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Bahot badhiya shaandar updateUpdate 8
Subhe 8:00 baje ke kareeb Vinayak ki aankhen kulti Hain wo uth kar beth jata Hain aur achanak hi Vinayak ke aankhon ke samne ek screen AA jati Hain
Aur sweety Vinayak se bolti Hain
Sweety: good morning boss
Vinayak: good morning sweety
Sweety: Boss aapke liye 2 good news hai
Vinayak: achcha FIR bolo kya good news hai
Sweety: ek yeh ke apka level up ho Chuka Hain yani P level 1 main poch chuke ho
Vinayak yeh sun kar khush ho jata hai aur puchta hai
Vinayak: aur dosri good news Kya hain
Sweety: apko Apke Kuch superpower activate ho chuki hai jisko aapko Apne kabu karna hoga aur wo kese karte Hain main apko batao gi
Vinayak jab yah sunta hai to aur bhi excited hota hai aur puchta hai Kon Kon si super power activate Hui hai
Sweety: Boss aapki 3 superpower activate Hui hai
Vinayak: aur wo Kon Kon si
Sweety: 1st scaning powers
Is power se aap Kisi bhi chij ko ya insan ko ya koi bhi chij ho aap usko scan Karke pata Laga sakte ho Lekin filhal aap sirf is prithvi ke logon ko hi scan kar sakte ho jaise jaise aapke level badhate jaenge theek waise waise aapke power badhati jayegi FIR aap pure brahmand mein kisi bhi chij ko scan kar sakte ho FIR chahe vah aapse bhi jyada powerful ho kyon na ho aur use chij ki takat aur kamjori sab aapko Bata dega
2nd power
aap Kisi ki bhi yaddasht mita sakte ho FIR chahe vah 1 ghante pahle ki Hui ghatna hone se aap chahe bhula sakte ho ya 20 sal purane Koi ghatna jise aap chahe aap uski yaddash mita sakte ho
3rd power
Ap Apna Aakar Apne hisab se chota aur Bada kar sakte ho Matlab ap ek monster se lekar ek chiti thak a Aakar le sakte ho
Vinayak Apne in 3 power ke bare main jaan kar bohut khush hota Hain phir sweety aghe bolti Hain
Sweety:aur boss ap pahle virgin tha air jis ke Saath Apne Kal rat sex Kiya tha woh bi virgin thi ishi liye apko 25+ point mile Hain Matlab Apke pass ab 50 point hain
Vinayak: ha Tum Sahi bol rahi ho tum batao main kese istamal karo
Sweety: Dekho boss apko in sab point ko Apne stats main dalna chahiye
Vinayak: acha Zara dekao kesa Hain mera stats
Phir Vinayak ki aankhon ke samne ek aur screen atta hain
[Stats:
Strength - 96/110
Intelligence - 91/110
Agility - 88/110
Endurance - 84/110
Appearance - 85/110
Ramming point 40+10 bonus points
Vinayak yeh dek kar system se puchta hai
Vinayak: sweety yeh Kya hain pahle jab Maine dekha tha tap to yeh 100 per the phir ab
Sweety: boss pahle ap Apne point is main add kar do phir main apko Batati ho
Vinayak: acha 9 point mere strength main add kardo aur 9 point main Intelligence aur 12 point Agility main add kardo aur 16 point Endurance add kardo aur Jo 4 point bacha hue Hain wo Appearanceain add kardo
Sweety: ok boss waise Apne thek hi Kiya ke Apne Appearance 4 point add kar diya nahi toh pata nahi ladkiyou ka Kya hota
Vinayak: ladkiyou ko chodo ager samreen di ya dada Dadi poch lete to Kya karta ishi liye mainne Appearance main sirf 4 point add kar diye
[Stats:
Strength - 105/110
Intelligence - 100/110
Agility - 100/110
Endurance - 100/110
Appearance - 89/110
Remaining point 00]
Yeh dek kar Vinayak khush hota Hain
Sweety: Suno ab main Jo batane jaa Rahi ho pahle Suno
Jaisa ke Maine apko Bataya ke ab ap leval 1 per ho toh iska matlab yeh Hain ke jaisa ke 1 sadaran insan Jo training nahi karta nahi exercise karta hai aur na hi usko fight atti Hain ager wo Kisi musibat main fas jaye toh usko asani se mar sakte Hain aur wahi ager wo training Shuru karta Hain exercise karta hai aur fighting sikhata hai top dere dere takatvar hota jata hai FIR usko maarna mushkil ho jata hai theek vaise hi is system kyon levels Hain jaise jaise aap level complete karte jaenge vaise vaise aap takatvar hoti jaenge aur har EK level ki complete hone per aapki stats main 10 point ka izafa hota jaye ga jaisa ke hoa Hain pahle 100 tha Lekin ab jab Tum leval 1 per pahunch gaye ho to ab 110 per AA giya Hain aur ab jab ap leval 2 tak pahuncho ge toh yeh 120 ho jaye ga aur dere dere apki strength being badhati jayegi jab aap level 20 tak pahunch jaenge tab aapko aapki puri shaktiyan mil jaenge aur uske sath aapki sari takat bhi samjhe ab aur jab ap middle leval per porcho ge tab apko apki ek chakra milta jaye ga jaisa ke ap jante ho ke total 5 tatwa hote Hain
1 agni tatva
2 vayu tatva
3 Akas tatva
4 jal tatva
5 prithvi tatva
Jab bhi ap middle level per punching mein tab tab aapko insan tatvon mein se ek ek tatv milta rahega jaisa ki abhi ap leval ek per pahunche ho apko agni tatva mil Chuka Hain Lekin apko isko Apne kabu main Karna Hoga samje
Vinayak sari baat samajh jata hai aur bolata hai
Vinayak: thek hain Lekin inko main Apne kabu main kese karo
Sweety: apko deyan laghane Hoga boss
Vinayak: acha aur mujhe Kitna samay lag Jayega es agni tatva ko Apne kabu main Karne ki
Sweety: lagbag 4se 5 din aur apko aj se hi yeh Karna Hoga warna ager galti se bi agni tatva active ho gaya toh Tum jante ho issue Kya tabahi as sakti hain
Vinayak samajh jata hai aur sweety se bolata hai to use karna Karun main aaj hi dhyan rakha Leta Hun
FIR Vinayak uthkar bathroom Chala jata hai aur dekta hain ke Sonia pahle se hi jaghi hui se Vinayak Bolta hain
Vinayak: good morning Tum thek to ho na
SSonia : very good morning main bilkul thek hi mujhe Kya hona Hain
Vinayak: abhi toh Dard toh nahi ho Raha hain
Sonia yah sun kar sharmane lagti Hain aur bolti Hain
Sonia(Sharmate hue) Nahin main bilkul theek hun kuchh Nahin hua mujhe
Phir Vinayak Kuch nahi bolta aur fresh hokar dono bahar aate Hain Bahar as kar Vinayak breakfast order karta Hain aur dono breakfast Karke hotel se check out hokar Apne Ghar chale jate hain aur ghar pohucte he Vinayak Sonia ko bye bolkar Apne Ghar Chala jata Hain jab Vinayak Ghar jata Hain toh hall main hi sab beth kar baate kar Rahe the Vinayak waha ja kar sab ko ignore Karke sirf samreen aur s.dada aur s.dadi ko Apne Jane ke bare main Bata Hain s.dadaji bolte hain
S.dada ji : kaha ja Rahe ho
Vinayak: dada ji mujhe 1 zarori kaam ki wajha se Kahi Jana hain ager nahi gaya toh bohut badi problem ho jayegi
Vinayak ko samreen rokne ki Koshish Karti Hain per Vinayak kese na kese Karke samreen ko mana leta Hain aur waha se Chala jata Hain ek jungle ki taraf
Is jungle ke bare main Vinayak ko sweety ne bataya tha Yaha aa kar Vinayak deyan Laga leta Hain 4 din ka deyan main wo Apne 3no power ke Saath agni tatva bi control kar let's Hain Vinayak jab deyan se jab atta hain aur apni agni tatva ko jagret kar deta hain
Aur dekte hi dekte aur pore ka pore aag ki lapet main AA jata Hain phir wo apni Baki power ka istemal Karke dekta hain sab thek hota Hain aur us jungle se Nikal kar wapis Mumbai main AA jata Hain aur ek shopping mall main AA jata Hain waha Apne liye ache kapde lets Hain shadi type aur dulhe aur Dulhan ke liye ek acha sa gift leta Hain aur chal deta Hain Apne sotele mama ke Ghar waha ponch kar jab wo Ander Jane hi wala hota Hain ke ek ladka aur ek ladki isko rok lete Hain
Ladka: Kon ho tum aur Yaha Kya kar rahe ho
Vinayak: Yaha shadi ho Rahi Hain to atand Karne aya ho
LAdki : wo to thek hain per Tum ho Kon aur kis taraf se ho
Vinayak: main ladke walo ki taraf se ho
Ladka : sorry ager Tum kehte ke Tum ladki walo ki taraf se ho toh main maan jata per ab Tum fas chuke ho
Vinayak: main Kuch samja nahi
Ladki : Matlab yeh ke hum bi ladke walo ki taraf se Hain per tumko to hum nahi jante
Vinayak: to is mainain Kya kar Sakta ho ager Apne mujhe nahi pehchana
Ladka : Abe oo bikari ki aulad zarasi Kya Pyar se baat karli tu to hamare sar per Chad giye ho
Ladki: ha aur nahi to Kya aur Dekho toh 1000 rupee wali sherwani pehan kar AA giya aur attitude to Dekho
Itna bolkar unki haath main Jo juice ka gilas tha wo Vinayak ke uper pank deti hain Vinayak ko bohut gussa atta hain abhi wo us ladke sur ladki ko marne hi wala the ke Piche se ek ladki ki awaz ATI Hain Jo Kisi AUR ki nahi samreen kehti hsin
Samreen: Kya kar rahe ho aur yeh ladka Kon Hain
Ladka : pata nahi di Kon Hain yeh
Itne main samreen bi pass pohanch jati Hain jab woh dekti Hain ke yeh ladka koi aur nahi balki uska Bhai Vinayak Hain usko gussa AA jata Hain aur
Chatkkkkk chatkkkkkk
Do tabad mar deti hain
Samreen: Tum dono ki himmat kese hoi mere Bhai ki insalt Karni ki
Jab dono ladka aur ladki yeh sunte hain toh shock ho jate hain phir samreen Vinayak ko Ander lekar Chali jati Hain jab Vinayak Ander enter karta Hain Vinayak ki Nazar sidhe stage per jati Hain aur Gusse main uske aankhen lal ho jati Hain aur samreen se botla Hain
Vinayak: di ap chalo Anderain isko saaf Karke ata ho
Yeh bolkar Nina samreen ki ka jawab sune bagir waha se Chala jata Hain
Todi dor ane ke bad Vinayak rok jata Hain aur stage ki aur dek kar gusse main Bolta hain
Vinayak: us din toh tu Bach giya tha per aj nahi aj main tujhe mar kar hi Raho ga
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Vinayak ki shaktia badh Rahi h Jo bahot zaroori bhi h
Yeh dono kon the Jo itni bad tameeje se baat kia Vinayak nor stage per kisko dekh ker itna gussa ho gaya
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya