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Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

Death Kiñg

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Urri baba estory khatam bhi ho gayi... Bahut bahut :congrats: Jaguaar saahab ek aur kahani poora karne ke liye... Coming to some last updates... Raj aur Sonal ki prem kahani mein ek ke baad ek kayi mushkilen aayin jismein kabhi Sonal aur kabhi Raj ke Pyaar ka imtihaan hua par dono ne hi apne pyaar ki taqat se unn sabhi problems ka saamna kiya aur ant mein Krishna & Megha ke roop mein dono ko do behad hi anmol tohfe bhi praapt huye...

Ishita – Samar aur Aarav – Payal ki bhi jodiyan ban gayi aur wo bhi apne apne ghar mein settle ho gaye... Idhar Sonal ka apni beti ka naam Megha rakhna ek baar firse dil ko chhoo gaya... Ant mein Dono bachon ka Raj ko pareshaan karna aur unki mastiya bahut hi pyaari thi... Un dono ke zariye aakhir Kapoor House mein ek nayi hi khushi janam jo le chuki thi...

Khair, ek bahut hi khubsurat kahani ka ek bahut hi khushnuma ant jahaan Raj ko apne intezaar aur mehnat se Sonal mili wahin Sonal ko apne Bepanah Ishq ke chalte Raj... Kahaan to Raj apni zindagi se munh mod chuka tha aur kahaan aaj uske ghar mein do bachon ki kilkariyan goonj uthi...

Ye kahani Sonal ki hi to thi, Raj jo khushiyon aur Pyaar se apna naata tod chuka tha, Megha ke jaane ke gam mein shayad khud ko hi bhula chuka tha, usse ek naya jeevan diya Sonal ne... Apna patni hone ka har farz poora kiya aur kabhi badle mein Raj se kuchh nahi maanga... Nateejtan aakhir mein Raj bhi Sonal ke aage apna dil haar baitha... Wahin jab Sonal ki Memory gayi tab Raj ne apne Pyaar ki pariksha di aur poore ankon se usmein khara bhi utra...

Majorly Raj aur Sonal ke Prem Prakran par bani ye kahani kayi aur kirdaaron ko bhi saath lekar chali... Chahe wo ek achhi bahu, biwi aur Bhabhi ke roop mein Nandini ho, joki mera pasandida kirdaar bhi rahi story ka... Ya fir ek sache Dost ke roop mein Yash... Ya fir Mental Problems se jhoojhti Neha joki baad mein Vishal ke Pyaar ke dhaage mein bandh gayi... Aur bhi bahut se kirdaar aaye gaye jinmein se kuchh negative vibes bhi laaye... Par ant mein saari negativity ka khaatma hua, yahaan tak ki Vicky ka bhi hriday parivartan ho hi gaya...

Aapko bahut bahut congratulations Lekhak saahab, iss masterpiece story ko anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye... Daily ek update dena, aur weekend par do, apne aap mein bahut kathin kaarya hai par poori story mein aapne schedule banaye rakha jiske liye aapki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Pyaar, Gam, Khushi, Nafrat, aur bahut se Emotions ke rang mein rangi ek behad hi khubsurat kahani thi ye jisse apne lekhan ke jaadoo se aur bhi behatreen bana diya writer saahab ne...

Thanks fir completing this Excellent Story Bhai... Keep Writing... :thumbup:
 
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Jaguaar

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Urri baba estory khatam bhi ho gayi... Bahut bahut :congrats: Jaguaar saahab ek aur kahani poora karne ke liye... Coming to some last updates... Raj aur Sonal ki prem kahani mein ek ke baad ek kayi mushkilen aayin jismein kabhi Sonal aur kabhi Raj ke Pyaar ka imtihaan hua par dono ne hi apne pyaar ki taqat se unn sabhi problems ka saamna kiya aur ant mein Krishna & Megha ke roop mein dono ko do behad hi anmol tohfe bhi praapt huye...

Ishita – Samar aur Aarav – Payal ki bhi jodiyan ban gayi aur wo bhi apne apne ghar mein settle ho gaye... Idhar Sonal ka apni beti ka naam Megha rakhna ek baar firse dil ko chhoo gaya... Ant mein Dono bachon ka Raj ko pareshaan karna aur unki mastiya bahut hi pyaari thi... Un dono ke zariye aakhir Kapoor House mein ek nayi hi khushi janam jo le chuki thi...

Khair, ek bahut hi khubsurat kahani ka ek bahut hi khushnuma ant jahaan Raj ko apne intezaar aur mehnat se Sonal mili wahin Sonal ko apne Bepanah Ishq ke chalte Raj... Kahaan to Raj apni zindagi se munh mod chuka tha aur kahaan aaj uske ghar mein do bachon ki kilkariyan goonj uthi...

Ye kahani Sonal ki hi to thi, Raj jo khushiyon aur Pyaar se apna naata tod chuka tha, Megha ke jaane ke gam mein shayad khud ko hi bhula chuka tha, usse ek naya jeevan diya Sonal ne... Apna patni hone ka har farz poora kiya aur kabhi badle mein Raj se kuchh nahi maanga... Nateejtan aakhir mein Raj bhi Sonal ke aage apna dil haar baitha... Wahin jab Sonal ki Memory gayi tab Raj ne apne Pyaar ki pariksha di aur poore ankon se usmein khara bhi utra...

Majorly Raj aur Sonal ke Prem Prakran par bani ye kahani kayi aur kirdaaron ko bhi saath lekar chali... Chahe wo ek achhi bahu, biwi aur Bhabhi ke roop mein Nandini ho, joki mera pasandida kirdaar bhi rahi story ka... Ya fir ek sache Dost ke roop mein Yash... Ya fir Mental Problems se jhoojhti Neha joki baad mein Vishal ke Pyaar ke dhaage mein bandh gayi... Aur bhi bahut se kirdaar aaye gaye jinmein se kuchh negative vibes bhi laaye... Par ant mein saari negativity ka khaatma hua, yahaan tak ki Vicky ka bhi hriday parivartan ho hi gaya...

Aapko bahut bahut congratulations Lekhak saahab, iss masterpiece story ko anjaam tak pahunchane ke liye... Daily ek update dena, aur weekend par do, apne aap mein bahut kathin kaarya hai par poori story mein aapne schedule banaye rakha jiske liye aapki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Pyaar, Gam, Khushi, Nafrat, aur bahut se Emotions ke rang mein rangi ek behad hi khubsurat kahani thi ye jisse apne lekhan ke jaadoo se aur bhi behatreen bana diya writer saahab ne...

Thanks fir completing this Excellent Story Bhai... Keep Writing... :thumbup:
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Aapne kuch jyaada hi tareef kardi.

Pyaar kiya hai toh usse nibhana padhta hai. Jo Raj aur Sonal ne bakhubi dikhaya hai. Sonal ne pyaar kiya usse ekdum sachhe mann se nibhaya aur Raj ko uske atith se bahar laayi. Raj ne pyaar kiya toh mushkil waqt mein apne pyaar ka saath nhi choraa. Humesha uske saath raha.

Aur rahi bachhon ki baat unki yehi choti choti shaitaaniyon se hi toh ghar mein raunak rehti hai. Krishna aur Megha ki yehi shaitaaniyan sabke dil mein khushi bharti thi.

Nandini aur Yash ka character mera bhi pasandida thaa. Unhone ek sachhe dost ka parichay diya hai. Har musibat mein dono ne apne dost ka saath diya.

Kahani ko pasand karne ke liye shukriyaaa.
 
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Aapne kuch jyaada hi tareef kardi.

Pyaar kiya hai toh usse nibhana padhta hai. Jo Raj aur Sonal ne bakhubi dikhaya hai. Sonal ne pyaar kiya usse ekdum sachhe mann se nibhaya aur Raj ko uske atith se bahar laayi. Raj ne pyaar kiya toh mushkil waqt mein apne pyaar ka saath nhi choraa. Humesha uske saath raha.

Aur rahi bachhon ki baat unki yehi choti choti shaitaaniyon se hi toh ghar mein raunak rehti hai. Krishna aur Megha ki yehi shaitaaniyan sabke dil mein khushi bharti thi.

Nandini aur Yash ka character mera bhi pasandida thaa. Unhone ek sachhe dost ka parichay diya hai. Har musibat mein dono ne apne dost ka saath diya.

Kahani ko pasand karne ke liye shukriyaaa.
Jaguar sir jab kabhi new story start kro to mention kr dena please
 
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Abhishek Kumar98

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Meri pichli teen kahaniyon ko aapka pyaar aur support dene ke liye bahot bahot shukriya. Main yeh chauthi kahani start karne jaa raha hu umeed hai isko bhi aapka pyaar aur support milega.
Iss story ke kuch scene dusri story se match lagegi par baad mein puri alag hogi.
Bhai aap jo thread incomplete hai wo complete kardoge kya kyunki aapki writing skills bahut achhi hai
 

Abhishek Kumar98

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Kaash mein aisa kar saktaa. Par kisi aur ki story ko likhna aasan nhi.
Bhai koshish karo I am damn sure ki aap bahut achhi likhoge aur complete bhi karoge abhi ek thread dekhi Maine Dil ka raja part 2 bich me hi chhod di writter ne jabki ek part complete ho chuka tha fir please Bhai try aur kisi se message kaise karte Xforum par
 
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Jaguaar

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Bhai koshish karo I am damn sure ki aap bahut achhi likhoge aur complete bhi karoge abhi ek thread dekhi Maine Dil ka raja part 2 bich me hi chhod di writter ne jabki ek part complete ho chuka tha fir please Bhai try aur kisi se message kaise karte Xforum par
Mere writing ko pasand karne ke liye Thank You.

Par Dil ka Raja Kalyansurya bhai ne likhi hai woh incomplete nhi hai. Writer ne inform kiya tha ke unki tabiyat bahot hi jyaada kharab hai woh hospitalized hai. Kuch samay pehle unke spinal cord ka koi treatment hua tha aur shayad usi ko leke koi problem hui hai.

Kisi se XF pe baat karne ke liye pehle 50 posts karne hoge. Aur phir jisse baat karni hai uske saath Start Conversation pe click karo aur baat karo
 

Abhishek Kumar98

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Mere writing ko pasand karne ke liye Thank You.

Par Dil ka Raja Kalyansurya bhai ne likhi hai woh incomplete nhi hai. Writer ne inform kiya tha ke unki tabiyat bahot hi jyaada kharab hai woh hospitalized hai. Kuch samay pehle unke spinal cord ka koi treatment hua tha aur shayad usi ko leke koi problem hui hai.

Kisi se XF pe baat karne ke liye pehle 50 posts karne hoge. Aur phir jisse baat karni hai uske saath Start Conversation pe click karo aur baat karo
Thanks bro
 
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