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Incest Baap aur bete ki atma ek dusre badal gayi

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Dushro ki kahani copy karne se pahele writer se permission lena chahiyea Jo ki yea copy paster kabhi karta nahi, itna ego hai ki writer ka naam bhi menction nahi karta.
 

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Rakesh - kaise ho Rahul bete

Rahul- theek hu aap kaise ho uncle bahut dino baad aaye ho aap

Rakesh - ha ! Me ek gadget banane me bahut busy tha

Rahul- kaisa gadget

Rakesh- chal tere papa ko bhi dikhaunga tabhi tu bhi jaan lena.

Rahul- oh sorry me to andar aane ki bolna hi bhool gaya aapse, aayiye aayiye.
Dono andar aate hain, aur andar shakuntala khadi thi usne ornage saari aur black blouse pahna huwa tha.
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kamaal ki lag rahi thi

Rakesh - ravi kaha hain.

Shakuntala- voh meeting me gaye bhai saheb 15 minute lagengi aate hi honge

Rakesh - theek hain me wait kar lunga.
Shakuntala chaay nasta banane me chali gayi. Rahul ko bhi kuch jyada intrest nahi aa raha tha. Isiliye voh bhi apne room me chala gaya usko 1:00 baje apne friend ke yaha padne jaana tha. Kuch samay intzaar karne ke baad rvi aata hain aur bolta hain

Ravi - aa gaya mera bhai

Rakesh - kab se wait kar raha hu kaha gaand mara raha tha saale.

Ravi - chup be ! Meeting thi isiliye gaya tha socha jab tak tu aayega tab tak to pahuch hi jaunga par tu badi jaldi aa gaya.
Rakesh - ha tujhe apni invention bhi to dikhani hain.

Ravi- chal bata bhai me bhi dekhna chahta hu

Tab tak shakuntala nasta le aati hain voh bhi vaha rukna chahti thi par lakin uske mayike waalo ka phone aa gaya aur phir to shakuntala ko mayike waalo ke Shiva koi dikhata hi nahi hain voh apne room chali gayi

Rakesh watch dikhate hain.
Ravi - abhe ye watch banayi hain tune saale scientist giri chhod watch machanic ka dhandha khol raha hain sadak pe aa jayega,

Rakesh - sun to mere bete sun to le

Ravi - bata
Rakesh apni Jeb se ek rabbar bend jaisa kuch nikala Jo dikhne me rubber band jaisa tha .par tha ek electronic gadget Jiska color red tha
 
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Dushro ki kahani copy karne se pahele writer se permission lena chahiyea Jo ki yea copy paster kabhi karta nahi, itna ego hai ki writer ka naam bhi menction nahi karta.
bhai shuru mi pad maine likha ki muje ye them pasand aaya tha isliiye ye kahani likh raha hu is writer ne kon si khani puri ki hi abhi to kuch likha bi nahi mi apne hissab se likhaunga
 

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1st story toh thikse start bhi nehi huwi..iss wale ka sirf naam same hain...baki sab neya hoga
 

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Rakesh - dekh agar ye rubber bend kinhi 2 logo ko pahna do aur me apni watch ka ye red button daba du to un dono logo ka body transformation ho jaayega jisse ki shareer vahi rahta hain par dono ka dimag ek dusre se exchange ho jaayega saaf saaf batau to aatma ek dusre se badal jayegi

Ravi - are wah yarr sunane me gajab ka lag raha hain
Rakesh - ise mujhe apni scientist ki meeting me dikhana hain jo ek maheene bad hone waali hain. Par us se pahle muje isko test karna hoga.



Ravi - me try karu

Rakesh - tu kya apni biwi se body transformation karvana chahta hi dekhta hi ki usse chudwate kitna maza milta hi
Ravi - nahi be aur me biwi se aisa kyu karunga bhala
Tabhi wha shakuntala bi aa gayi or ravi shakuntala ko rakesh ke naye invention ke baare mi batata hi jis ko sun kar shakuntala ke dimaag mi ek baat aayi huwa ye kuch din pehle hi shakuntala kobazar mi ek gunde ne cheda tha or jab ravi ne us ko roka to us ne shakuntal ke samne hi ravi ki khoob dunai ki thi bus tab se shakuntala ke dimag mi ye baat thi agar usse kabhi mouka mila to wo usse jaroor sabak sikhayegi
 
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shakuntala wo rubbar band pakad kar ravi ko dikha boli , rahul ke papa agar ye aap us gunde tapori ke sath try kare to usko acha sabak mil jayega
Ravi; thik keh rahi ho shakuntala or phir ravi rakesh se kehta hi wo ye rubber band usse 1 ghante ke liye de mi us admi se purani Dusmani mita lunga me us se apna body transformation karunga aur ek police waale ko pitunga jisse usko 1 din ki jail ki hawa khaani padegi. Par tu mujhe sahi time pe wapas us se badal dena
Rakesh - bhai se panga! Chaal aaj hi karte hi per is mi ek problem hi ki aatma ek dusre ki body mi transfer hone ke baad ye kaam se kaam us body mi 3 4 mahine tak rahegi phir khud hi wapis aa jayegi
Ravi ; yani ke ke muje 3 4 mahine phir us mawali ki body mi yehna hoga or phir usko sabak sikhane ke liye mi ye bi karung or phir shakuntala ki or dekh kar tum kya kehti ho
shakuntala ; jaisa aap thik samje
1 baj chuka tha dono isi kaam ke liye ghar se nikal gaaye . Jaate jaate rakesh ki Jeb se voh red rubber bend nikal gaya gate par pahuchte hi rakesh apne pocket check karne laga to pata chala ki Jeb se voh red rubber Bend nikal chuka hi jab voh dunte hai to unhe voh rubber bend unke pair se 2 kadam dur hi dikhai diya
 
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bhai shuru mi pad maine likha ki muje ye them pasand aaya tha isliiye ye kahani likh raha hu is writer ne kon si khani puri ki hi abhi to kuch likha bi nahi mi apne hissab se likhaunga
Suru Mai badh lia, original writer ka naam missing hai, toh tumko theme pasand aaya toh kisi ki bhi kahani chura lega wo bhi bina writer ki permission ki? Jayse tum karte ho or kahani ka satyanash Kar loge . tumne kon se apne Kahani puri ki hai wo batao?
 
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bhai shuru mi pad maine likha ki muje ye them pasand aaya tha isliiye ye kahani likh raha hu is writer ne kon si khani puri ki hi abhi to kuch likha bi nahi mi apne hissab se likhaunga
Wah bete shuru karo likhna lakin jaha tak maine dekha hain kuch naya nahi likha. Concept ke sath story bhi meri hain jab ki isi concept ke sath tum koi dusri story bana sakte the.
Suru Mai badh lia, original writer ka naam missing hai, toh tumko theme pasand aaya toh kisi ki bhi kahani chura lega wo bhi bina writer ki permission ki? Jayse tum karte ho or kahani ka satyanash Kar loge . tumne kon se apne Kahani puri ki hai wo batao?
Meri taraf se bolne ka thanks bro. Me kahani isiliye nahi likh raha kyuki meri gand mari padi hain. Sach me bro tum soch bhi nahi sakte voh huwa hain.
 
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karan1122

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Meri taraf se bolne ka thanks bro. Me kahani isiliye nahi likh raha kyuki meri gand mari padi hain. Maine apni gf khodi meri ankho ke samne. She is no more bro. Aise me mujhse ye story nahi likhi jaati.
Yea sun kar bahut bura laga bhai, ap ko gamm sahene ki sakti mile yeahi aasa karta hu, real zindabad pahele aati hai bhai aur baki sab baadh me, me samajh sakta hu ki aayse paristhiti mi kuch sochne mi bhi kitni muskil hoti hai, likhna toh Kafe durr ki baath he.

Apne kuch Alag socha tha bhai aur Alag soch Kar kahani likhne walo ka Hamesha se swagat raheta hai Lakin kuch copy karne wale ek aache kahani ko bhi porn type likh kar barbadh Kar dete hai jisse padh Kar bahut bura lagta Hai aur sayad apne Kahani ko bhi bbbb kuch aaysa na kare ise liye maine bola bhai.

Apne kuch Alag socha iske liye thanks bhai.
 
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