Naina
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Romance BEAUTY AND THE BEAST 2 (COMPLETED)
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Ailla ....ha commando comamando hi dimag me chal rha tha to wahi likh diya ab yaad aa gya ..thank youBodyguard naam hai story ka
Sorry bro .. bodyguard ab ye bhi bata do ki story h kaha mujhe dikh kyo nhi rhi
Naina
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Ailla ....ha commando comamando hi dimag me chal rha tha to wahi likh diya ab yaad aa gya ..thank you
woh hero commando hai us story mein ... 
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"ye sab kya hai ashwin" ranvijay ne ashwin ki aur dekhkar kaha
"sir yahi aaj ka trend hai, mai kya karta vijay sir ne bhej diya zabardasti" ashwin bola
"mai ye sab nahi pehen kar Jaane wala" ranvijay bola
T shirt aur jeans tha bags me aur ranvijay ko in sab se nafrat thi
"pehen hi lijiye na sir, kya pata payal madam ko acha lage" ashwin bola
"to kya mai payal ko impress karne ke liye pehen kar jaun?" ranvijay chillaya
Sab chup ho gaye lekin ashwin ko jhatka laga tab jab ranvijay ne wo packet le liya ashwin ke haathon se
Jis din se join hua aaj tak t shirt me nahi dekha tha is insan ko
Tuxedo, coat, tie, shirt, waist coat aur trouser me hi din raat hoti thi ranvijay ki
"vijay bhaiyya aur aap sab itna bol rahe hai isliye ye pehen raha hoon" bol ranvijay t shirt aur jeans pehen kar aaya to
Hakke bakke reh gaye sab
Koi naya insan aaya hai aisa lag raha tha. Ek mast insan jo mauj masti karne wala ho
Lekin aaj bohut khushi ho rahi thi use
Aaj Pehli baar khush lag raha tha ranvijay
Wo baat alag hai ki zahir nahi karega apne muh se
Ranvijay jab Gaadi lekar pohuncha to payal ne aaj apna huliya hi badal diya tha
Western look me thi aaj
Jeans aur t shirt me thi aur dono ek doosre ko dekh hakke bakke reh gaye
"ye kya??" payal ne ranvijay ko dekh kar bola
Ranvijay uncomfortable feel karne laga aur idhar udhar dekhne laga ki fitting thik hai bhi ya nahi kapdon ki
"are baba ache lag rahe ho, pehente kyun nahi aise kapde?? Btw koun hai ye bachha" payal ne poocha
Ranvijay ke saath ek bacche ko dekhkar boli payal
Rishi payal ko dekh peeche ho gaya
Ek to ye khusat uncle upar se ye aunty bhi...
"wow great, kya Naam hai aapka??" payal ne poocha
"rishi" dheeme se jawab diya rishi ne
"kitna cute Naam hai, to chalo we will have lots of fun today, give me a high five" payal ke itna bolte hi rishi ki jhikhak chali gayi aur apne haathon se usne payal ke haath ko hi five dekar khush hua
"ab chalein nautanki bohut ho gayi" ranvijay impatient ho raha tha.
Kahan socha tha ki payal ke saath Waqt bitayega aur kahan ye kabab me haddi a gaya
"arey?? Aise kyun react kar rahe ho, time hi kitna hua hai?? Sirf 8 baje hai. Park khulta hi 9:30 hai" payal boli
"fir itni jaldi kyun bulaya mujhe??" ranvijay ne poocha
"kyunki hum bus me Jaane wale hai isliye" payal boli
B bus?? Ranvijay ko achanak chota sa heart attack aaya, bus......
"kyun?? Acha thik hai tum waise bhi bus me nahi ja paoge, tum rishi ko apne Saath car me le jao mai bus me jaungi" payal boli
"aunty mai bhi aapke Saath jaunga" rishi bola
Koun aana chahega is adiyal insan ke saath rishi ne socha
"ahem.... Mai... Bhi bus me jaunga" ranvijay bola
"Pagal me bano, bus me jana kya hota hai wo bhi India me tumhe pata nahi hai ranvijay, bheed hoti hai. Smell hota hai. Problem hogi" payal boli
"nahi mai bus me hi jaunga" ranvijay ne bina confidence aur bina attitude ke bola
Aur payal samajh gayi ki ab use hi jhelna hoga situation ko
Bus a gayi aur jo bheed dekhi ranvijay ne uske maathe se pasina nikal gaya
Baap re ye to poora congested hai
"chalo aao" payal boli
"n next bus me chale" ranvijay bola
"next bus ke aate aate ek ghanta aur. Aur wo bhi aise hi full aayegi. Chalo" bol payal ne ranvijay ko apne Saath bus ke Ander le gayi
Rishi in sab ka aadi tha, ek middle class se aaya hua bachha achi tarah se jaanta tha bus me Chadna utarna
Bus me dhakka mukki dete hue ranvijay aage badha to bus chal padi
Lekin fir break lagne ki wajah se ranvijay ka balance bigad gaya aur wo ek mahila ke upar gir gaya
"koun hai besharam" bol mahila ne peeche mudkar dekha to Ranvijay ko dekh khush ho gayi
"koi baat nahi tum yahan haath rakh kar khade ho jao, bus me aaj bohut bheed hai" bol us mahila ne ranvijay ka haath apne Saree ko hatakar apne kamar se touch karwakae bus ke handle ko pakadwa hi rahi thi ki Ranvijay ka haath payal ne pakad liya aur wahan se use lekar apne Saamne le aayi
"ab yahin khade raho" payal ukhre hue awaz me boli
Sab ke sab ladke tharki hi hote hai
Ab payal ko koun samjhaye ki Ranvijay ko ulti a rahi thi, pasine ki gandh aur pollution oopar se jam packed bus
Uff
"bas hum phunchne hi wale hai ranvijay" payal boli aur ranvijay ko dekhne lagi
Bohut bura haal tha ranvijay ka
Tabhi bus ruk gayi aur ranvijay ne utarkar kuch rahat mehsoos ki
"aunty hum a gaye" rishi bola aur park ki aur chala payal ka haath pakad kar aage badh gaya aur ranvijay seedha ticket counter ki aur gaya
"are Mr ranvijay??aap ka hi wait kar rahe the sir, sir ka call aaya tha. Bola tha ki aapki achi dekh rekh kare" amusement park ka manager bola
"nahi, mai just as a regular visit karna chahta hoon. Aur ye rahi tickets" ranvijay ne apna tickets manager ko de diya
"are tickets ki koi zaroorat nahi thi sir, jaisa Maine kaha. Hame pehle hi bata diya gaya tha aap a rahe hai, akele aaye hain??" manager ne poocha
"nahi...... Family ke saath aaya hoon" ranvijay ne payal aur rishi ki aur dekhkar bola
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TRING TRING
Meera ka phone baj raha tha lekin wo apne computer me busy thi
TRING TRING
Fir se phone baja aur is baar meera ne phone uthaya
"namaste madam ji, kaam hote hi logo ki yaad kam aane lagti hai" heeralal tha aur awaz sunte hi pehchaan gayi tho
"kaisi hai madam ji" heeralal bola
"bas aap sunaiye" meera boli
"ranvijay peeche pada hua hai hamare, lagbhag barbaad kar chuka hai hame bas Waqt ki baat hai kab hame kharid lega pata bhi nahi chalega" heeralal bola
"to?? Ye sab mujhe kyun bata rahe hai heeralal hi??" meera ne poocha
"zaroori samjha batana. Ek time tha jab hum aapke liye important ho gaye the meera ji. Aaj aapko zaroorat nahi hai isliye hame hata rahi hai?? Agar hum barbaad hue to sab kuch ugal denge ranvijay ko" bol heeralal je phone Kaat diya
Meera sunn ho gayi sunkar
Pagal khane se wapas aane ke baad usne socha tha ki Ranvijay waisi shakshiyat nahi rakhega jaisa pehle rakhta tha lekin ye to ulta ho gaya
Sunne me aaya tha ki Victor frame ko Vijay chala raha hai lekin ab kumar ki baat sach nikli
Ranvijay hi chala raha hai Victor frame ko
Heeralal ke baad shayad un sabhi ko barbaad karega jo uske Saath the
Meera ko kuch karna hoga
Kuch to zaroor karna hoga
"sir yahi aaj ka trend hai, mai kya karta vijay sir ne bhej diya zabardasti" ashwin bola
"mai ye sab nahi pehen kar Jaane wala" ranvijay bola
T shirt aur jeans tha bags me aur ranvijay ko in sab se nafrat thi
"pehen hi lijiye na sir, kya pata payal madam ko acha lage" ashwin bola
"to kya mai payal ko impress karne ke liye pehen kar jaun?" ranvijay chillaya
Sab chup ho gaye lekin ashwin ko jhatka laga tab jab ranvijay ne wo packet le liya ashwin ke haathon se
Jis din se join hua aaj tak t shirt me nahi dekha tha is insan ko
Tuxedo, coat, tie, shirt, waist coat aur trouser me hi din raat hoti thi ranvijay ki
"vijay bhaiyya aur aap sab itna bol rahe hai isliye ye pehen raha hoon" bol ranvijay t shirt aur jeans pehen kar aaya to
Hakke bakke reh gaye sab
Koi naya insan aaya hai aisa lag raha tha. Ek mast insan jo mauj masti karne wala ho
Lekin aaj bohut khushi ho rahi thi use
Aaj Pehli baar khush lag raha tha ranvijay
Wo baat alag hai ki zahir nahi karega apne muh se
Ranvijay jab Gaadi lekar pohuncha to payal ne aaj apna huliya hi badal diya tha
Western look me thi aaj
Jeans aur t shirt me thi aur dono ek doosre ko dekh hakke bakke reh gaye
"ye kya??" payal ne ranvijay ko dekh kar bola
Ranvijay uncomfortable feel karne laga aur idhar udhar dekhne laga ki fitting thik hai bhi ya nahi kapdon ki
"are baba ache lag rahe ho, pehente kyun nahi aise kapde?? Btw koun hai ye bachha" payal ne poocha
Ranvijay ke saath ek bacche ko dekhkar boli payal
Rishi payal ko dekh peeche ho gaya
Ek to ye khusat uncle upar se ye aunty bhi...
"wow great, kya Naam hai aapka??" payal ne poocha
"rishi" dheeme se jawab diya rishi ne
"kitna cute Naam hai, to chalo we will have lots of fun today, give me a high five" payal ke itna bolte hi rishi ki jhikhak chali gayi aur apne haathon se usne payal ke haath ko hi five dekar khush hua
"ab chalein nautanki bohut ho gayi" ranvijay impatient ho raha tha.
Kahan socha tha ki payal ke saath Waqt bitayega aur kahan ye kabab me haddi a gaya
"arey?? Aise kyun react kar rahe ho, time hi kitna hua hai?? Sirf 8 baje hai. Park khulta hi 9:30 hai" payal boli
"fir itni jaldi kyun bulaya mujhe??" ranvijay ne poocha
"kyunki hum bus me Jaane wale hai isliye" payal boli
B bus?? Ranvijay ko achanak chota sa heart attack aaya, bus......
"kyun?? Acha thik hai tum waise bhi bus me nahi ja paoge, tum rishi ko apne Saath car me le jao mai bus me jaungi" payal boli
"aunty mai bhi aapke Saath jaunga" rishi bola
Koun aana chahega is adiyal insan ke saath rishi ne socha
"ahem.... Mai... Bhi bus me jaunga" ranvijay bola
"Pagal me bano, bus me jana kya hota hai wo bhi India me tumhe pata nahi hai ranvijay, bheed hoti hai. Smell hota hai. Problem hogi" payal boli
"nahi mai bus me hi jaunga" ranvijay ne bina confidence aur bina attitude ke bola
Aur payal samajh gayi ki ab use hi jhelna hoga situation ko
Bus a gayi aur jo bheed dekhi ranvijay ne uske maathe se pasina nikal gaya
Baap re ye to poora congested hai
"chalo aao" payal boli
"n next bus me chale" ranvijay bola
"next bus ke aate aate ek ghanta aur. Aur wo bhi aise hi full aayegi. Chalo" bol payal ne ranvijay ko apne Saath bus ke Ander le gayi
Rishi in sab ka aadi tha, ek middle class se aaya hua bachha achi tarah se jaanta tha bus me Chadna utarna
Bus me dhakka mukki dete hue ranvijay aage badha to bus chal padi
Lekin fir break lagne ki wajah se ranvijay ka balance bigad gaya aur wo ek mahila ke upar gir gaya
"koun hai besharam" bol mahila ne peeche mudkar dekha to Ranvijay ko dekh khush ho gayi
"koi baat nahi tum yahan haath rakh kar khade ho jao, bus me aaj bohut bheed hai" bol us mahila ne ranvijay ka haath apne Saree ko hatakar apne kamar se touch karwakae bus ke handle ko pakadwa hi rahi thi ki Ranvijay ka haath payal ne pakad liya aur wahan se use lekar apne Saamne le aayi
"ab yahin khade raho" payal ukhre hue awaz me boli
Sab ke sab ladke tharki hi hote hai
Ab payal ko koun samjhaye ki Ranvijay ko ulti a rahi thi, pasine ki gandh aur pollution oopar se jam packed bus
Uff
"bas hum phunchne hi wale hai ranvijay" payal boli aur ranvijay ko dekhne lagi
Bohut bura haal tha ranvijay ka
Tabhi bus ruk gayi aur ranvijay ne utarkar kuch rahat mehsoos ki
"aunty hum a gaye" rishi bola aur park ki aur chala payal ka haath pakad kar aage badh gaya aur ranvijay seedha ticket counter ki aur gaya
"are Mr ranvijay??aap ka hi wait kar rahe the sir, sir ka call aaya tha. Bola tha ki aapki achi dekh rekh kare" amusement park ka manager bola
"nahi, mai just as a regular visit karna chahta hoon. Aur ye rahi tickets" ranvijay ne apna tickets manager ko de diya
"are tickets ki koi zaroorat nahi thi sir, jaisa Maine kaha. Hame pehle hi bata diya gaya tha aap a rahe hai, akele aaye hain??" manager ne poocha
"nahi...... Family ke saath aaya hoon" ranvijay ne payal aur rishi ki aur dekhkar bola
----------------------------------------------------------------------
TRING TRING
Meera ka phone baj raha tha lekin wo apne computer me busy thi
TRING TRING
Fir se phone baja aur is baar meera ne phone uthaya
"namaste madam ji, kaam hote hi logo ki yaad kam aane lagti hai" heeralal tha aur awaz sunte hi pehchaan gayi tho
"kaisi hai madam ji" heeralal bola
"bas aap sunaiye" meera boli
"ranvijay peeche pada hua hai hamare, lagbhag barbaad kar chuka hai hame bas Waqt ki baat hai kab hame kharid lega pata bhi nahi chalega" heeralal bola
"to?? Ye sab mujhe kyun bata rahe hai heeralal hi??" meera ne poocha
"zaroori samjha batana. Ek time tha jab hum aapke liye important ho gaye the meera ji. Aaj aapko zaroorat nahi hai isliye hame hata rahi hai?? Agar hum barbaad hue to sab kuch ugal denge ranvijay ko" bol heeralal je phone Kaat diya
Meera sunn ho gayi sunkar
Pagal khane se wapas aane ke baad usne socha tha ki Ranvijay waisi shakshiyat nahi rakhega jaisa pehle rakhta tha lekin ye to ulta ho gaya
Sunne me aaya tha ki Victor frame ko Vijay chala raha hai lekin ab kumar ki baat sach nikli
Ranvijay hi chala raha hai Victor frame ko
Heeralal ke baad shayad un sabhi ko barbaad karega jo uske Saath the
Meera ko kuch karna hoga
Kuch to zaroor karna hoga
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Very Good Update.
Ranvijay enjoying common life style in his own way!!!!!
Behtareen update,
Ranvijay ka yun dheere dheere badalana Achchha lag raha hai.
Per ye Meera kaun hai? Yaad nahi aa raha hai.
Ranvijay ka yun dheere dheere badalana Achchha lag raha hai.
Per ye Meera kaun hai? Yaad nahi aa raha hai.