Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

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wo kya hai na Jaguaar ne wada karke toda hai...Is story pe nischal aur hella hero heroine ko lene wale the..lekin liya us raj aur sonal ko upar se is story pe kirdaar koi galti hi nahi kar rahe.. aur main masoom reader is intezaar mein hun ki kab ye kirdaar logis galti kare aur main inki aisi ki taisi kar du

Agar aisi ki taisi karni hi hai toh Rajesh Ranjeet inki karee. Yeh toh galti kar rahe hai Raj aur Sonal ke beech dooriyan laake.

 

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Update 46​

Raj: Bhabhi jara Sonal ka lunch upar de dijiyega. Woh padhai karne baithi hai. Toh maine usko uthne ke liye mana kiya hai.

Nandini: Yeh achha kiya. Warna woh khud thodi der baad nichhe aati lunch banane. Chalo ab batao kyaa plan kiya hai.

Raj: Woh maine socha hai. Main pura din uske saath hi spend karunga. Subah usko leke mandir jaunga jaha jaana usko sabse jyaada pasand hai. Phir usko uska favourite breakfast karwaunga. Pichli baar shaadi ke baad jab hum ghumne gaye the tab usne bola tha woh har saal apne birthday ke din Orphanage aur Old Age Home jaake time spend karti hai aur thoda donation bhi karti hai. Toh uss din wob bhi hoga.

Phir thoda bahot ghumna hoga. Uske baad uske liye maine ek hotel specially book karke decorate karwake waha usko Wish karunga aur propose karne ka socha hai. Ab mujhe yeh samaj nhi aaraha hai usse yeh sab achha lagega naa.

Nandini: Tumne jo jo socha hai woh sab Sonal ko bahot pasand aayega. Aur usko sabse jyaada kyaa pasand aayega pata hai.

Raj: Kyaa.

Nandini: Tum pura din uske saath rahoge yeh usko sabse jyaada pasand aayega. Waise kab hai uska birthday.

Raj: 2 din baad.

Nandini: Aree yeh toh kam time hai. Tumne hotel ka arrangement karliya.

Raj: Nhi. Aaj sham ko karunga.

Nandini: Achhi baat hai. Aur yeh make sure karna har chiz perfect ho aur Sonal ki pasand ka ho.

Raj: Jiii. Par mujhe uski pasand naa pasand ke baare mein jyaada nhi pata. Maine kabhi pucha hi nhi. Khaane ke baare mein usne khud bataya tha isiliye pata hai.

Nandini: Waahhh greatttt. Kaise pati ho apni patni ki pasand naa pasand nhi pata. Isme main tumhari koi madad nhi karungi. Tum khud sambhalo isko.

Raj: Aree bhabhi kardo na help.

Nandini: Bilkul nhi. Shaadi ko 6 mahine hogye abhi tak tumhe uski pasand naa pasand nhi pata Aur ek woh hai jisko tumhare harchiz pata hai.

Raj: Meri Sonal toh greatt hai. Please help kardo.

Nandini: Sorryyy. Khud sambhalo. Yeh bol Nandini waha se chali jaati hai.

Raj waha thaga sa baitha rehta hai aur apne aap se bolta hai.

Raj: Chalo Raj beta. Bhabhi ne toh help karne se mana kardiya. Ab jab dobara pyaar kiya hai toh mehnat toh karni hi hogi. Par kaise karu. Haa Swati se puchta hu. Usko sab pata hoga. Yeh bol woh Yash ko call lagata hai.

Yash: Haa Raj bol.

Raj: Swati ko phone de. Usse kaam hai.

Yash: Meri biwi se kyaa kaam hai tujhe.

Raj: Bagal mein khada hoke sunnliyo. Chal phone de.

Yash: Haa haa deta hu. Swati yeh lo Raj baat karna chahta hai.

Swati: Haa Raj bolo.

Raj: Tumse kuch puchna hai. Par promise karo Sonal ko kuch nhi bataogi.

Swati: Aisa kyaa puchna hai tumhe.

Raj: Nhii pehle promise karo. Tum Sonal ko iss baare mein kuch nhi bataogi aur naahi yeh bologi ke meri aur tumhari baat hui hai.

Swati: Kuch soch ke. Achaa thik hai pucho.

Raj: Mujhe Sonal ki saari pasand naa pasand ke baare mein janna hai.

Swati: Aur woh kisliye.

Raj: Woh actually 2 din baad Sonal ka birthday hai toh isiliye uske liye surprise plan kiya hai uske liye. Pleasee yeh baat Sonal ko yaa kisi aur ko mat batana.

Swati: Khush hoke. Reallyyyyy. Tumne uske liye birthday surprise plan kiya hai.

Raj: Haaa. Aur isiliye mujhe batao usko kya kya pasand hai.

Swati: Bilkul kyo nhi.

Phir Swati Raj ko Sonal ki saari pasand naa pasand ke baare mein batati hai.

Raj: Thank You Swati.

Swati: Tum Sonal ke liye yeh kar rahe ho iske liye tumhe Thank You.

Phir call cut hojaata hai.

Call cut hotei Swati bagal mein khade Yash ke gale lag jaati hai aur uske gaalon mein kiss kardeti hai.

Yash: Aree aree aisa kya hogya jo aaj mere upar itni meharbaani.

Swati: Aaj main bahot khush hu Yash.

Yash: Woh toh mujhe samaj aaraha hai. Par aakhir aisa kyaa hogya. Aisa kya boldiya Raj ne.

Swati: Raj meri behen ke liye birthday surprise plan kar raha hai. Jisse Sonal bahot bahot khush hojaayegi.

Yash: Achha toh yeh hai meri biwi ke khushi ka karan. Par yeh toh mujhe pata hai.

Swati: Kyaaaaa. Aapko pata tha aur aapne mujhe bataya tak nhi.

Yash: Aree surprise tha kaise batata. Raj ne hi mana kiya tha. Aur ab usne hi bata diya.

Swati: Usko toh Sonal ki pasand naa pasand ke baare mein janna tha isiliye bataya. Par aapko mujhe batana chahiye tha Yash.

Yash: Achha galti hogyi. Maaf kardo. Chalo ab batao Sonal ko kyaa gift dene ka socha hai.

Swati: Abhi tak kuch socha nhi hai. Aap bataiye kyaa du.

Yash: Aree tumhari behen hai tum bolo. Mere se jyaada achhe se tum jaanti ho usse

Swati: Ek kaam karte hai sham ko bahar jaate hai aur koi achha sa gift dekhte hai.

Yash: Achha thikk hai. Saath mein tumhare liye bhi shopping karlenge.

Swati: Kyaaa baat hai. Mere upar itni meharbaani.

Yash: Ab bhagwan ne itni achhi biwi di hai uska khyaal toh rakhna padega na. Warna agar mujhe chor ke maayke chali gayi toh mera kya hoga.

Swati: Kabhi kabhi mera mann toh karta hai. Par phir sochti hu nhi jaati warna mera pyaara pati pagal hojayega.

Yash: Puri tarah se. Yeh bol Swati ke gaalom ko chum leta hai.

Swati: Aapko pata hai Yash Sonal Raj se bahot pyaar karti hai. Jis din se usne Raj ko dekha hai uss din se woh usse pyaar karti hai. Woh Raj ke pyaar mein puri tarah se pagal hogyi hai.

Yash: Mujhe pata hai Swati. Maine Sonal ki aankho mein dekha hai. Woh jis tarah se Raj ka khayal rakhti hai usse saaf pata chalta hai. Aur mujhe pura yakeen hai Raj bhi jald hi samjhega. Phir Mann mein bolta hai. Samaj toh woh gaya hai aur 2 din baad woh propose hi karne wala hai par abhi woh tumhe nhi bata sakta.

Swati: Aapko pata hai maine pune mein Raj ki aankho mein Sonal ke liye wahi chinta wahi fikr wahi pyaar dekha hai jo Sonal ke dil mein Raj ke liye hai.

Yash: Tum dekhna bahot jald Raj bhi yeh baat samaj jaayega. Aur phir Sonal se achhi ladki Raj ko nhi mil sakti.

Yehlog aise hi baate karte hue time spend karte hai. Udher Rajesh aur Ranjeet bhi Raj ke khilaaf ek aur plan bana chuke the.

Sham ko Raj bahar nikalta hai aur ek achhe se hotel mein jaata hai aur waha ke manager se baat karke Sonal ke birthday ke liye book karta hai. Phir waha se woh ek achhe se restaurant mein jaake uss din ke special meni taiyaar karne ko kehta hai jisme jo jo Sonal ko pasand hai woh sab hota hai.

Phir waha se ek mall mein jaata hai aur Sonal ke liye ek achha sa dress leke woh ghar aajata hai. Dress ko woh Sonal se chupa ke rakh deta hai.

Idher Ranjeet ka aadmi Raj ke pichha karte hue har woh jagah jaata hai jaha jaha Raj gaya tha aur waha pe thode paise khilake woh saari information leke Ranjeet ko de deta hai.

Raj uss aadmi ko notice toh karta hai par jyaada sochta nhi aur totally ignore karta hai. Kyoki usko laga yeh ek co-incidence hoga.

Ranjeet: Achha toh Raj apni biwi ko propose karne wala hai uske birthday ke din. Par aisa hone nhi hone dunga. Sonal ko uske birthday ka gift toh main dunga. Aur apne haatho se dunga. Aur aisa gift dunga jisse Raj ki zindagi hi tabah hojayegi. Rajjj tu dekh ab tere se kaise main apna badla leta hu. Yeh bol jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Agla din bhi roj ke jaise guzar jaata hai. Par sham se hi Raj apne kamre mein tha aur kisi ko bhi kamre mein aane se mana kiya tha usne. Raat ko Swati Samar Nandini Shruti Ishita Payal Aarav Yash sablog 12 bajne ka intezaar kar rahe the isiliye sabne Sonal ko nichhe hi rokh rakha tha par Raj apne kamre mein aagaya tha.

12 bajne ke pehle pehle Swati aur Samar Sonal ke saath conference mein baat kar rahe hote hai. Jaise hi 12 bajte hai sablog eksaath Sonal ko birthday wish karte hai.
Sonal ka aisa pehla birthday tha jab usse itne logo ne eksaath wish kiya hogaa.

Sonal: Khushi se. Thank You So much. Aap sab ko yaad thaa.

Swati: Aree tumhara birthday hum kaise bhul sakte hai Sonal. Once again Happy Birthday meri behen.

Sonal: Thank You Di.

Samar: Di Mummy Papa baat karenge.

Dono: Happy Birthday Sonal. Tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyan mile.

Sonal: Thank You Mummy Papa. Aaplogo ne pehle hi meri zindagi khushiyan bhardi hai. Ab mujhe aur kuch nhi chahiye.

Phir Ek ek karke Smita Ragini Ashok Vijay Savitri sab Sonal ko wish karte hai. Par Raj ke waha naa hone se Sonal ko bahot dukh hota hai.

Nandini: Kyaa hua Sonal. Iss khushi ke time pe udaasi.

Sonal: Sabne mujhe wish kiya sab yaha present hai par jinko sabse pehle wish karna chahiye wohi yaha nhi hai. Kyaa unhe mera birthday yaad bhi hai.

Nandini: Udaas mat ho Sonal. Hosakta hai Raj ne tumhare liye kuch special plan kiya ho.

Sonal: Par unhe yaha hona chahiye tha bhabhi.

Nandini: Koi baat nhi Sonal. Aise udaas nhi hote. Jaao ab jaake so jao.

Sonal bemann se hi upar chali jaati hai. Aur jab apne kamre ke paas pahonchti hai waha usse ek alag hi khushboo aati hai. Par woh usko ignore kar room ka darwaza kholke andar jaati hai toh shock hojaati hai.

Sonal jaise hi kamre mein apna pehla kadam rakhti hai uske upar phoolon ki baarish hone lagti hai. Jisse dekh Sonal ko bahot achhi lagta hai. Phir jab woh apni nazar kamre mein ghumati hai toh dekhti hai pura kamra achhe se sajaya hua hai. Aur zameen pe bade se achhe se Happy Birthday likha hua hai candles ki madad se.

Sonal: Khushi se. Rajjjj. Rajjj kaha hai aap. Bahar aaiyee.

Raj: Wishing you a very very Happy Birthday my sweet wife. Maanta hu mujhse sabse pehle wish karna chahiye tha par main akele mein karna chahta tha isiliye last mein kiyaa.

Sonal: Aankho mein aansu liyeee. Aapko yaad thaa meraa Birthday.

Raj: 2 din se innsab ki taiyaari kar raha hu bas darr tha tumhe pasand aayega yaa nhiii.

Sonal: Mujheeee bahottt pasanddd aaya Rajjj. Thankkk youu soooo muchhhh. Yeh bol woh daud ke jaati hai Rajj ke gale lag jaati hai.

Sonal khushi mein itni pagal hojaati hai ke usko hosh hi nhi rehta ke woh kyaa kar baithi. Raj bhi uske kandhe ko sehlaane lagta hai.

Raj: Tumhe pasand aaya yeh jaanke mujhe khushi huiii.
Sonal: Aapka diya hua harchiz mujhe pasand hai Rajjj. Once again Thank You so muchhh.

Raj: Aree abhi rukhh jao. Yeh kuch bhi nhi hai. Kal specially tumhare liye ek surprise plan kiya hai aur tumhe ek bahot hi jyaada special gift milega aur aisa gift milega jiske baare mein tumne socha bhi nhi hogaa.

Sonal: Aisa kyaa dene wale hai aap Rajjj.

Raj: Woh toh kal hi pata chalegaa. Chalo ab fatafat yeh cake kaato.

Sonal bagal mein table ki taraf dekhti hai toh waha ek chota sa cake tha. Jo uska favourite Butter Scotch flavour ka thaa.

Sonal: Aapko kisne bataya mujhe Butter Scotch pasand hai.

Raj: Bas pata chal gaya. Ab tumhara pati itna bhi nakara nhi.

Sonal: Mujhe pata hai aap bahot intelligent hai. Tabhi toh aapko main mili.

Raj: Achhaaa. Tumhe aisa lagta hai.

Sonal: Bilkull. Agar aap intelligent nhi hote toh itni achhi biwi ke liye aap mana nhi kar dete.

Raj: Mujhe samaj nhi aaraha hai tum apni tareef kar rahi ho yaa meri tareef kar rahe ho.

Sonal: Of Course meri tareef kar rahi hu. Yeh bol hasne lagti hai. Raj bas usko hasta hua dekhte rehta hai.

Raj: Waaahhh. Kyaa biwi mili hai. Pati ki kadar hi nhi hai. Achhi baat hai. Chalo ab fatafat cake kaato.

Sonal: Jii.

Phir Sonal Raj ka haath pakad ke cake kaati hai aur Raj ko cake khilati hai. Raj bhi Sonal ko cake khilati hai. Par thoda sa uske gaal mein laga diya.

Sonal: Yeh kyaa kar rahe hai aap Raj.

Raj: Aree birthday hai. Aur birthday ke din toh yeh hota hi hai.

Sonal: Achha aisi baat hai. Yeh bol Sonal bhi Raj ke gaalo mein cake laga deti hai. Toh yeh lijiye. Aapne mere saath cake kaata toh uss hisaab se aapka bhi birthday hua aaj.

Raj: Mujhe nhi pata tha chup chaap rehne wali shaant rehne wali baat baat pe sharmane wali itni mastikhor bhi hogi.

Sonal: Aree aap abhi mujhe jaante hi kaha hai.

Raj: Dheere se. Ab jaan jaunga achhe se.

Sonal: By The Way. Thank You So Much Raj. Mera birthday special banane ke liye.

Raj: Aree abhi kaha kuch hai. Abhi toh bahot kuch baaki hai. Par filhal gift se starting karte hai. Aur yeh lo tumhare liye pehla gift. Yeh bol Raj Sonal ko ek shopper pakda deta hai.

Sonal: Thank You so much Raj.

Raj: Kholke dekho aur bolo kaisa laga.

Sonal fatafat gift kholti hai aur usme jo dress tha woh dekh kar bahot khush hojaati hai. Aur uske saath hi ek bahot hi pyaara sa necklace bhi thaa.

Raj: Pasand aaya.

Sonal: Yeh bahott achha hai Rajjj. Mujhee bahott pasand aaya. Thankkk Youu.

Raj: Toh kal subah tum yehi dress pehnogi.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Raj: Chalo ab jaldi se so jao. Kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir dono apne aap ko saaf karte hai aur so jaate hai. Par Raj nhi soya tha. Woh bas Sonal ke sone ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Thodi der baad jab Raj ko yakeen hogya ke Sonal so gayi hai toh Raj dheere se Sonal ke sir ko sehlaane lagta hai.

Raj: Jab itna pyaar karti ho toh mujhe bol ke toh dekhti. Par nhi apna pyaar kabhi jataya hi nhi. Aur agar jataya bhi hoga toh mujhe samaj nhi aaya hoga. Par ab main samaj gaya hu Sonal. Bas kal sham tak ka intezaar karo. Uske baad tumhe woh milega jo tumhe chahiye tha. Yeh bol Sonal ko sir ko chum leta hai. I Love You Sonal. Bas kabhi mujhe chorr ke mat jaana. Warna iss baar shayad jee nhi paunga.

Sonal neend mein hi Raj ke aur kareeb aake usse sat jaati hai jaisa Raj ko choregi toh woh kahi chala jayega.

Raj bhi Sonal ko pakad ke so jaata hai. ​

 

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Agar aisi ki taisi karni hi hai toh Rajesh Ranjeet inki karee. Yeh toh galti kar rahe hai Raj aur Sonal ke beech dooriyan laake.

Tab to bahot badhiya kaam kar rahe hai dono hi.. keep it up..

 

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Kuch reham karo do prem ke panchiyon ke upar. Bechare Raj aur Sonal

 

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Update 46​

Raj: Bhabhi jara Sonal ka lunch upar de dijiyega. Woh padhai karne baithi hai. Toh maine usko uthne ke liye mana kiya hai.

Nandini: Yeh achha kiya. Warna woh khud thodi der baad nichhe aati lunch banane. Chalo ab batao kyaa plan kiya hai.

Raj: Woh maine socha hai. Main pura din uske saath hi spend karunga. Subah usko leke mandir jaunga jaha jaana usko sabse jyaada pasand hai. Phir usko uska favourite breakfast karwaunga. Pichli baar shaadi ke baad jab hum ghumne gaye the tab usne bola tha woh har saal apne birthday ke din Orphanage aur Old Age Home jaake time spend karti hai aur thoda donation bhi karti hai. Toh uss din wob bhi hoga.

Phir thoda bahot ghumna hoga. Uske baad uske liye maine ek hotel specially book karke decorate karwake waha usko Wish karunga aur propose karne ka socha hai. Ab mujhe yeh samaj nhi aaraha hai usse yeh sab achha lagega naa.

Nandini: Tumne jo jo socha hai woh sab Sonal ko bahot pasand aayega. Aur usko sabse jyaada kyaa pasand aayega pata hai.

Raj: Kyaa.

Nandini: Tum pura din uske saath rahoge yeh usko sabse jyaada pasand aayega. Waise kab hai uska birthday.

Raj: 2 din baad.

Nandini: Aree yeh toh kam time hai. Tumne hotel ka arrangement karliya.

Raj: Nhi. Aaj sham ko karunga.

Nandini: Achhi baat hai. Aur yeh make sure karna har chiz perfect ho aur Sonal ki pasand ka ho.

Raj: Jiii. Par mujhe uski pasand naa pasand ke baare mein jyaada nhi pata. Maine kabhi pucha hi nhi. Khaane ke baare mein usne khud bataya tha isiliye pata hai.

Nandini: Waahhh greatttt. Kaise pati ho apni patni ki pasand naa pasand nhi pata. Isme main tumhari koi madad nhi karungi. Tum khud sambhalo isko.

Raj: Aree bhabhi kardo na help.

Nandini: Bilkul nhi. Shaadi ko 6 mahine hogye abhi tak tumhe uski pasand naa pasand nhi pata Aur ek woh hai jisko tumhare harchiz pata hai.

Raj: Meri Sonal toh greatt hai. Please help kardo.

Nandini: Sorryyy. Khud sambhalo. Yeh bol Nandini waha se chali jaati hai.

Raj waha thaga sa baitha rehta hai aur apne aap se bolta hai.

Raj: Chalo Raj beta. Bhabhi ne toh help karne se mana kardiya. Ab jab dobara pyaar kiya hai toh mehnat toh karni hi hogi. Par kaise karu. Haa Swati se puchta hu. Usko sab pata hoga. Yeh bol woh Yash ko call lagata hai.

Yash: Haa Raj bol.

Raj: Swati ko phone de. Usse kaam hai.

Yash: Meri biwi se kyaa kaam hai tujhe.

Raj: Bagal mein khada hoke sunnliyo. Chal phone de.

Yash: Haa haa deta hu. Swati yeh lo Raj baat karna chahta hai.

Swati: Haa Raj bolo.

Raj: Tumse kuch puchna hai. Par promise karo Sonal ko kuch nhi bataogi.

Swati: Aisa kyaa puchna hai tumhe.

Raj: Nhii pehle promise karo. Tum Sonal ko iss baare mein kuch nhi bataogi aur naahi yeh bologi ke meri aur tumhari baat hui hai.

Swati: Kuch soch ke. Achaa thik hai pucho.

Raj: Mujhe Sonal ki saari pasand naa pasand ke baare mein janna hai.

Swati: Aur woh kisliye.

Raj: Woh actually 2 din baad Sonal ka birthday hai toh isiliye uske liye surprise plan kiya hai uske liye. Pleasee yeh baat Sonal ko yaa kisi aur ko mat batana.

Swati: Khush hoke. Reallyyyyy. Tumne uske liye birthday surprise plan kiya hai.

Raj: Haaa. Aur isiliye mujhe batao usko kya kya pasand hai.

Swati: Bilkul kyo nhi.

Phir Swati Raj ko Sonal ki saari pasand naa pasand ke baare mein batati hai.

Raj: Thank You Swati.

Swati: Tum Sonal ke liye yeh kar rahe ho iske liye tumhe Thank You.

Phir call cut hojaata hai.

Call cut hotei Swati bagal mein khade Yash ke gale lag jaati hai aur uske gaalon mein kiss kardeti hai.

Yash: Aree aree aisa kya hogya jo aaj mere upar itni meharbaani.

Swati: Aaj main bahot khush hu Yash.

Yash: Woh toh mujhe samaj aaraha hai. Par aakhir aisa kyaa hogya. Aisa kya boldiya Raj ne.

Swati: Raj meri behen ke liye birthday surprise plan kar raha hai. Jisse Sonal bahot bahot khush hojaayegi.

Yash: Achha toh yeh hai meri biwi ke khushi ka karan. Par yeh toh mujhe pata hai.

Swati: Kyaaaaa. Aapko pata tha aur aapne mujhe bataya tak nhi.

Yash: Aree surprise tha kaise batata. Raj ne hi mana kiya tha. Aur ab usne hi bata diya.

Swati: Usko toh Sonal ki pasand naa pasand ke baare mein janna tha isiliye bataya. Par aapko mujhe batana chahiye tha Yash.

Yash: Achha galti hogyi. Maaf kardo. Chalo ab batao Sonal ko kyaa gift dene ka socha hai.

Swati: Abhi tak kuch socha nhi hai. Aap bataiye kyaa du.

Yash: Aree tumhari behen hai tum bolo. Mere se jyaada achhe se tum jaanti ho usse

Swati: Ek kaam karte hai sham ko bahar jaate hai aur koi achha sa gift dekhte hai.

Yash: Achha thikk hai. Saath mein tumhare liye bhi shopping karlenge.

Swati: Kyaaa baat hai. Mere upar itni meharbaani.

Yash: Ab bhagwan ne itni achhi biwi di hai uska khyaal toh rakhna padega na. Warna agar mujhe chor ke maayke chali gayi toh mera kya hoga.

Swati: Kabhi kabhi mera mann toh karta hai. Par phir sochti hu nhi jaati warna mera pyaara pati pagal hojayega.

Yash: Puri tarah se. Yeh bol Swati ke gaalom ko chum leta hai.

Swati: Aapko pata hai Yash Sonal Raj se bahot pyaar karti hai. Jis din se usne Raj ko dekha hai uss din se woh usse pyaar karti hai. Woh Raj ke pyaar mein puri tarah se pagal hogyi hai.

Yash: Mujhe pata hai Swati. Maine Sonal ki aankho mein dekha hai. Woh jis tarah se Raj ka khayal rakhti hai usse saaf pata chalta hai. Aur mujhe pura yakeen hai Raj bhi jald hi samjhega. Phir Mann mein bolta hai. Samaj toh woh gaya hai aur 2 din baad woh propose hi karne wala hai par abhi woh tumhe nhi bata sakta.

Swati: Aapko pata hai maine pune mein Raj ki aankho mein Sonal ke liye wahi chinta wahi fikr wahi pyaar dekha hai jo Sonal ke dil mein Raj ke liye hai.

Yash: Tum dekhna bahot jald Raj bhi yeh baat samaj jaayega. Aur phir Sonal se achhi ladki Raj ko nhi mil sakti.

Yehlog aise hi baate karte hue time spend karte hai. Udher Rajesh aur Ranjeet bhi Raj ke khilaaf ek aur plan bana chuke the.

Sham ko Raj bahar nikalta hai aur ek achhe se hotel mein jaata hai aur waha ke manager se baat karke Sonal ke birthday ke liye book karta hai. Phir waha se woh ek achhe se restaurant mein jaake uss din ke special meni taiyaar karne ko kehta hai jisme jo jo Sonal ko pasand hai woh sab hota hai.

Phir waha se ek mall mein jaata hai aur Sonal ke liye ek achha sa dress leke woh ghar aajata hai. Dress ko woh Sonal se chupa ke rakh deta hai.

Idher Ranjeet ka aadmi Raj ke pichha karte hue har woh jagah jaata hai jaha jaha Raj gaya tha aur waha pe thode paise khilake woh saari information leke Ranjeet ko de deta hai.

Raj uss aadmi ko notice toh karta hai par jyaada sochta nhi aur totally ignore karta hai. Kyoki usko laga yeh ek co-incidence hoga.

Ranjeet: Achha toh Raj apni biwi ko propose karne wala hai uske birthday ke din. Par aisa hone nhi hone dunga. Sonal ko uske birthday ka gift toh main dunga. Aur apne haatho se dunga. Aur aisa gift dunga jisse Raj ki zindagi hi tabah hojayegi. Rajjj tu dekh ab tere se kaise main apna badla leta hu. Yeh bol jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Agla din bhi roj ke jaise guzar jaata hai. Par sham se hi Raj apne kamre mein tha aur kisi ko bhi kamre mein aane se mana kiya tha usne. Raat ko Swati Samar Nandini Shruti Ishita Payal Aarav Yash sablog 12 bajne ka intezaar kar rahe the isiliye sabne Sonal ko nichhe hi rokh rakha tha par Raj apne kamre mein aagaya tha.

12 bajne ke pehle pehle Swati aur Samar Sonal ke saath conference mein baat kar rahe hote hai. Jaise hi 12 bajte hai sablog eksaath Sonal ko birthday wish karte hai.
Sonal ka aisa pehla birthday tha jab usse itne logo ne eksaath wish kiya hogaa.

Sonal: Khushi se. Thank You So much. Aap sab ko yaad thaa.

Swati: Aree tumhara birthday hum kaise bhul sakte hai Sonal. Once again Happy Birthday meri behen.

Sonal: Thank You Di.

Samar: Di Mummy Papa baat karenge.

Dono: Happy Birthday Sonal. Tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyan mile.

Sonal: Thank You Mummy Papa. Aaplogo ne pehle hi meri zindagi khushiyan bhardi hai. Ab mujhe aur kuch nhi chahiye.

Phir Ek ek karke Smita Ragini Ashok Vijay Savitri sab Sonal ko wish karte hai. Par Raj ke waha naa hone se Sonal ko bahot dukh hota hai.

Nandini: Kyaa hua Sonal. Iss khushi ke time pe udaasi.

Sonal: Sabne mujhe wish kiya sab yaha present hai par jinko sabse pehle wish karna chahiye wohi yaha nhi hai. Kyaa unhe mera birthday yaad bhi hai.

Nandini: Udaas mat ho Sonal. Hosakta hai Raj ne tumhare liye kuch special plan kiya ho.

Sonal: Par unhe yaha hona chahiye tha bhabhi.

Nandini: Koi baat nhi Sonal. Aise udaas nhi hote. Jaao ab jaake so jao.

Sonal bemann se hi upar chali jaati hai. Aur jab apne kamre ke paas pahonchti hai waha usse ek alag hi khushboo aati hai. Par woh usko ignore kar room ka darwaza kholke andar jaati hai toh shock hojaati hai.

Sonal jaise hi kamre mein apna pehla kadam rakhti hai uske upar phoolon ki baarish hone lagti hai. Jisse dekh Sonal ko bahot achhi lagta hai. Phir jab woh apni nazar kamre mein ghumati hai toh dekhti hai pura kamra achhe se sajaya hua hai. Aur zameen pe bade se achhe se Happy Birthday likha hua hai candles ki madad se.

Sonal: Khushi se. Rajjjj. Rajjj kaha hai aap. Bahar aaiyee.

Raj: Wishing you a very very Happy Birthday my sweet wife. Maanta hu mujhse sabse pehle wish karna chahiye tha par main akele mein karna chahta tha isiliye last mein kiyaa.

Sonal: Aankho mein aansu liyeee. Aapko yaad thaa meraa Birthday.

Raj: 2 din se innsab ki taiyaari kar raha hu bas darr tha tumhe pasand aayega yaa nhiii.

Sonal: Mujheeee bahottt pasanddd aaya Rajjj. Thankkk youu soooo muchhhh. Yeh bol woh daud ke jaati hai Rajj ke gale lag jaati hai.

Sonal khushi mein itni pagal hojaati hai ke usko hosh hi nhi rehta ke woh kyaa kar baithi. Raj bhi uske kandhe ko sehlaane lagta hai.

Raj: Tumhe pasand aaya yeh jaanke mujhe khushi huiii.
Sonal: Aapka diya hua harchiz mujhe pasand hai Rajjj. Once again Thank You so muchhh.

Raj: Aree abhi rukhh jao. Yeh kuch bhi nhi hai. Kal specially tumhare liye ek surprise plan kiya hai aur tumhe ek bahot hi jyaada special gift milega aur aisa gift milega jiske baare mein tumne socha bhi nhi hogaa.

Sonal: Aisa kyaa dene wale hai aap Rajjj.

Raj: Woh toh kal hi pata chalegaa. Chalo ab fatafat yeh cake kaato.

Sonal bagal mein table ki taraf dekhti hai toh waha ek chota sa cake tha. Jo uska favourite Butter Scotch flavour ka thaa.

Sonal: Aapko kisne bataya mujhe Butter Scotch pasand hai.

Raj: Bas pata chal gaya. Ab tumhara pati itna bhi nakara nhi.

Sonal: Mujhe pata hai aap bahot intelligent hai. Tabhi toh aapko main mili.

Raj: Achhaaa. Tumhe aisa lagta hai.

Sonal: Bilkull. Agar aap intelligent nhi hote toh itni achhi biwi ke liye aap mana nhi kar dete.

Raj: Mujhe samaj nhi aaraha hai tum apni tareef kar rahi ho yaa meri tareef kar rahe ho.

Sonal: Of Course meri tareef kar rahi hu. Yeh bol hasne lagti hai. Raj bas usko hasta hua dekhte rehta hai.

Raj: Waaahhh. Kyaa biwi mili hai. Pati ki kadar hi nhi hai. Achhi baat hai. Chalo ab fatafat cake kaato.

Sonal: Jii.

Phir Sonal Raj ka haath pakad ke cake kaati hai aur Raj ko cake khilati hai. Raj bhi Sonal ko cake khilati hai. Par thoda sa uske gaal mein laga diya.

Sonal: Yeh kyaa kar rahe hai aap Raj.

Raj: Aree birthday hai. Aur birthday ke din toh yeh hota hi hai.

Sonal: Achha aisi baat hai. Yeh bol Sonal bhi Raj ke gaalo mein cake laga deti hai. Toh yeh lijiye. Aapne mere saath cake kaata toh uss hisaab se aapka bhi birthday hua aaj.

Raj: Mujhe nhi pata tha chup chaap rehne wali shaant rehne wali baat baat pe sharmane wali itni mastikhor bhi hogi.

Sonal: Aree aap abhi mujhe jaante hi kaha hai.

Raj: Dheere se. Ab jaan jaunga achhe se.

Sonal: By The Way. Thank You So Much Raj. Mera birthday special banane ke liye.

Raj: Aree abhi kaha kuch hai. Abhi toh bahot kuch baaki hai. Par filhal gift se starting karte hai. Aur yeh lo tumhare liye pehla gift. Yeh bol Raj Sonal ko ek shopper pakda deta hai.

Sonal: Thank You so much Raj.

Raj: Kholke dekho aur bolo kaisa laga.

Sonal fatafat gift kholti hai aur usme jo dress tha woh dekh kar bahot khush hojaati hai. Aur uske saath hi ek bahot hi pyaara sa necklace bhi thaa.

Raj: Pasand aaya.

Sonal: Yeh bahott achha hai Rajjj. Mujhee bahott pasand aaya. Thankkk Youu.

Raj: Toh kal subah tum yehi dress pehnogi.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Raj: Chalo ab jaldi se so jao. Kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir dono apne aap ko saaf karte hai aur so jaate hai. Par Raj nhi soya tha. Woh bas Sonal ke sone ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Thodi der baad jab Raj ko yakeen hogya ke Sonal so gayi hai toh Raj dheere se Sonal ke sir ko sehlaane lagta hai.

Raj: Jab itna pyaar karti ho toh mujhe bol ke toh dekhti. Par nhi apna pyaar kabhi jataya hi nhi. Aur agar jataya bhi hoga toh mujhe samaj nhi aaya hoga. Par ab main samaj gaya hu Sonal. Bas kal sham tak ka intezaar karo. Uske baad tumhe woh milega jo tumhe chahiye tha. Yeh bol Sonal ko sir ko chum leta hai. I Love You Sonal. Bas kabhi mujhe chorr ke mat jaana. Warna iss baar shayad jee nhi paunga.

Sonal neend mein hi Raj ke aur kareeb aake usse sat jaati hai jaisa Raj ko choregi toh woh kahi chala jayega.

Raj bhi Sonal ko pakad ke so jaata hai. ​

sonal aur raj ki lob story likhne ke chakkar mein update no bhool gaye writer sahab phir ek dum se yaad aaya to edit kar 46 kar diye
edit karne dene baatein chup nahi jaati
Dekha nischal aur hella ko story pe na lene ka na tuza..

 

[Naina]

Kuch reham karo do prem ke panchiyon ke upar. Bechare Raj aur Sonal

Kabhi nahi

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

nahi to.... balki ye ek shataranj ki chaal hai ...
wo kya hai na Jaguaar ne wada karke toda hai...Is story pe nischal aur hella hero heroine ko lene wale the..lekin liya us raj aur sonal ko upar se is story pe kirdaar koi galti hi nahi kar rahe.. aur main masoom reader is intezaar mein hun ki kab ye kirdaar logis galti kare aur main inki aisi ki taisi kar du

मैडम जी कहा तो अपने सही हैं कारदारों की भूमिका बांधने में लेखक ने कोई गलती नहीं की और रही बात अपके पसंदीदा किरदार की तो उनके किसी और कहानी में ढूंढा जाए तो ही अच्छा होगा

लेखक जी क्यों आप मासूम रीडर नैना जी से वादा करके वादाखिलाफी किया यह तो गलत हैं।

कोई नहीं जल्दी ही अपन भी धांसू एंट्री मरने वाला हैं बोले तो खिड़की तोड़ बस इतनी सी उम्मीद की किरण जागर आऊंगा बाकी लेखकों के कहानी की तरह मेरी उम्मीद में मासूम मासूम रेवो देंगे।
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[Jaguaar]

sonal aur raj ki lob story likhne ke chakkar mein update no bhool gaye writer sahab phir ek dum se yaad aaya to edit kar 46 kar diye
edit karne dene baatein chup nahi jaati
Dekha nischal aur hella ko story pe na lene ka na tuza..

Aree kaunsi baate chup nhi jaati. Jara mujhe bhi pata chale