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nice update..!!Par kismat ka kya .
Jab hum Machan par chad rahe the mujhe kisi ke rone ki awaz sunai di wo bbi Jani pehchani toh hum teeno ki hasi ruk gai aur hum jab upper pahuche toh abhay mera bhai akela baitha ro raha tha aur usse dekh kar hum teeno uske pass
Main ! Are abhay kya hua tujhe
Usne mujhe dekha aur mere se lipat gya
Main are bolega kya hua kyu baccho ki tarah ro raha hai.
Abhay ne anmol aur Priyanka ko dekha toh main samajh gai aur dono ko niche jane ko bol diya aur wo dono bina kisi sawal ke niche chale gye aur unke jane ke baad
Main usse apne ap se karte huye ab rona band kar aur bata kya baat hai.
Abhay meri ankhon main dekh kar
Main baap nahi ban sakta jiji main namard hoon jiji main namard hoon aur tej tej rone laga aur main ek dum shocked kya bolu kya sunu kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha
Main ! Par ye achanak kya kaise kuch samajh nahi aa raha abhay .
Abhay ! Wo didi maa kafi time se bol rahi hai bacche ka muh dikha de dikha de suru main maine aur surbhi ne ye faisla kiya tha ki 2 saal tak baccha nahi karenge par ab jab salo se koshish kar rahe hai toh nahi ho raha.
Main ! Haan toh kya hua doctor ko dikha kya problem hai sub sahi ho jayega.
Abhay ! Wahi toh kiya jiji maa ke kehne par surbhi ko doctor ko dikhaya toh uski sari reports normal hai.
Main ! Toh ye toh acchi baat hai phir pareshan kyu hai.
Abhay ! Jiji kami mere andar hai main usse maa nahi bana sakta jiji main ek namard hoon jo apni biwi ko baccha nahi de sakta jo apne pariwar ko varish nahi de sakta didi aur phir se rone laga .
Main ye sun kar phir se shocked reh gai ki mere bhai ka parivar aage nahi bhadega. .
Main chup thi aur abhay rota ja raha tha .
Main kehti bhi kya
Thodi der hum aise he baithe rahe tabhi
Abhay ! Par ap meri madad kar sakti ho
Main usko dekh kar
Main kaise bata Jo kar sakti hoon karungi apne bhai ke liye.
Abhay ! Mujhe dekh kar
Anmol
Main ek dum chouk gai
Main ! Isme anmol kya kar sakta hai
Abhay ! Wo jiji surbhi mujhe chhod kar chali jayegi agar usse baccha nahi mila toh .
Main ! Haan par anmol kya kar sakta hai isme.
Abhay ! Surbhi ko pata hai ki Main usse baccha nahi de sakta
Main ! Haan main samajh gai par isme anmol kya karega
Toh abhay ek line main ..
Abhay ! Surbhi chahati hai ki wo anmol se baccha paida kare aye ye sun kar.
Main ! Kyaaaaaaa kaha tune
Abhay ! Ye surbhi chahati hai jiji nahi toh wo mujhe chhod degi.
Main ! Wo pagal ho gai hai kya baccha hai Anmol abhi aur ye sub
Abhay ! Jab hum bacche ki koshish kar rahe the tab bhi wo anmol jaisa baccha chahati thi aur ab jab main usse baccha nahi de sakta toh wo anmol ka he baccha chahati hai
Main ! Haan par tu kaise
Toh
Abhay ! Kya karu jiji wo chali gai ya kisi ko bol diya toh kitni badnami hogi hamare ghar ki jiji aur main kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahunga .
Main ! Par is dar se tu surbhi ko Anmol se pregnant toh Kara dega par usse phir kaise apna payega socha hai puri zindagi sath kaise rahoge .
Abhay ! Kya karu jiji agar wo kisi aur ke sath kuch kar le usse accha hai ki ghar ki baat ghar main rahe aur jab kismat Main ye likha hai ye he sahi
Ab sub ap ke hath main hai hamare ghar ki izzat aur meri grahasti aur uski ankhon main phir se ansu aa gye aur main sochne par mazbur ho gai ki kya karu .
Tabhi abhay mere pairo main gir gaya
Abhay ! Meri grahasti bacha lo jiji bacha lo
Main ! Usse apne pair chhudate huye
Kya kar raha hai baccho ki sochne ka time toh de aur phir agar main tyar bhi ho jau tere liye toh anmol se bhi toh baat karni padegi samjhana padega baccha hai wo aur main mann main ye sochte huye ki baccha toh nahi hai par
Abhay ! Ap kuch mat bolo jiji wo surbhi khud kar legi kyu ki maine usse bola tha toh wo boli ki main khud anmol ko razi kar lungi ap srif jiji se baat kar lo kyu ki ristedari ka mamla hai
Main ye sun kar mann main Anmol ko toh choot dikha do chod wo apne ap lega
Abhay ! Kya soch rahi ho jiji
Main ek lambi sans lete hua mann main such toh ye tha main anmol ko ab apne aur priyanka ke alawa kisi ke sath nahi dekh sakti thi par apne chote bhai ke liye ye sub karne ko main tyar thi .
Abhay ! Bolo jiji
Main ! Theek hai surbhi se bol de meri taraf se izazat hai par srif bacche ke liye
Abhay mere hath pakad kar
Jiji tum ne meri grahasti bacha li jiji .
Main ! Par tu ek baar soch le kyu ki apni biwi ko kisi aur mard ke sath dekhne aue baccha hobe ke baad kya tu usse apna payega .
Abhay ! Apna lunga jiji kyu ki mere andar kami hai is liye aur main surbhi ko bhi bahut chahata hoon uske Bina reh nahi sakta
Wo chahati kisi aur se bhi baccha kar leti aur main ghar ki izzat ke liye usse bhi apna leta.
Main ! Jaisi teri marzi ab surbhi ko dekhna hai kaise sub ki nazar se bach kar anmol ko razi karti hai.
Ye sun kar abhay uth kar khada ho gya aur jate huye
Main surbhi ko ye khush khabri deta hoon ap baad main aa jana aur wo chala gya aur uske jane ke thodi der baad dono upper aa gye aur mujhe dekhne lage.
Priyanka ! Hum ne sub sun liya hai aur mama aur mami ke liye maine bhai ko apni kasam de di hai beshak mujhe na chode par mami ko chod kar unhe baccha de de kitna pyar karti hai hamari mami hame aur Nana nani kab se pote ke liye tadap rahe hai.
Toh maine apni dono bahen faila di aur dono ko apni bahon main bhar liya aur
Main ! Thanks mere baccho mere mayeke ke liye itna sochne ke liye
I love you both meri jaan
Anmol aur Priyanka
We Love you too maa is I love you main hawas nahi thi srif pyar tha ek dusre ke liye
Kai baar readers aise comment kar dete hai ki writer ki aage ka plot disclose ho jata hai is story main ye dusri baar hai jaha mujhe story change karni padegi kyu ki mera agla update ye he the ki milte hai Next part main par ab tum ne likha hai baki readers samjhenge ki maine tunhari baat maan li any way socha meri tarah seI think end sahi jagah kiya tha lekin agar extended kar hi rahe ho to surbhi pe hi khatam karo ya fir mami aur chachi pe jyada bhi mat badhao..over ho jayega..yaa fir inhi story ke nayak,mami aur chachi ko leke alag se part 2 story banao
bhai alag part karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai..aise hi story aage badhao..aise hi bahot achhi chal rahi hai story..aur aap story khatam karne ke bare me na socho..!!Kai baar readers aise comment kar dete hai ki writer ki aage ka plot disclose ho jata hai is story main ye dusri baar hai jaha mujhe story change karni padegi kyu ki mera agla update ye he the ki milte hai Next part main par ab tum ne likha hai baki readers samjhenge ki maine tunhari baat maan li any way socha meri tarah se
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