Romance Beparwah Khud sy

[Chinturocky]

Nice update

 

[Akil]

Intazaar

 

[Akil]

Bro next update kab aayega

 

[Khanji]

Update:-2​

Main darwazy py khara sab kuch dekh rha tha k taya abu unkay samny aisy hath q jor rahy hain.
Tabhi us admi ki nazar mujh pe pari.
Admi:- Tu kin hai be?
Tabhi taya ny meri taraf dekha aur bolay.
taya:- Yeh Saim hai mery bhai ka beta.
Admi:-Jo bhi hai hamse tunay jo wada kiya hai woh pura krna pary ga warna anjaam tu janta hai
Woh yeh keh kr chaly gaye. Main unko jaty huway delh rha tha mujhy abhi kich samajh nahi aa rha tha k kya ho rha hai yeh saab.
jb woh chaly gaye main Taya abu k pass gya aur unsy pocha.
Main:- Yeh log kon thy aur ap insy maafi q maang rahy thy?
Taya ki ankhoon mein bohat teez ansoo agaye thy aur woh zameen py beth k ronay lagy.
Main ny unko pakra Aur bola.
Main:- Arey ap aisy q roo rahy hain mujhy btaiye main hun na saab theek ho jaye ga.
phir unhone jo btaya usy sun k mery pairon k nichu sy zameen nikal gai
Aur bahir sy kisi k girnay ki awaz ai main Aur taya Abu bahir ki taraf bhagy to tai ammi thin jo k shayad hamri bat sunn rahi thi aur shock sy behosh hogai thi.
Main ny unko uthaya Aur jaldi sy kreebi hospital ly k janay laga itni der mein Meri Ammi Aur Tenno behny aa gai
Woh bhi tai ammi ki halat dekh k bohat ghbra gai
Main Aur taya abu dono unko ly k Hospital pohanch gaye Aur unko admit krwa diya
Chandni Ko Ayesha ny aur Ambreen ko Ammi ny sambhala huwa tha.
thori der mein doctor aye aur Kaha k ghbrany wali koi baat nahi hai shock ki waja sy behosh hogai thi.
shock to wesy mujhy b laga tha Yeh saab sun kr.
Mery dimag mein phir woh baat aa gai Aur main ny ek baar Ayesha ki taraf dekh jo mujhy hi delh rahi thi Main us sy nazre chura k bahir Agya.

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[mashish]

Yeh kahani hy ek choty sy sheher ki jis mein ek larka rehta tha jis ka name Saim tha usko ghr mein sab bohat pyaar krty thy q k woh apnay maa baap ka eklota beta tha uski cosins to jesy us py jaan chirakti thi lekin uski zindagi kesy badly aur woh Ladlay sy Zaleel hogya..



Subha ka waqat tha chiriya chehak rahi thi thandi thandi hawa chal rahi thi ek ghr k kamre mein larki soo rahi thi duniya bhar ki massomiyat usky chery py thi tabhi uski ankh mein ansoo aty hain aur who rony lag jati hy tabhi usky sath mein leti hoi larki usko dekhti hy aur ghabra k usko uthati hy

Larki:- Api utho kya huwa api.

Tabhi who larki uthti hy aur samny apni behen ko dekh k galay laga leti hy

Larki:- Api app theek hain kya aj phir wahi sapna dekha

Api:-Hmmm

Larki:- chalo koi baat nae sab theek ho jaye ga.

Api:- Mujhy nahi lagta k kuch bhi sahi hoga.

Larki;-ap aisy q soch rahi hain hamesha acha sochna chahiye.

Api alag ho kar uth jati hy aur washroom chali jati hai….



Intro—

Ahmed khan:- ghr k sab sy bary aur Head of family

Uzma khan:- Wife of Ahmed:- Ek khubsoorat aur akalmand aurat

Inki 3 betiyaan hain.



Ayesha:- sab sy bari Beti:= Abi university mein hy graduation compelte honay mein 2 semester baki hain



Ambreen:- Ayesha sy 2 saal choti hy aur apni bari behen sy bohat pyaar krti hy. Yeh bhi university mein parhti hy 4th semester chal rha hy



Teesri beti hy chandni yeh abhi school jati actually yeh Ahmed sahib ki burahpy ki ashqi ka nateeja hy.

Yeh tha Ahmed ki family ka intro inka ek aur bhai aur 2 sisters hain



Ajaz khan;- Yeh hain Amed k choty bhai Apny bhai k sath hi kam krty hain

Shazia khan:- yeh hain Ajaz khan ki biwi bohat sundar hain yeh aur sab ko milla kr rakhti hain is k liye inho ny boaht kuch kiya hy.

Saim khan:- Yeh hai Ajaz aur shazia ka eklouta beta…aur apny khandan ka bhi ek hi larka hy



Fariha aur parveen yeh dono inki sister hain inka aur family ka intro story mein mil jaye ga

nice intro

 

[mashish]

UPDATE:-
Yeh bat hy tb ki jab Saim abhi 18 ka huwa tha to uskay ghr k halat bohat hi khrab thy usky papa aur taya ji ka business bohat ghatay mein ja rha tha jiski wajah sy taya ji aksra shrab pinay lagy thy who takreeban har waqat nashi mein rehty thy jb Saim k papa ny apnay bhai ko in halat mein dekha to unki fikar or barh gai kyun k dono families ek sath rehti thi aur unki betiyan thi unki aur unko koi asha ki kiran nahi nazar aa rahi thi

Yeh main Hun saim main us waqat ek software house mein kam rha tha coding wagera ka mujhy shuru sy shok tha main bhi apnay ghr k halat sy bakhoobi wakif tha lekin mujhy yakeen tha k papa kuch na kuch kr ly gy lekin meri yeh umeed tot gai jab papa ko heart attack aya aur hum inhy govt hospital ly gaye jahan unka ilaj sahi tareeky sy nahi huwa unki jaan to bach gai lekin unke jism ka ek hissa kam krna band kr gya yeh ek bohat mushkil waqat tha hum py tha ab sari zimedari mery kandhoon py agai

Ek raat ko main chat py khra soch rha tha agy kya kroon kesy sab kesy hoga tabhi koi upper aya jisy dekh k main apnay sary dukh bhool gya Yeh this mery dill ki dhadkan Ayesha jo kay mery taya ki beti mery sy 3 saal bari hy mujhy woh bohat pyaari lagti thi bilkul Barbie ki tarhan

Ayesha:- Kya huwa kahan khoya hy( mery pass aty huwe mujhy apni taraf khoya huwa sa dekh k)

Saim:- Are kahin nahi bs wesy hi kuch soch rha tha(hosh mein aty huwe)

Ayesha:- Tu pareshan hy?

Saim:- Are nahi bs wesy hi apko lag rha hun shayad abu ki wajah sy

Ayesha:- Saab theek ho jaye ga tu bs yakeen rakh khud py.

Saim:-Jb tk ap mery sath hain main kabhi kamzor nahi parh sakta.

Ayesha:- Main to hamesha sy Tumhary sath hun Tum to sabki jaan ho. Chalo ab soo jao Subha tumhy kam py bhi jana hai.



Woh keh k chali gai

Woh bs ek bhai cousin k toor py mujhy aisy pyaar krti thi lekin mery dill mein unkay liye muhabbat thi jo shayad main kabhi na keh paon.



Main soo gya mujhy subha ambreen uthany I



Main:- Kya sab uth gaye



Ambreen:- Han uth gaye hain bs Tum reh gaye ho isi liye tumhe uthany I hun



Main:- Ok main nahne ja rha hun

Ambreen:= main ny tumhare kaprey nikal diye hain nichy ammi aur chachi wait kr rahi hain



Main:- Tumny q kya main ly leta kapry



Ambreen:- mujhy acha lagta hy tumhara kam krna bs ab koi baat nae saab wait kr rhy hain



Main naha k nichy chala gya aur Sab bahir bethy thy



Main ammi k pass gya aur unko salam kiya aur unhone mery sir py hath rakha aur kaha

Ammi:- mera pyara beta hamesha kush reh



Main:- meri khushi to ap sab k sath hy



Yeh kehtyhuwe main tai ji pass gya aur unko sy pyaar liya

Phir papa k pass gya unko dekh k main thora sad hogya aur unsy halchal poch k bahir aya to mujhy Ayesha nichy ati hoi dikhi jisy dekh meri ankhoon mein chamak agai unhone ny bhi mujhy dekh aur smile di aur jakay ammi aur tai ji sath beth gai

Ambreen ny mujhy nashta diya who mujhy dekh rahi thi uski ankhein bohat kuch bol rahi thi jisy main samjhna nahi chah rha tha….



Phir main nashta kr k kam py chala gya



Abi main itna kama rha tha k ghr aram sy chal rha tha lekin dono behno aur mera college band hogya tha paisy na honay ki wajah sy



Main jb office gya to mujhy mery ek colleague ny bata k sir ny tumhy office mein bulaya hy main darta huwa sir k office mein gya jahan ek aur admi betha tha jisko dekh main ny hello kiya aur ja k boss k samny betha gya



Sir:-So saim kesy ho

Main:- ek dam barhiya sir.

Sir:- saim yeh hain Mr mohsin yeh aj yahan ek khas kam sy aye hain

Mainy ny unki taraf dekha phir sir bolay

Sir:- saim tumny jo App bnai hy main inko uska moudule dikhaya tha unko who bohat pasand I hy aur yeh uski lauch krny ko tyaar hain

Main yeh sun k bohat khush huwa Ab mujhy asha ki kiran nazar aa rahi thi shayad ab hamry halat badly gy

Main :- Sir yeh to bohat khushi ki baat hy sir

Sir:- Lekin inki ek shat hy

Main:- Kya sir?

Sir kuch bolty us sy pehly who bol parha

Mohsin;- Hum isko apni company k name sy launch kry gy…

Mujhy yeh sun k gussa agya

Main:- yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta aur sir main ny apko kaha tha na k main ny k yeh app launch hogi to mery name sy hogi

Mohsin:- Mooh mangy paisy doon ga

Main:-ap mandi mein nahi aye MR mohsin aur main ny yeh app bechny k liye nahi bnai hy…..



Main yeh keh k gusse sy bahir agya aur office sy nikal gya

Mujhy gussa aa rha tha main kyun usko apni mehnat dun kyun apna sapna usko dy dun us app ko main launch kr sakta tha lekin servers ko khrindy k liye abhi paisy nahi thy company ka loan agy hi bohat tha mujh py

Main siddha ghr ki taraf nikal gya jb ghr gya to ghr ka darwaza khula tha ek black car bahir khari thi main sochy laga yeh kon hosakta hy main andr gya aur jb drawing room mein to wahan taya abu bethy thy aur unky samny 3 admi bethy thy aur taya abu unky agy hath jor rhy thy………………..

TO BE CONTINUED…………

awesome update

 

[mashish]

Update:-2​

Main darwazy py khara sab kuch dekh rha tha k taya abu unkay samny aisy hath q jor rahy hain.
Tabhi us admi ki nazar mujh pe pari.
Admi:- Tu kin hai be?
Tabhi taya ny meri taraf dekha aur bolay.
taya:- Yeh Saim hai mery bhai ka beta.
Admi:-Jo bhi hai hamse tunay jo wada kiya hai woh pura krna pary ga warna anjaam tu janta hai
Woh yeh keh kr chaly gaye. Main unko jaty huway delh rha tha mujhy abhi kich samajh nahi aa rha tha k kya ho rha hai yeh saab.
jb woh chaly gaye main Taya abu k pass gya aur unsy pocha.
Main:- Yeh log kon thy aur ap insy maafi q maang rahy thy?
Taya ki ankhoon mein bohat teez ansoo agaye thy aur woh zameen py beth k ronay lagy.
Main ny unko pakra Aur bola.
Main:- Arey ap aisy q roo rahy hain mujhy btaiye main hun na saab theek ho jaye ga.
phir unhone jo btaya usy sun k mery pairon k nichu sy zameen nikal gai
Aur bahir sy kisi k girnay ki awaz ai main Aur taya Abu bahir ki taraf bhagy to tai ammi thin jo k shayad hamri bat sunn rahi thi aur shock sy behosh hogai thi.
Main ny unko uthaya Aur jaldi sy kreebi hospital ly k janay laga itni der mein Meri Ammi Aur Tenno behny aa gai
Woh bhi tai ammi ki halat dekh k bohat ghbra gai
Main Aur taya abu dono unko ly k Hospital pohanch gaye Aur unko admit krwa diya
Chandni Ko Ayesha ny aur Ambreen ko Ammi ny sambhala huwa tha.
thori der mein doctor aye aur Kaha k ghbrany wali koi baat nahi hai shock ki waja sy behosh hogai thi.
shock to wesy mujhy b laga tha Yeh saab sun kr.
Mery dimag mein phir woh baat aa gai Aur main ny ek baar Ayesha ki taraf dekh jo mujhy hi delh rahi thi Main us sy nazre chura k bahir Agya.

nice update

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff