Pehle to congratulations for story brother.....
kahani ka topic or name mujhe kafi intresting laga....sabhi updates kafi jabardast or shandar hai....jitne bhi characters aaye hai kahani mein ab Tak unko plot ke hisab se kafi achi tarike se establish kiya hai... Karan ko bachpan mein naajayaz kehke nikale jana.... jab woh bda hua to uski father k life par risk....ab uska unhi logo ko vapas bachane ke liye aana jinhone use bastard kehke nikala... karan k entry bhi kafi achi thi college mein...ab tak hua woh kafi romanchak tha....yeh kafi uljhi hui family hai...suresh Chacha shayad ek mohra hai....vaise karan k madad k liye bhi kafi log ho gye hai.... babita k kaand k baad shalini bhi thoda us par trust karne lagi hai....yeh kaamwali kafi raaz kholegi ghar k...or shayad last update mein jo aurat dikhai hai woh karan ki maa ya uski mother sidecse koi relative hai baki ka to aage kahani mein pta chalega....
Nice story and great start....
keep writing....
keep posting......