Romance Barkarar Akankshay

[Siraj Patel]

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[Champ_AK_81]

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Nice Update bhai.

Divya ki to bahut buri haalat hai...Kise bura nahi lagega ye jaane me ki jisse wo pyar karti hai wo kisi aur ko chahti hai?

Pyar agar ho jaaye to sahi vakt me bata bena chahiye warna kabhi kabhi bahut deri ho jaata hai.

Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...Akshay ka uss ladki ke saath pyar hai ya attraction.

Superb going bhai...

Keep posting.

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
Akshay ne divya ko apne sapne ke baare me bata diya,
aur uss ladki ka naam aur pata malum karne ke liye usne divya se help bhi mang liya,
divya ne apne gum ka thoda sa bhi aabhas akshay ko nhi hone diya, aur sara gum apne bhitar hi daba liya,
Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
kya divya apne dil par patthar rakh kar akshay ko uss ladki se milane me madad kar payegi,
Waiting for next update

 

[ULTRA]

Awesome update bhai,
Akshay ne divya ko apne sapne ke baare me bata diya,
aur uss ladki ka naam aur pata malum karne ke liye usne divya se help bhi mang liya,
divya ne apne gum ka thoda sa bhi aabhas akshay ko nhi hone diya, aur sara gum apne bhitar hi daba liya,
Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
kya divya apne dil par patthar rakh kar akshay ko uss ladki se milane me madad kar payegi,
Waiting for next update

thank you 4 liking update

 

[ULTRA]

Nice Update bhai.

Divya ki to bahut buri haalat hai...Kise bura nahi lagega ye jaane me ki jisse wo pyar karti hai wo kisi aur ko chahti hai?

Pyar agar ho jaaye to sahi vakt me bata bena chahiye warna kabhi kabhi bahut deri ho jaata hai.

Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...Akshay ka uss ladki ke saath pyar hai ya attraction.

Superb going bhai...

Keep posting.

Thank you champ sir :flower2:

 

[ULTRA]

UPDATE : 5​

Divya doudte huye washroom pahuch jati aur door lock karke jorose rone lagti hai…


Ro ro kar uski ankhen lal ho jati hai….thodi der baad woh apne mann hi mann kuch nischey kar leti hai…aur apna face wash karke, normal ho kar washroom se nikalti hai…aur Akshay ko call karti hai ki


Akshay : haa moti kaha rehgyi tu..


Divya : Akshay meri tabiyat thik nhi lag rahi toh main ghar jar ahi hoo taxi se…


Akshay : achanak teri tabiyat ko kya hogya…per mujhe bata deti main tujhe drop kardeta…


Divya : tu apni class puri kar, main bas ghar pahuch hi gyi hoon..ok..bye..


Yeh khe kar Divya call cut kardeti hai..aur college se nikal kar paidal chalte huye bahut dur nikalt jati…


chalet chalte wo ek park me chali jati aur waha ek ped ke neche baith ker ghari souch me dub jati hai…


Divya (in her mind) : main Akshay ko us ladki se mila kar US apne bade pap eke yaha chale jaungi..kyuki yaha Akshay ko apni ankho ke samne kisi aur ka hota huye main nhi dekh sakti..mera dil iski gawahi kabhi nhi..dega..Haa mujhe US hi chale jana chaiye..


Aisa Neschay karne ke baad Divya, park se bahar nikalti aur taxi se apne ghar ko nikal jati hai…


Aaj college me kuch khas nhi huya bas seniors ne freshers ke liye party rakhi jo ki kal college campus me honi thi..


College khatam hone ke baad, Akshay sidha Divya ke ghar nikal jaata hai…


At Divya House..


Akshay door bell bajata hai…


Divya’s Mom gate open karti hai…


Akshay : Namaste aunty ji…


D’Mom : Namaste beta aao andar aao…


Akshay : Aunty ab Divya ki tabiyat kaisi hai…


Divya : ab thik hai apne kamre me…jao mil aao..


Akshay uper Divya ke room ke pass ja kar door knock kar ta hai..Divya andar se Mom mujhe abhi sone do pareshan mat karo..


Akshay : Aye moti darwaza khol me ho…


Akshay ki awaaza sunkar Divya fatak se Akshay ki photo apne bed ni niche chupa deti aur apne ansoo pochkar gate kholti hai…


Divya : oye mote toh yaha kya kar raha hai…


Akshay : moti tera haal chal lene aya hoo, achank teri tabiyat kaise bigad gyi…huh


Divya : kuch ni bas todha headache ho raha tha.. ab thik hoo..


Akshay : chal better hai…sun kal seniors freshers party de rahe


Divya (bhuje mann se) : acchi baat yeh to..


Akshay : yarr kal tu uss ladki ka pata karna party..


Divya (phir dil ke dard se tadap uthti hai) : jarur pori kosis karungi


Akshay : thik hai main chalta hoo kal college toh lagega nhi shaam ko party ke liye tujhe pick kar lunga…


Divya : chal ok Bye……..


जरा सा बात करने का तरीका सीख लो तुम भी,
उधर तुम बात करते हो इधर दिल टूट जाता है।

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Superb Update Sonu bhai.

Divya ne US jaane ka faisla kiya hai.

Sahi faisla hai ya galat abhi kuch keh nahi sakte...But haalaath ki dekh kar abhi ke liye sahi hi hai.

Kaun apne pyar ko apne hi aankho ke saamne kisi aur ka hota dekh sakta hai.

Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Update post karne ki speed bahut accha hai bhai...Issi tarah post karte rahiye.