Incest BERUKHI(Rudeness Turn Into Love)

[Mithilesh373]

And he can go to criticise other stories and there you go support him without even reading, and here you talk the contrary? Sunil gave example of his last story and he is free to give his opinion. Yesterday I saw how on Casinar's thread mithilesh criticised then why you did not say the same to him?

Plz bhai apas me na jhagdo.. Mera thread kharab ho jayega...


Bass thode der me update deta hu. Kuchh correction karne ke bad...

 

[Mithilesh373]

 

[Mithilesh373]

 

[Mithilesh373]

For new story Mithilesh373

Hope this story will touch our hearts
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Keep going
We will wait for the first update​

Waiting bhai for your new story and congratulation

Maine xp pe sabse pahle jo story padi thi wo yahi thi..par xp pe ye incomplete thi...agar ye wahi hai to complete jarur karna and ye sach me bhaut acchi story hai...kb se start kar rahe ho

congratulations bhai

for new story

congratulations for new thread waiting for first update

Chatttakkkkk !

Yeh pehla word tha berukhi ka .... story bariya tha , writer 20% complete karke phir nahi lota .....

According to writer yeh story naya hai , ok waiting and congrats for the new thread ....

for the new story ......

bro 4 new thread
Ab Update Ka intazar hai

Tumse incest story nahi likhi jayegi yaar Story ka prefix change karke isko Romance karo.
Kyunki mujhe pata hai tum isme bhi sex scene nahi dikhane wale or apni pahle wali story KIDNAP ki tarha isme bhi readers ke sath KLPD karoge.
Yaar agar incest story me sex scene nahi dikha sakte to prefix incest rakh ke kyun klpd karte ho.

Tumse to kuch kehna hi bekar Hai Kyunki mujhe pata hai ye Naam Ke Liye prefix insect hai but Story pure Romance Rahegi.

Congratulations.

Go ahead. Post your story bro.

Congratulations for your thread bro... Go on...

Update posted friends...

 

[Mithilesh373]

Friends mujhe sirf 10 admi ka bhi comment regular milega to mai khushi khusi likh sakta hu... Nahi to interest nahi aayega likhne me... Agar jinko story achha ya bura jo bhi lage comment jarur kare...

 

[Innocent]

Fabulous update bhai... Very good... Keep writing....

 

[Raja thakur]

Fantastic updates bhai

 

[Stone cold]

Update 2....

Aise hi abb lucky 8th me chali gayi thi aur rohit 11th me... Rohit bahut handsome ho gaya tha... Lucky bhi bahut sundar thi dudh jaise gori masum chehra chhote chhote bal hamesha ladko wali kapda pahanti thi

Abb aage...
Lucky jab thoda samajhdar hui to usko pata chal gaya kyo rohit uske sath Berukhi se pesh aata hai... Jabki baad me sabse achha se bat karne laga tha sirf lucky ko chhod kar...
Aaj school se chhuti hote hi lucky apni buss chhod kar apne rohit bhaya ke pass chali jati hai parking area me kyo ke rohit apna bike se aata jata hai... Aur koi bhi aisa din nahi tha jiss din lucky apne bhaiya ko manane ki aur viswas dilane ki kosis na kare ki wo usse kitna pyar karti hai...
Idhar Rohit jaise hi apne bike ke pass jata hai waise hi usse pichhe se lucky ki Aawaj aati hai...
Lucky - bhaiya mai bhi aapke sath ghar chalungi...
Rohit apni bahan ki baat ko ansuna kar ke begair uski taraf dekhe bike pe baith jata hai aur usko ghuma kar jane ko hota hai tabhi lucky uske aage aa jati hai... Aur phir se wahi bolti hai...
Iss bar rohit bina usse dekhe gusse se bolta hai...
Rohit - tum kyo bar bar mujhse bolne ki kosis karti ho... Mai kitna bar bola hu mujhse bolne ki kosis mat karna... Mujhe tumse koi bat nahi karni hai.. Abb chalo hato nahi to kuchal kar chala jaunga...
Rohit ka baat sun kar aaj lucky bhi jid me aa jati hai aur bolti hai...
Lucky - bhaiya mai nahi hatungi..
Lucky Itna bol kar uske bhari bharkam bike ke agle tire ke niche apni ek pair laga deti hai...
Ye dekh kar rohit krurta aur nirdai ki had par karte huye bike start kar ke uske pair pe agla tire chadha deta hai aur bike ko ghumane ke liye ussi wakt handle ko mod deta hai jisse lucky ki chhoti komal si pair ka hal aisa hota hai jaise koi gile kapde se pani nichodta hai... Uski pair ki bahut sari skin chhil jati hai... Aur ussi ke sath lucky itni jor se chikhti hai ki waha jo parking me kuch log inka tamasha dekh rahe the unka dil dahal jata hai lucky ki dard bhari Aawaj sun kar... Lucky wahi pe dard se bilakne lagti hai... Ghirni ke tarah tarfarane lagti hai... Lekin rohit ke sar pe itna nafrat sawar tha usko kuchh sunai nahi deta hai aur wo bina pichhe dekhe bike lekar nikal jata hai...
lucky abb wahi pe baith kar fut fut kar rone lagti hai... Aur kisi tarah apni kampati hatho se shoe kholti hai aur waise hi roti hui apni pair ko usme se nikalti aur Jalan kam karne ke liye Uspe bar bar funk bhi Marti hai...
Udhar rohit ghar ja raha tha tabhi wo 5 minute ke bad bike ko mod liye phir se school ke taraf...
Idhar waha pe khadi ladki daud kar Lucky ki help ke liye aati hai tabhi unsabko hatati hui lucky ki do dost aati hai jo lucky ko iss halat me dekh kar thoda ghabra jati hai... Phir usko apni car me ladkio ki help se baithati hai... Aur usko lekar Sidhe hospital chali jati hai... Aur ek do minute ke andar sab waha se gayab ho jate hai...
Tabhi Rohit waha aa jata hai jaha abb koi nahi tha... Phir wo Sidhe ghar chala gaya...
Idhar lucky jis car me thi wo gadi Sidhe hospital ja kar ruki aur phir uski jakham ka treatment hua... Aur tab ja kar usko rahat mili... Phir lucky ki dost paisa pay karke jo Dawa uske liye likha gaya tha wo leli aur phir lucky ko car me baitha kar ghar ke liye nikal gai...
Lekin raste me uski saheliya bhal bura bolna suru kar deti hai rohit ko.. Kyo ki unko ussi wakt khabar chal gaya tha ki rohit hi uski pair ko bike se kuchal diya tha...
Lucky frnd1 - lucky tumhara bhai kitna janwar hai kya hal kar diya tumhari pair ka thoda bhi usme Insaniyat nahi hai koi bhai bhala apni bahan ke sath aisa karta hai...
Lucky apni saheli ki bat sun kar bolti hai..
Lucky - please tumlog mujhe yahi utar do nahi to mere bhaiya ko kuchh bhi mat bolo..
Lucky frnd2 - ha thik hai thik hai bhaiya ki gulam... Hamlog kuchh nahi bolenge apke duniya ke sabse achha bhaiya shree ko..
Lucky frnd2 ki naam geeta hai aur Lucky frnd1 ki naam Sunita hai... Geeta bolti hai...
geeta - aare Sunita yaar maine duniya me iski jaisi pagal ladki kahi nahi dekhi hu... Tumko pata mera bhaiya mujhse thoda bhi ucha Aawaj me bolta hai to mai usse papa se itna pitai aur dant khilwati hu tum soch bhi nahi sakti ho... Aur ek ye pagal hai... Pata na kyo apne bhaiya ke pichhe padi rahti hai jabki wo isse dekhna bhi nahi chahta hai... Aur aaj hi dekh lo iske sath kya kiya... Agar mera bhai hota to iske liye mai usko unlimited papa se pitai khilwati...
Sunita - ha yaar mera bhi aisa hi hai... Agar mera bhai bhi mujhe kuchh krta hai to mai uska badla jarur leti hu... Mujhe bhai ka naraj hone ka koi parwah nahi hota hai...
Lucky - meri ek baat jarur yaad rakhna tum dono... Aaj kal ke khudgarz jamana me ek bhai apni bahan se jitna sacha pyar kar sakta hai utna koi bhi nahi kar sakta hai.. Ek Bhai apni bahan ki jan ke Rakchha ke liye khushi khushi apne sine pe hazar goli bhi kha sakta hai... Iss liye mere liye bhai ka pyar duniya ki sabse Anmol pyar hai... Aur ek din jarur aayega jab bhaiya bhi mujhe ek bahan ki tarah pyar karenge.
Tum dono bahut khush nashib ho jo tumse tumhara bhai bat karta hai tumhare sath hai...
Mera bhaiya to mujhe dekhte bhi nahi hai...
Itna bolte hi lucky bhavuk ho jati hai aur uski ankho se Anshu chhalal jati hai...
aise hi thode bahut bat hota hai phir lucky ki ghar bhi aa jata hai... dono saheliya lucky ko le kar ghar de door tak jati hai... Aur Door bell bajati hai... Door Anjali hi kholti hai aur dekhti hai lucky apni dono frnd ke kandho ke sahare khadi hai tabhi usse lucky ki ek pair me patti bandhi hui dikhti hai jisse anjali ghabra jati hai... Aur phir puchhti hai..
Aajali - ye kya hua meri beti ki pair me...
Geeta - aunty sab batati hu pahle andar chaliye... Phir sunita aur geeta usko andar hall me le jati hai... Aur usko sofe pe baitha deti hai...
Aur isse pahle lucky ki dost kuchh bolti usse pahle hi lucky bolti hai...
Lucky (jhut) - mom mai jab school ke chhuti hone pe class room se nikal rahi thi tabhi kissi ke bhag daud ke wajah se ek bench meri pair par gir gaya jisse meri pair me chot lag gai..aur abhi mai bilkul thik aap chinta na kare...
Lucky ki bat sun kar sunita aur geeta apni sar pit leti hai unko lucky abb sach me pagal lag rahi thi... Itna kuchh hone bad bhi wo apni mom ko apne bhaiya ke bare me kuchh nahi boli...
Dusre taraf rohit first floor pe sidhi ke pass khada ho kar sab sun liya tha.. Aur phir wo apne room me chala gaya... Lekin lucky ke liye uska dil thoda bhi nahi dukha...
Idhar niche lucky ki dono saheli thode der bad apni ghar chali gai...
Lucky ko apni kapda change karna tha to wo anjali se bolti hai...
Lucky - mom mujhe mere room me jana hai... Itna bol kar lucky khadi ho gai aur huchak huchak kar chalne lagi...
Tabhi anjali aa kar usko uski room ki taraf le jati hai lekin lucky ki bhi room first floor pe hi tha to anjali usko sidhi chada deti hai aur phir uski room me le jati hai... Phir lucky bolti hai..
Lucky - mom mujhe yahi pe chai(tea) bhija dijiye.. Aur aap bilkul tension na le mai bilkul thik hu.
Aur phir uth kar dhire dhire apni bathroom chali jati hai... Aur anjali bhi uski chai ke liye kichen me chali jati hai.. Kyo ki lucky khud se bhi chal le rahi thi
Iss liye anjali ko thoda sa chinta kam hua tha...
Lucky bathroom se fresh ho kar aati hai aur phir apni kapda change karne ki sochti hai lekin wo bahut tight jeans pahni hui thi jo uski jakhmi pair se nikalna namumkin tha... Iss liye waise apni jeans pahni rahi aur apni room se nikal kar apne bhaiya ke door ke pass ja kar door knock karti hai...
Rohit (andar se) - ha aa jao...
Tabhi lucky andar jati hai jisse dekh kar rohit muh dusri taraf fer leta hai... Lucky apne bhaiya ke pass huchakti hui dhire dhire jati hai... Aur apne bhaiya se apni dukhti dil ki gahraiyo se bolti hai..
Lekin abhi apni muh se sirf bhaiya sabd hi boli thi ki uski ankho Anshu chalak gai..
Lucky - bhaiya aap mujhse baat kyo nahi karte hai. Abb mujhse aur bardat nahi hota hai aapka Berukhi. Abb meri isme kya galti hai ki mai apki bahan hu. Bhaiya app ek bar bas ek bar aap meri jan mang kar dekhiye mai khushi khushi apni jan aapke liye de sakti hu. Aap bas ek bar bol kar dekhiye.. Bhaiya Meri dil apke muhse se bahan Sunne ke liye tarap rahi hai. Pleasee bhaiya mujhse bat kijiye n!.. Pleaseee...
Rohit ko lucky ki kisi bhi bat pe koi fark nahi padta hai koi response nahi deta hai aur room se bahar jane lagta hai... Lekin tabhi lucky apne bhaiya ke pair pakad ke uske pairo me baith jati hai aur phir roti hui bolti hai...
Lucky - nahi bhaiya aap please mujhse baat kijiye apne se dur mat kijiye bhaiya nahi to aisa na ho ki mai aapse hamesha hamesha ke liye dur hi na ho jau... Please bhaiya... Itna bol kar lucky apne bhaiya ke pair apne sine se jakdi hui rone lagti hai...
Lekin rohit tha ki usse kuchh fark hi nahi pad raha tha log sahi kahte hai jiske pas jo chijh hota hai usse uska kadar hi nahi hota hai aur jab wo nahi hota hai tab uska kadar usse pata chalta hai aur phir uske liye jindagi bhar afsos karta hai...
Rohit lucky ki hath ko apne pairo se alag karta hai lekin lucky usse aise apni sine se jakdi hui thi jaise wo jindagi bhar wo bhaiya ke pair na chhode... phir bhi rohit apna pair chhuda kar room se bahar nikal jata hai Sidhe bike le kar ghar se nikal jata hai...
Idhar anjali kabse door ke pass chai le kar khadi thi aur unki bate sun rahi thi lekin kuch boli nahi undono ke bich me... Bas apni kismat pe ro rahi thi jo usse ye sab dekhna pad raha tha...
Udhar room me lucky apne bhaiya ko manane ke liye har tarah se fail ho gai thi abb usse ek bhi Ummid najar nahi aa rahi thi apne bhaiya ko manane ke liye... Iss liye abb wo faisla karti hai apne aap ko iss duniya se mita lene ki aur phir usse apne bhaiya ke har ek Berukhi second me hajar bar flash hone lagti hai uski dimag me aur Uspe junun sawar hone lagti hai apne aap ko Mitane ki aur phir ussi junun me idhar udhar dekhne lagti hai kaise wo apne aap ko mita le... Tabhi ek fruit Chaku dikhta hai aur wo usse utha leti hai apni ankhe band kar ke apne bhaiya ke Berukhi ka pal last bar yad karne lagti jisse uski sar pe apne aap ko khatam karne ki junun aur aane lagti hai aur wo Chaku Sidhe apni gala par rakh deti hai.
Idhar Anjali rohit ke jane ke bad usko ek tak dekhti rahti hai usko biswas nahi ho raha tha koi itna pathar dil kaise ho sakta hai jo apni masum chhoti si bahan se itna nafrat kare... Itna sochne ke bad Anjali lucky ke pass jane ke liye door ke samne khadi hoti hai tabhi uski jan uski halak me aa jati hai...

Fantastic Update Bhai

Pehla update hi Dhamakedar hai Bhai Itna Kuch ho Jane ke baad bhi Rohit ko Kuch farak Nahi pada ab Dekhte hai age Kuch badlau ate hai ya ye aise hi rahega

 

[Shainky]

Mast story hai bhai.
Ek suggestion hai ki story me berukhi to hai but story me dono ke bich romance v leke aana..
Waiting for next update

 

[Rahul]

Abhi thoda sa padha hai use bahen se nafrat hai jabtak dhokhe me tha pyar kiya ab malum hua bahen hai to nafrat kar raha hai achchi suruaat hai