saath dekh na jaane use andar se kya mehsoos hua ki woh khud ko rok na saka.

'Shit! Shit! Shit! Ye tune kya kar diya, Karan!!? Fucking hell-!!!'

Ab, use darr tha ki veh use kahi kho na de. Aur, saath hi kahi Veer se apni dosti gawa na baithe. Usne apne jeevan-kaal me tamaam raees se raees, sundar se sundar ladkiyaan dekhi thi. Yaha tak ki foreign me bhi apni padhayi ke waqt usne ek se ek bemisal ladkiyo ko dekha tha. Magar, Kritika jaisi koi na thi. Karan kahi na kahi ye baat jaanta tha ki ladkiyo ka asli uddeshya uska prem nahi, uski sampatti se tha.

Bade gharaane se hone ke chalte business ki duniya me apne qadam rakhne ke baad use ye sikhaya gaya tha ki logo ko padhte kaise hai. Karan, ladkiyo ki aankhon me dekh ke samajh jaata tha ki ladkiyaan kis firaaq me rehti thi. Mohabbat ya daulat.

Kritika ekmaatra pehli aisi ladki thi jo apne chulbule-pann ke saath-saath inn baato par zyada dhyaan kabhi deti hi nahi thi. Woh aisi ladki thi jo uske yauvan ko bhadkati thi. Aur, bas kuch hi bhainto me use Kritika se pyaar ho chuka tha.

Daudate-daudate akhir kaar usne Kritika ko dur chalta hua paaya. Woh apni baahein apne shareer se lapete ahista-ahista chalti jaa rahi thi.

"Kritikaaaaaaa-!!!!"

Usne uska naam pukaara. Lekin, Kritika nahi ruki. Usne palat kar bhi nahi dekha.

"Kritikaaaaa-!!! Kritika!! Please, ruk jao!!!"

Karan ki awaaz thar-thara uthi. Usne apni gati tez ki, uske lambe qadmo ne antatah unke beech ki duri ko khatm kar diya. Usne Kritika ke kandhe par peechhe se haath rakha, lekin Kritika aise chhitak gayi jaise Karan ke sparsh ne maano use jala diya ho.

Karan : K-Kritika-!! Kritika, please! I'm so sorry!!!

Kritika uski orr mudi. Uski aankhon se aasu beh rahe the.

Kritika : K-Karan-!!!

Karan : I'm sorry! Kritika! P-Please! M-Mujhe maaf kar do.

Kritika : Kyu, Karan? K-Kyu? *sniff* Tumne aisa kyu kiya? *sniff* T-Tum mere baare me aisa soch rahe the??

Karan : Nahi, Kritika-!! Nahi!!

Kritika ko iss qadar chotil dekh Karan ko apne gale me woh gaanth mehsoos hui. Kritika ki aankhein ab keval dard aur vishvasghaat ko darsha rahi thi.

Karan : M-Mein bewakoof tha, Kritika!

Aur, usne sweekar kar liya. Uski awaaz karkash thi.

Karan : M-Maine apni jealousy ko apne upar haawi hone diya. Maine tumhe Veer ke saath dekha aur mein-

Veh apne vicharo ko ikhatta karne ki koshish karte hue gehri saans lekar ruk gaya.

Karan : M-Mujhe laga... Mujhe laga ki mein tumhe kho chuka hu. Aur, tumse baat karne ke bajaaye mein bhadak utha. I... I hurt you!

Kritika ne apna sarr hilaaya. Uske gaalo par uske taaza aasu chhalak pade.

Kritika : Mein sirf ye tumhare liye karna chaahti thi, Karan! Mein kuch aisa seekhne ki koshish kar rahi thi jo tumhe pasand tha-

Karan : Mujhe woh khel pasand bhi nahi hai, Kritika. Tum sirf mere liye-

Kritika : Ab jaan gayi hu mein. Thank you, mujhe bataane ke liye.

Uski baato se Karan ko laga ki uska dil toot gaya hai. Kritika ye sab uske liye kar rahi thi, use prabhavit karne ke liye. Aur, badle me usne kya kiya? Na sirf usne bina kahe uss par sandeh kiya, uska apmaan bhi kiya aur toh aur uska dil bhi tod diya.

Karan : Kritika! Please, meri taraf dekho!

Usne vinti ki, uski awaaz narm aur kamzor thi. Kritika ek pal ko jhijhki, fir dheere se apni nazar uski orr ghumayi.

Karan : I... I don't deserve your forgiveness, Kritika. Mein... Mein bewakoof tha. I was a fool...! Maine apne darr ko apne upar haawi hone diya. Tum... Tum meri zindagi ka ek aham hissa bann gayi ho, Kritika!! Mein ab tumhare bina apni life imagine nahi kar sakta! I love you, Kritika!!! I love you~

Aur, Kritika ka badan ye sunn sihar utha. Uske honth kaanpne lage, uska dil pyaar aur dard ke mishran se dukh raha tha. Woh use maaf karna chaahti thi, khud ko uski baahon me fek dena chaahti thi aur uss se kehna chaahti thi ki haan use bhi uss se pyaar hai. Lekin, yeh dard abhi bhi taaza tha. Ghaav naya-naya tha. Kaccha tha. Dardneeya tha.

Karan ek qadam aur nazdeek aaya. Uski aankhein Kritika par se ek shan ke liye bhi nahi hati.

Karan : Mein darr gaya tha, Kritika. Tumhe- Tumhe khone ka darr tha. Aur, tumhe khone ka khayaal aate hi-

Usne ek gehri saans li.

Karan : Yahi mujhe sabse zyada dara gaya.

Kritika ke aasu ab swantantra roop se beh rahe the. Veh uss par vishvas karna chaahti thi. Karan ne uske haath ko apne haatho me liya. Uska sparsh komal tha, thodi jijhak se bhara hua.

Karan : Mein jaanta hu ki maine tumhe dukh pahuchaya hai. Aur, mein ye umeed bhi nahi kar raha ki tum mujhe turant maaf kar do. Lekin, please- mujhe ise sahi karne ka mauka toh do.

Kritika khud Karan se pyaar karti thi—woh khud ye baat bhali bhaanti jaanti thi. Par, kya pyaar iss qadar dukh pahuchaata hai? Kya pyaar ko itna dardneeya hona chaahiye? Aisa toh nahi mehsoos hona chahiye ki ye sandeh aur vishvas ke beech ki ladaayi ho. Aur, agar aisa nahi hota toh fir Kritika ko aisa kyu mehsoos ho raha tha?

Karan : Please, mujhe maaf kar do, Kritika.

Kritika ne Karan ki aankhon me dekha, uski aankhein, uski baato me sacchaayi talaash rahi thi. Aur, usne dekha — darr, afsos, pyaar. Ye sab waha tha, uske saamne khulla pada tha.

Kritika : K-Karan-!

Karan : Huh???

Kritika (smiles) : I love you~

Karan ka badan ye sunn kaanp gaya. Ye teen shabd sune toh usne kayi ladkiyo se the magar, kabhi aisi anubhuti use mehsoos nahi hui jo aaj iss waqt hui thi.

Kaafi derr tak woh wahi khade rahe, ek dusre ki aankhon me khoye, unke liye aas-paas ki duniya dhundhli ho chuki thi.

Kritika : Fir se kabhi mera dil mat dukhaana, Karan.

Karan : Never-!!!

Kritika : Mein khud ko dikhaati bold hu, par- par sach ye hai ki mein bold hu hi nahi. Yaha tak ki- *blushes* Maine aaj tak kabhi kisi ko kiss tak nahi kiya. Kisi ko date tak nahi kiya. Bas, college me hum ladkiyo ke group me meri shaan bani rahe isliye mein most of the times unse jhooth bol deti hu. In reality... Maine... Maine kabhi kuch nahi kiya. So, jab tumne aisa mere baare me socha. Mein bardaasht nahi kar paayi.

Karan : I know and I'm sorry.

Usne aage badh Kritika ko apne gale se laga liya aur bechari Kritika ke gaal sharm se laal ho gaye.

Kritika (blushes) : S-Sab dekh rahe hai. Agar, kisi ne galat samajh liya toh tum peete jaoge.

Karan (smiles) : Let me drop you home.

Kritika : Papa mummy ne dekh liya toh shaamat aa jayegi. Na baba na!

Karan : Mein tumhe ghar se thoda dur chhor dunga.

Kritika (nods) : Mm~

***

"Oh, mister! Kaha kho gaye???"

Veer ki awaaz Karan ko uske hosh me laayi. Woh kal ke apne pyaar ke izhaar ke lamho me kho gaya tha.

Karan : N-Nahi, kuch nahi! You know... Thanks!

Veer : Hmm?

Karan : Kal... Kal tumhari wajah se... Mein aur Kritika pehle se bhi ab ek dusre ke qareeb aa gaye hai. Maine use 'I love you' keh diya kal.

Veer : Oh??

Karan (blushes) : Aur, usne bhi... 'I love you too' kaha.

Veer : Fir? Shaadi kab hai?

Karan : What the hell??? A-Abhi kaha shaadi? Abhi usme samay hai. Anyways, aao tumhe introduce karwau. Owner hone ke baad bhi staff aaj tumhe pehli baar dekh rahe hai. Inhe bata toh du ki tum owner ho.

Veer : Ohh!?

Karan : Zara suniye!!! *claps* Aap sab!! Idhar! Haan, idhar dekhiye!!! Aap sab jaante hai ki iss nayi brand ka owner mein nahi hu. Aaj aapke owner aapke saamne khade hue hai. Ye hai, Mister Veer!!! Yarnia inka hi brand hai jo launch hone waala hai. Yahi iske founder hai aur iske owner bhi.

Karan ne jaise hi Veer ka parichay diya waha khade sabhi ladke aur ladkiyaan taajub me reh gaye. Aur, unka khus-pusana shuru ho gaya.

"Ye kya? Ye owner hai? Toh woh kaun thi? Jo yaha aati thi roz-roz."

"Sahi kaha. Mujhe toh laga tha yaar woh Tejal ji iss business ki owner hai."

Tamaam baatein Veer ko leke waha hone lagi. Aur, Veer bas muskura raha tha.

Veer : Aap sab ne sahi suna. Mein iss business ka owner hu. Jin lady se aap pehle mile the, Miss Tejal! Woh meri badi behan hai. Aur, unka bhi iss business pe utna hi haq hai jitna mera hai. Agar, aap sab unhe hi owner maante aaye hai aur unhe hi maanana chaahte hai toh mujhe uss se koi dikkat nahi. *smiles*

'Ohh! Ye kitne acche hai!!!'

'Mujhe toh laga tha ye baakiyo ki tarah khadoos aur ego waala hoga. Par-'

'Ye owner kitne handsome hai. Pehle kaha the ye???'

'Thoda zyada hi javaan sa lag raha hai. Chala bhi payega business ya nahi?'

Alag-alag vichaar unn sabhi ke mann me aaye jinhe unhone apne tak hi seemit rakha.

Veer : Aap sab apna kaam karte rahiye. Don't mind me! *smiles* Mein bas sab dekhne aaya tha. Aur, samay-samay par aap sab se milne aata rahunga. Ye business mere aur meri di ke under hi rahega. Agar, aap ko koi bhi dikkat ho aap Miss Tejal ko ya fir Louis se apni pareshani saajha kar sakte hai.

Staff : Okay, Sir!!

Veer : Karan!

Karan : Hmm?

Veer : M-Miss Kaera! K-Kaisi hai woh?

Karan (softens) : Hamesha ki tarah Nexacom me busy. Tum toh jaante hi ho ki woh kaisi hai—hamesha dusro se dus qadam aage. Lekin, kuch dino se maine unme bahut change dekha hai.

Veer : ???

Karan : Woh mujhse pehle se zyada baat karti hai. Unme achanak se pata nahi kaise, par- par bahut badlav aa raha hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise meri purani di wapas aa rahi hai. Woh ab unn cheezon pe dhyaan dene lagi hai jinke baare me woh kabhi sochti bhi nahi thi.

Veer : Hmm? Matlab?

Karan : Matlab... Matlab kal raat ki hi baat lelo. Mein aur di dining table par baith ke dinner kar rahe the aur Julia hume serve kar rahi thi. Meri plate me pasta khatam ho gaya tha. Then, maine Julia se maanga. But, suddenly di ne apni plate ka pasta meri plate me daal diya. Aur, boli- "You can have mine."

Veer : Ohh! Toh, tumhe khushi nahi hui?

Karan : Khushi? I was on cloud nine!! Di ne na jaane kitne saalo baad apni plate se mujhe kuch share kiya hai. Aur, kamaal toh tab hua jab maine unki plate me apni plate se broccoli rakhi. Unhone smile di aur woh brocolli khushi-khushi kha gayi. Can you believe it? It's insane...! Aisa aaj tak nahi hua.

Veer ne haami bhari. Kaera jaisi ladki usne aaj tak apne jeevan me nahi dekhi thi. She was like nature's force. Uski buddhimatta, sundarta, aur jis sahaj tareeke se usne sammaan praapt kiya tha woh dono hi aakarshak aur dara dene waala tha. Kyunki, jis kamre me woh apne qadam rakhti thi, uss kamre me khaali apni maujoodgi se tamaam logo par woh haavi ho jaati thi. Aur, Veer ko uski yahi chhavi uski orr akarshit karti thi.

Louis jo inn sabhi baato se anibhigya tha woh taali bajaate hue unn dono ke qareeb aaya.

Louis : Veer, my friend. Back to the business. The designs are ready. And, I must say they are tres magnifique! Haha! I have merged the elegance of French couture with the vibrancy of Indian textiles. Yarnia will be a brand like no other.

Louis ne jaise hi apna drishtikon batana shuru kiya, Veer ke hontho ki muskan badhti chali gayi. France aur India. Dono shailiyo ka mishran hi Yarnia ka lakshya tha. Finally, uska khud ka business khada hone jaa raha tha. Louis ne na keval Veer ko samjhaya, balki usne rekha-chitra, kapde ke kuch namoone aur kuch taiyaar products bhi dikhaaye.

Detailing par dhyaan bina kisi truti ke diya gaya tha, pratyek silaayi, pratyek teh, savdhanipoorvak taiyaar kiya gaya tha.

Jaise-jaise woh alag-alag working stations se guzre woh kapdo ki pasand, manufacturing aur production ki samay-seema, aur brand ke samagra saundarya par charcha karte gaye. Veer ko ehsaas hua ki Louis apni field ka kitna bada master tha. Woh apni kala me maahir tha, aur designing ke prati uska junoon spasht tha.

Veer : Louis! I don't know what I would do without you. You have turned this into something extraordinary.

Louis : Ayy, I'm just happy to have the opportunity, my friend. You gave me a chance when no one else would.

Desi kapdo ke sang french fashion ka ye blend sabko apna deewana banaane waala tha. Aur, ye sambhav hua tha Louis ke kaaran.

Veer (smiles) : I trust your judgement. We need to make a statement with Yarnia's launch. Something that will grab attention, not just in India but... internationally.

Louis : Oui, absolutely, my friend! I was thinking of a soft launch here in Mumbai, something exclusive. We could invite key influencers, fashion bloggers, and some of our target audience. Create a buzz before we go global. Hahahaha!

Karan jo sab dhyaan se sunn raha tha woh beech me bola.

Karan : Mein tumhari madad logistics me kar sakta hu. Maximum exposure ke liye hum Nexacom ke resources ka istemal kar sakte hai. Aur, rahi baat advertisements ki... Toh models... Mein kuch agencies ko jaanta hu jo Yarnia jaisi unique brand ka hissa banana pasand karengi.

Veer ne Karan ko dekha, uske prati uska sammaan aur badh gaya. Itni daulat aur safalta ke bawajood Karan zameen se jud ke rehta tha aur madad ke liye humesha taiyaar.

Veer : Mein Nexacom ke resources par depend nahi hona chaahta, bhai. Aur-

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha tum aisa kuch bologe. *sighs* Ye bas initial push hai, Veer. Koi dependency nahi. Hume ise bada banaana hai ki nahi?

Veer : Right!

Karan : Toh, bas fir! Chup-chaap ab dekhte jao.

Veer : Mein soch raha tha-

Karan : Huh?

Veer : Kya...!? I mean, advertisement ke liye... Miss Kaera humare brand ki fashion wear me se agar kuch pehne-!?

Karan : Tum chaahte ho di Yarnia ke kapde pehen ke advertise kare?

Veer : Y-Yeah!

Karan (shrugs) : Khud hi pucho, man! Mein kuch na kehne waala. Mein dekhna chahunga ki di agree karti hai ya nahi. Haha!

Veer : Fine!

'Aur, isi ke saath-'

*Ding*








'Mein Saili ko Miss Kaera se milwa dunga!!!'

*Ring* *Ring*

Woh soch-vichaar me tha jab punah uska phone baj utha. Aur, screen par naam dekhte hi Veer ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Jis naam se call aa raha tha woh naam tha ~ Divya!

Veer (picks up) : H-Hello? Divyaaa???

Divya : Veeeer???

Veer : Divya, kaha ho tum? Tum theek toh ho na? Send me your location!!!

Divya : Shaant, Veer! Shaant! T-Tum kaha ho?

Veer : Mein? Mein iss waqt Mumbai me. Ghar se thodi dur.

Divya : Mein bhi Mumbai me hi hu. Subah hi pahuchi. Aur, bas hotel me check-in kiya. Sim card wagarah sab set up karne ke baad ab tumhe call kiya.

Veer : Mumbai me? Tum yaha?

Divya : Hmm! Veer bahut kuch batana hai mujhe. Mein jaanti hu tumhare mann me kaafi questions honge. Lekin, abhi wait karo. Free hoke mujhse night me aake milo. Hum dinner saath me karenge. Mein iss waqt hotel Serenity me stay ki hui hu.

Veer : Huh? Kya naam bataya tumne hotel ka?

Divya : Hotel Serenity!

'Fuccccckkkkk!!!!'

Ye wahi hotel thi jaha par Veer Ava ko thehra ke aaya tha. Aur, France ki vardaat ke baad Divya Ava ko kis nazariye se dekhti thi ye baat Veer China me jaan chuka tha.

'Kaash woh dono ek dusre se na mile. Kaash...!'

***

Nidhi's apartment,
Evening - 7:10 PM

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaze par baahar se khat-khatahat hui toh Mrs. Tiwari ne apne flat ka main gate khola.

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey? Juhi ki mummy. Aaiye na!

Nidhi : Ji, mein woh- Ye pav-bhaji dene aayi thi. Aaj Juhi ne banwayi thi. Toh, socha aapke yaha bhi leti chalu.

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey haha! Iski kya zaroorat thi?

Nidhi : Arey aap bhi toh kitna kuch bhijwati rehti hai. Kuch nahi hota. Lijiye na!

Mrs. Tiwari : Haan! Andar toh aao! Baitho baitho! Juhi!!! Aa jao beta!!

Juhi : Mmm~

Nidhi aur Juhi dono hi andar aayi aur wahi hall me bichhe ek sofe par baith gayi.

Nidhi : Arey, aap kuch banaane mat lagiyega. Dhruv akela hai. So raha hai. Mein use chhor ke aayi hu.

Mrs. Tiwari : Bagal me toh ghar hai. Thodi koi ghus jayega. Flat hai ye. Colony nahi! Haha! Baitho, mein chai banati hu. Inko aur baccho ko pav-bhaji bahut pasand hai.

Nidhi : Arey chai rehne dijiye.

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey baitho tum! Abhi do minute me bann jaegi. Juhi! Beta kya khaogi aap?

Juhi : Mmm! Kuch nahi aunty!

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey aunty ke ghar me sharmao nahi. Mummy ko chhoro. Mummy kuch nahi bolegi. Batao! Kya khaogi?

Juhi : Umm! Chai-biscuit!!!

Mrs. Tiwari : Accha! Abhi laayi!

Nidhi halka sa muskura ke Juhi ke sarr par haath feri aur thodi hi derr me Mrs. Tiwari teen cup chai ki tray leke haazir ho gayi. Jaha Juhi chai me biscuit dubo dubo ke khaane me magn ho gayi toh wahi idhar Nidhi aur Mrs. Tiwari ke beech baatein shuru ho gayi.

Mrs. Tiwari : Accha ek baat toh batao...

Nidhi : Ji?

Mrs. Tiwari : Woh jo ladka tumhare ghar aata hai. Woh kaun hai?

Nidhi : Ladka? Kaun ladka?

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey abhi kal parso hi toh aaya tha na?

Nidhi ne ek pal socha aur fir use bodh hua ki yaha kis ladke ki baat ho rahi thi.

Nidhi : Ji! W-Woh Veer hai!

Mrs. Tiwari : Veer?! Kaun hai ye ladka.

Nidhi : Mera student hai, college me.

Mrs. Tiwari : Toh yaha ghar kyu aata hai? Kayi baar dekha hai maine use?

Nidhi : Ah! J-Ji! W-Woh ghar jaisa hi hai.

Mrs. Tiwari : Haan, par kuch zyada hi ghar nahi aata-jaata?

Nidhi : J-Ji, woh- Juhi se uski khoob jamti hai. Aur, Juhi bhi uske saath acche se rehti hai. Mera kaam bhi asaan ho jaata hai. Toh, kabhi-kabhi... Madad ke liye aa jaata hai.

Mrs. Tiwari ne ek jhalak Juhi ko dekha, fir Nidhi ko aur fir apna cup neeche table par rakh boli.

Mrs. Tiwari : Dekho, Juhi ki mummy! Maine bahut duniya-daari dekhi hai. Alag-alag ilaake me rahi hu. Kuch achhe, kuch bure. Sab samajhti hu. Ab, tum padosi ho isliye keh rahi hu-

Nidhi : !!??

Mrs. Tiwari : Par, mujhe uss ladke ke iraade kuch theek nahi lagte.

Nidhi : J-Ji???

Mrs. Tiwari : Haan na! Warna, tum khud socho ki koi ladka apni teacher ke ghar baar-baar kyu aayega? Aaj kal ka samay bahut kharab chal raha hai, Juhi ki mummy. Ye aaj kal ke ladke pehle shadi-shuda aurat ke bachho ko fuslaate hai aur fir unke zariye unki maa par-

Nidhi : Aap-!!! Aap kehna kya chaahti hai!!??

Mrs. Tiwari : Yahi ki thoda dur raho uss ladke se. Mujhe toh kuch theek nahi lagta woh ladka. Aur, jab bhi woh tumse milne aaye tum hamesha apna darwaza khula rakha karo. Ya mujhe bata diya karo.

Nidhi : Aunty ji! Aapko koi galat-fehmi hui hai. Veer ko mein achhe se jaanti hu. Uske parivar ko jaanti hu. Uthati baithati rehti hu unke yaha. Mujhe achha laga jaan kar ki aapko meri chinta hai magar, jaisa aap samajh rahi hai waisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Veer bahut achha ladka hai. Aur, hamesha meri madad karta hai.

Mrs. Tiwari : Arey meri baat samjho! Ladke apne andar ki baat thode hi saamne aane dete hai. Kya iss ladke ne Juhi ke liye kabhi kuch nahi kiya?

Nidhi : Sabse zyada woh Juhi ke liye hi karta hai.

Mrs. Tiwari : Dekha? Yahi toh mein keh rahi hu. Pehle ye bachho ko behlaate hai. Kyunki, inhe pata hai ki aurat ke dil ka raasta unke bachho se hoke guzarta hai.

Nidhi (frowns) : Mujhe bhi insaano ko parakhne ki samajh hai, aunty ji! College jaati aayi hu. Sab pata rehta hai mujhe ki ladke kis nazar se dekhte hai. Aap bhi aurat hai. Aapko toh pata lag hi jaata hoga na ki kaun ladka aapke prati acchi bhavnaaye rakhta hai?

Mrs. Tiwari : Acchi bhavnaaye nahi dekhni hoti, Juhi ki mummy. Woh ek dikhava bhi ho sakti hai. Sirf bure iraado ko pakadna hota hai. Kyunki, woh chhal nahi hota. Aur, bas... Pata lagte hi duri bana lo uss se.

Nidhi : Toh, iss baare me mere aur aapke khayalaat nahi milte aunty ji. Veer ko mein koi aaj se nahi jaanti. Teen saal ho chuke hai mujhe. Use badhte hue dekha hai maine. Jab usne haar maan li thi, tab use uthate hue dekha hai maine. Toote hone ke baad use judte hue dekha hai maine. Iss se zyada kuch bataane ki zaroorat nahi mujhe. Aap kuch zyada hi sensitive ho gayi hai shayad.

Mrs. Tiwari : Mera kaam tha tumhe batana, Juhi ki mummy. Baaki, tumhe jaisa theek lage tum toh waisa hi karogi. Par, baad me kehna mat ki maine sachet nahi kiya.

Nidhi : Uski zaroorat hi nahi padegi, aunty ji! Chalti hu!

Mrs. Tiwari (sighs) : Arey apni plate toh leti jao.

Nidhi : Koi jaldbazi nahi hai, aunty ji! Kabhi bhi aa jayengi. Kyunki, mujhe aap pe... bharosa hai!

Mrs. Tiwari : ...

*Thud*

Aur, Nidhi Juhi ko leke waha se chali gayi.

***

Hotel Serenity,
Night - 8:45 PM ~

Veer ne hotel ki lobby me qadam rakha, uske dimaag me Divya ke hi khayaal daud rahe the. Usne use call kiya toh pata chala woh luxury private lounge me baithi thi. Woh directions puchne ke baad luxury private lounge ki orr badh gaya. Lekin, hotel ki khubsoorti, sundar marble ka farsh aur halki raushni bhi uski bechaini ko kam na kar saki.

Uska dil uske seene me zoro se dhadak raha tha. Use uske sawaalo ke jawaab chahiye the. Aur, Divya se milna tha taaki woh confirm kar sake ki woh surakshit hai ya nahi.

Jaise hi woh lounge ke paas pahucha, uske qadam ladkhada gaye.

'Shit-!!!'

Kaanch ke darwaaze se usne Divya aur Ava, dono ko ek chhoti dining table par ek dusre ke saamne baitha paaya. Unke beech hawa me tanaav ko yaha dur se hi mehsoos kiya jaa sakta tha. Divya ki aankhon me aakrosh tha, woh aage jhuki hui thi aur Ava se jaise kuch pooch-taach kar rahi thi.

Aur, Ava harr baar ki tarah shaant, Divya ko harr jawaab ghumaate hue de rahi thi. Saath hi uske hontho par ek feeki, rehesyamayi muskaan bhi faili hui thi jise dekh Divya ka paara aur badhta jaa raha tha.

[Go, master!]

'Hmm!'

Veer ne dhakka deke kaanch ka darwaza khola toh dono mahilao ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur, Divya ka kathorpann use dekhte hi ek shan me narm pad gaya. Woh apni jagah se uth khadi hui. Do qadam Veer ki orr aage badhi tab tak Veer khud uske paas chal ke aa gaya.



Veer : Divya-!!!

Aur, Divya bina kuch soche seedhe uske gale se lipat gayi.

Divya : Veeeer-!!!

Uski awaaz me ek raahat ka bhaav tha. Aur, bina kisi hich-kichahat ke woh Veer ko apni baahon me jakdi rahi.

Idhar, Ava ki muskaan saamne chal rahe drishya ko dekh gaayab ho gayi. Uski nigaahein Veer aur Divya ko aapas me lipta dekh, aashcharya aur kuch gehri irshya ke mishran ke saath tiki rahi.



Divya : Tum theek ho na???

Veer : Ye sawaal mujhe karna chahiye! Kaha thi tum? Phone kyu nahi utha rahi thi? Aur, tum chhooti kaise? Aur, yaha kaise pahuchi achanak? Tumhe pata bhi hai ki yaha mein kitna pareshan tha?? Tumhe leke kaun gaya tha? Aur, tumhe bachaya kisne? Inn beetein dino kaha thi tum?

Divya uske sawaalo ki bauchhaar par dheere se muskurayi. Uske seene se alag hui aur uske hontho par apni ek ungli rakh boli.

Divya : Mein theek hu, handsome! I'm fine! Thodi lambi kahani hai. Lekin, ab mein safe hu. FBCC ne mujhe bacha liya.

Veer : FBCC? Tumhari nayi agency?

Divya (nods) : Right! Aur, detail me bataungi. Par, pehle baitho. Let's have our dinner.

Usne Veer ko apne bagal se baithaya. Ava badhti bechaini ke saath unki baat-cheet dekhti rahi. Veer aur Divya ka baat karne ka tareeka, jis familiarity se kisi gehri baat ki charcha woh kar rahe the, use dekh kar uski aankhein sikud gayi. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer aur Divya pehle se ek dusre se parichit the. Lekin, itna qareeb? Unn dono ko iss qadar itna paas dekh, unki urja ko paas se mehsoos kar, irshya ki ek kasak uske seene me uth gayi.

Akhir me, Veer ki nazre Ava par gayi.

Veer : Ava-! Tumhara mask!?

Ava mask nahi pehni thi. Iska matlab saaf tha ki hotel ko uski identity ke baare me pata lag chuka tha.

Ava : Ab tumhare saamne mein koi bhi mask nahi pehnana chaahti, Veer.




Inn shabdo ke peeche aur bhi ek arth chhipa hua tha jise Divya bhale hi nahi samajh paayi lekin, Veer samajh gaya.

Veer : Umm... Toh- Sabko pata nahi chal jayega? Tumhe dikkat nahi?

Ava : Nahi! Maine pehle hi apni company ko sab bata diya hai ki mein ek lambe break par hu. Aur, bas apni birthplace ko explore karna chaahti hu. Tumhe kya lagta hai? Ye luxury lounge mujhe kaise allot hua? *smiles* Meri identity ka pata chalne ke baad hi hotel ke staff ka behaviour change ho gaya. Woh ab saari luxuries mujhe provide karwa rahe hai.

Veer : Are you sure?

Veer ne sawaal kiya. Zaahir hai ki uska sawaal Ava ki company se sambandhit nahi tha. Ava ek system holder thi. Apni identity ko wapas media me laana kitna bada jokhim saabit ho sakta tha, Veer iske liye pareshan tha.

Kintu, Ava ne apna haath aage badhaya aur Veer ke haath ke upar rakha.

Ava (softly) : It's alright, Veer! Don't worry! I'll use 'Camouflage.' Only for you!!!



Divya : Camouflage?? Kya matlab??

Ava (smiles) : Oh! It's a secret. Sirf mere aur Veer ke beech me. Hai na? Veer???



Ava ke komal haath ki pakad uske haath ke upar mazboot ho gayi. Aur, ye dekh iss baar Divya ki bauhe sikud gayi. Usne Veer ke blazer ko apni ungli se pakad ke kheencha aur khus-pusaate hue uske kaan me boli.

Divya : Ye Ava yaha kya kar rahi hai? Aur, tum dono itne close kab se ho gaye, huh?

Magar, Divya ki saari baatein Ava ko asaani se sunaayi de gayi. Woh haule se muskurayi.

Ava : I can hear you, Divya!!! Kam se kam mere saamne toh ye baat mat karo.

Divya : Hmph!

Veer : Anyways, tum dono- tum dono aapas me kab mile?

Divya : Neeche aate waqt!

Veer : Hmm?

Divya : Mein tumhare liye ready hoke neeche aayi hi thi jab meri mulaqat kisi specific someone se ho gayi.

Ava : And, that specific someone has a name, Divya! It's 'Ava Martin!'




Divya : Oh? Mujhe toh laga tha tum 'Natalia' prefer karti thi?

Uske sawaal par Ava Veer ki aankhon me dekhi.

Ava : 'Natalia' died a long time ago. It's only 'Ava' now.

Divya : Kitne hi bahaane bana lo tum, Ava. Mein jaanti hu ki France me Veer ka mushqil me fassna kahi na kahi tumse related tha.

Ava aur Veer dono hi taajub me the. Divya thi toh akhir ek detective. Woh poori baat toh nahi jaanti thi lekin uska iss teh tak pahuchna ki Ava ka haath Veer ki pareshani me tha, uske IQ ke baare me bahut kuch darshata tha.

Ava (smiles) : You think too much, Divya!

Divya : Tsk! Excuses!

Veer : Divya!

Divya : ???

Veer : Ava ne meri help ki thi. China me!!!

Divya : Huh???

Veer : Aur, ab wapas se questions par aate hai. Kaha thi tum?

Divya (sighs) : FBCC me!

Veer : FBCC? Woh kaise-!?

Divya : I don't know, Veer. Mujhe jo kuch yaad hai woh mein tumhe bataati hu. China me jangal me sab ke saath jab mein thi. Tab, mujhe achanak se apne sarr ke peeche kuch feel hua tha. Aur, uske baad mein behosh ho chuki thi.




Veer : ...

Divya : Mujhe kuch nahi pata ki mujhe kaun leke gaya, mein kaha thi. Lekin, jab mujhe hosh aaya tab mein FBCC me thi. Director ke khud ke kamre me. Aur, fir unhone bataya mujhe ki FBCC ne hi mujhe rescue kiya aur wapas leke aaye.

Veer (frowns) : Director? Kaun hai director?

Divya : I'm sorry, Veer. Lekin, director ki ID kisi ko batayi nahi jaati. Tum jaante ho ki FBCC kitni badi agency hai. Unki identity ke peeche bade se bade criminals pade hai. Aur, isliye ye ek secret hai. Aisa nahi hai ki mein tumpe trust nahi karti. It's just-! It's how it's supposed to be...

Veer : It's okay!

Veer ne Ava ko dekha jo use hi gambheerta se dekh rahi thi. Dono ke vichaar ek hi the.

'Something is wrong!'

[Yes, Master!]

'Agar, Divya ko Rebecca le gayi thi, toh bhala FBCC ne use do-do system holders ki giraft se kaise chhura liya? It's impossible! Unless...'

[Unless Rebecca herself set Divya free.]

'That's right! Lekin, aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Agar, Divya ko chhorna hi tha, toh, Rebecca ne fir use pakda hi kyu? Divya ko le jaane ka maqsad hi kya hua?'

[Mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi, Master. Kya sirf aap ko daraane ke liye ye kiya gaya tha?]

'Mujhe nahi lagta, Pari! Rebecca ek system holder hai. Chinatown me usne jo kiya. Woh sab uska plan tha. Aise me woh fizool me Divya ko nahi le jayegi. Sirf mujhe daraane ke liye toh bilkul bhi nahi-! Kyunki, Divya bas ek aam insaan hai.'

[Shayad aapko taunt karne ke liye? Aap pareshan toh hue hi na, master!]

'Lekin, iss se use kya mila? Ultimately, usne chhor hi diya na Divya ko?'

[Ya aisa toh nahi ki majboori me Divya ko chhorna pada ho? Maybe woh surveillance ka shikaar ho gayi? Aur, majbooran use Divya ko chhor ke jaana pada?]

'Jo system holder China me ghus ke apni marzi se apne hi helicopter se baahar nikal jaaye, woh FBCC ke surveillance ki pakad me aa jayega? I don't think so, Pari!'

[Hmm! Ye problematic hai kaafi. Hume cautious rehna hoga, master.]

'Right!'

Use mann me tabhi Garofano ki kahi gayi ek baat yaad aa gayi jo usne tab kahi thi jab woh China se wapas aa raha tha.

'Ek baat yaad rakhna, Veer. Ek advise ke roop me ise lelo. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki kuch baatein sense nahi bana rahi. Jab bhi tumhe lage ki tumhare aas-paas kuch aisi cheezein ghatit ho rahi hai jinke baare me tum pata nahi laga paa rahe. Koi bhi anhoni, koi bhi buri cheezein, kuch sadharan se hatt ke...! Toh hamesha yaad rakhna! Woh kaam... Ek system holder ka ho sakta hai.'

Garofano ki advise uske mann me goonj gayi. Kuch derr aur woh Divya aur Ava se baat karta raha aur fir dinner ke baad Divya apne kamre me chali gayi.

Veer wapas ghar laut raha tha jab Ava ki awaaz peeche se aayi aur uske qadam tham gaye.




Ava : We need to train, Veer!

Veer : Hm?

Ava : China me jo hua... Hum lucky the. Hume training ki zaroorat hai. Tum aur mein-!!! We can get better! Bina training ke hum bilkul uss khilaune ki tarah hai jiski chaavi par jang lag jaati hai. Don't you agree?

Veer (nods) : Hmm! Meet me tomorrow @ 2 PM here. I'll come!

Ava (nods) : Mmm!

Aur, Veer wapas ghar ko laut aaya.

Derr raat ho chuki thi aur hall me heater ki dheemi awaaz ka shor faila hua tha. Veer ne mand raushni ke hall me apne qadam rakhe aur andar aaya. Use Arohi aur Kavya kahi dikhayi na di. Hall me sirf Shweta, Bhavna aur Sonali maujood thi.

Veer : Arohi di aur Kavya kaha hai?

Shweta : Dono laut gayi shaam ko, beta. Sumitra ne phone kar unhe bula liya. Bechari par ab kaam zyada pad raha hoga.

Veer : Ohh?

Shweta : Tum dinner kar aaye ho kya?

Veer (nods) : Ji!

Jab usne apni maa Bhavna ki orr dekha toh Bhavna ne andar ke kamre ki orr ishaara kiya. Aur, hontho ko khol ek hi naam liya ~ Tej!

Veer apni maa ke ishaara par haan me sarr hilaaya aur apne joote utaar ke andar ki orr jaane laga. Darwaze ki orr jaane se pehle woh ek pal ke liye jhijhka, aur gehri saans liya. Usne Tej ko kis tarah nazar-andaaz kiya tha ye baat woh jaanta tha. Khud ko shaant kar woh kamre me ghus gaya.

Andar aate hi usne Tej ko kursi par baitha paaya. Saamne ek mej par uska laptop khula hua tha aur woh screen ko ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Mail me ek draft khula hua tha. Ek mail letter jise Tej ne abhi tak nahi bheja tha.

Pehle toh Tej ko Veer ki maujoodagi ka ehsaas na hua, woh apne dimaag me ghoom rahe vichaaro me khoyi hui thi. Lekin, jab antatah use Veer ka ehsaas hua, toh uski saansein atak gayi. Aur, usne jaldi se laptop ko band karne ki koshish ki, maano jaise kuch chhipaane ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Veer : Di-!!!

Awaaz sunte hi Tej thitak gayi, laptop band karte hue uske haath kaanpne lage. Veer ki orr dekhni ki uski himmat tak na hui. Veer uske qareeb aaya aur usne jhatke se firse laptop khol diya. Usne screen par type kiye gaye letter ko padha. Rotational transfer. Archeological ministry ki orr se, kam se kam teen saal ke liye aur woh bhi dusre state me. Padhte hi Veer ko ek jhatka laga.

Aur, uss se bhi bada jhatka Tej ka reply letter padh ke laga, jo usne ye sweekar karne ke liye type kar rakha tha. Deri thi toh bas uss mail letter ko bhejne ki.

Tej : Mujhe... Mujhe jaana hoga, Veer. Yahi better hoga. Hum dono ke liye.

Bolte samay, uski awaaz toot gayi.

Veer ka dil ye sunte hi baith gaya. Woh ye samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki uski Teju di ye kya keh rahi thi? Jaise-jaise Veer ek-ek shabd letter ka padhta jaata hai, uske dil par pahuchi andhruni chot badhne lagti hai. Tej ki aankhon se ab aasu behne lage.

Tej : Mein humesha cheezon ko bigaad deti hu, Veer. *sniff* Mein... Mein tumhare qareeb aane ki, tumhare saath rehne ki, aisi behen banane ki bahut koshish karti hu jis par tum bharosa kar sako...! Jis par tum depend ho sako. Lekin- Lekin, mein humesha tumhe chot pahuchaati hu, Veer. *sniff* Maine tumhe kal bhi galat samjha! *hic* Aur... Aur, ye pehli baar nahi tha. Shayad... Shayad... Yahi behtar hai ki mein tumhare aas-paas na rahu. Tum meri interference ke bina, mere dwara cheezon ko baddtar banaaye bina... Apna jeevan jee paoge. *sniff*

Veer ka dil apni Teju di ki baato se toot ke reh gaya. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uski teju di yaha tak soch ke baithi thi ki woh use chhorne tak ka vichaar kar rahi thi. Kya galti uski nahi thi? Akhir, usne hi toh apne teju di ko iss stage tak aane par majboor kar diya tha.

Usne apne halke thar-tharaate haatho se Tej ke kandho ko thaama, jiske chalte Tej upar sarr kar Veer ki aankhon me dekhne par majboor ho gayi. Aur, fir Veer dard aur hataasha bhari awaaz me bola.

Veer : Teju di!!! Aap andhi ho kya???

Tej : !!??

Veer : Aapko dikhta nahi hai kya?? Aapko dikhta nahi hai kya ki aap mere liye kitna maayne rakhti ho??? Aap ye soch bhi kaise sakti ho ki mujhse dur ho jaana iska solution hai??? Mujhe aapki zaroorat hai!!! Aap meri taaqat ho, mera aadhar ho, mera sab kuch ho!!! Mein kahi bhi jaata hu toh mehfooz mehsoos karta hu ki haan, meri badi behan ka haath mere peeche hai. Woh dekhbhaal kar rahi hai. Mein unke bharose cheezein chhor sakta hu. Toh, aise me aap mujhe chhorne ke baare me kaise soch sakti ho???

Uski awaaz oonchi ho gayi. Aur, uske shabdo ko sunn Tej ki aankhein chaudi ho gayi. Uska dil uski chaathi me zorr-zorr se dhadakne laga. Usne inkaar me dur jaane ki koshish kari, lekin Veer ne use jaane na diya. Usne use kass ke pakda. Pakad mazboot thi lekin chot pahuchane jaisi nahi.

Tej sisakte hue boli. Uski awaaz me bhram aur laalsa ka ek mishran tha.

Tej : But... But I keep failing, Veer. Mein ab ye aur nahi kar sakti. Mein tumhe baar-baar iss tarah chot nahi pahucha sakti, Veer. *sniff* Shayad... Shayad, yahi behtar hai ki mein chali jau...!!!

Veer ne Tej ko apne qareeb kheencha toh Tej ki aankhein bhaavuk ho uthi.

Veer : Teju di!! Please, aisa mat kariye!!! Aap mujhe koi chot nahi pahucha rahi. I need you!! Aap mujhe samajhti ho, di. Mein aapko kabhi bhi khona nahi chaahta. Mein aapko apne se dur nahi jaane dunga! Never!!!

Tej ka sankalp toot raha tha. Usne apne dil ke chaaro orr jo deeware banayi thi, woh Veer ke shabdo se deh rahi thi. Usne Veer ki aankhon me dekha. Dard aur pyaar dono hi waha maujood the.

Veer : I'll never let you go away, di. Never-!!! I love you!

Iske pehle ki woh jawab de sake, Veer ne unke beech ke antar ko kam kiya aur ek betaab chumban me apne honth uske hontho par daba diye.

"Nnnghhh~!!!"

Ye pehli baar nahi tha jab unn dono ne ek dusre ko iss tarah chooma tha. Lekin, iss baar ye alag tha. Adhik teevra, adhik bhavnatmak. Tej uske hontho par haafne lagi. Unke labb ek dusre se bhid ke betahasha ek dusre ko choome jaa rahe the.

"Mmmm-!!!" "Nnnnnn~"

Dimag chilla raha tha ki ye galat hai. Lekin, dil toh kuch aur hi keh raha tha. Tej ne kiss ka jawab diya. Usne apni saari dabi bhavnaye usme daal di. Ek haath se Veer ki shirt jakad, dooje se uske sarr ke peeche ke baal pakad woh Veer ke muh me apni jeebh daal utne hi josh me use choomne lagi.

*Kiss* *Slurp* *Kiss*

Jab woh antatah alag hue, toh dono hi bedum the. Apni saanson ko pakadne ki koshish karne lage aur maathe se maatha laga ke ek dusre ki baahon me lipte khade rahe.

Tej : Veer... *breathes heavily* Veer ye... Kya ye- Kya ye galat hai? Hume aisa nahi karna chahiye na-!?

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata ki ye galat hai ya sahi, di. Lekin, mujhe sahi lagta hai.

Tej (gasps) : Huh-!??

Veer : Bilkul sahi!!! Mein ise samajh nahi sakta aur na hi samajhna chaahta hu. Mujhe bas itna pata hai ki mein aapke bina ab nahi reh sakta, Teju di. Mein aapko kahi nahi jaane dunga-!! Kahi bhi nahi! Aap humesha mere paas rahogi!!

Tej : H-Humesha-!!??

Veer : Haan! Humesha!! Mere paas!!!

Tej ka badan thitur gaya. Ye soch ke ki Veer use humesha apne paas rakhna chaahta tha. Ye ek sanket tha. Sanket ki Veer use shaadi ke baare me sochne ka bhi koi vikalp nahi de raha tha.

Aur, Tej ke liye ye bahut tha. Woh bilakhti hui Veer ke seene se lag gayi.

Tej : I love you, Veer!!! I love you, so much!!! Lekin, mujhe nahi pata mein kya karu-!! Tell me, Veer. Tell me! Kya karu?? Mujhe darr lagta hai. Hum itna qareeb aate jaa rahe hai! But it feels so right!!! It feels so good!! Hum jo bann rahe hai-

Veer ne use kass ke pakad liya, uska haath dheere se uske baalo ki lato ko kaan ke peeche kiya.

Veer : Agar, aap mere saath ho. Toh, hum sab suljha lenge, di. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Koi bhi musibat aaye. Hum ek saath uska saamne kar lenge.

Tej ne haami bhari. Veer se chipke hone ke kaaran uske aasuon ne uski shirt ko bhigo diya tha. Uske andar ka toofaan dheere-dheere shaant hone laga. Woh ek baat jaan gayi. Chaahe kitna bhi unka rishta jatil kyu na ho jaaye, woh dono ek dusre ke bina nahi reh sakte. Ye soch kar woh dheere se muskurayi aur sarr upar kar Veer ko dekhi.

Tej (softly) : As long as you need me...! I'll always stay by your side, Veer!!!

Veer : I will always need you, di! Always!!!

Woh muskurayi aur fir use kheench ke laptop ke paas le gayi. Usne uss draft waale mail letter ko delete kiya aur ek dusra mail letter ka draft khola.

Veer ne jaise hi dusra letter padha, uski aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Tej ne muskurate hue Veer ki ungli ko thaama aur laptop par le jaate hue 'enter' button press kar di.

Veer : Wait, di-!!!

Tej (smiles) : Aur, isi ke saath... Ye Tej... Ab ek archeologist nahi rahi. I quit-!!!

Veer (shockingly) : Di-!!!?

Woh uske seene se lagi. Aur, Veer ke haath ko apni kamar par le jaa kar rakhwayi.

Tej (whispers) : Hold me tight my dear little brother-!

Veer : !!!!

Tej : -And, kiss me!!!

Punah, Tej aur Veer ke honth ek dusre se jaa bhide. Jaise jaise raat gehri hoti rahi, Tej aur Veer ke beech ho rahi chumban teevra hoti chali gayi.

***

Thane, Police station,
Night - 10:00 PM

Magar, idhar Thane ke police station me iss derr raat khabar kuch achhi praapt nahi hui.

*Ring* *Ring*

Telephone baja. Trisha duty chhor ghar hi jaa rahi thi ki usne iss akhiri call ko utha liya.

Trisha : Thaane police station, Inspector Trisha-

Sub inspector : Madam, murder hua hai! External bypass road!

Sunte hi Trisha ke maathe par silvatein chhaa gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.8k words. Iss update me maine kaafi kuch alag kiya hai. Kritika aur Karan ke scene ko dikhaya gaya hai. Bhale hi woh side characters hai. Lekin, I think ek scene woh deserve karte hai. Let me know how did you feel about that? Maine poori koshish kar unke scene ko jitna acche se likh sakta tha, utne acche se likha hai. Also, iss update me maine aapko ek overview diya. Ek business ka. Realism rakhne ke liye, mein kuch business terms me ghusa. Ye ek showcase tha dikhaane ke liye ki ek start up vyavsaay shuruati starr par kaise dikhta hai. Of course, ye bas ek chhota sa example tha. I didn't go into too many details taaki bore na hoye readers. Aur, jinn readers ke mann me ye existing question tha ki Tej ek archeologist hone ke baad yaha Ghar me kya kar rahi thi itne dino se. I think woh ab dur ho gaya hoga. As you can see, the incest part is coming in and also, jealousy part is lurking behind too. Soon, we'll go through both of them in parallel. Baaki, Target apna wahi hai. 200. Like thokne ka aur revos rakhna ka.
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

Update about not giving update

Update is already posted.

 

[Werewolf]

True bro but apko ek bt kahoun istrhan ab story maza or interest khatam ho gya hy mai khud apki story py comment krny waloun mai sy hu if you remember but ab bhot arsy bad aya 182 update ky or dekha sirf ek or 183 update ai hy tu thora sa dil udas huwa. Anyways ap kro apny km bro real life zyada zarori hy mujhy bhot achy sy is bt ka pta isliye zyada kbhi ni bola kbhi. Good luck for your life. Bye

Harr kisi ke mazey ke liye mein apni personal life toh sacrifice nahi kar sakta na? Aaj nahi toh kal iss story ko mein khatam karunga hi aur ye xf ke liye mera masterpiece bann ke rahegi.

Mein lagatar 3 saal se likh raha hu. Can you imagine the responsibility to write for more than 3 years on a single story? Baaki, jinhe padhna hai woh padhenge hi. Not only I will break every record but I'll set the bar so high that it will remain untouchable. Of course... Unless, I myself decide to break it.

 

[agmr66608]

Fantastic Update. Meeting between Divya and Ava was wonderful. Still the Heroine as well as other one,i,e. Kaera and Sonia are missing in this arc. Was expecting them in this arc. Let us see what happens next.That Adesh should be taught a lesson in a good way.A fantastic story so far.

 

[Ravisharma0143]

Outstanding update brother

 

[Werewolf]

Bro,Everyone has arrived in the scene barring the Heroine Kaera and Sonia who are yet to meet VEER. Let us see whether they arrive in the scene or not because that should be a separate Update.Of course,it is my wish only,how to carry forward this terrific Story is your decision. Will be waiting eagerly for their meeting.

Outstanding update brother nidhi ke sath scene thoda aur dikhna tha

Mind blowing bhai
I'm waiting ki kb veer and nidhi ka sb shi hoga
Let's see
But ye nya bnda kaffi interesting h
Rebecca ka bhi chutiya bna rha h ye
Salla is se niptna veer ko kaffi dikkat dega
Chlo dekhte h
Kya hotta h

Umeed h next update jldi hi Mille ga

Gayal kar diya update ne

Awesome update bhai

Ek misunderstanding ke chalte ,kavya ,nidhi ,Karan aur tej sabko veer ka gussa ek baar phir dekhna pada aur ek baar phir se veer ,tej se door hota hua nazar aa rha hai aur idhar Suman ne bhi Ragini ko veer ka sara such bata diya hai ......

Nidhi aur veer ka scene thoda aur hona chahiye tha ,aur ye naya Banda ( king) kaun hai jo sayad Rebecca ko bhi chutiya bana raha hai

Kya baat bhai ji aapki lekhni adhbhut hai ekdum dhasu Jabardast superb mast update

Awesome update bhai

Killer Update bro.......

Maja gaya bro

Fabulous Update.

Excellent update..

aapke likhne Ka Tarika sabse unique hai aapko sat sat Naman

बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट भाई क्या ही सीन दिखाया है करन को तो बिल्कुल अपनी दुनिया लुटती हुई दिखाई दे गई थी तेज बहुत ही शर्मिंदा है उसे लग रहा है कि उसके इस कृत्य से उनके बीच फिर दूरी बढ़ गई वहीं रागिनी अब क्या करेगी और निधी का सीन सबसे इमोशनल था और लास्ट में वो unknown व्यक्ति ऐसी क्या चीज लेकर आ गया शायद वही redioactive elements या कुछ और।

भाई एक रिक्वेस्ट है कृपया कर के रागिनी और निधी के वीर के साथ रिश्ते में कोई उलट फेर मत करना ये मेरे दो पसंदीदा character हैं
आप writer हो आप के हाथ में ही इस कहानी का भाग्य है कृपया इस request को accept कर लेना भाई please

Nic update

Bahut jabardast update

Nice update...

Zabardast update BRO!

Superb, beautiful, wonderful, awesome, amazing, mind blowing, excellent, dhamakedaar and lovely update and thanks for biggest ever megha update for readers

Bhai bhai bhai !!!
What an amaaaazing and brilliant update!??... Superb

I couldn't have imagined that this update would come with a Full Packed Family Drama ...???

This is soooooo much..!!!

Lot's of Emotions...or sath me lay banate hue readers ko jo Suspense ka Tadka laga k diya hai na....
Literally Awesome

I can't say anything about every moments in this Episode now (Because I am happily diving into the Canal filled with Joy ) Accept...??

Blockbuster ||

-Baaki baatein Section ki Tapri pe baaki Toliyon k sath Saajha ki jayngi..."

Literally Bhai..!
2 hafton bhaad,aisa Mega Update deke Dil Khush kar diya, woh bhi approximately 12.7 k words ka..
Previous Update se 4200 Words more..Ju ne Kamaaal Kar diya..

Thank you !

Werewolf bhai, for giving such a wonderful Story to Us

Or ek baat..!
Ye Mr.India ka Parallel World wala bhai Mr.X kahi Nuclear Warhead to nahi bana raha

Ye to full comedy me maja aagya

Shandar jabardast update

Nice update bro

welcome back & nice update

Behtareen update Werewolf bhai....

Overall I thoroughly enjoyed your story ... Because I am a silent reader I appreciate any story which keeps me hooked and yours is one such it elevates the mood and keeps us waiting for the next update ... But don't take it the wrong way but i think if veer had kissed nidhi and told her this is I am to you and left instead of raising his hand on her I personally would have liked it more but hey wat do I know I m just a reader and your writing skills are much appreciated specially the twists...

First of all, thanks itna bda update dene k lie hum sabko,,, tarif krne jesa kuchh h nhiii kyuki tarif uski ki jati jahan pr gunjaish ho,,, but it's not the case with this special heart touching creation,, lekin ek baat ki shikayat h tumse Mr. Werewolf ,, tumne bechaini badha di h,,, tumhri story se hum readers kitne jyda attached h ye tum bhi jante hoo,, hr ek character humare lie important h lekin kuchh characters bhut special h,,
Ek request h,,, unn special characters k sath scene complete hota h toh ek alag he sukun sa milta h,,,
Isilie sukun pahunchane me jyda deri na Krna ,,,
Love Gratitude and take care dear Werewolf

Bahut hi lajawab update Bhai itz amazing

Awesome update bhai.
Cafe scene pe mazza aa gya

Iss update me serial killings ke baare me kuch dekhne ko nahi mila lekin ye update zaruri tha thoda light-hearted scence k liye.

Ragini aar ya paar kuch karne wali hai aisa lag rha hai. Suman apne maalik ke liye rasta asaan karne me lagi hai pehle shweta ke saath aur ab ragini.

Aur ye nidhi mam ka matter to aur bhi complicate hota jaa rha hai. Dekhna hoga kya hota hai unke saath.

Morocco me kuch alag hi daal pak rhi hai...lagta hai veer ka next trip Morocco ya spain hone wala hai

Werewolf bhai ho sake to next update me ava ko hotel room se bahar nikalo she should meet kaera and sonia.

Overall mast aur long update. Mazze aa gye. Keep writing this beautiful story

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Super update

BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT ADBHUT ROMANCHAK JABARDUST FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Superb update

Nice update Werewolf bro...

Long review, time milne par deta hu

बहुत बढ़िया अपडेट दिया है आपने!!!

Bro bahut shandar lajwab updated maja aaya bro

Super update

Kapde ke niche kya tha ???? Kisi ki photo thi kya???? Thankyou for the update werewolf bhai

Super update

Super update Bhai

Zadatar update tho Ghar k halat mein nikal gaya
Veer Or Tej and company ki woh lambi conversation or misunderstanding

Veer or Nidhi k bich phir se argument
jo ki ab har mulakat mein hone lage hai

Or last mein Morraco k King or ??? k bich conversation jo zada samjh nhi aayi lekin aane wale updates mein shayad yeh clear ho jayega

Wonderful updates (more like 4 updates in a single update).

Bahut din ke baad ya saayad first time ke liye ek comedy wala scene aya story mein.

Writer ka sense of humor bhi ek alag level ka hey.

Way to go bro.!!!

Wonderful update बीच बीच में अंग्रेजी में क्यूं लीखते हो

Can't read English

8th class pass

Nice update y

Bhtreen Alaaa upate

Bhai ju apni story par dhayan do aapki 2 ya 3 story hi complete h baaki sab aadhi adhuri h unko pahle pura karo fir Gyan Dena dusre ki story par.

Nice update

Nice update waiting for next

Bht acha likh rhy ho bhai bs thora jldii update dia kro or romance b lao ab story m ab intzr ni hota

This update was refreshing, hillarious and full of fun. Previously also you have written many sentences full of laughter, but this is first time such a long sequence was written.

<Kavya : Uhm…! P-Par, Bhaiya ke phone ki location aise track karna kya sahi tha, Tejal didi?>

Kavya, the simpleton, honest, not liking to doubt Veer.

<Arohi : Maybe, he wants something which you can't give to him.>

Hahaha... the intelligent one, first one to poison everyone with the word S….E….X…!!! Later, a thought may come in everyone's mind, 'Why not...' The blushing of Tejal, her voilent protest for remembering Parijat incident. Hmmm...'

<Kavya : Ugh-!!! Blame her!!! Not me!!! Usi ne mujhe sikhayi hai.>

I like Kavya, plain and transparent.

<Arohi : If you don't mind…! Please, aap kahi aur baith sakte hai? Please?>

Yes, Arohi's looks are enough to kill a boy, sweet talking is cream on the... hmmm... poison.... Hahaha...

<Arohi : I… I showed my vulnerable side to a random guy… other than Veer. And, I hate it!!!>

Ye kya tha... Is it the sexy and the seductress Arohi...

<Arohi : Veer and Kritika are dating each other!!!>

Itni saaf baat bhi nahi karni chahiye ki bacche ki jaan hi chali jaaye.

<Waiter : Your order, Sir?>

This sequence of giving order was hilarious, it is just good luck of waiter that he was not killed by Tejal. Again, icing on the cake was Watermelon Crush.

Uske baad jo dialog baji huyi Veer aur Kritika ke beech, haatho ka prayog, bahut kuch seekhna hai, Kavya se secret, rumaal munh me ghus jana, pakadna sikhaya, sahi angle bataya, laal gaal, kutti, pura train kar dunga, itna bada sambhaal paogi, first time tha, bade ki aadat lag jaaye toh fir chhoto ko, thoda rough, sahi rythm, sahi position, Get me some beer, Kavya se jalan, movements ekdum sahi, raat me aa paati, sab ke saamne, M-Mujhe bhi chahiye-, Kaha se seekha, zyada satisfaction, bed or cushion, sabhi holes me daalne, so dirty, and lastly... It's… SEX, It's… BILLIARDS.

Aur, fir Arohi ke dimag ki batti jali.

I could have written appreciating this whole sequence in two lines, but I wanted to walk through it, enjoying it, my apologies if it has become long and boring.

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Ragini is another character who evokes pity. She loves Veer and wants to own him. Sensing this Suman has cleverly told everything about Veer so that either Ragini moves away from Veer and stop being over possessive, or start accepting him as he is.

Again Nidhi has antagonized Veer, looks as if they have not progressed a bit in their relationship. Hopefully, by the end of this arc, Nidhi surrenders to Veer's love.

So the Living God has reached Morocco. It seems he is offering some type of missile launcher which can launch nuclear weapon on Spain. I am linking the fact that Rebecca has taken radioactive material from mines is China. Now it seems the duo in Spain and the girl in Australia are System Holders on the side of Living God. We may hear some upheavals from Australia soon.

I am taking 'Living God' as Mr X from now on unless proven otherwise.

B

Bhavuk update. Woh double meaning ka conversation, Woh Ragini ki bechaini aur ab 'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned' ko charitarth karti najar aaegi.

Badhia update.

Ese update parh Kar sare dukh Dard door ho jate Hain Jaha emotional drama ho Kuch khati mithe baten ho Kuch Pyaar ho Kuch takrar ho
Great writer always doing great job keep writing bro

Awesome update

Ye veer ke bhen tejal ka jo character hai kuch zada hi nahi interfere karta hai kya veer ki personal cheezo me thoda irritating lagta hai writers sahab humme

Koi baat nahi sir main wait kar lunga jaise itne dino se kar raha hoon.

Kyu ilhamwisher bhai!...aa gya swaad??

What a fabulous update.
The misunderstanding was designed so meticulously... Dekhne me kitni simple si feel hoti h... But to create a misunderstanding requires a lot of thinking... Specially if it has to be comedic...

They were talking about the billiards... But Tej nd company misunderstood for the sex...

nd the way Arohi was just delivering comments was so cute... The way she said S...E...X...

I can feel how she would have voiced that out... Tejal blushing on the mention of sex... Fully realising the angst she has whenever it comes to parijat ladies.... Tejal's approach backfired and now Veer is disappointed... I mean... There's no need to get angry over her... She's such a sweet soul nd only wants Veer to acknowledge her nd share everything... She's that sister who wants everything to be done in her company... Nd I love such people...

Kavya saying kutti was the new highlight Imagine sucha cute girl with a cute face says kutti with tears in her eyes.....

I can't even...

Nd the nidhi part... It makes me want to sigh everytime I see their interaction... Just freaking hug each other... Godddd... It's so annoying... They love each other yet they are not trying their best.... Nidhi is the most conservative nd reserved character in the story... Juhi is the best girl... She's the cutie...

Nd the last part... I have a question... The person with '??' nd Mr. X are same??? Or they are different???

If they are the same... Then I'm afraid... If they are different... I don't know why but I feel much secure if they aren't the same...

Because of the same person is doing all this... Then that guy is a scary dude... Nd it's giving me some creepy vibes....

Thnx for this wonderful big update... Keep writing sir...

Ohhhh... So that means you won't tell us.... We'll have to find out about this by our own... Nd... Mere guesses most of the times fuddu hote h...

ek dum mast update bhai
ragini ke dil me jo hai wo bahot badi duvida hai woh veer ko sirf apne liye akele hi chahti hai
lekin suman ne use bata diya ki veer sirf uska akele nahi ho sakta aur veer jise pyar karta hai wo suman ya iss ghar ki nahi koi bahar wali hai
ragini ka dil sachai jaankar dukha zarur hai par wo samjhegi aage chalkar aur use janna bhi jaruri tha ye sab
use to parijaat ke bare me bhi nahi pata tha ab jaan gayi hai to dhire dhire samjh me ayega ki veer kisi ek ka nahi hai

idhar veer bhai nidhi se milne gaya par kya kahe bhai ki kismat
nidhi se hamesha pange hi ho jata hai
china jaane se pehle bhi behas kar ke gaya tha aur lautne par bhi ho gaya
nidhi bhi abhi tak manne ko tayar nahi ki use veer se pyar ho gaya hai halki use hamesha uski chita rehti hai
aur na hi use ghar aane se rokti hai par har baar veer ka dil dukh hi jaati hai

tej and party ka to kya hi kahe ye logon ki leader tej jo veer par nazar banaye rakhna chahti hai
aur aaj to acha kahas kand kar diya in logo ne
kritika aur veer ko lekar khair apna veer to veer hai itna sab hone ke baad bhi tej par gussa nahi kiya

morocco me alag hi plans chal rahe hai lagta hai veer ke liye agla mission hone wala hai yaha ka
lekin usse pehle shayad pune wala mission hoga

keep writing

कैफे का सिन मस्त डाला भाई अपने बिचारा करन फालतू मे लड़कियों की बातो मे अपना बड़ा वाला चुतिया कटवा बैठा मज़ा आगया भाई

U've very well expressed the feelings of all readers heart

Nice update

Bahut hi shandar aur rochak story

bhai is form me ye first hai jo 4000 pages complete kar rahi hai congratulations & best of luck werewolf bhai

Wow what a fantastic dramatic update

After this update I can clearly see what kind of drama is ahead with lot of emotions.

So that's why Tej took Veer's mobile, she not only get divya and suhana's number but tracked Veer's mobile also.

Kritika's scene is sudden and unexpected, like Veer ko aaye abhi kuch din hi hue hai aur he is teaching billiards to kritika.

And man kya sahi scene likha hai, matlab outstanding. Tej and Arohi and kavya. Karan's entry was also igniting the fire more.

Pura scene aisa tha jaise unke sath ek chair pe main bhi betha hu, making the scene like a movie. We can see it

Tej anxiety and anger, Arohi's calmness and Kavya's innocence with tension. Coffee order ka scene funny tha, bach gaya waiter varna aaj gand tudwa ke jata Tej se. And kavya aisi situation me bhi use watermelon shake chahiye.

Aarohi said that first time she showed her vulnerable side to someone other than Veer and she didn't like this. That means she is completely comfortable with Veer in her vulnerable moments.
The way she said S..E..X with hesitation it's a hint for future. I'm sure ye baat Tej ke mann me atak ke reh jayegi. And she is too much possessive for Veer, she wants to protect Veer from all cuties . Eventually she will develop feelings for Veer.

Billiards aur Sex ke shabdo ka jo khel ju ne khela, it's outstanding, I praise your imagination prowess.

Ek baar ke liye to main confuse ho gya ki BC ye Veer aur kritika ke bich kya chal raha hai, I knew it aisa kuch nahi hai inke bich but still your wordings was perfect to make it confusing.

You did a damn good research for this scene.

And bhai ye kavya sach me kuch nahi rakhti pait me , digestion kharab hai iska. Rote rote hi apna aur Veer ka kaand batane vali thi sabke samne. Maybe abhi kisine uski baat par dhyan nahi diya.

Karan and kritika ka jo attraction ab tak dikha tha vo bhi ab love confirm ho gaya hai. And love with first misunderstanding

Veer - Kaera, Karan - Kritika, I wonder how Kishor will react. , Eager to waiting see his villainous arc.



Ragini ko bhi sab pata chal gaya, mujhe nahi lagta Suman ne galti se sab bataya, she did it by herself.

Ragini as expected gave the intense reaction not accepting the truth. Kahi Veer ko pura pane ke chakkar me jo hai vo bhi na khode.



Veer and Nidhi what do I say, Inka roz ka ho gaya hai, ladne me ustad hai dono, taunt bhi marte hai, roasting bhi sikh lenge, pyar bhi hai. Perfect match for to be husband wife.

Veer aur Nidhi ki ladai ek dusre se nahi khud se hai, Nidhi ke case me to hundred percent. She loves Veer but not able to accept. Too much thought for societal pressure and what see has seen between Shreya and Veer.

Veer was going to slap Nidhi, I have to prepare myself for drama and stress ahead.


So Mr. X reached Morocco (either he is Mr X or his sidekick like Rebecca)

Maybe under the cloth some kind of destructive weapon ( nuclear ).
Is he planning to create a World war like situation between countries . That will be mind blowing mess .

Misunderstanding between Veer - Kritika and Kavya, Karan, Tej, Arohi.

Misunderstanding between Nidhi and Veer

Misunderstanding in Ragini's mind regarding Veer.

The update totally justified it's name

Awesome update, Shandar jabardast.

Take your time and deliver the best.

This time 10 August leke chalta hu update ki date

Again outstanding writing skills

Ni

Nice mast awesome update bro

Longtime but longest…mesmerising update…

in advance for 4000

Came back after a month on Xforum today

The updates were just AMAZING and BRILLIANT humesha ki tarah

Good story

Waiting for next uodate

Jabardast update superb
Congratulations for 4000 pages

Abi kar deta hai

Congratulations for 4k pages

Wow.......
Congrats for 4000 pages. I wish ye journey kafi dur tak jaye or aap hume aise he entertain karte rahe.

Thank-you for such a lovely story

Congratulations on your 4000 pages nd many more to come

Congratulations for completing 4000 pages WEREWOLF

Yrrr abhi tak inn logon ne 200 ni kiya , kya h ye mitron

Congratulations

Fantastic Upadte .Read this story about 3 times already. waiting for upadte?

4ooo

Hello hemya broo

For completed 4000 pages on your story thread....

४००० पृष्ठों के लिए बहुत-बहुत बधाई Werewolf भाई।।।

5 likes aur badhwao yrrr,, 6-7 din me 200 like bhi ni kr paye log

तीन घटनाक्रम और तीन अनुभूति - इस अपडेट की खासियत थी ।
पहले बात करते हैं एक गलतफ़हमी की । कृतिका मैडम करण की चाहत मे वीर की मदद से बिलियर्ड सीखने लगी और इसी विषय पर एक दिन वो काॅफी शाॅप मे चर्चा करने लगे ही थे कि वीर साहब की बहने - तेजल , आरोही और काव्या वहां उपस्थित हो गई ।
कृतिका और वीर के मध्य हुए इस चर्चा का मतलब उन्होने कुछ और ही लगा लिया । उन्हे लगा कृतिका और वीर के बीच अवैध संबंध है और वह लोग इसी विषय पर चटखारे ले लेकर चर्चा कर रहे हैं ।
स्वभाविक था कि वीर की बहने इस चीज पर भड़क उठेगी पर सोने पर सुहागा यह हुआ कि कृतिका मैडम का आशिक करण साहब भी उस दौरान वहीं धमक पड़े ।

इस पुरे घटनाक्रम को अत्यंत ही खूबसूरती के साथ और उस पर काॅमेडी का तड़का लगाकर पेश किया आपने ।
खासकर तेजल , काव्या और करण साहब के मनःस्थिति को । आरोही इस पुरे घटनाक्रम के दौरान एक बार फिर से इंटेलिजेंट नजर आई ।
हमे बिलियर्ड गेम्स के तौर तरीक़े के बारे मे नही पता इसलिए हम सब रीडर्स भी ठीक से अनुमान नही लगा सके । और जब हमारी दशा ऐसी हुई तो फिर इन लोगों का क्या हाल हुआ होगा !
बेहतरीन डबल मिनिंग्स इरोटिक संवाद का स्किल था यह । शायद इन्सेस्ट रिलेशनशिप की शुरुआत इस घटनाक्रम के नींव पर ही तैयार हुआ होगा !

पुरे प्रसंग को डिटेल के साथ वर्णन करना , किरदारों के अन्तर्मन पर चल रहे द्वंद्व का वर्णन करना , इस प्रसंग को काॅमेडी के साथ जोड़कर लिखना आउटस्टैंडिंग था ।


दूसरा घटनाक्रम रागिनी भाभी और सुमन के बीच का कन्वर्सेशन था जहां रागिनी मैडम को वीर के लिए अत्यंत ही पसेजिव दिखाया गया है ।
रागिनी मैडम तलाकशुदा है और वीर के साथ अनैतिक रिश्ते मे बंध चुकी है तो स्वभाविक है कि वह अपने भावी फ्यूचर के लिए एक सुरक्षित प्लानिंग करे । वीर के साथ वैवाहिक बंधन मे बंधना उनकी इसी प्लानिंग का पार्ट था । लेकिन शायद वह यह समझ नही पाई कि वीर एक निरंतर बहता हुआ जल प्रपात है जिस पर कोई भी शख्स अपना दावा नही कर सकता ।
उनके लिए बेहतर विकल्प यही है कि वह वीर रूपी जल प्रपात के साथ बहते जाए ।

उनकी कोई भी गलत स्टेप्स उनके लिए नुकसानदेह ही साबित होगी । बड़ी मुश्किल से वो अपने हसबैंड से पीछा छुड़ा पाई है और वीर के साथ एक अच्छे रिलेशनशिप मे है । मैडम के लिए रहीम का एक दोहा पेश करता हूं -
" रहिमन धागा प्रेम का , मत तोरो तटखाए ।
टूटे पे फिर ना जुड़े , जुड़े गांठ परी जाए ।। "


तीसरा घटनाक्रम था मोरक्को का जहां राजा साहब अपने मंत्रिमंडल के साथ शहर पर हुए आतंकवादी हमले पर विचार-विमर्श कर रहे थे । इस घटनाक्रम का एक और पक्ष था एक विशेष आगंतुक का उस मिटिंग मे शामिल होना ।
वह विशेष आगंतुक मिस्टर एक्स है या तथाकथित गाॅड साहब , यह एक विमर्श का विषय हो सकता है लेकिन यह तय लग रहा है कि वह आगंतुक अवश्य ही सिस्टम होल्डर्स मे से कोई एक है ।
मिस रेबेका मैडम , तथाकथित गाॅड साहब , चीन के जंगलों से चुराई गई रेडियोएक्टिव पदार्थ , मोरक्को पर टेररिस्ट अटेक , स्पेन का इस अटेक से अपना पल्ला झाड़ना - यह सब एक बहुत बड़े खतरे का सिंटम लग रहा है ।
शायद इस बार वीर की भिड़ंत अब सीधे तथाकथित गाॅड से होने वाली है ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट वोल्फी भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

Congrats for complete 4000 Pages

For completed 4000 pages on your story thread

Congratulations wolfi bro for 4000 pages
Keep write

Jo log stories ko apne dil se connect karke padhte h ye unke lie -
Yaron sab duuaaa karoooo,, dillll see farriyaad krroo,, dilll joo chhalaaa gya h,, useee aabbaaadd krooo,, yaarroon tum merraa,, saath dooo zarrraaaaa

Loved your work pls... Suggest something like this..

Congratulations for 4000 pages bro

Congratulations for completing 4k pages bhai

Congratulations on 4000

Mtlb hamka update parhne Ko abhi 5 Se 7 din lagat Rhe

Waiting

Congratulations bro for completing 4k

Intezar rahega bhai

DUDE JUST A HUMBLE REQUEST TO YOU= PLEASE STORY KO SASTE M KHATAM NA KARNA CHAHE KITNA BHI TIME LELO LEKIN STORY KO EK PROPER ENDING DENA JAISE= VEER OR NIDHI[TEACHER] KI SHADI... MAINE AAPKI PAHLI STORY PADHI LEKIN USKI ENDING STRONG NAHI THII TUMNE JALDI JALDI FINISH KI H VO.
SO REQUEST

Cangratulation for complete 4000 page

Yaar Bhai Aise Bolke Darao Mat ,Mera Bohut Mann Hai Nidhi Mam N Veer Ki Shadi Ko Leke Update Dekhne Ka.
End Ka End Mai Dekhenge Pehle Kuch Mat Bolo Yaar Dar Lagta Hai.
Dil Se Respect 4 Your Writings Skills.

Zabardast update

Writo meter update?

Brother kdkk answer

Werewolf i hope u r well
Kafi time baad commenr ker rh hu sorry for that
Kafi achi story ja rhi hai bhai bs please isko complete kerna kyuku filhal aaki or salty bhai ki he story hai jo chal rhi hai baki sb pta nhi kha chale gae hai writer bhai bhot dukh hota hai jb koi itne achi stories ka beech mai chod deta hai story bht he behtreen ja rhi hai or veer bhot acha ker rha hai keep it up
Bhot zara support and love ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Bhai Yu na bade khatrnaak ho aap Pe Ek Song Bohat Sut krega

Ham Jante Hain Tum Hamen Barbad Krogy
Toro Mera Dil Mujhe noshad Kro Ge Toro ge Mera Dil Mujhe noshad Krogy ham Phr story prhte Rehgy Kya yaad krogy Kya yaad krogy ge

Song Kesa lga Zaror btana

You are an amazing writer brother...

Tera saath to marte dam tak naa chhodenge

Eagerly waiting Bhai......

Update bro

Waiting for update

waiting for next bhai

When will we see Emma and the other super model

Update ki koi khabar?

Waiting

Aaj aayega kya vira...

One thing is clear: This story is being written by a highly professional writer.

Bhai i know it's too hard to write this much and that too with correct choice of words but stand strong buddy just letting you know we all are with you

Very hard work ..soch samjh ke likhna abhi se leke last tak ka

Bro kahi phad whad pr ghum kr aao 2,4 din .phale sawsth uske baad story .

Bhai abhi out of form chal rahe hai. Ye hota hai bhai, sabhi kaamon me, office me bhi kai baar kuchh samajh nahi aata ki kya karun. Take your time, dear, lambe samay tak aisa karne pe hota hai.

It happens. Be strong and take care of yourself. Story to baad me bhi chalti rahegi.

Just 1 thing I want tell u take some rest refresh ur mind for some days divert your mind then

When u feel u can write then come to the forum & tell us now I m ready
Till then we waiting & pray for u

Waiting

Fantastic updates.

Let's go

Nice update

Besabari se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Werewolf bhai....

Still waiting bro for update

Ji jarur bhai

Paki baat ?

Intjar

Intejar ke aakhri pal hi kayamat daate hai.

Intejar

Intejar

Uuf

Malik aaj de doge na

Noice

gn ji ... please update kar dena

Intzar rahega

Bro update dedo

jaapnaah tohfa kabool karo (mera ni ) ... update kardo

Kitni der..
Our

No worries sir
I respect your efforts
Take your time a
No problem sir
We can wait
Take your time
We appreciate your efforts

Update 184 has been posted guys.

 

[Werewolf]

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