Naik
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Yeh tow dono baap beta bade khadoos h ab dekhte ashu kaise theek kerta h dono koare bhai jaldi karo warna pahunchte pahunchte shaam ho jayegi
ye aawaz maine neeche haal me baithe baithe lagai thi
aaj mujhe Anita ke mayke yani apne sasuraal jana thaa
Anita upar tayyar ho rahi thi puja aur maa uski help kar rahi thi
tayyar hone ke baad jab Anita neeche aayi to main use dekhta hi reh gaya
mera muh khula ka khula reh gaya mujhe apni taraf aise dekhte hue pakar Anita hasne lagi
maa bhi mujhe dekh kar hasne lagi aur haste hue boli
maa...ashu muh band kar le warna makkhi ghus jayegi
maa ki baat sunkar main had bada gaya mujhe aise hadbadaate hue dekh kar maa jor jor se hasne lagi
maa ko haste hue dekh kar main jhemp gaya aur ghar ke bahar akar gaadi ki seat par baith gaya aur gaadi ka horn bajane laga horn ki awaz sunkar
sabhi bahar aa gaye Anita bacche ko lekar aage ki seat par baith gayi
Anita ke baithte hi puja Anita ke paas aaka udaas hote hue boli
puja...didi jaldi aana aapke bina mera dil nahi lagega
puja ko udaas dekh kar Anita ne kaha
Anita .....puja tu udaas mat ho main jaldi aa jaungi aur tere chahre par ye udaasi acchi nahi lagti chal mere liye muskura de
Anita ki baat sunkar puja ke chahre par halki si muskaan aa gayi
jaise hi hum chalne ko hue maa ne rokte hue kaha
Maa....ashu tu aaram se jaana aur aaram se aana showroom ki chinta mat karna wo Tere papa dekh lenge
main....hmmmm
phir sabne by kaha aur hum nikal liya
main jaise driving karte hue shaher se bahar aaya maine haste hue Anita se kaha
Main....jaan aaj to tum qayamat lag rahi ho ek pal ko dil kiya main tumhara mayke jana cancel kar deta hoon
Anita muskurate hue boli
Anita .....accha ji to main aapko itni sundar lag rahi thi ya khaali makkhan laga rahe ho
main....makkhan kya mera to bahot kuch lagane ko dil kar raha thaa magar kya karun majboor hoon
Anita .....ashu ab jyada batein mat banayye aur gaadi chalane par dhyaan dijiye
main...jo agyya
meri baat sunkar Anita jor jor se hasne lagi
mujhe gaadi chalaate hue 5 ghante ho chuke the isliye maine gaadi ko ek dhaabe par rok di aur neeche utar kar sir jhukaate hue Anita ki taraf ka gate khol diya
Anita mere sir jhuka kar aise gaadi ka gate kholne se muskuraate hue gaadi se bahar aa gayi
Bahar aate hi Anita ne bacche ko mujhe diya aur bathroom karne chali gayi
Bathroom se aane ke baad humne khaana khaya aur uske baad coffee pikar phir se chal diye
8 ghante ke lambe safar ke baad hum Anita ke gaon pahunch gaye
Anita ka gaon main road se 20 km andar thaa
shaam ke 6 baj chuke the hum gaadi se utar kar Anita ke ghar ke bahar pahunch gaye
Anita ne ghar ki ghanti baja di thodi der baad kisi aadmi ne ghar ka gate khola aur kuch der wo Anita ko dekhta raha shayad pehchaanne ki koshish kar raha thaa jab wo acchi tarah pehchaan gaya to bina kuch bole gate se hat gaya aur Anita bacche ke sath andar chali gayi
main saala chutiyon ki tarah gate par khada thaa tabhi Anita phir se bahar aayi aur mujhe bhi sath lekar chali gayi
main samajh gaya ki gate kholne wala aadmi Anita ka baap hai
( main yahan ghar ke logon ka intro de deta hoon )
Uttam Kumar......age 51 Anita ke papa ye kitne uttam hain ye aage pata chalega
Sunita......age ...47 Anita ki maa
Sanjay Kumar.....age 29 Anita ka bhai
Madhu......age....26 ...Anita ki bhabhi
thoda ghar ke baare me bhi jaan lete hain
Anita ke mayke ke ghar me total 5 room hain 2 upar aur 3 neeche 2 bathroom hain 1 bathroom upar ki chat pe bana hai aur ek neeche ek kichen aue ek chota sa haal hai
Ghar itna accha nahi thaa to jyada kharab bhi nahi thaa )
ab aate hain kahani par
hum dono ghar ke haal me baith gaye magar koi saala puchne wala nahi thaa main bhi soch raha thaa ki kahan phas gaya
Main abhi ye soch hi raha thaa ki kisi ne Anita ko aawaz di
Anita ne aawaz ki disha me dekha wo bhi ek tak aawaz dene waale dekh rahi thi magar kuch bol nahi raha thaa
Thodi der aise dekhne ke baad
Anita meri bacchi main hoon teri maa
Main samajh gaya ki ye Anita ki maa hai magar phir bhi Anita kuch nahi bol rahi thi
maine Anita ko ishare se kaha ki wo apni maa se baat kare Anita mera ishara samajh gayi Anita bacche ko mujhe dekar uth gayi aur apni maa ke paas jakar khadi ho gayi
Anita sirf khadi thi kuch bol nahi rahi thi shayad wo apni pichli jindgi ke kaaran aisa kar rahi thi
jab Anita kuch nahi boli aur sirf khadi rahi to uski maa ne khud aage badh kar usko gale laga liya
Magar phir bhi Anita koi response nahi de rahi thi
Jab Anita ne koi response nahi diya to maine Anita ki maa se kaha
main...aunty ji anita se baith kar baat kar lijiye
Meri baat sunkar Anita ki maa ne anita ko chhod diya aur mere samne aakar baith gayi
Anita bhi mere paas baith gayi Anita ke baithte hi uski maa ne phir se Anita se kaha
Sunita ....Anita tu kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hain
Anita kuch jawaab deti ki itne me ghar baaki log bhi aa gaye unme se do log to mujhe bilkul khadus nazar aa rahe the
Aur ek shayad Anita ki bhabhi thi jo kabhi meri taraf dekh rahi thi kabhi Anita ki taraf dekh rahi thi aur muskura rahi thi
Sabke Aane se ANita ki maa bhi chup ho gayi
Tabhi ek aadmi ne kuch ishara kiya jo shayad Anita ka baap thaa uska ishara pakar Anita ki maa ne hum dono se kaha
Sunita .....Anita chalo tum dono
Anita ....kahan
Sunita .....upar ke kamre me
Anita ki maa ki baat main apni jagah se uth gaya Mere uthte hi Anita bhi bacche ko lekar uth gayi aur hum upar room me aa gaye
Anita ki maa hum dono ko room me chhod kar chali gayi unke jaate hi maine haste hue Anita se kaha
Main...jaan bada ajeeb pariwaar hai
Anita ...ashu hum kal hi yahan se chale jayenge
Main....nahi Anita mujhe lagta hai tumhari maa tumse kuch kehna chahti hai magar shayad tumhare baap ki wajah se bol nahi pa rahi hai aur shayad tumhari bhabhi bhi kuch kehna chahti hai magar is ghar ke mardon ke dar ki wajah se bol nahi pa rahi hain
Anita muh banate hue boli
Anita .....mujhe kuch nahi pata hum kal apne ghar Jayenge
Main ....Anita tum meri itni si baat nahi maan sakti
Anita ....ashu tumhare liye to main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon
main....to phir apni maa ki baat sun lo ki wo kya kehna chahti hain
Anita....hmmm
Abhi hum baat kar rahe the ki kisi ne room ka darwaza khat khataya
Anita ne darwaza khola to saamne Anita ki bhabhi madhu khadi thi
Madhu ne muskurate hue Anita se kaha
Madhu....Anita tu aur tere unko bula le neeche khana khane ke liye
Madhu ki baat sunkar Anita ne mujhse kaha
Anita ...ashu chalo neeche chalte hain
Madhu chaunkte hue boli
Madhu ....Anita kya tu apne pati ko naam se bulaati hai
Anita ....bhabhi ye baat aap inse hi puch lena ki main kyun inko naam se bulaati hoon
madhu haste hue boli
Madhu ....baad me puch lungi abhi neeche chal
Ye kehte hue madhu neeche chali gayi main bhi Anita aur bacche ke sath neeche chal diya
neeche pahunch kar dekha to ghar ke dono aadmi ghaane ki tebble par baithe the aur dono aurten khadi thi ye nazara dekh kar mujhe gussa to bahot aaya magar main is waqt baat ko bigadna nahi chahta thaa isliye maine bahana banate hue madhu se kaha
Main....abhi mujhe bhook nahi hai bhabhi aap mera khana mere room me de dena
Ye kehte hue main room me aa gaya peeche se Anita bhi aa gayi
Anita samajh gayi thi ki maine khana kyun nahi khaya
1 ghante ke baad madhu ne room ke bahar se aawaz di
Madhu....kya main andar aa sakti hoon
Anita ....aa jao
Madhu andar aa gayi uske hath me khana thaa khana rakhte hi madhu ne Anita se muskuraate hue kaha
Madhu .....Anita tum bhi khana kha lo aur apne unko bhi khila do
Madhu ki baat sunkar Anita ne muskurate hue mujhse kaha
Anita ....ashu aao khana kha lo
Khana khane ke baad madhu khali bartan le kar chali gayi
Madhu ke jaate hi Anita ki maa room me aa gayi room me aate hi Anita ki maa ne anita se mamta bhari awaz me kaha
Sunita ....Anita tu mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai
Anita rukhi aawaz me boli
Anita ....kya baat krun main aapse main to yahan aana hi nahi chahti thi magar meri maa ne mujhse kaha ki ek baar main apne mayke walon se mil lun isliye chali aayi kayunki main apni maa ki baat kabhi nahi taalti hoon
Sunita ....kyun baat nahi karegi kya main teri maa nahi hoon
Anita gusse se boli
Anita ....maa kya hoti hai ye aapko seekhna chahye agar nahi seekh payi to mere sasuraal aa jana aur meri saas se seekh lena ki maa kaisi hoti hai
Anita ki baat sunkar Sunita ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye aur Sunita rote hue boli
Sunita ....Anita main bahot mazboor hoon
Anita ....jhooth mat bolo maine to suna thaa ki ek maa ke liye uske bacche hi sab kuch hote hain aur aapne to maa ke naam ko hi kalankit kar diya
Sunita rote hue boli
Sunita ....tu chahe jo samajh mujhe magar main jaanti ki main tujhse bahot pyar karti hoon
Anita ....ek aur jhooth
Sunita .....agar main jhooth bol rahi hoon to ye bata de ki teri padhai kaise hue kyunki tera baap to tujhe padhana hi nahi chahta thaa
Anita ...mujhe kya pata
Sunita ...tujhe kaise pata hoga kyunki ye baat sirf main jaanti hoon maine hi tere baap ke aage apne hath pair jod kar unko manaya thaa taaki tu padh sake
Anita ke liye ye baat kisi jhatke se kam nahi thi magar phir bhi Anita ne rukhe swar me kaha
Anita ....chalo main aapki baat maan leti hoon ki mere padhne me aapka hath thaa agar aap mujhse itna pyar karti thi to shaadi ke baad kabhi mujhse milne kyun nahi aayi aur ek phone bhi nahi kiya
Sunita ....tere baap se maine jab bhi kaha ki mujhe meri beti se milna hai to unhone saaf mana kar diya unka kehna thaa ki humne uski shaadi kar di hai ab chahe wo jaisi bhi jindgi jiye humko usse koi matlab nahi hai
Anita .....aap akeli aa sakti thi
Sunita ....is ghar me saare adhikaar sirf mardon ke paas hain wo chahen tab hi hum kahin ja sakti hain warna nahi ja sakti aur bechaari madhu ka bhi yahi haal hai padhi likhi hone ke baad bhi aisi jindgi ji rahi hai
Anita ....phir mujhe is baare me kyun nahi pata
Sunita ....tujhe kaise pata hoga padhai puri hote hi teri shaadi ho gayi aur tu apne sasuraal chali gayi
Anita .....sasuraal jaane ka ye matlab to nahi ki koi apni beti ko bhool jaaye
Sunita .....main tujhe kabhi nahi bhuli isliye maine tere baap se ek baar jab bahot haath pair jode to wo badi mushkil se maan gaye the magar
Anita ....magar kya
Sunita .....usi beech ajay ka phone aaya ki usne tujhe talaq de di hai kyunki tera kisi ke sath chakkar hai tere baap ne jaisi hi ye baat suni to gusse se aag Babula ho gaye aur gusse me keh diya ki tu unke liye mar gayi hai aur ajay ne ye bhi bataya thaa ki us ladke ka naam ashu hai jiska tere sath chakkar hai
Ye dono baat kar rahi thi tabhi mujhe room ke gate par kisi ke hone ki aahat hui
Maine unchi aawaz me kaha
Main...jo bhi hai ander aa jao
Meri baat sunkar wo shakhas ander aa gaya use dekhte hi maine kaha
main....bhabhi aap aapko aise chori se baatein sunne ki kya jaroorat hai andar aa jaati
Ji Haan ye madhu thi jo chori se baatein sun rahi thi aur uski bhi aankhein nam thi
Maine madhu se haste hue kaha
Main....bhabhi aapko to aise hi room aa jana chahye akhir aap mere saale ki patni hain to itna to haq banta hai mujh par
Meri baat sunkar madhu ke chahre par muskaan aa gayi
Maine phir se haste hue kaha
Main....Matlab is ghar me do Nagine hain aur do hi kamine hain nagine to aap dono hain aur kamine baap aur beta hain dono ko theek karna hi padega
Meri baat sunkar teeno ke chahre par muskaan aa gayi
Anita ke saare gile shikve dur ho chuke the aur uski narazgi door ho chuki thi
ab mujhe kuch aisa karna thaa ki ye dono bhi sudhar jayen isliye maine haste hue kaha
Main....dekho agar tum log mera sath dogi to main baap bete dono ko seedha kar dunga
Meri baat sunkar madhu ne seerias hote hue kaha
Madhu .....ye itna aasan nahi hoga lag bhag namumkin hai wo dono kabhi nahi sudharne wale
Madhu ki baat sunkar Sunita ne bhi kaha
Sunita ....Haan beta ye itna aasan nahi hai tum ye sab kaise karoge main to kehti hoon ki tum do chaar din ruk kar apne ghar jao tum inke chakkar me mat pado wo dono nahi sudharne wale
Main....agar main chala gaya to aap dono ki jindgi kabhi nahi sudhar payegi aur main apni aankhon ke saamne itna bada anyaya nahi hone dunga main un dono ko bataunga ki hamari jindgi me aurat kya ahmiyat rakhti main un dono bataunga ki aurat kisi ki gulaam nahi hoti hai aurat se hi ghar pariwaar hai aurat se hi hamara vansh aage badhta hai aurat to Laxmi ka roop hai jiski hum puja karte hain aur jo aurat ka tiraskaar karta hai uske ghar kabhi Laxmi ka vaas nahi hota hai
Meri baat sunkar Anita ki maa ki aankhon me aansu aa gaye aur wo rote hue boli
Sunita ...beta tumhare vichaar kitne acche hai tabhi to tum aisi baat kar rahe ho aur Anita bhi tumhari maa ke hi baare me mujhse bol rahi thi ki maa kaisi hoti hai ye mujhe tumhari maa se seekhna chahye
Main.....aunty jis pariwaar me pyar hota hai wahi pariwaar hota hai aur main chahta hoon ki is pariwaar me pyar bharne ke liye aap dono mera sath den aap kya kehti hain bhabhi
Madhu meri baat sunkar boli
Madhu....ashu main tumhare sath hoon
Main....dekho hum chaar log hain aur wo do hain hum unse double hain isliye ab main jaisa kahunga aap log waisa hi karna aur aap dono ko kya karna hai ye main aapko kal bataunga
dono ne apni gardan haan me hila di phir kuch der aur baat karne ke baad wo dono chali gayi
Dono ke jaate hi main Anita ke roop saundrya ko niharne laga aur Anita ka hath pakar ek aahh bharte hue kaha
Main....jaan main aaj tumhari jor daar chudai karna chahta hoon tum kya kehti ho
Anita muskurate hue boli
Anita ....kyun aaj pyar se kaam nahi chalega
Main...nahi jaan aaj pyar se nahi main tumko apne dande ki maar dena chahta hoon kyunki subah se tumhara ye roop saundrya mujhe chain nahi lene de raha hai
Anita ....jaan aaj main tumhare man ki karne dungi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye
Anita ki haan hote hi maine Anita ki jabardast chudai ki
anita ki siskariyan cheekhein aahen raat ke 3 baje tak gunjti rahi
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