Bhau, aap toh jabardast likh rahe ho..
Waise hi thik hai..
didi ko main character rakho.. aur sabko uske peeche parne do, dost, bhai, relative bus me, shopping karte waqt, movie hall, vacation etc etc...
You hv exceptional writing skills.. bus long story likha.. masterpiece hoga.. baaki u r best.. update daily possible hai?