Incest Baap Ka Maal (completed)

[Mahi Maurya]

Nice ending

धन्यवाद आपका बहुत बहुत महोदय।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

कितना पढ़ेंगे महोदय,
पूरा दिन बीत गया लेकिन आपकी पढ़ाई अभी भी जारी है।

 

[Golu_nd]

mahi ji read my story......

 

[Avinashraj]

Madam ji sorry I hate insects story isliye koi pratikriya nahin di next jaldi suru kijiyega uske liye pehle se shubhkamnaye...

 

[Made4kill]

Thank you Mahiji… bahot badhiya kahani thi.. Mujhe yakeenhai ki main to is kahani ko baat baat padhunga

 

[TheBlackBlood]

कितना पढ़ेंगे महोदय,
पूरा दिन बीत गया लेकिन आपकी पढ़ाई अभी भी जारी है।

Time ki kami hai madam is liye pratikriya dene ka samay nahi mil paya. Khair kahani maine padh li hai aur khushi huyi ki aapne kahani ko anjaam tak pahucha diya hai,,,

Now I will say that this story was very thrilling in the beginning but in the last stage the story lost its interestingness. As I said many times about this, repeating the same thing over and over again in the story leads to boredom. Well, I hope that thrill suspense and mystery will be seen in the next story. Sex should not be given much importance in the story, but focus should be on what makes the story interesting and not boring. Baaki aapki mehnat aur lagan dekh kar achha laga. Itna asaan nahi hota daily update dena. Kahani me agar agar daily update aate hain to readers usse Jude rahte hain aur aapne iska achha khayaal rakha,,
Now waiting for your next such story which does not have sex but is full of interesting. Best wishes in advance for this,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

कितना पढ़ेंगे महोदय,
पूरा दिन बीत गया लेकिन आपकी पढ़ाई अभी भी जारी है।

Time ki kami hai madam is liye pratikriya dene ka samay nahi mil paya. Khair kahani maine padh li hai aur khushi huyi ki aapne kahani ko anjaam tak pahucha diya hai,,,

Now I will say that this story was very thrilling in the beginning but in the last stage the story lost its interestingness. As I said many times about this, repeating the same thing over and over again in the story leads to boredom. Well, I hope that thrill suspense and mystery will be seen in the next story. Sex should not be given much importance in the story, but focus should be on what makes the story interesting and not boring. Baaki aapki mehnat aur lagan dekh kar achha laga. Itna asaan nahi hota daily update dena. Kahani me agar agar daily update aate hain to readers usse Jude rahte hain aur aapne iska achha khayaal rakha,,
Now waiting for your next such story which does not have sex but is full of interesting. Best wishes in advance for this,,,,

 

[MaiHuNa]

 

[Mahi Maurya]

धन्यवाद आपका मान्यवर बहुत बहुत।।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Time ki kami hai madam is liye pratikriya dene ka samay nahi mil paya. Khair kahani maine padh li hai aur khushi huyi ki aapne kahani ko anjaam tak pahucha diya hai,,,

Now I will say that this story was very thrilling in the beginning but in the last stage the story lost its interestingness. As I said many times about this, repeating the same thing over and over again in the story leads to boredom. Well, I hope that thrill suspense and mystery will be seen in the next story. Sex should not be given much importance in the story, but focus should be on what makes the story interesting and not boring. Baaki aapki mehnat aur lagan dekh kar achha laga. Itna asaan nahi hota daily update dena. Kahani me agar agar daily update aate hain to readers usse Jude rahte hain aur aapne iska achha khayaal rakha,,
Now waiting for your next such story which does not have sex but is full of interesting. Best wishes in advance for this,,,,

धन्यवाद आपका बहुत बहुत महोदय,
आपने सही कहा। कहानी आखिर में अपने ट्रैक से उतार गई, जिसके बारे में आपने मुझसे के बार कहा गया, लेकिन इस बारे में मैं कुछ नहीं कर पाई,

आने वाली कहानी पूरी तरह से रोमांस, सस्पेन्स पर आधारित है। जिसमें 99.99 % सेक्स की गुंजाइश ही नहीं है। इसके अलावा आने वाली अगली कई कहानियों में सेक्स नहीं होगा। हम भी इससे पक चुके हैं।।

अगली कहानी तुम्हारे लिए- एक प्रेम कहानी 5 नवम्बर से शुरू कर रहे हैं। हमारा स्वागत करने के लिए तैयार रहिए।