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shrey9035

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Bhai koi bhi writer kisi ka naukar nhi hota aur na hi kabhi ho sakta hai. Wo ek kalakar hota hai jo hamesha apne kla ko aur nikharne ki kosis karta hai. Isliye kisi ke pass ye hak nhi hai ki wo kisi kalakar ki bezati kare par apne point of views rakhne ka hak ek writer khud deta hai. Aur ye uske nikahrne aur khud ko sabit karne ka ek tarika hota hai. Aur ye baat mai apne bhai ko dekh ke kah rha hun jo khud ek kavi hai. Isliye agar koi writer ki bezati kar rha hai to use khud par sarm aani chahiye ki wo kisi ke kla ki bezati kar rha hai. Aur agar aap ko story pasand hai to aapko writer ki tarif karni chahiye.
pahli baat ye ki mane kya likha or apne kya samjha
doosri ye tarif chalti h to burai bhi chalti h lekin gaali nhi
or teesri beizzati bhi kyo ki jaye agar content pasand nhi to mat padho use galti batao demoralize kyo karo khudse ata guntha nhi jata or koi roti de toh jali h ched h tedhe nakshe jaise h ye bolwa lo
 

cool dud

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Ye bhai story shuru to kar deta hy magar usko bech main chor kar bhag jata hy. Jitni bhi stories hain iski siwaye is story ko chor k sari bech main chor di wagah kya sirf criticism bardasht nahi hua. Koi aik bohnkta hy to ye story band kar k nikal lety hain bc jab pori karni nahi hoti to shuru bhi mat kiya karo. Aik story k sath aysy hua khair hy janab sab likhna bhool aagy kya likhna hy aagy to end kardi bina kisi ending k dosri story main kisi ny kuch kah diya wo bhi band nahi ham chutiye hain to wait krain support krain koi aik gand pesh kardeta hy to story band. Thek hy bhai. Nahi chahiye story apki. 👍
Bhai inki kon si kahani adhuri hai bastard 1 complete ki hai
 

king101

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pahli baat ye ki mane kya likha or apne kya samjha
doosri ye tarif chalti h to burai bhi chalti h lekin gaali nhi
or teesri beizzati bhi kyo ki jaye agar content pasand nhi to mat padho use galti batao demoralize kyo karo khudse ata guntha nhi jata or koi roti de toh jali h ched h tedhe nakshe jaise h ye bolwa lo
Are bhai maine bhi tumhe kuchh galat nhi kha hai maine bas ye kha hai ki point of views rakhna galat nhi hai jo aapke isi baat ke liye tha ki (aata jata hai nhi aa jate hai critics banne) baaki rahi baat gali dene ki ya fir bezati ki to uske khilaf hi kha hai maine bhi. Sirf gusse se kaam nhi hota na janab samne wale ki baat bhi to suno ab jisne gali di hai writer aur sab use uski galti batayenge to kya wo khid maafi nhi mangega. Kamal karte ho agar hum bhi gussa karne lage to story ka mga le hi nhi payenge. Aur sach kahta hun bhai mai ye story aadhe me nhi band hone dena chahta. Mujhe ye story bahut pasand hai to, aaram se apne point of views rakhiye. Agar kisi ko iss kahani se kuchh problems hai to wo moderator se baat kare. Aap kyu apna muh kharab kar rhi hai. Banki writer ki hausle ke liye hum sab hai
 

Red Skull

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king101 ,shrey9035 bhai aap dono shaant ho jaiye.
Bhai aap dono chill karo,mera aur kingxlegion bhai ka sirf discussion chal raha tha.
Meri ek kahani thi najayaz Rishtey usko me ne band kar diya hu.me ne pehle kahani likh raha tha us wakt ek banda tha Sandeep kar ke usko update kaisa laga usme uske comments nhi aa rahey they lekin kabhi update delay ho jaata to Mc update de is tarah ke comments aa rahey they.mujhe ye a cha nhi laga to me ne kahani ko band kar diya tha.baad me mods ne us readrs ko band kar diya.
Kahani band ho jaaney ke baad mujhe chat par msg aaye ke kahani ko start karo to me ne phir se start kar diya.3 se 4 update bhi de diya tha phir ek banda aaya jis ka naam tha looks smarty uska ye kehna tha ke me ne kahani ko copy paste kar raha hu.me ne pucha bhi lekin uska koi reply nhi aaya.phir ek do din update delay hua to Mc ki gaali deney laga.aur wo gaali 2 dino tak thi page par.phir mods ne usko bhi banned kar diya.
Bhai mujhe bas ek shikayat hai ke agar aap ko kahani aur update pasand nhi hai to aap apna feedback de kar kahani mat padho.abhi bohot saarey readers ko meri kahani nhi pasand aayee to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye me ne to us baat ka bura nhi maana kabhi.
Abhi meri Bastard kahani isliye complete huyee q ke aap ka aur mera ek healthy rishta ban gaya tha.aap sabhi readers ko agar update pasNd nhi aa raha tha to keh rahey they lekin kisi ne kabhi gaali nhi diya.
Ab bastard 2 me AaRYaN8380 bhai ko mera update pasand nhi aaya to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye,unho ne kabhi koi gaali nhi diya ke mujhe update pasand nhi aaya hai.aur ye mujhe bhi accha laga.
Agar aap ko kahani pasand nhi aati hai to aap comments kar ke kahani padhna band kar dijiye lekin gaali dena ye sahi nhi hai.
 

Awan Badshah

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king101 ,shrey9035 bhai aap dono shaant ho jaiye.
Bhai aap dono chill karo,mera aur kingxlegion bhai ka sirf discussion chal raha tha.
Meri ek kahani thi najayaz Rishtey usko me ne band kar diya hu.me ne pehle kahani likh raha tha us wakt ek banda tha Sandeep kar ke usko update kaisa laga usme uske comments nhi aa rahey they lekin kabhi update delay ho jaata to Mc update de is tarah ke comments aa rahey they.mujhe ye a cha nhi laga to me ne kahani ko band kar diya tha.baad me mods ne us readrs ko band kar diya.
Kahani band ho jaaney ke baad mujhe chat par msg aaye ke kahani ko start karo to me ne phir se start kar diya.3 se 4 update bhi de diya tha phir ek banda aaya jis ka naam tha looks smarty uska ye kehna tha ke me ne kahani ko copy paste kar raha hu.me ne pucha bhi lekin uska koi reply nhi aaya.phir ek do din update delay hua to Mc ki gaali deney laga.aur wo gaali 2 dino tak thi page par.phir mods ne usko bhi banned kar diya.
Bhai mujhe bas ek shikayat hai ke agar aap ko kahani aur update pasand nhi hai to aap apna feedback de kar kahani mat padho.abhi bohot saarey readers ko meri kahani nhi pasand aayee to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye me ne to us baat ka bura nhi maana kabhi.
Abhi meri Bastard kahani isliye complete huyee q ke aap ka aur mera ek healthy rishta ban gaya tha.aap sabhi readers ko agar update pasNd nhi aa raha tha to keh rahey they lekin kisi ne kabhi gaali nhi diya.
Ab bastard 2 me AaRYaN8380 bhai ko mera update pasand nhi aaya to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye,unho ne kabhi koi gaali nhi diya ke mujhe update pasand nhi aaya hai.aur ye mujhe bhi accha laga.
Agar aap ko kahani pasand nhi aati hai to aap comments kar ke kahani padhna band kar dijiye lekin gaali dena ye sahi nhi hai.

Main agree karta hun ap ki baat se bhai.....
 

kingxlegion

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king101 ,shrey9035 bhai aap dono shaant ho jaiye.
Bhai aap dono chill karo,mera aur kingxlegion bhai ka sirf discussion chal raha tha.
Meri ek kahani thi najayaz Rishtey usko me ne band kar diya hu.me ne pehle kahani likh raha tha us wakt ek banda tha Sandeep kar ke usko update kaisa laga usme uske comments nhi aa rahey they lekin kabhi update delay ho jaata to Mc update de is tarah ke comments aa rahey they.mujhe ye a cha nhi laga to me ne kahani ko band kar diya tha.baad me mods ne us readrs ko band kar diya.
Kahani band ho jaaney ke baad mujhe chat par msg aaye ke kahani ko start karo to me ne phir se start kar diya.3 se 4 update bhi de diya tha phir ek banda aaya jis ka naam tha looks smarty uska ye kehna tha ke me ne kahani ko copy paste kar raha hu.me ne pucha bhi lekin uska koi reply nhi aaya.phir ek do din update delay hua to Mc ki gaali deney laga.aur wo gaali 2 dino tak thi page par.phir mods ne usko bhi banned kar diya.
Bhai mujhe bas ek shikayat hai ke agar aap ko kahani aur update pasand nhi hai to aap apna feedback de kar kahani mat padho.abhi bohot saarey readers ko meri kahani nhi pasand aayee to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye me ne to us baat ka bura nhi maana kabhi.
Abhi meri Bastard kahani isliye complete huyee q ke aap ka aur mera ek healthy rishta ban gaya tha.aap sabhi readers ko agar update pasNd nhi aa raha tha to keh rahey they lekin kisi ne kabhi gaali nhi diya.
Ab bastard 2 me AaRYaN8380 bhai ko mera update pasand nhi aaya to unho ne apna feedback diya aur kahani chor kar chaley gaye,unho ne kabhi koi gaali nhi diya ke mujhe update pasand nhi aaya hai.aur ye mujhe bhi accha laga.
Agar aap ko kahani pasand nhi aati hai to aap comments kar ke kahani padhna band kar dijiye lekin gaali dena ye sahi nhi hai.
G bhai main sahmat hoon ap say k gali nahi deni chahiye jo gali deta hy forum k moderator ko action lena chahiye. Aqal mand logon aysa nahi karty k aik do bandy ki gali ko dil par le kar apmy fans ko bhi chor jaen. Mughy wo story bohat bohat ziyada pasand thi is liye gusa kiya. Dil par mat lena. Ap bhai ho apny. Baqi ye bhai logon k comments nahi parhy main ny to sorry baqi sab ko bhi k agar main apka dil dukhaya ho. Kal maij story dhoond raha tha to nahi mill rahi thi phir jab mili to close hui pari thi. Main heran hogya yaar aysa kaysy. Sorry again yaar.
 

Red Skull

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Update.............17
Idhar kavya di ka gangrape karney ka bolney se mujhe bohot gussa aa gaya tha.tabhi gunday ne apney saathi se mujhe maarney ke liye kaha.
Ab aage..............
Ab gunday ka saathi mujhe maarney aaya tha rod se.me nichey zameen par gira hua tha.ab tak chandni aur ekta ne mujhe jo pain killer di thi uska asar chalu hona start ho gaya tha.ab mere badan me zara bhi pain nhi ho raha tha lekin mere badan se dheerey dheerey khoon nikal raha tha.itne me wo gunda mujhe rod se maarney aa raha tha.me jhat se khada hua aur jaisey hi usne mujhe rod se maarney gaya me nichey jhuk Gaya aur phir uske pet par maara jis se uske haath me jo rod tha wo gir gaya aur phir me us rod ko uthaya aur uska gala kaat diya.
Jaisey hi gunday ka gala kaata baaki sab gunday darr gaye they.idhar baarish bhi bohot mosladhaar ho rahi thi.jaisey hi us gunday ka galey ko me ne jism se alag kiya har jagah khoon hi khoon ho gYa tha.khoon ki wajah se ab barish ka paani bhi laal ho gaya tha.idhar sab gundo ki haalat patli ho gayee thi.ab 5 gunday bach gaye they.

Karan.................bhosdiwalo meri behan ka rape karongey.aaj tumharey saath dekho me kya kya karta hu.aaj ke baad tumhara lund kisi kaam ka nhi honga.
Itna kehtey hi me ek gunday ki taraf badhney laga rod ko le kar.wo gunda nihatta tha q ke jitney bhi hathiyaar they wo sab gaadi me rakhey huye they.idhar gunda bohot darr gaya tha.wo apney aap ko bachaney ke liye ro raha tha.darr ke maarey wo kaanp bhi raha tha.me uske paas gaya aur uske sir par haath rakha aur kehnry laga.
Karan................Madarchod aaj tujhe is darr se azaad kar doonga.ab tujhe kabhi bhi darr nhi lagenga.aaj se tu is duniya ki moh maaya se azaad ho jayenga.
Itna kehtey hi me ne rod ko uske sir par de maara jis se uske sir ke do tukdey ho gaye they.uska sir do hisso me bat gaya tha.ye dekh kar gundo ki haalat kharaab ho gayee thi.itne me jo main gunda tha usne kaha.

Gunda..............Madarchod tu aaj nhi bachenga.ab teri laash zameen me nhi balkey gutter me jayengi.
Itna kehtey hi sab gunday gaadi ke andar gaye aur waha se hocky stick aur rod nikaal kar mere saamney khadey ho gaye.
Gunda...............ab ha bc aaj tu nhi bachenga.tujhe maar kar teri behan ke saath gangrape karengey.gangrape ho jaaney ke baad uski body ko bhi gutter me phenk dengey.
Karan...............Mc tum log mere saath kuch bhi kiye hotey to me tum logo ko maaf kar diya hota lekin meri behan ke baarey me ganda bol kar tum ne apni mout ko daawat di hai.aaj tum ko bhagwan bhi nhi bacha sakta hai.aur jis zabaan se tu ne kaha us hi zabaan ke tukdey tukdey kar doonga me.
Itna kehtey hi me un gundo ki taraf badhney laga.ab sirf 4 hi gunday bach gaye they.me jaisey hi unke taraf badha 3 gunday thora pichey hatney lagey lekin ek ke paas rod thi wo mere paas ek dum josh ke saath aa raha tha aur jaisey hi usne mujhe rod se maarney laga me ne apni rod se uskey vaar ko rok diya.jaisey hi me ne uske vaar ko roka wo darr gaya tha.phir me ne ek punch uske mooh par maara jis se uske mooh se khoon nikalney laga.ab uska dhyaan uske mooh par gaya tha me ne jhat se apni rod ke uske seeney par maar diya jis se meri rod uski chest ke aar paar ho gayee.aur wo zameen par dhadaam se gir gaya aur uski aankhey bhi band ho gayee.
Ye dekh kar baaki ke 3 gunday bhi darr gaye.phir me aagey badhney laga usme se 2 gunday pichey hatney lagey.jo teesra gunda tha wo bhi pichey hat raha tha lekin baaki ke 2 gundo ne usko dhakka de kar meri taraf kiya aur jaisey hi wo meri taraf badha me ne rod ko uske lund par maara aur uska lund ko uske badan se alag kiya.aur phir uske pet par ek vaar kiya jis se uska pet khul gaya mere vaar se.
Phir ab dono gunday mujh se darr kar bhaagney lagey.jaisey hi wo bhaagney lagey me unka picha karney laga.lekin wo mere aagey badh gaye they.me ne apni rod ko phenk kar ek gunday ke sir par maara jis se wo gir gaya aur phir me uske pass gaya.abhi jo main gunda tha wo bhaag raha tha me ne usko zor se awaaz de kar kaha.
Karan................Mc agar aur bhaaga to tujhe jaan se maar doonga.tujhe kya lagta hai tu yaha se bhaag jayenga.abhi ke abhi ruk jaa nhi to tujhe kuttey ki mout maarunga.
Jo main gunda tha wo bohot darr gaya tha aur ab wo ruk gaya tha.usko pata chal gaya tha ke bhaag kar ab kuch matlab nhi hai.isliye wo ruk gaya aur kehney laga.
Gunda.................bhai mujhe maaf kar de.hum se bohot badi galti ho gayee hai jo tujh se panga le liye.me ne teri behan ke baarey me bhi bohot ganda bol diya hu.plz mujhe maaf kar dey.
Idhar jis gundsy ko rod phenk kar maara tha wo zameen par gir gaya tha.wo jhat se utha aur mere pairo ko pakad liya aur ro ro kar maafi maangney laga lekin me to bohot gussay me tha.me ne rod uthaya aur uske Dono haatho ko kandho se alag kar diya aur wo begair kandho ke hi mar gaya.
Ye dekh kar main gunda darr gaya tha.ab poori zameen laal laal ho gayee thi khoon se.wo gunda darr ke maarey bhaagney laga to me ne kaha.
Karan...............Madarchod ek inch bhi apni jagah se hila to teri gaand me rod daal doonga.jaha hai wahi rukey rehna.
Mere aisa kehtey hi wo gunda darr ke maarey ruk gaya aur phir uske paas me gaya.jaisey hi me uske paas gaya usne mere pairo ko pakad liya aur kehney lag gaya.
Gunda.................bhai mujhe chor dey.mujh se bohot badi galti ho gayee hai jo me ne tujh se panga liya hai.plz ek baar maaf kar dey.me tujh se wafadaar rahunga pls mujhe maaf kar dey.
Karan.................Thik hai agar teri yahi iccha hai to me tujhe maaf kar deta hu.chal ab bata mayuri ka beta kaha hai.
Gunda................bhai me tujhe uske paas le kar hi jaata hu na.tum tension q letey ho.
Karan.................thik hai chal.
Mujhe ekta aur chandni ne kaha tha ke tabeley ke paas hi ek makaan hai chota sa wahi par Mayuri ke Betey ko rakha hua tha kidnap kar ke.me us gunday ke saath jaaney laga.jungle bohot Ghana tha.jab me us gunday ke saath jaa raha tha us wakt mujhe saanp,bicchu,kidey sab dikhney ko mil rahey they.phir me gaya to mujhe tabela dikh gaya tha.
Karan..............Ye jungle ke beech me tabela kaisey.
Gunda...............ye pandit ji ka khufiya thikana hai.unke liye yaha se hi doodh jaata hai.unko doodh se nahaney ki aadat hai.
Karan...............madarchod doodh se nahata hai.accha ye bata pandit ke oopar kis ka haath hai.
Gunda.................Ye to pata nhi hai lekin jis ka bhi haath hai wo bohot powerful hai.
Karan...............accha jungle me log bhi rehtey hai kya.
Gunda.............Rehtey hai na lekin pandit ji ne unka bhi mooh band kiya hai.jis ne bhi ungli uthayee hai unke aadmiyo ko jungle me gaad diya.
Karan..............ok
Phir hum us tabeley ke paas aa gaye aur phir mujhe ek chota sa makaan bhi dikha.phir hum us makaan me jaaney lagey to do gunday waha par pehra de rahey they.jaisey hi unho ne mujhe dekha to danda le kar khadey ho gaye mujhe rokney ke liye.idhar jo gunda mere saath tha usne kaha.
Gunda.................ye dono tujh ko yaha se mayuri ke betey ko le jaaney nhi dengey.tu ne hum ko to khatam kar diya hai lekin ye dono un sab se danger hai.
Karan.................in dono ka baap bhi mujhe nhi rok sakta hai.
Phir mere paas jo rod thi us rod se me ne us gunday ke pet par vaar kiya jis ne mujhe yaha le kar aaya tha aur jis ne kavya di ke baarey me kaha tha.wo gunday ke pet se khoon nikalney lag gaya tha usne kaha..
Gunda................dhoka kiya tu ne mere saath.me ne tujhe yaha le kar aaya aur tu ne mujhe hi maara.
Karan...............Madarchod mujhe yaha ka pehle hi pata chal gaya tha.wo to mujhe dhoondhney ke taklif na ho isliye tere saath aa gaya tha.tujhe kya lagta hai tu meri behan ka rape karney ka bolenga aur me tujhe chor doonga.
Itna kehtey hi me ne uski zabaan ke bhi rod se kaat diya aur phir un do gundo se kaha.
Karan.............madarchodo me ne abhi 6 logo ko maar kar aaya hu.aur sab ke badan se rod ko aar paar kar diya hu.agar tum apni jaan ki salamati chahtey ho to bhaag jao yaha se nhi to tum ko bhi maar doonga.
Wo do gundo ne is gunday ki haalat ko dekhey to waha se bhaag chutey.phir me un gundo ke jaaney ke baad us makaan me gaya.makaan ka door band tha me ne us door ko laat maar kar tod diya aur phir andar aa gaya.andar aaya to dekha ke ek 3 saal ka baccha tha jis ko chair se baandh rakhey they.jaisey hi usne mujhe dekha to darr gaya tha q ke mere haath me rod thi aur us par khoon bhi laga hua tha.wo ladka darr ke roney laga aur kehney laga.
Ladka............mujhe mat maaro.me to ek chota sa baccha hu.plz mujhe chor do.mujhe maar kar kya milenga.
Karan..............daro mat me tum ko yaha maarney nhi balkey bachaney aaya hu.mujhe tumhari mom ne bheja hai.
Mere aisa kehtey hi bacchey ka rona band ho gaya tha.me ne rod ko phenka aur phir uske paas gaya aur usko chair se azaad kiya aur jaisey hi azaad kiya wo mujh se galey lag kar roney laga aur phir kehney laga.
Ladka.............Accha hua bhaiya aap ne mujhe bacha liya.in logo ne mujhe bohot maara aur mujhe khaney ke liye bhi nhi diya.
Mujhe us ladkey ki haalat ko dekha nhi gaya.uski haalat ko dekh kar to mujhe khud rona aa raha tha.
Karan................beta aap ka naam kya hai.
Ladka...............bhaiya mera naam sanju hai.
karan..............chalo ab hum yaha se nikaltey hai.
Phir me ne sanju ko apney god me uthaya aur bahar nikal gaya.jungle bohot Ghana tha.aur mujhe gaadi me le kar aaya tha to mujhe rasta nhi pata tha jungle se bahar nikalney ka.me vahi aa gaya tha jaha par me ne sab ko maara tha.jis gaadi me aaye they wo gaadi ko me ne start kiya lekin mujhe kuch bhi samajh nhi aa raha tha ke kidhar jao.me bas gaadi chalaney laga is hi ummeed se ke me jungle se nikal jao lekin me jungle me hi ghoom raha tha.

............vahi doosri taraf........
Idhar ekta aur chandni kuch samay baad room se bahar nikley aur darney ki acting karney lagey.dono bhi chillatey huye pandit ke paas aaye aur kehney lagey.
Chandni.............pandit ji anarth ho gaya hai.karan ke andar jo saaya tha usne karan ko yaha se bhaga diya hai.hamarey saamney karan ke andar uska kaala saaya haavi ho gaya tha aur wo rassi ko tod kar pichey se bhaag gaya.
Jaisey hi ekta aur chandni ne kaha ghar ke sabhi log tension me aa gaye they aur darr bhi gaye they.tabhi Rohit ne kaha.
Rohit..............pandit ji ye aap ki daasiya kya keh rahi hai.hum to karan ko bachaney ke liye ye sab kar rahey they aur karan yaha se bhaag gaya hai.
Shweta................pandit ji aap ke hotey huye ye sab kaisey ho gaya hai.
Idhar kavya aur Anjali di ke bohot gussa aa raha tha.dono ne jaa kar pandit ka gala dabaya aur kehney lagi.
Kavya...............pandit mujhe mera bhai chahiye agar usko kuch bhi hua to tujhe jaan se maar doongi.
Arjun...............pandit ji ye sab kya ho gaya hai.aap ke hotey huye ye sab kaisey ho gaya hai
pandit...............aap sab krodhit mat ho.jo bhi hua hai accha hua hai.mere mantro se karan ke andar ka kaala saaya kamzor ho gaya tha isliye wo karan ko yaha se bhaaga diya hai.ab hum karan ke andar se us kaaley saaye ko bhaga saktey hai.
Anjali..............pandit tu abhi natak karna band kar.agar kaala saaya kamzor hua hai to yaha se kaisey bhaag gaya hai.mujhe karan abhi ke abhi chahiye.
Pandit..............karan mil jayenga beti tum ko.sab se pehle ghar me koi bhi accha kaam karna honga.jitna hum accha kaam karengey us kaaley saaye ki taakat kam hoti jaayengi jis se kaala saaya karan ke jism ko chor denga
Rohit................konsa accha kaam karna honga Pandit ji.
Pandit................. Shaadi se aur konsa accha kaam ho sakta hai.jald se jald arjun aur Anjali ki shaadi kara do.
Rohit................Thik Hai hum parso ke din hi shaadi kara dengey Anjali aur arjun ki.

............Vahi doosri taraf.......
Idhar me gaadi chalaye jaa raha tha lekin mujhe jungle se nikalney ka raasta kahi bhi dikh nhi raha tha.itne me gaadi bhi ruk gayee q ke uska petrol ab khatam ho gaya tha.phir me ne sanju ko apney god me uthaya aur phir khud hi raasta dhoondhney nikal gaya.lekin mujhe raasta hi nhi mil raha tha.

.............Vahi doosri taraf.......
Idhar shraddha kaafi tension me thi q ke mera phone nhi lag raha tha.abhi raat ke 3 baj rahey hai.Shraddha ko bhi neend nhi aa rahi thi.usne kavya ke number par phone lagaya lekin uska bhi numbar nhi lag raha tha.shraddha poori raat bhar so nhi paa rahi thi.usne raat me bhi khaana nhi khaya tha.shraddha ko bas meri hi chinta ho rahi thi.

Vahi me idhar raasta dhoondh raha tha lekin jungle itna Ghana tha ke mujhe raasta hi nhi dikh rahs tha.abhi subah ke 6 baj gaye they.mere badan se khoon abhi bhi dheerey dheerey nikal raha tha.isi beech mujhe ab kamzori feel ho rahi thi.mera badan ab poora pasiney se bheeg gaya tha.abhi me sanju ke saath chal hi raha tha ke achanak se mujhe chakkar aa gaye aur me behosh ho kar nichey gir gaya.jaisey hi me nichey gira sanju roney lag gaya tha.wo 3 saal ka ladka tha aur wo bohot darr gaya tha.wo mujhe uthaney laga lekin me to behosh tha.mujhe uthaney laga lekin me to uth hi nho raha tga.sanju roney laga tha.
Abhi subah jungle me 2 aurtey aa rahi thi.wo khaana pakaaney ke liye jungle ki lakdiyo ko todney aayee thi.tabhi unko sanju ki roney ki awaaz sunayee deney lagi aur jaisey hi wo awaaz ka picha karti huyee aayee to dono aurto ne mujhe zameen par behosh aur sanju ko rota hua dekha.

friends aap ko update kaisa laga comment section me zarur batana.
 

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shandar, awesome lajawab, fantastic update..............
keep posting bhai...............
waiting for next update................
Thanks bunny bhai
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