Pramila Devi
Member
- 225
- 250
- 43
bahut khub,badiya ek jabardast story, bahut achi writingsUPDATE. 3
Aleena - (ye.. ye aj Kya hua.. ek anjan koale se bhi kale bhudde ne mere jism ko je bharke masla.. Puri manmani ki.. yaha Tak ki mere honto ko Tak chus liya.. aur main sab jante hue bhi kuch nahi Kar payi..)
Ab dubara mere dimag me wohi scene ghumne laga.. jab usne mere mulayam gulabi honto pe uske kale phate badbudar honth rakh the.. aur dubara Meri chut me halchal hone lagi..
Aleena - ( hosh me ate hue ) ye ye main Kya Kya soch rahi hun.. chii.. us haramkhor ki itni himmat kaise hue.. uski toh main chamdi luchwa dungi..
AB AGEY...
Us incidence ke baad Maine bohot kosis ki ke main Ashif ko sab kuch Bata dun.. lekin ye ek misunderstanding bhi ho sakti hai.. kyuki usne mujhe Farina samjke hi wo sab Kiya.. toh ushe Kya pata ke burqe ke andar main hun..( Aisa Maine socha tha.) aur mujhe Ashif ke gusse ke bare me pata hai.. uparse DGP.. kahin gusse me ake kalu ko janse hi na marde.. isliye Maine ye baat kisiko nahi bataiye.. aur ye tai karliya ki ab main pet shop pe harqis nahi jaungi..
( Ashif ko na batana .. ishe ek misunderstanding samajna mere liye bohot bura faisla hone Wala tha..)
Aise hi ye mahina bhi gujar gaya.. aur dubara wahi din Aya..
Aleena - Aqil.. tum itne jaldi Koko ko injection lagwake le ayie..
Aqil - nahi badi ammi..
Aleena - Kya.. aj tum nahi Gaye.. phir kaun..
Aqil - wo uncle aj se har mahine Koko ko gharpe ake hi injection lagaya karenge..
Aleena (shoked) - Kya..
Aise hi time nikalne laga.. aur duphar ka 1 baj gaya.. Main apne room me rest karne chali gayi.. aur Meri neend 4 baje khuli . main kitchen me Pani pine nikal gayi.. phir Maine kitchen ka Kam complete Kiya.. aur aise hi 6 baj Gaye.. aur Bahar mujhe kuch awaje sunai di.. jab Maine Jake dekha toh.. kaliya Koko ko injection laga Raha tha.. aur Jaise hi main bahar pohochi toh mujhe dekhke ek kamini hasi uske chere pe fail gayi..
Aleena - ( kamina kahinka kaise has Raha hai..)
Phir main andar AA gayi.. aur apne room me jaise hi ghusi..
Kalu - madamji..
Aleena - tum mere room me Kya Kar rahe ho.
Kalu - wo apse baat karni thi..
Aleena - mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..
Aur phir main gate ko band karne lagi.. toh
Kalu - us din pet shop pe AP hi thi na..
Aur Jaise hi Maine ye suna.. mere hath apne AP ruk Gaye.. aur kalu ne dubara adhe khule gate ko pura khol Diya..
Aleena - Kya Kya baat Kar rahe ho . Konse din. Main kabhi pet shop pe nahi gayi..
Kalu - Maine pet shop ka toh naam hi nahi liya.. aur waise bhi natak karne ki jarurat nahi hai.. mujhe Aqil ne sab Bata Diya hai.. usdin farina nahi.. AP thi.. waise kaisa laga Mera Lund hath me leke..
Ye sunke mujhe bohot gussa Aya..
Aleena - ye ye tu kya bakwas Kar Raha hai .
Kalu - bakwas kaha Sach keh Raha hun.. apki tarah naram chuchiyan Maine aj Tak nahi chui..
Aleena - tera ye ganda muh band rakh..
Kalu - muh se yaad Aya.. haa aur apke ye naram honth.. bas afsos ye hai ki naqab ke uparse chumne ko mile.. agar nange hote toh..
Ab ye sab sunke main gusse se tilmila uthi . Aur ek tez thapad kalu ke left gaal pe zhad Diya..
Aleena - harmkhor nikalja mere Ghar see
Thapad khane ke baad kalu bhi chup chap Ghar see nikal gaya.. aur main bed pe bhaithke sochne lagi..
Aleena - ( ye sab bohot ho Raha hai.. aj iski itni himmat ho gayi.. ki Mujhse itni gandi bate karne laga.. agar abhi ishe nahi roka toh agge Jake iski himmat aur badh jayegi.. nahi mujhe iska intezam karna hoga.. ab main is kamine ko apne Ghar ke ass pass bhi nahi bhatakne dungi..)
Ashif ko Maine Sach isliye nahi bataya kyuki waise bhi Ashif bohot gusse wale hai.. aur jab pata chalega ki mere sath kaliya ne Kya Kya Kiya.. toh kahin gusse me kaliya ko Mar hi na Dale.. aur khoon ke jurum me pata nahi Kya hi saja mile.. nahi main apne Ashif pe koi musibat nahi Anne dungi.. tabhi Maine kalu ko jhute case me phasane ki soch li.. aur Ghar ke char costly show pieces chupa diye.. aur chori ka ilzam kalu pe dalwa Diya.. aur Ashif ki wajah se mujhe jyada kuch karna bhi nahi pada.. phir kalu ko arest Kar liya.. aur case suru kardiya.. ushe bohot Mara lekin usne kuch nahi Bataya.. batata bhi Kya.. jab usne kuch kiya hi nahi.. sirf itna bolta Raha ke usne kuch nahi churaya.. aur Jo Sach bhi tha..
Phir security officers ne Chan bin suru kardi.. kalu ke Ghar me.. pet shop pe aur jaha jaha uske relatives the sab me . Lekin na toh kuch saman Mila.. na hi paise.. shak tha ki sayad usne saman bech Diya ho.. lekin usse baiche paise bhi nahi mile.. lekin Maine usse release nahi hone Diya.. aur usne DGP ke Ghar me chori ki thi.. toh akhir court ne ushe 6 mahine ke liye jail bhej Diya.. aur jab mujhe ye news mili toh mujhe bohot sukun Mila..
( After 6 months..)
Kaliya jail see release toh ho gaya.. lekin uski job chali gayi.. aur uska Ghar Jo kiraye see tha waha see bhi ushe nikal Diya.. aur Jo uske realtives the.. unho ne bhi ushe later Diya.. aur do mahine Tak bichara dar dar bhatakta Raha..
Kalu - us sali muli Randi ne Mujse sab kuch chin liya.. Mujhe Puri tariqe se barbad kardiya.. lekin ab bas bohot ho gaya.. main apne pe bithi har wo mar . Har wo beijati ka badla lunga..
( Phir ek din.. )
( Aamira's view.)
Tring.. tring..tring..
Aamira - hello..
Unknown caller - Tere bete ko jinda dekhna chati hai.. toh chup chap Meri baat sun..
Aamira - ye ye tum Kya bakwas Kar rahe ho..
Unknown caller - tere bete ko humne kidnap Kiya hai.. isliye muh band karke chup chap Meri baat sun.. warna..
Aamira - ( Aqil toh school gaya hai.. school me phone karke pata karti hun..)
Phir Maine school me phone Kiya.. toh pata Chala ki Aqil toh school pohocha hi nahi . Phir Maine wahi number se call lautaya..
Unknown caller - Kyu pata Kar liya na.. ab chup chap Meri baat kan kholke sun.. security officer ko batana bhi maat.. ye mujhe kehne ki zarurat nahi.. itni toh tu samjdar hogi hi..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - tuum konn ho aur mere Aqil ko Kyu kidnap Kiya hai.. please usse kuch maat karna..
Unknown caller - wo toh Tere upar hai..
Aamira - tum chate Kya ho.. please please.. mere Aqil ko chod do..
Unknown caller - mujhe Kya chaiye.. ye main badme bataunga.. pehle tu Teri ek photo bhej..
Aamira - kyaa??
Unknown caller - bhejti hai ya nahi.. ya Tere bete ki chiken sunna chati hai.
Aamira - nahi nahi.. please usse kuch mat karna..main bhejti hun..
Phir Maine ushi number pe WhatsApp pe apne ek photo send kardi..
Unknown caller - (wah sali Kya lagti hai ye.. )
Aamira - bhejdi Maine.. please ab toh mere bete ko chd do..
Unknown caller - pehle toh main sirf paise ki hi sochi Raha tha..
Aamira - toh batao tumhe kitne paise chaiye.. jitne mangoge main utne dungi..
Unknown caller - paise toh main lunga hi . Lekin ab sath me main kuch aur bhi lunga..
Aamira ( shocked.) - Kyaaa..
Unknown caller - wo main Kal bataunga..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - nahi please aisa maat Karo.. mere bete ko chod do..
Phone call disconnected..
Aamira - hello hello..
Phir maine sabkuch Iqbal ko Bata Diya ( sirf photo wali baat chodke.).. Iqbal ne Ashif bhaijaan ko.. aur Ashif bhaijaan ne Puri force ko aqil ko dhudne ke liye laga Diya.. aise hi aj ka din nikal gaya . Lekin Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
Aleena - aamira himmat see Kam lo.. khud ko control Karo..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - kaise himmat rakhun Aapi.. pura ek din ho gaya aur Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
To get continued.....
sexy update.UPDATE. 2
Jaise hi main Bahar nikli toh Mujhe pehli baar ushe Dekhte hi ghin ane lage.. aur ek ajib si badbu bhi.. Jo uske gande kapdon see aur uske kale jism ke pasine se mili juli thi.. usne ek phati maili si shirt aur niche ek ganda sa Sila hua pant pehen rakha tha.. aur uske muh me sayad wo kuch chaba Raha tha.. sayad tabacoo tha.. aur chera Kya bataun koala se bhi kala.. aur sar pe kuch gine chune Baal the.. Jo safed padne lage the.. aur dhadi bhi kuch kuch safed thi..
Kaliya - namaste hum kaliya hai.. log pyar se Hume kalu bulate hai.. hum apka kutta leke ayen hai..
Waise toh wo Mujhse 7-8 feet dur tha.. lekin jaise hi usne ye sab bolne ke liye muh khola.. waise hi mujhe sharab ki smell ane lagi.. toh mujhe samajte der nahi lagi.. ye drink bhi karta hai .. karta Kya karke Aya bhi hai..
AB AGEY...
Aqil( kalu se) - uncle AP mere ko le ayie..
Kalu - ha beta ye le tera kutta..
Aqil - ye.. badi ammi.. badi ammi.. ye dekhiye Mera Koko..
Jab main Aqil se baat Kar rahi thi.. tab mujhe laga ki koi mere boobs ko ghur Raha hai.. aur jab Maine kaliya ki taraf dekha toh uski najre mere boobs pe hi thi.. phir ekdum see usne apni najre nichi Karli.. aur mujhe bill pakdate hue bola..
Kalu - ye lijiye madam ji bill
Maine bill liya aur andar Jane lage.. waise hi mujhe laga ki koi Mujhe pichese ghur Raha hai.. aur jab Maine palatke dekha.. toh phir wahi ho Raha tha.. kalu ankhen phadke Meri Gand ko dekh Raha.. chalte waqt Meri Gand ki dono phanke apas me taqra rahi thi.. aur jab Maine ushe Dekhte hue pakda toh isbar usne najre nahi pheri.. balki bohot ghinoni hasi hasne laga.. Jise dekhke mujhe hi sharam AA gayi.. aur main tez kadmon ke sath andar chali gayi..
Aleena - (ye Kya tha.. Kya wo kamina Meri boobs aur ass ko ghur Raha tha..)
Ab mujhe wo admi kuch thik nahi laga.. toh Maine ushe dur rehne ki hi sochi aur paise liye.. mariyam ke hathon kalu Tak pohocha diye..
Ab har mahine dog ko vaccine lagti thi.. uske andar ke poison ko katne ke liye.. taki agar wo kisiko bite bhi karle toh koi problem na ho..
Ab aise hi 8 mahine nikal Gaye.. Iqbal starting ke do mahino me toh dog ko le gaya tha.. phir time na nikalne ki wajah se Farina( naukrani) ushe leke Jane lagi..
Aise hi 4 mahine aur nikal Gaye.. aur pura ek saal ho gaya.. jab humne koko( dog) ko adopt Kiya tha.. aur do din baad ushe vaccine bhi lagni thi..
(Vaccine day..)
Aqil - badi ammi.. aj Koko ko injection lagna hai.. AP chaliye na..
Aleena - Farina kaha hai.. arre ha wo to bimar hai na.. Teri ammi ko le ja..
Aqil - nahi wo gussa karti hai.. AP hi chaliye na.. please badi ammi..
Aleena - thik hai chal.. main taiyar hoke ati hun..
Ab mujhe nahi pata tha ki Mera aj pet shop pe Jana mere liye Zindagi ka sabse galat faisla hoga.. burqa aur uske sath naqab pehenke Jana usse bhi galat faisla hoga..
Ab jaise hi pet shop me hum entar hue
Aqil - badi ammi.. AP Koko ko leke us room me chali jaiye.. wahi injection lagta hai..
Aleena - tum nahi chaloge..
Aqil - nahi.. Uncle ne bola tha ki waha sirf bade log hi ja sakte hai.. bacche nahi..
Aleena - ( uncle...Oo Sayad pet shop owner ne bola hoga.) (haste hue) thik hai mere bacche..
Phir main Koko ko leke us room me chali gayi.. room me roshni kuch kam thi.. lekin itni nahi ki samaj me na ayie aur jab Maine Charo taraf najre ghumiye.. toh mujhe wo vaccination room Kam.. store room jyada lag Raha tha.. ab main jaise hi thode agge room me badi.. toh mujhe ye ehsas hua ki mere Picche koi hai.. aur Jaise hi main mudne wali thi . Usse pehle hi kisine mujhe picchese pakad liya..
Admi - tune toh phone pe kaha tha ki tu bimar hai . Nahi AA payegi.. lagta hai tu mujhe surprise Dena chati thi . Maine tujhe usdin bola tha ni.. ki mujhe muliyan burqe pehne hue kitni pasand hai.. Isiliye tu burqa pehenke ayie hai..
Ye kehte hue usne dono hath mere dono boobs pe rakh diye.. aur isse pehle main kuch react Kar pati.. usne jorse mere boobs ko masal Diya.. jisse Meri ahh nikal gayi.. aur ekdumse Mera Dil bohot zoron see dhadhak utha..
Admi (boobs masalte hue) - wah Meri Jan.. aj toh kapdon ke uparse bhi Teri chuchiyan bohot naram lag rahi hai.. itni naram toh kabhi Teri nangi chuchiyan bhi nahi lagi..
Ye kehte hue usne mere boobs ko joron see dabana suru kardiya.. jisse na chate hue bhi Meri dabi hui siskiyan nikalne lagi.. aur Meri dhadkane bohot tez chalne lagi..
Aleena - ummmm mmmm mmm
Admi - aj toh Teri siskiyan bhi badi madak lag rahi hai.. chatakkkk..
Phir usne uska right hath mere right boob see hataya.. aur burqe ke uparse hi Meri Gand ki right phak pe ek tez thapad zad Diya.. jisse Meri thodi tez ahh nikal gayi...
Aleena - (chatakkkk) ahaaaaa
Admi - Teri ye madak ahen sunke Raha nahi jata.. Meri muli Randi..
Aleena - ( Kya.. ye mujhe Kya bola.. Rannn..)
Ye kehte hue usne mujhe ekdum see ghumaya.. aur Jo Maine dekha mere pairon tale zamin kishak gayi.. kyuki Jo chera mere samne tha.. wo koi aur nahi kala kaluta kaliya hi tha.. aur isse pehle main kuch react karti.. ya sambhal pati.. usse pehle hi usne naqab ke uparse hi mere honto pe apne honth rakh diye.. aur naqab ke uparse hi mere honto ko chusne laga.. aur naqab ke babjud bhi uske muh se sharab ki aur tabacoo ki mili juli smell meri nank me Jane lagi.. aur Jaise hi uske honth mere honto se mile.. Mera Dil itni zorse dhadka.. jaise sine se Bahar hi nikal jayega..
Kalu ( kiss todte hue) - ab Raha nahi jata Meri Randi.. aj toh tune ek chumi me hi mere Lund ki Kya halat kardi.. dekh..
Ye kehte hue ekdum see usne uska pant underwear sahit niche gira Diya.. aur Jo Maine dekha.. usse Meri ankhen phati ki phati reh gayi.. aur pehli baar Meri chut me kuch halchal si Hui. Aur ek ajib see badbu Jo Maine aj Tak nahi sungi thi.. wo Meri nank see hote hue mere Dil me utarne lagi.. jisse mere hath pair thande padne lage.. aur chake bhi main kuch react nahi Kar payi ya ushe Picche nahi dhakel pa rahi thi... aur itne me hi Bahar shop me kuch awaje ane lagi..
Kalu - Sala is madarchod ko bhi abhi Ana tha.. chal jaldi see Mera maal nikalde..
Ye kehte hue agle hi pal kalu ne Mera left hath pakadke uske Lund pe rakh diye.. aur uski is harkat see main tilmila uthi.. sath hi mujhe ye ehsas bhi ho gaya ki main kiske sath kis halat me hun.. aur is baar Maine Puri taraq se ushe Picche dhakela.. aur bhagke room se Bahar nikal gayi..
Shop owner - arre AP.. injection lag gaya ??
Aleena - ( hafte hue..) wo. Wo. ma.. mainnn
Kalu - ha bas laga hi Raha hun..
Phir kalu ne Koko ko vaccine lagayi.. aur Maine bill settle Kiya.. phir hum jaise hi pet shop se nikalne ko hue.. ki Mera mobile bajne laga.. aur isse pehle main utha pati..
Aqil - badi ammi.. kiska call hai..
Kalu - ( badi ammi.. Matlab ye Farina nahi hai.. aur ye ishe badi ammi bol Raha hai.. Matlab ye wahi hai Kya..)
Aleena - ( ye phone bhi abhi Ana tha..) wrong number hai..
Ab Maine Aqil ka hath pakda.. aur shop se nikalke car ki taraf Jane lagi.. ek bar bhi piche mude bina.. aur car me bhaithke Maine apni akhen band Karli.. aur Ghar ake hi ankhen kholi.. aur Ghar ake main sidhe apne room me ghus gayi.. aur bed pe lait gayi..
Aleena - (ye.. ye aj Kya hua.. ek anjan koale se bhi kale bhudde ne mere jism ko je bharke masla.. Puri manmani ki.. yaha Tak ki mere honto ko Tak chus liya.. aur main sab jante hue bhi kuch nahi Kar payi..)
Ab dubara mere dimag me wohi scene ghumne laga.. jab usne mere mulayam gulabi honto pe uske kale phate badbudar honth rakh the.. aur dubara Meri chut me halchal hone lagi..
Aleena - ( hosh me ate hue ) ye ye main Kya Kya soch rahi hun.. chii.. us haramkhor ki itni himmat kaise hue.. uski toh main chamdi luchwa dungi..
To be continued..
Interesting story.UPDATE. 3
Aleena - (ye.. ye aj Kya hua.. ek anjan koale se bhi kale bhudde ne mere jism ko je bharke masla.. Puri manmani ki.. yaha Tak ki mere honto ko Tak chus liya.. aur main sab jante hue bhi kuch nahi Kar payi..)
Ab dubara mere dimag me wohi scene ghumne laga.. jab usne mere mulayam gulabi honto pe uske kale phate badbudar honth rakh the.. aur dubara Meri chut me halchal hone lagi..
Aleena - ( hosh me ate hue ) ye ye main Kya Kya soch rahi hun.. chii.. us haramkhor ki itni himmat kaise hue.. uski toh main chamdi luchwa dungi..
AB AGEY...
Us incidence ke baad Maine bohot kosis ki ke main Ashif ko sab kuch Bata dun.. lekin ye ek misunderstanding bhi ho sakti hai.. kyuki usne mujhe Farina samjke hi wo sab Kiya.. toh ushe Kya pata ke burqe ke andar main hun..( Aisa Maine socha tha.) aur mujhe Ashif ke gusse ke bare me pata hai.. uparse DGP.. kahin gusse me ake kalu ko janse hi na marde.. isliye Maine ye baat kisiko nahi bataiye.. aur ye tai karliya ki ab main pet shop pe harqis nahi jaungi..
( Ashif ko na batana .. ishe ek misunderstanding samajna mere liye bohot bura faisla hone Wala tha..)
Aise hi ye mahina bhi gujar gaya.. aur dubara wahi din Aya..
Aleena - Aqil.. tum itne jaldi Koko ko injection lagwake le ayie..
Aqil - nahi badi ammi..
Aleena - Kya.. aj tum nahi Gaye.. phir kaun..
Aqil - wo uncle aj se har mahine Koko ko gharpe ake hi injection lagaya karenge..
Aleena (shoked) - Kya..
Aise hi time nikalne laga.. aur duphar ka 1 baj gaya.. Main apne room me rest karne chali gayi.. aur Meri neend 4 baje khuli . main kitchen me Pani pine nikal gayi.. phir Maine kitchen ka Kam complete Kiya.. aur aise hi 6 baj Gaye.. aur Bahar mujhe kuch awaje sunai di.. jab Maine Jake dekha toh.. kaliya Koko ko injection laga Raha tha.. aur Jaise hi main bahar pohochi toh mujhe dekhke ek kamini hasi uske chere pe fail gayi..
Aleena - ( kamina kahinka kaise has Raha hai..)
Phir main andar AA gayi.. aur apne room me jaise hi ghusi..
Kalu - madamji..
Aleena - tum mere room me Kya Kar rahe ho.
Kalu - wo apse baat karni thi..
Aleena - mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..
Aur phir main gate ko band karne lagi.. toh
Kalu - us din pet shop pe AP hi thi na..
Aur Jaise hi Maine ye suna.. mere hath apne AP ruk Gaye.. aur kalu ne dubara adhe khule gate ko pura khol Diya..
Aleena - Kya Kya baat Kar rahe ho . Konse din. Main kabhi pet shop pe nahi gayi..
Kalu - Maine pet shop ka toh naam hi nahi liya.. aur waise bhi natak karne ki jarurat nahi hai.. mujhe Aqil ne sab Bata Diya hai.. usdin farina nahi.. AP thi.. waise kaisa laga Mera Lund hath me leke..
Ye sunke mujhe bohot gussa Aya..
Aleena - ye ye tu kya bakwas Kar Raha hai .
Kalu - bakwas kaha Sach keh Raha hun.. apki tarah naram chuchiyan Maine aj Tak nahi chui..
Aleena - tera ye ganda muh band rakh..
Kalu - muh se yaad Aya.. haa aur apke ye naram honth.. bas afsos ye hai ki naqab ke uparse chumne ko mile.. agar nange hote toh..
Ab ye sab sunke main gusse se tilmila uthi . Aur ek tez thapad kalu ke left gaal pe zhad Diya..
Aleena - harmkhor nikalja mere Ghar see
Thapad khane ke baad kalu bhi chup chap Ghar see nikal gaya.. aur main bed pe bhaithke sochne lagi..
Aleena - ( ye sab bohot ho Raha hai.. aj iski itni himmat ho gayi.. ki Mujhse itni gandi bate karne laga.. agar abhi ishe nahi roka toh agge Jake iski himmat aur badh jayegi.. nahi mujhe iska intezam karna hoga.. ab main is kamine ko apne Ghar ke ass pass bhi nahi bhatakne dungi..)
Ashif ko Maine Sach isliye nahi bataya kyuki waise bhi Ashif bohot gusse wale hai.. aur jab pata chalega ki mere sath kaliya ne Kya Kya Kiya.. toh kahin gusse me kaliya ko Mar hi na Dale.. aur khoon ke jurum me pata nahi Kya hi saja mile.. nahi main apne Ashif pe koi musibat nahi Anne dungi.. tabhi Maine kalu ko jhute case me phasane ki soch li.. aur Ghar ke char costly show pieces chupa diye.. aur chori ka ilzam kalu pe dalwa Diya.. aur Ashif ki wajah se mujhe jyada kuch karna bhi nahi pada.. phir kalu ko arest Kar liya.. aur case suru kardiya.. ushe bohot Mara lekin usne kuch nahi Bataya.. batata bhi Kya.. jab usne kuch kiya hi nahi.. sirf itna bolta Raha ke usne kuch nahi churaya.. aur Jo Sach bhi tha..
Phir security officers ne Chan bin suru kardi.. kalu ke Ghar me.. pet shop pe aur jaha jaha uske relatives the sab me . Lekin na toh kuch saman Mila.. na hi paise.. shak tha ki sayad usne saman bech Diya ho.. lekin usse baiche paise bhi nahi mile.. lekin Maine usse release nahi hone Diya.. aur usne DGP ke Ghar me chori ki thi.. toh akhir court ne ushe 6 mahine ke liye jail bhej Diya.. aur jab mujhe ye news mili toh mujhe bohot sukun Mila..
( After 6 months..)
Kaliya jail see release toh ho gaya.. lekin uski job chali gayi.. aur uska Ghar Jo kiraye see tha waha see bhi ushe nikal Diya.. aur Jo uske realtives the.. unho ne bhi ushe later Diya.. aur do mahine Tak bichara dar dar bhatakta Raha..
Kalu - us sali muli Randi ne Mujse sab kuch chin liya.. Mujhe Puri tariqe se barbad kardiya.. lekin ab bas bohot ho gaya.. main apne pe bithi har wo mar . Har wo beijati ka badla lunga..
( Phir ek din.. )
( Aamira's view.)
Tring.. tring..tring..
Aamira - hello..
Unknown caller - Tere bete ko jinda dekhna chati hai.. toh chup chap Meri baat sun..
Aamira - ye ye tum Kya bakwas Kar rahe ho..
Unknown caller - tere bete ko humne kidnap Kiya hai.. isliye muh band karke chup chap Meri baat sun.. warna..
Aamira - ( Aqil toh school gaya hai.. school me phone karke pata karti hun..)
Phir Maine school me phone Kiya.. toh pata Chala ki Aqil toh school pohocha hi nahi . Phir Maine wahi number se call lautaya..
Unknown caller - Kyu pata Kar liya na.. ab chup chap Meri baat kan kholke sun.. security officer ko batana bhi maat.. ye mujhe kehne ki zarurat nahi.. itni toh tu samjdar hogi hi..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - tuum konn ho aur mere Aqil ko Kyu kidnap Kiya hai.. please usse kuch maat karna..
Unknown caller - wo toh Tere upar hai..
Aamira - tum chate Kya ho.. please please.. mere Aqil ko chod do..
Unknown caller - mujhe Kya chaiye.. ye main badme bataunga.. pehle tu Teri ek photo bhej..
Aamira - kyaa??
Unknown caller - bhejti hai ya nahi.. ya Tere bete ki chiken sunna chati hai.
Aamira - nahi nahi.. please usse kuch mat karna..main bhejti hun..
Phir Maine ushi number pe WhatsApp pe apne ek photo send kardi..
Unknown caller - (wah sali Kya lagti hai ye.. )
Aamira - bhejdi Maine.. please ab toh mere bete ko chd do..
Unknown caller - pehle toh main sirf paise ki hi sochi Raha tha..
Aamira - toh batao tumhe kitne paise chaiye.. jitne mangoge main utne dungi..
Unknown caller - paise toh main lunga hi . Lekin ab sath me main kuch aur bhi lunga..
Aamira ( shocked.) - Kyaaa..
Unknown caller - wo main Kal bataunga..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - nahi please aisa maat Karo.. mere bete ko chod do..
Phone call disconnected..
Aamira - hello hello..
Phir maine sabkuch Iqbal ko Bata Diya ( sirf photo wali baat chodke.).. Iqbal ne Ashif bhaijaan ko.. aur Ashif bhaijaan ne Puri force ko aqil ko dhudne ke liye laga Diya.. aise hi aj ka din nikal gaya . Lekin Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
Aleena - aamira himmat see Kam lo.. khud ko control Karo..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - kaise himmat rakhun Aapi.. pura ek din ho gaya aur Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
To get continued.....
bahut badiya kahaani,bahut achi writings,bahut shandaar plots.UPDATE. 3
Aleena - (ye.. ye aj Kya hua.. ek anjan koale se bhi kale bhudde ne mere jism ko je bharke masla.. Puri manmani ki.. yaha Tak ki mere honto ko Tak chus liya.. aur main sab jante hue bhi kuch nahi Kar payi..)
Ab dubara mere dimag me wohi scene ghumne laga.. jab usne mere mulayam gulabi honto pe uske kale phate badbudar honth rakh the.. aur dubara Meri chut me halchal hone lagi..
Aleena - ( hosh me ate hue ) ye ye main Kya Kya soch rahi hun.. chii.. us haramkhor ki itni himmat kaise hue.. uski toh main chamdi luchwa dungi..
AB AGEY...
Us incidence ke baad Maine bohot kosis ki ke main Ashif ko sab kuch Bata dun.. lekin ye ek misunderstanding bhi ho sakti hai.. kyuki usne mujhe Farina samjke hi wo sab Kiya.. toh ushe Kya pata ke burqe ke andar main hun..( Aisa Maine socha tha.) aur mujhe Ashif ke gusse ke bare me pata hai.. uparse DGP.. kahin gusse me ake kalu ko janse hi na marde.. isliye Maine ye baat kisiko nahi bataiye.. aur ye tai karliya ki ab main pet shop pe harqis nahi jaungi..
( Ashif ko na batana .. ishe ek misunderstanding samajna mere liye bohot bura faisla hone Wala tha..)
Aise hi ye mahina bhi gujar gaya.. aur dubara wahi din Aya..
Aleena - Aqil.. tum itne jaldi Koko ko injection lagwake le ayie..
Aqil - nahi badi ammi..
Aleena - Kya.. aj tum nahi Gaye.. phir kaun..
Aqil - wo uncle aj se har mahine Koko ko gharpe ake hi injection lagaya karenge..
Aleena (shoked) - Kya..
Aise hi time nikalne laga.. aur duphar ka 1 baj gaya.. Main apne room me rest karne chali gayi.. aur Meri neend 4 baje khuli . main kitchen me Pani pine nikal gayi.. phir Maine kitchen ka Kam complete Kiya.. aur aise hi 6 baj Gaye.. aur Bahar mujhe kuch awaje sunai di.. jab Maine Jake dekha toh.. kaliya Koko ko injection laga Raha tha.. aur Jaise hi main bahar pohochi toh mujhe dekhke ek kamini hasi uske chere pe fail gayi..
Aleena - ( kamina kahinka kaise has Raha hai..)
Phir main andar AA gayi.. aur apne room me jaise hi ghusi..
Kalu - madamji..
Aleena - tum mere room me Kya Kar rahe ho.
Kalu - wo apse baat karni thi..
Aleena - mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..
Aur phir main gate ko band karne lagi.. toh
Kalu - us din pet shop pe AP hi thi na..
Aur Jaise hi Maine ye suna.. mere hath apne AP ruk Gaye.. aur kalu ne dubara adhe khule gate ko pura khol Diya..
Aleena - Kya Kya baat Kar rahe ho . Konse din. Main kabhi pet shop pe nahi gayi..
Kalu - Maine pet shop ka toh naam hi nahi liya.. aur waise bhi natak karne ki jarurat nahi hai.. mujhe Aqil ne sab Bata Diya hai.. usdin farina nahi.. AP thi.. waise kaisa laga Mera Lund hath me leke..
Ye sunke mujhe bohot gussa Aya..
Aleena - ye ye tu kya bakwas Kar Raha hai .
Kalu - bakwas kaha Sach keh Raha hun.. apki tarah naram chuchiyan Maine aj Tak nahi chui..
Aleena - tera ye ganda muh band rakh..
Kalu - muh se yaad Aya.. haa aur apke ye naram honth.. bas afsos ye hai ki naqab ke uparse chumne ko mile.. agar nange hote toh..
Ab ye sab sunke main gusse se tilmila uthi . Aur ek tez thapad kalu ke left gaal pe zhad Diya..
Aleena - harmkhor nikalja mere Ghar see
Thapad khane ke baad kalu bhi chup chap Ghar see nikal gaya.. aur main bed pe bhaithke sochne lagi..
Aleena - ( ye sab bohot ho Raha hai.. aj iski itni himmat ho gayi.. ki Mujhse itni gandi bate karne laga.. agar abhi ishe nahi roka toh agge Jake iski himmat aur badh jayegi.. nahi mujhe iska intezam karna hoga.. ab main is kamine ko apne Ghar ke ass pass bhi nahi bhatakne dungi..)
Ashif ko Maine Sach isliye nahi bataya kyuki waise bhi Ashif bohot gusse wale hai.. aur jab pata chalega ki mere sath kaliya ne Kya Kya Kiya.. toh kahin gusse me kaliya ko Mar hi na Dale.. aur khoon ke jurum me pata nahi Kya hi saja mile.. nahi main apne Ashif pe koi musibat nahi Anne dungi.. tabhi Maine kalu ko jhute case me phasane ki soch li.. aur Ghar ke char costly show pieces chupa diye.. aur chori ka ilzam kalu pe dalwa Diya.. aur Ashif ki wajah se mujhe jyada kuch karna bhi nahi pada.. phir kalu ko arest Kar liya.. aur case suru kardiya.. ushe bohot Mara lekin usne kuch nahi Bataya.. batata bhi Kya.. jab usne kuch kiya hi nahi.. sirf itna bolta Raha ke usne kuch nahi churaya.. aur Jo Sach bhi tha..
Phir security officers ne Chan bin suru kardi.. kalu ke Ghar me.. pet shop pe aur jaha jaha uske relatives the sab me . Lekin na toh kuch saman Mila.. na hi paise.. shak tha ki sayad usne saman bech Diya ho.. lekin usse baiche paise bhi nahi mile.. lekin Maine usse release nahi hone Diya.. aur usne DGP ke Ghar me chori ki thi.. toh akhir court ne ushe 6 mahine ke liye jail bhej Diya.. aur jab mujhe ye news mili toh mujhe bohot sukun Mila..
( After 6 months..)
Kaliya jail see release toh ho gaya.. lekin uski job chali gayi.. aur uska Ghar Jo kiraye see tha waha see bhi ushe nikal Diya.. aur Jo uske realtives the.. unho ne bhi ushe later Diya.. aur do mahine Tak bichara dar dar bhatakta Raha..
Kalu - us sali muli Randi ne Mujse sab kuch chin liya.. Mujhe Puri tariqe se barbad kardiya.. lekin ab bas bohot ho gaya.. main apne pe bithi har wo mar . Har wo beijati ka badla lunga..
( Phir ek din.. )
( Aamira's view.)
Tring.. tring..tring..
Aamira - hello..
Unknown caller - Tere bete ko jinda dekhna chati hai.. toh chup chap Meri baat sun..
Aamira - ye ye tum Kya bakwas Kar rahe ho..
Unknown caller - tere bete ko humne kidnap Kiya hai.. isliye muh band karke chup chap Meri baat sun.. warna..
Aamira - ( Aqil toh school gaya hai.. school me phone karke pata karti hun..)
Phir Maine school me phone Kiya.. toh pata Chala ki Aqil toh school pohocha hi nahi . Phir Maine wahi number se call lautaya..
Unknown caller - Kyu pata Kar liya na.. ab chup chap Meri baat kan kholke sun.. security officer ko batana bhi maat.. ye mujhe kehne ki zarurat nahi.. itni toh tu samjdar hogi hi..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - tuum konn ho aur mere Aqil ko Kyu kidnap Kiya hai.. please usse kuch maat karna..
Unknown caller - wo toh Tere upar hai..
Aamira - tum chate Kya ho.. please please.. mere Aqil ko chod do..
Unknown caller - mujhe Kya chaiye.. ye main badme bataunga.. pehle tu Teri ek photo bhej..
Aamira - kyaa??
Unknown caller - bhejti hai ya nahi.. ya Tere bete ki chiken sunna chati hai.
Aamira - nahi nahi.. please usse kuch mat karna..main bhejti hun..
Phir Maine ushi number pe WhatsApp pe apne ek photo send kardi..
Unknown caller - (wah sali Kya lagti hai ye.. )
Aamira - bhejdi Maine.. please ab toh mere bete ko chd do..
Unknown caller - pehle toh main sirf paise ki hi sochi Raha tha..
Aamira - toh batao tumhe kitne paise chaiye.. jitne mangoge main utne dungi..
Unknown caller - paise toh main lunga hi . Lekin ab sath me main kuch aur bhi lunga..
Aamira ( shocked.) - Kyaaa..
Unknown caller - wo main Kal bataunga..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - nahi please aisa maat Karo.. mere bete ko chod do..
Phone call disconnected..
Aamira - hello hello..
Phir maine sabkuch Iqbal ko Bata Diya ( sirf photo wali baat chodke.).. Iqbal ne Ashif bhaijaan ko.. aur Ashif bhaijaan ne Puri force ko aqil ko dhudne ke liye laga Diya.. aise hi aj ka din nikal gaya . Lekin Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
Aleena - aamira himmat see Kam lo.. khud ko control Karo..
Aamira ( rote hue.) - kaise himmat rakhun Aapi.. pura ek din ho gaya aur Aqil ka kuch pata nahi Chala..
To get continued.....