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Thanks bro your comment and story medium size hoga...Mitlesh bhai story to apki kamal ki lag rahi hy wesa yeh short hy ya long
Thanks bro your comment and story medium size hoga...Mitlesh bhai story to apki kamal ki lag rahi hy wesa yeh short hy ya long
Congratulations for new thread
thanks bro for your valuable comment...All update are awesome
All updates are fantastic bro... Very good keep waiting bhai...
thanks dosto for your valuable comments...awesome fabulous update
super story
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thank you so much bro for your appreciation...Bro faboulos story kia plot banaya hai mind blowing full story logic ke saath chal rahi hai ek update parhta hu usi waqt 2 ki talab ho jati hai na zada fast na zada slow jhakas
thanks bro for you comment.. and casinor bhai ke story ke liye aapne apne view se sahi kaha tha... mujhe usse koi fark nahi padta..mujhe unke story ke bare me pata tha iss liye bol diya tha ki waisa hone wala hai.. jisse wo hone naa de. lekin wo samajhar the samajh gaye mai kya chahta tha... khair bro mere sath bane raho ... kuchh ulta palti lage to jarur bolo.kyo ki mai koi professional writer nahi hu... thanksfirst of all congrats bro for your new story . Kal maine dekha tha apka comment jo Casi ki story par kiya tha or maine reply bhi kiya tha. BtW maine tumhari iss story ke dono update pade or mujhe sachme bahut pasand aye . Ummid hai iss story ko pure incest or waisi hi rakhoge jaisi tum chahte ho . Dont change anything on readers pov , har reader ki apni demand hoti hai. and finally one more thing bro , Story ko lengthy rakhna 60-70 update ki to honi hi chahiye. story me passion or fellings develope hogi to majja ajayega is love story mai.
Best of LucK bhai and dont mind anything i said just look n forget if it hurts.
thanks bro for your valuable comment...Mast update bhai story mast ja rahe hai dekhte hai agle step kya lete hain rohit ne.... Bahut hii galat hua lucky ke sath
thanks bro for appreciation...Bro faboulos story kia plot banaya hai mind blowing full story logic ke saath chal rahi hai ek update parhta hu usi waqt 2 ki talab ho jati hai na zada fast na zada slow jhakas
THANKS BRO AAPKE APPRECIATION KE LIYE... AUR SACH KAHU TO MAI ITNE LOGO KA EXPECT NAHI KIYA THA APNE THREAD PE... AUR AAP SAB KE COMMENTS DEKH KAR MUJHE BAHUT KHUSHI HUA KI MERA STORY SACH ME AAP LOGO KO THODA THODA PASAND AAYA... AUR RAHA UPDATE KI BAAT TO WO AAP SAB DOSTO KE COMMENT PE NIRBHAR HAI ... JITNA COMMENT AAYEGA UTNA UPDATE AAYEGA... THANKS.Congrats brother for your new story..story is fantastic. Ab baat kare story ki to tumne rohit ki berukhi ko jis tarah dikhaya hai..wo kaafi dukhad hai..khas kar ke apni behan ke sath. And usne lucky ke sath bhaut bura kiya. Wo bejan jo usse ek baar bhai sunne ke liye apni jaan tak dene chali thi. Haalanki baad me rohit ko pachtawa hua.par jab usne socha ki maafi maangi jaay to guilt je kaaran maang nahi paaya aur jab puri tarah se socha tab tak lucky Hyderabad jaa chuki thi.us chakkar me rohit London chala gaya lucky taras rahi thi baat karne ke liye jo wo bachpan sah rahi hai.aur rohit London me guilt ke saath jee raha hai. Ab ye dekhna hai ki rohit kis tarah se maafi maangega. Jab koi nafrat itni tut kar kar sakta hai to wo pyar kitna tut kar karega..nice going update aise hi dete rahna. Koshish karna regular do. agae na de paso to jyada gap mat karna and update ka size yahi rakhna story insect rakhna lucky ki life me kisi ki entry mat karwana....baaki tathastu