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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
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Update 63
Agly din jab so k utha to us ko bulaya
Main.agr main 2 bar bina wakfy k ya amal kron to koi masla to nhi
Admi.nhi malik koi masla nhi hy agr ap caho to aik bar amal krny k bad kisi sy bat kr k phr aik bar wo amal kr sakty ho per agr caho to aik sath 2 bar krny k bad bhi kisi sy bat kr sakty ho
Main.thek hy tum jao
Mera usy bula k pochny ka maqsad ya tha k aj rat main phr sy wo amal kr lon Q k agly din wesy hi sunday tha to chuti thi us rat bhi mainy wo amal kia agly din bhi dair sy utha sara din jo choty choty kam thy wo krta raha rat ko faima ko yad kr k so gaya or sony k kuch dair bad main us sy bat kr raha tha
Fatima.bhai ap kaha chlay gay ho
Main.main to kahin nhi gaya main to tumhry pass hi hon
Fatima.aa jao na bhai
Main.guria main kisi kaam sy aya hon esi lia nhi mil sakta
Fatima.phr kab tak ao gy
Main.boht jald
Fatima.ap bhi jhot bolty ho aik saal sy zaida ho gaya hy ap ko gay noor bhabhi bhi har wakt yahi kehti hain ap jaldi ao gy per ap aaty hi nhi na call krty ho
Main.main call nhi kr sakta fatima
Fatima.mujhy nhi pata ya to ap mujh sy call per bat kro ya phr ap aa jao mery pass
Main.main aisy hi tum sy bat kr lia kron ga
Fatima.nhi jab tak ap call nhi krty main ap sy naraz rahon gi ya to ap call kro ya aa jao
Main.acha phr meri aik shart hy
Fatima.jis din ap first ao gi main ap k pass aa jaon ga or ab apni seht ka khyal rakho dakho kesy ho gai ho
Fatima.ap jo nhi hain
Main.acha ab jab tak ap thek nhi hon gi or jab tak first nhi aati main nhi aon ga ap k pass
Fatima.thek hy ab sy main apna khyal rakho gi or jis din main apni class main first aon gi ap ko aana ho ga
Main.ok thek hy
Us k bad meri nend khul gai jab time dakha to subha k 6 baj rahy thy main jaldi jaldi tyar hova nashta kr k kaam per chala gaya
Us rat mainy shera or simba ko yad kia socha shyad kaam ban jay us admi sy pochny sy acha hy aik bar try kr lon jab main soya to mujhy wo dono dikhny lagy jo ghar k bahir hi un k lia aik pet house bana tha wahin bethy thy
Main.kesy ho dosto
Wo aik dam sy uth khry hovy or bahir aa k idhr udhr bhagny lagy jaisy mujhy hi talash kr rahy hon
Main.meri bat dhyan sy suno
Wo aik jaga ruk gay
Main.khalid abhi khamosh hy tum dono ko meri bachi or baki ghar walon ki hifazat krni hy or ali sy kisi bhi trhan kaho k tumhry baki k sathion ko bhi hoshyar kry or agr ho saky to tumhry sath rakhy or jo bhi ho jay kuch bhi ho noor ki har bat mano gy mujh sy wada kro
Jawab mai unhon ny aik sath dahaar mari jis sy mera un sy rabta toot gaya or main uth k beth gaya time dakha to abhi sirf 2:30 hovy thy main phr so gaya
Ghar main
Jab un dono ny aik sath unchi awaz mai dahaar mari to un ki awaz sun k sab uth gay thori dair bad wo kushi sy or chilany lagy jaisy un ko koi khazana mill gaya ho un ki awaz sy uth to sabhi gay thy phr jab un ki awaz band na hovi sabhi bahir aa gay (ali n team bhi wahin rehty hain ap ko btaa chuka hon pehly bhi) ali or team bhi bahir aa gay
Noor.kia bat hy ali ya dono aisy Q kar rahy hain
Ali.pata nhi
Alina.aisa to ya sirf tabhi krty hain jab ya boht kush hon
Asif.kahin wo to nhi jo main soch raha hon
Ali.ho sakta hy wo kamyab ho gaya ho
Noor.mujhy kuch smjh nhi aa rahi tum log kia bat kr rahy ho
Alina.noor baba ki di hovi power ki waja sy kashif dur sy hi kisi sy bhi rabta krny ki koshish krta tha or wo kehta tha k wo zror kamyab ho ga
Bua.kia aisa ho sakta hy
Alina.g bua shyad ham abhi kuch keh nhi skty
Fatima.bhai ny mujh sy bhi bat ki thi kal rat
Sab.kiaa
Fatima.g or unhon ny mujh sy wada kia hy jab main class main first aon gi tab wo aa jayn gy
Bhabhi.es lia aj sara din tum study krti rahi ho
Fatima.g han
Maria.per ya kesy ho sakta hy
Alina.ali tum bat kro shyad kuch pata chal jay
Ali un dono k pass chala gaya or un sy kuch sawal kiye jis k jawab main wo sirf apni awaz hi nikalty thy jaisy ali ny jo kuch smjha wo sab ko btaya
Agly din jab so k utha to us ko bulaya
Main.agr main 2 bar bina wakfy k ya amal kron to koi masla to nhi
Admi.nhi malik koi masla nhi hy agr ap caho to aik bar amal krny k bad kisi sy bat kr k phr aik bar wo amal kr sakty ho per agr caho to aik sath 2 bar krny k bad bhi kisi sy bat kr sakty ho
Main.thek hy tum jao
Mera usy bula k pochny ka maqsad ya tha k aj rat main phr sy wo amal kr lon Q k agly din wesy hi sunday tha to chuti thi us rat bhi mainy wo amal kia agly din bhi dair sy utha sara din jo choty choty kam thy wo krta raha rat ko faima ko yad kr k so gaya or sony k kuch dair bad main us sy bat kr raha tha
Fatima.bhai ap kaha chlay gay ho
Main.main to kahin nhi gaya main to tumhry pass hi hon
Fatima.aa jao na bhai
Main.guria main kisi kaam sy aya hon esi lia nhi mil sakta
Fatima.phr kab tak ao gy
Main.boht jald
Fatima.ap bhi jhot bolty ho aik saal sy zaida ho gaya hy ap ko gay noor bhabhi bhi har wakt yahi kehti hain ap jaldi ao gy per ap aaty hi nhi na call krty ho
Main.main call nhi kr sakta fatima
Fatima.mujhy nhi pata ya to ap mujh sy call per bat kro ya phr ap aa jao mery pass
Main.main aisy hi tum sy bat kr lia kron ga
Fatima.nhi jab tak ap call nhi krty main ap sy naraz rahon gi ya to ap call kro ya aa jao
Main.acha phr meri aik shart hy
Fatima.jis din ap first ao gi main ap k pass aa jaon ga or ab apni seht ka khyal rakho dakho kesy ho gai ho
Fatima.ap jo nhi hain
Main.acha ab jab tak ap thek nhi hon gi or jab tak first nhi aati main nhi aon ga ap k pass
Fatima.thek hy ab sy main apna khyal rakho gi or jis din main apni class main first aon gi ap ko aana ho ga
Main.ok thek hy
Us k bad meri nend khul gai jab time dakha to subha k 6 baj rahy thy main jaldi jaldi tyar hova nashta kr k kaam per chala gaya
Us rat mainy shera or simba ko yad kia socha shyad kaam ban jay us admi sy pochny sy acha hy aik bar try kr lon jab main soya to mujhy wo dono dikhny lagy jo ghar k bahir hi un k lia aik pet house bana tha wahin bethy thy
Main.kesy ho dosto
Wo aik dam sy uth khry hovy or bahir aa k idhr udhr bhagny lagy jaisy mujhy hi talash kr rahy hon
Main.meri bat dhyan sy suno
Wo aik jaga ruk gay
Main.khalid abhi khamosh hy tum dono ko meri bachi or baki ghar walon ki hifazat krni hy or ali sy kisi bhi trhan kaho k tumhry baki k sathion ko bhi hoshyar kry or agr ho saky to tumhry sath rakhy or jo bhi ho jay kuch bhi ho noor ki har bat mano gy mujh sy wada kro
Jawab mai unhon ny aik sath dahaar mari jis sy mera un sy rabta toot gaya or main uth k beth gaya time dakha to abhi sirf 2:30 hovy thy main phr so gaya
Ghar main
Jab un dono ny aik sath unchi awaz mai dahaar mari to un ki awaz sun k sab uth gay thori dair bad wo kushi sy or chilany lagy jaisy un ko koi khazana mill gaya ho un ki awaz sy uth to sabhi gay thy phr jab un ki awaz band na hovi sabhi bahir aa gay (ali n team bhi wahin rehty hain ap ko btaa chuka hon pehly bhi) ali or team bhi bahir aa gay
Noor.kia bat hy ali ya dono aisy Q kar rahy hain
Ali.pata nhi
Alina.aisa to ya sirf tabhi krty hain jab ya boht kush hon
Asif.kahin wo to nhi jo main soch raha hon
Ali.ho sakta hy wo kamyab ho gaya ho
Noor.mujhy kuch smjh nhi aa rahi tum log kia bat kr rahy ho
Alina.noor baba ki di hovi power ki waja sy kashif dur sy hi kisi sy bhi rabta krny ki koshish krta tha or wo kehta tha k wo zror kamyab ho ga
Bua.kia aisa ho sakta hy
Alina.g bua shyad ham abhi kuch keh nhi skty
Fatima.bhai ny mujh sy bhi bat ki thi kal rat
Sab.kiaa
Fatima.g or unhon ny mujh sy wada kia hy jab main class main first aon gi tab wo aa jayn gy
Bhabhi.es lia aj sara din tum study krti rahi ho
Fatima.g han
Maria.per ya kesy ho sakta hy
Alina.ali tum bat kro shyad kuch pata chal jay
Ali un dono k pass chala gaya or un sy kuch sawal kiye jis k jawab main wo sirf apni awaz hi nikalty thy jaisy ali ny jo kuch smjha wo sab ko btaya
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Bhai.kia hova ali bhai kia pata chala
Ali.kashif ny en sy bat ki hy
Noor.kia bat ki hy
Ya to pata nhi per mainy jo sawal pochy un k jawab jo mujhy smjh aty hain main bta sakta hon
Noor.jaisy kia
Ali. ya pata chala hy k koi khtry ki bat hy es lia en ko mazed hoshyar rehny ka kaha hy us ny khatra kia hy wo to pata nhi per zror koi aisi bt hy jis ki waja sy us ny aisa kaha hy
Noor.kia main en sy bat kron mujhy jawab dayn gy
Ali.han kro bat or jawab kis trhan mangna hy wo tum dakh lo
Noor un k pass gai
Noor.shera simba main jo pochon us ka jawab agr han ho to beth jana nhi to khary ho jana meri bat smjh aa gai hy
Wo dono bath gay matlab yes
Noor.kia unhon ny btaya k wo kahan hain
Khry ho gay matlab no
Noor es sy thora mayos ho gai
Noor.kia unhon ny meri koi bat ki
Yes
Noor.kia un ko pata hy un ki bachi ka
Yes
Noor.kia unhon ny btaya k kis sy khtra hy
Yes
Noor.kia koi hamla krna chata hy
Yes
Noor.kab hamla kry ga kuch btaya
No
Ali.kia us ka naam btaya jis ny hamla krna hy
Yes
Alina.ali mujhy lagta hy bat boht serious hy
Ali.mujhy bhi yahi lag raha hy
Salem.Q na kashif k dushmano k naam layn en k samny jawab mill jay ga
Aslm.han ya thek hy
Alina.MNA
No
Ali.comm
No
Alina.MLA
No
Noor.khalid
Yes
Un k bethty hi ali ko sab smjh aa gaya
Ali.asif sab ko keh do alert rahyn kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hy salem mazed guards ko bula lo or....
Abhi ali bol hi raha tha k dono ki awaz sy chup ho gaya
aslam.shyad kashif ny en ko kuch kaha hy
Ali.kia kisi ko bulany ka kaha hy
Yes
sabhi yahi sochty rahy k kis ko bulaya hy per kisi ki kuch smjh nhi aa raha tha k kis ko bulana hy aik dam phupha k dimagh ki batti jali
Phupha.noor yad hy ham bhabhi k bhai sy milny un k gaon gay thy
Noor.g abu yad hy
Phupha.tum wahan aik bat ki thi jab shera ko pehli bar dakha tha ham ny
Noor.kia abu mujhy yad nhi aa raha
Phupha.tum ny kaha tha k shera k jaisy or bhi boht hain jo sirf kashif k kehny per hi kuch krty hain
Ali.ary han main bhol kesy gaya un ko
Ali.kia tumhry baki sathion ko bulaya hy
Yes
Noor.ali jahan tak mujhy lagta hy un ki ham sab per nazar hy per wo hain kahan pata nhi per un ko hmari har bat ka pata hy
Ali.mujhy bhi yahi lag raha hy per ham us ka pata Q nhi laga pa rahy k wo hy kahan
Yahan main
Main aaram sy so raha tha subha uth k kaam per chala gaya rat ko phr mainy fatima sy bat ki thori dair bad us ny mujhy kal wali bat btai k kal kia hova tha
Fatima.bhai ap k pass or bhi lions hain
Main.han boht hain
Fatima.kitny hain
Majn.tum Q poch rahi ho
Fatima.wo ali bhai ny sab ko bulaya hy jo person tak aa jayn gy
Main.jab ayn gy dakh lena or han wo sirf noor or ali ki bat mayn gy or kisi ki nhi ali ko btaa dena
Fatima.bhai ap bhabhi sy naraz ho kia
Main.nhi tujhy kis ny kaha
Fatima.ap un sy bat nhi krty to esi lia mujhy laga
Main.nhi main us sy naraz nhi hon bas bura laga tha jab us ny meri bat nhi suni
Fatima.kon si bat bhai
Main.koi nhi tu apna dimagh zaida na chala or study per tawaja dy
Fatima.ok bhai per ap apna wada yad rakhna
Main.han meri maa mujhy yad hy tu fikr na kr
Or bhi us sy bhot bat ki phr jab ankh khuli to jaldi ay ready ho k kam per chala gaya wapisi per akram ko bula k us sy khalid ka pata krwaya us ny btaya k 1 month bad us ka noor ko marny ka program hy us rat mainy baki k lion ka sochty hovy soya or un ko sirf noor or ali k hi orders follow krny ka kaha or kisi ko koi nuqsan na pohnchany ka bhi
Agly din ghar mai
Sham ko jab baki k shair ay to un ko dakh k sab heran hovy Q k sab boht khtrnak thy simba or shera to alag thy un sy esi lia wo har wakt sath rehty thy jab wo andr ay to asif salem or aslam ny un ko orders dia per wo na many phr alina ny try kia wo bhi bekar bua bhai bhabhi ny bhi try kia per koi faida nhi
Noor.ali ya sab kia ho raha hy ya kisi ki bat Q nhi man rahy
Ali.pata nhi mujhy khud smjh nhi aa raha
Fatima.wo bhabhi main btana bhol gai person bhai sy bat hovi thi wo keh rahy thy k ya sab sir ap ki or ali bhai ki bat follow kryn gy
Noor or ali aik dosry ko dakhny lagy k ya sab kia hy
Maria.lagta nhi aisa ho Q k jab ya kisi ny nhi man rahy to
Meri beti jo wahin pass aik choty sy palny mai thi noor ny un main sy aik ko wo palna lany ko kaha to wo ly aya per us ny bachi ko kuch bhi na kaha sab ya dakh k heran thy
Noor.mujhy aik bat smjh nhi ai unhon ny aisy Q kaha k ya sirf meri or ali ki bat mayn gy
Ali.pata nhi
Aliny noor ko kuch eshra kia jo usy smjh to na aya per wo us wakt chup hi rahi jab sab andr gay to moka dakh k ali or noor akaly bat krny lagy
Noor.han ali us wakt kia kehna chaty thy
Ali.noor aik bat yad rakhna kuch bhi ho kuch bhi abhi kisi per yaken nhi krna siway apny maa bap k
Noor.tum aisy Q keh rahy ho
Ali.noor ya koi choti bat nhi hy kashif ny en sab sy rabta kia ho ga sirf ham dono k orders follow krny k lia kaha ho ga
Noor.yahi bat mujhy bhi smjh nhi ai k aisa Q hy
Ali.noor wo sirf aisi condition mai hi aisa krta hy jab koi boht bari bat ho wrna ya ham sab ki bat manty hain or jahan tak mujhy lag raha hy aj rat wo shera or simba ko bhi bakion ki bat manny sy mana kry ga
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Bhai.kia hova ali bhai kia pata chala
Ali.kashif ny en sy bat ki hy
Noor.kia bat ki hy
Ya to pata nhi per mainy jo sawal pochy un k jawab jo mujhy smjh aty hain main bta sakta hon
Noor.jaisy kia
Ali. ya pata chala hy k koi khtry ki bat hy es lia en ko mazed hoshyar rehny ka kaha hy us ny khatra kia hy wo to pata nhi per zror koi aisi bt hy jis ki waja sy us ny aisa kaha hy
Noor.kia main en sy bat kron mujhy jawab dayn gy
Ali.han kro bat or jawab kis trhan mangna hy wo tum dakh lo
Noor un k pass gai
Noor.shera simba main jo pochon us ka jawab agr han ho to beth jana nhi to khary ho jana meri bat smjh aa gai hy
Wo dono bath gay matlab yes
Noor.kia unhon ny btaya k wo kahan hain
Khry ho gay matlab no
Noor es sy thora mayos ho gai
Noor.kia unhon ny meri koi bat ki
Yes
Noor.kia un ko pata hy un ki bachi ka
Yes
Noor.kia unhon ny btaya k kis sy khtra hy
Yes
Noor.kia koi hamla krna chata hy
Yes
Noor.kab hamla kry ga kuch btaya
No
Ali.kia us ka naam btaya jis ny hamla krna hy
Yes
Alina.ali mujhy lagta hy bat boht serious hy
Ali.mujhy bhi yahi lag raha hy
Salem.Q na kashif k dushmano k naam layn en k samny jawab mill jay ga
Aslm.han ya thek hy
Alina.MNA
No
Ali.comm
No
Alina.MLA
No
Noor.khalid
Yes
Un k bethty hi ali ko sab smjh aa gaya
Ali.asif sab ko keh do alert rahyn kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hy salem mazed guards ko bula lo or....
Abhi ali bol hi raha tha k dono ki awaz sy chup ho gaya
aslam.shyad kashif ny en ko kuch kaha hy
Ali.kia kisi ko bulany ka kaha hy
Yes
sabhi yahi sochty rahy k kis ko bulaya hy per kisi ki kuch smjh nhi aa raha tha k kis ko bulana hy aik dam phupha k dimagh ki batti jali
Phupha.noor yad hy ham bhabhi k bhai sy milny un k gaon gay thy
Noor.g abu yad hy
Phupha.tum wahan aik bat ki thi jab shera ko pehli bar dakha tha ham ny
Noor.kia abu mujhy yad nhi aa raha
Phupha.tum ny kaha tha k shera k jaisy or bhi boht hain jo sirf kashif k kehny per hi kuch krty hain
Ali.ary han main bhol kesy gaya un ko
Ali.kia tumhry baki sathion ko bulaya hy
Yes
Noor.ali jahan tak mujhy lagta hy un ki ham sab per nazar hy per wo hain kahan pata nhi per un ko hmari har bat ka pata hy
Ali.mujhy bhi yahi lag raha hy per ham us ka pata Q nhi laga pa rahy k wo hy kahan
Yahan main
Main aaram sy so raha tha subha uth k kaam per chala gaya rat ko phr mainy fatima sy bat ki thori dair bad us ny mujhy kal wali bat btai k kal kia hova tha
Fatima.bhai ap k pass or bhi lions hain
Main.han boht hain
Fatima.kitny hain
Majn.tum Q poch rahi ho
Fatima.wo ali bhai ny sab ko bulaya hy jo person tak aa jayn gy
Main.jab ayn gy dakh lena or han wo sirf noor or ali ki bat mayn gy or kisi ki nhi ali ko btaa dena
Fatima.bhai ap bhabhi sy naraz ho kia
Main.nhi tujhy kis ny kaha
Fatima.ap un sy bat nhi krty to esi lia mujhy laga
Main.nhi main us sy naraz nhi hon bas bura laga tha jab us ny meri bat nhi suni
Fatima.kon si bat bhai
Main.koi nhi tu apna dimagh zaida na chala or study per tawaja dy
Fatima.ok bhai per ap apna wada yad rakhna
Main.han meri maa mujhy yad hy tu fikr na kr
Or bhi us sy bhot bat ki phr jab ankh khuli to jaldi ay ready ho k kam per chala gaya wapisi per akram ko bula k us sy khalid ka pata krwaya us ny btaya k 1 month bad us ka noor ko marny ka program hy us rat mainy baki k lion ka sochty hovy soya or un ko sirf noor or ali k hi orders follow krny ka kaha or kisi ko koi nuqsan na pohnchany ka bhi
Agly din ghar mai
Sham ko jab baki k shair ay to un ko dakh k sab heran hovy Q k sab boht khtrnak thy simba or shera to alag thy un sy esi lia wo har wakt sath rehty thy jab wo andr ay to asif salem or aslam ny un ko orders dia per wo na many phr alina ny try kia wo bhi bekar bua bhai bhabhi ny bhi try kia per koi faida nhi
Noor.ali ya sab kia ho raha hy ya kisi ki bat Q nhi man rahy
Ali.pata nhi mujhy khud smjh nhi aa raha
Fatima.wo bhabhi main btana bhol gai person bhai sy bat hovi thi wo keh rahy thy k ya sab sir ap ki or ali bhai ki bat follow kryn gy
Noor or ali aik dosry ko dakhny lagy k ya sab kia hy
Maria.lagta nhi aisa ho Q k jab ya kisi ny nhi man rahy to
Meri beti jo wahin pass aik choty sy palny mai thi noor ny un main sy aik ko wo palna lany ko kaha to wo ly aya per us ny bachi ko kuch bhi na kaha sab ya dakh k heran thy
Noor.mujhy aik bat smjh nhi ai unhon ny aisy Q kaha k ya sirf meri or ali ki bat mayn gy
Ali.pata nhi
Aliny noor ko kuch eshra kia jo usy smjh to na aya per wo us wakt chup hi rahi jab sab andr gay to moka dakh k ali or noor akaly bat krny lagy
Noor.han ali us wakt kia kehna chaty thy
Ali.noor aik bat yad rakhna kuch bhi ho kuch bhi abhi kisi per yaken nhi krna siway apny maa bap k
Noor.tum aisy Q keh rahy ho
Ali.noor ya koi choti bat nhi hy kashif ny en sab sy rabta kia ho ga sirf ham dono k orders follow krny k lia kaha ho ga
Noor.yahi bat mujhy bhi smjh nhi ai k aisa Q hy
Ali.noor wo sirf aisi condition mai hi aisa krta hy jab koi boht bari bat ho wrna ya ham sab ki bat manty hain or jahan tak mujhy lag raha hy aj rat wo shera or simba ko bhi bakion ki bat manny sy mana kry ga
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Hmmmm nice 1 age lgta hai dhmaka hone wala hai.may b or powers b mil.jain kashif ko.....