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Zabardast update bhai
Good start.
Bhout zabardast bhai
Kahani ki romanchak shuruaat. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Interesting plot. Continue please.
Nice n fantastic starting
Nice
nice story and Mazedar Update
Love from Karachi princess
Jabardast update
Waiting for next update
Congratulations for new story.story kuchh hat kar lag rahi hai.next update plz
shukriya pyaar aur suppor ke liye update posted read and comment give me your opinionWaiting
Mind-blowing update fantastic great writing skillsParichay Karan's Parivar
pradeep sharma - 70 dada
nutan sharma - 66 dadi
ranjeet sharma - 46 papa - ranjeet ki teen patniyan hain
vasanti- 42 sauteli maa
akriti - 42 sauteli maa
rupali - 40 karan ki maa
pranali - 19 vasanti ki beti hai
kanika - 18 akriti ki beti hai
karan - 18 rupali ka beta hai
puneet sharma - 44 chacha
meenakshi sharma - 42 chachi
dilip 21
divya 20
sachin 18
sujeet sharma - 43 chacha
swati sharma - 40 chachi
sourav 21
aditi 20
priya 18
sourav dilip dono ne ranjeet ko ghayal avastha me bandhe dekha to chilla uthe the. bhaag kar uske pass ja pohnche the
karan-------- nahi ruko aap dono. ye woh hai jo apnu ki izzat ko dushman hai. ye woh giddh ha jo apni aulad ka maas khane ka shaukeen hai.
ranjeet ka sar pahli bar sharam se jhuka tha. sourav dilip gahri chintit me aaye karan ko apne tav ko dekh rahe the.
sourav------- karan ye sab kyaa hai
dilip-------- tav ko kyu bandh rakha ha tune
sourav------- ye kyu kaha tumne tav parivar ki izzat ke dushman ha. aisa kaise ho sakta ha.
dilip-------- tav aur giddh meri to kuch samjh me nahi aa raha hai
rakan ne sourav dilip ko koi jawab nahi dia hathodi liye apne papa ke pairon me ja betha sourav dilip ki ab nazar padi thi ranjeet ke kuchle angothu aur ungliyn par dono cheekhe the
karan ke lahje me khoon ki mehak jani to kanp uthe------- bata in sab ko apne saale kale kartoot
ranjeet bina sar uthaye short me batata chala gaya sourav dilip to sadme se girne lage
karan apne papa ko nafrat se dhrna se dekhta uth khada hua fir palang par ja betha
dilip sourav dono ranjeet ko dekhte ab rone lage the.
dilip------ kyu tav kyaa kami chhodi thi humne aap ke samman me. kyaa apne pita se kam aap ko samman dia.
sourav------ sach to ye ha humne apne pita se bhi zayada samman dia aap ko. jitna vishwas humne aap par kiya itna to shayad bhagwan par bhi kabhi nahi kia. dilip ki ankhon me ansu the------- kyu kiya aap ne aisa vishwasghat apne hi bhaiyo par. kyaa hum aap ke bachhe nahi the.
sourav------ aap ek bar kah dete kasam janam dene wali hum apne ang kaat kar aap ke chrano me daal dete.
karan bhi bhavuk hone laga apne bhaiyo ki baaten sunkar. sar jhukaye betha dono ke dard bhari baaten sunne par majbur tha.
der tak sourav dilip dono apni apni bhadak nikalte rahe. dilip sourav ko karan ke jaise ranjeet par gusa nahi aaya tha. fir dono karan ke pass aaye to karan uth khada hua karan ne dono ko bheegi ankhon se dekha dono ek sath karan se lipat gaye. aur phoot phoot kar rone lage.
karan------ mujhe woh sare pal yaad ha dilip bhaiya sourav bhaiya jo aap ke sang beete. aap ne apne hisse ki har cheez mujhe di. khud bad me khaya pahle mujhe khilaya. ap ke prem ka badla nahi lauta sakta. haan lekin itna kah sakta ha. mere hawasi baap ne jo nahi kia ap sabhi ke liye, mera wada hai woh sab karunga. pyaar ke badle dunga. itna zayada dunga sambhal nahi paaoge aap.
dilip-------- kuch mat kah karan. tujhpar to mai khud se bhi zayada bharosa karta hon
karan------- bharosa to aap is kutte par bhi bohut karte the
dilip------- tav ki baat chhod to apni baat kar.
sourav------ sach to ye ha tu humse chhota hokar bohut bada ban gaya ha. jis baat ki khoj hum mahino me nahi kar sake the tune do hi dino me kar dali.
dilip ab ke garv se bolta hai------- sach me karan mere bhai tum bohut bade bankar aaye ho. jab tum shahar padhne ja rahe the socha bhi nahi tha tu aisa bankar aayega. prem ka mahasagar ban kar aayega. angrakshak ban kar aayega. sahayak bankar jaayega.
sourav rota hua emotions me bah raha tha fir bhi hasta hua bola------- aur zalim bhi
dilip aur karan dono has pade
dilip------ dil to bohut dukha mera par mai chah kar bhi tav ke sath aisa nahi kar skata tha.
sourav----- karne to door ki baat thi hum to aisa soch bhi nahi sakte the, hum to tav se unche sur mein bol hi nahi sakte the.
ranjeet ka jhuka sar aur zayada jhukne laga
karan------ aisa karna zaruri tha. nahi karta to ek sath kai zindagiyan tabah ho jati. parivar ki lut-ti izzat puri lut jati. hamari bahno ke sapne bikhar jaate. hum sab bikhar jaate. sukhi jeevan ke liye kabhi kabhi zaalim banna padta ha. fir ye to woh kutta ha jo apnu ki hi izzat ka dushman hai.
dilip aur sourav hairat se karan ko dekhne lage karan ne bua ka bata dia. pahle jo dilip sourav ko ranjeet par gusa nahi aaya tha karan se sach jaan kar dono bade guse me aa gaye. jo baat kar rahe the ranjeet ko hath lagane ki soch bhi nahi sakte the. dono ranjeet par baras pade thappadon mukkon se uski dhulai karne lage. ranjeet behosh ho gaya.
karan ke wapis se dono pohnche
dilip--------- kitne ahsan karega tu humpar karan. humne tujhe itni mohabbatein bhi nahi thi
sourav-------- hum to tere samne bohut chhote ho gaye yaar. itni badi baat se hum sab anjaan rahe.
karan------- mai ghar jaa raha hon. ap aisa karna. sham tak idhar hi rahna. fir hamare ganv ki dusri orr wala jo makan khali ha ise wahan ek kamre me kaid kar dena. kisi ko khabar nahi hona dena. mujhe shahar ja kar confirm karna hoga. kya pata ye abhi bhi humse kuchh chhupa raha ho.
sourav------ karan bhai tum jayale bhi ho aur samjhdar bhi.
fir bhavuk hua karan se lipat gaya------ humen hamari koi chinta nahi thi karan mere bhai. hum gareeb ban bhi jee lete lekin parivar ki izzat aur bahno ke sapne adhure rah jane par sukh chain sab humse chhin jata. humen kuch nahi chahiye bhai. chaho to hamare hisse ka bhi sab apne naam kar lo. hamesha tav par bharosa kia. aaj tujhpar apna bharosa jatate han.
sourav ne dono hath jod diye-------- hamari bahno ko unke hisse ke sare sukh de do. iske siva humen kuch aur nahi chahiye. kuch nahi chahiye.
karan sourav se lipat gaya tha
dilip bad me firse karan se lipat bola tha------ jeevan itna dukh dega socha nahi tha. par tere jaise bhai ke hone ka sukh bhi milega mai anjan tha.
karan dilip se josh se lipat gaya. kuch der me karan waha se nikal pada. bahar vikas uska intezar kar raha tha. karan ko dekh bhaag kar uske pass aaya.
vikas------ maine intezam kar dia woh randi mastarni ganv se bahar nahi ja sakti. par uska karna kyaa hai
karan alag hi mood me aaya bola------ kabhi kisi school mastarni ki chut maari ha tune. shakuntla ki chut dekhi ha kabhi uski gand dekhi ha. uske gore mote chuche jinke nipples bade ghayal kar dene wale hain. bol uske moh me lund daalega tu. gaand to tu zarur maarna chahega uski
vikas ka moh khul gaya tha. karan hasne laga. vikas ka moh aur zayada khul gaya
vikas karan se lipat kar bola----- karan mere yaar kasam ganga maiya ki tu sher ka kaleja rakhta ha. itna kuch ho jane ke bad bhi tu aisa bol raha ha. sab kuch barbad hone ki kagar par ha, parivar ki izzat mitti me milti dikh rahi ha aur tu.. tu bada zinda dil ha mere yaar. main to nihaal ho gaya apne yaar ko aise shant dekh kar. daulat hath se jate dekh logo ko pagal hote dekha ha maine. tu deewar se kooda kaise. main to pagal ho utha tha. tu to bandar se bhi futila nikla yaar.
karan hasne laga------- sab baad me. pahle tu bata us randi ki maarega ke nahi
vikas is bar has pada------- sach kahun to mere jaise angotha chhaap ke liye mastarni ko dekh muth maarne ki anumati bhi nahi hoti. tu kah raha ha to soch lunga
karan------- chal fir mastarni ko leke alag hi makan par pohnch mai milta hon tujhse
vikas khush ho gaya. karan waha se ghar ko chal pada. karan aise shant tha jaise kuch hua hi na ho.
ghar pohnch karan ko sabse pahle apni maa rupali hi dikhi. karan ghar me ghuste hi apni maa par nazr padte ruk gaya tha. aaj pahli baar karan apni maa ko alag hi nigah se dekh raha tha.
rupali ki karan par nazr padi. apne bete ko stabdh khade khud ko mohit hote dekhte pa kar rupali khil uthi. chalti hui uske pass aai karan ke gaal ko chum gai.
rupali------ aaj bade pyaar se apni maa ko dekh raha ha tu karan beta
karan------- maa aap ko bukhar ha kya
rupali ascharya se------ bukhar?. nahi to mujhe bhala bhukhar kyu aayega.
karan------- fir aap ka shareer itna garam kyu hai
rupali has padi------ shareer garam nahi hoga to kyaa thanda ho ga. thanda ho gaya na to zarur mujhe kuch ho jaayega. shareer garam rahta ha tabhi to saans bhi chalti rahti ha. shareer thanda tabhi padta ha jab aatma shareer ko chhod deti ha.
rupali ab masti me aai boli thi
karan hasa to rupali bhi has padi-------- shukar ha teri hasi mann bahla deti ha. warna to aaj kal jaise halat chal rahe hai hasi ko taras hi gai hon mai bhi sabhi ke jaise.
karan------- karan jaise bete ke hote hue aise shabdo ka paryog. kyaa ye karan ka apmaan nahi ha
rupali khil uthi karan ke gaal ko firse chum gai------ maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha itni si umar me mera karan itni badi badi baaten karna seekh jayega. tu jab gaya tha to mera dil nahi maan raha tha. ek hi tu mera laal ha. kaise tujhe khud se door bhej sakti thi. par aaj tujhe aisa dekh 5 barson ki saari tadap mit gai ha. mai to dhanny ho gai karan beta tere jaise bete ki maa bankar. chal mere sath andar sab tere liye kitne chintit han. tu abhi tak sahi dhang se kisi ke pass betha bhi nahi hai.
karan apni maa ka hath pakad andar jaane laga. tabhi divya kamre se nikli to karan ko chillai thi------- karan aa gaya
sab bhag ke bahar nikli. karan ko dekh khil uthi. fir moh banati dekhne lagi
karan pass pohnch dono kaan pakad kar uthak baithak karne laga
kai khilkhila kar hasne lag pagi thi.
kanika------- pant phat jaayegi teri karan
pranali------ ruk abhi karan mai mobile utha laaon pahle
priya------- uska kyaa karegi
pranali----- peeche khadi hoke video shoot karunga. instagram par upload karungi. mere followers badhegi mere bhai ki phati pant dekh kar
sab zor se has pade the------ aur pichhwade dekh kar comments ki bharmaar ho jayegi
sachin-------- didio meri video bhi bana lia karo kabhi. mana ke mere instagram par followers ki sankhya kam ha. arre parivar ka iklota hero hon, kuch to help karo uski.
sab aur zor se hasne lage the. karan bhi uth khada hua tha.
meenakshi------ vasanti karan ke aane se mahol wapis laut aaya ha na
vasanti karan ko niharti hui kahti hai------- han meena karan ko shahar jane dene ka hamara nirnay itna shandar sabit hoga kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha mann kitne dukhi han hamare. lekin karan ke sath mil sab dekho kaise har baat bhul kar masti par utar aaye han
rupali bhi pas ja khadi hui------ hamara karan bohut badi badi baaten karna bhi seekh aaya ha
swati akriti bhi pass aa khadi hui bachhe apni masti karne lage ye apni baten karne lagi
swati------ kya kah rahi ha rupali karan aur badi badi baaten abhi se. ye umar to masti mazak karne wali ha. bhala is umar me badi badi baaten kise karni aati ha
rupali karan ko firse niharti ha------- maine suni han uski baaten. sach me karan ke moh se jo shabd maine sune han. sari chintaen bhul bethi hon main
akriti------ kya baat karti ho rupali
rupali------ main bhi hairan hui thi abhi tak ho rahi hon. par meri kokh ka bacha ha na, tabhi vishwas aa gaya
menakshi------ vishwas? kaisa vishwas
rupali--------- yehi keh jaise tension aaj kal hamare ghar me chal rahi ha karan beta humen sari chintaon se mukt kar dega.
nutan jo pahle bachhon ko dekh smile kar rahi thi paas ka rupali ka moh chum gai---------- tere moh me ghee shakkar. bhagwan kare aisa hi ho
karan ne tabhi sab bado ko dekh smile kar di
rupali khil uthi-------- dekha karan hamari baaten sun aur samjh raha ha. uski smile se kya samjhi ho aap. mai to bohut kuch samjh gai
vasanti dil par hath rakhti boli------ kyaa samjhi ho rupali jaldi se bol. bohut samay se koi khushi ki khabar nahi suni.
rupali------ tu karan ki kon ha
vansati garv se----- maa
rupali ne akriti ko dekha------- aur tu
akriti------- karan mera bhi beta ha
dono chachio se poocha wo bhi bol padi------ karan hum sab ka beta
divya chillati hai-------- pagal ho aap sab badi boodhiyan kahi ki. huh meri to abhi shadi bhi nahi hoi aur aap kah rahi hain karan sab ka beta hai.
sab itne zor se hase the bimar pradeep sharma bistar se uth ke bahar sab ke beech aa gaya tha-------- sab itne khush han aur mujhe boodha samjh kar nazr andaz kiye hue ho. ye to galat ha
karan apne dada ke pass pohcha dada ka hath pakad kar wahi rakhi ek chair par bitha gaya
pradeep-------- bhagwan tujhe sada sukhi rakhe karan beta
divya firse nak moh tedha karti wahi baat bol gai. sab aur pradeep milkar hasne lage.
pradeep ki ankhon me ansu aane lagte han aisa mahol to usne puri umar nahi dekha tha. pichhle kai mahino se to maut ka sannata chhaya dekhta aa raha tha.
karan neeche beth ke bolta hai-------- dada jaan ye kushiyan kami kam nahi hongi. main hon na is parivar ka dusra pradeep sharma. kabhi kisi ki ankhon me ansu nahi aane dunga ye wada karta hon. ansu aaye bhi to khushi ke aaayenge. itne sukh dunga main sab ko dil sambhal nahi paayega pressure badhega aur ankhen barasne lagengi.
pradeep ka moh khul gaya tha karan ke moh se aise shabd sunkar. fir karan ko khech kar apne seene se laga gaya tha.
idhar sachin aur sab larkiyon ke moh bhi khul gaye the karan jab se aaya tha aaj pahli baar aise bola tha.
rupali ab nam ankhon se apni umar ki sangiyo ko dekh bolti hai------ dekh lia na ye hamara karan hi ha. dekho to kitna bada ho gaya hai.
nutan to ro padi thi apne kano ke zever utarne lagi ye dekh rupali to jhat apne gale ka haar hi nikaal gai thi. daan karne ke vaste.
karan ke liye ye pyaar anokha tha, aaj se pahle dekhne ko nahi mila tha.
meenakshi, akriti swati vasanti kyu peeche rahti woh bhi apne zever utarne lagi. sachin bhaag ke andar gaya bahar aaya to uske hath me rifle thi. sachin rifle ki naal aakash ki karta pure josh ke sath ghode par ungli rakh hatana bhul gaya. tadtadahat ke sath pura parivar pura ganv chaunk utha. udhar sourav dilip chinta me aaye karan ko call karne lage. idhar sari larkiyan jo kai mahino se murjhai hui thi khil uthi dance karne lagi
karan ke dono chacha ganv ke kisi ke pass bethe baten kar rahe the. apne ghar par firing sun ghabra gaye uth khade hue bhag pade wo dono bhi aur adha ganv bhi. karan ne call sun dilip aur sourav ko chinta mukt rahne ko bol dia. idhar puneep sujeet ghar pohnche to jaise marne wale ho gaye the. par jab andar ka mahol dekha to dang rah gaye.
pradeep ganv ka sabse bada zameendar ghirana tha. 200 acre zameen ki malik the pradeep sharma. pr ranjeet sharma ki hawas ne sab barbad kar dia tha sari zameen aur ghar rahn rakhe the. mahino se ganv walun ki hairat ki koi seema nahi the. ghar ghar me inke charche the. sab samjh rahe the pradeep sharma ka khel ab khatam. par yaha jaisa mahol dikha ganv wale bol pade------ ye firing ye bachhion ka khushi bhara naach..... pradeep sharma tere aur tere parivar ke bhago me barbadi sambhav nahi. pradeep sharma tu dayalu ha bhagwan ki khas kripa ha pradeep sharma tujhpar.
peeche mud dekhte puneep sujeet dono ke dilon se awaz nikli----- bhagwan aap sabhi ka bhala kare.
tabhi rupali ke sath sab bhaag kar aai. sab ke ankhon me ansu aur hathun me zever the. sab ke sab puneet sujeet ke hathu par rakhti ek sath boli
sab---------- ye sab zever bech dijiye aur zarurat pade to hamare pass aur hain sab bech dengi hamare ghar ki khushiyan laut aai han hamara karan laut aaya ha bhagwan ki khas kpriya hoi ha hamare karan bete par. sab ganv walun ko khana khilaiye koi bhuka na rahne paaye. koi bhuka na sone paaye.
karan apni maaon ko itna khush dekh sochne laga--------meri teeno maaen shadi ke bad pahla mahina har raat aur baki ke itne varshon me 2 se 3 baar hi chud paai han mere hawasi papa ranjeet se. fir bhi kitni khush hain. bina shareer sukh ke bhi itni khush????????. karan mann hi mann me kuch nirnay lene laga.
jaari hai.....