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Thank you. try karunga ki jald hi koi acchi story idea ke sath aa saku.Shandaar. Isi tarah dusri kahani ke sath aapka swagat hai.
Good to know that you have a big heart and open to the views of others.yes i don't mind either... i was already told that this story belongs to readers only. Everyone's opinion may be different, and so is your opinion.
actually i am really glad that you put your honest view here. thanks.
Same to you as wellHappy diwali to all my wonderful readers and all the members of this forum. stay happy and healthy.
Pleasure continuesChapter 24
Bahar ghup andhera tha aur shanti thi, par yaha par bedroom mein kaafi hulchal machi huyi thi. do dil aur jism ek ho gaye the aur iss sukh ka anand utha rahe the. Amar ne devika ki geeli chut ko apne muh mein bhar liya tha. Aahhhh ahhhuuhh ki siskiyan pure kamre mein gunjh rahi thi. amar ki zubaan tezi se devika ki chut par fir rahi thi aur chut ras ka anad le rahi thi.
Ab yeh aalam hi itna garam tha ki dono ke dono puri tarah kho chuke the. Devika madmast hokar amar ke sar par apne hath fer rahi thi, aur uski dono tange amar ki nangi peeth par cross karke zor se dabayi huyi thi taaki usko aur anand mile. Amar ke dono hath devika ki nipples ko zor zor se daba rahe the amar puri tezi ke sath chut chat raha tha, aur devika siskiyon ke sath garam hokar apni gaand bhi upar neeche kar rahi thi.
Aaj usko sex karte waqt puri tarah anand ka ehsaas ho raha tha, aur vah uss anad ko puri tarah maje lekar mahsus kar rahi thi. amar thoda upar aakar devika ke badan ko chum raha tha. Usne devika ko chum liya aur uski nipples tak pahuch kar usko chusne laga, vah daayine hath ki do anguliya devika ki chut mein daal kar hila raha tha, aur devika madhosh hokar siskiyan le rahi thi.
Badhti saanson ke sath usake stan bade ho rahe the aur tezee se gir rahe the kyonki usakee saansen lagaataar aur asamaan ho rahee thi. vah apane bade nipples ko sakht mahasoos kar saktee thi, aur usake badhate utsaah ke saath dhadak rahe the.
Amar ki anguliyan tezi ke sath devika ki chut ke andar bahar kar rahi thi, abb devika keliye apne aap ko sambhalana mushkil ho raha tha kuchh hi time mein vah uhhhhaahh karti huyi jadd gayi uski chut se pichkari huyi aur vah puri tarah nidhal si ho gayi, par phir bhi usko jo anad mila tha vah usko shabdon mein bayaan nahi kar sakti thi.
Vah tez saanson ko kaabu mein rakhti huyi apni aankhein bandh karke soyi huyi thi, amar uske baaju mein aakar so gaya aur uske samne dekhte huye muskurane laga. Devika kaafi sundar dikh rahi thi. uska bhara hua shareer aur naram makkhan jaisa badan jaise koi apsara ho aisa prateet kara raha tha.
Kuchh time ke baad devika ne apni saans ko kaabu mein karne ke baad apni aankhein kholi aura mar ko pyaar se uski taraf dekhta hua dekh kar uske gaalo par shrm ke mare laali chha gayi.
Amar ne thoda aage badhkar uske gaalo ko chum liya. Devika ke chehre par smile aa gayi.
Dono ekdusre ki baaho mein baahe daal kar so rahe the, devika ko amar ki baaho mein jaise apnapan lag raha tha, jis ke liye vah aaj tak taras rahi thi.
Aaj ki suhagraat dono ke liye jaise apni adhuri pyaas ko puri karna tha. Jo aaj tak unn ki life mein kabhi puri nahi ho saki thi, par vah dono milkar uss pyaas ko pura kar rahe the.
Devika ko apni jaangho ke beech ka geelapan abb bhi mehsus ho raha tha aur uski tann ki aag dheere dheere wapis sulag rahi thi.
Wah dheere se uthi aur amar ke pet se lekar uske nange badan ko chumne lagi. wah amar ki dono nipples ko baari baari chum rahi thi. devika ke komal honth amar ko kaafi anand de rahe the. Devika uske badan ko chumti huyi upar tak aayi aur apne honth ko dheere se amar ke honth par rakh diye.
Amar ke hath devika ki komal peeth par ghum rahe the aur dono ekdusre ke hoth ko betahasha chum rahe the. Devika ki naram choochiya apne pet ke upar mahsus kar amar abb uttejit ho raha tha.
Devika ab amar ke pet ke upar bethi huyi thi aur amar ke hath uski naram aur moti chuchiyon ko zor zor se daba rahe the.
Achanak hi devika ne apna ek hath amar ke lund par rakh diya, jo ki uske lehenge ko jaise cheer kar bahar aane ke liye taiyar tha.
Chapter 25
Devika abhi bhi amar ki jangho par baithi hui thi, aur amar ke hath uski mulayam peeth ko sehla rahe the aur vo devika ki kadak chuchiyo ko madhosh ho kar chus raha tha. Devika apni aankhein band kiye apni gaand ko amar ke underware ke upar se hi lund ko ghis rahi thi. uska ek hath amar ke sar ko dabaye huye tha aur dusre hath se usne amar ki underware ke andar hath daal kar uska lund pakad liya.
Uski hatheliyon mein amar ka garm lund aate hi devika ke shareer mein sihran si daud gayi. Vah lund ki garmi ko mahsus kar rahi thi. lund puri tarah kadak aur garam ho chukka tha aur uski rago mein daudta hua khoon uski gawahi de raha tha. Devika apne hatho se usko sehla rahi thi.
Yeh drishya sach mein kaafi kaamuk lag lag raha tha. Bahar andhere mein chand ki roshni dharti ko ujala de rahi thi aur yaha andar devika ka jism bhi koi chand ki roshni se kam nahi lag raha tha. Vah itni maadak lag rahi thi ki khud kamdev bhi usko dekh kar laar tapkane lage.
Dono ekdusre mein puri tarah kho gaye the aur apni suhagraat ka lutf utha rahe the. Devika abb amar ki janghon se neeche utari aura mar ke hothon ko halke se chum liya aur uske badan ko kiss karti huyi uski dono nipples ko chumne lagi. dheere dheere vah amar ka badan chumti huyi neeche aayi aur uski underware ko nikal ke phenk di.
Amar ka tannaya hua lund dekh kar devika kuchh der tak usko lalchi nazro se dekhti rahi aur usko zara sa hilane ke baad lund ke red brown top par abhi zuban phira kar usko geela kar diya. amar ne sote huye sisaki bhari ab devika usko zyada lubhana nahi chahti thi aur usne amar ka lund apne muh mein le liya aur chusne lagi. vah apni zubaan ko lund pe kisi expert ki tarah ghuma rahi thi. amar ka kadak lund abb kaafi bada ho gaya tha aur devika usko betahasha chus rahi thi. amar bhi ‘aise hi chuso..aahh..aahhh’ karke bolta hua siskiyan bhar raha tha.
Devika abhi bhi lund ko chus rahi thi aur apne ek hah se dono gotiyon ko masal rahi thi. ab amar ka lund puri tarah geela ho chuka tha aur uske liye ab sabra ka bandh bhi tutne laga tha. Vah ek jhatke mein khada hua aur devika ko pakad kar bed par sula diya, devika ki gulabi chut jaise lund keliye taras rahi thi.
Amar ne devika ki chut ko thoda chata aur apna thuk lagakar lund ko chut ke hotho par rakh kar ghisne laga. Devika ne garam lund ko apni chut par mahsus kiya to vah uchhal padi. Usne aahhahah karte huye apni dono jaanghon ko zor se daba diya. amar ne dheere se apna lund uski chut mein daal diya. aur dhakke lagane laga.
Aaahhhh…uhhmmhh karti huyi devika apni aankh bandh karke madhosh ho rahi thi. aura mar ka lnd uski chut mein apni jagah bana raha tha. Abhi devika ko jaise swarg ka anubhav mil raha tha uski dono taange amar ki peeth par cross karke usne gada di thi taaki vah aur anand lein sake. Amar pure zor se dhakke laga raha tha aur devika aaahh…uhhhh..aeehhh karti huyi apni gaand ko upar neeche karte huye amar ka pura sath de rahi thi.
‘aur zor se..aur zor se aaaahh aauuuhh..,’ devika madak swar mein bol rahi thi aur uski garam aahein amar ko aur uttejit karta hua zor se dhakke marne ke liye uksa rahi thi.
Dono ki saansein aur dhadkan buri tarah dhadak rahi thi, amar devika ke pass aaya aur usko chum liya aur uski bagal mein so gaya, devika ne apne ek pair ko amar ki jangho par rakh diya aur ekdum usko satt kar apna badan hilane lagi.
Amar bhi ab devika ki taraf ghum gaya tha, aur uski chuchiyo no daba raha tha. Vah jaan gaya tha ki devika kya chah rahi hia. Usne bhi apna ek pair devia ki janghon upar kar diya aur uske aur nazdeek jaa kar uski chut mein apna kadak lund dheere se daal diya. aahhhhh ki sisak devika ke munh se nikal gayi.
Ab dono ekdusre ki ankhon mein pyaar aur pyaas ke sath dekh rahe the aur amar tez dhakke lagata hua aur devika apni gaand ko upar neeche karti huyi maje le rahe the. Aaahhh uhhhh ummmhhh ki gunjh pure kamre mein gunjh rahi thi.
Dono apne neeche ke cheeknepan ko mahsus kar rahe the, aur ekdusre ko betahasha chum rahe the. amar ne ab apni speed ko aur tezz kar di thi kyuki ab vah jhadne wala tha. Uska garam veerya nikle usase pehle usne kaafi zor lagaya aur devika ke upar aa gaya. Uski rafter badh gayi thi aur Jaise hi uske lund se garm veerya nikla usne devika ki chut mein khali kar diya. devika ne bhi apni jaanghen kas kar amar ki peeth par rakh di thi taaki ek bhi bund bahar naa jaaye.
Amar ne devika ki sundar badan ko chum liya aur uski chuchiyo ko apne muh mein bhar li. Dono ki saanse fulne lagi thi. amar ab thak kar devika ke baaju mein so gaya. devika apne aapko aaj pura feel kar rahi thi. uski pyaas aaj itne saalo ke baad kisi ne bujhayi thi. baju mein so rahe amar ke saamne usne pyaar se dekha aur uske hath ko apne hath mein tham liya aur uske mathe ko chum liya.
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Subah devika ki neend khuli to bagal mein amar nahi tha. Suarj ki halki si roshni parde ko cheer kar room mein aa rahi thi. usne ghadi mein nazar daali subah ke 9 bajne aaye the. der se sone ki wajah se uski neend der se khuli thi. wah abhi uthne jaa hi rahi thi tab room ka darwaza khula.
Usne dekha to amar ek tray mein do coffee ke cup lekar aaya.room mein enter karte hi usne saamne mej par rakha hua radio chalu kiya. Koi romanitic gaana usmein aa raha tha. Amar ne kurta aur lehenga pehen rakha tha. Aur uske chehre par badi si smile thi.
‘good morning, tumhare liye amar special coffee.’ Amar haste huye bola.
‘tumne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi, main kar laati.’ Devika boli.
‘aaj tumhara iss ghar mein bahu ke roop mein pehla din hai aur tumko aaj koi bhi kaam nahi karna hai,’ amar ne kaha.
Devika usko halki si muskaan ke sath dekhti rahi.aaj tak kabhi usne itna special feel nahi kiya tha. Kuchh to tha amar mein jo usko apni taraf kheench raha tha.
Devika ne coffee ka ek sip liya aur boli ‘wow, amazing taste.’
amar ne sirf uske saamne smile ki. Vah janta tha ki uski life mein devika ka aana kitni badi baat thi. dono ekdusre ko achhi tarah samaj rahe the. koi jyada expectations nahi bas sirf ekdusre par vishwas aur pyaar hi dono ko ek kar ke sath laaya tha.
Amar ab devika ke pass jaakar baith gaya aur uske hath mein apna hath lekar kaha, ‘ main hamesha bas tumko itna hi khush dekhna chahta hu, tumhare har dukh ko dur kar dena chahta hu devika.’
Amar ne uthkar saamne table ke drawer mein se ek letter nikala aur devika ko thama diya. devika ne dekha vah ek college ke lecturer keliye confirmation letter tha. Usne sawaliya nazro se amar ko dekha jaise kuchh samajne ki koshish kar rahi ho.
‘main jaanta hu tumhare liye yah job kitna important hai, aur main nahi chahta ki sirf hamara ghar sambhalne keliye aur apne past experience ki wajah se tum apna job chhod do. Tumko apne sapne ko jeene ka pura haq hai. Aur main jaanta hu ki tum ghar aur job dono k acchi tarah se balance kar sakti ho. Bas apne sapne ko mat tutne do,’ amar ne devika ke an kahe sawal ka uttar diya.
Devika ki ankhein namm ho gayi kitna trust tha amar ko apne upar.aur uske liye apni career ka important bahut jyada tha. Vah apne aapko saabit karna chahti thi aura mar ne usko mauka diya tha pani sapno ki udaan bharne ke liye. uski life mein abhi tak sirf akelapan aur dukh hi tha par ab amar ke aane se usko yakeen tha ki vah dono ko dil, mannn aur tann se bhi ek hone se koi nahi rok sakta hai.
Usko amar pe betahasha pyaar aa raha tha. Aur vah amar ke seene se lag gayi usko abb khud se jyada amar par vishwas tha ki ab usko bhi betahasha chahne wala koi mil gaya hai.
Dodno premee ek dusre ke gale lage huye the,Aur radio mein shayad unn dono keliye hi koi gaana aa raha tha.
‘Chhalaki Chhalaki Chaandani MeinGaati Hai Deewaanagi,Beete Jo Baahon Mein Teri,Woh Hi Pal Hai Zindagi’
The 'Hopeful' End
Good story with fantastic writing skillsHello friends, aaj maine apni story ko complete kar ke aap ke naam kar diya hai. Main mere saare readers ko dil se thank you kehna chahta hu jinhone mujhe constantly support kiya. Aur uss wajah se main iss story ko complete kar paaya. Without all of u guys it’s impossible for me. Meri story sirf 25 updates mein hi complete ho gayi kyuki main nahi chahta tha ki 100-150 updates tak le jaakar readers ka mood main story ke half way mein hi khatam kar doon. Aur waise bhi zamana 20-20 ka hai. Main aasha karta hu ki aapko yeh story pasand aayi hogi. Hope ki koi nayi kahani lekar main wapis aapke saamne aa saku. Thanks to every readers.
It's my pleasure divyaa ji.Good to know that you have a big heart and open to the views of others.
That's the beauty of eagerness to learn and adapt to other's views as well.
May be one won't agree at all but respecting other's view makes you big and earns respect