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Incest Bahen ka badla Bhai se (sister's revenge ) restart

Favorite character in story / do you like the story

  • Yes

    Votes: 9 14.3%
  • No

    Votes: 1 1.6%
  • Superb story

    Votes: 2 3.2%
  • Vishnu

    Votes: 9 14.3%
  • Sneha , Saloni

    Votes: 6 9.5%
  • Sneha

    Votes: 1 1.6%
  • Sona

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Janu

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Laxmi

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Riya

    Votes: 1 1.6%
  • Vaishali

    Votes: 1 1.6%
  • Ananya

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  • Complete story if you restart

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Update 4

Sneha : to ab waqi ka kaam Tera Hai vaishu Jaa aur lag ja apne kam par abhi tak to sab kuch hamare according hua hai ye bhi hoga..

Vaishali : Ha yar sach me tu nution ki bahen hai what a perfect planning

Sneha : ha ha ha tu ja ab mai wohi tera intezar kar rahi hu..


Ab age........


At the canteen

Dinehs : bhai vishu tune kiss Kyo nahi kiya yar dekha na kitna hot Maal thi teeno

Mai : ha janta hu yar lekin mai kiss use karunga jise pyaar karunga

Asif, chola : to bhai ye bhi bata de tu pyaar kise karega

Mai smile dete hue : jisse shadi karunga

Dinesh : bhai to ab collqge me hamari Bhabi ko dhundh le jaldi se

Asif, chola : ha bhai ek se bad kar ek hai

Mai : nhi yar yahan ek do chhodkar sab ki sab characterless hai khubsurati wo nahi hoti jo Bahar se dikhe asal khubsurati insan ka character hota hai..

Asif, chola, dinehs : Waah bhai tune to dil ko chu liya soch ho to tere jaisi
Asif : bhai lekin duniya dikhaba jyada pasand karti hai
Mai : Haa but not sabhi

Excuse me kya vishnu roy ap hi hai

Mai pichey mud k dekhta hu to ek ladki hoti hai

Mai : Haa mai hi hu, kya kaam hai
Ladki : mera Naam Laxmi Hai
Mai haste hue : to Mai kya karu
Laxmi : aaj subah apne fight ki thi isliye apko hamare department ki. Hod ne bulaya hai odotorioum me

Ye sun ke mai kabhi us ladki ka to kabhi apne dosto ka mooh dekhne lagta hu aur mere dost mujhe dekhne lagte hai

Mai apne dosto se : Sala dekho Kitna bada fattu nikla ram apas ki Baat ko hod tak le gaya.

Asif, chola, dinesh : ha bhai lekin samajh me ye nahi Aa raha hai hamare tujhe hod ne apne office ke bajaye odotorioum me kyo bulaya

Mai : ha yar Baat to sahi hai to miss Laxmi tum janti ho Kyo bulaya
Laxmi : wahan chalo khud pata chal jayega
Mai : aajao bhai logo hod se bhi mil lete hai

Mere esa Kehne par Laxmi hadbada ke kehti hai nahi nahi kisi or ko nahi Sirf apko bulaya hai apse hi milna hai hod mam ko
Laxmi ki baat sun ke mai thoda hairan ho jata hu fir sochta hu dekha jayega jo hoga mil lete hai vishu kha thodi jayegi

Mai : thik hai yaro milta hu kuch der me
Asif, chola : thik hai bhai ham log bhi apni class attend kar lete hai

Dinesh : bhai Mai idhar hi mil Unga
Mai : thik hai ye Kehte hue Laxmi k sath chalne lagta hu kuch der chalne k Baad Laxmi mere pichey ho jati hai
Mai sidion se niche utarte hue odotorioum me ghus ne lagta hu.

Odotorioum sabhi class's departments se alag tha college ki park ke pass aur tehkhane me.

Mai andar jata hu to dekhta hu ki Pura odotorioum Khali hai
Mai : Laxmi yahan to koi nahi hai
Jaise hi piche mud ke ye kehta to dekhta hu pichey Laxmi odotorioum ka gate lock kar rahi hoti hai.

Mai : yahan to koi nahi hai aur tumne gate kyo band Kiya
Kya vishu yar ek ladki esa kyo karegi samajh jao yar
Laxmi kutili muskaan ke sath kehti hai

Mai : kya
Laxmi : oye handsome itna bhi bhola mat ban subah to Teri raging ache se nahi karpaye mere friend to unhone teri raging ka task mujhe diya hai ye Kehte hue Laxmi apni shirt k button kholne lagti hai

Mera sar fatne laga ye dekh k kuch bhi samajh nahi Aa raha tha
Mai : tum kya Pagal ho gayi ho pehle to mujhe yahan le ayi jhuth bol kar ab apni shirt utarne lagi ho
Laxmi apne jism se shirt chair par fekte hue kehti hai : baby I want to fuck you I want your Dick in my white pussy ab bas mooh band karke cooperate karo ye Kehte hue mere pass ane lagti hai

Laxmi ki baat sun ke to meri sitti pitti gum ho jati hai
Mai : ye kya bakbaas kar rahi ho tum mai esa hargiz nahi karunga
Laxmi bilkul mere pass aake apne hatho se mera sar pakadte hue kehti hai : tum karoge meri Jaan agar inkar kiya to apne kapde faad k tum par rape ka case kar dungi

Mai man me : kaha fas gaya Mai Kar de vishu vaisa jaisa ye Keh rahi hai agar isne rape case kar diya to teri respect aur tere dad ki respect sab mitti me mil jayegi nahi nahi agar esa karega to tera fantasy ka kya hoga jo tu apni wife apne ke sath karna chahta hai aur ye paap bhi hai ..

Mai : nahi mai nahi karunga chahe kuch ho jaye.

Laxmi : Ohh Acha Esa kya ye Kehte hue Laxmi mere hath ko pakad ke apni kamar par rakh deti hai

Mai : dekho dur hato mujhse
Laxmi : kya Mai sunder nahi hu
Mai : ha tum bahut khubsurat ho lekin jo tum karne k liye Keh rahi ho wo mai bilkul nahi kar sakta
Laxmi : ab bahut hui batein last time puch rahi hu mujhe chodna hai nahi
Mai : nahi
Jaise hi mai na kehta hu Laxmi mere hath ki unglio ko pakad k apni t shirt utha k pet par ragad deti hai jisse nisan ban jata hai fir mera dusra hath pakad k apni gardan par khub zor se ragadti hai
Mai ye dekh ke use dhakka deta hu jisse Laxmi kuch pichey hatti Hai
Mai bach ke jaldi se gate ke pass jata hu aur kholne ki koshish karne lagta hu

Laxmi : somebody help plz help me ye meri izzat lut raha hai olz hlp me Laxmi cheekh cheekh ke ye Kehne lagti hai

Jab Mai ye sunta hu to mere hath pair badnami ke dar se kanpne lagte hai
Mai bhag k Laxmi ke pass jata hu
Mai : ye kya kar rahi ho tum maine tumhara kya bigada mere sath esa kyo kar rahi ho tum

Laxmi : tujhe offer diya tha chodne ka lekin tune mujhe inkar karke apni shamat bulayi hai ab log tere pyare se chahere ko dekh k kahenge iske bholepan par na jao isme ek haiwan chupa hai jo ladkio ka rape karta hau
Laxmi ye Keh ke gate ki taraf bhagne lagti hai
Laxmi ki baat sun k to mere pairo talo se zameen khisak jati hai nam ankho ke sath mai uthta hu aur Laxmi ki taraf bhagta hu jo gate khol rahi hoti hai

Laxmi : plz help me koi Bachao mujhe ye meri izzal lut lega plz save me Bachao mujhe..
MAI bhagte hue nam ankho k sath : Laxmi plz Esa mat Karo isse meri zindagi barbaad ho jayegi please kapde pehno aur ham yahan se chalte hai plz Maan jao
Jaise hi Laxmi gate ka lock kholti vaise hi mai use pakd k pichey khichne lagta hu
Uski kamar me hath dal k jab Mai pichey kar raha hota hu ki tabhi darwaza khulne ki Awaaz aati hai

Jab samne nazar padti hai meri to samne 7 - 8 girls decoration ka Saman liye hue khadi thi unke sath meri sneha didi bhi thi ye dekh ke mere hath khud ba khud Laxmi ki kamar se hattne lagte hai

Laxmi : Vaishali, Rita, gita, sita please Bachao mujhe ye mera rape kar raha tha jaise hi wo mujhse chutti hai un sab ke pass Jane lagti hai

Laxmi ki baat sun ke sab ke hatho se decoration ka Saman chutt ke niche girne lagta hai aur andar ane lagti hai sab

Mai bhi bhagte hue sneha didi k pass jata hu didi ke pass pahuch ke didi ye ladki jhut bol rahi hai maine iska rape nahi kiya
Meri Baat ko vaishali beech me kstte hue kehti hai : kya.... Sneha ye darinda tera bhai hai

Shalu : isne aaj 1st day hi college me fight ki aur ab hamari friend ka rape karne laga
Mai fir rote hue bolna shuru karta hu : didi maine kuch nahi kiya ye ladki jhut bol rahi hai mai yahan hod se milne Aya Tha yahi ye Keh ke mujhe layi thi
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Laxmi : ye tumne kaha tha mujhse mujhe pata hota tum meri izzat lutne k liye late they to kabhi nahi ati..

Jaise hi mai di se kehta hu : wo ek zor ka thappad mujhe marti hai
Sneha didi : vishu tu esa hoga mai janti nahi thi tu insan ke naam par haiwan nikla darinde tujhe to bhai Kehte hue bhi sharm Aa rahi hai mujhe

Di plz mera yaqin kare maine kuch nahi kiya please di apki kasam maine esa kuch nahi kiya maine kuch nahi kuch nahi kiya
Mai sabki parwaah kiye bina zor zor se rote hue kehta hu...

Vaishali : ab iski kartute pure college ko batayenge sab iske khubsurat mooh par kalikh malenge
Rita : Haa sahi kaha vaishu ham iska wo haal karenge sab repist rape karne se pehle iska haal dekhenge

Gita : pehle to khub iski beizzati karenge
Sita : fir isko police me denge

Jab ye sab sunta hu to Mai aur zor zor se rote hue ghutno k bal baith ke sneha didi ke pair pakad ke Kehne lagta hu di maine esa kuch nahi kiya mai bekasoor hu ye Laxmi jhut bol rahi hai di apki kasam apke bhai ne esa kuch nahi kiya di mere yaqin kare ye jhuth bol rahi hai plz mera yaqin kare mai apka bhai hu koi repist haiwan darinda nahi

Sneha didi baithe hue kehti hai : tere jaise bhai se acha hota mera koi bhai nahi hota

Vaishali : ab yahan ruk ke ek dusre ka mooh kyo tak rahe ho chalo vc sir k pass

Mai : di mai sach keh raha hu apko pata hai apka bhai jhut nahi bolta

Sneha didi : man leti hu tum jhut nahi bol rahe they jab ham aye andar tab jo dekha tha wo kya tha kano se jo suna wo kya tha

Mai : di wo sab jhuth tha kabhi kabhi ankho ka dekha kano ka suna sach nahi hota meri ankho me dekho inhi ankho ko dekh ke kabhi ap mujhse pyaar karti thi ab apko inme ek darinda ek haiwan ek repist nazar aata hai

Sneha didi : Haa ye ankhe ek repist ek darinde ek haiwan ki hai

Jab apni hi di ke mooh se ye sunta hu to Mai puri tarah hi tut jata hu meri ankho me jo ansu beh rahe they wo aur jyada behne lagte hai

Ashko ki zamanat bhi Jahan Kam na aaye
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Ro ro ke apni begunahi ka saboot apne Ashko se diya apni di ko jinhe mujh par bharosa hi nahi hua ab maine bhi soch liya jo zurm maine nahi kiya uski saza kyo na ki jaye
Mai : le chalo mujhe Jahan chaho wahan
Mujhe apna har gunah kubul hai

Vaishali : ha ha chalo iske mooh par kalikh pot k le chalte hain

Sneha didi : Laxmi apne bhai ki taraf se mai tujhse mafi mangti hu ham matter ko yahi suljha le to behtar hoga agar mamla Bahar gaya to meri meri family ki bahut badnam hogi

Laxmi : aur jo tumhare bhai ne kiya uska kya agar time par tum log na aati to ye meri izzat loot chuka hota mai to kahi ki nahi rehti

Sneha didi : ha janti hu lekin tu to meri friend ki friend hai to yar meri vajh se ise maaf kar do i promise ab se kabhi bhi ye tere sath esa vaisa kuch nahi karega bol vishu karega ye dubara

Di ki Baat sun k mai apne khayalo se Bahar nikal k ansu poochte hue na me gardan hilata hu

Vaishali : mana sneha ye tera bhai hai lekin ese kaise chhd de ise saza to ise milke rahegi isse puch konsi saza ye chahta hai wo jo ham denge ya wo jo sare students teacher police mil k degi

Sneha didi : nahi nahi vaishali police ya students me ye Baat na jaye ise to saza han hi denge mai waqio se bachane ka keh rahi hu na ki hamse jo isne kiya I know wo mafi k layak nahi lekin mai chahti hu ise hai sab hi mil kar saza de

Vaishali : Haa chalo ye thik rahega ab se ye hamara gulam banega jo ham kahenge wohi karega college me ham sab ka aur

Sneha di beech me bolti hai : ghar par mera, bol vishu manega na hamari Baat
Vaishali : sneha bhai hai to tu is par rahem mat kar puch isse konsi saza manzur hai ise hamari aur teri ya students police ki

Sneha didi : bol vishu hamari saza ya students ki

Mai dhire se kehta hu : ji apki

Sab girls : kya sunayi nahi diya
Sneha didi : kya kaha zor se bol

Mai thodi Awaaz unchi karke : jo ap saza dengi wo manzur hai di

Sneha didi : good boy chal ab Jaa jab zarurat hogi to bulaungi aur Haa tune ghar par meri Baat nahi mani to fir tere liye bilkul acha nahi hoga ab bata ghar par manega
meri har Baat

Mai ji di ye Kehte hue odotoriom se nikal ke ghar Jane lagta hu..

To be continue....
वैसे क्या मैं जान सकता हूँ यह कहानी कौन से सन्(year) पर आधारित है। जो लड़का को इतना डम्बेस्ट दिखाया गया है। एक तरफ लड़के को तेज तरार दिखाया गया दुसरी तरफ बिल्कुल गंवार नासमझ। लड़की ड्रेस खोल रही थी उसको समझ नहीं आया? क्या इरादा लिये आई है लड़की ? पहले तो झूठ बोल कर लाई उसके बाद ये सब तभी समझ जाना चाहिए था। फिर उसके बाद हाथ पकड़ कर कमर पर स्क्रेच कितनी आसानी से कर गयी। जैसे दुध पीता कोई बच्चा हो प्रतिरोध नहीं किया। इस सदी के परिवेश पर तो नहीं होगी कहानी क्योंकि आजकल सभी जानते हैं 1st डे है कॉलेज का तो उपर से फाइट और हो गई जरूर दाल में काला हैं। एक नादान बालक का कलेक्टर दिखाया।। अबोध बालक
अब ऐसा ना कर देना की बहन को बेचारी बता कर माफी दे दो।। यह एक भाई बहन के झगड़ा नहीं रह गया। यह एक घिनौनापन है एक जघन्य अपराध है। बहन के साथ साथ सबको कुत्ते के सामने छोड़ देना चाहिए डेली का रूटीन होना चाहिए 10 मिनट कुत्ते नोचेंगे साली तभी सबक सिखेंगी।
 
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Update 8

Mai di maine ek hi bar me khana leliya vaishali se ab meri koi galti nahi. Mai pass jake kehta hu

Sneha di : Haa Pata hai mere room me aa zara
Mai : ji chale

Ab age....

Sneha di ki Awaaz sun ke mai unke pichey pichey Jane laga

Room me aake mai khada hoke yahi sochne laga ab kya karengi mere sath
Mai yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi sneha di mere bilkul nazdeek aake apne hath mere sine par rakh ke meri shirt ke button kholne lagi
mai khada khada bas yahi soch raha tha ab kya karne wali hai mere sath fir di shirt ko meri mere jism se alag karke bad par fek deti hai

Sneha di : ja mirror ke samne baith Jaa
Mai chup chap wahan aake baith gaya Jahan di makeup karti thi front of mirror

Fir di ne singardaan ki daraz se koi cream nikali use hatho me le kar meri peeth par lagane lagi

Ahhhhhhhhh di Dard ho raha hai please dhire dhire lagaye & thank you so much

Mere esa Kehne par wo kuch nahi boli bas cream lagaye Jaa rahi thi meri peeth ke laal nishano par lag Jane k Baad jhuk kar meri pant ko utha ke edio par lagane lagi mujhe to bahut hairaani ho rahi thi ki ye itni badal kaise gayi lag Jane ke baad Mai khada hua aur
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Piche ghum ke di ko apni bahon me bhar liya


Mai emotional hoke : na jane kaisa rishta hai jo hurt karta hai usi ke gale lag ke rone ka man karta hai

Kuch der to di kuch nahi boli fir mujhe khud se alag kar diya

Sneha di : tujhe kya laga ki main tujh par taras kha ke chhod dungi yahi soch raha hai na mujhe tujh par pyaar Aa raha hai love my foot janta hai ye sab maine kyo kiya tere jakhmo par marham isliye lagaya taki tujhe dubara Dard de sakun

Mai : ji di marham ki kya zaroorat thi ap jitna chahe utna Dard de lekin ek din apke hi sitam suna suna ke rula na diya to mera Naam bhi vishu nahi

Mere itna Kehte hi di mere face par thappado ki barsat kar deti hai
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Kai slap ke baad kehti hai ab nikal
Mai rote hue : ab maine kya kiya kis liye mara Haa koi galti bhi nahi ki

Sneha di : bas mera man Kiya

Fir niche se Awaaz aayi Maa ki jo lunch k liye bula rahi thi.


Mai ansu poochte hue room se nikal ke hall ki taraf Jane laga Jahan dad mom sona baith ke lunch kar rahe they

Maa : Aa Gaya beta chal jaldi se baith Jaa tu bhi kha le tujhe tiffin diya college me sneha ne

Mai : ji Maa diya tha lekin wo mere bhukkad dost kha gaye

Maa : koi Baat nahi chal baith Jaa mai parosti hu
Mai dinning table par baith gaya aur ye kehkar khud ko tasalli dene laga ek do din ki Baat Hai fir aur ye zulm nahi honge mujh par

Mai sona se : kya hua sona itni silent kyo baithi hai
Meri Baat ka sona koi jawab nahi deti bas khane par consiontret karti rehti hai

Itne me wo bhi Aa jati hai aur Sona k pass padi chair par baith jati hai

Mai : sona kya hua meri barbie kya hua bhai se naraz hai

Sona : mai Sirf di ki sona hu apki nahi apki hoti to subah ap mujhe school chodne jate
Mai : thik hai mai akela hi thik hu
Mera jawab se sona aur chidd jati hai mai janta tha wo mere bina reh nahi payegi raat tak khud bolne lagegi

Dad : vishu beta college kaisa chal raha hai
Mai : thik hai dad
Mai mom dad se : mom jab bacche jaban ho jate hai to unke mom dad apne bete ki shadi ki fikr karte hain wo hamari nebiour sarita aunty to dekho rajesh ki shadi kara ke apne pota potio ke sath khelti hai

Meri Baat sun ke bhi sab ignore Kar dete hai
Mai : mom kya ap nahi chahti ap bhi apne pota potio ke sath khele

Mere esa Kehne se khana khate hue Maa aur papa pet pakad ke hasne lagte hai

Maa haste hue : saaf saaf kyo nahi kehta tu shadi karna chahta hai
Mai sharma ke : Haa mom kuch esa hi gf banana to allow nahi ghar me shadi to Kara do

Maa : Ohh mera bacha shadi karna chahta hai kisi ko pasand kar liya kya
Mai : nahi mom mai to apki aur dad ki pasand se karunga

Sneha di : jiss ladki se iski shadi hogi uski to qismat hi futi hogi hai na sona

Sona : hihihihi sach kaha di bhai jisse shadi karenge pata nahi kya hoga us ladka ka

Maa : chupp Karo tum dono mai apne bete ke liye chand si dulhan laungi
Mai emotional blackmail karte hue : Maa to Kab layengi chand si dulhan
Maa : kyo ji koi achi ladki hai apki nazar me
Sneha di : Maa meri ek friend hai vaishnavi she's so beautiful kyo na iski shadi usse hi Kara di jaye

Mai gusse me : zindagi bhar kunwara baitha rahunga lekin apki friend se kabhi nahi karunga

Mai khud se : Kara li beizzati ab khush hai tu vishnu tu bhi na

Mai uth k Jane laga
Maa : kaha jaa raha hai khana to kha le beta
Mai dukhi swar me : Maa ap bhi mera mazak udane lagi

Maa haste hue ; ruk beta mai sneha k birthday ke baad tere liye is shaher ki sabse khubsurat ladki dekhne jaungi

Mai khush hote hue : sach Maa
Maa : Haa sach lekin shadi college ke baad hi karaungi

Mai ye sun ke khushi k mare fula nahi Sama raha tha mai bhag ke gaya aur Maa ke galo ko chum leta hu
Mai : thank you so much mom

Maa : chal chal maska mat laga bibi ke ane k Baad apni Maa ko na bhul jana
Mai : kaisi Baat kar rahi ho Maa ap to meri Jaan Hai apko bhala bhul sakta hu kya

Ye Kehte hue mai ghar se bahar Aa jata hu bike le ke chal deta hu asif ke flat ki taraf

Meri khushi ka thikana nahi raha ye jaan ke ki ab jald hi meri Shadi hogi aur di ko bhi apni begunahi sabit kar paunga

Mai bike par Baithe baithe yahi sochte hue Jaa raha tha ki tabhi maine dekha 40 gunde ek family ko ghar se nikal ke unka saman bahar fek rahe they un gundo ka boss ek ladki ko apni jangh par bitha ke kabhi uski jang ko sehlata to kabhi uske boob
dabata.

Maine bike roki aur unke kareeb Jane laga

Ek aurat aur bacha unke samne gid gida rahe they ki unhe is ghar se na nikalo bheekh mang rahi thi kabhi apni beti ko chhod deni ki to kabhi ghar se na nikalne ki itne me gunda us aurat ko laat marta hai wo Jaa ke durr girti hai jab bacha ye dekhta to wo patthar utha ke us gunde ko marta hai

Bacha : kutte tune meli Maa ko Mala luk tu

Gunda : ahhhh sale chuhe bil se nikla nahi aur mujhe patthar marega

Aurat : mere bete ko chhod mai tumhare pair padti hu ye ghar bhi le lo lekin mere bete ko chhod do

US gunde ko taras nahi aur wo bacche ko utha k meri taraf fekta hai

Gunda : mar sale teri maut k Baad teri Maa bahen ko mil ke chodenge ye Kehte hue bacche ko fek deta hai


Aurat cheekh ke : lalllaaaaaaa.....
Ye dekh ke Mai bhagta hua jata hu aur ek long jump karte hue us bacche ko apni god me catch kar leta hu aur us aurat ke pass Jane lagta hu

Tabhi kuch der ke liye meri ankhe band hoti hai fir khulti


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Gusse me
Mai : uthiye Maa ji ap bacche ko sambhaliye

Gunda 1: kyo be chikne idhar kya movie scane chal raha hai jo tu Aa Gaya bacche ko bachane

Gundas : Hahahaha sala marne aaya hai

Mai gusse me : chale jao yahan se agar jaan pyari hai

Gundas : Hahahaha hah sale pata hai ham kiske admi hai aaaaaaaaaaaaa sale ne hath Kaat diya...


Jaise hi wo gunda bolna shuru karta hai mai aurat ke Saman me padi big nife ko utha ke uska hath Kaat deta hu.

Mai : mauqa diya tha Jane ka lekin ab Sirf yahan lashe hongi tum sab ki

Gunda boss : marrrrrer do sale ko aaaaahhhhhh kaan Kaat diya sale ne ye Pura Pagal Hai aaaaahhhhhh...

Boss ka kaan latte hi ladki uski God se uth k apni Maa k pass Aa jati hai

Mai chaku sidha fek k marta hu gundo ke boss ko jo ghumta hu uska kaan leke niche girta hai

Itne me waqi gunde darte darte mere pass ane lagte hai
Mai bhi unki or bhagne lagta hu mere kadmo ke sath dhul ud rahi thi sare gundo ki dhadkano ki Awaaz mai sun paa raha tha

Jaise hi mai unke kareeb pahucha hu ek gunda mere mooh par ghusa marna chahta hai uska hath mere mooh tak ane se pehle mai pakad leta hu aur use utha ke zameen me baith ke apne ghutno par marta hu chiireeeeeee sherrrrrrrrr in awazo ke sath uski rid ki haddi tut jati hai

Ye dekh k meri taraf Aa rahe gunde sab apni apni jagah par ruk jate hai

Gunda boss kaan pe hath rakh ke : khade khade mooh dekh rahe ho jao jake lado usse

Gundas : boss dekh nahi rahe ho ye Pura sanki hai ek hi bar me kallu kaliyan ki sari haddiyan tod di genda swami ka hath hi Kaat diya aur apna haal dekho kaan hi alag kar diya isne to

Boss dar ke : ham 40 hai wo akela jao sab ek sath hamla karo

Itna sunte hi sab bhagte hue mere pass ane lagte hai jo sabse pehle mere pass aata hai mai uske pet me ek zor ka ghusa marta hu jo apne sath 4 - 5 gundo ko lekar udta hua durr Jaa ke girta hai

Fir Mai un sab par tut padta hu bhuke sher ki tarah aur shuru hoti hai ek bhayankar jung mai kisi ke hath ko pakad ke tod raha tha kisi par kikcs ki barsat kar raha tha to kisi ke pet me mukke mar raha tha

Sab udte hue dur dur Jaa k gir rahe they
Ab 10 hi gunde bache they
Wo sab apni jagah par but bane khade ho jate hai

Gunda boss darte hue : kaliya shiva tu Jaa
Kaliya shiva darte darte mere pass aane lagta hai jab use kuch gila gila mehsus hota to niche dekhta to wo moot raha dar ke mare mai fly karte hue sidhe uske face par kick marta hu jisse wo zameen me Sar k bal girta hai bahut jyada speed ne aur girne se dhool udne lagti hai gunde k mooh se khun nikalne lagta hai naak tut jati hai kaliya shiva ki ye dekh kar waqi gunde buri tarah bhagne lagte hai
Mai bhi unke pichey bhagne lagta hu

Ek gunde ke pass aake samne pad rahi ento ki deewar me uski gardan pakad ke sar deewar me marta hu jisse wo wohi gir jata hai fir Mai un bhagte hue gundo ke pichey bhagne lagta hu

Ek gunde k pass aake uska sar samne khambe pe marta hu fir wo gunde rail ki patriyan cross karke platform par Aa jate hai udhar se gadi Aa rahi hoti hai sab gunde to patri cross kar jate hai last wale k shirt k color ko mai pakad leta hu wo bahut chudane ki koshish karta hai maut ko dekh ke jab train bilkul nazdeek Aa jati hai to Mai use chhod deta hu pichey mudta to bhi mara jata age jata to bhi wo cross karne ke chakkar me train ke niche Aa jata hai jab mal gadi nikal jati hai to Mai bhi platform par bhagne lagta hu wo sab ek jine par chad k road ki taraf bhagne lagte hai pichey mud k dekhte to aur tez tez bhagne lagte hai mai bhi Jine pe aake unke pichey bhag raha hota hu

Tabhi mere kano me ek Awaaz sunayi padti hai

Awaaz : de de mai bhag***n k Naam pe kuch de de baba kuch dede
Mai use dekh k ek shaitaani smile deta hu aur pass aake use utha k niche fek deta hu aur wo patrio par girta hai

Mai fir unke pichey bhagne lagta hu highway par aake dekhta hu ek gunda auto me kitab khol ke baitha hai
Mai pass Jake : to konse college me padta hai
Gunda darte hue : bhai ram bharose college

Itna sunte hi mai auto me hath Dal ke uski gardan tod deta hu
Ab bas boss aur ek gunda aur bacha tha tha gunda, boss highway par maut ke dar se andha dhun bhag rahe hote hai

Tabhi ek gunda badha wasi me bhagte hue car k samne Aa jata hai aur mar jata hai

Mai bhagte hue boss k dusre kaan ko pakadta huere samne se gadiyan Aa rahi hoti hai
Boss darte hue : tujhe pata nahi mai kiska admi hu chhod de mujhe
Mai : le chhod diya ye Kehte hue samne Aa rahe truck ke niche daal deta hu

Fir chal deta hu usi aurat k ghar ki or
Wahan aake wo aurat ladki mere pairo me gir jati hai
Aurat uski beti : beta tumhara bahut bahut shukriya tumne mere bacche ki Jaan bachai hame un gundo se bacha, bhai thank you so much apne meri izzat bachai mere bhai ko bacha mai apke is ehsaan ko kabhi nahi bhulungi thank you thank you

Awaaz : tumhara Bura maine kiya vishnu to tum mujhse badla lete tum meri Maa aur bahen k sath ye kaise kar sakte ho wo pass aake apni Maa bahen ko dur karke mere face par ek thappad marti hai ye aur koi nahi laxmi thi

Aurat : bewakoof ladki devta saman insan par tune hath uthaya ye Kehte hue wo aurat Laxmi k upar thappado ki barsat karne lagti hai
Mai bhi rokta nahi pittne deta hu sali ko jhuta ilzam lagaya isliye

Ladki : di chi apne unhe mara jinhone meri izzat bachai hamare chote bhai ki Jaan bachai meri Jaan Maa ki Jaan bachai

Laxmi hairaani se : kya..

Fir laxmi ki bahen sab batati hai
Sab janne k Baad Laxmi mere pairo me gir jati hai

Vishu maine tumhare sath itna galat kiya aur tumne ulta mujhpar aur meri family par hi upkaar kiya mujhe maaf kar do please

Mai : jo tumne kiya wo tum thi tumhara character tha
Jo maine kiya ye Mai hu aur mera character hai
Mai : OK Maa ji ab chalta hu agar ab koi aaye to mujhe call karna mai purse se nikal k apna number unhe de deta hu

Aur bike start karke chal deta hu

Laxmi man me : Vishnu I love you Mai tumhe sab sach batana chahti hu lekin sneha ko dhoka nahi de sakti aaj tumhari izzat mere dil me aur badh gayi tumhi ho mere hero i love you i love you....

Mai bike ko ek resturant ke samne rokta coffee order karke asif ko call karta hu ek do ring k Baad wo pic karta hai

Mai : sun bhai wo jo hamne Laxmi k sath karne ka socha us idea ko drop kar de dono ideas

Asif : bhai tu Pagal ho gaya kya Keh raha hai Yaad Nahi us Randi ne kya kiya tere sath
Mai : Haa jo tune suna wohi or sab Yaad hai mujhe wo laxmi bahut gareeb hai yar aur bura usne kiya bharegi bhi wohi ab wo khud sach batayegi hame kyoki wo usne khud nahi kiya i think
Ye Keh ke call cut Kar deta hu

To sab confuse hai main itni achi fight kaise kar leta hu

Flashback..

Ek bacha 10 Sal k ass pass ka jo jakhmi tha Shimla k ghane junglo me kisi se bache hue Aa raha tha
Tabhi wo ek ped k pichey chup jata hai
Kuch der Baad do ladkiyan haste khelte hue pedo par udti hui Aa rahi thi unke jismo se nile rang ki roshni nikal rahi thi

Badi ladki udte hue ek ped se dusre ped par jump kar rahi thi : dipti aaja dam hai to pakd ke dikha hihihi
Dipti : roma di dekho ruk jao nahi to papa ko bula lungi
Roma : Mai nahi rukti roma disoza jo dehri hihihi

Dipti : di mai sach keh rahi hu dekho ruk jao mai bula lungi papa ko

Roma : Ja Ja bula le unhe

Dipti : papa..... Papa ..

Tabhi ek admi itni speed se aata hai jaise Samay ruk sa gaya ho

Admi roma ko pakd k zameen par late hue :
papa ki ladli kyo apni choti gudiya ko pareshan karti hai aur apni shaktio ko use karte Waqt dekh liya karo koi aam insan to nahi hai jungle me

Roma apne papa ko kiss karte hue : nai nai papa maine sab dekh liya tha
Tabhi ek bahut khubsurat aurat ek nanhi si ladki ke sath aati hai
Admi : aditi jaan tum bhi Aa gayi
Aditi : Haa mere pyare husband dastan

Tabhi wo ladka bhagte hue un sab k pass jata hai
Ladke k dekh k wo sab hairan ho jate hai
Ladka ghayal hota hai
Dastan : kon ho beta tum aur is jungle me kya kar rahe ho
Ladka : mai vishnu hu fir wo apni puri kahani sunata hai uske Baad kehta hai mujhe bhi apki tarah banna hai
Dastan : beta ye bahut salo ki training se tum sikh paoge aur mai nahi sikha sakta
Aditi : ap bhi na dekho na kitna jakhmi hai aur sikha do ise man jao jaan
Roma, dipti : dad ham sikha de

Dastan : kaha na nahi

Ladka : please guru ji sikha do na ladka bahut der tak minnate karta hai
Dastan ko kuch Yaad Ata hai ki ek din wo bhi ese hi kisi k samne minnate kar raha hota hai

Dastan : OK bache tumhe 100 insano ke muqable me akele kafi Hoge wo marshal arts sikhaunga lekin jadu nahi
Ladka :thik hai guru ji
Fir ladke ki taring shuru hoti hai ese hi wo Kai mahino tao sikhta rehta hai fir ek din dastan apni family ke sath ye jungle chhod deta hai ladka bhi wapas Jahan se aya tha wohi wapas chala jata hai

Flashback end

Mere guru ji (threads dastan & the villans) se hai

Note : ye scane thread dastan & the villans ki book ki story k baad ka hai

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Coffee pi ke mai wapas ghar ki or chal deta hu..

Sneha's house

Sneha on call

Sneha : vaishu man nahi lag raha hai mera ghar Aa sakti hai
Vaishali : ha ha kyo nahi meri Jaan 10 mint me pahuchi hu
Sneha : see you soon ye Keh ke call cut Kar deti hai

Kareeb 10 mint k Baad vaishali ati hai
Parwati : kon ho beta aur kisse milna hai
(Vaishali kabhi sneha k ghar nahi ayi kai bar bas bahar se dekh k laut jati hai)

Vaishali : aunty mai sneha ki friend vaishali urf vaishnavi hu

Parwati : Ohh beti tum sneha bahut batein karti hai tumhari aaj hi vishnu se tumhari shadi ki Baat kar rahi thi

Vaishali khush hote hue : sach aunty

Parwati : ha beta vaise tumhe Vishnu pasand hai tum to mujhe bahut pyari lagi

Vaishali ke man me laddu futne lage ye jaan ke vaishali bhag k jati hai aur Parwati k pair chu leti hai

Vaishali : sasu Maa aashirwad do

Parwati : khush raho beti

Sneha : TU Aa gayi vaishu aur Maa ko sasu Maa kyo keh rahi

Vaishali bhag k jati aur sneha ko gale laga leti hai

Vaishali : thank you so much my sweetie my queen my bebo mai nahi janti tu meri shadi vishu se karayegi

Sneha alag hote hue : jyada khush na ho mai mazak kar rahi thi usse
Vaishali : what.. To tu ab apni bestie ka bhi dil todne lagi
Sneha : nahi yar esa kuch nahi hai chal mere room me fir batati hu

Vaishali : tera ghar kitna shandar hai sneha kash esa mera bhi hota

Sneha : thanks ab chal
Vaishali : pehle apna ghar dikha pura
Sneha : tu bhi na chal Aa dikhati hu
Ye Keh ke sneha vaishali ko sath leke ghar dikhane lagti hai
Vaishali : wow how beautiful swimming pool

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Fir ghumte ghumte gardan me aati hai dono


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Vaishali : sneha kya gardan hai yar

Sneha : ab boar mat kar jaldi chal upar

Fir dono upar Jane lagti ki tabhi vaishali ki nazar deewar par tango ek photo jisme Mala padi hoti us par jati hai

Vaishali : sneha teri Bachchan ki photo par har kyo pada hai
Sneha : no mai nahi hu
Vaishali : fir kon hai

Sneha : ye meri judwa badi bahen saloni di hai jo is duniya me ab nahi rahi
Vaishali : sun kar bura laga chal tere room me chalte hain

Fir dono room me aati hai

Sneha : Kal Mera birthday hai kisi ne wish tak nahi kiya
Vaishali : omg Happy birthday my sweetheart my jaan my everything
Sneha : thank you bahen ki lodi

Vaishali muskurate hue : to bata sexy gift me kya chahiye tujhe

Sneha : kuch bhi na de tu tune wish kar diya itna hi kafi hai
Vaishali : nahi meri Jaan kal tujhe ek sexy sa gift dungi
Sneha : TU bhi bhukh hai sex ki
Ese hi dono kafi der tak Baat karti rehti hai
Sham ho Jane k Baad

Vaishali : chal ab mai chalti hu
Sneha : ruk Jaa yahi aaj rat subah dono yahi se chalenge

Vaishali to yahi chahti thi wo jhatt se hami bhar deti hai

Vaishali : OK sweetheart Zara mom ko call Kar k bata du
Ye Kehte hue vaishali room k bahar call karne chali jati hai
Call karte Samay use Vishnu Apne room me kuch le jata hua dikhayi padta hai
Sneha k pass aake
Vaishali : sneha mere hone wale hubby abhi apne room me Jaa Rahe they
Sneha : sach chal ab thoda entertain ho jaye ye Kehte hue sneha ek shaitaani hasi hasti hai..

To be continue....
nice update..!!
yeh sandhya vishnu ke jakhmo par marham laga rahi hai yeh dekhkar bichara vishnu firse pighal gaya lekin sandhya toh firse dard dene ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai..vishnu ke har ek dard ke liye yeh sandhya pachhtayegi, royegi lekin tab vishnu iske paas nahi hoga..!! sandhya ne vishnu ko tappad maare lekin ghar me kisi ko bhi uske gaal pe kuchh dikha nahi..vishnu ko uske maa baap aur sona itna pyaar karte hai lekin kisi ko bhi uska dard nahi dikh raha hai..!! yeh vishnu ka kuchh samajh hi nahi aata ekdum se shaadi ki baat lekar baith gaya..yeh sandhya vaishali se shaadi ki baat kar rahi hai..vishnu ka character itna dashing hai lekin gharwalo ke samne kyun itna chutiya ban jata hai samajh nahi aata..!! vishnu firse apni achhayi dikhate huye lakshmi ki maa, behen aur bhai ko bacha liya..lashmi ne itna bura kiya vishnu ke sath lekin vishnu ne apni achhayi hi dikhayi hai..lakshmi ab vishnu se pyaar karne lagi hai..vishnu ne lakshmi ke khilaf plan bhi cancel kar diya kyunki woh jan gaya hai ki lakshmi ek gareeb ghar ki ladki hai..vishnu ko yeh pata chal gaya hai ki lakshmi ne yeh kisi ke kehne par kiya hai..ab dekhte hai lakshmi sachhayi samne kaise lati hai..saja toh bahot gandi milni chahiye sandhya aur uski doston ko..!! vishnu jab 10 saal ka tha tab ghayal shimla ke jungle me kya kar raha tha..waha usko dastan ki family mili aur unse yeh sab fighting karna vishnu sikh liya..!! parwati toh bina bat ke vaishali ko bahu bana rahi hai..sneha ne vaishali ko bataya ki saloni uski judwa behen thi jo mar gayi hai..kya saloni ke marne ka jimmedar vishnu ko manti hai sandhya..!! aur bhai thoda aapne galat likha hai..sandhya ka birthday kal hai toh sab kal hi wish karenge na..birthday se pehle kaise koi wish kar sakta hai..aur vaishali bachpan ki dost hai sandhya ki toh usko toh malum hona chahiye na ki sandhya ka birthday kab hai..yaha pe aapne galat likh diya hai..!! ab dekhte hai sandhya aur vaishali kya karti hai vishnu ke sath..vishnu bahar ki duniya me itna trong ladka hai lekin sandhya aur uski doston ke samne chutiya ban gaya..kuchh samajh hi nahi aata..bhai aap likhte achha ho but character aur situation ko achhese justify karo toh aur maja aayega..!! sona ki narajgi bhi vishnu ko dur karni hai..lekin khud sona hi jayegi apne bhai ke paas..!!
 
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