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Adultery Badshahat - A Ladke Ki
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Nice update..Aap sab readers ke support ka bhauth bhauth shukriya main aaj thoda busy tha isliye reply nahi de paya pr ab sabke comment ka reply thodi der main dunga .
Aab tak ....
Pooja priya se phone par baat karti hain office ki jaankari dene ke liye .
aab aage ....
Office over hone ke baadpooja apni car main baith aur ghar ke liye nikalti hai par kucch dur jaane ke baad ek sunsaan road pruski car kharab hojati hain woh car ko check karne ke liye baahar nikalti hain . Woh abhi apni car check kar hei Kuch hi der hua tha ki vha pr 4-5 ladke sor machate huye uske car jis road pr kharab hue thi ussi road me dakhil hue pooja ne un ladko ki or dekha sab ladke drunk thee sab ne sharab pi rakhi thi pooja ne unse help mangna sahi nahi samjha .
unme se ek ladka pooja ko akela deoh kar uske aur badne lagta hai ..
( Ladko ko L1 , L2 , L3 likhunga ) .
L1 : arre kya hua gadi kharab hogayi main help kardu ek khatarnak hassi apne face pr laakar .
pooja : Ji nahi shukriya .
Itne main baaki ke 2 ladke bhi pass ajate hain .
L2 : arre gussa main toh apka chehra gulabi hogaya hain toh soccho nche ka kya hal hua hoga .
( Chaaaataaakkk )
yeh sun kar pooja ne L2 ko thappad mar diya .
Teeno ladke bhokla gaye .
L2 : tune mujhe thappad mara dekh aab tere sath kya hota hai le chalo iss ko adde pe vha is randi ko aisa chodege ki thapaad marna bhul jaayegi
( Pooja ka haath jabardasti pakadte hui )
lekin yeh kya jaise hei L2 pooja ko khichta ek muka uske gaal pe pada .
pooja peeche mud kar dekhti hai toh ek ladka tha jisne L2 ko muka mara tha . Pooja jaath se usse ladke ke peeche jaake chup jaati hai .
itne gira hua banda wapis khada hojata hai aur uss ladke pr hmla karne ki koshish karta hai pr ladka apne aap ko uss hamle se dough karke bachta hain aur turant ek kich L2 ko mardeta us bande ko .
ladka samaj jaat hai ki woh akela teen logo se nahi bidh skta islye turant pass main padi iron rod se ladko marta hain jab tak woh bande samaj pate kaise bache tab tak woh ladka rod chod ladki ka haath pakd bhaagne lagta hain .
pooja joh itni derr se yeh sab dekh rahi thi woh us ladka ke chehre pr moohit hojati aur saanse upr - neeche hone lagti hai agar gundo pexche na lage hote toh woh jarur usse puchti ki kyu ek anjan ladki ki izzazat baachane ke liye itna sab kuch kiya . Jab pooja aur woh ladka unn gundo se bach le kafi dur aajate hai yoh woh ladka pooja ka haath chodta hai .
pooja usse dekhte hue : thamk you mere jaan bacha ne ke liye .
ladka : welcome miss .
itne main pooja ki mazar uski uniform pr jati hai aur puchti hai
Pooja : aap ka naam kya hain aur yeh kapde .
ladka : mera naam pawan hain aur yeh meri uniform hain .
ladke ka naam sunte hee pooja ko jor ka jhatka lagta hain kyuki yeh apna hero pawan hai tha joh usse un gundo se akela bacha ke le aaya tha aur priya jiski baat kar rahi thi jise dekhte hee uski dost apna dil haar baithi .
[pooja maan main sochte hue ]
Yeh hai pawan tabhi main sochu meri dost kise apna dil de baithi dekne main normal hain pr himmat bhauth ha joh ek anjaan shakhs ke liye teen teen gundo se bhidh gaya agar priya dost na hoti toh aaj isse propose kardeti pr aab kya fayda aab yeh mere jiju hain . Inke baare aur jaankari leti hu .
pooja : aap itni raat ko yah ?
pawan : woh main uss raste se apne kaam pr jaa raha tha . Toh apki awaj suni .
pooja : aap kya kaam karte hain .
pawan : main security guard .
pooja : guard ki naukri
( Sad sa face bana kar )
pawan : koi kaam chota nahi hota miss .
priya ko pawan aur uski baate bhauth pasand aati hain kyuki uski soch bhi pawan ki tarah thi pr pawan ke baare main aur jaane ke liye usne iss andaaz main bola tha .
pooja : nahi main bhauth izzazt karti hu working people ki . Achanak se muh se nikal gaya .
pawan : okay aapki car toh wahi rahe gayi aap ab ghar kaise jaogi ?
pooja : main cab kar lungi .
pooja taxi ka intazar karti hai pawan tab tak pooja ke saath khada raheta hai iss dar se kahi woh gunde wapis na aajaye aur jab pehli taxi aati dekhti hai unhe pooja usme baith kar chali jaati hain .
woh yeh dekh kar heeran thi ki koi aaj ke jaamane main ek unknown shakshs ki itni madad karta ho jitni pawan ne uski ki thi .
aaj ke liye itna hee update ko like marna aur revos dena na bhule shukriya....
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nice update..!!Aap sab readers ke support ka bhauth bhauth shukriya main aaj thoda busy tha isliye reply nahi de paya pr ab sabke comment ka reply thodi der main dunga .
Aab tak ....
Pooja priya se phone par baat karti hain office ki jaankari dene ke liye .
aab aage ....
Office over hone ke baadpooja apni car main baith aur ghar ke liye nikalti hai par kucch dur jaane ke baad ek sunsaan road pruski car kharab hojati hain woh car ko check karne ke liye baahar nikalti hain . Woh abhi apni car check kar hei Kuch hi der hua tha ki vha pr 4-5 ladke sor machate huye uske car jis road pr kharab hue thi ussi road me dakhil hue pooja ne un ladko ki or dekha sab ladke drunk thee sab ne sharab pi rakhi thi pooja ne unse help mangna sahi nahi samjha .
unme se ek ladka pooja ko akela deoh kar uske aur badne lagta hai ..
( Ladko ko L1 , L2 , L3 likhunga ) .
L1 : arre kya hua gadi kharab hogayi main help kardu ek khatarnak hassi apne face pr laakar .
pooja : Ji nahi shukriya .
Itne main baaki ke 2 ladke bhi pass ajate hain .
L2 : arre gussa main toh apka chehra gulabi hogaya hain toh soccho nche ka kya hal hua hoga .
( Chaaaataaakkk )
yeh sun kar pooja ne L2 ko thappad mar diya .
Teeno ladke bhokla gaye .
L2 : tune mujhe thappad mara dekh aab tere sath kya hota hai le chalo iss ko adde pe vha is randi ko aisa chodege ki thapaad marna bhul jaayegi
( Pooja ka haath jabardasti pakadte hui )
lekin yeh kya jaise hei L2 pooja ko khichta ek muka uske gaal pe pada .
pooja peeche mud kar dekhti hai toh ek ladka tha jisne L2 ko muka mara tha . Pooja jaath se usse ladke ke peeche jaake chup jaati hai .
itne gira hua banda wapis khada hojata hai aur uss ladke pr hmla karne ki koshish karta hai pr ladka apne aap ko uss hamle se dough karke bachta hain aur turant ek kich L2 ko mardeta us bande ko .
ladka samaj jaat hai ki woh akela teen logo se nahi bidh skta islye turant pass main padi iron rod se ladko marta hain jab tak woh bande samaj pate kaise bache tab tak woh ladka rod chod ladki ka haath pakd bhaagne lagta hain .
pooja joh itni derr se yeh sab dekh rahi thi woh us ladka ke chehre pr moohit hojati aur saanse upr - neeche hone lagti hai agar gundo pexche na lage hote toh woh jarur usse puchti ki kyu ek anjan ladki ki izzazat baachane ke liye itna sab kuch kiya . Jab pooja aur woh ladka unn gundo se bach le kafi dur aajate hai yoh woh ladka pooja ka haath chodta hai .
pooja usse dekhte hue : thamk you mere jaan bacha ne ke liye .
ladka : welcome miss .
itne main pooja ki mazar uski uniform pr jati hai aur puchti hai
Pooja : aap ka naam kya hain aur yeh kapde .
ladka : mera naam pawan hain aur yeh meri uniform hain .
ladke ka naam sunte hee pooja ko jor ka jhatka lagta hain kyuki yeh apna hero pawan hai tha joh usse un gundo se akela bacha ke le aaya tha aur priya jiski baat kar rahi thi jise dekhte hee uski dost apna dil haar baithi .
[pooja maan main sochte hue ]
Yeh hai pawan tabhi main sochu meri dost kise apna dil de baithi dekne main normal hain pr himmat bhauth ha joh ek anjaan shakhs ke liye teen teen gundo se bhidh gaya agar priya dost na hoti toh aaj isse propose kardeti pr aab kya fayda aab yeh mere jiju hain . Inke baare aur jaankari leti hu .
pooja : aap itni raat ko yah ?
pawan : woh main uss raste se apne kaam pr jaa raha tha . Toh apki awaj suni .
pooja : aap kya kaam karte hain .
pawan : main security guard .
pooja : guard ki naukri
( Sad sa face bana kar )
pawan : koi kaam chota nahi hota miss .
priya ko pawan aur uski baate bhauth pasand aati hain kyuki uski soch bhi pawan ki tarah thi pr pawan ke baare main aur jaane ke liye usne iss andaaz main bola tha .
pooja : nahi main bhauth izzazt karti hu working people ki . Achanak se muh se nikal gaya .
pawan : okay aapki car toh wahi rahe gayi aap ab ghar kaise jaogi ?
pooja : main cab kar lungi .
pooja taxi ka intazar karti hai pawan tab tak pooja ke saath khada raheta hai iss dar se kahi woh gunde wapis na aajaye aur jab pehli taxi aati dekhti hai unhe pooja usme baith kar chali jaati hain .
woh yeh dekh kar heeran thi ki koi aaj ke jaamane main ek unknown shakshs ki itni madad karta ho jitni pawan ne uski ki thi .
aaj ke liye itna hee update ko like marna aur revos dena na bhule shukriya
pooja ko bhi pawan ne hi bacha liye unn ladko se aur pooja yeh bhi jan gayi ki yeh wahi pawan hai jisko uski dost pehli najar me pyaar karne lagi hai..lekin pooja ke dil me bhi pawan ke liye pyaar jaag gaya hai..bas woh priya ki wajah se kuchh nahi kar payi..lekin kab tak khud ko rokegi..!! ab pooja pawan ke bare me priya ko bata degi aur yeh incident jankar priya ka pyaar aur gehra hojayega..ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..!!
bhai thoda bada update dedo yaar..!!
Sandeep singh nirwan
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Bhai abhi tak ki story achhi lagi lekin ek advice hai ki aapne jaise pahla aur dusra update likha hai na size ke hisab se vaise hi likhe kahani me tabhi ananad aata hai jab padhane aur samjhane layak material ho lekin jab ye hi na pta chale ki update kab shuru hua aur kitni jaldi khatam to thoda achcha feel na howe it's my own view.
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