Thank you for your supportAmazing update
MMa
Main nahi manta thni shandar kahai aap nay aasy likhi hay yea aap Kay bheter kaa talent hay keep going
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कैसे कहेगी अपनी सास से कि में अपनी भाभियों के कहने पर प्रीत को बुरी तरह से मारती थी इसलिए प्रीत घर से भाग गया
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Nice update
Nice update
Superb aur Majedar ... Lage Rahoo ... Waiting for next update
Behtreen update Bhai
nice update
Nice update Bhai super mind-blowing update
Smart-preet420,52 pages ho gaye.
Shraap ke baare main sirf padh rahe hain.
Jitni bhi adhed aurate hain,unki chut gili hoti hain.
Ab yeh sabhi aurate lagti to Preet ke khaandaan se talluk rakh rahi hongi warna chut gili nahi ho sakti.
Abhi aaise hi aur 52 pages nikalni ho to Bhai, Congratulations.
Lekin mera interest khatam ho raha iss story se.
Mere comment se kisi ko dukh hua hain to woh apni soche.
Maine sach hi bola hain.
...asal mai update bohat choti aarahi hai is leye kahane apna momentam kho jati hai update lambi ho to kahani pe grip rahti hai
nice update..!!
preet ko train me jo aurat aur uski beti mili thi woh jarur preet ke khandan ki hi hogi..uss ladki ka naam nidhi hai..woh aurat bhi preet ko dekh ke excited hogayi lekin pret ne bhav nahi diya issi baat ka gussa aaya usko..preet ke mann me bhi uss aurat ko chodane ka khayal aaya..lekin ab preet ko kisi se matlab nahi hai..usko bas padhna hai aur aage badhna hai..!! yaha sushma aur dheeraj neha ko lekar apne ghar jane wale hai aur waha sushma sach batane wali hai..waha jakar ab bawal hone wala hai aur neha bhi sach janane wali hai..!! neha abhi bhi preet ke khayalo me hai..ab usko kuchh behne bhi milengi..lekin waha jakar bichari fasne wali hai..!! dheeraj jaise nyaay ke bare me bol raha tha..toh preet wapas aakar sabke sath nyaay karega..sab ko unke karmo ki saja dega..!! preet ke ghar me ek bhi achhi aurat nahi hai jo aisa samajhe ki yeh shraap unki galtiyon se mila hai..inn aurton ko bas chut ki aag dikhti hai lekin pashchatap nahi dikhta..lekin preet sab ka hisab karega..!! bhai ab dheeraj, sushma aur neha sab unke asli ghar ja rahe hai..toh waha dadi ke through neha ko shraap ke bare me pata chale..matlab dadi neha ko shraap ka sach bataye ki kya huva tha aur shraap kya hai..toh hume bhi janane ko milega ki yeh shraap aakhir hai kya..kyunki ab samay aagaya hai shraap ke bare me janane ka..kyunki ab shraap ke naam par kahani bahot khinch gayi hai..bhale aap kya huva tha aur kyun shraap diya yeh na batao lekin shraap kya hai yeh toh bata sakte ho..!! bhale preet ko shraap ke bare me baad me pata chale lekin hum ko toh ab pata chalna chahiye ki yeh shraap hai kya..!! aur ab preet ko kuchh aisa karte dikhao ki woh kam samay me bahot bada aadmi ban jaye aur iss safar me usko khud ka bhi sach pata chale aur shraap ka sach bhi..!!
waiting for next update..!!
Fantastic
Awesome and fantastic update bhai
Mast update h bhai...![]()
Mast update
Jaanta hu Bhai.Thank you for your suggestion
Bhai shayad aj ka update kuch alag lage aap logo ko...
Main job bhi karta hu. Ek dum free nahi hu.. Free time me update likhta hu. Ap logo ko jis update ko padne me 5 to 10 min lagte hai usko likhne me 1.5 to 2 hours lag jate hai