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Shubham abhi so ke utha tha or kal ke hue ghatnao ke bare me soch raha tha. Kal har samay busy rahte hue bhi wo apni dono bibi ko unke anushar pyaar diya. Kahte h na samay ka pata nhi chalta magar kal uske jivan me kai mor aaye pahle akhre me uss aurat ko dekha jo paisa or ijjat ke alawa kuch nhi dekhti wahi wo uss admi ko bhi dekha jisse aaj bhi kisi ke aaneka intjaar h. Wahi usne ek aise vaykti ko bhi dekha jiske bare me wo achha smjhta h. Par wo ek astin ka saap h.(ye shubham ko nhi pata h) wahi usne uss shkash ko apne se chhupte ya kisi or se chhupte dekh jisse wo apna sabse bara dushman smjhta h. Or uss shaksh ko bhi dekha jo mithe jahar ki tarah jindagi me dakhal dena suru kar diya h. Bass wo jisse dekhna chahta tha usse wo dekh nhi saka yhi uske liye bahut jyda udashi ka karan raha. Or abhi wo yhi soch me duba tha.

Me- (maan me) kaha ho aap kal ke din to aa jate mujhe pata h appki koi galti nhi h. Bass ek baar aa jao mai aapko dekh lunga to sukun se raah sakunga. Or wo kaha h jo meri maa ke baad meri maa ka pyaar diya iss mele me bhi to aa skti thi. Aap dono se milna chahta hu plzz aa jao dinu mere yaar tu hi aaja mere yaar akhir kab tak apne iss bhai se durr rahega. Didi kamse kam tu to aaja dekh tera bhai tujhe yaad kar raha h. Mai to tumhi logo ke liye itne sare camere lagwaye h plzz aa jao didi plzzz.

Shubham ye sochte hue rone laga wo kai baar sohan ko bhej chuka tha dhundhne par kuch pata nhi lag pata tha. Issi karan usne mele me camere lagwaye jisse uska bhi faida ho par ab taak uski wo didi wo bhai wo maa nhi aai jisse wo yaad kar raha tha.

Sohan- tu kyu roo raha h kya hua aaj tak kabhi tujhe rote nhi dekha.
Me- bhai mujhe mera bhai dinu khoj ke la de aree wo mujhe bhaiya bhaiya bolta tha aaj mere kaan tarash rahe h uske mooh se bhai sune ko. Or or didi ka to mai sabse pyara bhai tha sabse pyara wo mujhe pyaar se darling bolti thi plzz bhai mujhe unke mooh se darling suna h bula de bhai agar wo aai to paka maa bhi aa jayegi or mujhe beta beta kah ke gale laga legi bhai la de bhai. (Shubham ye kahte hue rone laga wo to achha tha yaha koi aata jata nhi tha kyuki ye ghar khet ke beecho beech tha)

Sohan- dharya se kaam lo bhai mai gaya tha par pata nhi chal saka munhe lagta h wo kahi or chale gaye h.
Me- kahi or kaise chale jayenge bhai mai bhi to unka beta hu alhir wo kahi or kaise jayenge.
Sohan- hmm... Par tune bataya tha wo bahut garib the to syd kaam kaaj ke liye bahar gaye honge.
Me- to tu abhi jaa khoj ke laa.
Sohan- haa la denge pahle aaj ki puja ke liye chal wahi bhagwan se parathna kar syd bhagwan teri soon le.
Me- ha ha tu sahi bolta h tu mandir pahuch mai abhi aata hu.
Sohan- or soon cm aaj 10 baje taak aayega mtlb 3 ghante bache h. Aree soona lagta h nhi suna.

Sohan ye kahte hue maan me "mere yaar kaise batau tujhe teri life me yaha bhi wahi kundali mare baitha h jisse tu marna chahta h. Par ye kaam mujhe apne tarike se handle karna hoga nhi to tu sach me apne hi pariwar me khoon ki nadiya baha skta h" sohan ye sochta hua waha se nikal gaya.

Kajal- ye aapko kya hua aankh kyu suje h.
Mamta- haa didi dekho na kabse puchh rhi hu bata hi nhi raha.
Kajal- batao kyu suje h.
Me- woo kuch nhi ankh me kira chal gaya tha.
Kajal- mujhe jhuth matt bolo kya baat h didi ki yaad aai kya.
Me- kajal se lipat ke rote hue) bhabhi kaisi hogi didi maa bhai kiss halat me honge.
Kajal- ek mard kabhi roo nhi skta or tum mard hoke roo rahe ho.
Me- kya mard me koi emotion nhi hote kya wo pathar ka hota h.
Kajal- rote hue) nhi nhi emotion hote h par kya karu mujhe bhi rona aa raha h plzz matt roo.

Tabhi neelam aai "kiski vidai ho rhi h oo to iski ho rhi h mai to soona tha vidai lrki ki hoti h yaha to lrke ki ho rhi h" neelam ke aise sabado se shubham palatwar karna chaha par wo apne ankh se aashu pochhte hue waha se sidba bahar aa gaya. Neelam ye dekh chonki bhi kyuki usse har baar jawab mill jata tha par aaj koi jawab mila hi nhi.

Kuch samay baad sabhi mandir me puja kiye puja hote hue 9 baj gaye the ye dekh ke shubham ka khana Kajal bhabhi ne yhi mangwa liya par usse aaj bhookh thi hi nhi. Wo to aaj bhagwan se kiye gaye parathna ke bare me soch raha tha. "Kab tak bhagwan meri parthna ko sunege unke taak awaj gyi hogi kahi wo naa sune hoto" abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki usske saar se ek palu gujra jisse usse mamta ka ahsas hua wo abhi iss ahsas me duba hi tha ki usse yaad aaya usse dekhna chahiye wo kon h magar waha dher sari aurte thi jo mandir me parvesh kar rhi thi. Bahut khoja nhi mili to phir hatash home wahi gate ke pass jame bakth gaya jaha usse wo ahsas mila tha. tabhi usse khojta hua sohan aaya.

Sohan- aree bhai tu yaha baktha h chal jldi khana khaa le aaj bahut kaam h.
Me- mujhe bookh nhi h.
Sohan- pata h munhe tujhe kyu bhookh nhi h. (Maan me) thik h bhookh nhi h na par ye soch agar tere bhookhe rahne se teri wo maa bhai bahan kya khush honge.
Me- ?????
Sohan- nhi honge khush chal khaa le aaj bahut kaam h.

Phir dono ussi technical room me jaa ke khana khaye aaj free ki jalebi bhi mili thi jo bhikhari ram ke dukan se aai thi. Sabhi khana hone ke baad pata chala cm 30 min.. baad aayenge to shubham sari vaywastha ka jankari liya kuch jagah khot dikhi to usse turant change bhi karwa diya. Shubham ko waha ramakant ji nhi dikh rhe the jab wo pata karwaya to usse pata chala aaj ke karykaram ke wo apna naam hatwa liye h jabki mukhiya hone ke nate unhe khud aana tha. Jab shubham ramakant ji se baat kiya to pata chala cm ke bagal ke kursi pe ussehi bakthna h yhi yaha ka ritt h. Magar wo mana nhi to ramakant ji ko khud aana para.

Kuch samay baad cm sahab aa gaye unke aate hi gaon ke sabhi logo ne unka sawagat kiya sath me ramakant ji ne guldasta diya jisse wo mushkarate hue swikar kiya or sath me "kaise h ramakant ji" mama ne bhi hass ke jawab diya.

Protocol me rahte hue unhone ne puja kiya uske baad stage pe aaye. To sabhi log apna apna bhashan dena suru kiya aap smjh hi skte h kya bhasan hoga.

Wahi dusri taraf do log intjaar me bakthe the kab cm bhasan dene aaye. Ye do log koi or nhi billu or jagira the.
Billu- maa chudaye malik ki sala bakthe baithe plan change krta rahta h mabhi isse maro kabhi isse maro marna kisi ko nhi h. Or marne bhi bola to dekho iss cm ko wo bhi kaise to bhsd ke aand ne.
Jagira- chuup raah nhi to abhi tere aand me goli daag dunga.
Billu- thori deer shant rahne ke baad) ek baat bata akhir aand me hi kyu marne bola.
Jagira- dekh nhi raha kitna chokshi h bahar or khula maidan h to andar se ye kaam karna mushkil h.
Billu- nhi bhai tu galat h mujhe lagta h malik ne aand pe marne iss liye bola kyuki iss cm ne paka malik ki aand gand mari hogi or cm ka aand uske aand ko chunawti de raha hoga.
Jagira- tu sune dega ya mai abhi teri gand maru.
Billu- ?????

Jagira- tune upar ka plate sahi se kata tha na.
Billu- haa kata tha check kar le ek goli chala ke.
Jagira- bhsd ke hame cm ko marna h kisi or ko nhi.
Billu- ha ha pata h.
Jagira- agar na kata raha na to dhyan rahe kya hoga.
Billu- kuch samay baad) bhai cm aa raha h dekho naam pukar raha h. Dhyan se haa.
Jagira- tu parda jake sahi se rakh hum kaam hote hi nikal jayenge chal jldi kar.
Billu- thik bhai.

Billu itna kahte hue parde me pass aa gaya jo stage ke peechhe ki taraf tha. Or jagira wo mirzapur season 1 wala bandook liye hue tha jisme muna bhai ka ek dailog famous hua tha "chacha chacha oo bhsd wale chacha". Bass wo do nali wala tha kr ye ek nali wala pubg ke hisab se shotgun.

Jagira uss bandook ko stage se sataye pair ke awaj ko soon raha tha kuch chand mint baad usse andaja hua to wo ek trigar dabya uske baad do téen or mara hi tha ki billu ki chilane ki awaj aai or jagira ki aawaj taak nhi nikali.

Wahi hospital me baktha sunit singh apne mla bane ka sapna liye cm ke maut ka intjaar me tha. Wahi manik bed pe leta apne admiyo ke baare me soch raha tha.

Kaha wo hawash ke chakar me shubham ko maar kar hira ke bibi ke sath samrat ki bibi ka bhi watt lagane wala tha. Or kaha ab wo apne baap se baat soon ke bed pe para tha. Uske baap ne yaha taak kah diya jo usse pata nhi tha. Wo uss baat ko sson ke chonk gaya or apne badle ki bhawna ko or majboot karte hue maan me kaha "pahle to rora smjha tha ab to dushman bhi nikal gaya ab to usse maje se marunga bass mait hik ho jau"

Abhi ye dono apne khyali pulaoo me the ki ek call aaya or sujit paglo ki tarah hasne laga ye dekh ke manik chonk gaya. Or kuch bolta usse pahle hi bahar khada darban andar aaya or kuch bola manik ke kaan me jisse soon manik apne baap ko dekhne laga.

Bhailog kahani ke baare me agar kuch vichar ya sujhaw hoto awshya bataye aapke vichar oe sujhao ka intjaar rahega.
 

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Bhai scene ko ap bich mein cut kar dete ho ase tih interest he khtam ho jayega story ka ...
Ye dono kese mare gaye ye bhi pata na chala.
 

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Bhai scene ko ap bich mein cut kar dete ho ase tih interest he khtam ho jayega story ka ...
Ye dono kese mare gaye ye bhi pata na chala.

Agla update me wahi h bass saar dard karr raha tha to yhi taak rakha abhi thik hu to aage ka karya ho raha h.
 
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Update 29

Shubham abhi so ke utha tha or kal ke hue ghatnao ke bare me soch raha tha. Kal har samay busy rahte hue bhi wo apni dono bibi ko unke anushar pyaar diya. Kahte h na samay ka pata nhi chalta magar kal uske jivan me kai mor aaye pahle akhre me uss aurat ko dekha jo paisa or ijjat ke alawa kuch nhi dekhti wahi wo uss admi ko bhi dekha jisse aaj bhi kisi ke aaneka intjaar h. Wahi usne ek aise vaykti ko bhi dekha jiske bare me wo achha smjhta h. Par wo ek astin ka saap h.(ye shubham ko nhi pata h) wahi usne uss shkash ko apne se chhupte ya kisi or se chhupte dekh jisse wo apna sabse bara dushman smjhta h. Or uss shaksh ko bhi dekha jo mithe jahar ki tarah jindagi me dakhal dena suru kar diya h. Bass wo jisse dekhna chahta tha usse wo dekh nhi saka yhi uske liye bahut jyda udashi ka karan raha. Or abhi wo yhi soch me duba tha.

Me- (maan me) kaha ho aap kal ke din to aa jate mujhe pata h appki koi galti nhi h. Bass ek baar aa jao mai aapko dekh lunga to sukun se raah sakunga. Or wo kaha h jo meri maa ke baad meri maa ka pyaar diya iss mele me bhi to aa skti thi. Aap dono se milna chahta hu plzz aa jao dinu mere yaar tu hi aaja mere yaar akhir kab tak apne iss bhai se durr rahega. Didi kamse kam tu to aaja dekh tera bhai tujhe yaad kar raha h. Mai to tumhi logo ke liye itne sare camere lagwaye h plzz aa jao didi plzzz.

Shubham ye sochte hue rone laga wo kai baar sohan ko bhej chuka tha dhundhne par kuch pata nhi lag pata tha. Issi karan usne mele me camere lagwaye jisse uska bhi faida ho par ab taak uski wo didi wo bhai wo maa nhi aai jisse wo yaad kar raha tha.

Sohan- tu kyu roo raha h kya hua aaj tak kabhi tujhe rote nhi dekha.
Me- bhai mujhe mera bhai dinu khoj ke la de aree wo mujhe bhaiya bhaiya bolta tha aaj mere kaan tarash rahe h uske mooh se bhai sune ko. Or or didi ka to mai sabse pyara bhai tha sabse pyara wo mujhe pyaar se darling bolti thi plzz bhai mujhe unke mooh se darling suna h bula de bhai agar wo aai to paka maa bhi aa jayegi or mujhe beta beta kah ke gale laga legi bhai la de bhai. (Shubham ye kahte hue rone laga wo to achha tha yaha koi aata jata nhi tha kyuki ye ghar khet ke beecho beech tha)

Sohan- dharya se kaam lo bhai mai gaya tha par pata nhi chal saka munhe lagta h wo kahi or chale gaye h.
Me- kahi or kaise chale jayenge bhai mai bhi to unka beta hu alhir wo kahi or kaise jayenge.
Sohan- hmm... Par tune bataya tha wo bahut garib the to syd kaam kaaj ke liye bahar gaye honge.
Me- to tu abhi jaa khoj ke laa.
Sohan- haa la denge pahle aaj ki puja ke liye chal wahi bhagwan se parathna kar syd bhagwan teri soon le.
Me- ha ha tu sahi bolta h tu mandir pahuch mai abhi aata hu.
Sohan- or soon cm aaj 10 baje taak aayega mtlb 3 ghante bache h. Aree soona lagta h nhi suna.

Sohan ye kahte hue maan me "mere yaar kaise batau tujhe teri life me yaha bhi wahi kundali mare baitha h jisse tu marna chahta h. Par ye kaam mujhe apne tarike se handle karna hoga nhi to tu sach me apne hi pariwar me khoon ki nadiya baha skta h" sohan ye sochta hua waha se nikal gaya.

Kajal- ye aapko kya hua aankh kyu suje h.
Mamta- haa didi dekho na kabse puchh rhi hu bata hi nhi raha.
Kajal- batao kyu suje h.
Me- woo kuch nhi ankh me kira chal gaya tha.
Kajal- mujhe jhuth matt bolo kya baat h didi ki yaad aai kya.
Me- kajal se lipat ke rote hue) bhabhi kaisi hogi didi maa bhai kiss halat me honge.
Kajal- ek mard kabhi roo nhi skta or tum mard hoke roo rahe ho.
Me- kya mard me koi emotion nhi hote kya wo pathar ka hota h.
Kajal- rote hue) nhi nhi emotion hote h par kya karu mujhe bhi rona aa raha h plzz matt roo.

Tabhi neelam aai "kiski vidai ho rhi h oo to iski ho rhi h mai to soona tha vidai lrki ki hoti h yaha to lrke ki ho rhi h" neelam ke aise sabado se shubham palatwar karna chaha par wo apne ankh se aashu pochhte hue waha se sidba bahar aa gaya. Neelam ye dekh chonki bhi kyuki usse har baar jawab mill jata tha par aaj koi jawab mila hi nhi.

Kuch samay baad sabhi mandir me puja kiye puja hote hue 9 baj gaye the ye dekh ke shubham ka khana Kajal bhabhi ne yhi mangwa liya par usse aaj bhookh thi hi nhi. Wo to aaj bhagwan se kiye gaye parathna ke bare me soch raha tha. "Kab tak bhagwan meri parthna ko sunege unke taak awaj gyi hogi kahi wo naa sune hoto" abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki usske saar se ek palu gujra jisse usse mamta ka ahsas hua wo abhi iss ahsas me duba hi tha ki usse yaad aaya usse dekhna chahiye wo kon h magar waha dher sari aurte thi jo mandir me parvesh kar rhi thi. Bahut khoja nhi mili to phir hatash home wahi gate ke pass jame bakth gaya jaha usse wo ahsas mila tha. tabhi usse khojta hua sohan aaya.

Sohan- aree bhai tu yaha baktha h chal jldi khana khaa le aaj bahut kaam h.
Me- mujhe bookh nhi h.
Sohan- pata h munhe tujhe kyu bhookh nhi h. (Maan me) thik h bhookh nhi h na par ye soch agar tere bhookhe rahne se teri wo maa bhai bahan kya khush honge.
Me- ?????
Sohan- nhi honge khush chal khaa le aaj bahut kaam h.

Phir dono ussi technical room me jaa ke khana khaye aaj free ki jalebi bhi mili thi jo bhikhari ram ke dukan se aai thi. Sabhi khana hone ke baad pata chala cm 30 min.. baad aayenge to shubham sari vaywastha ka jankari liya kuch jagah khot dikhi to usse turant change bhi karwa diya. Shubham ko waha ramakant ji nhi dikh rhe the jab wo pata karwaya to usse pata chala aaj ke karykaram ke wo apna naam hatwa liye h jabki mukhiya hone ke nate unhe khud aana tha. Jab shubham ramakant ji se baat kiya to pata chala cm ke bagal ke kursi pe ussehi bakthna h yhi yaha ka ritt h. Magar wo mana nhi to ramakant ji ko khud aana para.

Kuch samay baad cm sahab aa gaye unke aate hi gaon ke sabhi logo ne unka sawagat kiya sath me ramakant ji ne guldasta diya jisse wo mushkarate hue swikar kiya or sath me "kaise h ramakant ji" mama ne bhi hass ke jawab diya.

Protocol me rahte hue unhone ne puja kiya uske baad stage pe aaye. To sabhi log apna apna bhashan dena suru kiya aap smjh hi skte h kya bhasan hoga.

Wahi dusri taraf do log intjaar me bakthe the kab cm bhasan dene aaye. Ye do log koi or nhi billu or jagira the.
Billu- maa chudaye malik ki sala bakthe baithe plan change krta rahta h mabhi isse maro kabhi isse maro marna kisi ko nhi h. Or marne bhi bola to dekho iss cm ko wo bhi kaise to bhsd ke aand ne.
Jagira- chuup raah nhi to abhi tere aand me goli daag dunga.
Billu- thori deer shant rahne ke baad) ek baat bata akhir aand me hi kyu marne bola.
Jagira- dekh nhi raha kitna chokshi h bahar or khula maidan h to andar se ye kaam karna mushkil h.
Billu- nhi bhai tu galat h mujhe lagta h malik ne aand pe marne iss liye bola kyuki iss cm ne paka malik ki aand gand mari hogi or cm ka aand uske aand ko chunawti de raha hoga.
Jagira- tu sune dega ya mai abhi teri gand maru.
Billu- ?????

Jagira- tune upar ka plate sahi se kata tha na.
Billu- haa kata tha check kar le ek goli chala ke.
Jagira- bhsd ke hame cm ko marna h kisi or ko nhi.
Billu- ha ha pata h.
Jagira- agar na kata raha na to dhyan rahe kya hoga.
Billu- kuch samay baad) bhai cm aa raha h dekho naam pukar raha h. Dhyan se haa.
Jagira- tu parda jake sahi se rakh hum kaam hote hi nikal jayenge chal jldi kar.
Billu- thik bhai.

Billu itna kahte hue parde me pass aa gaya jo stage ke peechhe ki taraf tha. Or jagira wo mirzapur season 1 wala bandook liye hue tha jisme muna bhai ka ek dailog famous hua tha "chacha chacha oo bhsd wale chacha". Bass wo do nali wala tha kr ye ek nali wala pubg ke hisab se shotgun.

Jagira uss bandook ko stage se sataye pair ke awaj ko soon raha tha kuch chand mint baad usse andaja hua to wo ek trigar dabya uske baad do téen or mara hi tha ki billu ki chilane ki awaj aai or jagira ki aawaj taak nhi nikali.

Wahi hospital me baktha sunit singh apne mla bane ka sapna liye cm ke maut ka intjaar me tha. Wahi manik bed pe leta apne admiyo ke baare me soch raha tha.

Kaha wo hawash ke chakar me shubham ko maar kar hira ke bibi ke sath samrat ki bibi ka bhi watt lagane wala tha. Or kaha ab wo apne baap se baat soon ke bed pe para tha. Uske baap ne yaha taak kah diya jo usse pata nhi tha. Wo uss baat ko sson ke chonk gaya or apne badle ki bhawna ko or majboot karte hue maan me kaha "pahle to rora smjha tha ab to dushman bhi nikal gaya ab to usse maje se marunga bass mait hik ho jau"

Abhi ye dono apne khyali pulaoo me the ki ek call aaya or sujit paglo ki tarah hasne laga ye dekh ke manik chonk gaya. Or kuch bolta usse pahle hi bahar khada darban andar aaya or kuch bola manik ke kaan me jisse soon manik apne baap ko dekhne laga.


Bhailog kahani ke baare me agar kuch vichar ya sujhaw hoto awshya bataye aapke vichar oe sujhao ka intjaar rahega.
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