Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 186 ~ Decisions and Trails​

Ab tak...

Dhananjay : Hum hiya dui aadmi chhore jaa rahe hai. Ee aapko sab bata denge. Theek? Ab aap report likhiye. Chalte hai hum... Hahahaha! Ram ram ji!!!

Kehte hue jaise hi woh darwaze ke paas tak pahucha peechhe se inspector ke sawaal ne use rok diya.

Inspector : Baap dada ka kya naam hai???

Dhananjay : Bhanu pratap aur Harikiran Singh!!!

Kehte hue woh waha se nikal gaya. Aur, idhar do hatte katte aadmi inspector ke saamne baith gaye.

Ab aage...

Veer's house,
Morning - 8:10 AM ~

Ravivar ka din tha aur subah-subah Veer kitchen me khada hua tha, ghar ke logo ke liye naashta taiyaar karte samay uske haath badi hi sateekta se chal rahe the.

Masaale, taazi kati hui sabziyaan aur pan me pighalte butter ki mehek hawa me bhar rakhi thi. Veer ki 'Absolute Chef' aaj apna kamaal dikhaane ke liye taiyaar thi. Sab ke sab 10 seater dining table par virajman the aur jaante the ki Veer khaana banaane me kitna maahir tha.

Tej : Oh god! Kitni achhi khushbu aa rahi hai. Veeru?? Kya bann raha hai?

Tej ne bade hi pyaar se awaaz lagaate hue poochha. Kitchen ek open kitchen tha toh use dikhayi toh sab de raha tha magar, fir bhi woh apne bhai se baat karne ke mauke ko yuhi nahi gawana chaahti thi.

Bhavna : Veeru???

Bhavna ne apni bauhe upar chadhaate hue dekha. Kal raat ke baad se dono hi Tej aur Veer kuchh zyada hi qareeb nazar aa rahe the. Woh ye dekh taajub me thi ki ek raat me hi uske baccho ke beech bhala itna lagaav kaise aa gaya? Dil khush toh tha magar jigyasu bhi.

Tej : Mein use ab pyaar se Veeru keh ke bulaungi. Kyu? Achha nahi hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Maine toh koi virodh nahi jataaya.

Tej (smiles back) : Toh, khushi bhi toh nahi jataayi? Veeru-!! Batao na, kya bana rahe ho?

Veer (kitchen se) : Patience rakhiye, Teju di! Patience! Jald hi naashta aapki table par hoga. Tab dekh lena!?

Tej : Urgh!!! You are such a mood killer. I know tum pasta bana rahe ho, mein khushbu se hi bata sakti hu.

Uski baat par Veer bas muskuraya. Toh wahi Ragini head chair par baithi hui thi aur uski teevra aankhein Veer par hi tiki thi. Woh coffee ke mug par apni ungli ferte hue kinhi khayalo me ghum thi. Pichhli raat ke drishya uske mann me umad aaye. Woh khud se niraash thi. Akhir, woh har baar ki tarah firse Veer ke sparsh se haar jo gayi thi.

Tej uske bagal se aage ki orr jhuki aur apne bhai ko khaana banaate dekh muskurayi. Kuchh toh aisa tha Veer me jo use uski orr aakarshit karta tha. Dono ka rishta hamesha se hi ek naazuk rekha par chalta aaya tha, lekin kal raat ke baad se hi sab kuchh ab badal chuka tha. Tej ne apni maa ki orr ek nazar daali aur pal bhar ke liye sochi ki kahi unki maa ne unn dono ke beech badh rahi shareerik nazdeeki ko pakad toh nahi liya?

'Mere aur Veeru ke beech ye nazdeekiya. Kahi Mom ko shaq toh nahi hua na? Nahi! Chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye, humaare beech kya hai, ye kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalna chahiye. Mom ko toh hargiz nahi. Tabhi, mein aur Veeru humesha-humesha ke liye...! Yes! I'll never let you go! Never!!!'

Woh jaanti thi ki kal raat jis tarah se usne Veer ko chooma tha, woh kahi se bhi ek bhai-behan waala chumban nahi tha. Use iss baat ka ab bodh ho chuka tha ki woh dono ek sadharan bhai-behan ke rishte se kahi zyada aage badh chuke the. Aur, bhalaayi filhal isi me thi ki iss baat ka pata kisi ko na lagne paaye.

Saath hi Shweta bhi baithi hui thi, jiska dhyaan Veer par kam aur Bhavna par adhik tha. Har baar ki tarah vichaar yahi ki akhir Veer use Bhavna ki tarah kyu nahi dekhta? Bhale hi woh uski sagi maa nahi thi lekin, Veer par prem aur mamta lutaane ki uski bhavna ko koi bhi nazar-andaaz nahi kar sakta tha.

Toh wahi yaha Suman ahista-ahista sabhi ke liye plates laga rahi thi. Aur, uski beti Sonali naashta ke liye table par apni ungliyaan zoro se chalaate hue intezar kar rahi thi. Veer ke haath ka swaad usne chakh rakha tha. Aur, uss se behtar ye koi nahi jaanta tha ki Veer khaana banaane me kitna aage tha. Kintu, jo duwidha me thi woh thi ~ Bhumika!

'Y-Ye... Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe? Jab se Veer China se laut ke aaya hai tab se hi-!'

Uski nazar Veer ki peeth par gayi. Fir, uski mazboot baaho par jaha uski shirt ki sleeves mud ke bandhi hui thi. Fir, uske chehre par jaha woh uske hontho par halki si muskaan dekh paa rahi thi. Aur, ye dekh uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho gayi.

'Ye kyu ho raha hai mere saath-!!?'

Usne apne haath me liye bread toast ki taraf dhyaan lagaya jaise maano uss se hi jawab maang rahi ho. Khud par gussa bhi aa raha tha aur chidhan bhi ho rahi thi.

Magar, uska dhyaan hall ka darwaza khulne se bhang ho gaya. Ek ladki phudakti hui andar aayi aur iske pehle ki use dekh koi kuchh bol paata usne sabhi ko apne hontho par ungli rakh shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.

Woh dabe paav Veer ko dhundhte hue apni nazre daudate hue andar gayi. Usne dekha ki Veer apni peeth kiye kitchen me naashta banaane me laga hua tha. Woh shaitaani muskaan liye Veer ke peechhe-peechhe aayi aur usne apne haatho se achanak hi Veer ki aankhein dhak li.

'Hmm!?'

Peechhe se Tej ne bhi jaise uss ladki ka saath diya aur boli.

Tej : Veeru! Koi aaya hai. Batao toh zara kaun hai?

Veer ko system ka istemal kar haath ko check karne ki zaroorat nahi thi. Woh jaanta tha ye ladki kaun thi.

Veer (smiles) : Aisa karne se kuchh nahi hone waala, meri chhoti behan. Mein jaanta hu ye tum ho ~ Kavya!

Kavya (pouts) : Ahh~ mou~ Aapko kaise pata chala?

Veer (turns around) : Mujhe tumhara touch pata hai, my dear sister.

Kavya (blushes) : Hmph! Jhooth bol rahe ho aap.

Veer : Accha? Mein jhooth bol raha hu?

Kavya : Haan!!!

Veer : Well, toh agar mein ye kahu ki tumne wahi Garofano ka perfume lagaya hai jo maine tumhe gift me diya tha toh? Kya ab tum maanogi?

Kavya : Ahhh-!!! Bhaiya, aap bahut gande ho. Aapko pata tha?

Veer (smiles) : You'll have to try next time.

Kavya (pouts) : Mou~

Aur, baari-baari hall me fir Arohi, Sumitra aur yaha tak ki Manorath bhi andar aa gaye.

Ragini (stands up) : Arey aap sab-!?

Bhavna : A-Aap?

Bhavna kuchh pal tak toh apni jagah par hi khadi rahi. Fir, woh Manorath ki taraf aage badhi aur apne sarr par pallu daal jhuk ke aashirvaad lene ke liye hui toh Manorath ne muskurate hue use aashirvaad diya. Ye pal jaise unke liye sabse bada pal tha.

Bhale hi Bhavna Brijesh se dur ho chuki thi. Lekin, Manorath ko aaj bhi woh utna hi sammaan deti thi jitna ki pehle. Haan, kahi na kahi woh Manorath se nirash zaroor thi kyunki jab use ghar se nikaala jaa raha tha tab Manorath apne bal-boote par kuchh nahi kar paaye the. Lekin, unka dosh behad kam tha. Pati aur patni ki beech ki ladaayi me unki bhoomika bahut hi kam thi.

Manorath (narm aankhon se) : Bitiya tum aaj bhi waisi hi ho. Kaash, Brijesh ye samajh paata.

Bhavna ne jab unke perr chhue toh Manorath ka dil jaise gadgad ho gaya.

Bhavna : ...

Manorath : Khair! Jo hota hai achhe ke liye hi hota hai. Mein dekh paa raha hu ki tum yaha khush ho.

Bhavna (smiles) : Apne baccho ka saath ho toh ek maa ko aur kuchh nahi chahiye.

Manorath : Hmm! Oh? Toh ye hai Tejal bitiya.

Tej uthati hui qareeb aayi aur jhukte hue usne bhi apni maa ki dekha dekhi kar unke paav chhue.

Tej : Ji! Namaste!

Manorath : Namaste! Namaste! Jeeti raho, beta! Ye bilkul tum pe gayi hai, Bhavna bitiya haha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Aaj aap yaha?

Manorath : Hoo~ Meri poti Kavya mujhe kheench ke le aayi. Aaj ravivar hai toh boli hum sab ko saath me samay bitana chahiye.

Kavya : Huh? Dada ji! Aap jhooth mat boliye. Kal aapne hi mujhse kaha tha ki aapko Veer bhaiya aur baaki sab se milne ka bahut mann kar raha hai.

Manorath : Ahem! Hahahaha!

Bhavna (smiles) : Aaiye, baithiye na.

Manorath : Hmm! Shweta bhi yahi hai.

Shweta : J-Ji!

Shweta uthi aur ahista se unke perr chhoote hue wapas se dur khadi ho gayi. Bhumika ne bhi yahi kiya.

Manorath : Jidhar bhi raho, khush rehna bahut aavashyak hai. Aur, agar tum sab yahi par khush ho toh wahi sahi. Mein tum me se kisi ko baandh ke waha ghar pe nahi rakhna chaahta. Hmph! Jab unn nalaayako ko tum sabki qadr nahi toh mein kaun hota hu tumhe rokne waala?

Shweta aur Bhavna dono hi muskurayi.

Manorath : Ragini bitiya! Theek ho?

Ragini : J-Ji dada ji! Pranaam!

Manorath : Jeeti raho aur khush raho! Vivek bhi apne pita jaisa hi nikla. Mera pota Veer hi hai jiske andar humaare kul ke sahi gunn shaamil hai.

Uski baat par Ragini khamosh rahi aur Manorath ka haath pakad unhe sofe par baithaayi. Bhavna ki nazre jab Sumitra par padi, toh woh uske paas aate hue uske haatho ko thaam li.

Bhavna : K-Kaisi ho?

Sumitra (smiles) : Theek hu, didi! Aap kaisi hai?

Bhavna (smiles back) : Bahut acchi hu! Tum... Tum yahi kyu nahi aa jaati? Kavya aur Arohi ke saath.

Sumitra : Didi, papa ji ki dekh-bhaal kaun karega? Aur, fir Vivek bhi toh hai. Uska dhyaan kaun rakhega? Fir... Jeth ji bhi hai. Sabka khaana peena, ghar dekhna. Ye toh mera kartavya hai.

Bhavna : Tum mahaan ho, Sumitra.

Sumitra : Nahi didi! Mahaan toh aap hai. Jo itna sab kuchh ho jaane ke baad bhi-

Bhavna : Nahi, Sumitra. Kya mein nahi jaanti tumhari vyatha ko? Tumhare chehre par muskaan hai. Lekin, mein jaanti hu ki andar kya chhipa hua hai.

Sumitra bas muskurayi lekin, woh theek nahi thi. Bhavna ki ye baat satya thi. Karunesh aur Pranjal ko laat maar ke Manorath ne ghar se baahar nikaala tha. Apne bete aur pati ke ghar se jaane ke baad bhala woh theek kaise reh sakti thi?

Bhavna andar hi andar dukhad bhaav liye shaant rahi. Kuchh na boli. Aur, itne me hi Veer apne haatho me plates liye kitchen se baahar nikal aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Dada ji! Sahi samay par aaye hai aap. Aaiye! Naashta kariye!

Usne Arohi ko dekha jo uski laayi hui gift ke roop me black sweater pehni hui thi.

Veer : Ahh-! Aap pe... bahut achhi lag rahi hai.

Arohi (blushes) : Thank you!

Plates rakh usne bhi fir Manorath aur Sumitra dono ke perr chhue aur fir sabhi baari-baari dining table par virajman ho gaye. Veer ke haatho ka naashta sabne khaaya aur jam kar uski tareef bhi ki. Sumitra toh kuchh zyada hi hairaan thi.

Tej : Y-Ye tumne? Ye tumne kab seekha Bhai?

Kavya : Haan bhaiya! Aap itne acche kab se ho gaye cooking me? Ghar par toh aapne kabhi hume kuchh bana ke nahi khilaya tha pehle.

Veer : Zindagi sikha deti hai, meri behan!

Uski iss baat par Ragini samet Bhumika, Arohi, Shweta, Sumitra aur swayam Kavya ke sarr neeche jhuk gaye. Woh sabhi bhali bhaanti parichit thi ki Veer ka ateet kaisa tha.

Lekin, Tej ki bauhe prashno ko lekar sikud gayi. Bhavna ki aankhein apne bete ke upar narm pad gayi. Jee kar raha tha ki abhi use apne seene se laga le. Toh wahi Tej confused thi. Use ye pata tha ki Veer ke sang pehle sahi dhang se bartaav nahi kiya jaata tha uske ghar par. Parantu, use sankshipt me kuchh bhi gyaat nahi tha. Woh ye toh jaanti thi ki Shweta aur Bhumika, Ragini aur Pranjal kaise Veer ke khilaaf the. Magar, ye nahi jaanti thi ki khud Arohi aur Kavya bhi kabhi use nazar-andaaz kiya karti thi.

Veer ne use kabhi itne vistaar se nahi bataya tha aur na hi Kavya ya Arohi ne uss baare me Tej se kabhi charcha ki thi. Tej ke inhi bhaawo ko jaise Arohi ne dekh padh liya. Agle hi shan andar se use glaani ka bojh apne upar mehsoos hua aur woh sarr jhukaaye khud se nafrat kar muh me kaur chabaate-chabaate ruk gayi.

'Mujhe unhe sab bata dena chahiye. Even if she comes to hate me. I must...!'

Bhavna : Tej!!!

Tej : Huh?

Bhavna ne fir kehna shuru kiya, uski nazre apni beti par sthir thi.

Bhavna : Tum aakhir mujhe ye kab bataogi ki tumne apni job chhor di hai?

Uske itna kehte hi Veer ko chhor sabhi aashcharya me use dekhne lage. Tej iss achanak hamle ke liye taiyaar nahi thi. Woh apni jagah par thitak ke reh gayi. Uska haath uske cup par tik gaya. Akhir, uski maa ko pata kaise chala? Usne fir apne bagal se baithe Veer ko dekha jo ishaaro hi ishaaro me uss se maafi maang raha tha.

Bhavna : Agar, tum ye soch rahi ho ki mujhe kaise pata chala? Toh, Veer ne mujhe sab bata diya hai.

Tej ek gehri saans lete hue apni kursi par seedhi hui aur apni maa ko dekh fir boli.

Tej : Mein… Mein aapko bataane hi waali thi. Wo bas… Mere liye ab meri priorities badal chuki hai. Mein life me jo chaahti thi woh ab badal chuka hai, mom.

Bhavna ne apni bauhe upar uthayi lekin chup rahi aur keval sunti rahi.

Tej (breathes) : Mein yaha apne parivar ke saath rehna chaahti hu. Mein Veer ki uske business me har possible way me help karna chaahti hu. Yahi decision mujhe sahi laga.

Bhavna : Aur, kis se poochh ke tumne ye decision liya?

Tej : Mein-

Uske bol wahi atak gaye jab Bhavna ne Veer ko dekha aur prashn kiya.

Bhavna : Kya ye tumne kiya?

Uske bol Veer par aarop nahi laga rahe the. Lekin, awaaz me wazan zaroor tha. Veer ne fauran hi apna sarr naa me hilaya.

Veer : Nahi maa! Mein kabhi bhi Teju di se unke career ke liye kisi bhi golden opportunity ko nahi chheenunga. Ye baat sach hai ki maine hi unse apne business ke liye help maangi thi. Aur, mein chaahta hu ki woh meri help kare. Lekin, woh apni job quit kar dengi iska mujhe andaaza nahi tha.

Tej ki chinta badhi aur woh turant hi apne haath se Veer ko chhekte hue boli.

Tej : Nahi, mom! Veer ne mujhe force nahi kiya. Ye mein hi chaahti thi. Mein jaisi pehle thi ab waisi nahi hu. Jaisa ki maine kaha, meri priorities badal chuki hai. Ab ye sirf mere career ke baare me nahi hai… Yaha rehne ke baare me hai… *glances* Mere bhai ke liye… Hum sab ke liye.

Bhavna : Tej! Maine tumhe apni tarah ek archaeologist banaya kyunki yahi tumhara junoon tha. Mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi meri tarah ek din ek renowned archaeologist banana chaahti thi. Bachpan me toh yahi tumhari khwahish thi.

Tej : Ye sach tha, mom! Lekin ab… ab cheezein alag hai. Aapne jo mujhe sikhaya mein uska tyaag nahi kar rahi. Baat bas itni hai ki… Veer ko ab meri zaroorat hai. Aur… Mujhe bhi… Mujhe bhi uski zaroorat hai. Mujhe uske saath rehne ki zaroorat hai. Hum… Hum ek parivar hai!

Veer ne dekha ki Tej ka haath dining table par rakha kaanp raha tha. Usne apna haath aage badhaate hue Tej ke haath ke upar rakh use thaam liya. Aur, Tej ki nigaahein apne bhai ke chehre par tik gayi.

Bhavna ne bhi unke beech ki iss harqat ko gaur se dekha — Jis tarah se Veer ne apne haath ko Tej ke haath ke upar dhak rakha tha, jis tarah se Tej uske sparsh se raahat mehsoos kar rahi thi, Bhavna ke chehre ke bhaav ye dekh badal gaye.

Veer : Teju di!!

Tej : Mm~ Mein tumhare saath rehna chaahti hu, Veeru! Mein tumhe successful hote dekhna chaahti hu. Aur, iske liye mujhse jo bann padega mein woh karungi. Ye koi mera sacrifice nahi hai, bhai. Yeh wahi hai jo mein khud chaahti hu.

Veer ke dil ne jaise ye sunte hi ek dhadkan phaand li.

Veer : Teju di aap-!!!

[Oh??? Your heart rate has increased.]

Manorath (nods) : Bahut khoob bitiya!

Bhavna ne unhe qareeb se dekha. Uska seena garv se chauda ho rakha tha. Halanki, usne ye khushi turant hi zaahir nahi ki, usne pehle ki tarah gambheerta banaaye rakhi.

Bhavna (sighs) : Agar, tumne yahi nirnay le liya hai *smiles* Toh, mein iska sammaan karti hu.

Tej : Huhhh!!?

Veer : Matlab aap-!!?

Bhavna (smiles) : Government ke dwara di gayi woh archaeological kit courier kar dena aaj hi. Choonki, ab tum ek archaeologist nahi rahi toh ye tumhari zimmedari hai ki tum woh kit aur uske saath mile saare tools wapas karo.

Tej : Ahhh~ Thank you! Thank you, Mom!!!

Bhavna : Lekin-

Tej : Lekin??

Bhavna : Parivar zaroori hai, iss baat se mein sehmat hu. Lekin, iss bhaag daud me ye mat bhool jaana ki ek insaan ka khud ka dhyaan rakhna bhi utna hi zaroori hai.

Kehte hue woh apni chai peene lagi. Uska ishaara saaf tha jo Tej samajh chuki thi. Uski maa use apne upar bhi dhyaan dene ko keh rahi thi. Woh muskurayi aur utsukta ke saath haami bhar dhanyavad di.

Arohi : Darasal, mujhe bhi kuchh kehna tha. Veer se…

Veer : Huh???

Arohi : Veer ne mujhse bhi business ko lekar help maangi thi. Aur, mein raazi bhi hu. Lekin-

Tej : Arohi! Tum bhi-??

Veer : Lekin???

Arohi : Veer! Shayad mein abhi taiyaar nahi! I mean… Maine bas abhi graduation hi kiya hai. Maan lo mein humare business ki ek important profile hold karti hu aur kal ko koi normal sa employee mere academics par ungli utha ke question karne lage ki mein kinn reasons ke chalte iss post par hu? Toh? Mein kya jawab dungi? Kya ye kahungi ki business mere bhai ka hai aur isliye mein jo chaahe uss post par reh sakti hu?

Veer : That’s-

Arohi : Nahi na? Mein ise justify kaise karungi? Tabhi kar paungi na jab mere paas woh qualifications honge? Aur isliye…

Veer : ???

Arohi : Isliye maine MBA karne ka faisla liya hai, Veer! I'll study hard. Aur, sorry maine tumse ye chhipaaya. Maine already CAT exam de diya hai. Result jald hi aa jayega. I’m aiming for IIM Ahmedabad or IIM Bengaluru.

Veer (surprised) : O-Ohh!

Arohi : I-I’m sorry-!!!

Veer : Kis field ke baare me socha hai aapne? Marketing? Finance? Ya-

Arohi : IT!!

Veer : Oh! Good!

Aisa nahi tha ki Arohi Tej ki tarah uske paas nahi rehna chaahti thi. Woh simply apni worth badhaana chaahti thi. Taaki, woh Veer ke liye jitna adhik ho sake utna adhik kaam aa sake. Veer ne sarr ahista se hilaaya.

Veer (smiles) : Aap jo bhi decision lengi, mujhe uss se koi aapatti nahi hai, di!

Arohi (smiles) : Thank you! It makes my heart at ease.

Badle me Veer bhi muskuraya. Lekin, ye muskaan kahi na kahi aatmvishvas se bhari thi.

'Balki, mein yahi chaahta tha...!'

[Oh???]

'Di ko MBA karne me 2 saal lagenge. Tab tak mein Yarnia ko establish kar chuka hounga. Aur, mera aim IT industry pe bhi hai. Maidaan me utarte hi competition har chhoti badi companies se hoga. Lekin, jo biggest competition hoga woh hoga-'

[Globerays se.]

'Exactly! Miss Suhana ke husband ki company.'

[He's just a CEO. Not the owner, master.]

'CEO apne aap me ek zimmedari waali post hai, Pari. Globerays India ki top IT company hai. Aur, isme koi shaq nahi ki uski success ke peechhe uske staff ka haath hai.'

[Oh? Are you playing dirty this time? Niharika ki madad se aap waha ke employees ko exploit kar ke apni future IT company me shaamil karna chaahte ho?]

'Nahi! Kyunki, ye mere liye faaydemand nahi.'

[Woh kaise?]

'Jo insaan kuchh paiso ke liye ek achhi bhali company ko chhor dusri company me shaamil ho sakta hai. Kya guarantee hai iski ki kal ko wahi insaan kisi teesri company ke liye meri company na chhore?'

[That's true. Lekin, ye toh hona hi hai.]

'Mere kehne ka matlab ye hai ki aise employees vulnerable bahut hote hai. Aur, volatile bhi. Ye kabhi bhi kisi bhi waqt apni choice badal sakte hai. And, that's why I don't need such employees.'

[Toh fir?]

'Mujhe unn employees ki zaroorat hai jo qaabil bhi hai aur waha ke work environment se fed-up ho chuke hai. Jo ek stable naya aur achha environment chaahte hai. Yahi pe Niharika ka mein istemal karunga. Use maine kaam par laga hi diya hai. Mein unhe woh environment bana ke dunga. Aur, dusra... I have a plan for the recruitment and how to select the candidates.'

[Mujhe intezar rahega ye dekhne ka, Master. For now, I can only give you my best wishes.]

'Pari! Show me the profit path.'

*Ding*




'Yes!!! Arohi di aur Ragini dono ka naam hai upar. They both will be my future assets.'

Veer apne vichaaro me leen tha jab Kavya ki chehekti hui awaaz ne sab ka dhyaan kheench liya.

Kavya : Arey bas bas! Ye aap sab ne kya senti sa mahaul bana rakha hai? Aaj hum sab party karenge. Yayyy~

Aur, jald hi sabhi hall me do-chaar group me batt gaye. Veer ki sabhi behne ek saath baithi aapas me baat kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Manorath Shweta aur Ragini ke sang baato me lage hue the jaha woh apni patni Brinda ke dwara diye gaye kuchh gehne dono Ragini aur Shweta ko de rahe the. Bhavna ke liye bhi woh kuchh laaye the.

Bhavna, Suman aur Sumitra apne ateet ki baato ko yaad kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Veer apne laptop par 'Stock Master' ki madad se stocks me investment kar raha tha, jiska gyaan woh apne bagal se baithi Sonali ko bhi deta jaa raha tha.

Aur, isi dauran Bhumika thi jo Veer par sarsari nigaahein daalne par majboor hoti jaa rahi thi. Jitna woh use dekhti utna hi uska dil tezi se dhadakne lagta.

Woh dekh rahi thi ki kaise Veer Sonali ko sab kuchh apne laptop par sikha raha tha. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise Kavya se baatein karte waqt woh sofe par peechhe hote hue hass raha tha.

'His smile... is so... charismatic...!'

Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise woh Manorath ke saath baith ke alag-alag vishayo par baat kar raha tha. Haami bharte waqt kaise uske baalo ki latt humesha uski baayi aankh ke upar aake gir rahi thi. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki apni aur uski dono hi maa ki taraf woh kitna prem rakhta tha.

Kaise woh Arohi ke kaan ki baali ko haath me leke uss se kuchh keh raha tha. Use kuchh sunayi nahi de raha tha. Woh toh bas Veer ke chehre me khoyi hui thi. Kaise woh Tej ka haath thaame ye dekh raha tha ki use kaha kaha par til tha. Aur, fir kaise apne shareer ke til ke baare me bata raha tha.

*Badump*

'Huh??? Y-Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe?'

Lekin, dil majboor tha. Use yaad aaya, kaise ek subah Veer ke haath se chai lete waat uske haath ki ungliyaan jab Veer ke haath se sparsh ho gayi thi aur woh kaise sharma ke bhaag gayi thi.

Jab jab woh subah jaane ke liye hoti toh uski nazre Veer ko dhundhti. Use dhyaan aaya ki kaise dinner ke waqt aaj kal woh kuchh zyada hi derr tak Veer par apni nazre gada rahi thi.

'No no no no!!!! What's wrong with me???'

Kintu, woh jitna use dekhti utna hi uska dil zoro se dhadakta. Idhar, Pari ne bhi akhir khulasa karne ke baare me nirnay le hi liya.

[Master!]

'Hmm?'

[China se lautne ke baad ek baat maine aapse abhi tak share nahi ki hai.]

'Hmm? Kaun si?'

[Updated list of favorabilities.]

'Hmm? Toh usme kya?'

[Check for yourself.]

*Ding*




Agle hi pal Veer ke samaksh saari updated favorabilities ki list saamne aa gayi aur use jhatke par jhatke lagte chale gaye.

'Huh? What the hell? Nidhi ma'am ke saamne question mark kyu hai? Yaha tak ki Ragini, Teju di aur Miss Suhana ke saamne bhi. Aur... Aur, ek second... Ragini ki favourability 150? Miss Suhana 148?? Teju di bhi 148?? What the fuck!!!? Sonali ko slave ka status kab se mil gaya? Wait a minute. Miss Sonia ki favorability drop hui hai mere khayaal se.'

[Calm down Master. Question mark isliye show ho raha hai kyunki haal hi me inke saath aapka relationship uncertainty me jaa chuka hai.]

'K-Kya matlab?'

[Matlab ye ki system abhi certain nahi hai ki inhe kaun sa title diya jaaye. Kyunki, abhi defined emotions established nahi hue hai. Agar, for example : Inme se koi bhi aapki future wife ya girlfriend banti hai toh system ise recognise kar lega aur ek title unhe allot kar dega. Lekin, abhi ke liye system inn relationships ko leke uncertain hai.]

'Samjha!'

[Yes! Rahi baat Sonali ko slave ka status kyu allot hua? Toh, system ne use ek slave ke roop me hi accept kiya hai. Aap bhale hi use dost maano lekin, jis tarah se relationship jaa raha hai woh system ke liye slave ki category me hi aata hai.]

'Ah!!'

[Aur, Miss Sonia ki favorability indeed drop hui hai. Ye lack of communication ka nateeja hai.]

'Unke baare me mujhe kuchh nahi sochna. Lekin, Bhumika di? Huh? Unki favorability 120 achanak se?'

Usne turant hi sarr utha ke Bhumika ko dekha jo uski taraf hi dekh rahi thi. Maano jaise uss bechaari ki chori pakdi gayi. Nazre milte hi woh iss qadar sharmayi ki fauran hi usne apni nigaahein fer li.

'Strange-!!!'

Tej : Hey!! Aapko pata tha ki Veer 31st December ko Yarnia ki launch karne jaa raha hai???

Bhumika : Ahhh?? K-Kya???

Tej : Arey maine kaha ki aapko pata tha ki Veer 31st December ko Yarnia ki launch karne jaa raha hai?

Bhumika : Ohh! H-Haan! W-Woh usne bataya tha.

Tej (smiles) : I'm excited.

Veer ke mukhde se pareshaan hoke antatah Bhumika apni jagah se uthi aur hotel ke kaam se baahar jaane ka bahaana banaate hue woh ghar se nikal gayi.

Lekin, isi ki aadh me Ragini ko uska bahaana mil chuka tha. Woh bhi taiyaar hoke ghar se nikal rahi thi, jab Veer ne use tok diya.

Veer : Aap kaha jaa rahi hai?

Ragini : Woh... Mujhe apne ghar jaana tha. Mummy papa se milne. Thoda kaam hai.

Veer : Iss waqt?

Ragini (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Sab aaye hue hai ghar pe abhi.

Ragini : Mil toh liya sab se. Udhar jaana bhi zaroori hai.

Iske aage Veer ne kuchh na kaha. Jaise hi woh hall se nikalne ke liye hui toh-

'Pari!!!'

[Yes?]

'Mark the tracer on her saree.'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Do you want to remove the tracer from your food truck?]

'Huh? Wait-!!!'

Use yaad aaya ki usne akhiri baar tracer apne food truck pe lagaya tha jab woh Sonali ko Kaushik naam ke jaanvar se bachaane ke liye use dhundh raha tha.

'What the-!? Iska matlab tracer ek baar me ek hi cheez par apply ho sakta hai?'

[Toh aapko kya laga? Agar, multiple cheezon pe apply ho sakta toh ye skill legendary skill na bann jaati? Iske zariye aap har uss vyakti ko trace kar paate jinpe ye laga hota.]

'Hmm! Tracer ko food truck se remove kar do Pari aur Ragini ki saree par laga do.'

Pari ne aadesh anusaar wahi kiya. Veer dekhna chaahta tha ki kya Ragini waqai ghar jaa rahi thi ya kahi orr. Lekin, use uska jawab jald hi mil gaya jab usne dekha ki Ragini waqai apne ghar hi gayi hui thi.

Ek raahat ki saans lete hue usne tracer ka map band kar diya. Magar, woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ragini apne ghar jaan boojh ke chakma dene ke liye hi gayi thi. Uski asli destination toh kuchh aur thi, jaha woh shaam me dastak dene waali thi.

***

Carewell hospital, Mumbai,
Afternoon - 2:30 PM ~

DSP Trisha aur head constable Jeetu kaaka, hospital ke corridor me tez qadmo ke saath chalte hue ek room ki orr badh rahe the. Woh dono operation theatres se hoke guzre jaha par operations aur post mortems kiye jaa rahe the. Chalte-chalte hi Trisha ne sawaal uthaaya.

Trisha : Report jab taiyaar ho gayi thi toh fir unhe seedhe police station me kyu nahi bhijwaya gaya?

Jeetu kaaka : Ab, bola toh tha madam ji… heyhey… Par, lagta hai hospital waalo ke paas aadmi nahi raha hoga uss waqt.

Trisha ne ek nazar Jeetu kaaka par maari aur fir sarr hilaate hue saamne ke kamre me chali gayi jaha ek doctor, ek surgeon aur kuchh nurses pehle se maujood thi.

Doctor (glances) : Ahh! Trisha madam! Aaiye!

Trisha : Report!

Doctor : Ji! Mein aapka hi intezar kar raha tha. Baithiye!

Kehte hue usne kuchh files me se ek file nikaali aur Trisha ko thama di. Trisha ne file me se report nikaal jaise hi use dekha toh paaya ki usme sab kuchh maujood tha.

Shav kiska tha, use kaun laaya, use identify kisne kiya, kitne samay paaya gaya, kis dinaank ko mila, uss par kaun-kaun se diagnostic tests kiye gaye, external examination me kya kuchh paaya gaya, kapdo me se kya kuchh baramad hua, galey ki jaanch karne par kya pata chala jaisi tamaam cheezein uss report me mentioned thi.

Lekin, writing aisi ki medical waala banda hi use padh sake. Trisha ke maathe par surgeon ne jab rekhaaye dekhi toh woh khud hi saral bhaasha me samjhaane ke liye aage aa gaya.

Surgeon : Madam, ye ek murder hi tha. Aur, kisi bhi hathyaar se ye murder nahi kiya gaya hai.

Trisha : Huh?

Surgeon : Cause of death - Extreme pain, breakage of tissues and internal organs, aur bloodloss hai.

Trisha : ???

Surgeon : Humne humaari orr se poori achhe tareeke se jaanch ki hai madam. Dekhiye! Victim ke left lumbar region par attack kiya gaya tha. Humare umbilical region ka left portion. Aur, hum ye daave ke saath keh sakte hai ki ye assault kisi bhi tarah ke metallic weapon se nahi kiya gaya hai.

Trisha (stupefied) : Whatttt? A-Aap kehna kya chaah rahe hai?

Doctor : Kehna ye chaah rahe hai madam ki jis se bhi attack kiya gaya woh kisi bhi haal me kisi metal se bana weapon nahi tha. Yaani ki sharp objects jaise chaaku, talvaar, chhuri, rod, wagarah-wagarah. Aise kisi bhi metallic objects ke kann hume khoon, tissues, outer skin ya kapdo par kahi par bhi nahi mile hai. Aur toh aur hum cuts ko dekh ke hi anumaan laga lete hai ki kis tarah ke weapon ka istemal kiya gaya hoga. Lekin, yaha hume kuchh bhi samajh nahi aaya.

Surgeon : Ji haan! Aur, pareshani ki baat ye hai ki body me se aisa koi bhi clue nahi mila hai jis se ye pata lag sake ki ye attack hua kis cheez se.

Trisha : Y-Ye impossible hai. Bina kisi sharp object ke itna bada ghaav karna impossible hai. Aur, aapne hi toh bataya tha na phone par ki bullet ya kisi janglee jaanvar ka kaam bhi nahi hai ye? Fir kaise? Ye toh mumkin hi nahi hai!!

Doctor haami bhar aage badh apne haath mod table par baitha.

Doctor : Bilkul! Hum bhi yahi maante hai. Lekin, yahi par humaara kaam khatam hota madam. Aur… aapka shuru-!

Trisha : A-Aap ek baar aur jaanch kariye. Dekhiye, ye possible hi nahi hai. Ho sakta hai kahi kuchh-

Doctor (frowns) : Madam ji!!!

Trisha : ???

Doctor : Jankaari ke liye bata du ki aap sheher ke sabse bade aur prakhyaat private hospital me baithi hai. Jitni jaldi aur bareeki se har cheez ki pushti yaha hoti hai woh sheher ke kisi bhi aspataal me nahi hoti. Ye baat toh aap khud bhi jaanti hi hongi. Humne apna kaam kar diya hai. Agar, aapko fir bhi lagta hai ki humse koi bhool-choonk hui hai toh aap kahi aur se autopsy karwaane ke liye swatantra hai. Neeche hi mortuary me freezer me body padi hai. Agar, aap kehti hai toh mein ambulance ke zariye aapke preferred hospital me bhijwaaye deta hu.

Kehte hue doctor ne table par se landline phone uthaaya aur Trisha ko ghoor uske jawab ka intezar karne laga.

Trisha (frowns) : N-Nahi! Rehne dijiye! Woh ek body hai…! Koi khilauna nahi. M-Mujhe aap pe bharosa hai. Maafi chaahti hu!

Doctor (smiles) : Dhanyavad! Ab aapse ek akhiri nivedan yahi hai ki jitna jaldi ho sake formalities poori kar dijiyega. Taaki, body ko uske parivar me lautaya jaa sake. Kuchh ab bhi aas liye sirf body ka hi wait kar rahe hai, taaki unke qareebi ka deh sanskar ho sake.

Trisha (nods) : J-Ji! Chaliye Jeetu kaaka!

*Thud*

Darwaza band hua aur woh dono kamre se baahar nikal gaye.

Jeetu kaaka : Madam, ye gutthi toh ulajhti hi jaa rahi hai. Agar, hamla nukeele auzaar se nahi hua toh pait se itna bada maans nikla kaise?

Trisha (frowns) : Yahi toh samajh nahi aa raha hai, kaaka! *sighs* Suniye! Thaane se inspector ko bulaaiye aur yaha ki saari formalities karwaiye. Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein shaam tak thaane par milti hu.

Jeetu kaaka : Ji madam!!!

Trisha nirdesh dete hue Carewell hospital se baahar nikli aur seedhe police jeep me sawaar waha se ravaana ho gayi. Raaste me hi woh aneko files me se kuchh khangaalne me lagi hui thi.

Driver : Madam, aap ab bhi usi case ke peechhe padi hai?

Trisha : Haan! Toh?

Driver : Udhar se kuchh nahi milne waala madam!! Chhota muh badi baat kar raha hu. Par, meri maaniye — Aap abhi ke case par zyada dhyaan dijiye. Agar, ye serial killer ka case hal ho gaya toh aapka promotion pakka hai. Kya pata, isi lapete me hume bhi thodi bahut mithaayi khaane mil jaaye. *smiles*

Trisha : Beta mithaayi toh tujhe tab bhi khaane mil jayegi agar maine ye purana case hal kar liya toh. Ab baatein mat kar. Gaadi chala!

Driver (sighs) : Ji madam!

Jald hi woh apne ghar ke saamne thi. Jeep se utar woh files ke saath ghar me pravesh ki aur jeep wapas station ki orr nikal gayi.

Ghar me aate hi uski saasu maa aur uski nanhi si bacchi ~ Pihu baahar nikal kar aayi. Unse kuchh der baat kar woh firse unhi reports ko padhte hue uska aaklan karne lagi.

‘Slogan! Maut ke pehle iski car, highway ke paas se iss sunsaan sadak se baramad hui thi. Aur, iske pehle ye car — Theek iss hotel se baahar nikli thi jaha par ek aur shav paaya gaya tha. Body ka head kisi sniper bullet se explode hua tha aisa forensics se pata laga hai.'

'Strangely, iss hotel ke paas se koi bhi security footage baramad nahi hui. Iska matlab saaf hai ki ye zaroor ek setup tha. Lekin, witnesses se bhi kuchh clear haath nahi laga hai. Hotel waali iss dead body ki identity bhi clear nahi hai. Chal kya raha tha uss din waha?’

‘Zaahir hai ki iss slogan ki car hotel se nikalne ke baad uss sunsaan sadak tak pahuchi. Aur, isliye maine iss route me har kisi se poochh-taachh kar li hai. Kuchh toh kuchh nahi jaante toh wahi kuchh aise hai jo daawa toh karte hai dekhne ka. Lekin, kuchh khaas details saamne nahi rakh paa rahe…! It’s getting really complicated. Kya karu mein?’

‘Ab siwaaye uss ladke se milne ke alawa mere paas aur koi chaara nahi. Wardi pehen ke jaungi toh aisa na ho ki woh kahi darr ke maare data delete kar de. Hmm! Normal getup me hi jaana padega.'

Upar ek top aur neeche jeans daal Trisha apne ghar se nikal car me baith uss highway ki orr nikli.

'Kya naam tha uss ladke ka? Haan! Jai!!! Information exchanger. Achha hua gun mere saath hai. Agar, kuchh hua toh-!!'

Sochte hue woh ek dukaan ke saamne ruki. Highway par hi ek badi si dukaan thi jiske bagal se dhaaba khula hua tha. Ye wahi route tha jaha se Slogan ki gaadi nikli thi. Aur, Trisha jaanti thi ki use jo kuchh bhi ab pata lag sakta tha woh cctv footage se hi lag sakta hai.

Khambe par, dhaaba ke baahar, dukaan ke baahar kayi cctv cameras lage hue the. Jab pichhli baar woh yaha se jaanch ke liye guzri thi toh samajh gayi thi ki yahi se use kuchh mil sakta hai. Lekin, poochh-taachh karne par use pata laga tha ki Jai dukaan aur dhaabe ki aadh me darasal information bechta tha. Aisi kayi highway ki sadko par uske cameras kisi dukaan, ya kisi dhaabe par lage rehte the.

Ye route aisa tha jaha se sandigdh trucks, tractors, trolleys, aur tamaam bade-bade vehicles guzra karte the. Unme kya hota tha? Woh kaha jaate the? Unki gaadi ka number, ye sab Jai becha karta tha taaki baad me unki loot-paat ho sake. Aur, isliye woh yaha wardi ke bina aayi hui thi.

Andar aate hi sabhi ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Khaas kar uske khubsoorat chehre aur kaseele badan par. Bhala ek sundar ladki akeli yaha highway par dhaabe par kya kar rahi thi?

Trisha dabang style me andar aayi aur apna kaala chashma hataate hue usne dukaan par baithe aadmi ko dekh ishaare se poochha.

Trisha : Jai kidhar hai?

Dukaan wala : Hmm? Kaun Jai?

Trisha (aage jhukte hue) : Abey wahi Jai jo jankaari bechta hai. Customer ko bhagaana chaahta hai tu?

Dukaan wala : Oh! Hahaha! A-Abhi bulaata hu. Ruko yahi!

Kehte hue woh andar chala gaya aur Trisha tab tak aas-paas baithe logo ka jaayza lene lagi. Har taraf aadmi hi aadmi baitha hua tha. Ek bhi mahila maujood nahi thi.

Kuchh hi der me Jai baahar aaya aur usne Trisha ko apni bauhe chadhaate hue upar se neeche tak parkha.

Jai : Kya re item? Kya chaahiye?

Ek pal ko Trisha ke maathe ki nass phatne ko hui. Lekin, usne apna gussa nigla aur chalaaki se apni chaal chali.

Trisha : Graahak hu! Samaan chaahiye!

Jai : Toh ye sab latke toh hai samaan! Jo lena ho lo, paisa chukao aur aage badho.

Trisha : Ye samaan lene ke liye mein highway aaungi? Jankaari chaahiye thi.

Jai firse khamosh raha. Aur, aage aate hue dukaan ki seat par baith gaya.

Jai : Kaun hai tu?

Trisha : Iss se matlab? Tum apna kaam karo. Mein apna kaam karungi. Aur, fir hume ek dusre se kya lena dena?

Kehte hue usne apni jeb me se rupaye ki kuchh gaddiyaan nikaali aur Jai ke saamne hawa me lehraate hue use dikhaayi.

Jai (frowns) : Tujhe pehle toh nahi dekha kabhi yaha. Tujhe kaise pata chala iss jagah ka?

Trisha : Suni sunaayi baato se.

Jai : Huh?

Trisha : Iss se kya lena dena tumhe? Mujhe jankaari chahiye hai aur tumhe paise. Deal karo. Aur, baat khatam. Agar, tumhare paas woh jankari hogi toh mein use khareedungi aur agar nahi toh nahi. Itni si hi toh baat hai.

Jai : Theek hai! Theek hai! Andar chal!

Jai uthate hue andar jaane laga aur Trisha mahaul ko padhte hue savdhani ke saath aage badhi. Andar aate hi usne dekha ki 4 se 5 computers ek saath lage hue the.

Jai : System chaalu kar re gaandu. Saare karna.

Chela : J-Ji!

Computers on hote hi Jai seat par baitha aur Trisha ko dekh bola.

Jai : Chal bata! Kya chahiye tujhe?

Trisha : Ek se dedh saal pehle yaha se ek car guzri thi. Kisi prakar ki chase ho rahi thi. Uski footage hai tumhare paas?

Jai uske sawaal par thoda sachet ho gaya. Aur, peeth seedhi kar ke baith gaya.

Jai : Kya re item? Tujhe pata nahi kya? Ye highway hai! Yaha se daily hazaro gaadiya guzarti hai. Mujhe kaise pata chalega ki tu kis gaadi ki baat kar rahi hai? Aur, woh bhi kaun se din ki baat kar rahi hai? Tareekh bata! Agar data me saved file koi padi hogi toh mil jayegi.

Trisha ne use fir wahi tareekh batayi jis din Slogan ki car hotel se bhaagi thi.

Trisha : Tum itna puraana data bhi rakhte ho?

Jai (while typing) : Do-do teen-teen saal pehle ka data bhi rehta hai apne paas. Apna kaam hi yahi hai. Ye lo! Mil gayi tumhari file.

Trisha (leans in) : Hmm?

Jai ne uss tareekh ka bana hua ek folder khola aur dekha ki usme do recordings padi hui thi. Usne be-jhijak pehli recording play kar di.

Jai : Ye waali hai kya? Haan! Subah ye accident ho gaya tha ek car ka. Yaad hai apne ko. Ye hai kya?

Trisha : Nahi! Der raat ki baat hai. Dusri footage dekho.

Jai ne jaise hi dusri footage play ki toh usme dikha ki ek car tez raftaar ke saath aage badhte hue nikli aur uss ke peechhe dher saari gaadiyaan lagi hui thi. Jaise hi footage ko Jai ne dekha toh uske maathe par paseene ki boondein umad aayi. Aur, Trisha ki aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

Aur, agle hi pal — usne video clip band kar di.

Trisha : Y-Ye kya kiya?

Jai : Ab mujhe dhandha nahi karna. Mujhe koi information nahi bechna.

Trisha : Kya? Kya matlab? Tumne chalaayi hi kaha abhi video theek se!?

Jai : Tumhare iraade mujhe kuchh theek nahi lag rahe. Aur, mujhe tum par doubt hai. Toh ab chup-chaap yaha se nikal lo.

Trisha : Dekho! Mein sirf information hi chaahti hu. Mein tumhe yaha fasaane nahi aayi hu.

Jai : Oh achha? Toh kya mein jaan sakta hu ki tum ye clip kyu dhundh rahi ho? Kya hua tha uss raat aisa jo tum mere adde tak aa gayi? Koi bewakoof hi hoga jo tumse bina sawaal kiye aise hi tumhe ye jankaari de dega. Aur, mein bewakoof nahi.

Trisha : Dekho! Uss raat ki mujhe footage chahiye hai. Kyunki, mujhe sach jaanana hai.

Jai : Kaisa sach?

'Ye aise nahi maanega-! Mujhe isko baato me ghumaana padega.'

Trisha : Uss raat — mere ek qareebi family member ka murder hua tha. Mein jaanti hu ki unki car yahi se nikli thi. Mujhe ye jaanana hai ki unke peechhe akhir kaun tha? Gaadi number, uska color, agar kuchh bhi mujhe milta hai toh meri madad hogi.

Jai : Oh? Toh tum yaha kyu aayi ho? Police me complain karo. Mujhe chutiya samjha hai kya? Ab iske pehle ki mein kuchh karu, tum yaha se nikal lo, warna-

Trisha samajh gayi ki ye aise nahi maanega. Aur, majbooran use sakht hona hi padega. Usne fir kiya bhi wahi, apni jeans ke peechhe khusi hui handgun usne ekdum se nikaali aur seedhe Jai ke upar taan di.

Trisha : Hands up!!! Inspector Trisha!!! Thaane police station!!!

Gun dekhte hi Jai ne apne haath khade kar liye. Aur, Trisha uske qareeb aake jhuki.

Trisha : Dekh! Mein agar chaahti toh tera ye sab kuchh zabt kar sakti thi. Mujhe khaali ek raid maarni thi. Aur, tu abhi salaakho ke peechhe hota. Samjha?

Jai : P-Par- maine tab tak data uda diya hota. Ya drive leke mein use tabaah bhi kar sakta tha.

Trisha : Smart! Aur, isliye mein wardi me nahi aayi. Ab chup chaap se ye harddrive mere hawaale karo iske pehle ki mein yaha pe raid karwau. Hmm?

Majbooran Jai ko wahi karna pada jo Trisha ne kaha. Woh jaanta tha uska bhaanda foot chuka tha. Lekin, woh ye bhi jaanta tha ki woh itni asaani se nahi pakde jaane waala tha.

Kyunki, Trisha ne harddrive li aur woh bina Jai ko kuchh bhi kahe waha se nikal gayi. Woh jaanti thi ki uss clip me wahi tha jo use dekhna tha. Aur, Jai jaiso ko toh woh iss case ke baad bhi pakad ke jail me daal sakti thi.

Halaki, jab woh waha se nikli, toh woh bas ek baat se aparichit thi. Aur, woh ye thi ki — Jai darasal Balhaar ka aadmi thi. Wahi aadmi jisme Balhaar ko haal hi me dhoka diya tha. Aur, wahi aadmi jisne Damian ke behkaawe me aake ye sab kiya tha.

Trisha fauran hi thaane lauti aur turant hi control room ke paas pahuchi.

Trisha : Shekhar-!!!

Shekhar : Ji madam?

Trisha : Iss harddrive ko jaldi se connect karo aur folder me se mujhe woh video clip play kar ke do.

Usne Shekhar ko wahi date bataayi aur apni nazre gadaaye woh wahi jhuk ke khadi ho gayi.

Shekhar ne jaise hi clip play ki, har guzarte pal Trisha ki dhadkane badhti chali gayi. Ye wahi tha.

'I got it!!! This is it...!!'

Woh screen me jaise ghusne ko ho gayi. Clip maatra 1 minute ki jitni hi lambi thi lekin usme sab kuchh tha. Slogan ki wahi gaadi jo bhaag rahi thi. Peechhe lagi kuchh aur gaadiyaan. Aur, tabhi use sabse peechhe ek badi hi luxury gaadi nazar aayi aur khush-kismati se uska number bhi.

Trisha : Sh-Shekhar-!!! Pause karo!! Haan! Ye-!!! Ye number...! This is it!!! Isi pal ka toh intezar tha mujhe. I can't believe I got my hands on this. Yahi... Yahi hume iss gutthi ko suljhaane me madad karegi. Mujhe abhi ke abhi jitna jaldi ho sake iss number se saari information nikaal ke do. Ye kiski hai, kaha se li gayi, sab kuchh.

Shekhar : Ji madam! Bas thoda time dijiye.

Woh haami bharte hue apni tez dhadkano ko qaabu me karne ki koshish karne lagi ki tabhi uska phone baj utha. Dekha toh paaya ki uske pati Rohan, yaani ki sheher ke DGP ka phone tha.

Trisha : Hello?

Rohan : Kaha tak aage badha case?

Trisha : Report mili aaj hi. Case ulajhta jaa raha hai. Kis hathyaar se vaar kiya gaya ye abhi bhi ek rehesya hi hai.

Rohan : Dekho, Trisha! Ye ab heinous crime me aa chuka hai. Poori police force ko ab satark aur sakht hone ki zaroorat hai. Agar, tumne jald hi iske baar me kuchh nahi kiya toh thaane hi nahi, poori state level police ko alert bhejna padega. Aur, fir tum jaanti ho na?

Trisha : Rohan!!! Mein-! Mein kar rahi hu. Dekho, mein jaanti hu ki tum kyu abhi tak state level police ko isme shaamil nahi kar rahe. Taaki, mein ise jitna jaldi ho sake utna jaldi solve karu aur promotion mere liye aur bhi asaan ho jaaye. Magar-

Rohan : ???

Trisha : Tum promotion ki chinta mat karo. Aur, tum jaante ho na-! Mein crimes ke khilaaf kitni sakht rehti hu? Mein...! Har case ka parda faash karungi. Don't worry! Hum logo ki jaan ko aise khatre me nahi daal sakte, Rohan. Isliye, tum wahi karo jo sahi hai. Sabhi ko alert kar do. Sab ek saath iss case me lag jayenge toh hum criminal ko jaldi pakad payenge.

Rohan : Tumne theek kaha. Lekin, mein chaahta tha ki ye bada case tum solve karo.

Trisha : Rohan! Promotion se laakh guna zyada zaroori hai uss mujrim ka pakde jaana. So, do what is right.

Rohan : Hmm! Mein kal hi iss par charcha karta hu aur saari police force ko shaamil karta hu.

Trisha (smiles) : Good-!!!

Trisha ne jaise hi phone rakha toh udhar se Shekhar ne use bula liya. Usne saari information gaadi ke baare me khoj nikaali thi.

Trisha (walks in) : Shekhar? Mil gayi?

Shekhar : Ji madam! Gaadi blue color ki ek Bentley Mulsanne hai. Aur, owner hai 'Karan Adarsh.' Ye Karan Nexacom ke owner 'Kishore Adarsh' ke sage bete hai. Gaadi import karwayi gayi thi Dubai se.

Jaise hi Trisha ne jankaari suni uski aankhein aashcharya me fel gayi.

'Nexacom-!?? Karan Adarsh-!!! Itne bade raees vyakti ki gaadi bhala iss chase me? Ye aur ulajhta jaa raha hai. Par, ab mere paas ek — clue hai. Tum kitne hi raaes kyu na ho Mister Karan Adarsh! Agar, tumhara iss murder me haath hua toh mein khud tumhe salaakho ke peechhe daalungi.'

Trisha : Shekhar!!! Clip se aur jitni gaadiyo ke number bina blur hue saaf-saaf nazar aa rahe hai. Unn sab ki information nikaalo.

Shekhar : Ji madam!

Trisha : Kal subah, Nexacom ke owner Kishore Adarsh aur uske bete ke liye bahut hi yaadgaar saabit ho sakti hai.

***

Nidhi's apartment,
Night - 8:15 PM ~

Ragini Nidhi ke apartment ke theek baahar khadi hui thi. Aur, yahi thi uski asli destination. Uska dil uske seene me zoro se dhadak raha tha. Woh yaha pehle kabhi nahi aayi thi, halaaki woh aur Nidhi ek dusre se parichit thi. Gatherings, festivals aur functions me unka aamna-saamna kayi dafa ho chuka tha. Lekin, aaj ki raat alag thi. Sandeh ka bojh use yaha tak le aaya tha.

Darwaze ko khat-khataane se veh jhijhki. Kintu, fir usne dheere se khat-khataaya. Kuchh shan baad darwaza khula, aur Nidhi use dekh hairat me reh gayi.

Nidhi : Arey—A-Aap?

Uski awaaz komal lekin utsukta se bhari hui thi.

Nidhi : Maine nahi socha tha iss waqt aap hongi.

Ragini : Kyu? Kya aapko laga tha Veer hoga?

Nidhi (jhepte hue) : Huh???

Ragini (smiles) : Arey wahi toh aksar aata hai. Mein pehli baar aayi hu. Obviously, aap mujhe expect nahi kar rahi thi. Haha!

Nidhi : W-Wahi! Please! Aao na!

Jabran muskuraate hue Ragini andar qadam rakhi. Woh ek-ek gesture ko notice kar rahi thi. Nidhi ka achanak se jhepna aur uske chehre ke bhaav se leke sab kuchh.

Ragini : Mein toh bas — aapse milna chaahti thi. Aapse baat kare kaafi samay ho gaya tha. Socha, mil hi leti hu. Isi bahaane ghar bhi dekh lungi. I hope I'm not intruding, right?

Nidhi : Arey, nahi nahi! Isme kaisa intrusion? Aap aayi toh mujhe achha laga. Baitho na!

Ragini (nods) : Hmm!

Nidhi : Batao! Kya logi? Chai ya coffee?

Ragini : Arey, mein chai coffee ke liye thodi aayi hu. Aapse baat karne aayi hu. Aap baitho yahi.

Nidhi : Arey, aise kaise bhala? Pehli baar aayi ho aur mein itna bhi na karu? Aap bhi toh apne ghar me aisa hi karti ho na. Batao! Chai karu ya coffee?

Ragini : Arey aap bhi na-!!! *sighs* Theek hai! Coffee, then!

Nidhi haami bharte hue kitchen me chali gayi. Pehle woh uske liye paani laayi aur fir coffee banaane ke liye andar vyast ho gayi.

Isi beech Ragini ki nazar iss sadharan se apartment par padi. Aur, woh sochne par majboor ho gayi ki kabhi uske saath rehne se pehle Veer yahi par kayi mahino tak raha tha, jaha usne ek jeevan aisa bhi jiya tha jise usne kabhi theek se saajha nahi kiya, jiske baare me usne kabhi bhi theek se use nahi bataaya.

Uski ungliyaan sofe ke hatthe par firi, ek kalpana hui ki Veer yahi par baitha hai, shayad raat ke sannaate me Nidhi se baat kar raha hai.

Aur, irshya janm le uthi. Yahi sab woh jagah-jagah dekh soch rahi thi jab Nidhi do cup coffee ke lekar lauti aur ek cup Ragini ke saamne table par rakh kar baith gayi.

Nidhi : Toh? Aaj aapko meri yaad kaise aa gayi?

Ragini ne casual dikhne ki koshish karte hue apni coffee ka cup uthaaya aur boli.

Ragini : Ab kya batau. Jab se Veer China se laut ke aaya hai, tab se hi sab titar-bitar ho rakha hai. Ghar me afra-tafri machi hai, haha. Business ko lekar sab focused hai. Aur, mujhe thoda break chahiye tha. Fir aapka khayaal aa gaya. *smiles*

Ragini ne apni chaal chal di. Safed jhooth bolte hue usne badi hi chalaaki se topic of discussion ko Veer ki taraf mod diya tha.

Nidhi : O-Ohh! Bilkul! Thoda mind ko break dena bhi zaroori hota hai.

Ragini : Ji! Waise ek baat toh hai-!

Nidhi : ??

Ragini : Veer aksar aapke baare me baat karta rehta hai.

Nidhi : H-Huh!!!?

Ragini : -ki kaise aapne uske kathin waqt me itna saath diya. Tough times me kaise aap uske saath thi.

Nidhi ki aankhon me halki si kuchh chamak si aayi—shayad hairaangi, shayad puraani yaadein.

Nidhi (nods) : H-Haan! Woh tha — Jab woh yaha aaya tha toh bahut hi buri sthiti me tha. Maine dekha hai use-! Aur, maine wahi kiya jo meri jagah agar koi aur bhi hota toh yahi karta.

Ragini : Ji nahi! Mujhe toh nahi lagta. *sips* Shadi-shuda, do baccho ki maa, ghar par kisi mard ka na hona, inn sab ke baad bhi aapne ek jawaan ladke ko apni chhat ke neeche panaah di. Mujhe nahi lagta ki itni asaani se koi bhi aise madad ka haath badhaata. *sips* By the way, coffee bahut achhi bani hai.

Nidhi (smiles) : Thank you! Lekin, sach yahi hai, maine wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga. Aur, aap bhi agar meri jagah hoti toh shayad yahi karti.

Ragini (shrugs) : Shayad! Toh? Itne mahino tak aap dono saath rahe. Qareebi toh badhi hi hogi. Uska yaha hona aapko kaisa lagta tha? I mean to say—aapko dikkat nahi gayi kabhi? Baccho ke saath-saath ek aur sadasya ka ghar me achanak se aa jaana?

Nidhi iss prashn par thoda jhijhki, saaf taur par apni bhavnao par qaabu rakhne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Nidhi : Sach kahu toh- Woh samajhdar hai! Thoda nadaan zaroor hai lekin, samajhdar hai. Jab woh kathin samay se guzar raha tha tab bhi woh andar se humesha se mazboot rehta tha. Usne meri itni madad ki, jitni maine kabhi umeed bhi nahi ki thi. Toh, mujhe kabhi aisa laga hi nahi ki woh mere liye kabhi koi bojh tha. Aisa lagta tha jaise woh isi parivar ka hissa tha.

Ragini ka dil andar hi andar marud ke reh gaya. Woh Nidhi ki awaaz me uska sneh sunn paa rahi thi, aur ye uske andar bhadki jalan ki lapto ko aur bhi zyada badha raha tha.

Ragini : Ji! Veer aksar mujhe bataya karta tha. Toh, ye din-ba-din kaisa tha? Aap baccho ke saath-saath itna sab manage kaise kar leti thi?

Nidhi ki aankhein narm pad gayi aur pehli baar ek halki si muskaan ubhri.

Nidhi : Maine use parivar ke sadasya ki tarah hi maana humesha. Woh Juhi ki madad karta tha, kabhi-kabhi use school le jaata tha, yaha tak ki use nehlaana aur toilet tak leke jaana. Hum saath-saath shopping bhi karne jaate the, saath hi dinner ki taiyaari karna, chhote-chhote kaamo me haath bataana. Sab easily manage ho jaata tha. Aur, uske jaane ke baad hi mujhe ehsaas hua ki mein uspe kitna depend ho chuki thi.

Ragini ki pakad uske cup par mazboot ho gayi. Woh jaan rahi thi sab. 80 pratishat woh samajh chuki thi ki Nidhi hi veh mahila thi jis se Veer pyaar karta hai. Uske bheetar gusse aur jalan ki lehre uthi. Saath-saath dinner karna? Saath-saath shopping pe jaana? Mil ke baccho ka dhyaan rakhna? Agar, ye sab ek pati patni ke kaam nahi the toh aur kya the? Aur, ye sab Veer Nidhi ke saath kar chuka tha? Woh bhi uske pehle?

Ragini : Woh aapke liye bahut maayne rakhta hai, hai na?

Nidhi, bechaari chhal-kapat ki duniya se pare, ye samajh hi na paayi ki Ragini ke yaha aane ka uddeshya kya tha. Shayad, yahi ek kaaran bhi tha ki kyu veh Rajat ke jaal me itni asaani se fass gayi thi. Aur, shayad yahi ek kaaran aur bhi tha ki kaise Ragini kabhi Veer ke khilaaf shadiyantro me shaamil raha karti thi.

Ek taraf ek ignorant woman! Aur, dusri taraf ek crafty lady.

Nidhi : Veer-!! Woh alag hi hai ekdum. Niswaarth. Maine use kabhi khud ke liye selfish hote nahi dekha.

Ragini : Hmm! Aapki family ne kabhi object nahi kiya? Uska aapke saath rukne ko leke?

Nidhi : Hmm? Nahi! Hargiz nahi! Siwae, Shreya ko chhor ke. Lekin, baad me woh bhi uske saath ghul-mil gayi thi. Aap bhi ek mahila hai. Hum toh aankhon ko dekh ke hi pehchaan lete hai ki mardo ke andar humaare liye kya hai, hai na?

Ragini (nods) : Ji!

Nidhi : Maine kabhi Veer ki aankhon me woh sab nahi dekha. Hawas! Galat iraade!

Ragini : Ji!

'Agar, mein inhe bata du ki Veer ne kya kuchh kar rakha hai toh? Kya inhe bata du? Should I really-!? Inhe lagta hai iss baare me kuchh bhi nahi pata hai.'

Ragini : Waise-! Veer aapko kaisa lagta hai?

Nidhi : Huhhh??

Ragini : Mera matlab, ek insaan ke roop me aap use kaise dekhti hai?

Nidhi (smiles) : Selfless, caring, protective aur thoda sa nadaan. Lekin, ye nadaani samay ke saath chali jayegi. Abhi young hai na. Ye hota hai. Par, age ke hisaab se woh bahut mature hai.

Ragini : R-Right!

'B-Bahut mature? Bahut mature??? Agar, inhe pata chala ki usne mere saath hum-bistar hone ke baad bhi mujhe jawaab nahi diya hai toh kya sochengi ye? Kya inke vichaar tab badlenge?'

Nidhi : Aapko yakeen nahi hoga, par mein use pehle bahut kosa karti thi. Daanta bhi karti thi.

Ragini : Hmm? Kis liye?

Nidhi (smiles) : Usne aapko aur aapke parivaar ko gundo se bachaya tha na?

Ragini : Huh? A-Aapko kaise pata chala?

Nidhi : Usne hi mujhe bataya tha. Aapko pata hai? Jis raat usne aapko bachaaya tha, usi raat maine uske liye special dinner banaaya tha. Aur, woh dinner chhor ke bhaaga tha. Jab ghar aaya tha toh poore chot ke nishaan the uske shareer par. Fir, maine hi uski first aid ki thi aur fir usne bataya tha ki woh kaha par tha aur kya kuchh hua tha.

Ragini : Th-That's-

Nidhi (smiles) : Aur, mein isliye use kabhi chillaaya karti thi ki jab uska parivar uski parvah nahi karta toh woh kyu har baar khud ko unke liye jokhim me daalta hai? Can you believe it? Haha! U-Use itna chotil dekhti thi toh bas nikal jaata tha mere muh se.

Ragini ka sarr sharm se neeche jhuk gaya. The fact that he came for her when he was being served here with a special dinner comfortably. Ye apne aap me bahut kuchh bayaa karta tha.

Nidhi : Woh aapke baare me bhi bahut baatein karta tha.

Ragini : M-Matlab?

Ragini chaunkte hue apni palke jhapkaate hue use dekhi. Nidhi ne apna cup neeche rakha aur fir jaari rakha.

Nidhi : Jab woh aapke saath rehne laga tha toh yaha jab bhi aata tha toh aapki baat karta tha. Mujhe bataata tha ki ab uske parivar me uski ek bhabhi hai jo uski sach-much me parvah karti hai. Woh mujhe sab bataata tha ki aap uska kitna khayaal rakhti thi. Aapko shayad pata nahi par—woh aapki kalpana se bhi zyada parvah karta hai aapki.

Ragini : !!???

Nidhi ke shabd Ragini par haawi ho gaye aur uske andar jal rahi aag ko jaise thand kar gaye. Veer uske baare me aisa kehta tha? Beshaq, Nidhi uske liye koi anya mahila nahi thi—veh zaroorat ke samay me ek aashray thi. Lekin, ye baat ki woh Ragini ko nahi bhoola tha. Usne kabhi use peechhe nahi chhora tha.

Uski aankhon se apne aap aasu behne lage. Ye sab kya ho raha tha. Woh yaha rone nahi aayi thi. Fir kyu?

Usne apne aasu pochh dheere se saans chhori, use laga jaise ab uske andar ki gaanth thodi dheeli pad chuki thi. Lekin, jalan abhi bhi kahi na kahi maujood thi.

'Kya karu? Kya inhe bata du? Parijaat ghar ki aurto ke baare me? Kya hoga fir? Kya hoga, Veer? I have the opportunity. Mujhe bas sach ugalna hai. I can make you lose her, Veer.'

Nidhi uthate hue tabhi andar kun-munate Dhruv ki orr gayi aur uske sarr ko sehlaate hue aur soti hui Juhi ko blanket udhaane lagi.

'I can't-!!!'

Ragini ne apni saree zorr se bheench li. Uska nichla honth daanto tale kass ke dabb gaya.

'I fucking can't-!!!'

Usne Nidhi ko dekha. Juhi aur Dhurv ko dekha. Woh kitna khush thi. Aise, me bhala woh kaise sach bata sakti thi?

'Mein bas ek qadam dur hu iss aurat ko tumhari zindagi se dur karne me, Veer! And, yet I- *sniff* Yet I— I can't!!! *sniff* I fucking hate you, Veer!!! Ye kaha laa ke khada kar diya hai tumne mujhe? *sniff* It hurts so fucking much lekin, uske baad bhi mein ye nahi kar paa rahi. Is this—? This is what it means to be in love??? Is this love? I hate you, Veer-!!! *sniff* I hate you... Because... I love you~ *sniff*'

Nidhi wapas aayi aur apna pallu theek kar boli.

Nidhi (smiles) : Veer ka aisa hi hai. Woh apni family ke prati bahut protective hai. Maine shuru se dekha hai. Itna sab kuchh ho jaane ke baad bhi usne sab accept kar liya aur sab ke liye itna kuchh karta hai toh aap andaza laga hi sakti ho ki woh kaisa vyakti hai.

Ragini ne sarr hilaaya. Uski bhavnaaye uthal-puthal me thi. Woh apne sandeh ki pushti karne yaha aayi thi aur usne aisa hi kiya. Lekin, Nidhi ke shabdo ne use kuchh apratyaashit bhi pradaan kar diya — shaanti ki bhavna. Veer ne kisi ek ko dusre ke upar nahi chuna tha. Woh unn dono ki dekh-bhaal apne dhang se kar raha tha.

Jaise hi baat-cheet khatam hone ko aayi toh Ragini uth khadi hui.

Ragini : Thank you~ Aayi toh waise kuchh aur iraade se thi aur baatein kuchh aur hi ho gayi.

Nidhi (smiles) : Toh kya hua? Ab jab chaahe aap aa jaaya karo. Mein ghar par hi rehti hu.

Ragini muskurate hue ghar ke baahar nikli.

Ragini : You know what? Aap sahi hai. Nahi! Hum-! Hum sahi hai.

Nidhi : Hmm?

Ragini : Bas, ek akhiri sawaal. Veer ne aapko propose kiya toh uss baare me kya socha aapne?

Nidhi (astounded) : Huhhhh!!!?? M-Mein-!? Huh???

Nidhi jaise hi sakpakayi, Ragini ko shat-pratishat vishvas ho gayi ki Nidhi hi veh aurat thi. Isme koi shaq nahi tha. Woh punah muskurayi.

Ragini (smiles) : Veer keh raha tha ki woh aise pranks karta rehta hai, haha! Toh, maine socha kahi aapko bura toh nahi lag gaya? Isliye, poochha ki aap kya sochti hai iss baare me?

Nidhi (panics) : N-Nahi-! W-Woh-

Ragini (smiles) : It's okay. Don't mind him. Chalti aayi. Aaiyega!

Nidhi : Huh?? *nods* H-Haan!

Aur, Nidhi ko sawaalo ke bavandar me gumraah kar ke, Ragini waha se ravana ho gayi.

***

Starbucks, Mumbai,
Night - 8:30 PM ~

Starbucks ka shaant ambience kursi par baithi do mahilao ke beech ghanghor tanaav ke bilkul vipreet tha. Tej ki ungliyaan uske espresso ke cup par bechaini se thap-thapa rahi thi, uski teekhi nigaahein Suhana par tiki thi, jo humesha ki tarah shaant aur polished uske saamne baithi thi. Coffee shop ki roasted beans ki khushboo hawa me feli hui thi, lekin Tej ke dimag me ek hi cheez thi — Veer.

Suhana apni seat par thoda sa shift hui, uska almond latte jyo ka tyo rakha hua tha. Woh Tej ki ghoorti nigaaho me wazan ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Kuchh gadbad thi.




Tej : Thanks for coming! And, apologies for rescheduling...! Mein busy thi lately, you know—personal matters.

Suhana (nods) : No problem!

Uske business instincts pehle se hi ye bata rahe the ki ye koi casual coffee chat nahi thi.

Suhana : I can understand. Kabhi-kabhi cheezein bahut overwhelming ho jaati hai.

Tez zabardasti muskurayi, uski aankhein narm nahi padi. Woh thoda aage ki orr jhuki aur, uski ungliyaan uske cup ke chaaro orr ghumne lagi.

Tej : Mein kuchh khaas baat karna chaahti thi. Actually — Veer ko leke.

Akhirkar, asal mudda saamne tha. Suhana ka shaant swabhav bana raha lekin uski ungliyaan uske cup par adrishya roop se kass gayi.

Suhana : Veer?? What about him?

Tej ne turant koi jawab na diya, usne apni coffee pi, nigaahein Suhana par hi tiki rahi.

Tej : Aapne use woh car gift ki thi? Roll Royce Ghost? That white car?

Suhana (nods) : I did!

Tej : Quite a gift, you know. Not something you see exchanged between casual acquaintances.

Suhana ne seedhe uski orr dekha, ye samajhte hue ki baat-cheeet ka saar kya tha.

Suhana : Yes, the car! Ye har din nahi hota ki aap kisi aise vyakti se milo jo aapki madad ke liye be-jhijhak aage aa jaaye. Veer ne mere liye bahut kuchh kiya hai. I was shot in Las Vegas. Back me-! I was about to die.

Tej : Huh?

Suhana : Aur, Veer ne hi mujhe bachaaya tha. Usne bataya tha ki use ye car pasand thi. So, it was a token of my appreciation. Aur, mujhe nahi lagta ki iss car ki keemat meri jaan ki keemat se zyada hai.

Tej ka muh andar se sikud gaya. 'A token of appreciation?' Woh andar hi andar hasi, lekin usme koi haasya nahi tha.

Tej : It's an awfully grand gesture for a token, don't you think? I mean— itna mehnga gift. Just like that-!

Suhana : Gift toh gift hota hai. Badle me kuchh maangungi thodi. Ye car mere liye 'thank you' kehne ka tareeka tha jo mujhe appropriate laga.

Tej ki ungliyaan cup ko kass ke pakadne ke chalte safed ho chali, uska dimag tezi se daudne laga. Appropriate? Rolls Royce Ghost kahi se bhi appropriate nahi thi. It was intimate — iska matlab kuchh aur tha. Aabhaar se pare.

Tej : Aap dono kaafi samay se ek dusre ko jaante honge, hai na?

Suhana ne napi-tuli saans li.

Suhana : Yes! Quite a while indeed. Shayad 2 saal se? Delhi tour, Las Vegas tour. We went together to a few places. Zaroorat ke samay woh har waqt meri madad ke liye aage aaya hai. I can't deny that-! Kuchh din pehle hi usne mujhse 'Yarnia' ke showroom ke liye madad maangi thi. So, I have arranged something for him.

Tej : What???

Tej ka gussa ubaal maarne laga. Lekin, usne chhipaane ki poori koshish ki. I have arranged something for him? Ye kisi dhamki jaisa lag raha tha use.

Tej : So, you arranged for him huh? Aur, yaha mein kayi dino se sheher me ghoom rahi thi, uske liye sahi jagah dhoondhne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Iss poore samay mein ye soch rahi thi ki woh mein hi hu jis par woh depend ho sakta hai. Lekin, aaj pata chala ki peeth peechhe woh aapse madad maang raha tha.

Akhir me uski awaaz toot gayi, jiske chalte uss chot ka pata chal gaya jise woh apne gusse ke neeche dabaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Suhana Tej ke swar me aaye badlaav se na chooki aur pehli baar use tanaav ka asli kaaran pata chala. Ye car ya showroom ke baare me nahi tha — Yeh Veer ke baare me tha. Aur, Tej ki apne bhai ke prati loyalty, uski possessiveness.

'Looks like she dislikes me.' Suhana ne bhaanp liya ki akhir Tej use yaha par kyu bulaayi thi. 'She wants to know the relationship I share with Veer.'

Suhana : You know what? You are lucky.

Tej : Huh?

Suhana : Veer tumhari bahut parvaah karta hai. Tumhe koi idea nahi hai ki woh tumhare baare me kitna sochta hai.

Tej akad ke reh gayi, lekin uski aankhein kisi cheez se chamak uthi.

Tej : Woh mere baare me sochta hai?

Suhana : Haan! Use tum par garv hai. Tumko pata hai woh mere paas madad ke liye kyu aaya?

Tej : !!??

Suhana : -Kyunki, woh apni behan par aur burden nahi daalna chaahta tha. Tumne uski absence me jo kuchh bhi kiya, woh unn results se bahut khush tha. But, he didn't want to overburden you. That's why he decided to ask for my help. He looks up to you.

Tej ki saansein uske gale me atak gayi. Usne bahut lamba samay woh behan banane ke liye bitaaya tha jis par Veer nirbhar ho sake, jis se ki woh har cheez ke liye uski orr dekh sake. Aur, ab Suhana se ye sunn kar uski bhavnaaye bhadak uthi — krodh, raahat, irshya.

Tej : Par, fir bhi- aaya toh woh aapke paas hi na. He came to you!!! And, not me!

Suhana : Woh tumpe bojh nahi daalna chaahta tha. Isliye, woh mere paas aaya tha. Isliye, nahi ki use tum par bharosa nahi tha, balki isliye ki woh tumhe itna importance deta hai ki tumse aur zyada maang nahi rakh sakta. You already did more than enough for him.

Tej ye sweekar nahi karna chaahti thi. Woh iss par vishvas nahi karna chaahti thi. Lekin, inn bol ne jaise uske gusse ko shaant kar diya.

Tej : You care for him, right?

Ye ek sawal ki bajaaye ek bayaan tha. Aur, iss baar Suhana hichak ke reh gayi. Woh apni nazre churaate hue idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.

Suhana : I... He's just an acquaintance.

Tej : Just an acquaintance. Right!

Kehte hue woh uth gayi. Aur, waha se jaane lagi. Lekin, jaate-jaate usne Suhana ko yaha aane ke liye dhanyavad kaha. Jaise hi cafe ka darwaza uske peechhe band hua, Suhana ne ek saans chhori.

Iss exchange ke baad dono ek dusre ke prati kuchh na kuchh bhaanp chuki thi. Tej jaan chuki thi ki Suhana bas ek acquaintance nahi thi. Aur, Suhana ye jaan gayi thi ki Tej uske aur Veer ke rishte ko lekar sandeh me thi. Saath hi ye — ki woh apne bhai ko leke kitni possessive thi.

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FBCC headquarters, New York,
Night - 9:00 PM ~

"You showed up!!!"

Rebecca ne mudte hue apne peechhe se aa rahe shaks ko dekha.

"Aapne hi mujhe bulaaya tha."

Kehte hue woh ladka uske nazdeek aaya. Ye koi aur nahi — Damian hi tha.

Rebecca : Prepare for your next mission. Tumhe Australia jaana hoga.

Damian : Fight?

Rebecca : Up to you! Jitna ho sake uss ladki ko busy rakhna. You did well in Mumbai.

Damian (nods) : Hmm! Woh Mumbai me hi hai. Aisa mujhe lagta hai.

Rebecca : Who?

Damian : That weird one!

Rebecca : Ohh!

Damian haami bhar waha se chala gaya. Aur, idhar Rebecca ke dimaag me X ki baatein goonj gayi.

'Use your other pawn, Rebecca!'

Usne fauran hi Mumbai me maujood apne special agent ko call lagaaya — Divya!

Divya : Hello? Y-Yes Director!?

Rebecca : You have a mission, Mrs. Divya.

Divya : Huh?

Rebecca : Maharashtra me murders ho rahe hai. It appears to be a murder chain.

Divya : M-Murders?

Rebecca : I hereby assign you as a special agent to unravel the mystery behind these murders. FBCC jald hi Maharashtra govt. se contact me aa jayegi. So, be prepared.

Divya : Ahhh-!!?

Idhar Divya ko uska naya mission mila aur udhar Veer ko uske mann me-

*Ding*

[Mission : Assist Divya and unveil the murderer.
Time limit : 14 days.
Rewards :
1) ??? Points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) Divya's favourability increment.

Mission failure penalty : Loss of loved ones.]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 12k words. Cheezein bahut jaldi ab escalate hongi, ek idea lag gaya hoga ise padhne ke baad. So, be prepared. Sorry for the late update. Festivals ka time hai toh thodi vyastata rahegi, I had to go back to my hometown too. Toh adjust karne ka. Also, let me know Tej and Suhana ki meet aur Nidhi aur Ragini ki meet kaisi lagi. I spent a lot of time to write those two meetings. Baaki, target apna wahi hai. 200. Like thokne ka aur revos rakhna ka.
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome brother

Msst update bhai
As expected
Ab ye dekhna hoga
Ragnini
Nidhi walla matter kese handle krti h

Superb Update

Long review soon

Excellent update bhai..

Lovely update Werewolf bhai..

Zabardast update

Super update

Fantastic update…i think you are plotting big for upcoming updates…

Bahut badhiya. Ek taraf Ragini se duriyan badhi hai wahin Ava se duriyan kuchh kum huyi hain.

Bhtreen Alaaaa update

Shandar jabardast super update

Dhamaka dar updated bro

Gajab update bhai

AWESOME and FANTASTIC update

Suman should be punished for the exposing of everything Infront of ragini without the permission of her master. Suman should face a cruel BDSM session.

Zabardast update

Jabardast update

DUDE BUILDING HYPE FOR SOMETHING I CAN SMELL IT...BTW LOVE THIS UPDATE MUJHE WAIT H RAAGINI OR NIDHI K CONFRONT KA.

mast update
ragini ke dil ke haal ko samjhna hai veer ko aur khud ko bhi samjhna hai ki use kya karna hai
kyunki uski life me kayi ladies hai aur sabki zimeddari uspar hi hai
isliye wo kisi ko chodna nahi chahata hai kyunki sabhi uske dil ke kareeb hai
ragini ko abhi samjh nahi aya hai ki veer bakiyo se alag kaise hai
koi bhi lakdi chahti hai jisse wo pyar karti hai wo sirf uska hi rahe par veer alag hai ye baat use abhi samjh nahi aayi hai
dekhte use kabtak samjh ayega aur kya ragini accept karegi ya veer se door ho jayegi

veer aur ava apni training me lage hue hai
aur dono khud ko train kar rahe hai
aur ek dusre ko samjhne aur bharosa karne ki kosis kar rahe hai
kavya aur kritika ki bhi narazgi door ho gayi hai
rebbeca ne damian ko wapas bulaya hai australia jaane ke liye
lekin damian ne rajat ko kya kaha aur kaise badla lega rajat
aur ab ye naya character dhannjay aa gya hai kaun hai ye dekhte hai

keep writing

What a fantastic dramatic update

So update ki shuruwat hi ek anxiety giving scene se hui. This time Ragini is not wrong at all. Uski icchaye uski khwahish jayaj bhi hai aur reasonable bhi. Apna sab kuch soupne ke baad vo to ye expect karegi ki Veer sab kuch clear kar de. But Veer is in more complicated situation, chahkar bhi vo sab kuch clear nahi kar sakta.

Aur BC ye kya tha ki 'tumne bhi to Vivek ke sath sex kiya tha' ye excuse hai Veer ke pass. BC system holder ban gaya lekin Aurto se baat karni nahi aayi ise.

Ek Ragini jab isse handle nahi ho rahi, aage Tez, Nidhi, Trinity, Kavya aur baki sabko kaise handle karega. Asani se to koi nahi manne vali.

Scene dramatic tha phir sax Sux hua aur phir emotional ho gaya.

Aur vo scene ' I hate you Veer, I hate you...I love you...love you...even it's hurt me...even it's destroying me....still I love you...' Poor Ragini
Kamal ka scene tha aur quite emotional I feel you Ragini....

In this case Veer ka to kuch keh nahi sakta lekin Ragini kahi se bhi galat nahi hai. She is just asking what she deserves.

Arc ke end tak aate aate ye relations ka locha sar dard kar dega, agar aise hi scene sabke sath hue to.

Btw vo bhawna ka reference sirf aise hi tha bich me time show karne ke liye yaa kahi bhawna ne Ragini ko kambal me lipta Veer ke room se nikalte naa dekh liya ho.

Hope for the best for Ragini and Fuck you Veer. Sari cuties ko rulane ka theka le liya hai isne. Vahan Suhana pareshan, Nidhi pareshan aur ab Ragini.

Ragini ka teer nishane par laga hai ki vo mahila koi aur nahi balki Nidhi hi hogi. Ab dekhna ye hai ki usse kya baat karegi Ragini. Veer ne Ragini ko bataya ki vo lady bhi Veer se pyar karti hai, which is true lekin Nidhi ne kabhi ye accept nahi kiya. Aur kahi Ragini bhi Suman vala kaand naa kar de, matlab ye Veer ki sari debauchery ke kisse Nidhi ke samne naa khol de. Isse Nidhi ke samne kuch had tak mrs tiwari ka point sahi thehrega. I hope aisa naa ho.

Now talks about Ava the cutie... Jungle me mangal nahi kiya, sirf ladne hi gaye the

But Fight kafi details ke sath aur behtreen dhang se picturised ki hai. We clearly imagine it. Dono dheere dheere apne skills ko sharp kar rahe hai, jiski jarurat aage padne hi vali hai.

Dono ki power level me kafi difference hai but Ava learning quickly, vo Rekkaken puch aur baki sab.

Fight ki details me jyada nahi jaunga....

This pari said ki evil pari ne Ryotsken illegally sikha aur usko bhi Ryotsken aata hai to kya isne bhi kisi illegal tarike se Ryotsken sikha?

Ava aur Veer ke bich jami barf kuch kuch pighal rahi hai , barf pighlegi tabhi to aag bhadkegi .

Wow, Kavya aur Kritika ka scene was much much ahead then my expectations. A true beautiful friendship.

Asli khela to alag chal raha hai, So Mr X aur the person in Morocco is same. Planning kya hai, definitely something is around Nuclear.

He has convinced Morocco king to do which he shouldn't do. NPT ka kya matlab? Is it Non Plorifiration Treaty which disallows any sighning country to make nuclear warheads. Aur Morocco ab iss treaty ko violet karne wala hai.

Ek ek karke sare system holders ko target kiya jaa raha hai, now it's Australia and Europe.

Jo banda Renshu se lada tha uska naam bhi samne aa gaya Damien!. So he was the one. Jo Aadesh aur Dexter se mila tha aur jane se pehle Rajat ko bhi apne sath mila gaya. They know that much about Veer. He has gone to Australia and Rebecca sent someone else for India. A female system holder.

Kehte hai ki aap ateet ko bhul sakte hai lekin ateet kabhi aapko nahi bhulta vo ek na ek din aapke samne aakar khada ho jata hai. Yahi isbaar Veer ke sath hone vala hai, jin dushmano ko hara chuka hai, vo sab sath milkar isbar ayenge.

Aur Veer abhi is sabse anjan hai, Rajat, Dexter, Aadesh aur Gaon ke log, police jo Slogan aur Aatish ke bare me dhundh rahi hai aur Vo serial killer.

Aur khatra isbar Veer par sidhe nahi balki uske apno par bhi ho sakta hai. Jinse vo pyar karta hai.

Suhana aur Tez ka scene kahi traffic jam me atak gaya hai aur Kaera to shayad kisi desert me kho gayi hai to vapas aane me time le rahi hai.

Everything is going perfectly and Insane. Buildup tagda chal raha hai.

Again outstanding writing and fantastic Update

Hope next update will come a little bit soon.

Baki jab do tab badhiya

Thanks

Mast update tha bhai

nice update

Nice update

Superb update

Bahut jabardast romanchak aur majedaar update tha bhai maja aa gaya. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai

Awesome update
Ragini aur veer raat me khel krida kerne ke baad ek baar phir dono alag ho gaye aur Ragini bhi veer ke sath kisi dusri ladies ko nahi dekhna chahti hai aur wahi veer hai ki wo bhi Ragini ko kisi dusre ke nahi dekhna chahta hai but wo nidhi se bhi pyar kerta hai Ragini se kahin jyada ,kyuki nidhi veer ka sahara tab bani thi jab veer ke ghar waalon ne usko ghar me nikaal diya tha ,aur ab tou Ragini ko shak ho gya hai ki nidhi bhi Saadi suda hai aur uska bhi divorced hua hai ,...........

Aur idhar ye Daniam kaun hai ....? Kahin yahi to nahi jo Mumbai me murder ker raha tha .....aur udhar wo gaav se koi aaya hai wo bhi Gunda hi lag rha hai jo apne baap aur dada ki murder ka report likhwane aaya hai

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Nest update

Mast suspension update wolfy
Bhai. Akhir Damien ne rajat ko kya kaha hoga . Aur idhar gaav se bhi harikishan ka pota bhi veer ke pichhe lag gya ab veer ka kya hoga . Sabhi veer ko gher rha hai ! Akhir 31 December ko kya hoga ! Ab rajat kya karta hai dekhte hai
Abki baar jarur kuchh hoga jo expected nahi kiya hoga jisse family harass/hurted karega!
Wolfy bhai jald hi update dene ki koshish karna jyada confusion daal diya hai dimag me

Bohat bohat hi badhya update
veer ko har taraf sy gheera ja raha ha
lagta veer k sary dushman ab aik sath hoon gy

bohat khon khraba hony wala agy chal k​

Nice update.

To akhir Ragini apne aap se, Veer ke liye apni feelings se, haar gayi aur isme kuch mystic touch ne bhi apna kaam kiya. Ab weh Veer ke saath hi rehne wali hai. Ab dekhnna hai ki Nidhi ke saath uski mulakaat kaisi jati hai. Jis tarah ka Ragini ka swabhav hai, weh Nidhi se seedhe Veer aur uske baare me puchne wali hai. Prashn yeh hai ki NIdhi kya uttar deti hai. Waise Nidhi, Ragini aur Suhana ne hi Veer ka saath diya hai jab usko sabse jyada jarurat thi aur weh kuch bhi nahi tha.

Kavya aur Kritika ka milna bahut hi pyara tha, bachpan me aise hi do dost ladte aur phir sab gile shikve bhool kar mil jaate hain. Padh kar accha laga.

Veer aur Ava ki dooriyan bhi simat rahi hain.

To Morocco ka King Mr X ke jaal me phans hi gaya, NPT (hope you mean Non Proliferation Treaty) ke chakkar me weh bahut kuch kho dega, Nuclear weapon prayog lane ke liye. Aur duniya me tabahi shuru ho jayegi. Is Mr X ko jaldi hi marna chahiye, lekin yeh abhi to bahut kathin dikh raha hai.

Rebecca ki files me akhir kya bhed chupa hua hai. Kya weh bhi duniya ko apne control me karne ki planning kare huye baithi thi.

Ye Australian girl kaunsi hai jisko Mr X marwana chahta hai. Idhar Galileo ek naya naam aaya hai, jarur Spanish duo me se ek hoga. Lekin kya bhed hai, lag to System holder raha hai.

To us ladke ka naam Damian hai. Akhir usne Veer ke sabhi dushmano ko dhund liya hai. Lagta hai ki Bhanu aur Harikrishan ke murder ke khilaf usne Veer ke khilaaf FIR karwa di hai aur Rajat ko yeh case ladne ke liye kaha hai. Uske jaane ke baad ab Rebecca Divya se Veer ki jamkari leti rahegi, Rebecca ka ek aur pyada..

Veer ke khilaaf puri shatranj ki baji bich gayi hai, aur sabse badi baat, usko abhi tak koi iska andesha bhi nahi hai. Serial murders aur Dexter ka bhi kuch pata nahi, lagta hai ki yeh bhi Veer ko dusri taraf se gherne ki saajish hai.

Ek no update mazedaar fantastic mindblowing.

Super update Bhai

Mast tha update

Nice update dear

supper fantastic update janab

वीर साहब और रागिनी मैडम के बीच जो कुछ हुआ वह होना ही था । बल्कि सच तो यह है कि ऐसा वाक्या हर उस औरत के साथ होगा जिसके साथ उनका जिस्मानी सम्बन्ध बनेगा ।
यह औरतें कोई कोठे की तवायफ तो हैं नही या फिर वीर साहब के रंग महल की पारिजात औरतें तो हैं नही जो सबकुछ देखकर अपनी आँख कान और मुंह बंद कर ले ।

लेकिन यह देखकर ताज्जुब हुआ कि इतने साल के बाद भी वीर साहब को औरतों से बातें करने का सलीका नही आया । इसके पहले निधि मैडम के साथ भी साहब गलत तरीके से पेश आए थे । रागिनी को यह कहना कि वह भी विवेक के साथ हमबिस्तर हो चुकी है , सरासर गलत तहजीब था ।

वीर साहब के लिए यह बहुत ही कठिन चुनौती है । क्या होगा जब उनके हरम मे और भी महिलाएं शामिल होंगी ? और यह शीशे की तरह साफ है कि औरतें सबकुछ बर्दाश्त कर सकती है पर सौतन या दूसरी औरत नही ।
फिर कैसे वीर साहब बाकी महिलाओं को खुश कर सकते है ?

इसके अलावा वीर साहब कब तक महिलाओं को इम्प्रेस और सेक्सुअली सिडक्सन के लिए सिस्टम का सहारा लेते रहेंगे ? सिस्टम का काम सिर्फ युद्ध और डिफेंस के लिए रखिए । कम से कम औरतों को इम्प्रेस अपने चरित्र , विहेवियर और वाक पटुता से कीजिए । इसके बाद भी यदि कुछ दुष्प्रभाव होता है तब सिस्टम है ही ।

मेरा मानना है हर मामले मे हरिश्चन्द्र बनना भी सही नही होता । कभी-कभार झूठ का सहारा भी लेना होता है खासकर तब जब औरतों का मामला हो । बाकी वीर साहब समझदार हैं ही और साथ मे ' परी ' भी है ही ।

एवा की ट्रेनिंग वीर के सुपरविजन मे बहुत ही जबरदस्त रहा । इस दौरान फिर से कई स्किल को जानने और समझने का मौका भी प्राप्त हुआ । उस फाॅरविडेन फाइटिंग स्किल को भी हमने समझा जिसे ' परी ' के डुप्लीकेट ने चाइना ट्रीप पर ' जाउ लोंग ' पर इस्तेमाल किया था ।
इस दौरान यह देखकर बहुत अच्छा लगा एवा के चेहरे से आखिरकार उदासी के बादल छटने लगे । और यही वीर की मंशा भी होनी चाहिए कि आई कांट सी ए डैमसेल इन डिस्ट्रेश । चाहे वह रागिनी हो , चाहे निधि हो , चाहे सुहाना हो या फिर चाहे तेजल हो ।

काव्या की पश्चाताप की भावना वाकई इमोशंस से भरी हुई थी । लेकिन मुझे नही लगता कृत्तिका को इस मसले को लेकर इतना अधिक सीरियस होना चाहिए था । या फिर उसे इतने मान - मुनव्वल काव्या से करवाना चाहिए था । जब वह करण साहब को इन सब चीजों के लिए पहले ही माफ कर चुकी थी तब फिर इन सब बातों के कोई मायने नही बनते थे ।
वैसे स्कूल लाइफ और कालेज लाइफ मे ऐसी ऐसी चीजें होती रहती है । ऐसी बातों को दिल पर नही लेना चाहिए ।


रेबैका मैडम एक बार फिर मिस्टर गाॅड के आगे झुकते हुए नजर आई लेकिन इस बार भी उनकी उदासीनता और मजबूरी स्पष्ट जाहिर हो रही थी । आखिर क्या है इनके सपने और वह क्यों इन सपनो के लिए मिस्टर गाॅड पर डिपेंडेट है ? यह जानबूझकर अपने लिए गढ्ढा क्यों खोद रही है ?

" सेवन मोर टू गो " इस सेन्टेन्स का मतलब क्या था ? सात सिस्टम होल्डर्स से या फिर कुछ और !

मिस्टर गाॅड के खतरनाक इरादें परमाणु अप्रसार संधी के जिक्र से झलक रहा है । यह व्यक्ति मोरक्कन गवर्नमेंट को मोहरा बना कर कोई बहुत ही खतरनाक प्लानिंग कर रहा है । क्या चाहता है यह मिस्टर गाॅड ? पुरे विश्व पर शासन करना या फिर पुरी दुनिया को विनाश के रास्ते पर धकेल देना !

इस अपडेट मे यह भी क्लियर हुआ कि आदेश को गाॅइड करने वाला व्यक्ति डेमियन था और इस डेमियन का बाॅस रेबैका मैडम । और यही व्यक्ति निधि के भूतपूर्व पति रजत पर भी डोरे डाल रहा है । उदेश्य निस्संदेह वीर था ।
यह सभी लोग प्रत्यक्ष या अप्रत्यक्ष तौर से मिस्टर गाॅड से जुड़े हुए हैं । और ऐसा भी लग रहा है कि वीर के खिलाफ कुछ बड़ी साजिश भी रची जा रही है ।
देखते हैं वीर साहब कब अपने घरेलु प्रोब्लम से उबर कर इन सब चीजों पर ध्यान देते है !
भानु प्रताप और हरिकिरण की हत्या भी इसी साजिश का पार्ट लग रहा है ।

खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

Nice update...

Brother sabse pehle to woooaahhhh kya hi sandaar or jaandar update tha shuru main hi Ragini or veer ka scenes hmm ye abhi bhi kafi complicated mamla hai I hope ki Ragini veer ko samjhegi or jarur samjhegi hi jaha tak abhi tak Ragini ka carecter jesa dikhaya gaya hai us hisab se Ragini veer ke sath nahi chor sakti kyu ki Vivek ko bhalehi usne chor diya tha ye Vivek ki apni galti thi veer ne bhalehi usse ye chipaya tha per wo Vivek ki tarah jootha nahi tha bhalehi Ragini or veer ki nazare kayi baar mili thi or main dave ke sath keh sakta hu ki Ragini ne bhi veer ki aakhon main wo sacchai or majboori jarur dekhi hogi isi liye uske hoth ke worlds apne aap adal Gaye Ragini ko ye samjhna hoga ki bhalehi mard sex ke mamle main jese bhi ho but dilke aihsaas main jarur alag hote hai or yahi firk veer or Vivek ko alag banati hai baki to dekhte hai Ragini kya veer ko bhula pati hai


Next aate hai veer and Ava ki training per to ye aachi baat hai training ki wajah se veer and Ava apni nayi skils ko practice ke through jaldi master karpayenge or unhe or acchi tarah istemaal karpayenge aura vision mere khayal se upgrade karleni cahiye yaha to chalo Ava thi but summit arc main samne Ava nahi hogi yato Rebecca hogi ya fir damian or Damian mere khayalse wahi system holder hai jo renshu se bhida tha ye mera ek guess hai or Mera ek khayal hai ki veer ko yaha apna status main points ko badhana cahiye jaruri nahi ki har baar use china town arc ki tarah sleep ka time milega mere khayal se strength, intelligence,and insurance ko ab 200 karna cahiye isse no doubt bahut points lagenge but har baar jaw long jitna power full aadmi hi samne aye is ke bharose veer nahi baith sakta kya pata usse bhi jyada wala aajaye yaha Mera agility ke baare main baat karna theek nahi kyuki wo pehle se hi jyada hai or Beowulf wese bhi agility increase kardeta hai


Or mere khayal se yaha veer ko ab ek hand to hand combat keliye ek hathiyaar ki bhi jarurat wolfi aapko yaad hoga update 174 ya 175 main veer ne apne aap se ek Vada kiya tha ki wo ab apna ek hathiyar bhi lega or use chalana bhi sikhega to ab use uski jarurat bhi hai khair Mera veer ke status ko leke jo vichar hai usper jarur dhyan rakhiyega

Ab aate hai veer ki dodging skill per brother I know ki veer ke reflecx senses bahut strong hai hai and uske pass probability manipulation bhi hai but uska bhi istemaal bhi sirf 3 time hi hoga mera bas itna kehna hai ki veer ko renshu ki tarah ek dodging skill ki jarurat hai rapid reaction renshu ki ek behtarin skill hai agar veer ke pass bhi ek aisi hi skill hoti maza hi aajaye

And now veer and Ava ka new bond bro ther yaha mene kayi readers ko dekha jo ki veer ki love life ke baare main prediction kar rahe hai to mene socha main apna pov kyu na share Karu brother Ragini , nidhi ,kaera soniya ,suhana ,Divya, tej and all ye sab no doubt veer ka sath marte dum Tak nahi chorengi but kya veer inse pehle duniya ko alvida kahega nahi na yaha main veer ke nightmare ko bhi point karke bol raha hu mere khayal se veer and ava ki jodi mujhe per fect lagti hai Aisa kyu hai ye mujhe shayad batane ki jarurat nahi hai veer keliye Ava ki jindgi baki sabhi ledies se kyu alag hai ye mujhe aapko batane ki jarurat nahi hai baki to aapki story hi batayegi ki kon veer keliye perfect partner hai

Wel ab kavya and kritika khair in donoka bhi mamla nipat Gaya ye bhi mujhe accha laga kritika ka gussa hona Lazmi hai koi bahar ka aadmi aapke sath agar kuch karbhi jaye to itnafark nahi padta jitna ek sacche dost ke kuch karjane se padta hai chalo Inka bhi sulaj hi Gaya ab

Khair Rebecca ka 7 more togo bolna hi kafi hai humreaders ko samjane keliye ki abhi bhi 7 system holder aise hai jo abhi game ke bahar the and dheere dheere ab is sataranj ke khel main saamil ho rahe hai wo Australian women aakhir kon hai wo or kya wo veer Ava renshu ki hi tarah hi koi nek Dil system holder hai ya fir mr.x ki tarah hi koi criminal minded hai Rebecca ka yu pareshan hona hi ye batata hai ki wo kitni majboor hai or ye bhi batata hai ki mr.x koi aira gaira ya koi mamuli system holder nahi hai he was something uper ranked skilled system holder hai varna Rebecca jesi ek hypnosis skill wali system holder ko majboor karna or Rebecca ka yu uska phone aate hi kaanp Jana is baat ko hum halke main nahi le sakte

And now Damian jesa ki mene kaha ki Damian wahi unknown system holder hai jo china me renshu se bhida tha kyu wo unknown mr.x hota to mujhe nahi lagta ki renshu itni der uske samne tikpata jaha tak abhi humne story mai. Padha hai use point out karke bol raha hu Damian aakhir veer ke piche kyu pada hai ye ek rahasya hai ab ye isi arc main khulega ya fir summit arc main ye dekhne wali baat hogi

Maybe Damian chahta hai ki veer ke dushman veer ko ghere taki veer usme se niklega ye to tay hai but veer kiss tarah ka intelligence use karta hai ye shayad Damian ko dekhna hai taki veer se bhidte waqt use veer ki acchi khasi jaankari ho or do system holder ki ladai main samne waleka iq and jankari kya mayne rakhti hai ye mujhe jawlong wali ladayi main dekha maine isi bases paer keh raha hu

Or mr.x kya worldwar 3 karwana chahta hai kya ya fir ye koi pagan sanki hai jise tabahi dekhne main maza aata hai khair mrx ke abhi ke intention to saaf hai ki wo Morocco and shpain ko ladwana chahta hai ab wo Aisa kyu karraha hai ye baat ek mesttory hai

Or ant main dhananjay kya hai harikiran or Bhanu Pratap ka beta hai lagta nahi jis hisab se discreptiondiya aapne us hisab se ye to Bhanu Pratap ki umer ka lag raha hai maybe wo Vivek ki umer ka ho kya pata or sale ko lagta hai bahut hecdi chadi huyi hai ek baar beta veer ke hath lagja fir pata chalega ki harikiran or Bhanu Pratap yani ki uske baapdada kaha gaye

Khair brother Aaj free tha to socha review de du baki apan pehle se aakhir tak Bane rahenge story pe


Well fabulous update buddy

S
Shandaar update and excellent story

Nice update

I think the update is a little lackluster i mean it feels like something is missing like some drama or thrill. Thing are moving to slow

Lovely update Bhai

Bahut hi mazedar update

Wolfie bhai sab se pehle Maja aagya update padh kar aur kasam se itna bada update padhne mien pu re 53 mins lage hai mujhe sahi mien ju jitna time lete ho update likhne mien woh ek ek din Wajib hai bhai toh ab aate review par toh sab veer aur Ragini ka conversation padh kar pata nhi Sala mujhe samj nhi rha ki mujhe Ragini aur Veer dono ke liye bura kyu laag rha hai ki Sala veer ko Ragini ki milni chahiye sorry sorry veer ko Ragini milni chahiye aur Ragini ko veer lekin mujhe pata hai ju ne itna connect karwa diya story se ki ab sahi mien bura lagne lag jata kisi character ke sath galat ho ko lekin ju mien ek cheez ke liye aur gussa mien hu ki ju ne veer aur Ragini ka Milan adha ki chor diya Sala klpd ho gya yaar lekin Ragini ka naraz hone ki wajah sahi ki itni badi baat veer ne usse kese nhi batai aur Veer ka point of view bhi apni jagah par thik hai ab yeh dekhna hoyega ki Ragini kese pata lag aagi ki Nidhi mam woh hee aurat hai ki nhi

Veer aur ava ka fighting wala scene padh kar ase laga ki dono mere samne ladh rahe hai aur dono ki kuch new skill aur cards ke baare mien pata aur ava aur Veer ki thoda pass aana Acha laga padh kar Haa mai bhi unn mien se hu jino ne ava ko betray karne time bhot gaaliyan di thi lekin ab sayad betray na kaare

Kritika aur kavya ka part padh Maja bhot aaya lekin reality mien pata nhi ase kaha hota hai kyuki mai toh launda hu aur ju bhi launda hai. Aur launde aapas mien sorry bol na de agar Sala koi naraz hojye toh Salae do tin gaaliyan aur dete hai lekin iss baat ki harani hai ki ju ne kitne sahi trike se yeh part likha ekdum ase ki ju ladki ho kahi ju sahi mien toh ladki nhi hai na ?

Bhai ju ne ek question pucha tha ki konsi ladkiyon dusri ladkiyon se jealous hoti hai veer ke liye usme baakiyon ne jin bhi ladkiyon ka naam liya ho mai toh Rebecca ka naam lunga mujhe Rebecca ka character bhi Acha lag rha hai mana ju ne abhi ache uss ka character show nhi kiya lekin dekhne layak hogi Rebecca ki story bhi aur ek aur system holder ka ju ne naam bataa diya lekin Kya Damian wahi hai jiss se renshu ladha tha China mien ??
Aur feel aa rhi hai ki Rajat ki fir se maarne wali sirf Rajat ki hee kyu Dhananjay ki bhi toh maregi jab uss ke baap dada ki bhi toh maari thi aur mujhe yaad karwna ki koi aur Elsher naam ka yha cast ka character story mien aaya hai

Aur antt mien bas yeh hee bolna chaunga bhot bhadiya update bas klpd galat kar diya ju ne veer aur mera aur maafi chote review ke liye thoda college wale samay jyada le rhe hai

Sorry bhai.
My mom is suffering from serious condition from 2 weeks.that's why I came late...when you will free please,pray for my mom.
and also that Ye pen cho site ko kya hua pda h kal se open hi nhi ho ri..badi mushkil se vpn lga k kaise kaise aaya hu

Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Ragini bechari ka Dil tod dia veer ne lekin bechara woh bhi kia kare yaha tow ek anar beemar wala haal h
Pari ne sahi Salah di h dekhte yeh Salah kitne kaam aati h
Tow Ava or Veer ne apni training shuru ker di yeh bhi bahot zaroori
Damian ko Rebecca ne bula lia doosre kaam ke liye lekin yeh Damian ne jaate jaate Rajat ke kaam aisa kia Keh jise sunker uske hosh update chale gaye
Dhananjay gaon se aaya h apne dada or baap ke qatil ke khilaf report likhane tow ab or gade murde ukhadna wale h jinka naam h Bhanu partap or Harikaran Singh
Dekhte h aage kia hota h

Nice 1 again some brilliant writing skills




Jahan 1 taraf Ava or Veer kuch sikhaya 1 dusre ko kuch vade bhi kiye


Wahi dusri taraf Kavya or Kritika ka matter clear ho he Gaya




??- ne Jahan 1 taraf Rebecca ko call karke shayad kisi Australia k system holder ko khatam karne k liye kaha hai
Wahi Rebecca ka jo admi Damain
Jo ab tak Veer k liye jaal bun raha tha yahan rehkar usne apna last teer chod diya hai jo ki Veer ka purana dushman Rajat hai dekhte 31 Dec ko kya hota hai


??_ ne dusri taraf Moroccan king ko apne samne jhukne pe majbur kar liya or kuch aisa karna chahta hai jo ki duniya k liye kafi khatarnak hone wala hai


Wahi end mein entry hoti hai Veer k 1 naye dushman ki jo usko dhundh dhundh k Mumbai tak aa gaya hai apne baap or dada ka badla lene

Lekin jiske bare Maine socha tha ( serial killer) uska koi bhi zikr nhi hua iss update mein jo shayad aage dikhaya jaye

Great update!

So, the plot thickens!
Rebecca, Damian and unknown person. System user in Australia, Glory of Morocco and FBCC in New York. It’s quite interesting but no clue on what’s ahead. It’s all building up! Really excited to see where it leads - how veer navigates through the crisis these other system holders leave behind for him. Feels like a Sherlock Holmes mystery!

Also, I’m curious if this unknown person is the person x that was mentioned in very early updates!? It feels like a long journey with this story. We are already at chapter 185, hahaha! And the Josh had not diminished - for readers or from the writer. Kudos for capturing people’s attention!

Veer and Ragini! If she leaves - I’ll be really sad. Looking forward to seeing what happens with her character arc.

Thank you for continuing to write this awesome story!

Everything will be alright soon , Don't worry

And Xforum ki jagah exforum domain se kholo site sahi chalegi. Mujhe bhi same problem aa rahi thi.

बहुत खूब!!

ये अपडेट आने वाले अपडेट की आधार शिला है।

बोले तो निम रखी जा चुकी है।

दो पुराने पापी या चावल फिर से सर उठायेगे।

ओर दो नए ओर बहतरीन बांड बन रहे है। जिनका आने वाले वक्त में अच्छा खासा उपयोग होगा

Super sandar update

100% true,, and may be not in some cases,

May God bless her with good health soon

bohat he behtareen zabardast update bohat khatarnaak fielding veer ke liye ki hy lagta bohat gazab plan banaya hy veer ko marne ka vahi dosri taraf veer bhi khud ko or ziada tayar kr raha hy dekhte hy kese ane vali mushkilo ka samna karta hy eagerly waiting for next update

Zabardast update

Nice update

to Ragini ka kya, akhir usne pata laga hi liya, wo kon hai NIDHI ab dekhna hai dono ke beech kya hota hai

idhar Ava to Dil haar bethi hui hai, sabko apni manzil ki talash hai

Nice Training
Dekhte hai training karte, karte Veer aur Ava kaha tak badhte hai, sirf training hi hogi ya.....

Rebecca
Mysterious lady
Dheere - Dheere iska Raaz bhi khulne laga hai
Ab dekhna hai kya Veer bhi Australia jayga, agar Jaayega to kaise, aur nahi to
Yaha kya hone wala hai

Akhir ek aur choodu aa hi gava
Dhananjay

SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Superb update bro

Praying for speedy recovery of your mom.

Superb update

Wating for update 186

Update Please

Fantastic and fabulous update bhai

अब तक़ के सारे अपडेट मे ये अपडेट सबसे ऊपर है
क्योंकि अब फिर से पहले के सारे चूतिये वापस अपनी मरवाने आ रहें है लेकिन साला ये रचत तो मर गया था ना तो क्या वो भी ड्रामा था
और ये नया केरेक्टर साला अपने बाप दादा की मौत का बदला लेने आया है कोई इस चूतिये को समझाओ की वीर इसके साथ क्या करेगा

Super lajawab update bro

Waiting crazily for the next episode

Waiting for update Bhai.

Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai

update please

Mind-blowing update bro maza aa gaya

Waiting

Amazing update

Awesome update bro

superb update as expected.... maza aa gaya

Nice update bro good.

Werewolf bhaiya baat takar ki nhi hr koi apni jgah special Hy oor hr ksi k dill MN veer k liay feeling Hy pr koi bhi dosry k bary MN nhi Janta Boht c too veer ko Boht hi innocent samjh rhi Hy ab maan loo k 1 tej ko hi kviya oor Baki sb ka pata chal jay too Kya ho ga yha too list Boht lqmbi Hy

Update Kab Doge Bro....

Nice update

Please tell me episode number

My favorite story

Waiting for next update bhai

𝙒𝙤𝙡𝙛𝙮 𝙗𝙝𝙖𝙞 𝙪𝙥𝙙𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙠𝙖𝙗 𝙩𝙖𝙠 𝙖𝙖𝙮𝙚𝙜𝙖 𝙗𝙖𝙩𝙖 𝙙𝙤

179 and 3 others so far...

Update 185 was something which I didn't expect.... I mean... The arrival of Bhanu Pratap's son.... I didn't even think that he might come later in the story... I thought everything was over.

I see now what you are trying to play here... You are bringing each potential enemy from the past and trying to corner Veer... Nd it's really making me anxious now ...

Rajat... Dhananjay... Trisha's police force is also behind him... Well eventually she'll come to know about Veer... Dexter the assassin... Aadesh... Unavailability of Balhaar.... This situation is too scary...

I'm not worried about Veer... He can handle these puny goons without batting an eye on them... But... There is his family... Kavya... Nidhi... Juhi... Arohi... Tej... Bhavna... Shweta.... Bhumika .. Ragini nd all... They are the ones who are making me worried....

You said this arc is for Nidhi... Don't you dare do anything with Nidhi... My heart won't be able to take it at all....

I don't want to see her suffer anymore... I don't want to say anything now. The next couple of updates might give us an idea where this is going...

Thank you for the update. Please keep writing like this... 🩷

Maine aapki sari updates ko like kar diye hain halanki maine abhi tak sirf 175 updates padhe hain.

Maine story jitni bhi padhi hai is forum ki sabse best story hai....aur sayad aisi story phir kabhi dekhni na mile dubara.

Can you please lower the likes count for update it is really delaying the updates and the reading experience

इस वेबसीरीज का अगला एपिसोड कब तक आएगा महाराज

How much the targeted likes are ?

Update superb hain

Maine to kar diya

Bhai update ka intezar Saha nahi ja Raha hai bas aap zaldi zaldi update do aur ham mast maze lekar padh sake

Bro like goal completed.... Now waiting for the update

चलो अच्छा है कि ava भी close combat मैं पारंगत हो जाए क्योंकि आगे आने वाले युद्ध सामान्य तो कतई नहीं होंगे जिसमें योद्धा का युद्ध की हर कला में निपुण होना अति आवश्यक है।
वैसे जू को याद है chinatown arc में वीर और रेंशू के conversation में रेशू ने जब वीर के close combat ki बात छेड़ी थी तो उससे कहा था की युद्ध के समाप्त होने पर मैं तुम्हें कुछ स्पेशल चीज़ दूंगा तो कहां है वो चीज़ जू शायद भूल गए या मुझे ही कोई भ्रम हुआ था कृपया इसकी पुष्टि करना।
और कहां है वो बाज़ (शेबा) जिसने jaw long के मरने के पश्चात् वीर को अपने नए master के रूप में स्वीकार किया है
और कृपया उस शब्द का अर्थ भी बता दें जो उस unknown system होल्डर के द्वारा प्रयोग किया गया था NTP या शायद MTP
वैसे अपडेट कमाल का था ईश्वर आपकी लेखनी को हमेशा मजबूत रखे।

Adbhut maza agaya

महाराज आपके एपिसोड नंबर 185 को 204 लाइक्स हो गए हे अब अगला एपिसोड दीजिए. आतुरता से राह देख रहे हे।

Reader's do tarha ky action mangte hain you know what i mean or abhi dono nahin aay so that's why they are getting lazy.

This arc is slowly continu to biggest suprise

Zabardast update bhai maza aa gay rishto me changes aa gaye hai bohat se log kisi doosre ko confront karne Waley hai. Kuch dost Bane kuch dushman to kahi kuch mysterious logo ne aage ka kaam shuru kia hai.
Jaha Ragni n Veer apne rishto ko sudharne chahiye rahey they woh aur zada bigad gaye hai aur na chahtey huay bhi veer ne usko Azad chor diya hai means usse duri bana li hai ki dekhey woh uske pass wapas aati hai ki nahi aur idhar Ragni veer se door hona chahti hai magar uski nafrat per mohabbat havi ho rahi hai lekin yah mohabbat zakhmi nagan wali nafrat hai aur chot khayi hui nagan zada khatarnak vaar karti hai aur ia baar uske vaar ke chapet me Nidhi aayegi aur usko pehlay hi uski padosan bhadka rahi thee ab Nidhi n Ragni ki mulaqat kia rang lati hai.

Ava n veer practice kar rahey shayd aane Waley khatre ka pata to nahi hai unko magar andaza lag chuka hai ki jaldi hi bohat khatarnak masla saamne aaney wala hai aur isi dauran Pari se bhi veer ko bohat kuch pata chala hai aur inka bond bhi bana aur bind idhar kritika n kavya ki bhi mazboot hua hai.

Mysterious women Rebecca ko abhi task milna Australia ka aur uske liye apna payada Damin ko waha se bhejna jo ki uske liye is time veer ki zameen tang kar raha thaa veer ke sare dushmano ki help kar ke pehlay casa balleca ke owner phir veer ke cousin then Nidhi ki padosan ke zariye Nidhi ke dil me Veer ke against Shak dalna aur ab uske pati Rajat ko use kar ke phir veer ke liye mushkil khadi kar raha hai. Iska matlab ab Rebecca veer ki surveillance ke liye shayad Divya ka use karegi. Aur yah to sab se chaukane wala part hai ki 7 more to go.... Means 7 more system Holder ko aur marna hai magar kyu?
Bhanu ka pota aaya hai Mumbai is time veer se badla lenay agar Damin Ruk jaata to shayad woh usko bhi Veer ke taraf mod deta aur uski zindagi ko aur chota karne ki koshish karta .
Idhar Ragni Nidhi ko aur Tez Suhana ko confront karege aur shayad veer ko aaj kal sab taraf se uljhano me phasa hua hai aur yah dono usme aur izafa karengi.
Mazedar update raha ab intezar rahega agle update ka.

Update kab milega..

Bhayaa

Nice mast update bro

bHai UPdate Doge Ya sabkO Tadpa Tadpa Kar Hi mar daloGe

𝚄𝚙𝚍𝚊𝚝𝚎 𝚔𝚊𝚋 𝚝𝚊𝚔 𝚊 𝚜𝚊𝚔𝚝𝚎 𝚑𝚊𝚒𝚗 ?

Nice update

super story bhai

bhai veer our bhavana ki bhi story aage badhao

keara jo bolti thi ki veer usko claim kare ... bhai kab karega veer claim

next update main purvi hogi kya ????

Update kab ayega

Bro koi andaza de do? update no 185 ko aye 2 weeks ho hi gaye hyn takreebn.

Month me 2 update hi aane h bhai to aaram se chill Karo jab aa jaye to padh lena na bhi aaye to kya hi jata h .....mast chill Karo..

Writer ko kyu pareshan karna....

Aise door door se dekhne me kya hi maza hai.
System dhari girls ke sath kuchh naughty naughty chizen karvao to maza aaye (hume bhi aur veer ko bhi)

Na jane wo wakt kab aayega

Mast update bhai

This is also we suppose we shouldn't disagree because you hold legit experience on this matter.

Werewolf bhai take ur time we know that its take lot more than effort to write a update then to read so take ur time and give a deadly update
I hope u well
Your precious reader

Bhai Jeb aapki story complete ho Jaye to is story ki pdf file banaker post jarur karna je story meri sabse pasand ki story hai

waiting for the next update....

Tam hoti kaun ho kuchh bolne waali
Writer jab chahega update dega
Tumhare personal satisfaction ke liye writer nalla ban jaaye personal aur professional life na dekhe
Apni life ki waat laga le
Tam salary deti ho writer ko

What should I say in such situation
These nalle mutthal logiz

kiTna TIme or lagega Update Ko ... Batao do Bro..

Besabri se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Werewolf bhai....

Aaj Maja aayega sandip bhai bhi aaj update dene vale hai aur aap bhi
Do hi to story padhne aate hai is forum par

Waiting

Lovely story

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next update Werewolf .

Ye aap Swati hi hai na ya fir koi aur koi ?

Update kitna time ayega 12:30 AM time upr ho gya hai

Take your time brother. Perfection takes time. After writing, editing takes time.

Appreciate your efforts!

Baap re itna lamba. Phir padhne me samjhne me chitrit karne me aur aakhir me like karne me 20-25 minutes jayenge.

Par aap lage raho werewolf Bhai. Hum sambhal lenge.

Update 186 has been posted.