Esa kyu kar rehe ho bro...pheli baat story likhini Nehi thi.. story middle me chod ke chale gye...
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Bhai tum to ayese bol rahe ho jaise ke writer ne tumse karja liya ho or ab chukane ke waqt bhag gya ho....Manta hun ke bura feel hota hai jab app ek story ko kaphi lambe samay se follow kar rahe ho or achanak se story band ho jaye...thora wasted sa feel hota hai, gussa ata hai or aap ise criticise v kar sakte ho lekin aap jis tarike se kar rahe ho wo thik nahi....writer ne aap ko nahi kaha tha ki uski story follow karo ya apne usse story likhne ke liye paise nahi diya. Apni narajgi jata sakte ho but mind your language !!
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Rahul Jaykar Bhai story band kardo aap shayad nahi chahate likhana aage to best hai kee official yaha pe comment kardo kee aap nahi continue karenge
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Likh liya hu bro bas thoda or bacha hai fir post karta hu.. believe rakho
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Welcome back 
Rahul bro ab to dedo aur raha nehi jata. Kaya ap vi itna kiu deri karte ho? Plees sab ko ap ki story padhne ko chahate hai par ap ho ki mante nehi
