Thriller BEGUNAAH ( Completed )

[TheBlackBlood]

nice update ..

Bahut bahut shukriya KEKIUS MAXIMUS bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Nice n fantastic update

Bahut bahut shukriya Rocky2602 bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Ye to baato se hi paka ke maar degi Duushayant ki jindgi ki lutiya dubegi . Vidhi ko police me jane ki jagah roaster bannna chahiye samne wala uski baatein sunne ke baad chullu bhar pani me dub marega

Ye bhi joru ka gulam banne ko taiayr hai . Ghar pe bibi ki sunega bahar apne Caligs ko sunayega .

Bahut bahut shukriya Iron Man bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bahut bahut shukriya Naughtyrishabh bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Greattt shubham bro. Such a mind blowing update and your writing skill.

Inspector and vidhi ke beech ki conversation kafi dilchasp thi. Inspector ko samajh aa gaya hoga ki vidhi ke sath uski life kitni jhandful hogi. Dono ke bich najdikiya badh rahi hain. Lagta hai bahut jald asli wala chauka maarne ko milega inspector ko.

Inspector vidhi ki safety ke liye chintit hai and wo use apne sath hi rakhega. But here is a question ki kya nakab wala security ko dekh kar bhi andar jayega. I think wo aisa kaam nahi karega ki khud hi fas jaye. Anyways let's see what happens next.

Shubham bro inspector to lagta hai joru ka gulam banega. Madam ke liye morning tea serve karne laga hai and madam bhi us par haavi ho rahi hai. Baar baar bol rahi hai ki uska itna bhi nakhra nahi jhel pa rahe. Mujhe to lagta hai inspector gaya kaam se.

Now waiting for the next.

Bahut bahut shukriya VIKRANT bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,

Joru ka ghulam to har pati ho jata hai ek din,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Excellent update...

Bahut bahut shukriya ABHISHEK TRIPATHI bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

विधि की बातें दुश्यंत के सर के ऊपर से गुजर रही है....उस बालक को समझे नहीं आ रहा है कि कन्या पट गई है । वो उसके साथ गुटर गूं करने के लिए तैयार है । जहां उसे खुश होना चाहिए वहां वो अपने सर के बालों को खुजला रहा है ।

वैसे दुश्यंत कहां ले जाने वाला है विधि को... अपने सरकारी फ्लैट में ? इससे तो अच्छा होगा कि उसी के ही घर में दुश्यंत जी अविनाश को लेकर शिफ्ट हो जाय । वो बड़ा घर है तो किसी को ज्यादा परेशानी नहीं होगी ।
आज का अपडेट भी बहुत बढ़िया रहा । इसमें दुश्यंत और विधि के बीच लव स्टोरी की शुरुआत हुई ।

Bahut bahut shukriya SANJU ( V. R. ) bhaiya ji aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,

Langoor ke hath me angoor wali baat hai. Khair abhi bechara khul nahi raha..jis din khulega us din direct kholega,,,,

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Bahut bahut shukriya KEKIUS MAXIMUS bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,,

is update me kuch jyada samjha nahi isliye

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ye kya hai shubham bhai. Aapne story likhna kab start kiya aur kiya bhi to new story. Ek naya sansar ka dusra part kayakalp start karna tha ya fir raj rani wali story. Koi na yahi achhi baat hai ki likhna to shuru kiya________

By the way for the new story_______

Bahut bahut shukriya Mr. Perfect bhai,,,,,

Thoda test badalna tha bhai is liye nawa story likhna shuru kiya. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai. Khair abhi to isi story ka lutf uthaiye. Purani stories ko baad me dekhenge,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Waiting for next update

Waiting

Waiting bro. Kaha gayab ho gaye. Everything is all right na?

Intjaar

Agla update bas kuch hi der me dosto,,,,,