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Red Skull

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nice ending ...par karan ke gaon me kya hua ye bataya nahi ...sach kahu to anil ki property ke liye babita ko maarne wali baat achchi nahi lagi ...kyunki wo uski sagi beti thi ,,,karan to uska koi tha hi nahi ....par anil ne karan ko bachpan se paala kyu? uspar paise kyu kharch kiye ....
anil ne shalini se business ke liye paise lene se mana kiya tha ,to paise leke business dobara khada karke wo rocky ko de sakta tha chupke se ?....paise ke saath saath koi aur bhi reason hona chahiye tha anil ke paas ye sab karne ka ...
Leon bhai
Karan ke goan ki journey to 2 part me shaamil hongi.aur vahi par kuch naye raaz khulengey.aur bhai aap ne update me padha tha ke anil ne karan ko isliye zinda rakha tha ke jab anil sab ko maarey to uska ilzaam karan par daal sakey.
Aur ye planning anil ne achanak se to nhi kiya honga uski planning to pehle se hongi isliye karan ko bacha kar rakha tha.
 

Hunterrrr69

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idhar shalini kehti hai ke vo sunita aur karan se baat karungi ke karan ko yaha hi rukney do.
Ab aage...........
Idhar me sunita,purvi aur kalpana massi mere room me rehtey hai tabhi sunita kehti hai.
sunita...............karan kal hi hum nikal jayengey.aur teri packing bhi me kal subah kar loongi.
karan.................thik hai hum kal raat nikal jayengey.kal me subah subah sab se mil kar aa jaunga aur college me application bhi dena honga na chutti ki.
Sunita..................tu uski tension mat le.me shalini ko bol doongi.uski freind college ki principle hai.
Karan..................ok thik hai.
purvi................thik hai ab hum chaltey hai.kal aayengey phir se.
Sunita.................thik hai purvi.
Phir purvi aur kalpana ghar se Nikal jaatey hai.phir me bhi aaram karta hu.raat me sab ke saath dinner karney ke liye aata hu.tabhi sunita sab se kehti hai.
Sunita................ji mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai.
Shalini.................ha mujhe bhi kuch batana tha tum dono ko.
Sunita...................pehle me batati hu.
shalini...............ha thik hai.
sunita..................ji me aur karan kal raat me yaha se apney goan ke liye nikal rahey hai aur ab karan kuch dino ke liye udhar hi rahenga.
Sunita ki baato ko sun kar sab ka dil toot jaata hai.
shalini................sunita karan ko yaha rehney do na.usko q le jaa rahi ho tum.pehle hum ko problem thi karan ke yaha rehney se lekin ab hum khud chah rahey hai ke karan hamarey saath rahey hamarey parivaar ka hissa ban kar.
Sunita.................shalini mujhe bohot khushi hai ke aap sab karan ko apney parivaar ka hissa banana chahti ho.lekin udhar karan ka parivaar uska intezaar kar raha hai.karan ko dekhney ke liye bohot logo ki aankhey taras rahi hai.
Karan...................ha mujhe ab jaana honga mujhe bhi dekhna hai mere parivaar me kon kon hai.me bachpan se akela hi raha tha.ab mujhe bhi apney parivaar ke saath rehna hai.
Babita..................to kya karan tum hum ko apna nhi samajhtey ho kya.anil ke baad tum ne bhi hum se rishta tod diya kya
Karan..................nhi nhi babita me aap sab ko kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.me aap ke yaha par aaya uske baad hi mujhe apna real parivaar aur pyaar karney waaley log miley hai.pehle pehle aap ne mujh se pyaar nhi kiya lekin baad me aap sabhi ne mujhe apney parivaar ka hissa mana tha aur is baat ko me kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu
Sunita..................aur ha ghar par iske chacha ki beti ki shaadi bhi honey waali hai.aur ab ye hum ko phir se mil gaya hai to usko jaana hi chahiye.aur wo waha reh kar ke phir wapas idhar aa jayenga.aur apni study ko complete karenga.
shalini................thik hai sunita hum tum dono ko jaaney se rokengey nhi.q ke karan ke parivaar ko bhi karan ke saath rehney ka haq hai lekin jab karan vapas aayenga to hamarey saath hi rahenga.
Karan..................promise aunty.
sunita..............aur shalini mujhe tumhari ek aur help chahiye thi.
shalini...............ha kaho na
Sunita.................karan ke college me application dena tha karan ki chutti ke liye.agar tum kahongey to college ki principle karan ki chutti ki application ko accept karengi jis se wo goan jaa sakey
Shalini..............thik hai me kal hi principle se baat kar loongi.
Sunita...............ok thik hai.
suresh..............karan lekin tum ko hamari taraf se ek gift lena honga aur tum uske liye manaa nhi karna honga..
Karan.................thik hai chacha.
Phir kuch khaas baat nhi huyee aur phir hum apney apney room me chaley gaye soney ke liye.
Subah meri neend 7 bajey khuli.me fresh hua aur sab ke saath nichey aa kar nashta karney laga.
shalini.................karan me ne baat kar li principle se aur wo tumhari chutti ke liye maan gayee hai.
Karan................thanks aunty.me aaj college me jaa kar ke sab se mil kar aata hu.
babita...............karan hum dono saath me aaj chaltey hai college me.
Karan...............ok thik hai.
Phir me aur babita saath me college ke liye nikal gaye.phir 20 minute baad hum dono college pohchey.phir mujhe waha par divya mili to me us se baat karnry laga.
Divya..............karan tum itne dino se college me dikhayee nhi diye they sab thik to hai na.
karan..............ha sab thik hai.aur divya me kuch mahino ke liye college me nhi aaunga.me apney ghar jaa raha hu aaj aur tum se milney ke liye aaya hu.
Divya................kya tum jaa rahry ho.lekin q
Karan................kuch kaam hai jis wajah se jaana honga.
Idhar jaisey hi me ne jaaney ka bola to divya ka chehra utar gaya tha.uski aankho me aansu aaney lagey they.
Karan.................kya hua divya tum ro q rahi ho.
Divya...................tum chor kar jaa rahey ho isliye.tum ko to ab meri yaad aayengi nhi lekin mujhe hamesha se tumhari yaad aayengi.me tumhey kabhi bhool nhi sakti hu karan.
karan................arey arey Tum tension mat lo.me bohot hi jald vapas bhi aa jaunga.aur kon kehta hai ke me tum ko yaad nhi karunga.mujhe bhi tumhari yaad aayengi.
Karan.................ab tum rona band karo aur mujhe Hastey Hastey vida karo
Divya................thik hai karan lekin jab tum aaongey vapas mujhe tumhey kuch batana rahenga jo abhi tak me ne tum ko batayee nhi thi.me ne ye baat apney dil me hi chupa kar rakhi thi sochi thi sahi mokey par bataungi.
Karan...............thik hai divya jab me aaunga to tum mujhe bata dena.chalo ab mujhe aur bhi logo se milna hai to me mil kar aata hu.
Divya...............ok thik hai.
Phir divya se milney ke baad me alisha mam se mila aur usko bhi bye bol kar sidha ghar aa gaya.ghar aa kar me ne apney samaan ki packing karnry laga.idhar sunita ne bhi meri madad ki.phir aisey hi packing karnry me raat ho gayee.phir me aur sunita nichey aa gaye apna samaan le kar.
Idhar nichey aaye to dekha ke purvi,kalpana,meghna aur kareena bhi mojud they.phir hum dono nichey aaye
Karan.................meghna aunty aap ka jitna shukriya adaa karu utna kam hai.aap ne meri bohot help ki hai.aur me aap ka ehsaan kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.
Meghna................tum kya pagal ho jo aisi baatey kar rahey ho.tum ne bhi to kareena ko bachaya tha to kya me ne bhi tumhara ehsaan maani thi kya.jo mera farz tha me ne vo hi ki hu.aur ab tum jaa rahey ho to me tum ko bohot miss kaeungi.
Karan.................me bhi aap ko miss karunga.
Phir me kareena ke paas gaya.
Karan...............kareena tum phir se sharaab piney mat lag jaana.tum ek acchi ladki ho aur acchey freinds banao.
Kareena..............karan tum ne jab mujhe kaha tha sharaab chorney kr liye me ne tabhi hi chor di thi.gham to is baat ka hai ke mujhe tum se kitni baatey karna tha wo nhi ho payee
Karan..................vo bhi ho jayengi.jab me vapas aaunga tab.
Phir sab se mila me.phir suresh se mila to suresh ne kaha.
suresh..............karan jo tum ne hamarey liye kiya hai hum usko kabhi bhi nhi bhool sKtey hai.aur haa me ne tum ko kal kaha tha ke hum tum ko ek gift dengey
Karan...............ha chacha kya hai gift.
suresh...............karan is envolep me hai wo gift.
Phir us envolep ko open kar ke dekha to usme cheque tha aur us cheque me amount tha 5 crore.
Karan..............chacha me itni badi rakam nhi le sakta hu.aap ne bohot zyaada de diya hai.
suresh..............karan jitna tum ne kiya hai ye us ss kam hai.ab tum plz manaa mat karna nhi to hamara dil toot jayenga.
Karan...............thik hai chacha ab aap itna force kar rahey hai to me manaa nhi karunga.
Phir me massi se mila aur baaki sab se bhi mila lekin vaha shalini nhi thi to me ne kaha.
Karan...............shalini aunty nhi dikh rahey hai wo kidhar hai.
Sonam................mom to apney room me hai.tum jaa rahey they isliye wo aayee nhi hai.wo bohot upset hai tum jaa rahey ho isliye.
Karan..............thik hai me unse mil kar aata hu.
Phir me apna samaan rakha aur shalini aunty ke room me gaya aur room ko knock kiya to andar se shalini ne andar aaney ko kaha to me andar chaley gaya.
Andar gaya to dekha ke shalini ki aankhey nam thi shayed vo rahi thi.phir me gaya to shalini ne apni aankhey pohchi aur kehney lagi.
shalini...............karan tum yaha.
Karan..............ha aunty me yaha.aap mujhe vida karney nhi aaye to me khud aa gaya.
Shalini..............ha karan me jaan bhujh kar nhi aayee thi.mujhe accha nhi lag raha tha tumhara yaha se jaana..
Karan.............mujhe bhi accha nhi lag raha hai.lekin kya karu jaana honga.
Phir shalini me mujhe ek card nikaal kar diya aur jab me ne wo card dekha to wo sorry ka card tha.
Karan...............aunty ye kis liye sorry card.
Shalini...............karan me ne tumhara dil bohot dikhayee hu.hamesha tum ko bastard hi kaha tha.aur tum ko hamesha taana de ksr baat ki thi.me ne tumhara dil dukhayee hu uske liye mujhe maaf kar do.plz me har cheez ke liye sharminda hu.
Karan................aunty aap ko maafi maangney ki koi zarurat nhi hai.agar aap ki jagah par koi aur bhi aurat hoti to wo mujhe gaali hi deti.koi aurat ye pasand nhi karti ke uske aadmi ka koi Najayaz beta ho.aur achanak aap ke saamney anil ne mujhe le kar aaya tha to aap ko gussa aa gaya honga.isliye aap plz mujh se maafi mat maango.
karan...............aunty ab jaa raha hu to aap aisey dukhi mat ho aap khush rehna yahi me chahta hu.
Shalini.............thik hai karan.
Phir me shalini ko bye bol kar jaaney laga to shalini ne mujhe roka aur mere pass aayee aur phir mere gaalo par ek kiss ki.aur kiss bhi accha khaasa lamba tha.phir kiss karnry ke baad shalini ne kaha.
Shalini...............karan me tum ko bohot bohot miss karungi.tum ho sakey to jaldi aa jaana mere paas.
Karan...............ha aunty me koshish karunga jaldi aaney ki.
Phir me shalini ke room se nikla aur phir sabhi se vida le kar ke me aur sunita bua nikal gaye gaadi me Beth kar apney ghar ki taraf.
Kuch mahino baad
Idhar ghar par shalini aur uski family dinning table par Beth kar nashta kar rahey they.sab apni apni life me khush they.idhar abhi nashta kar hi rahey they ke sab ke phone par achanak ek saath phone par msg ki ring bajney lagi.to sab ne msg check kiya aur jaisey hi msg dekha to sab darr gaye q ke msg me likha tha.
Sab ke sab marengey
I m coming
Itna kehtey hi sab darr gaye.idhar suresh,shalini,karishma,babita,sonam,rupali,saara darr gaye they.idhar ab jo khush they sab ko ab tension ho gaya tha.tabhi shalini ne kaha.
shalini.................babita jaldi se karan ko phone kar ke bulao yaha par.
Babita................ok mom
The End.
2 part coming soon
Intejaar rahega 2 Nd part Ka
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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idhar shalini kehti hai ke vo sunita aur karan se baat karungi ke karan ko yaha hi rukney do.
Ab aage...........
Idhar me sunita,purvi aur kalpana massi mere room me rehtey hai tabhi sunita kehti hai.
sunita...............karan kal hi hum nikal jayengey.aur teri packing bhi me kal subah kar loongi.
karan.................thik hai hum kal raat nikal jayengey.kal me subah subah sab se mil kar aa jaunga aur college me application bhi dena honga na chutti ki.
Sunita..................tu uski tension mat le.me shalini ko bol doongi.uski freind college ki principle hai.
Karan..................ok thik hai.
purvi................thik hai ab hum chaltey hai.kal aayengey phir se.
Sunita.................thik hai purvi.
Phir purvi aur kalpana ghar se Nikal jaatey hai.phir me bhi aaram karta hu.raat me sab ke saath dinner karney ke liye aata hu.tabhi sunita sab se kehti hai.
Sunita................ji mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai.
Shalini.................ha mujhe bhi kuch batana tha tum dono ko.
Sunita...................pehle me batati hu.
shalini...............ha thik hai.
sunita..................ji me aur karan kal raat me yaha se apney goan ke liye nikal rahey hai aur ab karan kuch dino ke liye udhar hi rahenga.
Sunita ki baato ko sun kar sab ka dil toot jaata hai.
shalini................sunita karan ko yaha rehney do na.usko q le jaa rahi ho tum.pehle hum ko problem thi karan ke yaha rehney se lekin ab hum khud chah rahey hai ke karan hamarey saath rahey hamarey parivaar ka hissa ban kar.
Sunita.................shalini mujhe bohot khushi hai ke aap sab karan ko apney parivaar ka hissa banana chahti ho.lekin udhar karan ka parivaar uska intezaar kar raha hai.karan ko dekhney ke liye bohot logo ki aankhey taras rahi hai.
Karan...................ha mujhe ab jaana honga mujhe bhi dekhna hai mere parivaar me kon kon hai.me bachpan se akela hi raha tha.ab mujhe bhi apney parivaar ke saath rehna hai.
Babita..................to kya karan tum hum ko apna nhi samajhtey ho kya.anil ke baad tum ne bhi hum se rishta tod diya kya
Karan..................nhi nhi babita me aap sab ko kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.me aap ke yaha par aaya uske baad hi mujhe apna real parivaar aur pyaar karney waaley log miley hai.pehle pehle aap ne mujh se pyaar nhi kiya lekin baad me aap sabhi ne mujhe apney parivaar ka hissa mana tha aur is baat ko me kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu
Sunita..................aur ha ghar par iske chacha ki beti ki shaadi bhi honey waali hai.aur ab ye hum ko phir se mil gaya hai to usko jaana hi chahiye.aur wo waha reh kar ke phir wapas idhar aa jayenga.aur apni study ko complete karenga.
shalini................thik hai sunita hum tum dono ko jaaney se rokengey nhi.q ke karan ke parivaar ko bhi karan ke saath rehney ka haq hai lekin jab karan vapas aayenga to hamarey saath hi rahenga.
Karan..................promise aunty.
sunita..............aur shalini mujhe tumhari ek aur help chahiye thi.
shalini...............ha kaho na
Sunita.................karan ke college me application dena tha karan ki chutti ke liye.agar tum kahongey to college ki principle karan ki chutti ki application ko accept karengi jis se wo goan jaa sakey
Shalini..............thik hai me kal hi principle se baat kar loongi.
Sunita...............ok thik hai.
suresh..............karan lekin tum ko hamari taraf se ek gift lena honga aur tum uske liye manaa nhi karna honga..
Karan.................thik hai chacha.
Phir kuch khaas baat nhi huyee aur phir hum apney apney room me chaley gaye soney ke liye.
Subah meri neend 7 bajey khuli.me fresh hua aur sab ke saath nichey aa kar nashta karney laga.
shalini.................karan me ne baat kar li principle se aur wo tumhari chutti ke liye maan gayee hai.
Karan................thanks aunty.me aaj college me jaa kar ke sab se mil kar aata hu.
babita...............karan hum dono saath me aaj chaltey hai college me.
Karan...............ok thik hai.
Phir me aur babita saath me college ke liye nikal gaye.phir 20 minute baad hum dono college pohchey.phir mujhe waha par divya mili to me us se baat karnry laga.
Divya..............karan tum itne dino se college me dikhayee nhi diye they sab thik to hai na.
karan..............ha sab thik hai.aur divya me kuch mahino ke liye college me nhi aaunga.me apney ghar jaa raha hu aaj aur tum se milney ke liye aaya hu.
Divya................kya tum jaa rahry ho.lekin q
Karan................kuch kaam hai jis wajah se jaana honga.
Idhar jaisey hi me ne jaaney ka bola to divya ka chehra utar gaya tha.uski aankho me aansu aaney lagey they.
Karan.................kya hua divya tum ro q rahi ho.
Divya...................tum chor kar jaa rahey ho isliye.tum ko to ab meri yaad aayengi nhi lekin mujhe hamesha se tumhari yaad aayengi.me tumhey kabhi bhool nhi sakti hu karan.
karan................arey arey Tum tension mat lo.me bohot hi jald vapas bhi aa jaunga.aur kon kehta hai ke me tum ko yaad nhi karunga.mujhe bhi tumhari yaad aayengi.
Karan.................ab tum rona band karo aur mujhe Hastey Hastey vida karo
Divya................thik hai karan lekin jab tum aaongey vapas mujhe tumhey kuch batana rahenga jo abhi tak me ne tum ko batayee nhi thi.me ne ye baat apney dil me hi chupa kar rakhi thi sochi thi sahi mokey par bataungi.
Karan...............thik hai divya jab me aaunga to tum mujhe bata dena.chalo ab mujhe aur bhi logo se milna hai to me mil kar aata hu.
Divya...............ok thik hai.
Phir divya se milney ke baad me alisha mam se mila aur usko bhi bye bol kar sidha ghar aa gaya.ghar aa kar me ne apney samaan ki packing karnry laga.idhar sunita ne bhi meri madad ki.phir aisey hi packing karnry me raat ho gayee.phir me aur sunita nichey aa gaye apna samaan le kar.
Idhar nichey aaye to dekha ke purvi,kalpana,meghna aur kareena bhi mojud they.phir hum dono nichey aaye
Karan.................meghna aunty aap ka jitna shukriya adaa karu utna kam hai.aap ne meri bohot help ki hai.aur me aap ka ehsaan kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.
Meghna................tum kya pagal ho jo aisi baatey kar rahey ho.tum ne bhi to kareena ko bachaya tha to kya me ne bhi tumhara ehsaan maani thi kya.jo mera farz tha me ne vo hi ki hu.aur ab tum jaa rahey ho to me tum ko bohot miss kaeungi.
Karan.................me bhi aap ko miss karunga.
Phir me kareena ke paas gaya.
Karan...............kareena tum phir se sharaab piney mat lag jaana.tum ek acchi ladki ho aur acchey freinds banao.
Kareena..............karan tum ne jab mujhe kaha tha sharaab chorney kr liye me ne tabhi hi chor di thi.gham to is baat ka hai ke mujhe tum se kitni baatey karna tha wo nhi ho payee
Karan..................vo bhi ho jayengi.jab me vapas aaunga tab.
Phir sab se mila me.phir suresh se mila to suresh ne kaha.
suresh..............karan jo tum ne hamarey liye kiya hai hum usko kabhi bhi nhi bhool sKtey hai.aur haa me ne tum ko kal kaha tha ke hum tum ko ek gift dengey
Karan...............ha chacha kya hai gift.
suresh...............karan is envolep me hai wo gift.
Phir us envolep ko open kar ke dekha to usme cheque tha aur us cheque me amount tha 5 crore.
Karan..............chacha me itni badi rakam nhi le sakta hu.aap ne bohot zyaada de diya hai.
suresh..............karan jitna tum ne kiya hai ye us ss kam hai.ab tum plz manaa mat karna nhi to hamara dil toot jayenga.
Karan...............thik hai chacha ab aap itna force kar rahey hai to me manaa nhi karunga.
Phir me massi se mila aur baaki sab se bhi mila lekin vaha shalini nhi thi to me ne kaha.
Karan...............shalini aunty nhi dikh rahey hai wo kidhar hai.
Sonam................mom to apney room me hai.tum jaa rahey they isliye wo aayee nhi hai.wo bohot upset hai tum jaa rahey ho isliye.
Karan..............thik hai me unse mil kar aata hu.
Phir me apna samaan rakha aur shalini aunty ke room me gaya aur room ko knock kiya to andar se shalini ne andar aaney ko kaha to me andar chaley gaya.
Andar gaya to dekha ke shalini ki aankhey nam thi shayed vo rahi thi.phir me gaya to shalini ne apni aankhey pohchi aur kehney lagi.
shalini...............karan tum yaha.
Karan..............ha aunty me yaha.aap mujhe vida karney nhi aaye to me khud aa gaya.
Shalini..............ha karan me jaan bhujh kar nhi aayee thi.mujhe accha nhi lag raha tha tumhara yaha se jaana..
Karan.............mujhe bhi accha nhi lag raha hai.lekin kya karu jaana honga.
Phir shalini me mujhe ek card nikaal kar diya aur jab me ne wo card dekha to wo sorry ka card tha.
Karan...............aunty ye kis liye sorry card.
Shalini...............karan me ne tumhara dil bohot dikhayee hu.hamesha tum ko bastard hi kaha tha.aur tum ko hamesha taana de ksr baat ki thi.me ne tumhara dil dukhayee hu uske liye mujhe maaf kar do.plz me har cheez ke liye sharminda hu.
Karan................aunty aap ko maafi maangney ki koi zarurat nhi hai.agar aap ki jagah par koi aur bhi aurat hoti to wo mujhe gaali hi deti.koi aurat ye pasand nhi karti ke uske aadmi ka koi Najayaz beta ho.aur achanak aap ke saamney anil ne mujhe le kar aaya tha to aap ko gussa aa gaya honga.isliye aap plz mujh se maafi mat maango.
karan...............aunty ab jaa raha hu to aap aisey dukhi mat ho aap khush rehna yahi me chahta hu.
Shalini.............thik hai karan.
Phir me shalini ko bye bol kar jaaney laga to shalini ne mujhe roka aur mere pass aayee aur phir mere gaalo par ek kiss ki.aur kiss bhi accha khaasa lamba tha.phir kiss karnry ke baad shalini ne kaha.
Shalini...............karan me tum ko bohot bohot miss karungi.tum ho sakey to jaldi aa jaana mere paas.
Karan...............ha aunty me koshish karunga jaldi aaney ki.
Phir me shalini ke room se nikla aur phir sabhi se vida le kar ke me aur sunita bua nikal gaye gaadi me Beth kar apney ghar ki taraf.
Kuch mahino baad
Idhar ghar par shalini aur uski family dinning table par Beth kar nashta kar rahey they.sab apni apni life me khush they.idhar abhi nashta kar hi rahey they ke sab ke phone par achanak ek saath phone par msg ki ring bajney lagi.to sab ne msg check kiya aur jaisey hi msg dekha to sab darr gaye q ke msg me likha tha.
Sab ke sab marengey
I m coming
Itna kehtey hi sab darr gaye.idhar suresh,shalini,karishma,babita,sonam,rupali,saara darr gaye they.idhar ab jo khush they sab ko ab tension ho gaya tha.tabhi shalini ne kaha.
shalini.................babita jaldi se karan ko phone kar ke bulao yaha par.
Babita................ok mom
The End.
2 part coming soon
Shandar story..2nd part k intzar rahegaa bhai
 

Anky@123

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Janab bahut bahut dhanyawad itni acchi kahani likhne ke liye . Jo sabse important tha is kahani me wo the emotions. Jisko aapne bilkul sahi tarah se dikhaya hai..bus ek kami jo is kahani me lagi wo tha romence .shayed part 2 me ye bhi dekhne ko mile .divya aur kareena to ready bethi hai .kher part 1 jitna shandar tha. 100 percent part 2 bhi aur damdar hoga . Jaldi shuru kare
 

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Final update
idhar shalini kehti hai ke vo sunita aur karan se baat karungi ke karan ko yaha hi rukney do.
Ab aage...........
Idhar me sunita,purvi aur kalpana massi mere room me rehtey hai tabhi sunita kehti hai.
sunita...............karan kal hi hum nikal jayengey.aur teri packing bhi me kal subah kar loongi.
karan.................thik hai hum kal raat nikal jayengey.kal me subah subah sab se mil kar aa jaunga aur college me application bhi dena honga na chutti ki.
Sunita..................tu uski tension mat le.me shalini ko bol doongi.uski freind college ki principle hai.
Karan..................ok thik hai.
purvi................thik hai ab hum chaltey hai.kal aayengey phir se.
Sunita.................thik hai purvi.
Phir purvi aur kalpana ghar se Nikal jaatey hai.phir me bhi aaram karta hu.raat me sab ke saath dinner karney ke liye aata hu.tabhi sunita sab se kehti hai.
Sunita................ji mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai.
Shalini.................ha mujhe bhi kuch batana tha tum dono ko.
Sunita...................pehle me batati hu.
shalini...............ha thik hai.
sunita..................ji me aur karan kal raat me yaha se apney goan ke liye nikal rahey hai aur ab karan kuch dino ke liye udhar hi rahenga.
Sunita ki baato ko sun kar sab ka dil toot jaata hai.
shalini................sunita karan ko yaha rehney do na.usko q le jaa rahi ho tum.pehle hum ko problem thi karan ke yaha rehney se lekin ab hum khud chah rahey hai ke karan hamarey saath rahey hamarey parivaar ka hissa ban kar.
Sunita.................shalini mujhe bohot khushi hai ke aap sab karan ko apney parivaar ka hissa banana chahti ho.lekin udhar karan ka parivaar uska intezaar kar raha hai.karan ko dekhney ke liye bohot logo ki aankhey taras rahi hai.
Karan...................ha mujhe ab jaana honga mujhe bhi dekhna hai mere parivaar me kon kon hai.me bachpan se akela hi raha tha.ab mujhe bhi apney parivaar ke saath rehna hai.
Babita..................to kya karan tum hum ko apna nhi samajhtey ho kya.anil ke baad tum ne bhi hum se rishta tod diya kya
Karan..................nhi nhi babita me aap sab ko kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.me aap ke yaha par aaya uske baad hi mujhe apna real parivaar aur pyaar karney waaley log miley hai.pehle pehle aap ne mujh se pyaar nhi kiya lekin baad me aap sabhi ne mujhe apney parivaar ka hissa mana tha aur is baat ko me kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu
Sunita..................aur ha ghar par iske chacha ki beti ki shaadi bhi honey waali hai.aur ab ye hum ko phir se mil gaya hai to usko jaana hi chahiye.aur wo waha reh kar ke phir wapas idhar aa jayenga.aur apni study ko complete karenga.
shalini................thik hai sunita hum tum dono ko jaaney se rokengey nhi.q ke karan ke parivaar ko bhi karan ke saath rehney ka haq hai lekin jab karan vapas aayenga to hamarey saath hi rahenga.
Karan..................promise aunty.
sunita..............aur shalini mujhe tumhari ek aur help chahiye thi.
shalini...............ha kaho na
Sunita.................karan ke college me application dena tha karan ki chutti ke liye.agar tum kahongey to college ki principle karan ki chutti ki application ko accept karengi jis se wo goan jaa sakey
Shalini..............thik hai me kal hi principle se baat kar loongi.
Sunita...............ok thik hai.
suresh..............karan lekin tum ko hamari taraf se ek gift lena honga aur tum uske liye manaa nhi karna honga..
Karan.................thik hai chacha.
Phir kuch khaas baat nhi huyee aur phir hum apney apney room me chaley gaye soney ke liye.
Subah meri neend 7 bajey khuli.me fresh hua aur sab ke saath nichey aa kar nashta karney laga.
shalini.................karan me ne baat kar li principle se aur wo tumhari chutti ke liye maan gayee hai.
Karan................thanks aunty.me aaj college me jaa kar ke sab se mil kar aata hu.
babita...............karan hum dono saath me aaj chaltey hai college me.
Karan...............ok thik hai.
Phir me aur babita saath me college ke liye nikal gaye.phir 20 minute baad hum dono college pohchey.phir mujhe waha par divya mili to me us se baat karnry laga.
Divya..............karan tum itne dino se college me dikhayee nhi diye they sab thik to hai na.
karan..............ha sab thik hai.aur divya me kuch mahino ke liye college me nhi aaunga.me apney ghar jaa raha hu aaj aur tum se milney ke liye aaya hu.
Divya................kya tum jaa rahry ho.lekin q
Karan................kuch kaam hai jis wajah se jaana honga.
Idhar jaisey hi me ne jaaney ka bola to divya ka chehra utar gaya tha.uski aankho me aansu aaney lagey they.
Karan.................kya hua divya tum ro q rahi ho.
Divya...................tum chor kar jaa rahey ho isliye.tum ko to ab meri yaad aayengi nhi lekin mujhe hamesha se tumhari yaad aayengi.me tumhey kabhi bhool nhi sakti hu karan.
karan................arey arey Tum tension mat lo.me bohot hi jald vapas bhi aa jaunga.aur kon kehta hai ke me tum ko yaad nhi karunga.mujhe bhi tumhari yaad aayengi.
Karan.................ab tum rona band karo aur mujhe Hastey Hastey vida karo
Divya................thik hai karan lekin jab tum aaongey vapas mujhe tumhey kuch batana rahenga jo abhi tak me ne tum ko batayee nhi thi.me ne ye baat apney dil me hi chupa kar rakhi thi sochi thi sahi mokey par bataungi.
Karan...............thik hai divya jab me aaunga to tum mujhe bata dena.chalo ab mujhe aur bhi logo se milna hai to me mil kar aata hu.
Divya...............ok thik hai.
Phir divya se milney ke baad me alisha mam se mila aur usko bhi bye bol kar sidha ghar aa gaya.ghar aa kar me ne apney samaan ki packing karnry laga.idhar sunita ne bhi meri madad ki.phir aisey hi packing karnry me raat ho gayee.phir me aur sunita nichey aa gaye apna samaan le kar.
Idhar nichey aaye to dekha ke purvi,kalpana,meghna aur kareena bhi mojud they.phir hum dono nichey aaye
Karan.................meghna aunty aap ka jitna shukriya adaa karu utna kam hai.aap ne meri bohot help ki hai.aur me aap ka ehsaan kabhi nhi bhool sakta hu.
Meghna................tum kya pagal ho jo aisi baatey kar rahey ho.tum ne bhi to kareena ko bachaya tha to kya me ne bhi tumhara ehsaan maani thi kya.jo mera farz tha me ne vo hi ki hu.aur ab tum jaa rahey ho to me tum ko bohot miss kaeungi.
Karan.................me bhi aap ko miss karunga.
Phir me kareena ke paas gaya.
Karan...............kareena tum phir se sharaab piney mat lag jaana.tum ek acchi ladki ho aur acchey freinds banao.
Kareena..............karan tum ne jab mujhe kaha tha sharaab chorney kr liye me ne tabhi hi chor di thi.gham to is baat ka hai ke mujhe tum se kitni baatey karna tha wo nhi ho payee
Karan..................vo bhi ho jayengi.jab me vapas aaunga tab.
Phir sab se mila me.phir suresh se mila to suresh ne kaha.
suresh..............karan jo tum ne hamarey liye kiya hai hum usko kabhi bhi nhi bhool sKtey hai.aur haa me ne tum ko kal kaha tha ke hum tum ko ek gift dengey
Karan...............ha chacha kya hai gift.
suresh...............karan is envolep me hai wo gift.
Phir us envolep ko open kar ke dekha to usme cheque tha aur us cheque me amount tha 5 crore.
Karan..............chacha me itni badi rakam nhi le sakta hu.aap ne bohot zyaada de diya hai.
suresh..............karan jitna tum ne kiya hai ye us ss kam hai.ab tum plz manaa mat karna nhi to hamara dil toot jayenga.
Karan...............thik hai chacha ab aap itna force kar rahey hai to me manaa nhi karunga.
Phir me massi se mila aur baaki sab se bhi mila lekin vaha shalini nhi thi to me ne kaha.
Karan...............shalini aunty nhi dikh rahey hai wo kidhar hai.
Sonam................mom to apney room me hai.tum jaa rahey they isliye wo aayee nhi hai.wo bohot upset hai tum jaa rahey ho isliye.
Karan..............thik hai me unse mil kar aata hu.
Phir me apna samaan rakha aur shalini aunty ke room me gaya aur room ko knock kiya to andar se shalini ne andar aaney ko kaha to me andar chaley gaya.
Andar gaya to dekha ke shalini ki aankhey nam thi shayed vo rahi thi.phir me gaya to shalini ne apni aankhey pohchi aur kehney lagi.
shalini...............karan tum yaha.
Karan..............ha aunty me yaha.aap mujhe vida karney nhi aaye to me khud aa gaya.
Shalini..............ha karan me jaan bhujh kar nhi aayee thi.mujhe accha nhi lag raha tha tumhara yaha se jaana..
Karan.............mujhe bhi accha nhi lag raha hai.lekin kya karu jaana honga.
Phir shalini me mujhe ek card nikaal kar diya aur jab me ne wo card dekha to wo sorry ka card tha.
Karan...............aunty ye kis liye sorry card.
Shalini...............karan me ne tumhara dil bohot dikhayee hu.hamesha tum ko bastard hi kaha tha.aur tum ko hamesha taana de ksr baat ki thi.me ne tumhara dil dukhayee hu uske liye mujhe maaf kar do.plz me har cheez ke liye sharminda hu.
Karan................aunty aap ko maafi maangney ki koi zarurat nhi hai.agar aap ki jagah par koi aur bhi aurat hoti to wo mujhe gaali hi deti.koi aurat ye pasand nhi karti ke uske aadmi ka koi Najayaz beta ho.aur achanak aap ke saamney anil ne mujhe le kar aaya tha to aap ko gussa aa gaya honga.isliye aap plz mujh se maafi mat maango.
karan...............aunty ab jaa raha hu to aap aisey dukhi mat ho aap khush rehna yahi me chahta hu.
Shalini.............thik hai karan.
Phir me shalini ko bye bol kar jaaney laga to shalini ne mujhe roka aur mere pass aayee aur phir mere gaalo par ek kiss ki.aur kiss bhi accha khaasa lamba tha.phir kiss karnry ke baad shalini ne kaha.
Shalini...............karan me tum ko bohot bohot miss karungi.tum ho sakey to jaldi aa jaana mere paas.
Karan...............ha aunty me koshish karunga jaldi aaney ki.
Phir me shalini ke room se nikla aur phir sabhi se vida le kar ke me aur sunita bua nikal gaye gaadi me Beth kar apney ghar ki taraf.
Kuch mahino baad
Idhar ghar par shalini aur uski family dinning table par Beth kar nashta kar rahey they.sab apni apni life me khush they.idhar abhi nashta kar hi rahey they ke sab ke phone par achanak ek saath phone par msg ki ring bajney lagi.to sab ne msg check kiya aur jaisey hi msg dekha to sab darr gaye q ke msg me likha tha.
Sab ke sab marengey
I m coming
Itna kehtey hi sab darr gaye.idhar suresh,shalini,karishma,babita,sonam,rupali,saara darr gaye they.idhar ab jo khush they sab ko ab tension ho gaya tha.tabhi shalini ne kaha.
shalini.................babita jaldi se karan ko phone kar ke bulao yaha par.
Babita................ok mom
The End.
2 part coming soon
Bhai intzar h part 2 ka besbri se bht mzedr story rhi part 1
 
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