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Chand ki 14 raat the
Chand poori trah sy roshan tha
Halki halki Thand ki wja sy Mahol brha HushNma Ho raha tha

Raat ka Akhri pehr Tha
Es HubSuRaT Mahol Main Aik Aalishan gar Ky Aik Kamry Sy boht tez Cheehoon ki awazyn Aa rahi the
Or Achanak wo Cheehyn Ruk gayn or Mahol main ik Nai Awaz aana Shru ho gai
Ye aik Bachy ky rony ki Avaz The
( ab tak ap smj gy hungy k pehli cheehyn Aik orat ki theen Jo Maan Banny wali the or Baad main jo rony ki awaz The wo us Bachy ki the jis Ny Apny Aany ka ilan kar diya tha )

Tabi Aik Nurse Us kamry Sy nikli or Bahr brhi becheni sy Chakar lgaty huwy aik aadmi Ky paas ja k Boli

Nurse : Mubarak Ho Chohdri Sahb Apky haan beta Paida huwa hy

Ye Sun kar Wo Aadmi hushi Sy Jhoom Utha Or usny Jaldi sy apni jaib main hath Dala or Jitny Gadi Pesy ki us ky hath main aai wo us ny bina Dekhy us nurse ko Dy de or kaha ky ye Lo or Hush Raho

Ye keh kar Wo Admi jaldi Sy Andar Kamry mai Chla gya Jahan Aik orat Bed par Leti hui the or us ky paas Aik boht He HubSuRaT Bcha So Raha tha

( intro Time )

DAD : Zeeshan Chohdri
Age 30 year

MOM : ALIYA Chohdri
Age 27 year

SON ( HERO ) : Ali Shan Chohdri


....

Jab Zeeshan Chohdri ki Nazar Apne Bete Par parhi To wo Aik Dum heran Reh Gy k itna HubSuRaT Bacha Unu ny Aj tak Nahi dekha tha . Wo Sote main Itna Pyara lag Raha tha Un ky Qadam Hud Ba Hud Apne bete ki trf Barhny lagy
Zeeshan Chohdri Ki Bv Uny Barhy Pyar ky Sath dekh Rahi thee or un kY Chehry Par Aik Pyari C Muskan The .
Zeeshan Chohdri Ny Brhy Araam or Ehtyat sy Apny bete ko Uthaya or usy Ahista Ahista Choomne Lagy
Wo ByHud Sy ho gy thy Itna Pyara Bacha pa kar
Or apni Husband ki ByHudi Dekh kar Aliya Ch be Muskura Rahi thee

Tabi Achanak Bachy Ki Neend toot ga or wo zor zor sy rony lga To Zeeshan Ch ka Dehan Toota . Or phr Unnu Ny bchy ko aik pyari c kiss Ki or Bachy ko Apni pyari Wife ko dy diya
Aliya Ch ny Apny Bchy ko apny Seeny sy lga liya or usy Choom kar phr usy Apna Dood Pilany lagi . Ye dekh Kar paas kharhy Zeeshan Ch Smile kar rahy thy wo boht Hush Thy aj ku k Shadi ky 7 Saal Baad un ky Gar Aik Nanna Mehman aya Tha Pehli baar

Unki Hushi Un ky Chehry Sy Dikh Rahi the ......

Zeeshan Ch Jis Gaun main Rehty Hyn Uska Naam AMANPUR hy
Wo Es Gaun ky Sarpanch be Thy or Es Gaun ky Sath Lagty 24 or Gaun Ky Be .
Kul Mila Kar Zeeshan Chohdri 25 Gaun ky Sarpanch Thy

Zeeshan Chohdri ka Nature Boht he Kind Tha or wo Har kisi sy Bina Frq Kiyey Aik jesa Bartao Karty thy
Jis ki wja sy Sabi Log Un sy Pyar krty Thy or Unki Izat karty thy

Kind hony Ky Sath sath Wo Boht he MilanNisaar Thy . Or har kisi ki madad karty thy
Logu ki Madad kar k Uny Hushi milti the

Zeeshan Ch ki Trah Unki Wife
Aliya Ch be Bilkul uni ky Jesi the

Aliya Ch Aik Greeb Gar Sy thee

Zeeshan Ch or Aliya Ch ki Love marriage Hui the Jis wja Sy Un ky Beech Boht He Zbrdst Understanding The

Donu Husband Wife Logu ki sachy Mann ky sath Madad karty thy

Or Log be Uny Sachy Man Sy Dua dety thy jiski wja sy Zeeshan Chohdri or Unki Wife Ki Saary ilaky Main Boht izat the . Har koi Unky Sath rehta Jiski wja sy Political Log be Zeeshan Chohdri ky Saamny Jhukty thy ku k Agar Zeeshan Chohdri ki Support Agar kisi ko mil gai To Uska Jeetna Pkka Ho jata tha Us ilaky sy .......
( Zeeshan Chohdri ki family ka intro )

Zeeshan Chohdri ky ...
Dada g : Malik Chohdri
DADI ( RIP ) Rozma Chohdri

Zeeshan Chohdri ky ...

Dad ( Rip ) : Habib Chohdri
Mom ( Rip ) : Nabila Chohdri


.....



Zeeshan Ch ki Family mai Ab Sirf Un ky Dada G he Reh gay hyn Baki unki Family Main un ky Mom Dad or Dadi Ab Es dunia main nahi hyn

Eski Wja Aik ExeDent tha

( ye Aik Normal ExeDent tha . Es mai Koi Saazsh nahi hy ksii ki )


Zeeshan Chohdri ko Unky Dada G ny Pala Hy Ku k Jab Zeeshan Chohdri 5 Saal ky thy to Aik Car Axedent Main Unky Mom Dad nd Dadi RIP ho Chuky thy.
Bhai story bahut achhi hai. Par aap ki hindi typing sahi nahi kar rahe hai. Jo ki Hindiengalish hai. Bhai aap ispe dhyan main dawa karta hu apki story best hogi site.

Bura mat mana jo mujhe laga main ne aapko kaha diya
 
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Bhai Mai Pakistan Sy hun to meri Hindi itni Achi nahi hy Mai Koshash kar raha hun

Mazrat
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Ab kya writer story me hi ghus(Chala) Jaye

Otherwise
Aapki ek story complete Hai aur 2 running isliye in do story par bada update aata hai

And Sᴀrkarᴮᴼˢˢ ki yah pahli story hai kahe to shuruaat
Thora time lagega update aur size ke mamle me

Otherwise
Mind blowing story Sᴀrkarᴮᴼˢˢ
Bole to jhakkas

Bas ek hi request hai ki story complete jarur Kariyega/Karna
:protest: ye readers ka adhikar hai wo bade updates ki maang kare... aap bhi karo :protest:
 

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Update 8

Sabi log Nashta krny ky Baad Tyar huwy or Hum Sab Hotal Sy bahr nikal aay

Hmary Sath Ek Guide be tha Jo hamy Aisi Places dikhay ga jahan ham adventure or fun kar skyn

Guide ky sath Hum Sab Chal parhy Mosam Thnda Tha lekin sabi Log Exited be Boht thy To ksi ko Sardi Sy diqt nahi ho rahi the

Hum Jis Hotal Main Ruky huwy Thy Wahan par Aik Trip aya huwa tha College ka

Wo log Be Pichy Aa rahy thy
Hum Log Aisy he Ghoomty rahy Koi In Places ki Pic nikal raha tha Koi Video bna Raha tha

Aisy He Sabi ider Udar Hony Lagy lekin Kisi ko ehsas nahi huwa
Mai or Arslan Be Ghoomty Ghoomty Kafi Aagy NIKAL gy

Achanak Mujy Aik Halki Se Cheeh Sunai de
Awaz Kafi door sy i the or ChooNky Mairy Sabi senses Kafi Sharp hyn to Mujy Ye Cheeh Snai dy gai or Mujy ye Be Pta chal gya ky Ye Kis Direction sy i hy

Mujy Lag raha tha ky Koi MuSiBat Mai hy

Arslan Jaldi Dorho es trf
Mai ny kaha to Arslan Ny Mujy Herat Sy dekha
Lekin Mery pas waqt nahi tha Explain krny ka
Kisi ki Jan ko Hatra be ho skta hy

Es Leye Mai us Direction mai Dorh Prha Meri Speed kaafi tez the Arslan Meri Speed sy match nahi kar paa raha tha lekin wo mery peech he aa raha tha

Tabi aik baar or Cheeh Sunai de es Bar Cheeh ki awaz Qareeb sy ai the Es leye Arslan ny be usy Sun liya
Or Usy pta chal gya ky Halaat Thek nahi hyn

Or Hum Wahan Pohnch he gay jahan 3 Larkoon ny 1 larki Ko jakrha Huwa tha Or us ky Sath Bad Slooki karny ki koshash kar Rahy thy

Ye Teenu Larky Doosri trip Jo i the Us Mai thy
Or Larki ko jab mai ny Gor Sy dekha To ye Hmary Gaun Ki Larki the SAIRA

( YE Wohi Saira Hy Jis ki fight hui the Maira Sy Alishan ko ly kar )

Ye Sab dekh kar meri Ankhu mai Guseh Sy hoon Utar Aaya or Mai ny Dorhty Huwy he Aik Flaying kick aik Ko Mari Ye kick kafi force ky sath us Larky ko Lagi to wo Kafi door ja kar gira kick Usy kafi Zor sy lagi the es leye jahan Usy Lagi the Wahan Sy Us ka Jorh Hil gya tha or wo Waheen dard ki wja sy BeHoSh ho gya

Doosry Donu Ny jab apny Sathi ka haal dekha to pehly To Wo be Dar gy lekin unu Ny Fori Apny ap ko Snmbala or Tezi sy Muj par Hamla kiya lekin ( Lorhy lag gy ) Dy Dana dan Dy Dana Dan

Jab tak Arslan Wahan Pohncha Mai ny Un Kaminu ki Aisi Thukai kar de the Ky Wo Donu be Dard ki wja sy BeHosh Ho Chuky Thy

Jab Wo donu behosh huwy to meri Nazar Saira par parhi jo Ro Rahi the or meri Taraf Dekh Rahi the
Us ki Jarsi kaheen Nzr nahi aa rahi the or Uski qameez be kafi Jaga Sy phat chuki the

To Main ny apni jarsi utar kar usko dy di Arslan be paas aa gya tha or Usy Tasalli dy raha tha ky sab thek hy
Lekin Wo fir be Roy ja rahi the mai Ny Agy barh kar usy Galy lga liya

Bas karo
Ab rona Band karo
Dekho Ab Tum MehFooz ho
Tumy koi kuch nahi kahy ga
Saira Ab Chup Ho Gai the bs Halki Halki Siskiyan ly rahi the Tabi wahan Hmary sath aay Log be ponch Gy or Doosri trip mai jo Students aay huwy thy wo be

Samny ka nazaara dekh kar Sab Smj Chuky thy ky kya huwa hy Es leye Sabi Saira Ho Hosla dy rahy thy

Doosri Trip Ky sath jo professors Aay huwy thy Wo boly

Professor : In Larkoon ko First Aid Jaldi Deni Chahyey Inki halat Kafi hrab lag rahi hy

Mana ky inu ny jo be kiya galat kiya jiski inko Sza be mil chuki hy lekin Wapas chal kar Inko Or be sza mily gi

Ye Sun kar kuch Students ny un 3 larkoon ko uthaya or uny ly kar wapas hotal Chaly gy ta ky First Aid Dy sakyn ku ky pas koi Hospital nahi tha

Sabi Log Mujy or Arslan Ko Shabashi dy rahy thy ky hum Ny acha Kam kiya Aik Larki Ki izat Bcha ky

Arslan Be Hush tha Us ki Wah wah jo ho rahi the
Mai be Hush Tha Sabi hush thy
Ky koi Nuksan nhi huwa

Es WakYe Ky Bad Sabi Girls Mai thorha Dar paida ho gya jiski Wja sy Ab wo Akeli Nahi Ghoom rahi the balky sabbi aik aik Tola Bna kar Goom rahi the

Ye Dekh kar main ny Socha ku na Mahol ko thorha HushGwar kiya jay

Ye Soch kar Mai Aik Jga Khrha Ho gya or Sab ko Apny paas Bula liya

Sabi log Attention

Yahan Pas Aik Naddi hy Or Us main Boht Zor sy pani beh Raha hy kon kon Machli Pakrhy Ga

Jo be Sab ay Zada Machli pakrhy Ga wo Winner hoga
Ye Sun kar Sab Josh Sy Uchal Parhy ....


( TO BE CONTINUE )(❤❤❤)
Saira to aur bhi jyada pagal ho jaayegi ab Heor ke liye....bachaya jo hai usne uko...
nice update

Still waiting kab Hero ki attraction power out of control ho aur kab uske liye Saira aur Maira dono jungli billi ki tarah lade....
waise ye dono hi kahi heroine to nahi...aur kya heroine mein bhi powers hone wali hai

Keep writing
 

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Bhai Mai Pakistan Sy hun to meri Hindi itni Achi nahi hy Mai Koshash kar raha hun

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aate aate aa hi jaayegi....koshish kabhi puri tarah se naakamiyab nahi hoti aap karo koshish...
aur haa Saira aur Maira ke bich jhagda karao jaldi se :evillaugh:
 

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aate aate aa hi jaayegi....koshish kabhi puri tarah se naakamiyab nahi hoti aap karo koshish...
aur haa Saira aur Maira ke bich jhagda karao jaldi se :evillaugh:


AP TO IN DONU KY PICHY NAHA DHO KAR PARH GY HO BHAI
AB INKA KUCH KARNA HE PARHY GA

LETS SEE KYA HOTA HY
 
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Congratulations bro for starting new story.
Concept to ab tak badiya hi laga hai.
Alishan mai kuch powers bhi hai aur usne samajdari dikha kar usey sab se chupa ke rakha hai.
Dekhte hai is tour mai kya kya hungame abhi baki hai.
Keep going.
 
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