Fantasy BAZIGAR

[Black water]

Super fantastic update

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic

 

[Sᴀrkar Boss]

Shukrya Dosto
STORY MAI Agar koi be help karna Chahy to welCome

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Ye Meri Pehli Story hy Or Sach kahun to thorha Dar be raha hun k Kesa likhun ga . Frist Time Try krny wala Hun Bhai log To plz Agar koi Galti Ho jay to Maaf kar dena . Meri ap logoon sy Aik request hy k Agar Apko kaheen par kami lagy to Plz ap Mujy Guide kar dena . Love U Guys

congregation for new story

 

[Qaatil]

Bhai kafi accha likh rahe ho, bas spelling mistakes lag rahi he kuch jagah par, jo padhte waqt uncomfortable si lagti he. Overall story bahot acchi lag rahi he ​

 

[ashish_1982_in]

BaziGar

Update: 1

Chand ki 14 raat the
Chand poori trah sy roshan tha
Halki halki Thand ki wja sy Mahol brha HushNma Ho raha tha

Raat ka Akhri pehr Tha
Es HubSuRaT Mahol Main Aik Aalishan gar Ky Aik Kamry Sy boht tez Cheehoon ki awazyn Aa rahi the
Or Achanak wo Cheehyn Ruk gayn or Mahol main ik Nai Awaz aana Shru ho gai
Ye aik Bachy ky rony ki Avaz The
( ab tak ap smj gy hungy k pehli cheehyn Aik orat ki theen Jo Maan Banny wali the or Baad main jo rony ki awaz The wo us Bachy ki the jis Ny Apny Aany ka ilan kar diya tha )

Tabi Aik Nurse Us kamry Sy nikli or Bahr brhi becheni sy Chakar lgaty huwy aik aadmi Ky paas ja k Boli

Nurse : Mubarak Ho Chohdri Sahb Apky haan beta Paida huwa hy

Ye Sun kar Wo Aadmi hushi Sy Jhoom Utha Or usny Jaldi sy apni jaib main hath Dala or Jitny Gadi Pesy ki us ky hath main aai wo us ny bina Dekhy us nurse ko Dy de or kaha ky ye Lo or Hush Raho

Ye keh kar Wo Admi jaldi Sy Andar Kamry mai Chla gya Jahan Aik orat Bed par Leti hui the or us ky paas Aik boht He HubSuRaT Bcha So Raha tha

( intro Time )

DAD : Zeeshan Chohdri
Age 30 year

MOM : ALIYA Chohdri
Age 27 year

SON ( HERO ) : Ali Shan Chohdri


....

Jab Zeeshan Chohdri ki Nazar Apne Bete Par parhi To wo Aik Dum heran Reh Gy k itna HubSuRaT Bacha Unu ny Aj tak Nahi dekha tha . Wo Sote main Itna Pyara lag Raha tha Un ky Qadam Hud Ba Hud Apne bete ki trf Barhny lagy
Zeeshan Chohdri Ki Bv Uny Barhy Pyar ky Sath dekh Rahi thee or un kY Chehry Par Aik Pyari C Muskan The .
Zeeshan Chohdri Ny Brhy Araam or Ehtyat sy Apny bete ko Uthaya or usy Ahista Ahista Choomne Lagy
Wo ByHud Sy ho gy thy Itna Pyara Bacha pa kar
Or apni Husband ki ByHudi Dekh kar Aliya Ch be Muskura Rahi thee

Tabi Achanak Bachy Ki Neend toot ga or wo zor zor sy rony lga To Zeeshan Ch ka Dehan Toota . Or phr Unnu Ny bchy ko aik pyari c kiss Ki or Bachy ko Apni pyari Wife ko dy diya
Aliya Ch ny Apny Bchy ko apny Seeny sy lga liya or usy Choom kar phr usy Apna Dood Pilany lagi . Ye dekh Kar paas kharhy Zeeshan Ch Smile kar rahy thy wo boht Hush Thy aj ku k Shadi ky 7 Saal Baad un ky Gar Aik Nanna Mehman aya Tha Pehli baar

Unki Hushi Un ky Chehry Sy Dikh Rahi the ......

Zeeshan Ch Jis Gaun main Rehty Hyn Uska Naam AMANPUR hy
Wo Es Gaun ky Sarpanch be Thy or Es Gaun ky Sath Lagty 24 or Gaun Ky Be .
Kul Mila Kar Zeeshan Chohdri 25 Gaun ky Sarpanch Thy

Zeeshan Chohdri ka Nature Boht he Kind Tha or wo Har kisi sy Bina Frq Kiyey Aik jesa Bartao Karty thy
Jis ki wja sy Sabi Log Un sy Pyar krty Thy or Unki Izat karty thy

Kind hony Ky Sath sath Wo Boht he MilanNisaar Thy . Or har kisi ki madad karty thy
Logu ki Madad kar k Uny Hushi milti the

Zeeshan Ch ki Trah Unki Wife
Aliya Ch be Bilkul uni ky Jesi the

Aliya Ch Aik Greeb Gar Sy thee

Zeeshan Ch or Aliya Ch ki Love marriage Hui the Jis wja Sy Un ky Beech Boht He Zbrdst Understanding The

Donu Husband Wife Logu ki sachy Mann ky sath Madad karty thy

Or Log be Uny Sachy Man Sy Dua dety thy jiski wja sy Zeeshan Chohdri or Unki Wife Ki Saary ilaky Main Boht izat the . Har koi Unky Sath rehta Jiski wja sy Political Log be Zeeshan Chohdri ky Saamny Jhukty thy ku k Agar Zeeshan Chohdri ki Support Agar kisi ko mil gai To Uska Jeetna Pkka Ho jata tha Us ilaky sy .......
( Zeeshan Chohdri ki family ka intro )

Zeeshan Chohdri ky ...
Dada g : Malik Chohdri
DADI ( RIP ) Rozma Chohdri

Zeeshan Chohdri ky ...

Dad ( Rip ) : Habib Chohdri
Mom ( Rip ) : Nabila Chohdri


.....



Zeeshan Ch ki Family mai Ab Sirf Un ky Dada G he Reh gay hyn Baki unki Family Main un ky Mom Dad or Dadi Ab Es dunia main nahi hyn

Eski Wja Aik ExeDent tha

( ye Aik Normal ExeDent tha . Es mai Koi Saazsh nahi hy ksii ki )

Zeeshan Chohdri ko Unky Dada G ny Pala Hy Ku k Jab Zeeshan Chohdri 5 Saal ky thy to Aik Car Axedent Main Unky Mom Dad nd Dadi RIP ho Chuky thy.

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update 2

Zeeshan Ch Ko Unky Dada G ny Boht he pyar sy pala Tha or boht he achi parvarash ki the

Jiski wja sy Zeeshan Chohdri ka Mizaj Boht he Acha tha

Wo har aik sy izat ky sath milty thy

Zeeshan Chohdri sy pehly Unky Dada G he Sarpanch thy baad main jab Un ki Seht hrab Rehny Lagi to Unu ny Zeeshan Chohdri ko Apni Jga Sarpanch bna Dia logu ko be itraz nahi tha ku k Zeeshan Chohdri bhi Apny Dada g ki tra Boht achy Or saaf dil k insan thy to istra bina kisi diqat ky zeeshan Chohdri 25 Gaun ky Sarpanch ban gy



Ab Story Ko Waheen Sy start krty hyn Jahan Sy hero Paida Huwa ....

Waqt Ahista Ahista Guzrta Ja raha Tha or Aisy he 4 Saal Guzar Gy

AliShan Ch ab 4 Saal ka Ho Chuka Tha

AliShan Ch Aam Bachu Sy Qad Mai Brha tha
usky HubSuRaT Chehry par neeli neeli Aankhyn Usy or Be Unique bnati theen jo be Uski Ankhu mai dekhta Wo uski Aankhu ky Sehr main Kho jata

Dada G AliShan ko Aksar Sahir Be kehty thy Ku k Us ko dekh kar Har koi kho sa jata tha


Jesy wo Apni umar ky bachu Sy qad main Brha tha wesy he Wo Normal Bachu Sy kafi zada Smjdar be tha

Aksar wo aisi Batyn karta tha ky Usky Mom Dad be Heraan ho jaty thy k itny choty Bachy k zehn main Aisi batyn aati kesy hyn

Ab AliShan Ch School jany lag gya tha
Us School Main Jo ky Zeeshan Ch Ky Dada g Yani Malik Ch ny Bnwaya tha

Malik Ch yani Dada G ny In 25 Gaun main Har 2 Gaun mai sy aik Gaun main Aik aik School Bnwaya huwa tha or in 25 Gaun main 2 barhy High School be thy Jin main sy aik Larku ka or dusra larkyu ka tha

AMANPUR gaun Sabi Gaun ky Centre main Tha Es leye Yaha par he donu High School thy donu School Aamny Saamny thy
High school main 1 se 12 Class tak Prhaya jata hy

Baki ky school main 8 tak prhaya jata hy phr bachu ko ini High school main ana hota hy or Aagy ki prhai Ky leye Paas ky Shehr ( Lahore ) mai Jana prhta hy .

Poory 25 gaun Ki Sarhkyn Paki theen jiski wja Sy Aamd-o-Rafat ka Nzam Acha tha

Or Bachu ko School aany jany mai koi Dikat nahi hoti the

Gaun Main Choti Moti Dukan Be theen
Log Aksar Qreebi Shehr shopping wgaira ky leye jaty rehty thy
Transport ka koi maslla nahi tha

Waqt Ahista Ahista Guzrta Ja raha Tha
AliShan class Main Hmesha Frist position leta tha
Jiski wja Sy Teachers be Usko kafi Zada psnd krty thy

AliShan Main aik Ajeeb bat the ky Wo apni Class Ky ilawa Be dusri Class mai aksar paya jata tha

Aik Din Principle Sahb Chuti ky Waqt
Aam routine Ky mutabik Classes ka Round lga rahy thy to aik Class Ky Pass sy Guzrty huwy Unu ny dekha k Aik bcha 8th Class ka Math ka swal hal kar raha tha .
Jab Unu ny gor kiya to paya k
Wo Chota bcha Bilkul Sahi Treky sy Swal ko hal kar raha hy ye dekh kar wo heraan reh gy k Itna Chota bcha ye swal kesy kar raha hy to unu ny us bchy ko awaz di
Awaz Sun kr Wo bcha Palta
Bachy ko Dekh kar Principle Sahb shock reh gy ku k Wo or koi nhi Alishan Ch tha.

Principle Sahb ny hud ko Sambala or AliShan ko pas bulaya or Us sy Bat krny lagy
ALISHAN sy bat kar k wo kafi Impress nazar aa rahy thy


Kuch Der baad Chuti ki ghnti Baji to Un ko hosh aya

Unu Ny Alishan ko Gar bej diya

Idr Principle Sahb Kafi Hairan thy . Alishan ki intelligence dekj kar .Principle Sahb ny Aj tak Aisa Bcha nahi dekha tha Jo is qadar intelligent Ho k Apni class sy Dugni Barhi class ky Hard questions ko itni Asaani sy HAL kr skta hy

Principle Sahb ko lga k es baary main Zeeshan Chohdri Sahb ko Btana chahyey
Es leye kuch der baad Wo be Zeeshan Chohdri ky Gar ki trf Nikal parhy. .... .

Very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

hi DoSto

Update 3

Zeeshan Chohdri ka Gar Kafi HubSuRaT tha or Kafi brha be .

Zeeshan Chohdri 25 Gaun ka Sarpanch hony ky sath sath

Kafi Raees Bnda tha Pakistan ky Kai City mai iska Karobar chal raha tha Jis Sy Kafi Faida be hota tha

Zeeshan Chohdri apny Businesses or Charities ki Wja Sy kafi MashHoor be tha

Boht C NGO'S us ky Pesy Sy chal rahi the
Zeeshan Chohdri Ky Under Jitny be Gaun Aaty thy wo Un mai Achy Achy Kam krata rehta tha . Jis ki wja Sy Zeeshan Chohdri ka ilaka Kafi Developed tha


Zeeshan Chohdri ka Gar Kafi Shandar Double Story tha
Gar ki Nechy ki Manzal Mai dada G hoty Hyn or un ky Sath AliShan

Donu mai Had Sy ZADA Pyar hy to Wo Nechy he rehty hyn
Zeeshan Chohdri or Aliya Ch 2nd floor pr rehty hyn
Gar main Kafi Saary Room Free he hyn
Gar ky Bahr kafi brha Sehn hy
4 Nokar Hyn 2 Male hyn 2 Female hyn
Female ( Nazia & Shazia )
Ye donu twinSister hyn
Age 35



Male ( Rashid & Arshad )
Rashid aik traind bnda hy Eski
Age 35 hy

Arshad ye be RASHID ki trah he hy

Eski Age 37 hy
Ye Donu bhai hyn or Nazia or Shazia ky Husbands be

Ye Donu Jorhy Be Yaheen rehty Hyn

Rashid or Arshad
Ye Zeeshan Chohdri ky personal Guards hyn

Enka Be is Dunia Main koi nahi hy
Es leye ye Yaheen par rehty hyn

Olaad na hony ki wja Sy ye Alishan ko Be apny Bachy ki trah Smjty hyn
usy pyar krty hy

Jab be Zeeshan Chohdri Kaheen Bahr jaty hyn to Donu Bhayu main sy aik Sath Jata hy aik Gar rehta hy

....

Zeeshan Ch Sofe par bethy huwy thy or un ky Samny Principle Sir

Zeeshan Chohdri : Kehyey Principle Sahb kesy Aana huwa

Principle sir : Ch Sahb
Mai Yahan Ap ky bete ki wja Sy Aya hun

Zeeshan Ch : Han Han Principle Sahb Aagy kehyey . Kya Huwa hy ?

Principle : Ch SAHB Mujy Lagta hy Alishan koi Ordinary bacha nahi hy
Or Phir principle Sir aj School main jo be huwa Wo bta dety hyn
Jisy Sun kar Zeeshan Chohdri be thorhy Surprise lag rahy thy lekin utny nahi jitna principle Sir thy bcz Zeeshan Chohdri apny Bete ko Kafi achi trah janty thy un pta tha ky unka betha Extra Ordinary hy

Principle : Ch Sahb mery Hyal Sy Apko Alishan Ka IQ Test krana chahyey .

Jesy Apko thek lagy Principle Sahb hum Kal he Alishan Ka iQ Test krayn gy Zeeshan Chohdri ny kaha

Phir kuch der bad principle Sahb Chaly gy ...

Agly Din Zeeshan Chohdri apny Bete Alishan Ch ko Sath ly kar Shehr Chaly gy . Or uska IQ Test kraya
IQ Test krny Waly be Es waqt Shock main thy ku ky un ky samny jo report the Us ky Mutabik Is bachy ka IQ Level 150+ Hy or aisa IQ Unu ny Aj tak nahi dekha tha

IQ Test ky Bad Unu ny Kuch or test be keye jiska Result be Surprise kar deny wala tha ky Alishan Ka IQ Na Sirf 150+ hy balky Uski Memory be Photographic the Yani jis Cheez ko wo aik bar dekh ly usy kabi nahi bhoolta

Ye sab jan kar to Zeeshan Chohdri be Shock main aa gay thy ky un ky Gar Ye kesa Krishma Paida ho gya

Shayd logu ki Duaun Ka Asar tha ky unka beta Special telent ky sath paida huwa tha or Agy kya bny kuch pta nahi....
(jump to Age 15)

ALISHAN CH
Bachpan Sy he Km Bolny Wala bcha Tha
Usy Ehsas Ho gya tha ky wo Dusru sy alag hy
Usy kuch be nahi bhoolta Wo hmesha Jo be dekhta Usy Yaad reh jata
Usy Apny Andar bePanah Taqat ka Ehsas hota lekin Aisa kabi kabi hota tha lekin pichly kuch dinu sy Usy lag raha tha Ky Uska Jism normal Bchu sy zada SahtMand or taqtwr hota ja raha hy
15 saa ki umar main he Alishan Ch ka QAD 5ft 10 inc tak ponch chuka tha

Gaun Ki Pichli Side Aik ghnna Jangal hy
Alishan Abi esi Jangal mai Tha
12 Sal ki umar sy he Wo is Jangal main aany lga tha or Yaha par Wo Alag Alag tra ki practice krta
Internet ki Wja Sy wo boht Kuch Seekh Gya tha Ku k Uski memory photographic hy es leye Wo jo be dekhta Wo yad kar leta

Aj Us ny Internet sy Fighting ky kuch videos dekhy thy or Alishan ny un fighting ko observe kiya or ab Usi ki practice kar raha tha ky Achanak Us ny Aik Muka Aik Pathar par mara to wo Pathar ChaknaChoor ho gya
Alishan Herat sy kabi phatr ko dekh raha tha or kabi apny hath ko
( kab tak main he bolta rahun ga
Ab hero ko bolny deta hun )

AAGY HERO HE BOLE GA

COMING SOON. ..... . ❤❤❤

very nice update bhai maza aa gya

 

[Sᴀrkar Boss]

bhai Log Update Tyar hy or Jald he Upload ho ga

Koi Galti ho to Maaf krna ... ❤❤❤

 

[Sᴀrkar Boss]

Update 4

Es Bary Main Agar kissi ko pta Chal gya to Log dar jayn gy or Mujy Ajeeb Smj kar Shayd Nafrt be krny lagyn . Mujy Es baary main kisi ko nahi btana chahyey
Kyu ky Log Jis Cheez ko Qabu Nahi kar skty Aksar Us sy Darty hyn

Ye Sochty huy main Gar aa gya Or Phir fresh ho ky Breakfast ky leye Dining table par aa gya Jaha Mom Dad pehly Sy mojood thy Dada g ko Un ky Room main he sab Milta tha.


Good Morning Dad
Good Morning Mom

Dining table ky samny bethty huy main ny kaha


Good Morning beta

Donu ny pyari se smile ky sath kaha

Or Phir hum Sab nashta karny lagy

Nashta krny ky baad mai Apny kamry main chla gya School ky leye Tyar jo hona tha

SCHOOL ku ky Gar ky paas he hy Es leye Main Paidal he jata hun . Doosry Gaun Sy jo Students aaty hyn Un ky leye Bus ka Intzam Hy

Rasty Main Mujy mera Dost Mil gya
Mera Bas aik he Best Friend hy
Arslan

SLAM DUA to sab sy hy par Choonky Mai Zada Kisi sy baat nhi krta to Mery Zada Dost nahi hyn . Lekin Sabi Izat krty hyn
Ku k agar kisi ko koi be Problem ho to Mai usy Hal krny main Unki Madad krta hun

Arslan : Han Bhai Aa gya Tu
Kya Haal hy

Alishan : main thek hun tu Suna tera kya hal hy

Arslan : Mai to AikDum Mast hun

Alishan : Aj brha Hush lag raha hy kya bat hy
Arslan : Wo jo 9th Class wali Aisha hy na us ky sath Apni setting ho gai Hy

Wah Bc Wah
Wesy tu ny ye kiya kesy
Unka to School be alag hy
Main bola .

Ary Hum sab ko Chuti to aik he Time par hoti hy na To mai ny note kiya tha Ky wo Aksar mujy Dekhti rehti hy
Phir mai ny be himat kar k kal Usko apna Numbr dy diya

Hmmm Acha Larki to Achi hy
Tu Usky sath Dil Lagi kry ga Ya Dil ki lagi
Main ny Hasty huy kaha

Aby Aik larki mili hy Jisko dekho Har kisi ki nzr to tuj par he hoti hy
Arslan ny kaha

Hahahha lekin mai to kisi ko nahi dekhta na mery bhai
Main ny kaha

Yehi to Mai aksar Sochta hun Tu dekhta be nahi kisi ko Or ye Sab tuj par Lattu hoi ja rahi hyn

Kabi kabi to mujy lagta hy kaheen ye sab mil kar tera Rape he na kar dyn
Hahahah

Hahhaha
Aisa kuch nahi hy Bas tujy aisa lagta hy Main bola

Tujy Pata hy Teri wja sy 11th Class Ki Maira Or 9th Class ki Saira mai jaghrha huwa hy
Arslan bola

Mai herat sy
Aby main ny kya kiya hy jo meri vja sy Fight ho gai

Arslan. Yehi to tu kuch krta he to nahi hy esi leye Har kisi ny tujy apna Smja Huwa hy . Koi Be agar keh dy ky tu uska hy to lrhai ho jati hy
Alishan mera hy Alishan mera hy
Hahahha


Hahahha

Alishan : Acha Chal Chorh Test ki tyari ki tu ny ya nahi

Arslan : Han yar Raat kafi der tak Aisha sy bat krta raha fr Usky baad tyari be ki . Test Pass ho jay ga
Tujy to koi fikar nhi hogi na Tu to bgair parhy be Top Par he hota hy
Hahah

Alishan : Ye to Allah ka muj par haas Karam hy k Mai jo be aik bar dekhta hun usy yad kr leta hun or usy kabi nahi bhoolta
Mai ny Kaha

Tera To English Mai hath hmesha he kmzor raha hy lekin Agar tu koshash kary ga to Zrur Behtr ho jay ga . InShAllah Aj tera test Be acha jay ga .

Batyn karty huy ham Donu School Mai Dahal Ho gay
Hmara School
Aam High Schools sy kafi brha hy ku ky yaha 25 Gaun sy students aaty hyn wesy to Zada tr students 8 tak jo ky un ky Gaun mai he prhai jati hy parh k chorh dety hyn
Kaam ki garz sy kuch Shehr Chly jaty hyn esi tra Larkyu Ko be aksar Log 8 tak prha ky uny gar Bitha lety hyn ta k wo Gar ka kam seekh lyn or fr un ki shadi kar di jay
Wesy to Ye Buri baat hy kyu ky
Taleem hasal krna har insan ka Haq hy
Lekin Kuch logu ki soch Ko badla nahi ja skta
mai keh raha tha ky Hmara School kafi brha hy
Or Nizam be acha h
Class Room be kafi barhy barhy hyn
Ku k students kafi zada hoty hyn
Es ky ilawa School Ky sath he Aik park be bna huwa hy
School ka Ground be kafi Shandaar hy jaha Aksar Cricket, Football, Wolybal , or Badminton khela jata hy

Har Sal Yahan par in Games ky Tournaments be hoty hyn or Sabi Schools sy STUDENTS Apni teams ky sath yahan aaty hyn or Participate krty hy

Arslan Cricket mai Boht Umda Khilarhi hy or Main . Mai All rounder hun
Saary khel mai No .1
Lekin mujy psnd Sirf badminton hy

( Aaj ky leye itna he Baki kal .... )
( ❤❤❤ )