Incest Baghi Beti & The Devil Son Action Suspense Thriller Fantasy

[Badshah Khan]

Bro Baap Ji the story looking fab
The concept is awesome
Its bring some freshness to xf
Great going
Keep writing
Keep posting

 

[Mithilesh373]

Update 3
Apni yadon se nikalte hue devi ek shaitaani hasi Hasta hai

Devi : ravan ravan ravan banuga mai....

Ab age..

Agli subah

Aaj Sunday hota hai devi freshup hoke bas apni yadon me kho jata hai
Devi khud se : Baap ne kabhi pyaar nhi kiya Maa ko meri koi parwah nhi bahen ne hamesha beizzat kiya sabne mera apmaan kiya
Mere Pyaar Ko thukraya mujhe nicha dikhane me koi kasar nahi chodi
Hamesha akela kar diya mujhe
Devi gusse me : ab mujhe kisi ki zarurat nahi siwaye dadi ke ek wohi hai jinhone hamesha mujhe pyaar diya
Sab mar gaye mere liye aaj k Baad kisi ko koi pyaar nahi karunga koi nahi mera na mai kisi ka..

Devi :Ravan ne apne apmaan ka badla lene k liye sab kuch luta diya aur bhag*an hote hue usne daya nahi dikhayi sapudkha pe
Mai bhag*an ki nahi ravan ki pooja karunga..

Bache ko jo Bachpan me sikhaya jata hai wo wohi banta bada hoke.
devi k pyaar ki koi ahmiyat nhi kisi ko aur bahen badi hone k baad bhi Ruhi usse thik se Baat bhi nahi karti devi k tyag validaan ko uski bewakoofi samjha jata hai Jahan devi apni bahen par jaan chidakta wohi Ruhi uska har Waqt apmaan karti isi apmaan ki aag aaj badi jwalamukhi ka roop le chuki thi na jane kab ye fat jaye aur sab kuch rakh kar de.


Devi shaitaani hasi Hasta hua : Hahahaha ravan ka apmaan karne wala kaise khush reh sakta hai hahahah
Ye Kehte hue devi apne room se nikalta hai aur kitchen me aake mitti ka tel ko choti si katori me karke ek stick ki dibbi jeb me rakh ke sabse bachete hue Ruhi ke room me aata hai jahan koi nahi hota
Fir shaitaani hasi haste hue tel ko new kapdo bad khilono sab par chidak k aag laga deta hai aag lagte hi ghar se bahar bhag jata hai ye sochte hue ki Baad me lautunga fir hasunga Ruhi pe.

Aag kamre me bahut bad gayi tabhi Roha ki nazar jati hai
Roha cheekh re hue ye soch k ki Ruhi kamre me hai apne : Ruhiiiiii meri bachiiiiiii
Tabhi Ruhi god me Sohi ko leke dadi k sath kamre se nikal k puchti kya hua Maa

Jab Roha apni beti ko dekhti to uski jaan me jaan aati hai
Fir turant use devi ka khayal aata hai
Soha : sasu Maa ap in dono ko ghar se bahar le jaye mai devi ko lene Jaa rahi hu
wo bhagte hue Ruhi k kamre me aati or aag ki lapte uske sharre ko chu rahi thi unse bachte hue andar jhankti to wo nhi hota isi beech Roha ki kohni aag se halki jal jati hai
Jab Roha ko tasalli ho jati k devi kamre me nhi hai to ye sochte hue ki bhar khelne gaya hoga wo bhi bahar aake padosi ko madad k liye bulati hai

Dadi bhi kuch logo ko ikattha kar chuki thi padosi aake aag bujhate hai
Roha shakti ko call karke bula chuki hoti hai

Shakti : kaise hua ye sab
Roha : mujhe kya pata maine to Ruhi k kamre me aag jalte dekhi... Fir sab Roha bata deti hai
Shakti : ye devi kaha hai
Roha : niche k kamre me to tha nhi Ruhi k kamre me dekha wahan bhi nahi tha kahi khelne gaya hoga
Shakti apna policia dimag chalate hue : ho na ho ye devi ka hi kiya dhara hai
Dadi : ye kya bakbaas kar raha hai tu shakti mere bache pe ilzam lagana band kar
Shakti : Maa agar aag kitchen me lagti to ho sakta tha ki kisi vajh se lagi lekin upar meri Ruhi k kamre me lagne ka ek hi karan hai kisi ne lagayi hai aj agar Ruhi ko kuch ho jata to Mai kya karta

Shakti gusse me : devi aaj mai tujhe nhi chodunga

Dadi shakti ka gussa dekh k samajh jati ki shakti devi ko aaj buri tarah marega isliye sab wapas ghar k andar chale jate dadi wohi sadak k kinare bane park ki bench par baith k intezar karne lagti hai devi k lautne ka..

Waqt guzarta rehta hai dadi wohi baithe baithe devi ka intezaar karti rehti hai.

Udhar subhash bhi apni beizzati ka badla lene ki firaak me tha.

Subash man me : mai usse 5 saal bada hu fir bhi usne mujhe sabke samne mara aaj mai use chodunga nahi

Ye sab Subash apne ghar k samne khadi car mai baith k kehta hai.

Waqt guzarta rehta hai ek taraf dadi devi ka intezaar park me baith k kar rahi hoti ek taraf parking me car me baith k blue film dekhte hue Subash
Ye soch raha tha ki kaise badla lu apna us devi se

Subash blue film dekhte hue :uski bahen to inhi angrejnio ki tarah Hai Inse bhi bahut khubsurat ek dam kachi kali badla lene k Baad use hi maslunga hehehe..

Waqt guzarta rehta hai
Tabhi dadi ko samne se devi aata hua dikhayi deta hai

Dadhi tez Awaaz dete hue : devi beta jaldi aa mere pass
Ye Kehte hue dadhi sadak ko paar karne lagti hai udhar se devi bhi dadhi ko chintit dekh ke andha dhun dadhi ki or bhagne lagta hai.

Tabhi sadak paar karte hue Subash ki nazar devi pe padti hai
Aur Subash car start kar deta hai.

Devi bhi chote pairo se bhagta hua Aa raha tha dadi bhi devi k pass use shakti se bachane Jaa rahi thi Subash bhi car me 3rd gear daal k car ko devi ki taraf badha deta hai .

Subash : hahaha devi ye pair hamka dede

Aur fir Subash bhagte hue Aa rahe devi ki or car bhagate hue race puri chod deta hai devi adhi hi sadak par hota ki tabhi dhadam se Awaaz aati hai aur devi pichey k liye girta hai .

Dhadammmmmmmmm...

Kuch der k liye sab kuch shant sa ho jata hai..

Devi halke halke aankhe kholta hai or samne dekhte hi
Devi cheekh k : dadiiiiiiiiiiii

Hua ye jab Subash car lekar aa raha hota hai to dadi dekh leti hai wo apne Jism ki puri taqat laga ke lambe lambe pair badha k ek lambi chalang mar k devi ko dhakka deti hai jisse wo piche k liye girta or dadi devi ko jagah par aake girti hai Subash anjane me dadhi par gadhi chada deta hai aur car k tyre dadhi k gale se utar jate jinki wohi par maut ho jati hai.


Devi ek kone me Baitha hua tha gum sum sa ankho se ansu rukne ka Naam nahi le rahe they samne sare mehmaan padosi they unhi k beech ek palang par dadi ka sab tha jinki sanse ab Ruk gayi thi hamesha k liye.

Sohi Ruhi se : dadu dadi maa kab uthengi
Ye sun k Ruhi tej tej rone lagti hai

Shakti : chalo ab Maa ko aag dede
Fir sab arthi ko kandha de k marghat par aate hai unhi me devi bhi hota hai aur shakti k sath Ruhi Sohi bhi hoti hai
Jaise hi lash ko aag dene ka Samay aata hai
To pandit se lakdi Chhin k devi apni dadhi ko aag de deta hai

Kuch der Baad sab Jane lagte hai
Aur shakti jab Jane lagta hai to use hasrat ki nigaah se devi ye soch ke dekhta hai shayad ab dadi ki maut k Baad uska Baap use pyaar karega lekin shakti dono betio k hath pakad k ghar ko chal deta hai.

Aur devi ki aankhe bhar jati hai
Ab wo fir akela hi gaya tha.

Devi gusse me : subashhh....
Tune janm de diya ravan ko...

Devi ghar Aa ke apne Baap ki pistol leta aur bhagne lagta hai Subash k ghar ki or
Subabash k ghar aake dekhta hai ki uski bahen ek kamre me hai Sohi k umar ki pehle devi us par pistol tan ta lekin fir goli nhi chalti usse.

Fir ghar me dhundne lagta hai
Subash ko upar aake dekhta to Subash Dara sehma sa bad par leta hota hai

Jaise hi devi par uski nazar padti hai wo or kanp jata hai.

Devi subhash K pass jaa ke gusse me : ravan ko marne k liye Samundar paar karna padta hai aur usi ravan ko marne k liye bada jigar bhi hona chahiye

Ravan subhash ki ankho me gusse me dekh ke : hai kya.. Tere pass bada jigar

Ye dekh k subhash ki pant gili ho jati hai
Aur devi uske mooh me pistol daal k

Dhaye
Dhaye
Dhaye
Dhaye
Dhaye
Dhaye
Puri ki puri 6 goliyan daal deta hai
Golio ki Awaaz sun ke subhash ki Maa upar aati hai devi or subash k haal ko dekhkar uski cheekh nikal jati hai
Devi aurat ko dhakka dekar ghar se bhag jata hai aur bhagte bhagte station pahuchta hai jahan Maal gadhi khadi hoti hai aur aake usi me baith jata hai..

To be continue....

Aare Teri ke.. Tum to ek bad ek majedar updates likh ke chipkaye ho.. Mai FAN ho gaya tumhara... next padhta hu..dekhu usme Kya gul khilaye ho...

 

[Pta nhi]

Waiting

 

[Mithilesh373]

Update 5

So isliye ab devil ka case cbi k hawale kar diya gaya hai
Ane wali 15 junuary ab se 6 din baad 1 hazar crore worlebqnk me tarasfer kiye jayenge jinki dekhbhal security ka jimma cbi uthayegi..
( dosto kab kon story sunayega ye ap logo ko khud decide karna hoga narrator or characters)

Ab age

National forensic science lab ; is lab me India or foreign ke bade bade scientist experiment karte hain Kehne ko to ye bahut badi Sirf forensic science lab hai par aam log iske bare me jante bhi nahi yahan bhut se kuch ajeeb gair kanooni experiment bhi kiye jate hai government ke adesho par.
In lab
Ek admi scientist : Dr mehra aaj hamare experiment ki ek jhalak prime minister dekhenge
Dr. Mehra : sahi kaha Dr. hutiya bas kuch der me wo aane wale hai ye Baat to Sach hai ye experiment apke bina pura karna impossible tha
Dr hutiya : Dr mehra ye to apka badappan hai super soldiers banane me ham aur hamari team sab ka barabar ka yogdaan hai aur sabse jyada un sipahio ka jo desh k liye Qurban hone k liye tayar hue in super soldiers se hamara desh surakshit rahega or tarakki karega corruption ko jad se mitayenge jisse garibi kam hogi har koi pet bhar k khana kha payega


Dr mehra shaitaani hasi haste hue : sahi kaha Dr hutiya
Lo aagaye P. M sodhi sir

Ye baat lab k andar aate hue P. M ko dekhkar Dr mehra kehta hai
P. M sodhi kai bodyguards se ghira hua unke beech me chalta hua aata hai.

Sodhi : kaise ho Dr hutiya or Dr mehra kahan tak pahucha apka super soldiers banane ka experiment
Dr hutiya : mere sath aayiye sar.

Fir sab chal dete hai Dr hutiya k sath fir lift se tehkhane me aate hai.

Wahan kam kar rahi female scientists ko dekh kar P. M sodhi jeebh nikalne lagta hai or ek bodyguard ko ishara karke female ki taraf Dr hutiya k pass ajata hai

Dr hutiya, Dr mehra sodhi ko ek ese lab me late Jahan vichitra vichitra projects par experiment kiye jate
Lab k andar 5 f. T 7 f. T shishe ke glass hote hai jinke andar pani Bhara hota hai or insan jinhe ek black suit me us pani se bhare glass me rakha hua tha total glass 100 k aas pass they
Dr hutiya shise k glass ko dikhate hue : sodhi sir ye dekhiye in shisho k glass me super soldiers hai
Sodhi : Drs Inki powers kya kya hai.

Dr mehra : P. M sir 1 super soldier 100 aam loge se jyada taqat rakhta hai ye hui 1 ki power soche jab sare mil jayenge to kitne taqatwar honge
Sodhi : iska Matlab ye insan nahi
Dr mehra : nahi nahi sir ye insan hi hai ye aam zindagi bhi ji sakte hai but inhe Inki pehle ki memories Yaad Nahi hai
Sodhi : thik se samjha
Dr hutiya man me : is a pad jahil gawar ko kisne P. M bana diya.
Dr hutiya : sir Dr mehra ke Kehne ka Matlab hai ye insano ki tarah hai hamne bas inhe taqatwar banaya hai aur Inki yaddast mit chuki hai ye insano ki tarah khayenge, bolenge, rahenge washroom jayenge etc. Kul mila k ye insan hi hai lekin inme sochne samajhne ki shakti nahi ye wohi karenge jiska inhe adesh (order) diya jayega.
Sodhi : ese to inhe koi bhi order de sakta hai
Dr mehra : nhi sir hamne ek code banaya jo code bolega usi ka ye order follow karenge
Sodhi : agar koi code jaan gaya to
Dr hutiya ; nhi sir koi nhi jaan payega kyoki ham kisi ko batayenge hi nhi or
Hamara maksad hai desh se burayi curreption ko khatm karna in super soldiers ko banane ka bhi yahi maksad tha
Sodhi : esa kuch karo jisse ye ek shaks ka hukam mane
Dr mehra : sir esa bhi ho sakta hai
Dr hutiya : ji lekin ham esa hargiz nahi karenge kyoki ye desh k liye banaye gaye hai in soldiers ne bhi kurbani desh k liye hi di, 50 soldiers ham army ko saunp denge jisse desh ki raksha karenge or 50 India ki waqi city me police stations me jo crupption par rok lagayenge rishbat khatm kar denge jad se bina thake ye 365 days kaam karenge.

Sodhi man me : ye chutiya to inhe free me bant raha hai kaisa ho agar ye mera hukm mane mai to raja ban jaunga fir bar bar chunow ladne ki zarurat nhi padegi inhi k Dam par jitunga aur jaisa chahunga vaisa Inse kaam le lunga aur ye mehra to mera hi aadmi hai.
Ye sochte hue P. M Hasne lagta hai

Sodhi : Dr mehra kya tum esa kar sakte ho ki jo mai kahu wo ye sab kare, aur agar age bhi in super soldiers ki zarurat pade to tum bana paoge?

Dr mehra : hi sir mai esa kar sakta hu
Dr hutiya : sodhi sir ap ye kya Keh rahe hai inhe create karne ka maksad desh ki sewa karna hai.
Sodhi : hahaha ye ab meri seva karenge mere orders follow karenge
Dr hutiya gusse me : sodhi sir ye kya bakbaas kar rahe ho
Sodhi bodyguard se : Peter is sale ka mooh band kar do dhyan rahe ye marna nahi chahiye.

Dr hutiya gusse me : kutte tu mere or desh k sath vishwash ghat kar raha hai mai sab tabah kar dunga mehra kutte tune apna zameer bech diya .
Sodhi : Hahahaha ye deshvashi yahi deserve karte hai.
Dr mehra : mai to pehle hi Bika hua tha hahaha
Fir Peter aata or lab ki kothri me jhatpatate hue Dr. Hutiya ko le jata hai.

Sodhi : Dr mehra demo bhi dikhao

Fir Dr mehra ek shishe k glass k pass jata hai aur uski oxygen pipe band Kar deta or ek button dawa deta hai
Fir dhire dhire pani khatm hone lagta hai or subject kisi panchi ki tarah fadfadane lagta hai or shishe k glass par mukke marne lagta hai shisha bullet proof hota hai
Dhire dhire glass par darare aane lagti hai
Churrrrrrrre khachhhhh
Ki Awaaz k sath shisha tut k gir jata hai or subject zameen par ghutno k bal baith jata hai or ajeeb nigaho se apne charo or dekhne lagta hai.

Subject halke se : order me
Dr mehra code bolte hue : ( nila ambar kali dharti Kehte mujhko bahubali)
hit the desk.
Itna sunte hi subject samne padi lohe ki Desk k pass jata hai or apni tang ko sar se upar karke desk k beech me marta jisse wo do tukdo me bant jati hai.

Sodhi or uske bodyguard ye dekh k buri tarah se chonk jate hai.
Sodhi : Dr ise Dard nhi hua
Dr mehra : nhi sir inhe super siram pilaya gaya hai jisse ye Dard mehsus nhi karte na inhe hota hai aur ghayal honge jab ye tab inke jhakhm apne aap bhar jayenge..

Sodhi apne ek bodyguard ko 5 ungli dikhate hue : jaldi se inhe puri tarah perfect karo Taki Sirf mera order follow kare vaise kab tak esa ho jayega.

Dr mehra : sir kuch Waqt k Baad Mai inme changes kar dunga fir ye apka hukm manege.
Sodhi : bahut khub Dr mehra tumhare account me 500 crore as chuke hai 2 hazar crore kam pura hone k baad ayenge..

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Mai dinner karte hue : Maa papa ka transfer yahan hone wala hai
Sohi : Ohh dadu its great news dady yahan Aa rahe hai awwww
Mai request karte hue : Maa papa yahan reh sakte hai hamare sath plzzz maan jao plz plz plz...

Jaise hi mai kehti hu ye Baat Maa khana chod kar Jane lagti
Mai uth k unhe dubara chair par bithati hui : Maa ap agar nahi chahti to koi Baat nahi
Ye Kehte hue mai sad ho jati hu.
Maa : kaise us insan k sath reh sakti hai wo aurat jiske jigar k tukde ko usse Chhin liya uske pati ne mai ap shakti ki patni nahi tum dono ki Maa hu Sirf na jane kis haal me hoga mera devi zinda bhi hai ya mar gaya

Mai: Maa jo hua hai ham use badal to sakte nhi aur vaise bhi ham sab barabar k hisse daar hai ap bhi fir papa se ham kyo dur rahe.

Maa Nam ankho se : to beti aaj tune bhi tana Maar liya mere hi karmo ka fal hai jis beti ko itna pyaar diya wo aaj apni hi Maa ko ruswa kar rahi hai.

Mai chair se uth k Maa k pass aake baith jati hu
Mai : Maa plz roiye na mera wo Matlab nhi tha I'm sorry ap nhi chahti to papa nhi aayenge yahan
Maa : mai janti hu tu apne papa se bahut pyar karti hai thik hai bula le lekin wo mujhse bolega nahi thik hai
Mai khush hote hue : thank you thank u so much Maa
Maa : devi ho sake to apni Maa ko maaf kar dena...

Mai khana kha k apne room me aakar change karke let jati hu
Na jane uski yadon ne dil ka sukun chin liya..

Kuch der Baad Sohi aati

Sohi mujhe piche se hug karke lette hue
Sohi : to mara bf sad hai
Sohi mere chahere par udasi dekh k kehti hai
Mai : nhi to i'm a bindas girl
Sohi mooh Bana k : wo to dikh raha hai, chalo jo apne kaha use pura karo
Mai : kya
Sohi apni Kamar ko mere pichey dhakka dete hue
Sohi : ise di
Mai smile karte hue : gandi kahi ki, tu bra me

Mai Sohi ki taraf ghum k dekhti to bra, lower me leti hui thi mere pass
Sohi : ha to, ap mujhe dekh k control nhi kar paa rahi hai
Mai : TU bhi na
Sohi : bolo bolo Esa hi hai na
Mai : chal teri pyaas bujha hi deti hu
Ye Kehte hue mai Sohi ke sine par aa ke baith gayi uske hatho ko apne ghutno se dawa k Sohi ki baglo me gudgudi karne lagti hu.
Mai : kaisa lag raha hai ab hehehe
Sohi haste hue : dadu dadu chor do mujhse control nhi ho raha hai
Mai : kaise chor du pyaas to bujha lene de
Sohi jhatpate hue : dadu plz plz Ruk jaye mera pet full raha hai
Mai dekhti k ab use bardst nhi ho raha to bagal me aake let jati hu

Mai : kaisa lag raha hai
Sohi : apne to Sach me pyas bujha di
Acha di ye bataye mere boobs bade ya apke
Mai smile karti hui : tu sudhri nhi agar ab uthi to chorungi nhi
Sohi : nhi nhi ab nhi di mai to mazak kar rahi thi, di ek baat puche apse
Mai : hmmm
Sohi : apne army ki job join kyo nhi ki apka to sapna tha na fir Oxford me study karna kuch samjhi nhi
Mai : army na join karne ka reason ye tha ki caiptan girls ki virginity check Kar rahe they panty k upar se jab meri bari aayi to uske lund par kick Maar k job chor di, aur andar se chah bhi nhi thi wo to dad k Kehne par join karna chahti

Sohi : Ohh Acha lund par.
Sohi k Kehne par mujhe ehsaas hota maine kya Keh diya ye dekh kar mai sharm se laal ho jati hu.

Sohi : ye natak band karo mai koi Larka nahi
Mai : ye bata college me koi pasand aaya
Sohi : no , mai usi se shadi karungi jisse ap karengi
Mai : Pagal ho gayi hai kya
Sohi mere sine se chipakte hue : mai apke bina ek pal bhi nhi reh sakti mujhe har ek kadam par apni dadu chahiye
Uski Baat sun k mai bhi use tightly hug kar leti hu.

Mai : esa ho sakta hai mai tere bina reh lu lekin jo tu keh rahi hai wo mumkin nhi
Sohi : Kyo nhi.
Mai : chor ye, topic change Kar
Mere Esa Kehne se Sohi Mooh fula k Dusri karwat let jati hai

Mai pichey Sohi ki hug karke : naraz ho gayi
Sohi : nahi to bas adat daal rahi hu apse dur hone ki ek na ek din hona hi hai isliye
Mai nam ankho se : kaisi batein kar rahi hai tere bina mai ji paungi kya meri Jaan basti hai tujhme
Sohi : meri ap me juda hone ka irada to apka hai mera nahi
Mai : tujhe kaise samjhaun
Sohi : Rehne digiye na zarurat bi nhi
Mai : OK ban jana meri saut ab khush
Sohi : sach dadu.. love you so much di you're so sweet
Maine ye man rakhne k liye keh diya tha Sohi ki zidd k age majboor hoke

Sohi : di kal Sunday hai kya plan hai apka
Mai : ghar par rahungi
Sohi : dadu kyo Na Maa ap mai Shimla k junglo me camp lagaye dher sari masti karenge
Mai : nhi or soch
Sohi : shopping
Mai : or
Sohi : movie
Mai : aur
Sohi : bas itna kafi hai
Mai : thik hai tu Maa ko leke chali Jaa junglo me fir shopping uske Baad movie okay Mai nahi Jaa rahi kahi
Sohi Mooh latka ke : ap achi di nhi katti
Ye Kehte hue mooh ghuma leti hai dusri side me karwat leke
Thapppp
Mai chutro par thappar marte hue : tere nakhre kon uthayega
Sohi : jo pelega wohi nakhre uthayega
Ye sun k Mera mooh khula ka khula reh jata hai
Mai : teri dadu hu kuch to respect kar
Sohi : or Mai boy hu na apme mujhme kya difference bolo
Mai : tere sawalo ka jawab nahi mere pass meri Maa
Sohi muskurati hui : badi bahen jitni sidhi hoti choti bahen utni hi tedi
Thapppp
Mai fir marti hui : tu to meri cute baby girl hai
Sohi : ahhhhhh dhire maro na
Fir baby ko kal enjoy karao na plz dadu
Mai : pehle meri bahon me aa fir Kal pehle movie fir shopping uske Baad camp thik hai
Sohi mujhse chipatte hue : thank you so much dadu you're so sweet
Mai : maska marna band kar ab jaldi se soja
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C. B. I headquarter Mumbai

Ek hall jaise bade room me Kai log baithe they samne hologram ki light safed parde par pad rahi thi
Ek cbi officer : 1st chori Delhi 300 crore ki chori 2nd Mumbai 400 crore ki chori chor ka kuch nahi pata siwaye Naam k devil.... Kon hai kaisa dikhta kuch nhi pata apne kaam ko itni safayi se karta hai ke ham kuch nahi jaan paye...

Ye sun k hall me baitha hua ek admi khada hota hai
Admi : asif sir suna hai 1 hazar caror ki security k liye koi special officer ane wala hai
Asif : ha sahi kaha Mai usi k bare me batane Jaa raha tha
Raw se ek special officer aane wala hai kal subah wo kaisa dikhta hai kon hai koi nhi janta paiso k a code lene wohi jayega gupt jagah se or tabhi ham paise transfer Kar payenge us raw officer ka sath dene k liye maine aditi bhartiya ko chuna hai

Jaise hi asif aditi bhartiya ka Naam leta sare cbi ofiicer apas me khusur pusur karne lagte hai
Asif : shant ho jao sab
Ap logo k dimag me ye sawal gote kha raha ki aditi ko choose kyo kiya wo to abhi kisi post par na hoke bas training le rahi hai to iska reason ye hai aditi ke mata pita ki hatya karne wala ek chor hi tha aur aditi choro se sabse jyada Nafrat karti hai uske dil me rahem nahi choro k liye or wo loyal hai sabse jyada is mission par to mere aditi ko choose karne ka reason yahi hai aur wo kabiliyat bhi rakhti hai, aditi are you ready for mission

Ye sunte hi sare ofiicer aditi k bare me khusar pusar karna band kar dete hain

Tabhi unhi ofiicer ki bheed me sabse pichey khadi ladki uthti hai jo sadgi ki murat hoti hai khubsurati esi ke ek bar jo dekhe to sab kuch waar de us pe.

Aditi : thank you so much asif sir is mission k liye mujhe choose karne k liye maine to socha bhi nahi tha, ab tak devil 7 Arab ki chori kar chuka hai or is baar rakam sabse jyada hai wo fir ayega is master plan ke sath lekin ham tayar rahenge uski arthi saja ke wo ayega to chori karne lekin hamare pass se use Sirf dhul milegi or kuch nahi

Asif : well done aditi meri beti mujhe yahi jazba chahiye tha
Mere cabin me aana mai tumhe us officer ki kuch details dunga jisse tum use pehchaan logo kyoki tum hi Kal airport par lene jaogi use.


To be continue....

Sabkuch sahi chal raha hai but ye asif kaha sent as gaya... Mujhe cast mixed thoda bhi pasand nahi.. Ya to Hindu me ya to Muslim kaun sa bhi ek cast theme pe story achha hota hai.. Kyo ki aise me kisi ka jati ego hurt nahi hota hai.. Hope aage koi Muslim girl na aa jaye... Kyo ki tab mujhe koi bolega mai paisa de raha hu ya aapna Jan de raha hu Aur tum mixed cast wala story padh lo phir bhi mai WO story nahi padhta... Aur mere jaisa yaha pe bahut honge... So avoid cast mixing...

 

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Sabkuch sahi chal raha hai but ye asif kaha sent as gaya... Mujhe cast mixed thoda bhi pasand nahi.. Ya to Hindu me ya to Muslim kaun sa bhi ek cast theme pe story achha hota hai.. Kyo ki aise me kisi ka jati ego hurt nahi hota hai.. Hope aage koi Muslim girl na aa jaye... Kyo ki tab mujhe koi bolega mai paisa de raha hu ya aapna Jan de raha hu Aur tum mixed cast wala story padh lo phir bhi mai WO story nahi padhta... Aur mere jaisa yaha pe bahut honge... So avoid cast mixing...

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Update 9

Ye sun k Roha bahut sad ho jati hai
Roha : ruhiiii.....
Maa k chikne ki Awaaz sun k Ruhi pichey ghum k dekhti to ek hawaldarni Aa rahi hoti hai andar Ruhi bhi uth k chal deti unke paws.

Sara mamla janne k Baad use sab samjh Ata hai ki police kyo ayi hai.

Ab age..

City police station


Ruhi ek chair par sp ke samne baithi hoti hai.

Sp: bahut hath pair chalne lage tere Kyo mara tune Mr. Rohit ko tujh pe fir banayi jayegi tu 5 _ 6 saal k liye andar
Ruhi : mind your language officer
Sp : chup sali sharab k nashe me Maar pit karti hai or yahan mujhse bakbaas kar rahi hai.

Rohit : jiju dekha kaise ye tevar dikha rahi hai.
Sp : fikr mat karo rohit sali ko jeil me daal ke ragdenge.

Ye sun k Ruhi ki hattne lagti lekin wo kisi tarah khud ko control me rakhti.

Ruhi : officer tu janta nahi mai kon hu jis new commissioner ki posting ho rhi wo mere hi dad hai.

Ye Kehte hue Ruhi jeb se sigar nikal kar pine lagti hai.



Ye dekh kar sp til mila uthta hai or pass rakhe pani ke jug ko utha k Ruhi par fekta hai.

Kuch der ke liye sab kuch shant ho jata hai.

Ruhi gusse me : bhut hua kutte tera aaaa.... Hhhh...

Ruhi gusse me dhadte hue table ko utha k dur fekti or fir jameen par pair Maar k udte hue apni nee sp ke mooh par marti hai.

Sp Dard se : aaaahhhhh....

Aaahhhhhhhh Kya Kara sali tune mera hath tod diya.


Nee marne ke turant Baad sp jis hath se pani Ruhi par fekta hai usi hath ko Ruhi pakad ke ghuma deti hai.

Sp chillate hue : kaha ho sab jaldi aao kutita bana ke maro ise.

Sp ki cheekh sun k Ruhi ke samne 10 12 hawaldar hawaldarni Aa jati hai.

Ruhi wohi se chalang marti hawaldaro par or ek taraf se sabko marti chali jati hai.


Aaaahhhhh....
Tune ham par hath utha k acha nahi kiya

Aaaahhhhh bhut bura marti hai.

Isi tarah 5 _ 6 hawaldar ghayal hoke karahne lagte hai.

Inki pitayi dekhte hue rohit chup jata hai dar k mare.

Sp : hawaldaro control room me phone Karo is Randi ko esa chodenge ki ye bistar se uth bhi na payegi mahine bhar.

Jab ruhi ye sunti to gusse me sp ki taraf dekhti hai.

Ruhi Dard me : aaaaaahhhhhhhhh....

Ek hawaldarni pichey se Ruhi ke danda marti hai Ruhi k sar par.

Jaise hi hawaldarni dusra waar karne wali hoti Ruhi uska danda pakad ke ud k ek kick hawaldarni ke sar par marti jisse hawaldarni beshudh hokar zameen par sar k bal girti or sar fatt jata uska.

Itne me waqi hawaldarni hawaldar mote dande lekar Ruhi k pass Aa chuke hote hai.

Ruhi unhe dekh kar apna danda ( lathhi) itni speed se ghumne lagti ke sare hawaldar dar jate hai


Hawaldarni 1 : ye hai kon akhir..

Hawaldar : koi jaye control room pe phone kare .

Tabhi sabhi ek sath Ruhi par war karte hain Ruhi unke war ko dande se rokti hai.

Or fir apni edi ghumte hue hawaldarni hawaldaro k marti jisse sare policewale Dard me karah uthte hai or danda unke hatho se gir jata hai.

Fir Ruhi kisi k sar kisi k pair ek taraf se sabko marti chali jati hai.

Jab sab ghayal ho jate to pichey mud k sp ki taraf dekhti hai jo apne cabin ke bahar ek hath ko dusre hath me liye khada hota hai.

Sp ki nazar jaise hi Ruhi par padti wo dar k mare jail k andar bhagne lagta hai.

Ruhi : kaha tak bhagega....


Ye Kehte hue Ruhi uske pichey bhagne lagti hai.

Or fir Ruhi jail k basement me Jahan Kai cell thi jinme kaidi band they.

Sare kaidi Ruhi or bhagte hue police wale dekh kar shor karne lagte hai.

Kaidi 1 : Hahahaha thulle ki auqaat dikhane wali nayi madam Aa gayi shayad jail me.

Kaidi 2 : kya ladki hai yar jaise koi pari mil jaye to maza choot Maar ke
Kaidi 3 : sale raghu dekh nahi raha police ka kya hal kar rahi fir soch tera kya hoga mooh par lagam laga apne.


Ruhi jab bhag rahi hoti to uski nazar cell me band ek ladki par padti hai jis par safed chadar padi hoti Ruhi use ignore karke dande ko fek kar Sp k marti jisse wo lad khadata hua girta hai.


Sp : aaaahhhhhhhh sali tujhe chodunga nahi.

Ruhi pass aake : pehle khud ko bacha ye Kehte hue hawa me pair uthati or Sp k kaan par marti jisse khun nikalne lagta hai.

Ese hi bhut der tak Ruhi Sp ko marti rehti jab sp behosh ho jata hai to chod deti hai use.

Tabhi wapas jane lagti Ruhi.

Beti....... O........ Beti

Ruhi is Awaaz Ko sun kar pichey dekhti to ek cell me band ek budha admi Awaaz de raha hota hai uske sath 10 _ 12 saal ke do bacchey or Kai budhe admi hote hai.

Ruhi unhe ignore Kar deti ye soch ke ki wo maze lene k liye bula rahe hai or fir age chalne lagti hai.

Beti..... Hamri beti ko bacha ham tumhare pair pad rahe hai.. Aaj ham sab ko ye police wale Maar denge.

Us budhe ki Awaaz me itna Dard hota ki Ruhi k pair Ruk jate hai.

Ruhi pass aake : kon hain ap log kya kahani hai apki.

Budha : beti hamra Naam dinanath hai
Ye hamara bhai Divakar hai.

Dinanath pass khade admi ki taraf ishara karke kehta hai.

Dinath : beti ye dono bachey meri badi beti ke hai jise Maar diya gaya. Or choti beti yahan ke mla shiva, minister, juda ke gahr hai wo uski izzat loot rahe honge.

Ye Kehte hue budha rone lagta hai.

Ruhi : esa karne k pichey koi karan to hoga

Dinanath ansu poochte hue : beti ham Chattisgarh se yahan laye ham ham kirantikari hai is desh k system k khilaaf ladne wale isliye log hame naksali Kehte Hai. Apne bacho ki durdasa dekhte hue hamne sarkar ke Kehne par Samar pan kiya police hame ye kehkar layi yahN k hame achi zindagi di jayegi lekin esa kuch nahi hua.
Hamare pass mla shiva or minister juda k khilaf saboot they unke Gunaho k jab hamne police ko is bare me bataya to unhone badle me hame hi jail me daal diya or meri beti ko un mla k pass ye kehkar bhej diya k wo unko khush karegi.... Beti ham tumhare pair padte hai hame hamari beti ko bacha lo.

Ruhi : wo saboot kiske pass hai kaka

Dinanath : beti wo police walo ne jala diye.

Ruhi : Naam pata hai apko police wale ka
Divakar : Haa spector Jaswindar Singh beti.

Ruhi : ap logo k liye mai jo ho sakega karungi.

Hands up.......

Mrs. Ruhi apne hath upar karo....

Ruhi Awaaz ki disha me dekhti to kai police wale khade hote hai.

Ruhi kuch nahi kehti hath upar kar leti hai.

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Raj ek bhut badi oxevectory me dakhil hota hai jahan Kai log hote hai.

Devi : maharaj ap yahan..

Mithun : maharaj koi kaam tha to hame bula liya hota...

Raj : nahi kuch nahi mai car lene aya tha assu kahan hai.

Mithun : maharaj wo micionry room me hai.

Raj : us raw officer ka kya kiya
Devid : use Kaat ke gutter me baha diya boss..
Raj : good plan par work karo....

Ye Kehte hue raj micionry room me Ata jo bhut bada hota hai.

Assu apne boss ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai.

Assu ; boss....... Ye Kehte hue gale lag jata hai.

Raj: chal ab chod zara keys dena...

Assu naak se kuch sunghte hue : kya apne fog ki khushbu (perfume) lagayi.

Raj : ye mere badan ki natural khushbu hai.

Assu : ye sab chochle miss aditi ke liye ap uske sath date par Jaa rahe hai.

Raj : no mere pyare dost kya bakbaas kar rahe ho..

Assu hairan hote hue : ohhh ye thik nahi bikul thik nahi apko usse pyar ho gaya hai.

Raj : tum apni auqat bhul rahe ho assu Lao ab chabi do mujhe invincible car ki..

Assu : kya hiag jab aditi ko apki asliyat ka pata chalega..

Raj : mai nahi janta..


Ye Kehte hue raj assu ko pakad kar uski pocket me se chabi nikalne lagta hai.

Assu bhagte hue : boss Ruk jaiye ye apki bhalai k liye hai maine Maa se wada kiya hai ki apko sahi salamat le kar aunga.

Raj assu ko pakad te hue : tum kya kano meri bhalai kis me hai.


Assu : jyada nahi janta par itna pata hai.... Villan ko heroine kabhi nahi milti..

Raj assu ko pakad kar : ho sakta hai ab mai villan ban k rehna hi na chahu to...

Assu hairan hokar : kon hai ap......

Raj gusse me : Lao ab chabi do mujhe..

Assu : meri zindagi ka ek hi maksad hai wo hai apka dhyan rakhna...

Raj : ho sakta hai ab mujhe tumhari zarurat nahi hai...


Assu nam ankho se : kya kha apne apko meri zarurat nahi hai..

Raj : Haa mujhe tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai ab....

Khannnnnnn....
Assu itna sunte hi jeb se keys nikal kar invincible car par fekta hai.

Assu : Jaa raha hu mai yahan se apna boriya bistr band ke.

Raj bhi gusse me hota hai wo kuch nahi kehta keys utha k gadi the. Baitha or chal deta hai.

Devid or mithun raj or assu ke beech hua sab dekh rahe hote hai.

Devid ; assu yar Kitna bol gaya maharaj se ham hote to ab mar chuke hote.

Mithun : assu ki Maa ne boss ko Pala isliye boss assu ko apna bhai mante hai chal assu ko roke...

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Ruhi k hatho me hath kadi bandhi hoti hai d. I. G. ke samne chair par baithi hoti hai ..

Charo taraf hawaldar khade hote banduko ke sath.

D. I. G: Ruhi tume abhi tak jail me isliye nahi dala kyoki tum commissioner sahab ki beti ho nahi to abhi tak in hawaldarnio ko dekh rahi ho na buri se buri ladkio ko sahi kiya hai inhone.

Khud ko dekho kitna pyara chahera hai ye sab kis liye karti ho itna gussa ki police ko usi k station me mara.

Ruhi : sar ap nhi jante sach kya hai, is kutte se pucho isne kya kiya.

Ruhi rohit ki taraf ishara karke kehti hai jo kuch dur khada tha.

D. I.g : hame sab pata hai lekin tumne kanoon ko apne hatho me kyo liya..

Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri beti ko hath kadi pehnane ki.

Shakti cabin me ate hue kehta hai uski Awaaz sun k sare police wale salute karne lagte hai.

Shakti k sath sath Sohi bhi Aa rahi hoti hai.

D. I. G : maaf karna sir lekin inhone yahan tod fod ki or sp hawaldaro ko mara buri trah se.

Shakti : shut up hath kadio ko kholo.

Sohi bhagte hue Ruhi se chipat jati or uske galo ko chumne lagti hai.

Sohi : dadu dadu ap thik to ho na..

Ruhi : teri dadu ko kuch ho sakta hai kya..

Dad ap.....

Sohi policewalo se : tumhari himmat kaise hui meri dadu ko arrest karne ki you bloody cow words mooh tod dungi tum sab ka meri dadu ko chudwa bhi..

Ruhi muskurate hue : chup ja dadu ki Maa mujhe kuch nahi hua.

Shakti : shut up Sohi....

Or tum sab khade khade mooh kya dekh rahe ho kholo meri beti ko....

Tabhi ek hawaldar ruhi ki hathkadio ko kholta hai.

Shakti : beta ab kabhi esa mat karna tum dono ghar Jaao..

Ruhi hath sidhey karte hue: no dad yahan kuch begunah log hai pehle chudana hai.

Dig : mam ap jaye ham log dekh lenge..

Ruhi : hmm Pta hai kitna dekhoge tum aaj unka encounter karoge na..

Dad kuch naksali hai is jail me band unhone bataya........................

Sari kahani jaan lene k Baad d. I. G bolna shuru karta hai.
Shakti sir mam se kahe is mamle se dur rahe isme bade bade logo ka hath hai.

Shakti : jao Pehle un logo ko lekar yahan

Dig : sir Mai apse akele me Baat karna chahta hu.


Ye Kehte hue dig chal deta hai.

Uske piche shakti bhi....

Hawaldar un naksalio ko cell se nikal kar Ruhi k pass khada kar deta hai.

Ruhi dinanath se : kaka ap befikr rahe mere dad commissioner hai wo apko zarur insaf dil ayenge.



To be continued...

 

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