Superb sir jeee...
Story to bahut hi jabardast hai... but aapko apni lekhni ko thora improve karne ki jarurat hai........ mai avi tak ye story is liye padh taha tha kyuki mujhe ye story bahut hi pasand aayi or mai is lye kavi khul k comments nhi kar paya kyuki mai nhi chahta tha ki aap demotivate ho..... Agar meri baatein buri lagti ho to mai mafi chahta hu iske lye....
Aap sex ko lekar family mai Thora indirect rakhte to shayed padhne mai or v maja aata...... yaha risteon ka kisi ko v koi fark nhi padta hai. Yaha koi v kisi k samne gand, bur, land, kuch v bolne mai kisi trah ka koi hazitation feel nhi karta. Yahi baatein shayed parade mai ho to shayed story or v interesting ban sakti hai..........
Ek baar mai phir se aapse mafi chahta hu agar meri baatein aapko buri lagti hai to.....
Waiting for your next update.....