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Super fantastic story Swaraj sirSannata poore hospital me chayi hui thi Komal ka ro ro kar bura haal tha
Operation theatre me gaye hue yash ko kaafi samay ho gaya tha
Komal ki aankhen baar baar us light par thi jo jal rahi thi
Sharon,nisha, urvashi aur saare parivar aaye hue the
Mr and Mrs khurana bhi the wahan
Light band ho gayi thi
Komal daudkar doctor ke paas gayi aur unse ek sawal kar dala aankhon se
"Wo....mareez ka kaafi khoon beh chuka tha isliye.......matlab..."idhar udhar dekhte hue doctor bola
"Saaf saaf bataiye doctor"rohan ne poochha
Doctor ne apni gardan jhuka li
Aur Komal ke kandhe par haath rakhkar chale gaye
Sab kuch andhera ho gaya Komal ke liye
Durga maa ne ye sila diya meri bhakti ka???
Daudkar wo operation theater ke ander gayi
"Are ye ander kaise aayi??"ek nurse ne poochha to Komal uski parwah na karte hue yash ke paas gayi
"Excuse me miss aap ander nahi a sakti "kai logo ne komal ko pakad rakha
Lekin Komal ki taqat kahan se a gayi pata nahi bas yash ko dekh rahi thi
"Yash.......yaad hai??hamari pehli mulakat??
Jab tum ne purane factory me kadam rakha tha???
Yaad hai jab tumne mera maan barkarar rakha tha us party me jab mai zaleel ho rahi thi???
Yaad hai kaise tumne mujhe interview diya tha taaki meri naukri me help mil sake mujhe???
To fir kyun???
Kyun ja rahe ho chod kar mujhe???
Kya galti hai meri???
Yahi ki mai kabhi tumse apne dil ki baat keh ho nahi paayi???
To aaj keh deti hoon
I
Love
You
Yash"
Bol bilakh bilkah kar yash ke seene se lagkar roti gayi Komal
Aaj agar yash nahi rahega to wo bhi nahi rahegi
Sharon ne aakar Komal ke kandhe par haath rakha apne chalakte hue aansuo par kaabu paane ki koshish kar rahi thi wo.agar wo hi himmat haar jayegi to Komal kya karegi
Ghar ke baaki log bhi rone lage
Mrs khurana mr Khurana ke kandhe par sar rakhkar rone lagi
"Hhhhhhh......hhhhhhh"yash ke muh se awaz nikalne laga
"D d doctor??nurse d dekhiye yash yash..."khushi aur badi badi aankhon se Komal ne yash ki aur dikhaya
Sab jut gaye yash ke oopar kaam karne ke liye
"Apne 12 saal me pehli Baar aisa miracle dekha sister"doctor ne sister ki aur dekhkar kaha
Sister kuch boli nahi sirf ek baar Komal ki aur dekhkar muskurai
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"Ohho maa bas bhi karo,sab kuch to ho gaya ab aur kitna karogi??"Komal muh banate hue boli
"Tu chup kar tujhe kuch nahi pata,mere dil me bhi Armaan hai.apni beti ki shaadi aise dhoomdham se karungi ki sab dekhte reh jayenge"mrs khurana boli aur phone me sab hidayat dene lagi
Yash poori tarah to nahi lekin kaafi hadh tak thik ho chuka tha
Aur saraf parivar aur khurana family ne milkar yash aur Komal ki ek baar fir se shaadi ka plan banakar khushi ko double kar diya tha
Komal ke ghar sharon,nisha ,urvashi aur sujata ne apna dera bana liya tha to
Wahi yash ke ghar dhruv,Manav,rohan ne apna adda baya hua tha
Har raat Komal aur yash me baatein hoti rehti thi
Aur itne dino se chhupaye hue pyaar ka dono khoob maza lete the
Dekhte dekhte shaadi ka din bhi a gaya
"Pehle paise??"sharon ne yash se kaha
"Are??tu meri behen hai ya uski??"yash ne poochha
"Filhal Komal ki hoon"sharon boli
"Jitna dhruv ne diya tha itna mai dunga"yash haste hue bola
Sharon chaunk gayi,is kameene dhruv ne shaadi ke sirf 10,000 diye the.kanjoos kahi ka
Sharon ne muh bana liya
"Are??tu kyun itna muh banakar baithi hai,ye le paise"bol Komal ne yash ka purse liya aur kai dollars nikal liye usse aur sharon ko de diya
Yash ka muh khula reh gaya
Sab hasne lage
Party sahi chal rahi thi.reception bhi acha chal raha tha
Tabhi kaafi saare bodyguards lekar ek young sa aadmi wahan aaya aur seedha dhruv ke paas gaya
"Ranvijay?? congratulation youngest achiever award ke liye"dhruv ne us naujawan ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kaha
"Dhruv sir,maine aapko apna guru mana tha,aapse training lekar aage gaya aur aapne shaadi kar sab kuch khatam kar diya"ranvijay afsos ke saath bola
"Vijay kaisa hai??"dhruv ne poochha
"Ekdum strong"ranvijay bola
Dhruv ne notice kiya ki ranvijay ka ghamand aasman ko choo raha hai.
Dhruv kuch bolne ka raha tha.lekin ranvijay ne haath se Ishara kar rok diya dhruv ko
"Mai aap aur yash sir jaisi galti nahi karunga,mera target hai world ka best ceo banna aur company ko aasman ki unchaiyon ko choona,aap logo ko ye bakwas pyaar vyaar mubarak ho"bol ranvijay chala gaya waha se
Dhruv dekhta raha use,beta jis din tujhe pyaar hoga na tab dekhenge.soch dhruv sharon ke saath baaton me busy ho gaya
Ghar ke terrace par Komal khadi thi aur chand ko dekh rahi thi
Reception khatam hue kaafi waqt ho gaya tha
Aur kaafi thak gayi thi
"Akele akele idhar kya kar rahi ho Komal??"yash ne poochha
"Dekh rahi hoon chand ko"Komal ne jawab diya
"Kyun??"yash ne poochha
"Yahi chand nikla tha hamari shadi me,yaad hai"komal muskurate hue boli
"Hmm aaj bhi nikla hai chand,chalo fir wo kaam shuru karte hai jo us waqt nahi kar paaye"yash ne muskurate hue Komal ko dekhkar kaha to Komal Sharma gayi
Yash Komal ke nazdeek aaya aur Komal ke chehre ko apni aur le aaya aur
Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Kiss kar rahe Komal aur yash ko chand apni Gawahi de raha tha
Ek nayi kahani shuru ho chuki thi
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Very nice ending sir jiSannata poore hospital me chayi hui thi Komal ka ro ro kar bura haal tha
Operation theatre me gaye hue yash ko kaafi samay ho gaya tha
Komal ki aankhen baar baar us light par thi jo jal rahi thi
Sharon,nisha, urvashi aur saare parivar aaye hue the
Mr and Mrs khurana bhi the wahan
Light band ho gayi thi
Komal daudkar doctor ke paas gayi aur unse ek sawal kar dala aankhon se
"Wo....mareez ka kaafi khoon beh chuka tha isliye.......matlab..."idhar udhar dekhte hue doctor bola
"Saaf saaf bataiye doctor"rohan ne poochha
Doctor ne apni gardan jhuka li
Aur Komal ke kandhe par haath rakhkar chale gaye
Sab kuch andhera ho gaya Komal ke liye
Durga maa ne ye sila diya meri bhakti ka???
Daudkar wo operation theater ke ander gayi
"Are ye ander kaise aayi??"ek nurse ne poochha to Komal uski parwah na karte hue yash ke paas gayi
"Excuse me miss aap ander nahi a sakti "kai logo ne komal ko pakad rakha
Lekin Komal ki taqat kahan se a gayi pata nahi bas yash ko dekh rahi thi
"Yash.......yaad hai??hamari pehli mulakat??
Jab tum ne purane factory me kadam rakha tha???
Yaad hai jab tumne mera maan barkarar rakha tha us party me jab mai zaleel ho rahi thi???
Yaad hai kaise tumne mujhe interview diya tha taaki meri naukri me help mil sake mujhe???
To fir kyun???
Kyun ja rahe ho chod kar mujhe???
Kya galti hai meri???
Yahi ki mai kabhi tumse apne dil ki baat keh ho nahi paayi???
To aaj keh deti hoon
I
Love
You
Yash"
Bol bilakh bilkah kar yash ke seene se lagkar roti gayi Komal
Aaj agar yash nahi rahega to wo bhi nahi rahegi
Sharon ne aakar Komal ke kandhe par haath rakha apne chalakte hue aansuo par kaabu paane ki koshish kar rahi thi wo.agar wo hi himmat haar jayegi to Komal kya karegi
Ghar ke baaki log bhi rone lage
Mrs khurana mr Khurana ke kandhe par sar rakhkar rone lagi
"Hhhhhhh......hhhhhhh"yash ke muh se awaz nikalne laga
"D d doctor??nurse d dekhiye yash yash..."khushi aur badi badi aankhon se Komal ne yash ki aur dikhaya
Sab jut gaye yash ke oopar kaam karne ke liye
"Apne 12 saal me pehli Baar aisa miracle dekha sister"doctor ne sister ki aur dekhkar kaha
Sister kuch boli nahi sirf ek baar Komal ki aur dekhkar muskurai
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"Ohho maa bas bhi karo,sab kuch to ho gaya ab aur kitna karogi??"Komal muh banate hue boli
"Tu chup kar tujhe kuch nahi pata,mere dil me bhi Armaan hai.apni beti ki shaadi aise dhoomdham se karungi ki sab dekhte reh jayenge"mrs khurana boli aur phone me sab hidayat dene lagi
Yash poori tarah to nahi lekin kaafi hadh tak thik ho chuka tha
Aur saraf parivar aur khurana family ne milkar yash aur Komal ki ek baar fir se shaadi ka plan banakar khushi ko double kar diya tha
Komal ke ghar sharon,nisha ,urvashi aur sujata ne apna dera bana liya tha to
Wahi yash ke ghar dhruv,Manav,rohan ne apna adda baya hua tha
Har raat Komal aur yash me baatein hoti rehti thi
Aur itne dino se chhupaye hue pyaar ka dono khoob maza lete the
Dekhte dekhte shaadi ka din bhi a gaya
"Pehle paise??"sharon ne yash se kaha
"Are??tu meri behen hai ya uski??"yash ne poochha
"Filhal Komal ki hoon"sharon boli
"Jitna dhruv ne diya tha itna mai dunga"yash haste hue bola
Sharon chaunk gayi,is kameene dhruv ne shaadi ke sirf 10,000 diye the.kanjoos kahi ka
Sharon ne muh bana liya
"Are??tu kyun itna muh banakar baithi hai,ye le paise"bol Komal ne yash ka purse liya aur kai dollars nikal liye usse aur sharon ko de diya
Yash ka muh khula reh gaya
Sab hasne lage
Party sahi chal rahi thi.reception bhi acha chal raha tha
Tabhi kaafi saare bodyguards lekar ek young sa aadmi wahan aaya aur seedha dhruv ke paas gaya
"Ranvijay?? congratulation youngest achiever award ke liye"dhruv ne us naujawan ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kaha
"Dhruv sir,maine aapko apna guru mana tha,aapse training lekar aage gaya aur aapne shaadi kar sab kuch khatam kar diya"ranvijay afsos ke saath bola
"Vijay kaisa hai??"dhruv ne poochha
"Ekdum strong"ranvijay bola
Dhruv ne notice kiya ki ranvijay ka ghamand aasman ko choo raha hai.
Dhruv kuch bolne ka raha tha.lekin ranvijay ne haath se Ishara kar rok diya dhruv ko
"Mai aap aur yash sir jaisi galti nahi karunga,mera target hai world ka best ceo banna aur company ko aasman ki unchaiyon ko choona,aap logo ko ye bakwas pyaar vyaar mubarak ho"bol ranvijay chala gaya waha se
Dhruv dekhta raha use,beta jis din tujhe pyaar hoga na tab dekhenge.soch dhruv sharon ke saath baaton me busy ho gaya
Ghar ke terrace par Komal khadi thi aur chand ko dekh rahi thi
Reception khatam hue kaafi waqt ho gaya tha
Aur kaafi thak gayi thi
"Akele akele idhar kya kar rahi ho Komal??"yash ne poochha
"Dekh rahi hoon chand ko"Komal ne jawab diya
"Kyun??"yash ne poochha
"Yahi chand nikla tha hamari shadi me,yaad hai"komal muskurate hue boli
"Hmm aaj bhi nikla hai chand,chalo fir wo kaam shuru karte hai jo us waqt nahi kar paaye"yash ne muskurate hue Komal ko dekhkar kaha to Komal Sharma gayi
Yash Komal ke nazdeek aaya aur Komal ke chehre ko apni aur le aaya aur
Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Kiss kar rahe Komal aur yash ko chand apni Gawahi de raha tha
Ek nayi kahani shuru ho chuki thi
----------------------THE END------------------------------
Ek req hai sir ji agar ranvijay ke sath sath komal or yash ki story ko bhi dikhaya jaye toh acha rhega kyu ki yha inhone apne pyar ka izhaar kiya or story bhi khatam ho gyi toh inki love bonding or dekhne ko mili nhi jo ki meri tarah or bhi baki readers honge jo dekhna chahte honge ab baki aap ke story ke plot pe dependRanvijay ki entry zaroori thi Beauty and the beast 2 ke liye
Isliye intro de diya maine uska story ke end me
Thanks broNice. To kya next story Ranvijay aur Vijay brothers ke upar hogi
Story like karne ke liye bohut bohut thanksEk req hai sir ji agar ranvijay ke sath sath komal or yash ki story ko bhi dikhaya jaye toh acha rhega kyu ki yha inhone apne pyar ka izhaar kiya or story bhi khatam ho gyi toh inki love bonding or dekhne ko mili nhi jo ki meri tarah or bhi baki readers honge jo dekhna chahte honge ab baki aap ke story ke plot pe depend
krta h ki ye possible hai ya nhi
Bro next story bholu jab raja bana ko complete karna chahta hoonSwaraj Bhai next story kab shuru hogi