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With who should Aliyar have his first sexual encounter?


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Somahvii

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Introduction - Page 1
Update 1 - Page 4
Update 2 - Page 5
Update 3 - Page 6
Update 4 - Page 9
Update 5 - Page 12
Update 6 - Page 13
Update 7 - Page 16
Update 8 - Page 16
Update 9 - Page 17
Update 10 - Page 21
Update 11 - Page 25


Disclaimer: I will not include any interfaith content as I personally don’t believe in sexualising religion. I will not include cuckholding as that isn’t something I find appealing and even if there is any Adultery content it will not feature cuckholding. And obviously there shall be no mention of characters under the age of 18 in a sexual setting.
 
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Somahvii

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If destiny has it an update will be uploaded by tomorrow. I shall not give a time since my track record on timekeeping is quite bad. Had some study related issues which are sorted as well as the renovation work. Still ongoing but a good amount of work has been done. In effect I’ll be writing the updates for while from the living room my temporary bedroom as of now.
 

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If destiny has it an update will be uploaded by tomorrow. I shall not give a time since my track record on timekeeping is quite bad. Had some study related issues which are sorted as well as the renovation work. Still ongoing but a good amount of work has been done. In effect I’ll be writing the updates for while from the living room my temporary bedroom as of now.
Waiting😟😟😟
 

Somahvii

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I know I said I’d have the update uploaded but obviously I haven’t this is due to me one getting access back to my old account on here called S0mah1 and also having had started a alt account called Bhediya Bhai. In effect I am planning to continue writing the story I started on the old account called Zaviyar: Arbab-e-Naseeb and writing a new story on the alt account called Dastaan-e-Hilaal.

Long story short I’ve decided to divide my time between all three stories. Zaviyar: Arbab-e-Naseeb will be obviously rewritten, I had uploaded the first update but have taken it down to rework some stuff but you can probably see what was written in the replies. Yet to upload the first update of Dastaan-e-Hilaal even though it is overdue. So in short there will be schedule for the stories Monday or Tuesday for Behnon se Nikkah, Wednesday or Thursday and Saturday or Sunday for Dastaan-e-Hilaal and whatever day I can I’ll give an update for Zaviyar: Arbab-e-Naseeb.

Though this is subject to change if something arises. I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience and delays on my part.
 

Somahvii

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Though I’ll give the update today. I owe all the readers an update so I will do that. Give me some time to proofread and edit. I’ll see you all soon. So far it looks like Nazia has won the poll with Sania a close second. This will be kept in mind.
 

Somahvii

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The primary focus for now though will be this story and Dastaan-e-Hilaal as the story on my old account is being reworked entirely, I’m replanning the entire plot that I had thought about so that will take time. For now I’ll give these two stories to you according to a schedule.
 

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Update 11

The Ghosts We Carry


Aliyar dheere dheere hila, uska jism har harkat par takleef se chilla raha tha. Kamre ki madham roshni, jo garam aur naram rangon se bhari thi, uski nazron se door tak nahi pahunch rahi thi. Woh bistar par tha, uski jism par dard ka bojh tha, Babar aur Raja ke sath ladhai se hone wale maar peet ke baad. Uska chhati bhari bhari mehsoos ho rahi thi, har saans uski lahoo ki keemat yaad dilati thi.

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Darwaza creak karte hue khulta hai, aur Aliza andar aati hai. Uski narm kadam chinta se bhari hain jab woh uske paas aati hai, uski aankhein uski choton ka jaiza leti hain jo uski takleef ko dikhati hain.

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Woh dheere se bistar ke paas baith jati hai, uske haath kaanp rahe hain jab woh bandage ko dheere se sambhalti hai. “Waqar,” woh kehti hai, uski awaaz khushi aur gham se bhari hui. Uske haath naram par mazboot hain, jab woh uski choton ka ilaj karne lagti hai, unki jazbaat se bhari aankhein is pyaar ko dikhati hain.

Aliyar ne dard se cheeka, jab usne ek maksoos jagah ko chhua, lekin unki aankhein milti hain, aur beech mein kuch be-nawaal sa guzar jaata hai. Aliza ki nazar naram hoti hai, jaise woh is pal ko yaad kar rahi ho, uske haath dheere se chal rahe hain jaise woh uski jism ke nishanon ko yaad kar rahi ho. Aliyar ki saans ruki, beech mein khud se jhagde mein, yeh kehna ki yeh ghalat hai—woh woh nahi hai jise woh samajhti hai, lekin guilt is pyaar ki bhavnaon ko kam kar deti hai. Ek pal ke liye, usne is dhokhe se door hone diya.

“Tumne mujhe dara diya,” woh kehne lagi, uski awaaz thodi tooti hui. “Mujhe laga ke main tumhe dobara kho chuki hoon.”

Aliyar sahi nahi keh paya, isliye usne haath badhakar uski gaal ko sambhala. Uska angutha uski skin par chalta hai, aur woh uske touch ki tarah jhakti hai, uski aankhein band hoti hain jaise woh kareeb hone ka maza le rahi ho. Ek dil ki dhadkan ke liye, duniya sirf un dono ke beech simat gayi—unki saans, unka nazdeek hona, beech mein baat karne wali jodi. Lekin guilt usko kaat raha tha, ek khamosh awaaz yaad dilate hue ke yeh nazdikiyan ek jhoot par bani hain.


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Baloch ghar mein, ek bhari khamoshi hawa mein bhaari thi, sirf kabhi kabhi purani farsh ki creaking sunai de rahi thi. Nazia akeli apne kamre mein baithi thi, Aliyar ki ek shirt pakad kar, uske ungliyan us kapde par mazbooti se chamak rahi thi. Uski khushboo, halki lekin ab tak bhari hui, uski khushboo ki ahsas thi. Uski soch us raat ki taraf khinch gayi jab Aliyar ne usko bachaaya tha, usne darwaza todte hue, ek bhari iraada ke sath us tak pahuncha tha. Jis tarah se uska jism hilta hai—mazboot, akhar—yeh uske zehan par gehra asar chhod gaya.

Woh shirt ko apne chehre ke paas laakar, gehri saans leti hai, uska khayal uski aankhon ko bhara rakhta hai.
Uske baazon ka ehsaas, jo uske ird gird the, usko ek ajeeb aur anjaan garmi se bhar rahe thay. Uska seena kas gaya, lekin na darr ya sharmindagi ki wajah se, balki kisi aur cheez ke sabab. Usne apni aankhein band ki, aur mehsoos ki ke uski skin par halki si garmi cha gayi, uske pait mein neeche ek garmi si mehsoos hui jab uska tasavvur uske khayalat mein bhar gaya—uski taqat, uska jism jab wo uske liye ladta tha. Ye uski saans tez karne laga, ek aisi kaifiyat jo wo samajh nahi pa rahi thi, lekin jhuthla bhi nahi sakti thi. Wo is ehsaas ko door karna chahti thi, magar ye usse lipta raha, bhaari aur ghera, aur uska dil tezi se dhadakne laga.


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Nazia kaanpi, sharam is naye ehsaas ke sath mil gayi, aur usne uski shirt ko aur mazbooti se pakar liya. Kaise? Kaise wo ab aise mehsoos kar sakti thi, sab kuch hone ke baad? Usne uski maut ka plan banaya tha, lekin phir bhi uska khayal, zinda, taqatwar, usko bacha raha tha—ye usko aur chahne par majboor kar raha tha. Sharmindagi uske dil par bhoj ban gayi, lekin iske neeche ek ajeeb si lutf ki lehar chal rahi thi.

Ek aur hisse mein, Sania apne kamre mein baithi thi. Woh yeh sochne se nahi ruk rahi thi ke Aliyar—zinda, kisi aur aurat ke sath. Yeh sirf kuch lamhein the, lekin yeh usse aise bhadka diya tha jaise uska har kuch khatam ho gaya. Kya yeh waaqi mein woh tha? Kya yeh uska koi khwab hai? Woh uska bhai hai, par uska bhai aaj kal kisi aur ke sath khush tha. Uski chhati mein jalan mehsoos hoti hai, ek khatarnaak madhoshiyat jo andar se kuchh khud ko khatm karne laga.

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Woh darwaze ke samne khade hote hue, apne aakhon se khud ko dekhne lagi. Uska dil thak gaya, woh har lamha usko yaad kar rahi thi. Woh kaise uske bina jeene ka soch rahi thi? Woh toh ab is se khud ko nahi bachaa sakti, na is dard se. Woh akeli behte behte ek koshish ki, yeh sochne ki ke kya woh uski behen ka dard hai ya khud ka? Kya woh yeh kehne se bach sakti hai ke uska pyar kya hai?

Rabia, is waqt, apne room mein akeli baithi thi, purane tasveeron mein se ek Aliyar ke sath, har ek tasveer uska yaad dilati thi ke kaise woh hamesha wahan hota tha. Uska nahi hona uski zindagi mein ek khaali jagah thi jo woh nahi seh pa rahi thi. Woh chup chaap aansu ponchay, uska dil uski khushi aur saath ki kami mehsoos kar raha tha. Uska dil bhaari tha, lekin yeh dard mehsoos karne mein dheere dheere zyada mehsoos hota ja raha tha, uske liye ek kashmakash hoti ja rahi thi.


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Wapas apne kamre mein, Nazia bistar par let gayi, ceiling ko dekhte hue, uska dimaag us raat ke pal mein khinch gaya jab Aliyar uski hifazat ki thi. Uska dil phir se tez dhadak raha tha, aur woh apne haathon se woh shirt ko pakad kar rahi thi, uski khushboo bhar gayi. Phir se woh yaad aata hai ke uski madad se uski zindagi kaise bachi, jab ke usne usse maarne ki koshish ki thi. Uska dil kaam karne laga, woh gham aur pyaar ko mehsoos kar rahi thi. Woh is gham ko samajhne ki koshish karti, phir bhi uski aankhein khuli thi.

Aliyar bistar par lete hue, chhat ko ghoorte hue, apni behnon ke baare mein soch raha tha. Usse andaza nahi tha ke unka kya haal hai ya woh kya kar rahe hain, lekin ek gehra dard usse unke darmiyan ka faasla mehsoos karwa raha tha, jo uske chupaye hue raaz ka bojh ban gaya tha. Rabia, Sania, Nazia—har ek apni apni takleefon ka bojh utha rahi thi, jabke woh zinda tha, magar apne dhoke ke sabab unse door tha.

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Jab Aliza waapas aayi, ek halki muskurahat ke sath uske liye khana laayi, toh usne apne aap ko majboor kiya ke wo khayalat door kar de. Woh ab un tak wapas nahi ja sakta tha, abhi nahi. Abhi nahi. Jis jaal mein woh phansa tha, woh bohot zyada uljha hua tha, bohot zyada khatarnaak ke abhi azaad ho sake.
 
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